Here comes the M4M o/
Keep in mind, these suggestions are what I personally would like to fix, if you don't want to fix it because for reasons I don't know or because it seems fine to you, you don't need to fix it!
I can't mod Insane diffs, so sorry that I didn't mod that >.<
These suggestions were really nitpicky and not necessary, so I get it if you decline all; Thus, have a star.
M4M will be on the queue, but please only mod once I have applied all mods I haven't replied to.
Good luck!
Keep in mind, these suggestions are what I personally would like to fix, if you don't want to fix it because for reasons I don't know or because it seems fine to you, you don't need to fix it!
[Easy]
- 00:29:323 (3,4) - I feel like this part matches up with the sliders on this part 00:17:171 (3,4) - Yet they are different. Also, I feel like 00:29:893 (4) - doesn't really fit to the music vocals which imo are strong there
- 01:08:817 (1) - Ehh, blanket error
- 01:31:602 (3,2) - I don't like this overlap. Although it's not that visible while playing, it would look more visually appealing without it since you barely had overlaps till now
- 01:51:159 (1,2,3,4) - These: 00:36:728 (1,2,3,4) - Are arranged differently (Rhythmically same but gameplay-wise and pattern-wise different). I feel like it should be differently arranged judging by how that other one was arranged
- 03:09:577 (2) - Maybe make it "lean" more to the left since the guitar pitch gets higher and thus should feel a bit more different than 03:08:817 (1)
- 03:30:842 (2) - This slider doesn't fit in imo. The music here differs from 03:30:083 (1) so I would have suggested it to have the same shape as 03:31:602 (3) - But that doesn't fit either, so it's up to you o/
[Normal]
- I think CS 3.1 and AR 4.6 feels better, makes it more calm and fitting to the song
- I feel like there was too much stacking at the start, it's a bit hard to read for beginners and gives for an unnecessary diff spike
- 00:32:931 (5,6) - Um, 1. I think it flows a bit weird compared to the rest and 2. I'll just call it a small jump cause it's just in Normal diff, but that's an
- 01:56:475 (5) - About this, I think it's the first slider that is different from most others you used, 2. I think it would look cleaner if it had two normal sliderpoints after the red anchorpoint like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5783322
- 02:01:032 (2,3) - I also don't recall you using 2 different 1/2 sliders in this kind of pattern. Correct me if I am wrong
- 02:55:146 (5) - I don't get why this slider has a different pattern than 02:53:058 (6,1,2) - Although they sound the same (or at least extremely similar). Also, there is that really obvious sound at 02:54:956 so that pattern would be fitting there
- 03:49:522 (3) - In Easy this is a hitcircle. Why not here? I honestly don't hear a sound here 03:49:772
[Hard]
- I think it's fine to break out of that constant DS in this diff at more places. Here are some of my suggestions where I would additionally change DS:
01:05:020 (5,6) - 01:17:741 (2,3) - 02:19:451 (5,1) - 02:32:172 (2,3) - Additionally to that, there are some places where the objects were not matching to the DS of this pattern 03:39:197 (1,2,3) - Although they sounded similar: 03:42:804 (2,3) - I get why this might have not been matching the other pattern, but I'd still at least increase it for a diff spike
03:45:273 (1,2,3) - ^ But this one I'd recommend more - Otherwise great diff
I can't mod Insane diffs, so sorry that I didn't mod that >.<
These suggestions were really nitpicky and not necessary, so I get it if you decline all; Thus, have a star.
M4M will be on the queue, but please only mod once I have applied all mods I haven't replied to.
Good luck!