This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 21, 2011 at 4:06:45 PM

Artist: TERRA
Title: Raspberry Heart
Tags: DDR ouranhshc
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3905kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.89 stars, 161 notes)
2. Insane (4.91 stars, 404 notes)
3. ouran's Normal (3.64 stars, 209 notes)

Download: TERRA - Raspberry Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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gonna try to go for rank? (again)

jun's vocal version is good too.

no vocal version is familiar for me since I am popper.

here is my normal.

i still need to hitsound it :/

hitsounded

TERRA <3
I will support star.

[General]
The dark purple color is kind of hard to see approach circles when it's on the extreme lower or upper parts of the bg.
Add ouran to tags

[ouran's Normal]
02:08:283 (1,2) - This was weird suddenly going to the beat so far into the song.
'tis fine, though still kinda iffy for the easiest of the set.

[Insane]
00:59:095 (3) - Think you could smooth out the peak a little bit?
02:15:783 (1) - Hrm, maybe during this part use soft whistles instead of claps, then when the beat comes back in at 02:21:783 return to using claps?

I'm on the fence for needing an easy. If you can wait a bit, I can whip one if up if you want.

[General]
Make sure about deleting .osb file :3
Add tag 'ouranhshc' or 'ouran' :3 <BTW, Garven already said this

[ouran's Normal]
00:42:408 (2,3,4,2) - Rearrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26954
00:43:533 (1) - Oops. Forgot this, How about move 1 grid down and right? [I mean move to center]
00:46:158 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:50:658 (2) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:52:158 (2) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:58:908 (6) - How about move 1 grid left?
02:02:283 (1) - How about move 1 grid down?
02:07:533 (4) - How about move 1 grid up?

[Insane]
00:32:283 (1) - How about move 2 grid right?
00:44:470 (3,4) - How about move 1 grid up?
00:45:408 (2,3,4,5) - Yay! ztrot-spacing tech
01:11:470 (4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26956 :3?
01:32:283 (1) - How about move 2 grid left?
01:53:470 (8) - How about move 1 grid down?
01:57:783 (4) - How about move 1 grid up?
02:12:220 (4,5,6,7) - Same solution as 01:11:470 (4,5,6,7)
02:34:533 (1) - How about move 2 grid right?



Another good song ;_;
And good luck for this :3
And sorry for nazi-grid modding orz

Hi ~

General;
-

Skin;
- Hearts ~~ <3

- Make the hit circle overlay a bit more white so that it matches with the slider borders ??
- I'd love it if you made pippy's star in her ehh, shirt ?? a heart <3
- Make the spinner set colors that match the BG ??

Ouran's Normal;
- AR -1 or -2 ??
- OD -1 ??

Insane;
- 01:08:095 ~ 01:12:033 >> No hitsounds, not even whistles ?? ;_;

* Star ~ :3

done.

Download: TERRA - RaspberryHeart (ztrot) [[Shalon]'s taiko heart].osu

I'm gonna pull this out of the grave and beat it in to shape me thinks, seeing as I don't want to submit new maps atm. I'll try to clear out my grave~

Hi

Caught it in #modreqs

[General]
As you're using custom hircircle,then you should have approachcircle file in beatmap's folder.

Also,I believe you should change "ouran" to ouranhshc in Tags.

Preview Point in [Easy] isn't set.

Disable countdown in [ouran's Normal].It's not used.

[Easy]
A little overdosed with new combos to me.

00:13:533 (1) - Finish?
00:35:283 (4) - It feels a little late,maybe 1/2 earlier?
00:51:408 - I think the note is missing here.
00:51:783 (1) - Maybe make a reverse-slider from here with a repeat at 00:52:345? It would perfectly fit the lyrics.
00:55:533 (3) - Finish?
01:01:533 (1) - ^
01:59:283 (5) - Noo,it's too late,how about making a slider: (01:58:533 - 01:59:095),then adding a circle to 01:59:470 and finally starting 02:00:033 (7) 1/2 earlier,at 01:59:845?

[ouran's Normal]
00:01:533 (1) - Finish?
00:04:533 (1) - ^ And yeah,it's like a jump,right? Though it doesn't really affect the gameplay.
00:07:533 (1) - Finish?
00:13:533 (1) - ^
00:16:533 (1) - Fix distance? It's a little closer then the rest.
00:19:533 (1) - Finish?
00:31:533 (1) - ^
00:34:533 (1) - Doesn't sound so good and there's a big unmapped space ahead,I'd make a spinner instead.
00:43:533 (1) - Finish?
00:47:470 (2) - Shorten to previous red tick and a circle to 00:48:033?
00:49:533 (1) - Finish?
00:55:533 (2) - ^
00:58:908 (6) - Add another repeat?
01:01:533 (1) - Finish?
01:02:283 (2,3) - A bit off rhytm,my suggestions are:

1. 01:02:283 (2,3) - Remove both objects.
2. Make a slider or a reverse-slider using these notes: (01:02:095 - 01:02:470 - 01:02:845)
3. Make a repeat-slider from 01:03:220 to 01:03:783 repeating every 1/2 note.

01:07:533 (1) - Finish?
01:09:033 (3) - Too close to previous object.
01:13:533 (1) - Finish?
01:17:470 (2) - Shorten to previous red tick?
01:19:533 (8) - Finish?
01:21:783 (3) - Too close to previous object.
01:28:533 (1) - ^
01:31:533 (1) - Finish?
01:34:533 (1) - Same suggestion to make a spinner instead.
01:50:283 (1) - Finish?
01:53:658 (7) - Add another repeat?
01:56:283 (2) - Finish?
01:59:658 (8) - Add another repeat?
02:02:283 (1) - Finish?
02:08:283 (1) - ^
02:15:783 (1) - ^
02:33:783 (1) - ^
02:36:783 (6) - Start spinner from here?

[Insane]
00:18:408 (5) - Stack with 00:17:658 (3)?
00:31:345 (3) - A bit odd,mirror from 00:30:783 (1) maybe?
00:52:908 (4) - Clap?
00:53:658 - ^
01:00:408 (4) - Reduce spacing a bit
01:01:533 (1) - Finish?
01:31:345 (3) - Same,a bit odd,mirror from 01:30:783 (1)?
02:02:283 (1) - Place it a little farther? Cause I felt like 1/2 here.

That's it!

Nice map and songs
Starring~

star~

I'm a sucker for these DDR super-happy songs.

[Easy]
Slider speed slightly too fast for easy, maybe?
00:33:033 (3) - Personally I'd put another one or two handles on this and make it a bit curvier.
01:01:158 (2) - Left a little bit maybe?
02:02:283 (1,4) - Might want to make these symmetrical.
02:05:283 (1,4) - ^
02:12:783 (2) - Might want to bring the end of this up a bit.
02:21:783 (5,1,2) - Spacing is inconsistent here. Personally I'd move (1) and slider [02:24:783 (4)] right a bit.
02:28:533 (2), 02:30:783 (1) - Are these meant to be symmetrical?

[ouran's Normal]
00:15:783 (4) - One right to line it up with slider (1) of the same combo?
00:27:033 (4,5) - This might sound nice if you remove the whistle from the start and end of the slider (leave the one on the bounce), add a finish to the end of the slider, and add a whistle to (5).
00:30:033 (4,5) - ^
00:34:533 (1) - Finish overkill! D:
00:43:533 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Might want some hitsounds here.
00:52:908 (2) - Down and right one.
00:58:908 (6) - One left.
01:07:533 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing here. It plays as if (3) was on a red tick, so you might want to make the sliders more of an M shape.
01:10:533 (1,2) - Again, finish overkill! D:
01:21:033 (2,3) - Same here as with 01:07:533 (1,2,3,4)
01:26:095 (2) - This feels too long. I think you should end it on the previous red tick (01:26:470).
01:29:095 (2) - ^
01:34:533 (1) - Finishes! D:
02:08:283 (1,2) - Make these parallel.

[Insane]
00:14:658 (4) - Up a bit to line it up with (2) and to be in the middle of the sliders. Might want to move [00:15:408 (6)] up with it. Something like [01:17:658 (4,6)] would look great.
00:32:658 (3,4,1) - This spacing is evil! D:
00:34:533 (3,4,5) - This plays really weird. :/
00:39:033 (1) - Right a bit?
00:54:970 (6) - This note feels overmapped.
01:08:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The sound of silence.... >_>
01:34:533 (3,4,5) - Same as [00:34:533 (3,4,5)]
01:57:783 (4) - Up and left one?
02:08:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So quiet... <_<
02:27:033 (9) - Maybe get rid of the finish on the end of this slider and move it to [02:27:783 (1)] instead.

Nice! <3

Samah wrote:

I'm a sucker for these DDR super-happy songs.

[Easy]
Slider speed slightly too fast for easy, maybe?
00:33:033 (3) - Personally I'd put another one or two handles on this and make it a bit curvier.
01:01:158 (2) - Left a little bit maybe?
02:02:283 (1,4) - Might want to make these symmetrical.
02:05:283 (1,4) - ^
02:12:783 (2) - Might want to bring the end of this up a bit.
02:21:783 (5,1,2) - Spacing is inconsistent here. Personally I'd move (1) and slider [02:24:783 (4)] right a bit.
02:28:533 (2), 02:30:783 (1) - Are these meant to be symmetrical?

[ouran's Normal]
00:15:783 (4) - One right to line it up with slider (1) of the same combo?
00:27:033 (4,5) - This might sound nice if you remove the whistle from the start and end of the slider (leave the one on the bounce), add a finish to the end of the slider, and add a whistle to (5).
00:30:033 (4,5) - ^
00:34:533 (1) - Finish overkill! D:
00:43:533 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Might want some hitsounds here.
00:52:908 (2) - Down and right one.
00:58:908 (6) - One left.
01:07:533 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing here. It plays as if (3) was on a red tick, so you might want to make the sliders more of an M shape.
01:10:533 (1,2) - Again, finish overkill! D:
01:21:033 (2,3) - Same here as with 01:07:533 (1,2,3,4)
01:26:095 (2) - This feels too long. I think you should end it on the previous red tick (01:26:470).
01:29:095 (2) - ^
01:34:533 (1) - Finishes! D:
02:08:283 (1,2) - Make these parallel.

[Insane]
00:14:658 (4) - Up a bit to line it up with (2) and to be in the middle of the sliders. Might want to move [00:15:408 (6)] up with it. Something like [01:17:658 (4,6)] would look great.
00:32:658 (3,4,1) - This spacing is evil! D:
00:34:533 (3,4,5) - This plays really weird. :/
00:39:033 (1) - Right a bit?
00:54:970 (6) - This note feels overmapped.
01:08:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The sound of silence.... >_>
01:34:533 (3,4,5) - Same as [00:34:533 (3,4,5)]
01:57:783 (4) - Up and left one?
02:08:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So quiet... <_<
02:27:033 (9) - Maybe get rid of the finish on the end of this slider and move it to [02:27:783 (1)] instead.

Nice! <3

most of this is just a bit to suggestive for me to use all of it. fix'ed hitsounds a bit

[General]
Why no hitsound and vol 100%

Easy
00:35:845 (1) - This Spinner Next point position
00:55:533 (3) - New Combo
00:56:283 (1) - Delete this note
02:38:283 (1) - Add Vol 5%?

Good Map 你会给我kudo吗lol我只会modEasy.

^.^

...Please don't forget.

Talked to ztrot over IRC and noted:

[Easy]
00:35:845 (1) - Could start 1/2 tick later.

[Insane]
01:55:439 (5) and 02:01:439 (2) - Only 1/4 notes in the map and felt inconsistent to me because I'm a consistency freak modder.
02:23:658 (6) - I also think that this is the only note under a slider in the map? (plays poorly on Hidden) Here I am consistency freaking modding again.

Oh yeah and the title, make sure that it's actually RaspberryHeart since I think it might be Raspberry Heart.

OH WELL it's not like any of this matters so have a twinkly.

General
I think slidertick 2 in all diffs will be looks better. Change it for normal and easy please

Insane
00:38:283 (4) - add whistles to the start, reverse, end
00:39:783 (5) - ^
00:42:033 (3,4,1,2,3) - add 5 whistles
01:13:533 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner

ouran's Normal
00:38:283 (3) - sound off the music, reverse must be at blue tick, 1/4 later. It makes map harder, but sounds and senses better
00:39:783 (3) - ^
00:41:283 (3) - ^
00:45:033 (1,2,3,4) - add 4 whistles

Easy
OD -1?
00:54:033 (1) - this clap on high white tick looks weird
01:36:033 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:01:158 (1) - add clap instead of whistle?
02:05:283 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
02:14:283 (1) - add finish
02:17:283 (1,2,3,1,2) - add 5 whistles
02:28:533 (2) - remove whistle
02:36:033 (3) - imo, will be better without overlap :
Star~

Quick I need a MAT q.q

General
Offset 1540, it's too early right now
Great hit lighting, I love it!

Easy
01:18:033 (3) - New combo To be consistent
01:58:533 (4) - New combo This one really needs it because of the spacing increase

ouran's Normal
AR +1
00:36:033 (1) - Make this spinner start at 00:35:283? Makes it easier and less abrupt
00:55:533 (2) - This slider ends on the blue tick! End it on the white!
01:35:283 - Add spinner here? It really could use one
02:02:845 (3) - This slider ends on the blue tick! End it on the white!
02:33:783 (1) - This slider ends on the blue tick! End it on the white!

Insane
For the irregular beats, like 00:24:790 (4,5,6), you use increased spacing which helps read it. Unfortunately you don't use that spacing for every time which makes predicting these beat changes very difficult.
For instance, 01:18:790 (1,2,3) - uses 1.00x spacing instead of something larger. Same at 02:36:790 (3,4,5)
I would highly recommend changing them, but you don't actually have to since they follow correct spacing at 1.0x

And that's it for insane actually. Nothing unrankable and nothing I don't like except that.

The source is pop'n Music 10 so add that please http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/Raspberry_Heart

This map is so bad that it should be nuked.

Take this nuke. Now go map better maps, this one sucks.