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Thanks a lot >//< dasgetjketh4w2tgweawd
มีคนไหนมาต่อป่ะ? ถ้าไม่มีจะดูแมพให้
Topic Starter
ยังไม่มีอ่ะ
อหนี่ยังไม่ได้นอนหรือตื่นเช้า
อหนี่ยังไม่ได้นอนหรือตื่นเช้า
[Normal]
- 00:59:121 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - This part of rhythm needs to be nerfed, it's as dense as Hard which it shouldn't happen, you have to make the rhythm less dense for an appropriate density spread across the mapset. You can fix this by either remove some weak beats or replacing some of 1/1 sliders with circles to provide a rhythm gap which makes the gameplay more lenient for players.
- 01:16:848 (3) - Move this down a bit? Cuz the triangle 01:16:303 (1,2,3) looks weird when they aren't even, my suggestion here is to use 1.5 DS on 01:16:576 (2,3) so you can get a better positioning while maintaining a blanket 01:14:121 (3,3) as well.
- 00:48:758 (1,2,3,4) - Change these to sliders like 01:06:212 (1,2) ? Kinda understand your reasoning behind the jumps 00:47:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) but I think sliders gives a better transition from instruments 00:47:394 (3,4,5,6,7) to vocals 00:49:848 (5,6,7,8) .
- 00:49:303 (3) - Can be repositioned a bit cuz currently doesn't look visually even with 00:48:212 (6,1,3) - 00:49:303 (3,6,8) . [Only apply this if you didn't apply the suggestion above]
Topic Starter
Ahh QAQ
Alright, looks like i really need to nerf that last kiai QAQ
Alright, looks like i really need to nerf that last kiai QAQ
dont mind me just practicing my modding by modding bubbled maps
that being said this set is pretty hot so ill give a few suggestions you can ignore
[my bear]
00:06:758 (3,4) - these blankets are busted https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964951 if you get both of them an equal distance from 4 (so that the blankets are equal) it would look pretty cool
00:13:030 (1) - If this NC is for readability its not really needed, also with these combo colors NC for readability does nothing lol
00:15:485 (6) - I suggest moving this to give the note emphasis (clap + vocal), I would have suggested moving to stack on 00:14:667 (3) - but then this would create a jump to 7, which isn't terrible but not very good. Try coming up with something! You could lave it, but it's just an idea.
00:17:394 (1,2) - These are not stacked if you intended them to be.
00:25:576 (3,1) - Because of this stack, 3 is not perfectly stacked under 00:24:485 (5) - which is what I think you intended to do. You can easily fix this by simply moving these two so that 3 is stacked under 00:24:485 (5)
00:30:485 (1) - Not really a necessary NC, even if it's for readability you can read this pattern without it.
00:41:394 (1) - ^ Again, I disagree with this NC. These are totally subjective so you can keep them for sure, but consider removing them.
Rest looks pretty good actually.
[Hard]
00:06:485 (3,1) - A blanket, if you care to fix it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964973
00:17:394 (1) - argh these nc's are like...yeah ill just stop commenting on these lol, it's clear you wanted them for some reason
00:33:485 (1,3) - If you care, 3 isn't perfectly stacked under 1's tail
00:42:212 (1,2) - buddy we need to have a talk about those blankets https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964987
01:23:667 (1,2,3) - On the note of blankets, these 3 don't blanket each other lol
Normal looked good, other than what Electoz had to say.
I apologize for the mod full of blankets, but when they look like they're supposed to blanket (different from unintentionally not blanket) and the blanket is off, I have to comment on them.
If you ever need a blanket mod right off the bat feel free to hit me up for an IRC blanket mod or something.
See you in the qualified section!
that being said this set is pretty hot so ill give a few suggestions you can ignore
[my bear]
00:06:758 (3,4) - these blankets are busted https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964951 if you get both of them an equal distance from 4 (so that the blankets are equal) it would look pretty cool
00:13:030 (1) - If this NC is for readability its not really needed, also with these combo colors NC for readability does nothing lol
00:15:485 (6) - I suggest moving this to give the note emphasis (clap + vocal), I would have suggested moving to stack on 00:14:667 (3) - but then this would create a jump to 7, which isn't terrible but not very good. Try coming up with something! You could lave it, but it's just an idea.
00:17:394 (1,2) - These are not stacked if you intended them to be.
00:25:576 (3,1) - Because of this stack, 3 is not perfectly stacked under 00:24:485 (5) - which is what I think you intended to do. You can easily fix this by simply moving these two so that 3 is stacked under 00:24:485 (5)
00:30:485 (1) - Not really a necessary NC, even if it's for readability you can read this pattern without it.
00:41:394 (1) - ^ Again, I disagree with this NC. These are totally subjective so you can keep them for sure, but consider removing them.
Rest looks pretty good actually.
[Hard]
00:06:485 (3,1) - A blanket, if you care to fix it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964973
00:17:394 (1) - argh these nc's are like...yeah ill just stop commenting on these lol, it's clear you wanted them for some reason
00:33:485 (1,3) - If you care, 3 isn't perfectly stacked under 1's tail
00:42:212 (1,2) - buddy we need to have a talk about those blankets https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964987
01:23:667 (1,2,3) - On the note of blankets, these 3 don't blanket each other lol
Normal looked good, other than what Electoz had to say.
I apologize for the mod full of blankets, but when they look like they're supposed to blanket (different from unintentionally not blanket) and the blanket is off, I have to comment on them.
If you ever need a blanket mod right off the bat feel free to hit me up for an IRC blanket mod or something.
See you in the qualified section!
I told you :vCrystilonZ wrote:
Ahh QAQ
Alright, looks like i really need to nerf that last kiai QAQ
Topic Starter
I pledge my allegiance to O'mighty ezek and all his benevolence orz
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Ok jokes aside
I really need blanket mods / stack mods lol because i suck
gonna electopoke~
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Hobbes2 wrote:
that being said this set is pretty hot eh? but I prefer cold tho
Ok jokes aside
Electoz wrote:
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:59:121 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - This part of rhythm needs to be nerfed, it's as dense as Hard which it shouldn't happen, you have to make the rhythm less dense for an appropriate density spread across the mapset. You can fix this by either remove some weak beats or replacing some of 1/1 sliders with circles to provide a rhythm gap which makes the gameplay more lenient for players. I completely forgot about the spread QAQ kill me
[My Bear]
- 01:16:848 (3) - Move this down a bit? Cuz the triangle 01:16:303 (1,2,3) looks weird when they aren't even, my suggestion here is to use 1.5 DS on 01:16:576 (2,3) so you can get a better positioning while maintaining a blanket 01:14:121 (3,3) as well. This is intentional. 01:17:121 (1) - is stronger than 01:16:576 (2) - and 01:16:576 (2) - does so with 01:16:848 (3) - . So the DS corresponds to the music correctly here
I don't think the rhythm issue in Normal is major enough for a pop, so call me back once you done fixing for qualify.
- 00:48:758 (1,2,3,4) - Change these to sliders like 01:06:212 (1,2) ? Kinda understand your reasoning behind the jumps 00:47:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) but I think sliders gives a better transition from instruments 00:47:394 (3,4,5,6,7) to vocals 00:49:848 (5,6,7,8) . I really love how ^ varies according to the density tho QAQ. The only reason I put a slider at 01:06:212 (1) - because I want players to have time to adjust themselves after the stream.
- 00:49:303 (3) - Can be repositioned a bit cuz currently doesn't look visually even with 00:48:212 (6,1,3) - 00:49:303 (3,6,8) . [Only apply this if you didn't apply the suggestion above] 00:49:030 (2,3,4,5) - form a square and are much nearer on the timeline. Thus, get a higher priority.
Thanks for the mod XDHobbes2 wrote:
dont mind me just practicing my modding by modding bubbled maps
that being said this set is pretty hot so ill give a few suggestions you can ignore
[my bear]
00:06:758 (3,4) - these blankets are busted https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964951 if you get both of them an equal distance from 4 (so that the blankets are equal) it would look pretty cool fixed ;w;
00:13:030 (1) - If this NC is for readability its not really needed, also with these combo colors NC for readability does nothing lol okay, gonna remove all ncs like this on all diffs
00:15:485 (6) - I suggest moving this to give the note emphasis (clap + vocal), I would have suggested moving to stack on 00:14:667 (3) - but then this would create a jump to 7, which isn't terrible but not very good. Try coming up with something! You could lave it, but it's just an idea. nah i don't care much for the snare.
00:17:394 (1,2) - These are not stacked if you intended them to be. oops
00:25:576 (3,1) - Because of this stack, 3 is not perfectly stacked under 00:24:485 (5) - which is what I think you intended to do. You can easily fix this by simply moving these two so that 3 is stacked under 00:24:485 (5) kinda get what you mean
00:30:485 (1) - Not really a necessary NC, even if it's for readability you can read this pattern without it. ^^^^
00:41:394 (1) - ^ Again, I disagree with this NC. These are totally subjective so you can keep them for sure, but consider removing them.
Rest looks pretty good actually.
[Hard]
00:06:485 (3,1) - A blanket, if you care to fix it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964973 done!
00:17:394 (1) - argh these nc's are like...yeah ill just stop commenting on these lol, it's clear you wanted them for some reason i removed it QAQ
00:33:485 (1,3) - If you care, 3 isn't perfectly stacked under 1's tail probably better now
00:42:212 (1,2) - buddy we need to have a talk about those blankets https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5964987 fixed i guess ;w;
01:23:667 (1,2,3) - On the note of blankets, these 3 don't blanket each other lol fixed
Normal looked good, other than what Electoz had to say.
I apologize for the mod full of blankets, but when they look like they're supposed to blanket (different from unintentionally not blanket) and the blanket is off, I have to comment on them.
If you ever need a blanket mod right off the bat feel free to hit me up for an IRC blanket mod or something.
See you in the qualified section!
I really need blanket mods / stack mods lol because i suck
gonna electopoke~
Removed an object on 01:00:758 and fixed 2 overlaps in Normal. Also fixed a lot of hitsound inconsistencies, and I mean A LOT.
Qualified!
Qualified!
19:33 Electoz: 00:59:121 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ยังยาวอยู่นะ
19:33 Electoz: เอาออกได้อีกป่ะ
19:33 CrystilonZ: ห้ะ
19:33 CrystilonZ: นอกนั้นมันมี stream เป็นพื้นหลังอ่ะ
19:33 CrystilonZ: แปป เด่วดูก่อน
19:33 Electoz: หรือมีอันไหนที่แบบ
19:34 Electoz: ถอดสไลเดอร์แล้ววางสองวงแทนได้ป่ะ?
19:34 CrystilonZ: 1/1 อ่ะนะ
19:34 Electoz: เยส
19:34 CrystilonZ: ที่พอเอาออกได้ ก็
19:34 CrystilonZ: 01:13:576 (2) -
19:34 CrystilonZ: แต่ตรงนั้นมันบางยุแล้วงะ 5555
19:35 Electoz: 01:04:030 (1) - ตรงนี้อะพอได้ป่ะ
19:35 Electoz: ระหว่างท่อนพอดี
19:35 CrystilonZ: ลองแปป
19:36 CrystilonZ: พแได้นะ แต่ปะแหล่ม 5555
19:36 Electoz: 01:02:667 (2) - เอ้ย
19:36 Electoz: ตรงนี้ก็
19:36 Electoz: โอเคนะ
19:36 Electoz: แล้วแต่
19:37 CrystilonZ: ตรงนั้นขอ 5555
19:37 Electoz: เคๆ
19:37 CrystilonZ: หรือ
19:37 CrystilonZ: 01:05:121 (4) -
19:37 CrystilonZ: เอาเหลือวงกลมเดียว
19:37 CrystilonZ: จะปะแหล่มปะหว่า
19:37 Electoz: มันก็
19:37 Electoz: ดังทั้งคู่นะ
19:37 CrystilonZ: ใช่ 555
19:38 CrystilonZ: โอยเลือกไม่ถูก
19:38 CrystilonZ: คือแบบมันไม่ปะแหล่มมากไง
19:38 CrystilonZ: เพราะ
19:38 CrystilonZ: 00:47:394 (2,3) -
19:38 CrystilonZ: พอถูได้ 555555+
19:39 CrystilonZ: มันแย่กว่าเดิมอ่ะ orz
19:40 CrystilonZ: เพราะทำแล้วมันกลายเป็น 4 single tap ติดกัน
19:40 CrystilonZ: สุดแค่นี้แหล่ะ 5555 เอาออกไม่ได้แล้ว
19:41 Electoz: 01:00:758 - ตรงนี้ล่ะ?
19:41 Electoz: 00:43:303 - เพราะว่าตรงนี้ไม่มี
19:41 Electoz: แต่ vocal มันลงไม่เหมือนกัน
19:41 CrystilonZ: เอ้ยได้
19:41 CrystilonZ: โอเค ตรงนั้นละกัน
19:41 Electoz: ก็ยังยาวอยู่แต่ก็
19:42 Electoz: เอาเหอะ
19:42 Electoz: อันนี้พอรับได้
19:42 Electoz: 55555
19:43 CrystilonZ: orz BSS บึ้มทุกทีตอน submit แมพนี้
19:43 CrystilonZ: แปปนะ
19:44 CrystilonZ: เรียบร้อย \o/
19:48 Electoz: จะแก้ตรงไหนอีกป่ะ?
19:48 Electoz: ไม่มีละนะ?
19:48 CrystilonZ: งั้นขอ
19:48 CrystilonZ: เชครอบสุดท้ายแปป
19:48 CrystilonZ: กันอะไรโง่ๆ
19:50 Electoz: 01:01:161 - clap
19:50 CrystilonZ: นั่นไง
19:50 CrystilonZ: ว่าละ
19:51 Electoz: 01:11:939 - ทำไม Hard มี whistle
19:51 Electoz: แต่ดิฟอื่นไม่มี
19:52 CrystilonZ: เพราะใส่เกิน
19:52 CrystilonZ: RIP HS
19:54 CrystilonZ: โอเค เช็คดิฟเดียวแล้วก็อปเอาดีกว่าส
19:55 Electoz: เค
19:55 Electoz: 00:56:667 -
19:56 Electoz: 00:57:212 -
19:56 CrystilonZ: เออ
19:56 CrystilonZ: นี่พึ่งรู้ตัวว่าใส่ไปด้วย
19:56 CrystilonZ: ลืมไปแล้ว
19:57 Electoz: 00:54:485 (5) - อันนี้มีหมดก็จริงแต่ไม่ต้องใส่ก็ได้มั้ง
19:57 Electoz: 00:58:848 - ^
19:59 CrystilonZ: อันล่างลบละ
19:59 CrystilonZ: อันบน
19:59 CrystilonZ: ตามเสียงกีต้าร์แฮะ
20:00 CrystilonZ: เช็คจากดิฟยากสุดดีกว่า
20:00 Electoz: 01:16:303 (3,5) - ไม่ต้องใส่ก็ได้มั้ง?
20:00 Electoz: 01:18:758 (6,7) - เพราะตรงนี้ก็ไม่ได้ใส่
20:01 Electoz: 01:25:030 - inconsistency
20:02 CrystilonZ: 01:16:303 (3,4,5) - ตรงนี้น่าใส่อออกกก
20:02 Electoz: 00:56:667 - อันนี้ได้เอาออกป่ะ?
20:02 CrystilonZ: รอแปปนึง อัพก่อน 55555
20:02 CrystilonZ: แก้กันสองฝั่งไม่รู้ไปถึงไหนละ
20:05 Electoz: ที่อิงมาข้างบนอะ
20:05 Electoz: จาก Insane หมดเลยนะ
20:06 CrystilonZ: แก้รายดิฟแปป
20:06 CrystilonZ: เด่วรายงานละกันแก้ไหนบ้าง
20:06 CrystilonZ: เริ่มจากที่อยู่ออนไลน์ตอนนี้ละกัน
20:07 CrystilonZ: 00:57:212 - เอาออก
20:07 CrystilonZ: normal นะ
20:07 CrystilonZ: 01:05:394 - เอาออก
20:07 CrystilonZ: _01:05:121 - นี่ด้วย
20:08 CrystilonZ: 01:05:939 (5) -
20:08 CrystilonZ: 01:18:485 (3) -
20:08 CrystilonZ: ช่วงที่ไม่ใช่ kiai น่าจะไม่มีไร
20:09 CrystilonZ: เพราะอันนั้นไม่มีท่ายาก 5555
20:09 Electoz: เดี๋ยวนะ
20:09 Electoz: เอา
20:09 Electoz: ทีละดิฟก่อน
20:09 Electoz: ตอนนี้ Normal ใช่มะ
20:09 CrystilonZ: อืม หมดนั้น Normal
20:09 Electoz: 00:23:939 (3) -
20:09 CrystilonZ: นี่จะเริ่ม Hard ละ 55
20:09 CrystilonZ: 00:23:939 (3) - อันนี้คือ?
20:10 Electoz: เอา whistle ออกป่ะ?
20:10 Electoz: เพราะดิฟอื่นไม่มี
20:10 CrystilonZ: เอ่อ
20:10 CrystilonZ: ไม่ได้ใส่อยู่แล้วนะ
20:13 CrystilonZ: เออลืม
20:13 CrystilonZ: 01:05:394 - whistle
20:14 Electoz: 01:05:121 -
20:14 Electoz: Inconsistency
20:14 Electoz: เช็คอัน 394 ด้วยก็ดี
20:15 CrystilonZ: อืม
20:15 CrystilonZ: จงใจ 555
20:15 Electoz: เอ้ยเดี๋ยว
20:15 CrystilonZ: ใส่ clap ละแบบ
20:15 CrystilonZ: ปะแหล่ม
20:15 CrystilonZ: มากๆ
20:15 CrystilonZ: เลยเอาออก
20:16 CrystilonZ: อันนี้ hard นะ
20:16 CrystilonZ: 00:57:212 (4) - เอาออก
20:16 CrystilonZ: 01:05:121 (4) - เอา clap ออก หัวท้าย
20:16 CrystilonZ: ท้ายใส่ whistle แทน
20:16 CrystilonZ: 01:05:939 (6) - เอาออก
20:17 Electoz: 01:25:303 - อันนี้ไปยัง
20:18 CrystilonZ: whistle หมดทุกดิฟมะ
20:18 Electoz: clap น่าจะดีกว่านะ
20:18 Electoz: เพราะปกติก็ใส่ตรงนั้นตลอดเพลงอยู่ละ
20:18 Electoz: แต่ถ้าอยากให้มัน fade ลงก็แล้วแต่
20:18 CrystilonZ: หืม
20:19 CrystilonZ: อืม ให้เฝดดูดีกว่า
20:19 CrystilonZ: 01:16:848 - ทั้งสามดิฟเลย 555
20:19 Electoz: นี้ Hard ละนะ
20:19 Electoz: 00:08:667 (3) -
20:19 CrystilonZ: เอาออกออ?
20:20 Electoz: อันนั้น
20:20 CrystilonZ: normal ก็ไม่ได้เอาออกนะ
20:20 Electoz: hard ไม่มี clap
20:20 CrystilonZ: rip ท่ายาก
20:20 CrystilonZ: เอ้ยมี
20:20 Electoz: สรุปคือ
20:20 Electoz: มันควรจะมี
20:20 CrystilonZ: อัพเดทยัง
20:20 Electoz: หรือไม่มี
20:20 CrystilonZ: ควรมี
20:22 CrystilonZ: hard หมดละมั้ง
20:23 CrystilonZ: insane มี
20:23 CrystilonZ: เอา 00:57:212 (4) - ออก
20:23 CrystilonZ: 01:05:939 (10) - เอาออก
20:28 Electoz: 00:57:212 - Normal
20:29 CrystilonZ: เหะ
20:29 CrystilonZ: ไม่ได้เอาออกไปแล้วหรอฟะ
20:29 CrystilonZ: rip
20:29 Electoz: อัพหมดละนะ
20:29 Electoz: ไม่น่าพลาดละรอบนี้
20:29 Electoz: 555555
20:29 Electoz: 00:58:848 (3) -
20:29 Electoz: inconsistency
20:29 CrystilonZ: ดิฟไหน
20:30 Electoz: Hard
20:30 CrystilonZ: เอะ
20:30 CrystilonZ: inconsistent กับอะไร
20:31 Electoz: ใน Insane ไม่มีป่ะ?
20:31 Electoz: whistle
20:31 CrystilonZ: โอเค งั้นเพิ่มใน insane ละ
20:33 Electoz: 01:18:485 (3) - clap?
20:33 Electoz: Normal
20:33 CrystilonZ: จงใจเอาออกอ่ะ
20:34 Electoz: k
20:34 CrystilonZ: เอาออกใน hard ด้วยดีกว่า OwO
20:36 Electoz: 00:55:848 - missing clap?
20:37 Electoz: ทุกดิฟป่ะ?
20:37 Electoz: 01:13:303 - เพราะตรงนี้มี
20:38 CrystilonZ: เอ
20:38 CrystilonZ: ทำไมตอนนั้นไม่ใส่หว่า
20:38 CrystilonZ: ลืมละ
20:38 CrystilonZ: ช่างมัน 555 ใส่ละ
20:40 Electoz: แปป
20:40 Electoz: ขอ
20:40 Electoz: Normal
20:41 CrystilonZ: ให้อัพก่อนมะ
20:41 CrystilonZ: จะได้ไม่ต้องแก้ซ้ำ 5555
20:42 Electoz: 00:11:394 (4,2) - มันจัดให้ไม่ overlap ได้ป่ะ
20:42 Electoz: ใน Normal
20:42 Electoz: overlap แบบ
20:42 Electoz: 0.1 pixel
20:42 CrystilonZ: xdd
20:42 CrystilonZ: ได้มั้ง
20:42 CrystilonZ: ลองแปป stack มันชอบเพี้ยน
20:43 CrystilonZ: เรียบร้อย
20:43 CrystilonZ: 00:16:848 (2,3) - นี่ด้วยเลยละกัน
Gratzz senpai >w</
Topic Starter
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Ohhh! So fast! >< Congrokolations, Cryztil! :3
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oh hi quagsire
Thanks! XDD
Rank your map too fddegwhghgdah
Thanks! XDD
Rank your map too fddegwhghgdah
yeee more Shirokuma Cafe \:D/
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thanks everyone >w<
want seconds? https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/455489&start=0ezek wrote:
yeee more Shirokuma Cafe \:D/
Grats!! ~