[alt][F4] wrote:

hi, from queue(only modding hardest diff because I suck at easy/normal stuff)

[Your bear]

1. 00:00:758 (1,2) - 00:02:121 (3,1) - 00:01:576 (2,3,4,1) - 00:03:758 (2,5) - 00:05:939 (2,4,1) - 00:13:303 (2,1) - 00:17:667 (2,1) - 00:19:848 (6,1) - 00:21:485 (4,1) - 00:26:394 (2,1) - 00:28:030 (4,3) - 00:40:030 (1,2) - 00:53:394 (2,4) -01:02:667 (2,4) - blanket can improve will see what I can do about these
2. 00:22:576 (1,3) - bad slider shape = bad blanket it's fineee orz
   yeah fix blankets
3. 01:05:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - stream is too long
4. 01:06:076 (11) - does this represent a sound? mentioned in previous mod

pretty good map m8

Prismetical wrote:

Heyoo! ♥ M4M ♥

Normal

00:10:576 (3,2) - not perfectly stacked fixed
00:36:758 (3) - replace with the same slider as 00:37:848 (1) - so the shapes look more equally and the blanket will look better I think I have enough wave sliders lol

Hard

00:45:212 (2,1) - stacking can be improved tried to. This will be spaced out by the game's stacking process anyway.

This is the most beauitful pending thing I've ever seen... *-* +5* omg thanks a lot XDXD
Best of luck!

1. 00:34:848 (3) - Unless I'm missing something. 00:34:848 (3) - is pretty inconsistent with 00:30:485 -
2. 00:37:576 (4) - Maybe delete? You aren't following vocals here anyways.
3. 00:58:848 - again is kinda inconsistent with 01:16:303 (3) -
4. 01:04:848 (2,3) - lots of clicking in this 01:04:848 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - area.. Maybe use a 1/1 slider here? or at 01:06:212 (1,2) -
5. 00:52:848 (4,5) - and 01:10:303 (4,4) - (tail on second one) maybe delete for breathing room?

1. 01:14:667 (4) - even though this works fine as a jump. It kind of suits the map better if it follows the DS of the previous two notes since it'll make the jump to 01:14:939 (1) - more dominant.
2. 00:49:576 (3) - Not sure if I feel this small jump. It almost would fit better under the Tail instead of the head.
3. 01:04:576 (2) - The tail end with the guitar strum might work better. Maybe make (1) a 1/1 slider and then place a circle after it?
4. 01:23:667 (1,2,3) - I don't really see a reason why these can't be more centered. They definitely feel like they're way too far in the corner.

1. 00:37:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing on this combo feels a bit too much. Maybe try like 2.25 since the combos before it were only at 2 or something.
2. 01:05:803 (9,11) - Maybe delete these. Its a bit strange having the drums and then the soft whistles all together.

Lanturn wrote:

That samplefish stalk. lol

Shirokuma - My Dear

[Normal]
Ar5.5 is way too much. This should honestly be a 4-4.5.... 5 is even pushing it. considering the density. High ar might fit better.

1. 00:34:848 (3) - Unless I'm missing something. 00:34:848 (3) - is pretty inconsistent with 00:30:485 - the bass sounds are playing here
2. 00:37:576 (4) - Maybe delete? You aren't following vocals here anyways. done! applied to 00:39:758 (4) - as well
3. 00:58:848 - again is kinda inconsistent with 01:16:303 (3) - the guitar is much stronger on the latter
4. 01:04:848 (2,3) - lots of clicking in this 01:04:848 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - area.. Maybe use a 1/1 slider here? or at 01:06:212 (1,2) -
5. 00:52:848 (4,5) - and 01:10:303 (4,4) - (tail on second one) maybe delete for breathing room? deleted 00:55:030. keeping 01:12:212 (4) - because the sounds playing there is more audible and a little bit more intense imo

[Hard]
The density on this compared to normal is pretty similar... Maybe you should nerf little just a bit more, especially during the Kiai. The only thing that separates this diff is the small jumps really.

1. 01:14:667 (4) - even though this works fine as a jump. It kind of suits the map better if it follows the DS of the previous two notes since it'll make the jump to 01:14:939 (1) - more dominant. kay
2. 00:49:576 (3) - Not sure if I feel this small jump. It almost would fit better under the Tail instead of the head.I intended to make a jump here XD
3. 01:04:576 (2) - The tail end with the guitar strum might work better. Maybe make (1) a 1/1 slider and then place a circle after it? changed it to 2 circles instead
4. 01:23:667 (1,2,3) - I don't really see a reason why these can't be more centered. They definitely feel like they're way too far in the corner. fixed

[My Bear]

1. 00:37:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing on this combo feels a bit too much. Maybe try like 2.25 since the combos before it were only at 2 or something. I think it gives some nice accelerating feelings.. idk.
2. 01:05:803 (9,11) - Maybe delete these. Its a bit strange having the drums and then the soft whistles all together. tried. sounds really weird to me orz

Eh not much else. This is pretty much ready aside from the Normal maybe being a bit too dense.

kanor wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:030 - i deeply suggesst you to put a circle in this place because it sounds more fluncy. like 00:23:394 (2,3,4,5) - I use this rhythm if there's nothing indicating otherwise. 00:23:394 (2,3,4,5) - the bass is playing here, so it'd be weird to skip that
00:55:030 - why not put a cirle in this beat? i think it better to follow the vocal in this palce? yup, it's great doing so, but this is Normal, so I also want players to have some breathing spaces. Trains of 1/2s will screw them hard lol
[Hard]
00:26:121 (1,2,3) - i think it maybe a little more difficult than other patterns?0w0 maybe make change 2 and 3 maybe better,or put 2 into (130,109)? I've always make a jump on this particular sound, so why not?
Good Map and GL!
shoot a star<3

1. Nothing found

1. od maybe is too low,try same as HP.
2. 01:21:485 (1) - well..I think stack with 01:19:303 (1) - is better.
3. Anyway,also a perfect diff.

1. 00:19:303 (4) - try to increase distance,now it's a little crowded.
2. 01:05:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - stack streams imo is not fit this diff,a soft song should use soft patterns lol

[Crz]Sword wrote:

from my queue
[NM]

1. Nothing found

[HD]

1. od maybe is too low,try same as HP. I want this map to be relaxing so.. nop
2. 01:21:485 (1) - well..I think stack with 01:19:303 (1) - is better. owo nice~~
3. Anyway,also a perfect diff. thanks! XD

[Bear]

1. 00:19:303 (4) - try to increase distance,now it's a little crowded. I think it's pretty okay
2. 01:05:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - stack streams imo is not fit this diff,a soft song should use soft patterns lol I suck really hard at making streams lol. This is the best I could make orz

I think it's so high quality that don't need more mods lol,stared~ >///<

Kalibe wrote:

m4m~

General*

- Having ed and ending makes really nonsense for me, cause means the same thing. It's like you had tv and televison in one, pick one of them. I don't know exactly how osu! search system works, but generally, ED and ending are totally different terms.
- The video takes really big space in this map, prefer to ask someone to encode this video to get less filesize, like Shad0w1and will try to get one orz
- Pure white colour is unrankable cause it really blends with bg dim and especially with this video~ just change it to something other. I think pure-white is not a problem but the grayish one is. Changed into pale blue.

[Normal]

- Since this diff is the easiest one in set, preferable to decrease ar to 4 or 4.5 for generally fit. Lowered to 5. Anything lower than that will make the map harder to read because the pattern and density.
- Od 3 and HP 3 looks fitting more with that normal difficulty. OD 3 HP 3.5 in order to fit with the other 2 diffs
- 01:25:985 (1) - I really dislike using 1/4 snaps in Normal, even if they are to start spinner. How about just moving in on next red beat? oops. I thought I put it on red.
- 00:38:939 (3) - http://puu.sh/qfmrV/570afbc6f8.jpg it touches the accuracy line, recommended to avoid things like this. I ran out of space lmfao. Can't make out a good way to fix this
- 00:53:121 (1,3) - Nazi blanket ;w; This one is fine. It's blanketing the (1) slider, slightly off but still nice imo
- 01:12:758 (1,2) - ^^ ;w;w; this is also fine imo
- 01:23:667 (1,2,3) - Structure looks cool, but the flow feels really weird while playing -> http://puu.sh/qfmKh/f23d3115d8.jpg - try this, flow should works better imo :3 great!

[Hard]

- How about AR 6.5 here?
- 00:05:121 (1,3) - 01:04:848 (3,6) - Check those stacks, looks they off for me, rip stacks xd fixed
- 00:06:758 (4,1) - I think you can make this transision better moving 00:06:758 (4) - on 359/228 tho. moved around that point. nice catch XD
- cool hard thanks :3

[My Bear]

- Tons of stack problems here aaa, examples : 00:20:394 (1,3) - 00:23:394 (2,5) - 00:37:848 (1,3) - 00:43:303 (3,1) - rip me. will fix these if founded, but ultimately they're going to be spread out by the stacking system anyways
- 00:08:530 (3) - 01:18:348 (4) - Maybe remove claps? You didn't use it 00:43:303 (3,4,5,6,7) - on blue ticks and they're the same instrument. Added claps on 00:43:303 (3,4,5,6,7) with volume variations.
- 01:05:394 (6) - NC it? This one starts a ds used stream, so.. ? I feel like this is not needed.
- also nice XD

Ok, that's all from me. Good mapset overall! :3

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

sorry for my really huge delay... ;w; It's okay

My Bear

1. generally good map to me, not really important thing to say, so i pick some personal ones.
2. 00:15:212 (5,6,2) - you did well in dealing blanket and geometrical structure, but still didn't care some overlap like this. idk if you can keep both distance setting and still change that into a neat one, i just put my words to those obssesion here. same to like 00:48:485 (7,4) - or whatever 00:50:394 (7,3) - ... orz I thought this is fine because 5 has nearly faded away at that point orz. But I really want to keep 00:16:303 (2) - a slider. Will change if any good idea come into my mind. XD
3. most of slider and flow's direction are anticlockwise... idk if you noticed that lol no I didn't lol

Hard

1. 01:01:576 (6) - idk, maybe move to 177,203. this seems a bit too hard but it sounds fun lol. fixed
2. fine.

Normal

1. good.

sorry for the simple mod... really well composed map, star. Thanks! <3

good luck.

DosuRyouta wrote:

Hi, from VNO's modding queue

Normal

00:02:939 (1) - it will look better if this slider blanket with 00:02:121 (3) imo it's already blanketing (2)

Hard

00:08:667 (3,4) - this is not really straight, i dont know how to explain it lol xD , maybe it will better if you have image -> this this is intentional XD
01:16:303 (1,2,3,1) - you should balance DS here, it is hard to recognize while playing I think this is fine. It provides some emphasis.

My Bear

00:47:667 (4,5,6,7,1) - just my opinion, you should change this to 1 slider - 1 circle - 1 slider, because here is not too strong for you to abuse so many jumps this is just my style XD. I already lowered their spacing so they should be fine
00:15:758 (7,1) - same is here, change this to a slider will make this more comfortable
00:31:576 (2,3) - ^
00:19:030 (3,5) - how about Ctrl + G this? why?
01:21:485 (1) - this is the hardest diff, I think you should change this circle to a 1/8 reverse slider (example ) to follow the guitar sound, up to you no. because it doesn't fit, and it is not 1/8.

That is all I can find xD , your map is neat, I hope this helped <3

Lilyanna wrote:

Nm from my queuedfjs

Normal

00:12:485 (2,1) - this stack little confusing for normal players maybe avoid and keep it simple since u dont have an easy it's consistent throughout the diff and the set tho
00:16:848 (2,1) - ^
01:02:667 (2) - this is almost touching the health bar or maybe just me yup, it almost XD
01:26:121 (1) - end spinner here 01:28:576 - ? I'm pretty sure that the sound ends there

Hard

00:22:030 - i would make this clickable like u did here 00:20:394 (1,2,3) - I think it's kinda more similar to 00:10:576 (3) -
00:26:121 (1,2) - idk if the bigger spacing in needed why not stay consistance like u did here 00:23:939 (1,2,3) - I want to makes small jumps on 00:23:939 (1,2,3) -too, but it's kinda too much.
00:45:212 (2,1) - not stacked well why did I make so many stacks orzorzorz

My bear

your bear is fine omg >/////<

hope i helped a little

Good luck

1. Either mapping an Easy difficulty
2. Or nerfing the Normal.

Combo colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 55,185,255
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 136,192,255
Combo4 : 185,185,255
SliderBorder : 217,212,200
SliderTrackOverride : 4,29,51

1. 00:04:303 (3,4) - 00:06:485 (3,4) - 00:08:667 (3,4) - etc. Rhythmically talking, the main sounds of the song are being highlighted in the wrong beat since starting sliders on the red tick plays really awkward. The problem resides that on the red tick the snore isn't as strong as it is over the white tick of the showed patterns. The way I see things, I would be way better if you did ctrl + g over those patterns to emphasize more intuitively the rhythm over this segment. Please, refer to t/58959 for further information.
2. 00:10:303 (2,3) - What about doing ctrl + g over these? They don't play bad but the rhythm lacks a bit of emphasis if you aimed to give priority to instruments. Hence, switching the rhythm would fit this pattern the best. Try it. :3
3. 00:13:303 (1,2) - 00:17:667 (1,2) - 00:30:758 (1,2) - etc. Regarding the usage of new combos, I'm afraid I disagree with the way you managed them. The way I see things, splitting combos up so often as the patterns in matter do could make players to lose their combos since it's not very perceptive to change them so suddenly without letting them know when the new stanza resets. Therefore, removing the NC over those patterns would make more intuitive combos to read and play.
4. 00:46:030 (3,4) - This plays fine but I think it would be better to make easier pattern to click and follow. While I know it's the kiai, how about if we changing them for a single 1/2 slider to shorten the density of beats over this segment? It would hurt no one if you give it a try. :3 Consider doing the same here 01:05:667 (4,5) -
5. The gap that this pattern 00:58:303 (2,1) - creates is very awkward to play. ;w; I think leaving these spaces of 1/1 on the kiai isn't a good idea since the density doesn't compensate the rhythm you've built up until here with that gap. Therefore, I do think adding a note here 00:58:848 - would fit this pattern the best as well as you did here 01:16:303 -
6. Claps: 00:00:758 (1) - 00:02:939 (1) - 00:05:121 (1) - 00:07:303 (1) - 00:09:485 (1) - 00:11:667 (1) - 00:13:848 (1) - 00:16:030 (1) - etc, slider-end. It just feels very weird to have it with no emphasis on the slider-end when clearly the instrument brings a sound there.
7. 00:44:394 (1) - 01:01:848 (1) - Addition Normal. It feels very low with the soft-hitfinish.
8. 01:26:121 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here 01:28:576 - accordingly to what the music provides? I fairly heard something above that spot, hence I think ending it here would cover nicely the fade out of the instruments here.
9. 01:26:121 (1) - Despite it is being almost silenced at the end, I feel that it still proved that noisy default hitsound of the soft sampleset here 01:29:121 - What about if we add a blank file just as well as soft-sliderslide.wav to mute definitely the sound over that spot where should be partially with no sound?
10. 01:17:939 (2,3,4) - I think doing ctrl + g over this slider 01:18:758 (4) - would make a more intuitive pattern. Might need to stack 01:19:303 (1) - where 01:18:485 (3) - is but if this is intentional, consider to keep it. I guess it's a matter of note-placement and wise of flow XD

1. Increase the OD to 5 at least. It's a really low value to have below 5 considering this is a hard difficulty and the rhythm is rather uniform in the whole mapset.
2. 00:10:030 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + G here, try it! It's really awkward to emphasize strong beats with slider-ends since it doesn't give players the idea the emphasis are well emphasized here. Consider doping the same here 00:36:212 (2,3) -
3. 00:26:121 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks really fancy but for consistency purposes it doesn't flow well when you didn't manage that distance variation consering how you applied it in the previous patterns. For this, I suggest you to try out this placement instead. What do you think?
   
   Example 1

   
   Example 2

   
   Example 3

   

1. 01:01:167 (5) - Overmapped. ;w; It's not a good reference to listen at 25% of playback rate to hear such as soft and almost inaudible hitsounds as this one is. I do believe removing it would make things more appropriated in terms of rhythm.
2. 01:06:076 (11) - Same goes with this.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow. \:3/ Sorry for delaying the request for so long. ;w;

The overall map looks fairly decent, I just have some minor suggestions since there's something which is triggering me a bit.
[ General]
Fire and foremost, the density the normal is quite high and makes very hard patterns to click due to the consistent rhythm of 1/2 beats used over the whole difficulty. I do believe making an easy difficulty would let new players react in a better way to the song according how it plays. For instance, and according to the overall rhythm you used, this would be like mapping consistently at 1/1 beats over a map with 220 of BPM. Consequently, leaving it just as is feels like if it were an advanced. Alternatively, I don't really agree having the easiest difficulty of the map with such as a high Approach Rate as 5 is.

To fix this accordingly, I suggest you to:

1. Either mapping an Easy difficulty
2. Or nerfing the Normal.

If you decide reducing the density the normal, here's some notes you can easily remove to improve slightly this difficulty:

List

1. 00:46:303 (4) -
2. 00:52:848 (4) -
3. 01:01:303 (4) -
4. 01:05:939 (5) -
5. 01:08:121 (5) -
6. 01:10:303 (4) -
7. 01:14:667 (4) -
8. 00:19:576 (3) -
9. 00:23:939 (3) -
10. 00:34:848 (3) -
11. 00:49:848 (3) -

Whilst the combo colors made sense with the chromatic of the video, sometimes the circles blends really bad with the video making unclear paths to the player follow intuitively the notes. I'm convinced using more colors as well as you did with the light blue would make clearer the way players reacted to such as patterns of objects. What about these ones? perfect!

Combo colors

Code in the .osu

[Colours]
Combo1 : 55,185,255
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 136,192,255
Combo4 : 185,185,255
SliderBorder : 217,212,200
SliderTrackOverride : 4,29,51

I got a bit curious about the characters used for the bgs. Are they the preferred ones you liked from the anime or is there any reason behind them? XD I said it because it feels weird to skipping pengin-san from the trio of friends who are since the beginning of the story. ;w; My Bear ofc. so why not bear bgs?

Would you mind providing the site where you took the metadata? During my deep rehearsal, I found that the title should be written as:

Artist SHIROKUMA (CV: Takahiro Sakurai)
founded here: http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/AVCA-62313

[ Normal] Nice normal desu you've mapped here! There are some issues regarding the rhythm emphasis I'd like to discuss with you before:

1. 00:04:303 (3,4) - 00:06:485 (3,4) - 00:08:667 (3,4) - etc. Rhythmically talking, the main sounds of the song are being highlighted in the wrong beat since starting sliders on the red tick plays really awkward. The problem resides that on the red tick the snore isn't as strong as it is over the white tick of the showed patterns. The way I see things, I would be way better if you did ctrl + g over those patterns to emphasize more intuitively the rhythm over this segment. Please, refer to t/58959 for further information. Actually, I personally disagree the notion of sliderheads should only be on white bars, and I don't think those things are even relevant, even though most of the strong beats land on white bars. However, the only thing that matters is the song itself. For these notes, actually, imo things like 00:04:576 and 00:04:848 have pretty much the same intensity, but the clap sound I used might have deceived you. Try listening to them, but without the notes, and tell me if you still think the whites are definitely superior to the reds, so that I could identify the exact problem here. since we have 999,999 more rechecks to go lol XD.
2. 00:10:303 (2,3) - What about doing ctrl + g over these? They don't play bad but the rhythm lacks a bit of emphasis if you aimed to give priority to instruments. Hence, switching the rhythm would fit this pattern the best. Try it. :3 I don't think I have the right picture of this, because they played really really weird when I tried
3. 00:13:303 (1,2) - 00:17:667 (1,2) - 00:30:758 (1,2) - etc. Regarding the usage of new combos, I'm afraid I disagree with the way you managed them. The way I see things, splitting combos up so often as the patterns in matter do could make players to lose their combos since it's not very perceptive to change them so suddenly without letting them know when the new stanza resets. Therefore, removing the NC over those patterns would make more intuitive combos to read and play. I don't agree with removing ncs on these either. I think this more as a contrast. The contrast in colors along with unusual change of combos will make players realize that there's something unusual about the note and pay more attention to the rhythm and rely more on the approach circle instead of playing them instinctively.
4. 00:46:030 (3,4) - This plays fine but I think it would be better to make easier pattern to click and follow. While I know it's the kiai, how about if we changing them for a single 1/2 slider to shorten the density of beats over this segment? It would hurt no one if you give it a try. :3 Consider doing the same here 01:05:667 (4,5) - fixed the former keeping the latter because I think it goes well with the drumroll in the background.
5. The gap that this pattern 00:58:303 (2,1) - creates is very awkward to play. ;w; I think leaving these spaces of 1/13/2 on the kiai isn't a good idea since the density doesn't compensate the rhythm you've built up until here with that gap. Therefore, I do think adding a note here 00:58:848 - would fit this pattern the best as well as you did here 01:16:303 - eh? but it follows the music properly and emphasize the pause of vocal really well. Besides, I think it's better to start on stronger sound like 00:59:121 (1) -. The reason why I added 01:16:303 (3) - because the guitar there is very audible and deserve a note.
6. Claps: 00:00:758 (1) - 00:02:939 (1) - 00:05:121 (1) - 00:07:303 (1) - 00:09:485 (1) - 00:11:667 (1) - 00:13:848 (1) - 00:16:030 (1) - etc, slider-end. It just feels very weird to have it with no emphasis on the slider-end when clearly the instrument brings a sound there. to me, more hitsound doesn't mean a better hitsounded map. I want to keep the hitsounds minimal on all diffs to preserve the relaxing nature of the song.
7. 00:44:394 (1) - 01:01:848 (1) - Addition Normal. It feels very low with the soft-hitfinish. I think it fits well with the guitar tho I think raising the volume on these particular notes may be a better alternative.
8. 01:26:121 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here 01:28:576 - accordingly to what the music provides? I fairly heard something above that spot, hence I think ending it here would cover nicely the fade out of the instruments here. eh? I'm pretty sure it even ends after 01:29:121 but it's kinda hard to hear so I even shorten it.
9. 01:26:121 (1) - Despite it is being almost silenced at the end, I feel that it still proved that noisy default hitsound of the soft sampleset here 01:29:121 - What about if we add a blank file just as well as soft-sliderslide.wav to mute definitely the sound over that spot where should be partially with no sound? I thought I could avoid it in this map lol. This is not a popular method and I believe it is not encouraged either. but it goes well so screw that.
10. 01:17:939 (2,3,4) - I think doing ctrl + g over this slider 01:18:758 (4) - would make a more intuitive pattern. Might need to stack 01:19:303 (1) - where 01:18:485 (3) - is but if this is intentional, consider to keep it. I guess it's a matter of note-placement and wise of flow XD gonna keep this lol, because stacking 01:18:485 (3,1) - is kinda ehhh to me.

[ Hard] You have something sexy in your hards that I've always loved <3 but I'd never discover that secret. Congratulations! \:3/ Some few suggestions! this may be because I rarely map hard lol, since the slots were taken by guests, like you and boat XD

1. Increase the OD to 5 at least. It's a really low value to have below 5 considering this is a hard difficulty and the rhythm is rather uniform in the whole mapset. okay, changed to 5
2. 00:10:030 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + G here, try it! It's really awkward to emphasize strong beats with slider-ends since it doesn't give players the idea the emphasis are well emphasized here. Consider doping the same here 00:36:212 (2,3) - for 00:10:030 (2,3,4) - I think it might be better to go after the vocals. I will consider this more if the phrase weren't "irrashaimase" XD. and I don't understand the point of ctrlG 00:36:212 (2,3) - since they're circles and emphasize both vocal and the guitar well.
3. 00:26:121 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks really fancy but for consistency purposes it doesn't flow well when you didn't manage that distance variation consering how you applied it in the previous patterns. For this, I suggest you to try out this placement instead. What do you think? fixed
   
   Example 1

   
   Example 2

   
   Example 3

   

[ My Bear] Really well mapped! I really liked the jumps you used over the whole mapset! >u< However, I have some issues I'd like to discuss with you about it before pushing this forward:

1. 01:01:167 (5) - Overmapped. ;w; It's not a good reference to listen at 25% of playback rate to hear such as soft and almost inaudible hitsounds as this one is. I do believe removing it would make things more appropriated in terms of rhythm. I clearly hear drums on 01:01:167 (5) with normal playback rate. I believe you see it as overmapped is because of it being a little off, meaning it does not snap properly into 1/4 bars. but I can assure you that this is not overmapped. I think adding a clap here might make you perceive the sound easier.
2. 01:06:076 (11) - Same goes with this. I was getting a lot of feedbacks telling 01:06:076 (11) - being overmapped as well. fixed

[]

Will come back once you reply to the mod /u\ I hope we can get into agreement with this mapset, at least on the Normal diff. ;w;

ezek wrote:

Shirokuma cafe <3 I watched the whole anime on my winter break~
idk why I imagine shirokuma singing this ;w;

General

1. Consider adding the very main characters to tags (like Panda, Grizzly, Pengin & Sasako) because they're the most known and people may try to search anything related to the anime by typing one of those names, who who knows~ added~
2. Any reason to have volumes like 52, 12 & 8? Just round them up to the closest multiple of 5~ (50, 10, 5 or 10) no particular reason, I just think it fits lol. It's not wrong, right?

Normal

1. 00:13:303 (1) - It's a normal diff~ I don't think you really need to add nc there to emphasize that since it can be read easily anyway~ Also that makes your combos awkwardly short~ It's not for emphasis. It's for the readability but if you say it's easily read so i will remove it~
2. 00:17:667 (1) - ^ And you should know the rest~
3. 00:29:667 (2,3,1,2) - This looks suspicious, it may confuse players, it's not common to see double object stack in a normal diff ;w; On a side note, the blanket with slider (1) could be improved~ That's why I nced them to improve the readability lolol I tried something new, hopefully it's okay now~
4. 00:47:939 (3) - It's not very comfortable to go so up and then go straight down all of a sudden, I think it would feel better if you place this circle at x457,y168. Rearranging slider (4) will be easy, so don't worry about that~ nice
5. It worries me a bit the fact that you don't leave any small break between 01:01:848 - 01:14:939 - / It could be a bit dense for players~ This part is the climax of the song, so it being denser & harder than other parts makes sense imo

Hard

1. 00:42:212 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved~ what u did here? so pro
2. 00:46:576 (1) - If you put some effort, you'll see that you can actually stack nicely as you can see here. On a side note, you can fix that blanket with (3) as you can see in the picture too~ totally rip. hope it's better now orz
3. 00:59:394 (5) - Doesn't look nice overlapping with slider (2) ya fixed

My Bear

1. 00:59:121 (5) - Doesn't look nice touching the life bar~ nice catch

Call me back once you're Crystidone~ ayyy

1. 00:59:121 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - This part of rhythm needs to be nerfed, it's as dense as Hard which it shouldn't happen, you have to make the rhythm less dense for an appropriate density spread across the mapset. You can fix this by either remove some weak beats or replacing some of 1/1 sliders with circles to provide a rhythm gap which makes the gameplay more lenient for players.

1. 01:16:848 (3) - Move this down a bit? Cuz the triangle 01:16:303 (1,2,3) looks weird when they aren't even, my suggestion here is to use 1.5 DS on 01:16:576 (2,3) so you can get a better positioning while maintaining a blanket 01:14:121 (3,3) as well.

1. 00:48:758 (1,2,3,4) - Change these to sliders like 01:06:212 (1,2) ? Kinda understand your reasoning behind the jumps 00:47:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) but I think sliders gives a better transition from instruments 00:47:394 (3,4,5,6,7) to vocals 00:49:848 (5,6,7,8) .
2. 00:49:303 (3) - Can be repositioned a bit cuz currently doesn't look visually even with 00:48:212 (6,1,3) - 00:49:303 (3,6,8) . [Only apply this if you didn't apply the suggestion above]

CrystilonZ wrote:

Ahh QAQ
Alright, looks like i really need to nerf that last kiai QAQ

Hobbes2 wrote:

that being said this set is pretty hot eh? but I prefer cold tho

SPOILER

Electoz wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:59:121 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - This part of rhythm needs to be nerfed, it's as dense as Hard which it shouldn't happen, you have to make the rhythm less dense for an appropriate density spread across the mapset. You can fix this by either remove some weak beats or replacing some of 1/1 sliders with circles to provide a rhythm gap which makes the gameplay more lenient for players. I completely forgot about the spread QAQ kill me

[Hard]

1. 01:16:848 (3) - Move this down a bit? Cuz the triangle 01:16:303 (1,2,3) looks weird when they aren't even, my suggestion here is to use 1.5 DS on 01:16:576 (2,3) so you can get a better positioning while maintaining a blanket 01:14:121 (3,3) as well. This is intentional. 01:17:121 (1) - is stronger than 01:16:576 (2) - and 01:16:576 (2) - does so with 01:16:848 (3) - . So the DS corresponds to the music correctly here

[My Bear]

1. 00:48:758 (1,2,3,4) - Change these to sliders like 01:06:212 (1,2) ? Kinda understand your reasoning behind the jumps 00:47:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) but I think sliders gives a better transition from instruments 00:47:394 (3,4,5,6,7) to vocals 00:49:848 (5,6,7,8) . I really love how ^ varies according to the density tho QAQ. The only reason I put a slider at 01:06:212 (1) - because I want players to have time to adjust themselves after the stream.
2. 00:49:303 (3) - Can be repositioned a bit cuz currently doesn't look visually even with 00:48:212 (6,1,3) - 00:49:303 (3,6,8) . [Only apply this if you didn't apply the suggestion above] 00:49:030 (2,3,4,5) - form a square and are much nearer on the timeline. Thus, get a higher priority.

I don't think the rhythm issue in Normal is major enough for a pop, so call me back once you done fixing for qualify.

Hobbes2 wrote:

dont mind me just practicing my modding by modding bubbled maps

that being said this set is pretty hot so ill give a few suggestions you can ignore

[my bear]

00:06:758 (3,4) - these blankets are busted https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964951 if you get both of them an equal distance from 4 (so that the blankets are equal) it would look pretty cool fixed ;w;

00:13:030 (1) - If this NC is for readability its not really needed, also with these combo colors NC for readability does nothing lol okay, gonna remove all ncs like this on all diffs

00:15:485 (6) - I suggest moving this to give the note emphasis (clap + vocal), I would have suggested moving to stack on 00:14:667 (3) - but then this would create a jump to 7, which isn't terrible but not very good. Try coming up with something! You could lave it, but it's just an idea. nah i don't care much for the snare.

00:17:394 (1,2) - These are not stacked if you intended them to be. oops

00:25:576 (3,1) - Because of this stack, 3 is not perfectly stacked under 00:24:485 (5) - which is what I think you intended to do. You can easily fix this by simply moving these two so that 3 is stacked under 00:24:485 (5) kinda get what you mean

00:30:485 (1) - Not really a necessary NC, even if it's for readability you can read this pattern without it. ^^^^

00:41:394 (1) - ^ Again, I disagree with this NC. These are totally subjective so you can keep them for sure, but consider removing them.

Rest looks pretty good actually.

[Hard]

00:06:485 (3,1) - A blanket, if you care to fix it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964973 done!

00:17:394 (1) - argh these nc's are like...yeah ill just stop commenting on these lol, it's clear you wanted them for some reason i removed it QAQ

00:33:485 (1,3) - If you care, 3 isn't perfectly stacked under 1's tail probably better now

00:42:212 (1,2) - buddy we need to have a talk about those blankets https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964987 fixed i guess ;w;

01:23:667 (1,2,3) - On the note of blankets, these 3 don't blanket each other lol fixed

Normal looked good, other than what Electoz had to say.

I apologize for the mod full of blankets, but when they look like they're supposed to blanket (different from unintentionally not blanket) and the blanket is off, I have to comment on them.

If you ever need a blanket mod right off the bat feel free to hit me up for an IRC blanket mod or something.

See you in the qualified section!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

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