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Protastic101 wrote:
"A few days" and a week later I'm here, yay. Why does this remind me of marble soda though?
Column 1|2|3|4Idk what to put here[General][Yuki's Normal]00:03:185 (3185|3,3367|2,3549|1) - Since the pitch is ascending, I would consider using Control H here and then shifting the notes one column to the right.
- Maybe make the OD of Another ~8.2 cause there's more notes and few LNs.
- I think your offset is actually ~87. I'm using the old offset.
00:03:731 (3731|0,3913|1,4095|2) - I would then suggest using control H on these notes because the pitch of the last note is lower than all the other notes.
00:11:185 (11185|3) - I'd suggest removing this note to add a little emphasis to the bells at 00:11:367 (11367|1,11549|2) because they're the melody and you didn't map the lower pitched bells at 00:10:640
00:25:913 (25913|1,26095|2) - Control H? The first note at 00:25:913 is a high pitched bubble pop, whereas 00:26:095 is a low drum tom.
00:27:367 (27367|0) - Assuming you're following the synth here, this ends at 00:27:822 , and I think it's fine to end it there and leave 1/4 gap between the LN and 00:27:913 (27913|2)
00:31:731 (31731|3,31822|2) - To loosely follow some pitch relevancy here, why not control J? Because 00:31:731 (31731|3) is lower in pitch than 00:31:822 (31822|2)
00:37:185 (37185|1) - What about making this a short 1/2 LN since the sound sounds smoother and longer as opposed to the short sounds around it?
00:41:549 (41549|2,41731|2) - Why are these jacked? They're different pitches with 00:41:549 (41549|2) being lower than 00:41:731 (41731|2) so maybe make it like {2} {3} instead?
00:46:640 (46640|1,46640|3) - I understand that this is the end of this section, but the sound isn't loud at all, and is as soft as the notes around it, so remove one note?
00:44:458 (44458|2,44458|3) - Why is this clap a double when the claps at 00:41:549 - 00:40:095 - and etc. aren't?
00:57:913 (57913|2) - Since there's a burst here in the music, why not add an LN for it and end at 00:58:276 ? If accepted, remove 00:58:095 (58095|1)
01:00:004 (60004|2) - I think this note is a little too quiet to be mapped too since it looks like you're mapping just the melody here, and not the small bells in the background.
01:32:640 (92640|2,92822|3) - I think you flipped these notes around. The synth like 01:32:095 (92095|1) is at 01:32:640 so the LN should be there and 01:32:640 (92640|2) should be at 01:32:822
accept most
[Insane]00:02:640 (2640|3) - For pitch relevancy, move this to 2. ok
00:06:981 - Why not add a note here (1/16) for the gracenote or the small bell sound before the louder synth.
00:46:276 - Here, there's a long synth like at 00:45:549 (45549|0) so maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/qo1lZ.jpg
00:57:913 - Why don't you add the 1/6 here for the synth like you did at the timestamp of the above suggestion?
01:44:095 - The 1/6 synth starts here, so maybe try this http://puu.sh/qo1yY.jpg reject all , dont want to change :V
thanks so much protastic, and you could change the offset in my diff shikil..Protastic101 wrote:
"A few days" and a week later I'm here, yay. Why does this remind me of marble soda though?
Column 1|2|3|4Idk what to put here[General][Muu's Hard]00:11:185 (11185|2) - These next 2 suggestions are me being a PR nazi. Move this to 2. sorry but i don't get it what is PR nazi so i would keep this one
- Maybe make the OD of Another ~8.2 cause there's more notes and few LNs.
- I think your offset is actually ~87. I'm using the old offset.
00:11:367 (11367|1,11549|2) - Control H. This also works out cause then 00:11:549 (11549|2,11913|1) would be in the same column and they're the same pitch. so then with this
00:22:640 - I think 1/6 in a hard difficulty may be too difficult due to the speed and the fact that this pattern isn't a common burst pattern. Instead, you could try to replace it with 1/3 and just save the 1/6 for a higher difficulty, also due to the diff curve and how Normal barely used any 1/4, so this might be too fast. i would keep for this one
00:34:276 (34276|3,34276|2,34640|0,34640|1) - Because of the target audience this is aimed towards, I would suggest using jumpbursts like this more sparingly because these kicks aren't that loud and don't really need a double note, as opposed to a clap or something, so I'd consider reducing them to single notes so that it's a little easier to hit and read. this is too
00:38:458 (38458|3,38458|1,38640|2) - Another thing here, why do you ignore the clap and choose to accent the kicks instead? While there's nothing wrong with that, it just feels a little weird to ignore the more emphasized clap. yea i think the kick give more impact for me, also i did follow the clap in other part so it would make some variety pattern.. so it won't be monotone
00:57:913 - Why don't you map the 1/6 synth burst in the music here like you did at places like 00:45:913 or 00:22:640 ? i think it is 1/8.. and it would be too many if i put them than a 1/6.. also i would put if it is 1/6
thank you good modEternalie wrote:
Haiho
hope this can help
short mod incdadoncollumn = 1/2/3/4
[Another]
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00:16:271 (16271|0,16453|0) - move to 2 and then
00:16:362 (16362|1,16544|1) - move thoose to 1 ,
^ it's to avoid too much notes in 1 here : 00:15:726 (15726|0,15908|0,16090|0) - readjust
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[Insane]
00:07:908 (7908|2,8090|3) - Ctrl+J then move : 00:08:453 (8453|2) - to 1 or 2 (for pitch) ok readjust
00:25:362 (25362|2) - you could add a note or a roll here for the drum roll reconsider
00:32:271 (32271|1) - move to 3 not same pitch as previous note moved
[Yuki's Normal]
00:22:268 (22268|3,22450|0,22632|2,22996|1) - Ctrl+H for pitch here apply
Good Luck :3
thank you very niceAdinata28 wrote:
Mod |1|2|3|4|
Yuki's Normal
First of all, all of objects in your diff isn't snapped correctly. you can fix it by CTRL + A then drag all the objects up a little bit. then release it again.i forgot what i apply most of it i applied 80%
- 00:23:544 (23544|2,23726|1) - CTRL+G this because the melody kinda repeated. so it should be same with 00:23:908 (23908|0,24090|1,24271|2) -
- 00:21:908 (21908|0) - how about you delete this ? kinda messy to follow the rhitym if you added note here to follow the drum.
if you applied this, then i have good pattern to follow from 00:20:453 -- 00:28:817 (28817|3) - move this to 2, then 00:29:180 (29180|1,29362|3) - CTRL +G
- 00:37:362 (37362|2) - move this to 4
- 00:39:544 - from here you can change to a better pattern like
- 00:44:999 (44999|1,45544|2,46271|0) - for what is these LNs ? i have an idea if you want it.
- 01:07:362 - 01:07:180 - 01:07:726 - 01:07:908 - 01:08:271 - 01:08:453 - 01:08:635 - should add a note in these timestamp to follow the rhitym. consistency stuff.
- 01:14:453 - from here, how about.
- 00:02:999 (2999|0) - move this to 2 or 4, then 00:03:180 (3180|1,3362|2,3544|0) - move to 1,2,3. for PR.
- 01:28:090 (88090|3) - to 3
- 01:30:817 - just like before on 00:44:271 - but reversed.
Not much to comment here, but you only should remake some pattern to follow the PR. and it will be point plus for your diff.
thank you very much :v-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:
Hii SReisen ET o/4K = 1~4Click Me!
- [Another]
- 00:44:090 (44090|3,44271|2,44453|1,44453|0,44453|3,44635|0,44635|3,44726|1,44817|3,44817|0) - suggest http://puu.sh/qu8LN/dcfb8931f8.jpg avoid this jack 00:44:453 (44453|0,44453|3,44635|3,44635|0,44817|0,44817|3,44999|3,44999|0,45180|0,45362|0) - yea good
- 00:44:544 - add note ? nope no thanks , i leave it blank for the main sound to came out first
- 01:30:635 (90635|0,90817|1,90999|0,90999|3,90999|2,91180|0,91180|3,91271|2,91362|3,91362|0) - Same as before
[Insane]- 00:34:817 (34817|1,34999|1,34999|0,35180|0,35362|1,35544|0,35544|1,35726|0) - idk i feel less handnalance here. too much jack in left hand. suggest http://puu.sh/qu9rX/d173484265.jpg to better handbalance and play tho. i dont feel any different but i think you are right i map it not really hand balance , followed
- 01:21:362 (81362|2,81453|1,81544|0,81544|2,81544|3,81726|3,81726|1,81908|2,81908|1,82090|0,82090|3,82090|2,82271|3,82271|1,82453|0,82453|2) - same as before ^
[Muu's Hard] 00:45:953 (45953|1,45999|2) - wrong snap? should be 1/6s. reference from Another and Insane diff.- 01:32:499 (92499|2,92544|1) - ^
Sen-pai~
Goodluck 'w')b
nice thanksDegojix wrote:
hope this mod helps~
feel free to reject anything you dislike
and i can't really mod the Normal and Hard diffs
1|2|3|4
MODS:Insane00:48:635 ~ 00:49:544 - http://puu.sh/quHZW/f4150e4ffb.png maybe you can try this instead to make the 3 descending notes stand out {2} followed
00:52:090 (52090|0) - move note to (2), and
00:52:271 (52271|1) - move note to (1) looks neater, follows pitch, and also the double tap on (1) will emphasize a new bar
00:54:817 (54817|2) - move note to (4), and
00:54:999 (54999|1) - move note to (3), and
00:55:180 (55180|0) - move note to (2) ^{1}all followedAnother00:02:271 (2271|0) - move note to (3), and
00:02:635 (2635|2) - move note to (2) alternating index fingers feels better followed
00:45:180 ~ 00:45:362 - http://puu.sh/que0H/d6be0fe80f.png seems more natural to have the 4 right-to-left hi-hat notes start on the white bar {1} is it , well look more nicer i followed
00:48:999 (48999|0) - delete, and
00:49:180 (49180|1) - delete, and
00:49:362 (49362|2) - delete just a suggestion to make this segment more interesting by emphasizing the "silence". having double notes throughout is consistent but i feel it's quite repetitive
00:51:908 ~ 00:52:271 - this part can be left unchanged
00:54:817 (54817|0) - delete, and
00:54:999 (54999|1) - delete, and
00:55:180 (55180|2) - delete ^ [/color]
01:09:180 (69180|0) - move note to (3), and
01:09:544 (69544|2) - move note to (1) using both hands to hit (2&3) gives more impact (similar to Insane diff)[/color]
01:31:726 ~ 01:31:908 - same as {2}^, mirrored ^
good luck!
updatedMuu-chan wrote:
Both applied from eternalie and amishici, here is update http://puu.sh/quTny/46df445253.rar
lol ok applypuxtu wrote:
00:30:271 (30271|3) - 01:16:817 (76817|0) - slider end at 1/2 tbh
I think i will keep this one :3genkicho wrote:
hmm this map so good.. hard to mod
Hard
01:08:817 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812893
nice suggestion really appreciatedgenkicho wrote:
hmm this map so good.. hard to mod
Insane
00:10:635 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812800 by pitch , yea
00:31:726 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812817 ok
01:34:271 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812837 readjust
01:36:999 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812841 nice
01:37:908 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812845 accept and some adjustment
Another
01:40:271 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812855 01:40:271 (100271|1,100453|1) - this will help the sound and also - 01:34:453 (94453|2,94635|2) - this is the same
Normal
00:05:362 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812905 accept
01:38:090 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5812948 ^
thanks alotjuankristal wrote:
Hello shiki! Sorry for the delay, but here is my mod as you requested.Another00:04:090 (4090|0,4090|3) - I think this double should be rearranged since it is different pitch from the previous one.
00:09:908 (9908|2,9908|0) - ^ all rearranged
00:16:362 (16362|1,16544|1,16726|2) - Maybe keep this at the same column ? 00:13:453 (13453|2,13635|2,13817|2) - like here. Actually, it might just be better to change the first one. rearranged
00:22:999 (22999|2,23059|3,23120|0,23180|1,23241|2,23302|3) - Ctrl+G and fix the triple imo the sound changes the direction and should have a different pattern. Maybe even something like this http://puu.sh/qzfCH/5fb9e970dd.jpg? no changed
00:27:635 - Maybe try something like this? It makes a trill motion and I think it might be more accurate to the song.
00:45:908 - Maybe this? I think it follows the pitch better:
01:31:180 (91180|0,91362|0,91544|0,91726|0,91908|0,92090|0) - I am not a fan of this type of things, maybe you can readjust this in order to make that column less heavy or at least with a longer break.
I feel some of this can be applied in the insane difficulty so keep track on that.Insane00:28:817 (28817|1,28817|0,28999|3,28999|2) - I feel between this two notes there should be a jack 1/2. Like the previous doubles because of pitch. Probably in column 1 rearrangge
00:38:999 (38999|2) - I dont really get why this one and some of this long notes are endsnapped in blue lines. It feels weird, and I feel you should do that with every LN or you should not do that. Also I dont think it is really noticeable for a player where does that sound really ends so might as well not make it too difficult no change here
And I feel the end might lack a bit of triples but I dont know if thats intentional or it is just me not paying too much attention. Most of the stuff for this difficulty have been pointed out in the previous one so yeah, that. Maybe you can follow pitch a bit more when it comes to the doubles here but overall is fine.
And that might be it, it is a bit short but well, your map is quite decent right now imo so good luck with it!
thanks alotNo_sync wrote:
hi!
From my NM/M4M queue.
Columns 4K 0|1|2|3General01:09:913 - I think here will be good for the preview point...
No more issues found...Yuki's NormalI think you need spread the sounds like 00:00:635 (snare? cymbal?) from the whistles...
Check the Hitsounds again if you change something with Ctrl+"x", because sometimes inverts the notes with Hitsounds lol
00:00:635 (635|2) - to |3|
00:01:908 (1908|2) - to |3|
00:02:635 (2635|2) - you can move this to |1|
00:03:544 (3544|2) - to |3| and 00:03:726 (3726|3,3908|2) - Ctrl+H , and 00:04:090 (4090|1) - to |3|
00:04:817 (4817|1) - to |0|
00:05:362 (5362|1,5544|2) - Ctrl+H
00:06:453 (6453|2) - to |3|
00:07:180 (7180|3) - to |0|
00:07:726 (7726|3,7908|0,8090|2) - Ctrl+H
00:09:544 (9544|1,9726|2) - Ctrl+H
00:10:635 - I think you need add a note here...up to you.
00:12:453 (12453|2,12635|0,12817|3,12999|1) - Ctrl+H
00:13:544 (13544|2) - to |0| and 00:13:726 (13726|3,13908|0) - Ctrl+H no you just made a triple jack
00:15:362 (15362|1) - to |3| , 00:15:544 (15544|2) - to |1| , 00:15:726 (15726|3) - to |2| and 00:15:908 (15908|1) - to |0|
00:16:453 (16453|2,16635|3,16817|2,16999|0,17180|1) - http://i.imgur.com/HXowcRt.jpg
00:18:635 (18635|3) - to |2|
00:19:362 (19362|1,19544|0,19726|3,20090|2) - http://i.imgur.com/rtXdGy8.jpg
00:24:090 (24090|1,24271|2,24453|0,24453|3) - Ctrl+H and 00:24:999 (24999|1) - to |3|
00:29:908 (29908|1,30090|2,30271|0,30271|3,30817|1,30999|2,31180|0,31362|1,31544|2) - Ctrl+H... and about 00:30:271 (30271|3) - Longnote ends in 00:30:817, same that 00:27:362 (27362|0) or 00:24:453 (24453|3). readjust
00:35:726 (35726|1,35908|2,36090|0,36090|3,36635|3) - maybe Ctrl+H dont think so
From 00:46:635 to 00:58:271 - You can use one (and only one column) for the whistles like 00:47:180 (47180|0) or 00:47:908 (47908|2). http://i.imgur.com/tQ1nhWN.jpg <- example, choose another column if want. readjust
01:02:271 (62271|3) - to |1|
01:04:817 (64817|2) - to |0|
01:04:999 (64999|3) - to |1|
no hand balance
01:08:817 (68817|0,69180|3) - http://i.imgur.com/PeehgQM.jpg no thanks
01:12:453 (72453|2,72635|1) - Ctrl+H
01:18:271 (78271|0,78362|1,78453|2,78544|3) - http://i.imgur.com/FotGf5A.jpg X
01:23:908 (83908|1) - to |0|
01:38:453 (98453|0,98635|1) - Ctrl+G
01:44:999 (104999|2) - to |3| , 01:45:180 (105180|3) - to |2| , and 01:45:362 (105362|2) - to |1|
no comment are acceptInsaneabout patterns...
00:10:453 (10453|1,10544|2,10635|3,10635|0,10726|1,10817|2,10908|1,10999|0) - http://i.imgur.com/XD880wc.jpg
00:25:908 (25908|1,26090|2) - if you spread these two sounds (in all the song) will be good i think
00:34:271 (34271|3,34271|2,34362|1,34453|0,34453|3,34544|1,34635|3,34635|2,34726|0,34817|1,34908|2,34999|3,34999|1,34999|0) - http://i.imgur.com/BWFX05S.jpg
00:44:453 (44453|1,44453|3,44453|0,44635|0,44635|3,44726|1,44817|0,44817|3,44908|2,44999|0,44999|1,44999|3,45090|2,45180|1,45362|0,45362|2) - http://i.imgur.com/u26LgR9.jpg
01:01:362 (61362|0) - to |2| readjust
01:06:999 (66999|0,66999|1,66999|2,67180|3,67362|1) - http://i.imgur.com/BbrGwPC.jpg
01:20:817 (80817|0,80817|1,80908|2,80999|3,80999|0,81090|2,81180|0,81180|1,81271|3,81362|2,81453|1,81544|0,81544|2,81544|3) - http://i.imgur.com/SUcVfSP.jpg
01:30:999 (90999|2,90999|0,90999|3,91180|3,91180|1,91271|2,91362|3,91362|0,91453|1,91544|3,91544|2,91544|0,91635|1,91726|2,91908|3,91908|1) - http://i.imgur.com/axOZ4UY.jpg
01:32:271 (92271|2) - to |1| ok
01:44:271 (104271|1,104271|0,104362|2,104453|3,104514|2,104574|1,104635|0,104696|3,104756|2,104817|0,104817|3,104817|1) - http://i.imgur.com/5fuCzrd.jpg
no comment are rejectAnotherno comment acceptnot much actually...
00:44:090 (44090|2) - to |1| nope
01:08:817 (68817|3) - i think this Longnote ends in 01:09:544. adjust
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00:25:544 (25544|3) - Clap missed
00:38:635 (38635|1) - ^
01:09:180 (69180|1) - ^
01:12:090 (72090|0) - ^
01:25:180 (85180|2) - ^
01:32:453 (92453|1,92453|3) - Maybe here too...
01:35:726 (95726|3) - Whistle missed? no not missing :v
Sorry for the (l o n g) waiting, too many things to do :/
Good luck to all bye!
Thank you, update here Shiki http://puu.sh/qD74J/5309ab9376.rarNo_sync wrote:
hi!
From my NM/M4M queue.
Columns 4K 0|1|2|3General01:09:913 - I think here will be good for the preview point...
No more issues found...Muu's Hardhi! a few things...
00:10:453 (10453|1,10544|2,10635|3,10635|0,10726|1,10817|2,10908|1,10999|0) - maybe this: http://i.imgur.com/XD880wc.jpg
00:31:817 (31817|3,31908|2,31999|1,32090|3,32090|0) - http://i.imgur.com/cpVFLY6.jpg i did different pattern but thanks :9
00:32:999 (32999|1) - to |2| i would keep
00:37:180 (37180|3) - maybe you can replace this with a note and add a note in 00:37:271, do stairs i would keep too :3
01:05:362 (65362|1,65362|3,65544|0,65726|2,65726|1,65817|0,65908|1,65908|3,66090|2,66271|0) - http://i.imgur.com/wv3d0hD.jpg i did different pattern
01:12:635 (72635|1) - to |2| moved
01:12:817 (72817|2) - to |0| i did different thing
01:23:726 (83726|0) - same that 00:37:180 (37180|3) same then
01:30:635 (90635|1) - to |0| keep :3
01:55:362 (115362|2,115362|1) - to |0| and |3| Nice :3
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00:18:817 (18817|0,18817|2) - kick hitsound left? added~
Sorry for the (l o n g) waiting, too many things to do :/
Good luck to all bye!
Thank you~Herkkupala wrote:
Sorry, it took a while
Column 1|2|3|4Muu's Hard00:10:817 (10817|0,10908|3) - Ctrl+H
00:16:271 I'd prefer if you do it like this. Nice applied :9
00:33:726 This plays imo better. nice, but i did 3,4 in last 2 notes
nice thanksHerkkupala wrote:
Sorry, it took a while
Column 1|2|3|4Yuki's Normal00:02:271 (2271|3) - move to column 3
00:03:908 (3908|1) - ^
00:04:271 (4271|0) - move to column 2
00:04:999 (4999|3) - move to column 2
00:05:180 (5180|0) - move to column 4
00:05:544 (5544|1) - move to column 1
00:08:090 (8090|1) - move to column 3
00:08:453 (8453|3) - move to column 1
00:08:817 (8817|1) - move to column 3
00:09:180 (9180|2) - move to column 2
00:13:908 (13908|3) - move to column 2
00:16:271 (16271|0) - move to column 4
00:16:453 (16453|3) - move to column 3
00:36:635 (36635|3) - move to column 3
00:47:726 (47726|1) - move to column 1
00:47:908 (47908|0) - move to column 2
01:18:453 (78453|2) - move to column 4
01:18:544 (78544|3) - move to column 3
00:38:999 (38999|3) - LN ends on different snap compared to other diffs.
01:38:453 (98453|1) - move to column 1
01:38:635 (98635|0) - move to column 2accept allInsane00:09:726 (9726|1) - move to column 3
00:09:908 (9908|2) - move to column 2 okay ^
00:30:271 (30271|0,30271|3) - missing a note here? (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5859210) yes i intended
01:22:090 maybe re-arrange like this. (kinda weighted on left hand 01:21:908 (81908|0,82090|1,82090|0,82271|1,82453|0,82453|1,82635|0) - )
01:15:180 (75180|0,75180|1) - make a hand like in Another? (http://puu.sh/qDg0f.png)
01:44:271 (104271|0,104271|1,104362|2,104453|3) - 1/6 snap?accept ^Anothernothing much to say
00:19:180 (19180|3,19180|1,19271|0,19271|2,19362|1,19362|3) - maybe make it like this. no thanks
fast as everMuu-chan wrote:
Thank you~Herkkupala wrote:
Sorry, it took a while
Column 1|2|3|4Muu's Hard00:10:817 (10817|0,10908|3) - Ctrl+H
00:16:271 I'd prefer if you do it like this. Nice applied :9
00:33:726 This plays imo better. nice, but i did 3,4 in last 2 notes
Update http://puu.sh/qE9nX/9ff5cf8a48.rar
Hellgert wrote:
[another]
00:01:180 (1180|3) - move to 1 pitch
00:16:544 (16544|1,16726|2,16726|2) - i think those are unnecessary,suggest remove,if any pattern same like this,pls do it also the hihat
00:24:090 (24090|0,24090|2,24271|0,24271|1) - i suggest doing like this becuz the sound is diffrent,pls apply for the other too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5996922 the LN are the same sound of hi hat
00:46:635 - 00:57:726 - pls dont make triple,it like runing the map(sry if this offended),make something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5996946 reconsider because is the hardest diff
[insane]
00:34:453 (34453|3) - remove? if yes,pls apply to other too readjust some notes
[Muu hard]
00:34:271 (34271|3,34635|0) - remove it,is good enuf for this,pls apply to other too
01:37:726 (97726|3) - remove,also for the other
sry if this was a bad modding,i was really bz irl
i would keep both for kick~Hellgert wrote:
[Muu hard]
00:34:271 (34271|3,34635|0) - remove it,is good enuf for this,pls apply to other too
01:37:726 (97726|3) - remove,also for the other
sry if this was a bad modding,i was really bz irl