Kondom Varuhuset - Kondomvaruhuset.se [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Spork Lover

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-07-28T20:08:08+00:00

Hej, jeg vil gerne have et kondom! :^))))

(Trying to give this mod a "BN"-ish mindset (For BN application test practice >.<), so please help me by responding with a decent explanation as to why you agree/disagree to my suggestions :3 Thanks <3)

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General

The Widescreen support is inconsistent (As an example, it's not on in Racist's Easy, but is on in the beginner), either have it on on all diffs or don't have it at all

Consider adding "Commercial" and "Condom" to the tags, not everyone is Swedish :^)

Kondom.se might be the place it's from, but according to the ranking criteria, websites do NOT count as a source, please remove it from the source

The rest seems on point, so I think that part's good to go. (The spinner not following sound is probably gonna be discussed, but be stubborn, thank :^))

Beginner Collab

It doesn't really make sense that the HP is higher than on the Easy, reduce it to 2 or 2,5 plz :3 <3

00:02:348 (2,1) - Some blankets that could look better would be stuff like this, since it's basically the only easy-to-make aesthetic in a beginner
00:06:188 (2,3,1) - Small DS inconsistency, you should especially move the 1 a bit closer.
00:18:668 (3,4) - There's more :3
^ Look into every non-1x DS in this map :3
00:27:308 - Add a circle here and start the spinner on 00:28:268 - (End it on the same spot) It feels a bit odd not to add that extra note don't ya think? ;o

Final thoughts on Beginner:
Look into EVERY DS inconsistency (even if it's by like 0,05x) and change it, and consider easy-to-make blankets like the first one

Racist's Easy

00:06:188 (3,4) - Aesthetically, it looks a bit weird that these are not a "Ctrl+J" type pattern.
00:11:948 (2) - To follow the NC-per-measure thing you've been doing, NC this as well.
00:13:388 (1,2) - Odd emphasis since the slider end is on the downbeat at 00:13:868 -... consider a 4-way reverse from 00:13:868 - to 00:15:308 - or something else to mix it up, let yer imagination go wild yo (Basically just make sure that beat is clickable)
00:15:788 (3,1) - Switch NC, since the 3 is on the downbeat.
00:17:708 (2) - DS inconsistency

Final thoughts on Easy:
Like on the Beginner, fix the DS inconsistencies that vary by more than 0,05x (There are quite a few!), and try to fix the emphasis issue stated if you agree

Normal

00:04:268 - A lot of downbeats are skipped, like this one, where it's not clickable; It adds odd flow and feels weird while playing, consider changing this and other similar ones (Seems consistent in the way you're doing it, but in some cases it throws the players off a lot more than it should)
00:08:108 (4) - NC for pre-measure emphasis
00:23:948 (1) - Remove NC, I don't really feel like it serves a purpose (If anything it makes the stack harder)
00:27:308 (4) - NC? Downbeat op :3

Final thoughts on Normal:
Some NC inconsistencies, that you should look into (There are probably more that I didn't spot), and some downbeat issues

Hard

00:00:428 (1,2,3) - The emphasis here would be slider to slider to note, since you go on the off-beat with the slider the way you're doing it now, which flows oddly imo
00:03:068 (4,1,2) - There's a weird overlap on 2 and 4, and also, the notes before 4 are overmapping imo, since they don't really follow the music all too well (Maybe a slider from 00:02:348 (1) - to 00:02:708 -, a note on 00:02:828 - (Which you have atm)
00:05:708 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2 is on the downbeat, and following the pattern with NC's here doesn't really fit imo
00:07:388 (4) - Maybe follow the "double clap" sound and make a note on 7:388 and start the slider on 00:07:628 - ?
00:22:028 (4,5,1) - Consider giving this a turn, so the flow isn't linear.
00:24:908 (5,6,1) - Odd transition, linear + lower spacing near the end is odd to play for a typical Hard player, consider a small change

Final thoughts on Hard gigglez, kondom, hard, gigglez:
I feel that this diff has a few pretty messy sections that would benefit from some tiny reworks. (I explained stuff like awkward overlaps and overmapping, look into this over the entire diff and try to self-mod a few parts

)

havkz's Condom

Got nothing of importance here, nice job

Final thoughts on all:
On lower diffs, fix the DS issues, and fix emphasis issues on Hard/normal, and get some more mods and you should be able to push this forward ^^ Good luck <3

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-07-28T21:45:11+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
Hej, jeg vil gerne have et kondom! :^))))

(Trying to give this mod a "BN"-ish mindset (For BN application test practice >.<), so please help me by responding with a decent explanation as to why you agree/disagree to my suggestions :3 Thanks <3)

COLOURS:
Color coding:
Color coding
Unrankable if unchanged
Normal Suggestion/Comment
Strong Suggestion

General

The Widescreen support is inconsistent (As an example, it's not on in Racist's Easy, but is on in the beginner), either have it on on all diffs or don't have it at all

Consider adding "Commercial" and "Condom" to the tags, not everyone is Swedish :^) what are you talking about everyone speaks swedish (jk), got that now :p

Kondom.se might be the place it's from, but according to the ranking criteria, websites do NOT count as a source, please remove it from the source thanks for telling me! c:

The rest seems on point, so I think that part's good to go. (The spinner not following sound is probably gonna be discussed, but be stubborn, thank :^))
oh i will

Beginner Collab
It doesn't really make sense that the HP is higher than on the Easy, reduce it to 2 or 2,5 plz :3 <3 woops forgot that, ty for reminding me

00:02:348 (2,1) - Some blankets that could look better would be stuff like this, since it's basically the only easy-to-make aesthetic in a beginner
00:06:188 (2,3,1) - Small DS inconsistency, you should especially move the 1 a bit closer.
00:18:668 (3,4) - There's more :3
^ Look into every non-1x DS in this map :3 fixed all DS in the map.. i think, just poke me if i forgots something
00:27:308 - Add a circle here and start the spinner on 00:28:268 - (End it on the same spot) It feels a bit odd not to add that extra note don't ya think? ;o it sounds much better like that, i totally agree. done

Final thoughts on Beginner:
Look into EVERY DS inconsistency (even if it's by like 0,05x) and change it, and consider easy-to-make blankets like the first one im not good when it comes to blankets lol but i'll try. thanks ;P

Racist's Easy
00:06:188 (3,4) - Aesthetically, it looks a bit weird that these are not a "Ctrl+J" type pattern. uhh i didn't understand this lol pls help
00:11:948 (2) - To follow the NC-per-measure thing you've been doing, NC this as well. done
00:13:388 (1,2) - Odd emphasis since the slider end is on the downbeat at 00:13:868 -... consider a 4-way reverse from 00:13:868 - to 00:15:308 - or something else to mix it up, let yer imagination go wild yo (Basically just make sure that beat is clickable) so i tried something out based on your suggestions. check it out and tell meh what you think of it :p
00:15:788 (3,1) - Switch NC, since the 3 is on the downbeat. done
00:17:708 (2) - DS inconsistency fixed i think

Final thoughts on Easy:
Like on the Beginner, fix the DS inconsistencies that vary by more than 0,05x (There are quite a few!), and try to fix the emphasis issue stated if you agree yup ;P i think i fixed the DS, if not poke meh so i can fix it

Normal
00:04:268 - A lot of downbeats are skipped, like this one, where it's not clickable; It adds odd flow and feels weird while playing, consider changing this and other similar ones (Seems consistent in the way you're doing it, but in some cases it throws the players off a lot more than it should) [color=80FF00]i added a circle. i don't really know if that was what you were suggesting and if i just made it worse pls tell me[/color]
00:08:108 (4) - NC for pre-measure emphasis
00:23:948 (1) - Remove NC, I don't really feel like it serves a purpose (If anything it makes the stack harder)
00:27:308 (4) - NC? Downbeat op :3 fixed all NC stuffs .3.

Final thoughts on Normal:
Some NC inconsistencies, that you should look into (There are probably more that I didn't spot), and some downbeat issues thanks! i think i fixed everything, if not then yeh the usual poke meh xD

Hard
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - The emphasis here would be slider to slider to note, since you go on the off-beat with the slider the way you're doing it now, which flows oddly imo i agree on that, fixed it cx
00:03:068 (4,1,2) - There's a weird overlap on 2 and 4, and also, the notes before 4 are overmapping imo, since they don't really follow the music all too well (Maybe a slider from 00:02:348 (1) - to 00:02:708 -, a note on 00:02:828 - (Which you have atm) agreed, done doen odnenenene c:
00:05:708 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2 is on the downbeat, and following the pattern with NC's here doesn't really fit imo added a NC on 00:06:188
00:07:388 (4) - Maybe follow the "double clap" sound and make a note on 7:388 and start the slider on 00:07:628 - ? yup, done
00:22:028 (4,5,1) - Consider giving this a turn, so the flow isn't linear. done
00:24:908 (5,6,1) - Odd transition, linear + lower spacing near the end is odd to play for a typical Hard player, consider a small change changed it up ;P no more triangle

Final thoughts on Hard gigglez, kondom, hard, gigglez: heeeheee
I feel that this diff has a few pretty messy sections that would benefit from some tiny reworks. (I explained stuff like awkward overlaps and overmapping, look into this over the entire diff and try to self-mod a few parts ) i did my best ;P thanks!

havkz's Condom
Got nothing of importance here, nice job

Final thoughts on all:
On lower diffs, fix the DS issues, and fix emphasis issues on Hard/normal, and get some more mods and you should be able to push this forward ^^ Good luck <3

thanks alot for this mod, it really helped me ;P just realised i don't think i dis-agreed on anything

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-07-28T22:04:47+00:00

DON'T GIVE KUDO FOR THIS ONE

Recheck:
- Made NC super consistent
- Fixed an extra emphasis issue (+ giving advice on normal with the emphasis, 'cause it's consistent, but doesn't really flow)
- Clearing up confusion with a few of the previous suggestions
- Added Epilepsy Warning to all diffs

Glad I could help

sexy scandi recheck :^)))

23:45 Firetruck: updated the map and responded to your mod .3. i don
23:45 Firetruck: i don't think i dis agreed on anything
23:45 Firetruck: lol
23:46 Spork Lover: Lel nice

23:46 Firetruck: xD
23:46 Firetruck: also thanks alot for the mod
23:46 Firetruck: cuz it helped me alot
23:48 Spork Lover: I'll re-check here
23:48 Spork Lover: 00:11:948 (3) -
23:48 Spork Lover: NC this on Beginner
23:48 Spork Lover: actually no
23:48 Spork Lover: 1 sec
23:48 Spork Lover: 00:04:268 (1) - Remove this one
23:48 Spork Lover: Follow every 2nd measure
23:49 Spork Lover: Yup, just 4:268 remove
23:49 Spork Lover: Is only NC inconsistency now on Beginner
23:49 Firetruck: kai kai .3
23:50 Spork Lover: On Racist's Easy, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5715550
23:50 Spork Lover: This is what I meant
23:51 Firetruck: ooooooh
23:51 Firetruck: thanks xD
23:52 Spork Lover: DS is fine on both diffs now
23:52 Spork Lover: nice fixes :3
23:52 Firetruck: ty ;3;
23:52 Firetruck: i forgot to remove the sources lol woops
23:52 Spork Lover: Happens

23:53 Firetruck: yeah xD
23:53 Spork Lover: 00:04:268 (4) - Start with a slider here instead
23:53 Spork Lover: 00:05:228 - And make THIS a singletap
23:53 Spork Lover: (On normal)
23:54 Firetruck: ooooo
23:54 Firetruck: okay
23:55 Spork Lover: 00:13:628 (4) - When you see downbeats (Big white ticks) on slider ends
23:55 Spork Lover: You should consider making it clickable for everything
23:55 Spork Lover: Unless it's part of your style
23:55 Spork Lover: If you're not aware of it, consider a change :3
23:56 Firetruck: okaii ;w;
23:56 Spork Lover: I mean making the downbeat clickable
23:56 Spork Lover: **
23:56 Spork Lover: NC's seem fine on noraml
23:56 Firetruck: woo
23:57 Spork Lover: 00:14:348 (5) - Maybe NC this but not sure
23:57 Spork Lover: 00:19:628 (4,1,3) - Remove NC on the 1, add nc on 4 and 3
23:57 Spork Lover: (I lied apparently lol)
23:57 Firetruck: xD
23:57 Spork Lover: 00:23:948 (1) - You didn't remove this NC from the suggestion
23:58 Spork Lover: :^)))
23:58 Firetruck: woops
23:58 Spork Lover: 00:00:428 (1) - There's a clap on the slider end which I feel should be on
23:58 Spork Lover: 00:00:908 -
23:59 Spork Lover: 00:01:388 (1) - And a finish that is wrong
23:59 Spork Lover: I think you forgot to redo hitsounds
23:59 Spork Lover: (Hard diff)
23:59 Spork Lover: For that little section
00:00 Spork Lover: Apart from that hard seems aight
00:00 Firetruck: ooo
00:00 Firetruck: kay kay
00:00 Firetruck: xD
00:00 Spork Lover: Also
00:00 Spork Lover: Epilepsy warning
00:00 Spork Lover: ^^
00:00 Firetruck: fml i forgot again
00:01 Spork Lover: Happens
00:01 Spork Lover:

00:01 Firetruck: xD
00:01 Spork Lover: I'll savelog and add it (DON'T GIVE KUDOSU FOR THE NEXT POST :^))

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-07-28T22:39:32+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
havkz's Condom
Got nothing of importance here, nice job

idk if it's necessary to respond but i'll do it anyway

thanks!

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2016-07-30T21:24:14+00:00

Where am I wtf?

[General]

I don't get the use of the grey-combo colour tbh but tell me , I'm interested

[Beginner Collab]

00:19:628 (4) - Be careful , your spacin' is a bit higher than it should be! (even if noone noticed that lol)
00:21:548 (5) - The transition with 00:19:628 (4) - didn't feel smooth at all because of the opposite direction of the sliders. Maybe you can change it in order to get a better flow?

[RCT's Easy]

00:03:308 (3,4) - The flow between these two objects could be better overall. Here's a lil screen which sum up my opinion (yes me) about it! :
Green should be followed and Red is the issue !
00:06:188 (3,4) - Same reason here aswell but I'm way lazy to edit a pic with my poor editin skillz
00:08:108 (1,2) - Same aswell! a beginner should be easily guided to play the map and the fact that you made these kind of transitions make it weird.
00:13:868 (5) - Usin' more than a Repeat Arrow in an Easy isn't forbidden but it's way not suggested for the reason than it can be one reason of a bad pattern readin for a beginner.
00:16:748 (3,4) - Same thing about the transition here ! Also , if you tried to blanket, it's ruined!
00:21:548 (1) - Maybe reduce the curve here? Looks not neat so far.
00:27:308 (2) - That objecct is unrankable since it touches the Lifebar

[Normal]

00:00:428 (1) - you could maybe have done a better transition here! Here's an idea! Leave it or take it~
00:02:348 (1,2) - Why are you breakin' the flow here aswell? It's another way to misread for a beginner ;~;
00:04:268 (4) - That slidershape looks rushed and unneat tbh. You should change/improve it!
00:06:668 (4) - Stackin' notes isn't suggested aswell since it'd a way of thinkin' to press the note faster and can lead to a misread from the player.
00:08:588 (2) - Same here.
00:11:948 (1) - that sliderwave could have been much better
00:14:828 (2) - Same aswell.
00:22:988 (1) - Same.

[Hard]

00:01:388 (1) - Remove the NC here , it's not needed.
00:06:188 (1) - Same here lol
00:11:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - Addin' some curves wouldn't hurt to save the flow here ;_;
00:14:348 (2) - As I mentionned before , these kind of sliderwaves feel rushed imo and they should be fixed
00:16:268 (3) - That slider is unrankable since it's overlappin the Lifebar
00:18:668 (1,2,3) - Ok so what is the use of that triple actually? It doesn't cover anything and feels overmapped right now
00:22:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here. The vocal goes ham but the stream doesn't suit for the vocal chops here.

[havkz's condom]

You should change that diffname since it contains some pegi 18 words and it'll be considered as "offensive for the community" so yeh
00:13:988 (4,5,6,7) - Same as previously mentionned , if you take a listen with 0% hs volume , you'll understand that this stream doesn't fit with the song and is considered as overmapped!
00:16:148 (2) - Same here
00:18:068 (2) - Same aswell
00:23:948 (2,3,4) - He's just sayin' "hmmm" why are you mappin a triple on that location?
00:25:748 (2) - Overmapped aswell
00:28:988 - In my opinion that beat should have been mapped since it's a strong sound and your spiner should start at 00:29:228 -

Hope any of these helped! Good luck

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-07-31T12:52:34+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
[havkz's condom]

You should change that diffname since it contains some pegi 18 words and it'll be considered as "offensive for the community" so yeh they already got warned before downloading the map so if they downloaded this they should expect that type of diff name, btw "condom" isnt a pegi 18 word
00:13:988 (4,5,6,7) - Same as previously mentionned , if you take a listen with 0% hs volume , you'll understand that this stream doesn't fit with the song and is considered as overmapped! there's a guy singing there so ill keep it. he's singing in that tempo
00:16:148 (2) - Same here ill consider this, without the bursts the map feels really empty though, so i dont know.
00:18:068 (2) - Same aswell ^
00:23:948 (2,3,4) - He's just sayin' "hmmm" why are you mappin a triple on that location? here i can agree, changed to slider
00:25:748 (2) - Overmapped aswell same as the other ones
00:28:988 - In my opinion that beat should have been mapped since it's a strong sound and your spiner should start at 00:29:228 firetruck mapped that for me when i was away lol, fixed

Thanks for modding!!!

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388,320,16712,2,0,B|284:272|284:352|172:304,1,203.999993774414,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,17432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,184,17672,6,0,B|168:200|168:200|224:240,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,18032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,18152,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,96,18392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,336,18632,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,176,18872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,232,19112,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,176,19352,6,0,B|456:144|456:144|440:128|440:128|400:112|400:112|344:136|280:88,1,203.999993774414,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,20072,2,0,L|337:242,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,20312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,20552,2,0,B|184:96|184:96|160:168,1,101.999996887207
200,264,20912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,21032,2,0,P|152:272|96:248,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,21512,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,168,21752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,120,21992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,80,22232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,22472,2,0,L|320:272,1,50.9999984436036
232,336,22712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,336,22832,2,0,L|200:272,1,50.9999984436036,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,216,23192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,80,23432,6,0,B|168:96|168:96|128:144,1,101.999996887207,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,296,23912,2,0,P|52:264|48:200,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,264,24392,2,0,B|288:248|288:248|376:248|376:248|448:224,1,203.999993774414,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,25112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,344,25352,6,0,P|320:328|248:352,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,344,25712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,336,25832,1,10,0:0:0:0:
336,144,26072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,184,26312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,337,26552,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,48,26792,1,10,0:0:0:0:
112,272,27032,6,0,B|184:232|184:232|344:216,1,203.999993774414,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,27752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,344,27992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,28232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,28472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,216,28712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,164,28952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29072,12,0,30032,0:0:0:0:

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-07-31T19:57:43+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:

Where am I wtf?

[General]

I don't get the use of the grey-combo colour tbh but tell me , I'm interested
[Beginner Collab]

00:19:628 (4) - Be careful , your spacin' is a bit higher than it should be! (even if noone noticed that lol)
00:21:548 (5) - The transition with 00:19:628 (4) - didn't feel smooth at all because of the opposite direction of the sliders. Maybe you can change it in order to get a better flow?
[RCT's Easy]

00:03:308 (3,4) - The flow between these two objects could be better overall. Here's a lil screen which sum up my opinion (yes me) about it! :
Green should be followed and Red is the issue !
00:06:188 (3,4) - Same reason here aswell but I'm way lazy to edit a pic with my poor editin skillz
00:08:108 (1,2) - Same aswell! a beginner should be easily guided to play the map and the fact that you made these kind of transitions make it weird.
00:13:868 (5) - Usin' more than a Repeat Arrow in an Easy isn't forbidden but it's way not suggested for the reason than it can be one reason of a bad pattern readin for a beginner.
00:16:748 (3,4) - Same thing about the transition here ! Also , if you tried to blanket, it's ruined!
00:21:548 (1) - Maybe reduce the curve here? Looks not neat so far.
00:27:308 (2) - That objecct is unrankable since it touches the Lifebar
[Normal]

00:00:428 (1) - you could maybe have done a better transition here! Here's an idea! Leave it or take it~
00:02:348 (1,2) - Why are you breakin' the flow here aswell? It's another way to misread for a beginner ;~;
00:04:268 (4) - That slidershape looks rushed and unneat tbh. You should change/improve it!
00:06:668 (4) - Stackin' notes isn't suggested aswell since it'd a way of thinkin' to press the note faster and can lead to a misread from the player.
00:08:588 (2) - Same here.
00:11:948 (1) - that sliderwave could have been much better
00:14:828 (2) - Same aswell.
00:22:988 (1) - Same.
[Hard]

00:01:388 (1) - Remove the NC here , it's not needed.
00:06:188 (1) - Same here lol
00:11:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - Addin' some curves wouldn't hurt to save the flow here ;_;
00:14:348 (2) - As I mentionned before , these kind of sliderwaves feel rushed imo and they should be fixed
00:16:268 (3) - That slider is unrankable since it's overlappin the Lifebar
00:18:668 (1,2,3) - Ok so what is the use of that triple actually? It doesn't cover anything and feels overmapped right now
00:22:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here. The vocal goes ham but the stream doesn't suit for the vocal chops here.
[havkz's condom]

You should change that diffname since it contains some pegi 18 words and it'll be considered as "offensive for the community" so yeh
00:13:988 (4,5,6,7) - Same as previously mentionned , if you take a listen with 0% hs volume , you'll understand that this stream doesn't fit with the song and is considered as overmapped!
00:16:148 (2) - Same here
00:18:068 (2) - Same aswell
00:23:948 (2,3,4) - He's just sayin' "hmmm" why are you mappin a triple on that location?
00:25:748 (2) - Overmapped aswell
00:28:988 - In my opinion that beat should have been mapped since it's a strong sound and your spiner should start at 00:29:228 -

Hope any of these helped! Good luck

i'm sorry i was gonna give a full detailed response but i had to go away for a day and forgot what i was gonna say. thanks for the mod! c:

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2016-08-04T10:39:00+00:00

did you fix anythin so lol?

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-04T15:11:26+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
did you fix anythin so lol?

yes i fixed almost everything lmao

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-04T17:55:17+00:00

Move to pending?

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2016-08-06T20:15:24+00:00

this map makes me flaccid

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2016-08-07T13:55:06+00:00

Tatsuyu wrote:
this map makes me flaccid

rip

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-08-09T05:55:56+00:00

havkz wrote:
Move to pending?

This doesn't make much of a difference xd, they used this ages back as far as I recall

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2016-08-10T22:32:22+00:00

Requested from queue a loooong time.

IRC Mod

2016-08-11 01:30 Cerulean Veyron: oi
2016-08-11 01:30 Cerulean Veyron: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036587 KondomVaruhuset - Kondom.se]
2016-08-11 01:30 Cerulean Veyron: do u no wat im gonna do with dis map
2016-08-11 01:33 Firetruck: oo
2016-08-11 01:33 Firetruck: wat
2016-08-11 01:33 Cerulean Veyron: DO u NO wat IM gonna DO with IT
2016-08-11 01:33 Firetruck: tell me would u :')
2016-08-11 01:33 Cerulean Veyron: hmmm yeah (gone sexual)
2016-08-11 01:34 Cerulean Veyron: im gonna mod it
2016-08-11 01:34 Firetruck: oooo
2016-08-11 01:34 Firetruck: ty ty :^)
2016-08-11 01:34 Cerulean Veyron: IRC mod is okay?
2016-08-11 01:34 Firetruck: yes
2016-08-11 01:34 Cerulean Veyron: cuz it's faster xddd
2016-08-11 01:34 Firetruck: it's okay ;P
2016-08-11 01:35 Firetruck: xD
2016-08-11 01:35 Cerulean Veyron: I'll mod Nomal and hard k
2016-08-11 01:35 Firetruck: yep
2016-08-11 01:35 Cerulean Veyron: okay first...
2016-08-11 01:36 Cerulean Veyron: were you using some video before?
2016-08-11 01:36 Firetruck: yeah
2016-08-11 01:36 Firetruck: people told me to delete it in order for it to get ranked xd
2016-08-11 01:36 Cerulean Veyron: Oh, no wonder there's an error popped up
2016-08-11 01:36 Cerulean Veyron: Even though you don't have the video
2016-08-11 01:36 Firetruck: oh
2016-08-11 01:37 Cerulean Veyron: I think you should go on the diffs' .osu and remove [http://puu.sh/qwMnN/53822473a9.png this]
2016-08-11 01:38 Cerulean Veyron: Try on other difficulties, there might be one too
2016-08-11 01:39 Firetruck: done
2016-08-11 01:39 Firetruck: fixed every diff
2016-08-11 01:39 Firetruck: xD
2016-08-11 01:39 Cerulean Veyron: Oooookay
2016-08-11 01:39 Cerulean Veyron: Well, speaking about hitsounding
2016-08-11 01:40 Cerulean Veyron: Rhythm is okay, but it SOUNDS weird
2016-08-11 01:40 Firetruck: rip
2016-08-11 01:40 Cerulean Veyron: Do you add claps on percussion or sth else?
2016-08-11 01:40 Firetruck: my friend did the hitsounding for me so i have no idea
2016-08-11 01:41 Cerulean Veyron: Alright
2016-08-11 01:41 Firetruck: ;P
2016-08-11 01:42 Cerulean Veyron: 00:12:908 (2,3,4,5) - this shouldn't be implemented xddd
2016-08-11 01:42 Cerulean Veyron: and besides, it ruined some pattern consistency
2016-08-11 01:43 Firetruck: http://prntscr.com/c45fgw is this better?
2016-08-11 01:43 Cerulean Veyron: Looks okay, but the rhythm is odd on this part
2016-08-11 01:44 Cerulean Veyron: try sth like 00:20:588 (3,4,1) - 
2016-08-11 01:44 Firetruck: kay kay c:
2016-08-11 01:45 Cerulean Veyron: I'm tired of hearing "kondom kondom"
2016-08-11 01:45 Cerulean Veyron: So I'm gonna mod with 0% music volume
2016-08-11 01:45 Firetruck: LOL
2016-08-11 01:45 Firetruck: got it
2016-08-11 01:46 Cerulean Veyron: 00:21:548 (1,2) - this should be a possible curve
2016-08-11 01:46 Cerulean Veyron: more like, a blanket i guess
2016-08-11 01:47 Cerulean Veyron: not covering circle (1), but flowing down towards the next slider
2016-08-11 01:47 Firetruck: yup
2016-08-11 01:47 Firetruck: fixed it c:
2016-08-11 01:48 Cerulean Veyron: [http://puu.sh/qwN48/13166f2db7.jpg this?]
2016-08-11 01:48 Firetruck: yup
2016-08-11 01:48 Firetruck: xD
2016-08-11 01:48 Cerulean Veyron: k
2016-08-11 01:49 Cerulean Veyron: oh, there's a spinner... need music
2016-08-11 01:49 Cerulean Veyron: fml
2016-08-11 01:49 Firetruck: rip
2016-08-11 01:49 Cerulean Veyron: %5 volume yey, anyway
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: xD
2016-08-11 01:50 Cerulean Veyron: why ending up a spinner on the emptiness?
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: cuz if i end it where it should end
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: it gets to 29 seconds
2016-08-11 01:50 Cerulean Veyron: for the minimum rankable draining time?
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: yeah
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: thta
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: that
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: xD
2016-08-11 01:50 Cerulean Veyron: i knew it
2016-08-11 01:50 Firetruck: gg
2016-08-11 01:51 Cerulean Veyron: and one thing for normal
2016-08-11 01:52 Firetruck: yeh
2016-08-11 01:52 Cerulean Veyron: [http://puu.sh/qwNje/e74c3b98cd.jpg for aesthetics]
2016-08-11 01:52 Cerulean Veyron: 00:17:708 (1,2) - 
2016-08-11 01:53 Cerulean Veyron: if you want anyways ;p
2016-08-11 01:53 Firetruck: it looks better
2016-08-11 01:53 Cerulean Veyron: if so, be careful with 0.8x spacing
2016-08-11 01:53 Firetruck: fixed that lol
2016-08-11 01:53 Cerulean Veyron: okay
2016-08-11 01:53 Firetruck: yeah
2016-08-11 01:53 Cerulean Veyron: onto Hard diff
2016-08-11 01:54 Firetruck: yup
2016-08-11 01:55 Cerulean Veyron: 00:03:788 (1,1) - What are these NC spam?!?!?!?
2016-08-11 01:55 Cerulean Veyron: HP is 5, why add more NC?
2016-08-11 01:55 Cerulean Veyron: Also, the patterning is reaaaallly out of bound
2016-08-11 01:56 Cerulean Veyron: maybe spacing too
2016-08-11 01:56 Firetruck: idk xD fixed anyways
2016-08-11 01:56 Firetruck: oh rip
2016-08-11 01:56 Cerulean Veyron: remove the NCs and add one on 00:04:268 (2) - 
2016-08-11 01:56 Cerulean Veyron: Let me find the best placement for spacing and pattern
2016-08-11 01:57 Firetruck: kay kay ;p
2016-08-11 01:57 Cerulean Veyron: x:351|y:37
2016-08-11 01:58 Cerulean Veyron: [http://puu.sh/qwNHu/a6a50967d5.jpg with a perfect balance of 1.35x spacing]
2016-08-11 01:59 Firetruck: which notes
2016-08-11 01:59 Cerulean Veyron: 00:04:268 (2) - 
2016-08-11 02:01 Cerulean Veyron: fix or sth?
2016-08-11 02:01 Firetruck: fix
2016-08-11 02:01 Firetruck: :')
2016-08-11 02:01 Cerulean Veyron: okaayy
2016-08-11 02:02 Firetruck: nvm im dumn
2016-08-11 02:02 Firetruck: dumb
2016-08-11 02:02 Firetruck: lol
2016-08-11 02:02 Cerulean Veyron: I just noticed 00:03:068 (3) - the white tick on the middle of the slider has a potential tense beat
2016-08-11 02:02 Cerulean Veyron: ignoring it is a pretty bad idea
2016-08-11 02:03 Firetruck: o i'll fix that
2016-08-11 02:03 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-11 02:04 Cerulean Veyron: use [http://puu.sh/qwO3g/1403184d03.jpg this] rhythm
2016-08-11 02:04 Cerulean Veyron: I recommend it
2016-08-11 02:05 Firetruck: wait where
2016-08-11 02:05 Firetruck: lol
2016-08-11 02:06 Cerulean Veyron: ACTION facepalms
2016-08-11 02:06 Firetruck: oh
2016-08-11 02:06 Firetruck: nvm
2016-08-11 02:06 Firetruck: nvm
2016-08-11 02:06 Cerulean Veyron: 00:03:068 (3) -  00:03:068 (3) - 00:03:068 (3) - 00:03:068 (3) - 00:03:068 (3) - 00:03:068 (3) - 
2016-08-11 02:06 Firetruck: nvm
2016-08-11 02:06 Firetruck: nvm
2016-08-11 02:06 Firetruck: xD
2016-08-11 02:07 Cerulean Veyron: 00:09:788 (3,4) - Ctrl+G this
2016-08-11 02:07 Cerulean Veyron: the downbeat on slidertail is ridiculous on a longer white it
2016-08-11 02:07 Cerulean Veyron: tick*\
2016-08-11 02:08 Cerulean Veyron: and on the other hand, spacing is too close
2016-08-11 02:08 Firetruck: i just saw that
2016-08-11 02:08 Firetruck: fixed the downbeat thing and spacing
2016-08-11 02:08 Firetruck: ;p
2016-08-11 02:08 Cerulean Veyron: okay
2016-08-11 02:09 Cerulean Veyron: A question...
2016-08-11 02:09 Firetruck: yep
2016-08-11 02:09 Cerulean Veyron: What DS are you using?
2016-08-11 02:09 Firetruck: 1.2
2016-08-11 02:10 Cerulean Veyron: Like, the default spacing for this diff? still 1.2x?
2016-08-11 02:10 Firetruck: yeah
2016-08-11 02:10 Cerulean Veyron: so why are these 00:12:428 (2,3,4) -  like 1.3x or 1.4x?
2016-08-11 02:11 Cerulean Veyron: pretty inbalance
2016-08-11 02:11 Firetruck: i fixed them
2016-08-11 02:11 Cerulean Veyron: o I can do some aesthetics here
2016-08-11 02:11 Firetruck: oo
2016-08-11 02:12 Cerulean Veyron: http://puu.sh/qwOAy/c45c8d3e57.jpg
2016-08-11 02:13 Cerulean Veyron: 1.2x spacing
2016-08-11 02:13 Firetruck: looks good c:
2016-08-11 02:14 Cerulean Veyron: 00:13:868 (1,2) - also here i can do sth
2016-08-11 02:15 Firetruck: okay c:
2016-08-11 02:15 Cerulean Veyron: maybe [http://puu.sh/qwOJU/f1923047a3.jpg this] should do
2016-08-11 02:15 Cerulean Veyron: after you did the previous
2016-08-11 02:15 Cerulean Veyron: just Ctrl + G the (2) slider
2016-08-11 02:16 Firetruck: done
2016-08-11 02:16 Cerulean Veyron: ok cool
2016-08-11 02:17 Cerulean Veyron: 00:21:308 (2,3) - Ctrl + G the rhythm here too
2016-08-11 02:17 Cerulean Veyron: it'd do the best thing in ur life
2016-08-11 02:18 Firetruck: done
2016-08-11 02:18 Cerulean Veyron: Oh and also, 00:20:828 (1) - remove nc and add on 00:21:549 (3) - 
2016-08-11 02:18 Cerulean Veyron: don't forget the spacing k
2016-08-11 02:19 Firetruck: #neverforgetthespacing
2016-08-11 02:19 Firetruck: and don
2016-08-11 02:19 Firetruck: e
2016-08-11 02:19 Cerulean Veyron: 00:26:588 (1,2,3) - the same thing since the first mod, spacinggggg
2016-08-11 02:19 Cerulean Veyron: spacing pls
2016-08-11 02:19 Cerulean Veyron: SPACING
2016-08-11 02:20 Firetruck: XD
2016-08-11 02:20 Firetruck: fixed
2016-08-11 02:20 Firetruck: i didn't care about spacing when i did this, idk why i was dumb c:
2016-08-11 02:20 Cerulean Veyron: http://puu.sh/qwP44/82130ca0e5.jpg
2016-08-11 02:20 Cerulean Veyron: x:349|y:190
2016-08-11 02:21 Firetruck: yup
2016-08-11 02:21 Firetruck: done
2016-08-11 02:21 Cerulean Veyron: okaaaaayyyy
2016-08-11 02:21 Cerulean Veyron: onto conclusion
2016-08-11 02:22 Cerulean Veyron: you still need some rework on spacing consistency and patterning
2016-08-11 02:22 Cerulean Veyron: more like, it's not ready for BN yet
2016-08-11 02:22 Firetruck: the spacing should be good now
2016-08-11 02:22 Firetruck: i'll look more into da patterning c:
2016-08-11 02:23 Cerulean Veyron: some rhythm was good, and i pointed out the odd ones
2016-08-11 02:23 Cerulean Veyron: idk there might be more i didn't see
2016-08-11 02:23 Firetruck: ahh
2016-08-11 02:23 Firetruck: ty
2016-08-11 02:23 Cerulean Veyron: oh now i found one
2016-08-11 02:24 Cerulean Veyron: 00:26:588 (1,2,3) - is totally different than 00:03:788 (1,2,1) - 
2016-08-11 02:25 Cerulean Veyron: the last is at good timing, and the first one is a bit early
2016-08-11 02:25 Cerulean Veyron: that's rhythm consistency
2016-08-11 02:26 Firetruck: i'll fix that c:
2016-08-11 02:26 Cerulean Veyron: Well, as a former BN. You should still keep finding mods
2016-08-11 02:26 Cerulean Veyron: especially for patterning and stuffs I just said
2016-08-11 02:27 Cerulean Veyron: annnnd.... maybe that's all :D
2016-08-11 02:27 Firetruck: kay ;D
2016-08-11 02:27 Firetruck: thanks

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-11T16:15:00+00:00

This is my 200th post and I'm proud of it!

Ashton

Ashton 2016-08-12T22:50:50+00:00

uhh k what is this? Well ok whatever

nm from my fricking q

[havks condom?]
00:02:348 (1,2,3) - the double at the end seems a little to squished, sperate them a bit more like you did with the ones before and after it
00:23:468 (1,2) - blanket these
00:29:108 (1) - this spinner should end at the same time the other diffs do

[Hard]
00:15:788 (1,2,3,4) - I'm a little worried about this, it's a bit hard to read for a Hard

[Normal]
00:21:548 (1,2) - this blanket can be improved

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-13T01:05:14+00:00

Whirl wrote:
uhh k what is this? Well ok whatever

nm from my fricking q

[Hard]
00:15:788 (1,2,3,4) - I'm a little worried about this, it's a bit hard to read for a Hard nahhh it's fine i've gotten alot of testplays lol

[Normal]
00:21:548 (1,2) - this blanket can be improved

fixed c:

thx lmao

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-13T09:31:57+00:00

Whirl wrote:
[havks condom?]
00:02:348 (1,2,3) - the double at the end seems a little to squished, sperate them a bit more like you did with the ones before and after it fixed
00:23:468 (1,2) - blanket these i blanketed with (3) instead
00:29:108 (1) - this spinner should end at the same time the other diffs do fixed

Thanks for modding!!!

code

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15548
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Artist:KondomVaruhuset
ArtistUnicode:KondomVaruhuset
Creator:Firetruck
Version:havkz's Condom
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CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7.4
ApproachRate:8.5
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SliderTickRate:1

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Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-08-13T19:35:07+00:00

htat shITS KINKY

general thing

BG size = check
30 second length drain minimum = check although i cant help but feel like the spinner should end 00:28:988 - lmao but you made it this far! keep going!

beginner collab

00:12:908 - i feel like this dropped beat is too inconsistent with everything before it, earlier this was a mapped beat
not much to say here good diff

RCTease me

00:07:148 (4,1) - both of these pseudo blanket 00:09:068 (2) - which might have been intentional but if it wasn't just pointing that out
00:13:868 (5,2) - awkward looking stack no? its the only stack in the map i dont really have anything else to say here tho, good diff

normal

00:21:548 (1,2) - pseudo blanket
i dont have anything to say for any of these apparently lol these are all good flow

hard

00:10:508 (1) - this note is a bit strange for me mainly since i feel like the beat drops out at 00:10:508 - but his voice isn't echoed in that high pitch noise until 00:10:868 - . if thats what was being emphasized then i suggest changing the pattern of notes a bit, possibly a 3 or 4 note stack, fourth being the slider / a single followed by a double, the second being the slider until 00:11:708 - ? tbh this is an awkward one not sure what i should suggest here

havkz Trojan Magnum XL

this map has really distinguishable flow and i like it
00:13:628 (3,4,5,6,7) - imperfect blanket if thats what you were going for, try reversing the slider and placing the notes on the edge of the approach circle
00:27:068 (1) - remove NC
00:27:788 (2) - add NC
00:27:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays with incredibly circular flow, i sugggest a flow reverse between 00:28:268 (4,5) - ctrl g

obligatory meme

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-13T20:25:45+00:00

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
htat shITS KINKY

general thing
BG size = check
30 second length drain minimum = check although i cant help but feel like the spinner should end 00:28:988 - lmao but you made it this far! keep going!
yeah ima fight for that spinner

beginner collab
00:12:908 - i feel like this dropped beat is too inconsistent with everything before it, earlier this was a mapped beat
not much to say here good diff added a note
RCTease me
00:07:148 (4,1) - both of these pseudo blanket 00:09:068 (2) - which might have been intentional but if it wasn't just pointing that out
00:13:868 (5,2) - awkward looking stack no? its the only stack in the map i dont really have anything else to say here tho, good diff fixed all here
normal
00:21:548 (1,2) - pseudo blanket yesu
i dont have anything to say for any of these apparently lol these are all good flow
hard
00:10:508 (1) - this note is a bit strange for me mainly since i feel like the beat drops out at 00:10:508 - but his voice isn't echoed in that high pitch noise until 00:10:868 - . if thats what was being emphasized then i suggest changing the pattern of notes a bit, possibly a 3 or 4 note stack, fourth being the slider / a single followed by a double, the second being the slider until 00:11:708 - ? tbh this is an awkward one not sure what i should suggest here instead of doing that, i ended it at 00:11:708 - and it sounds alot better, imo

obligatory meme

memes :')

thx for da mod c:

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-14T09:41:58+00:00

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
havkz Trojan Magnum XL
this map has really distinguishable flow and i like it :D
00:13:628 (3,4,5,6,7) - imperfect blanket if thats what you were going for, try reversing the slider and placing the notes on the edge of the approach circle i dont want a blanket x)
00:27:068 (1) - remove NC fix!!!
00:27:788 (2) - add NC fix!!!
00:27:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays with incredibly circular flow, i sugggest a flow reverse between 00:28:268 (4,5) - ctrl g sure

Thanks for modding!!!

code

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 15548
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:Kondom.se
Artist:KondomVaruhuset
ArtistUnicode:KondomVaruhuset
Creator:Firetruck
Version:havkz's Condom
Source:
Tags:Kondom swedish svenska Racist Reklam Ad havkz commercial condom
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240,56,28508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,216,28748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,164,28988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,29108,12,0,31148,0:0:0:0:

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2016-08-17T01:11:16+00:00

Hi ! From my modding Q><

[hard]
00:04:748 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe the triangle is a little unaccurate? Plz recheck it again>< and 6 is too near 5 compared with 2345 ,put them away
00:15:068 - there is a hit in the vocal , you'd better make it clickable
00:15:548 - ^
00:23:228 - ^

GL!

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-17T13:41:16+00:00

kanor wrote:
Hi ! From my modding Q><

[hard]
00:04:748 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe the triangle is a little unaccurate? Plz recheck it again>< and 6 is too near 5 compared with 2345 ,put them away fixed the triangle with ds and made it smaller instead
00:15:068 - there is a hit in the vocal , you'd better make it clickable
00:15:548 - ^ i'll keep those two as they are
00:23:228 - ^ added a note

GL!

thx for modding ;w;

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2016-08-17T18:29:42+00:00

Firetruck wrote:
memes :')

No wonder why you can't find a BN orz

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-08-19T12:07:09+00:00

i dont even know what this is anymore kondom memes

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-19T14:24:06+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
i dont even know what this is anymore kondom memes

yes

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-08-19T14:28:48+00:00

literally another pp map firetruck -_ -

Firetruck

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Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-19T15:34:32+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
literally another pp map firetruck -_ -

:^)

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2016-08-19T17:25:12+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
literally another pp map firetruck -_ -

GET IT LIFTED

Firetruck

1,011 posts

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Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-19T17:39:20+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
Mazziv wrote:
literally another pp map firetruck -_ -
GET IT LIFTED

duun duun duun duun dadadad duun duuun duun duun

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-08-26T20:55:44+00:00

hi

IRC Mod with Firetruck

2016-08-26 10:46 Firetruck: hii ;o do you have some time to check out a small mapset of mine? 31 sec map ;w;
2016-08-26 10:47 Ayyri: Can you give me a bit?
2016-08-26 10:47 Ayyri: I want to finish what I'm working on at the moment.
2016-08-26 10:47 Firetruck: oh no worries ^^
2016-08-26 10:47 Ayyri: Otherwise, I'd be more than happy to.
2016-08-26 10:47 Firetruck: take your time ;3;
2016-08-26 10:47 Firetruck: thank you c:
2016-08-26 10:48 Ayyri: Aw, thank you! And no problem. :D
2016-08-26 10:49 Firetruck: ;D
2016-08-26 11:50 Ayyri: Hello there!
2016-08-26 11:51 Firetruck: hello c:::
2016-08-26 11:52 Ayyri: I should be free in a bit to look at your map. I finished applying a mod, and am just waiting for someone to test the difficulty. :D
2016-08-26 11:52 Firetruck: thanks :D
2016-08-26 11:52 Firetruck: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se]
2016-08-26 11:52 Firetruck: here's the map :p
2016-08-26 11:53 Ayyri: Aight.
2016-08-26 11:53 Firetruck: RCT stopped playing osu btw, so i'll take over his diff ;P
2016-08-26 11:53 Ayyri: I'll download it.
2016-08-26 11:53 Ayyri: Sure.
2016-08-26 11:54 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-26 12:09 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036585 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [Beginner Collab]]
2016-08-26 12:11 Ayyri: So
2016-08-26 12:11 Ayyri: I honestly don't really like the difficulty itself.
2016-08-26 12:12 Ayyri: Because the BPM is relatively low, then with the default slider velocity being set at 0.50x, that makes the sliders go /extremely/ slow.
2016-08-26 12:12 Ayyri: Which overall, makes it feel like nothing is really happening in the map. 
2016-08-26 12:13 Firetruck: It was more directed at new players, like first time playing osu-players c:
2016-08-26 12:19 Ayyri: Understandable.
2016-08-26 12:21 Firetruck: ;P
2016-08-26 12:25 Ayyri: Okay, sorry.
2016-08-26 12:26 Ayyri: My bad, I had to check something. ;;
2016-08-26 12:26 Firetruck: No worries :')
2016-08-26 12:26 Ayyri: Did you want me to look at the GDs too?
2016-08-26 12:27 Firetruck: Yeah, i'd love to cx
2016-08-26 12:27 Firetruck: That would be really nice
2016-08-26 12:27 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036588 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [RCT's Easy]]
2016-08-26 12:28 Ayyri: 00:04:268 - This blanket could be improved
2016-08-26 12:28 Ayyri: 00:08:588 - Finish sounds rather abrupt here
2016-08-26 12:29 Ayyri: Consider ~50% volume for all difficulties
2016-08-26 12:29 Firetruck: Fixed^^
2016-08-26 12:29 Firetruck: Okay c:
2016-08-26 12:30 Ayyri: 00:13:868 - I do not suggest using double reverse sliders.
2016-08-26 12:30 Ayyri: They don't really flow well overall, and could confuse a new player.
2016-08-26 12:31 Ayyri: Also the rhythm there doesn't really call for a double reverse slider.
2016-08-26 12:31 Ayyri: Sounds off imo.
2016-08-26 12:31 Firetruck: Hm, okay c: i'll fix that up
2016-08-26 12:32 Ayyri: Possibly, you could do a reverse slider at 00:13:868 - and a circle at 00:15:308 - to emphasize the finish at 00:15:308 - 
2016-08-26 12:32 Ayyri: Depends on what you want to emphasize / place things.
2016-08-26 12:32 Firetruck: Sure, that sounds better actually
2016-08-26 12:35 Ayyri: Aight.
2016-08-26 12:36 Ayyri: 00:27:788 - 
2016-08-26 12:36 Ayyri: This spinner feels really weirdly placed.
2016-08-26 12:37 Firetruck: Do you have any suggestion on where i can start it? c:
2016-08-26 12:38 Ayyri: Honestly,
2016-08-26 12:38 Ayyri: I don't really think a spinner is needed.
2016-08-26 12:38 Ayyri: It's not following anything other than the beginning of the lyrics, then some silence.
2016-08-26 12:38 Firetruck: The thing is, if i don't have the spinner in the map will get unrankable
2016-08-26 12:38 Firetruck: cuz of length
2016-08-26 12:39 Firetruck: i've talked to alot of bns about the spinner issue, but it should be fine.
2016-08-26 12:39 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-26 12:39 Ayyri: Understandable.
2016-08-26 12:39 Ayyri: Length wise, doing that is fine.
2016-08-26 12:39 Ayyri: Especially if other BNs have confirmed it.
2016-08-26 12:40 Firetruck: yeah c:
2016-08-26 12:41 Ayyri: From 00:26:348 - to 00:30:908 - (Or where you want it to end.) Try something like this: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/h4LxYGM.png
2016-08-26 12:41 Ayyri: Cursor is at 00:27:548 - 
2016-08-26 12:42 Firetruck: Kaykay, looks good c:
2016-08-26 12:43 Ayyri: Just remember to apply the things about hitsounds and the ending to the other difficulties.
2016-08-26 12:43 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036587 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [Normal]]
2016-08-26 12:44 Firetruck: Got it c:
2016-08-26 12:50 Ayyri: 00:00:428 - 
2016-08-26 12:50 Ayyri: Aren't you missing a finish here?
2016-08-26 12:51 Firetruck: oh yeah, you're right ;o added one
2016-08-26 12:52 Ayyri: 00:05:708 - Missing a clap
2016-08-26 12:52 Firetruck: added c:
2016-08-26 12:53 Ayyri: 00:06:188 - and 00:06:668 - I don't really suggest stacking in lower difficulties, unless it's necessary for readbility.
2016-08-26 12:54 Firetruck: I did stacking on normal since i want to introduce the players to something common in the higher diffs, but not on easy. But if you recommend to remove it, i'll do it ;p
2016-08-26 12:55 Ayyri: Depends on you, tbh.
2016-08-26 12:55 Firetruck: It's not an unrankable issue, right?
2016-08-26 12:56 Ayyri: It just bothers me because they're using a 1/1 rhythm
2016-08-26 12:56 Ayyri: No.
2016-08-26 12:56 Firetruck: Ahhh okay, i see
2016-08-26 12:56 Firetruck: Good ;p
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: Oh yeah.
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: 00:08:108 - and 00:08:588 - Same thing here, depending if you agreed or not.
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: And any other overlap. xd
2016-08-26 13:01 Firetruck: xD kay
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: 00:12:908 - 
2016-08-26 13:01 Firetruck: i'll see what i can do
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: These 1/2 sliders don't really feel like they fit the rhythm here.
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: Rather, they feel forced.
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: I think just having 00:12:908 - as a reverse slider would work fine.
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: It would also match with the rhythm you used at 00:06:668 - 
2016-08-26 13:03 Firetruck: Sure, that looks good c:
2016-08-26 13:04 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036586 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [Hard]]
2016-08-26 13:05 Ayyri: 00:01:388 - Remove finish
2016-08-26 13:05 Ayyri: Doesn't really fit here with the bell.
2016-08-26 13:05 Ayyri: (Whistle)
2016-08-26 13:05 Firetruck: kay kay c:
2016-08-26 13:09 Ayyri: 00:00:668 - Change to whistle
2016-08-26 13:09 Ayyri: 00:07:388 - and 00:07:628 - Clap
2016-08-26 13:09 Ayyri: There's pretty clear claps in the background during this transition
2016-08-26 13:09 Firetruck: done c:
2016-08-26 13:10 Firetruck: yeah, you're right
2016-08-26 13:11 Ayyri: 00:10:508 - 
2016-08-26 13:11 Ayyri: Having this slower slider start here feels rather sudden, and doesn't follow the rhythm all too well.
2016-08-26 13:11 Ayyri: It should be moved and shortened so it begins at 00:10:988 - but still ends at 00:11:468 - 
2016-08-26 13:12 Ayyri: At 00:10:508 - you could just a circle, then two more circles at 00:10:748 - and 00:10:868 - which could be stacked onto the slider at 00:10:988 - 
2016-08-26 13:14 Firetruck: sure ;o sounds goosd
2016-08-26 13:14 Firetruck: good
2016-08-26 13:16 Ayyri: Just remember that the NC should stay on 00:10:988 - 
2016-08-26 13:17 Firetruck: yup ^^
2016-08-26 13:17 Ayyri: And the inherited timing point (green line) at 00:10:508 - should be moved to 00:10:988 - too
2016-08-26 13:18 Ayyri: 00:14:348 - and 00:15:308 - These two should have wider spacing than the patterns beforehand.
2016-08-26 13:18 Ayyri: Considering they're on 1/1 ticks, yet they're spaced closer than 1/2 patterns.
2016-08-26 13:19 Firetruck: ahhh, i'll fix that c:
2016-08-26 13:20 Ayyri: 00:22:628 - Imo, this circle doesn't really seem like it's following anything. The stream itself just seems a bit forced. I'd suggest just having a circle at 00:22:508 - so you can emphasize the claps with a triplet at 00:22:748 - 
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: 00:23:948 - Clap 00:24:428 - Whistle 00:24:908 - Clap
2016-08-26 13:21 Firetruck: You're right ;o fixed :)
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: You just like stopped hitsounding when this kiai started. lmao
2016-08-26 13:21 Firetruck: xD rip
2016-08-26 13:21 Firetruck: added
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: 00:25:388 - Whistle
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: 00:25:868 - Clap
2016-08-26 13:22 Ayyri: 00:26:348 - Whistle
2016-08-26 13:22 Firetruck: done^
2016-08-26 13:23 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [havkz's Condom]]
2016-08-26 13:24 Firetruck: Could you take this diff with havkz? he's on right now ;P
2016-08-26 13:24 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-26 13:24 Ayyri: Sure.
2016-08-26 13:24 Firetruck: Thanks c:
2016-08-26 13:25 Ayyri: No problem.
2016-08-26 13:27 Ayyri: Btw,
2016-08-26 13:27 Ayyri: Epilepsy warning doesn't need to be enabled.
2016-08-26 13:27 Firetruck: Oh yeah, i used to have a video lol
2016-08-26 13:27 Firetruck: i'll delete that
2016-08-26 13:28 Firetruck: Should i disable widescreen support thingy as well?
2016-08-26 13:29 Ayyri: That can be disabled too.

IRC Mod with havkz

2016-08-26 13:24 Ayyri: yo
2016-08-26 13:24 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [havkz's Condom]]
2016-08-26 13:25 havkz: oh
2016-08-26 13:25 havkz: ok :D
2016-08-26 13:26 havkz: ready?
2016-08-26 13:26 Ayyri: Yeah
2016-08-26 13:27 Ayyri: Epilepsy warning doesn't need to be enabled btw
2016-08-26 13:27 havkz: yeah i thought so
2016-08-26 13:28 Ayyri: 00:01:388 - and 00:01:748 - I'd suggest moving these a bit closer, just so it doesn't get read as a 1/2 rhythm, rather than a 1/4 rhythm.
2016-08-26 13:28 havkz: sure
2016-08-26 13:29 Ayyri: I just told Firetruck, but widescreen support doesn't need to be enabled either.
2016-08-26 13:30 Ayyri: 00:03:068 - / 00:03:308 - / 00:03:548 - / 00:03:788 - / 00:04:028 - This is a pretty big jump for the calmness of the song tbh.
2016-08-26 13:30 Ayyri: The pattern can stay the same, just make the jump smaller.
2016-08-26 13:31 havkz: i see
2016-08-26 13:31 havkz: i gues youre right
2016-08-26 13:32 havkz: but the big spacing is meant to symbolize the loud claps
2016-08-26 13:33 Ayyri: Yeah
2016-08-26 13:33 Ayyri: But there would still be a jump
2016-08-26 13:33 Ayyri: Just a bit smaller, and not a difficulty spike from everything else.
2016-08-26 13:34 havkz: fixed
2016-08-26 13:37 Ayyri: 00:04:748 - and 00:04:988 - Same thing that I mentioned for 00:01:388 - 
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: so you think (3) is too far away?
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: Yeah.
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: 00:10:988 - NC due to the change in SV here.
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: alright
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: i made a small overlap with (2)
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: Aight.
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: Keep the NC at 00:11:948 - though
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: i dont know if its a good idea to have two nc's at the same time
2016-08-26 13:39 Ayyri: That's what you're supposed to do. :p
2016-08-26 13:39 havkz: i talked a bit with firetruck and we decided to do it :p
2016-08-26 13:39 Ayyri: 00:12:908 - and 00:13:268 - Same thing as 00:01:388 - .
2016-08-26 13:40 Ayyri: Alright.
2016-08-26 13:40 Ayyri: 00:15:788 - Same spacing issue here too. ;w;
2016-08-26 13:40 havkz: fixed
2016-08-26 13:40 Ayyri: 00:17:948 - Same. ;;
2016-08-26 13:40 havkz: (2,3) or (4) ?
2016-08-26 13:41 havkz: alright fixed them
2016-08-26 13:41 Ayyri: The slider in relation to the circles after it.
2016-08-26 13:41 Ayyri: 00:18:428 - Already mentioned this type of a big jump in the beginning. (Just nerf it a bit.)
2016-08-26 13:41 Ayyri: Especially between 00:18:908 - and 00:19:148 - 
2016-08-26 13:42 havkz: ok ;-;
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: 00:20:108 - and 00:20:348 - Spacing.
2016-08-26 13:42 havkz: rip pp
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: That jump is a lot bigger than before. ;w;
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: aaaaaaaaaaaaa
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: I feel like the more I go the more badly spaced jumps there are @_@
2016-08-26 13:43 havkz: lol i didnt really think of the spacings
2016-08-26 13:43 Ayyri: Oh
2016-08-26 13:43 havkz: i put it that spaced because blanket xd
2016-08-26 13:43 Ayyri: 00:25:388 - Mentioned this in the first kiai. ;;
2016-08-26 13:43 havkz: but i can fix it no problem
2016-08-26 13:44 Ayyri: Also talk to Firetruck about the end of the map (The spinner) since the end of it might have changed since I talked to him about that.
2016-08-26 13:44 havkz: fixed
2016-08-26 13:45 havkz: many bn's have said that its fine with the spinner thing, so i guess it is
2016-08-26 13:47 Ayyri: No, no.
2016-08-26 13:47 Ayyri: I already talked to him about that.
2016-08-26 13:47 Ayyri: Just that where it ends might have changed, is what I said.
2016-08-26 13:48 havkz: alright

Good luck!

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-26T20:56:13+00:00

Ayyri wrote:

hi

IRC Mod with Firetruck

2016-08-26 10:46 Firetruck: hii ;o do you have some time to check out a small mapset of mine? 31 sec map ;w;
2016-08-26 10:47 Ayyri: Can you give me a bit?
2016-08-26 10:47 Ayyri: I want to finish what I'm working on at the moment.
2016-08-26 10:47 Firetruck: oh no worries ^^
2016-08-26 10:47 Ayyri: Otherwise, I'd be more than happy to.
2016-08-26 10:47 Firetruck: take your time ;3;
2016-08-26 10:47 Firetruck: thank you c:
2016-08-26 10:48 Ayyri: Aw, thank you! And no problem. :D
2016-08-26 10:49 Firetruck: ;D
2016-08-26 11:50 Ayyri: Hello there!
2016-08-26 11:51 Firetruck: hello c:::
2016-08-26 11:52 Ayyri: I should be free in a bit to look at your map. I finished applying a mod, and am just waiting for someone to test the difficulty. :D
2016-08-26 11:52 Firetruck: thanks :D
2016-08-26 11:52 Firetruck: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se]
2016-08-26 11:52 Firetruck: here's the map :p
2016-08-26 11:53 Ayyri: Aight.
2016-08-26 11:53 Firetruck: RCT stopped playing osu btw, so i'll take over his diff ;P
2016-08-26 11:53 Ayyri: I'll download it.
2016-08-26 11:53 Ayyri: Sure.
2016-08-26 11:54 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-26 12:09 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036585 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [Beginner Collab]]
2016-08-26 12:11 Ayyri: So
2016-08-26 12:11 Ayyri: I honestly don't really like the difficulty itself.
2016-08-26 12:12 Ayyri: Because the BPM is relatively low, then with the default slider velocity being set at 0.50x, that makes the sliders go /extremely/ slow.
2016-08-26 12:12 Ayyri: Which overall, makes it feel like nothing is really happening in the map. 
2016-08-26 12:13 Firetruck: It was more directed at new players, like first time playing osu-players c:
2016-08-26 12:19 Ayyri: Understandable.
2016-08-26 12:21 Firetruck: ;P
2016-08-26 12:25 Ayyri: Okay, sorry.
2016-08-26 12:26 Ayyri: My bad, I had to check something. ;;
2016-08-26 12:26 Firetruck: No worries :')
2016-08-26 12:26 Ayyri: Did you want me to look at the GDs too?
2016-08-26 12:27 Firetruck: Yeah, i'd love to cx
2016-08-26 12:27 Firetruck: That would be really nice
2016-08-26 12:27 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036588 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [RCT's Easy]]
2016-08-26 12:28 Ayyri: 00:04:268 - This blanket could be improved
2016-08-26 12:28 Ayyri: 00:08:588 - Finish sounds rather abrupt here
2016-08-26 12:29 Ayyri: Consider ~50% volume for all difficulties
2016-08-26 12:29 Firetruck: Fixed^^
2016-08-26 12:29 Firetruck: Okay c:
2016-08-26 12:30 Ayyri: 00:13:868 - I do not suggest using double reverse sliders.
2016-08-26 12:30 Ayyri: They don't really flow well overall, and could confuse a new player.
2016-08-26 12:31 Ayyri: Also the rhythm there doesn't really call for a double reverse slider.
2016-08-26 12:31 Ayyri: Sounds off imo.
2016-08-26 12:31 Firetruck: Hm, okay c: i'll fix that up
2016-08-26 12:32 Ayyri: Possibly, you could do a reverse slider at 00:13:868 - and a circle at 00:15:308 - to emphasize the finish at 00:15:308 - 
2016-08-26 12:32 Ayyri: Depends on what you want to emphasize / place things.
2016-08-26 12:32 Firetruck: Sure, that sounds better actually
2016-08-26 12:35 Ayyri: Aight.
2016-08-26 12:36 Ayyri: 00:27:788 - 
2016-08-26 12:36 Ayyri: This spinner feels really weirdly placed.
2016-08-26 12:37 Firetruck: Do you have any suggestion on where i can start it? c:
2016-08-26 12:38 Ayyri: Honestly,
2016-08-26 12:38 Ayyri: I don't really think a spinner is needed.
2016-08-26 12:38 Ayyri: It's not following anything other than the beginning of the lyrics, then some silence.
2016-08-26 12:38 Firetruck: The thing is, if i don't have the spinner in the map will get unrankable
2016-08-26 12:38 Firetruck: cuz of length
2016-08-26 12:39 Firetruck: i've talked to alot of bns about the spinner issue, but it should be fine.
2016-08-26 12:39 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-26 12:39 Ayyri: Understandable.
2016-08-26 12:39 Ayyri: Length wise, doing that is fine.
2016-08-26 12:39 Ayyri: Especially if other BNs have confirmed it.
2016-08-26 12:40 Firetruck: yeah c:
2016-08-26 12:41 Ayyri: From 00:26:348 - to 00:30:908 - (Or where you want it to end.) Try something like this: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/h4LxYGM.png
2016-08-26 12:41 Ayyri: Cursor is at 00:27:548 - 
2016-08-26 12:42 Firetruck: Kaykay, looks good c:
2016-08-26 12:43 Ayyri: Just remember to apply the things about hitsounds and the ending to the other difficulties.
2016-08-26 12:43 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036587 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [Normal]]
2016-08-26 12:44 Firetruck: Got it c:
2016-08-26 12:50 Ayyri: 00:00:428 - 
2016-08-26 12:50 Ayyri: Aren't you missing a finish here?
2016-08-26 12:51 Firetruck: oh yeah, you're right ;o added one
2016-08-26 12:52 Ayyri: 00:05:708 - Missing a clap
2016-08-26 12:52 Firetruck: added c:
2016-08-26 12:53 Ayyri: 00:06:188 - and 00:06:668 - I don't really suggest stacking in lower difficulties, unless it's necessary for readbility.
2016-08-26 12:54 Firetruck: I did stacking on normal since i want to introduce the players to something common in the higher diffs, but not on easy. But if you recommend to remove it, i'll do it ;p
2016-08-26 12:55 Ayyri: Depends on you, tbh.
2016-08-26 12:55 Firetruck: It's not an unrankable issue, right?
2016-08-26 12:56 Ayyri: It just bothers me because they're using a 1/1 rhythm
2016-08-26 12:56 Ayyri: No.
2016-08-26 12:56 Firetruck: Ahhh okay, i see
2016-08-26 12:56 Firetruck: Good ;p
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: Oh yeah.
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: 00:08:108 - and 00:08:588 - Same thing here, depending if you agreed or not.
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: And any other overlap. xd
2016-08-26 13:01 Firetruck: xD kay
2016-08-26 13:01 Ayyri: 00:12:908 - 
2016-08-26 13:01 Firetruck: i'll see what i can do
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: These 1/2 sliders don't really feel like they fit the rhythm here.
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: Rather, they feel forced.
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: I think just having 00:12:908 - as a reverse slider would work fine.
2016-08-26 13:02 Ayyri: It would also match with the rhythm you used at 00:06:668 - 
2016-08-26 13:03 Firetruck: Sure, that looks good c:
2016-08-26 13:04 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036586 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [Hard]]
2016-08-26 13:05 Ayyri: 00:01:388 - Remove finish
2016-08-26 13:05 Ayyri: Doesn't really fit here with the bell.
2016-08-26 13:05 Ayyri: (Whistle)
2016-08-26 13:05 Firetruck: kay kay c:
2016-08-26 13:09 Ayyri: 00:00:668 - Change to whistle
2016-08-26 13:09 Ayyri: 00:07:388 - and 00:07:628 - Clap
2016-08-26 13:09 Ayyri: There's pretty clear claps in the background during this transition
2016-08-26 13:09 Firetruck: done c:
2016-08-26 13:10 Firetruck: yeah, you're right
2016-08-26 13:11 Ayyri: 00:10:508 - 
2016-08-26 13:11 Ayyri: Having this slower slider start here feels rather sudden, and doesn't follow the rhythm all too well.
2016-08-26 13:11 Ayyri: It should be moved and shortened so it begins at 00:10:988 - but still ends at 00:11:468 - 
2016-08-26 13:12 Ayyri: At 00:10:508 - you could just a circle, then two more circles at 00:10:748 - and 00:10:868 - which could be stacked onto the slider at 00:10:988 - 
2016-08-26 13:14 Firetruck: sure ;o sounds goosd
2016-08-26 13:14 Firetruck: good
2016-08-26 13:16 Ayyri: Just remember that the NC should stay on 00:10:988 - 
2016-08-26 13:17 Firetruck: yup ^^
2016-08-26 13:17 Ayyri: And the inherited timing point (green line) at 00:10:508 - should be moved to 00:10:988 - too
2016-08-26 13:18 Ayyri: 00:14:348 - and 00:15:308 - These two should have wider spacing than the patterns beforehand.
2016-08-26 13:18 Ayyri: Considering they're on 1/1 ticks, yet they're spaced closer than 1/2 patterns.
2016-08-26 13:19 Firetruck: ahhh, i'll fix that c:
2016-08-26 13:20 Ayyri: 00:22:628 - Imo, this circle doesn't really seem like it's following anything. The stream itself just seems a bit forced. I'd suggest just having a circle at 00:22:508 - so you can emphasize the claps with a triplet at 00:22:748 - 
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: 00:23:948 - Clap 00:24:428 - Whistle 00:24:908 - Clap
2016-08-26 13:21 Firetruck: You're right ;o fixed :)
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: You just like stopped hitsounding when this kiai started. lmao
2016-08-26 13:21 Firetruck: xD rip
2016-08-26 13:21 Firetruck: added
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: 00:25:388 - Whistle
2016-08-26 13:21 Ayyri: 00:25:868 - Clap
2016-08-26 13:22 Ayyri: 00:26:348 - Whistle
2016-08-26 13:22 Firetruck: done^
2016-08-26 13:23 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [havkz's Condom]]
2016-08-26 13:24 Firetruck: Could you take this diff with havkz? he's on right now ;P
2016-08-26 13:24 Firetruck: c:
2016-08-26 13:24 Ayyri: Sure.
2016-08-26 13:24 Firetruck: Thanks c:
2016-08-26 13:25 Ayyri: No problem.
2016-08-26 13:27 Ayyri: Btw,
2016-08-26 13:27 Ayyri: Epilepsy warning doesn't need to be enabled.
2016-08-26 13:27 Firetruck: Oh yeah, i used to have a video lol
2016-08-26 13:27 Firetruck: i'll delete that
2016-08-26 13:28 Firetruck: Should i disable widescreen support thingy as well?
2016-08-26 13:29 Ayyri: That can be disabled too.

IRC Mod with havkz

2016-08-26 13:24 Ayyri: yo
2016-08-26 13:24 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - KondomVaruhuset.se [havkz's Condom]]
2016-08-26 13:25 havkz: oh
2016-08-26 13:25 havkz: ok :D
2016-08-26 13:26 havkz: ready?
2016-08-26 13:26 Ayyri: Yeah
2016-08-26 13:27 Ayyri: Epilepsy warning doesn't need to be enabled btw
2016-08-26 13:27 havkz: yeah i thought so
2016-08-26 13:28 Ayyri: 00:01:388 - and 00:01:748 - I'd suggest moving these a bit closer, just so it doesn't get read as a 1/2 rhythm, rather than a 1/4 rhythm.
2016-08-26 13:28 havkz: sure
2016-08-26 13:29 Ayyri: I just told Firetruck, but widescreen support doesn't need to be enabled either.
2016-08-26 13:30 Ayyri: 00:03:068 - / 00:03:308 - / 00:03:548 - / 00:03:788 - / 00:04:028 - This is a pretty big jump for the calmness of the song tbh.
2016-08-26 13:30 Ayyri: The pattern can stay the same, just make the jump smaller.
2016-08-26 13:31 havkz: i see
2016-08-26 13:31 havkz: i gues youre right
2016-08-26 13:32 havkz: but the big spacing is meant to symbolize the loud claps
2016-08-26 13:33 Ayyri: Yeah
2016-08-26 13:33 Ayyri: But there would still be a jump
2016-08-26 13:33 Ayyri: Just a bit smaller, and not a difficulty spike from everything else.
2016-08-26 13:34 havkz: fixed
2016-08-26 13:37 Ayyri: 00:04:748 - and 00:04:988 - Same thing that I mentioned for 00:01:388 - 
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: so you think (3) is too far away?
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: Yeah.
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: 00:10:988 - NC due to the change in SV here.
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: alright
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: i made a small overlap with (2)
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: Aight.
2016-08-26 13:38 Ayyri: Keep the NC at 00:11:948 - though
2016-08-26 13:38 havkz: i dont know if its a good idea to have two nc's at the same time
2016-08-26 13:39 Ayyri: That's what you're supposed to do. :p
2016-08-26 13:39 havkz: i talked a bit with firetruck and we decided to do it :p
2016-08-26 13:39 Ayyri: 00:12:908 - and 00:13:268 - Same thing as 00:01:388 - .
2016-08-26 13:40 Ayyri: Alright.
2016-08-26 13:40 Ayyri: 00:15:788 - Same spacing issue here too. ;w;
2016-08-26 13:40 havkz: fixed
2016-08-26 13:40 Ayyri: 00:17:948 - Same. ;;
2016-08-26 13:40 havkz: (2,3) or (4) ?
2016-08-26 13:41 havkz: alright fixed them
2016-08-26 13:41 Ayyri: The slider in relation to the circles after it.
2016-08-26 13:41 Ayyri: 00:18:428 - Already mentioned this type of a big jump in the beginning. (Just nerf it a bit.)
2016-08-26 13:41 Ayyri: Especially between 00:18:908 - and 00:19:148 - 
2016-08-26 13:42 havkz: ok ;-;
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: 00:20:108 - and 00:20:348 - Spacing.
2016-08-26 13:42 havkz: rip pp
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: That jump is a lot bigger than before. ;w;
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: aaaaaaaaaaaaa
2016-08-26 13:42 Ayyri: I feel like the more I go the more badly spaced jumps there are @_@
2016-08-26 13:43 havkz: lol i didnt really think of the spacings
2016-08-26 13:43 Ayyri: Oh
2016-08-26 13:43 havkz: i put it that spaced because blanket xd
2016-08-26 13:43 Ayyri: 00:25:388 - Mentioned this in the first kiai. ;;
2016-08-26 13:43 havkz: but i can fix it no problem
2016-08-26 13:44 Ayyri: Also talk to Firetruck about the end of the map (The spinner) since the end of it might have changed since I talked to him about that.
2016-08-26 13:44 havkz: fixed
2016-08-26 13:45 havkz: many bn's have said that its fine with the spinner thing, so i guess it is
2016-08-26 13:47 Ayyri: No, no.
2016-08-26 13:47 Ayyri: I already talked to him about that.
2016-08-26 13:47 Ayyri: Just that where it ends might have changed, is what I said.
2016-08-26 13:48 havkz: alright

Good luck!

thank you c:

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-26T20:58:02+00:00

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Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-08-27T18:24:25+00:00

vad i helvete?

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-08-27T19:54:27+00:00

DavidEd wrote:
vad i helvete?

<3 pls rank

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-09-23T10:04:03+00:00

liten mod + fixat mer consistent DS på min diff för att jag vill ha detta ranked!

Normal S

- kanske vi kan ändra diffname till Small?
00:02:348 (3,1) - fix stack
00:27:788 - kiai borde sluta vid 00:28:988

fixat hitsounds på normal

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Hard M

- diffname kanske kan vara Medium här
00:02:348 (1) - denna slider kanske är lite för curved
00:09:068 (3) - ser bättre ut
00:22:508 (4) - nc
00:25:148 (6) - vrf så hög ds?
00:27:788 - 00:28:988 - det borde vara mappat här istället för spinner, spinnern borde börja vid 00:29:228

fixat hitsounds och sånt på hard

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min gd med bättre ds

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rank soon pls

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2016-10-07T20:52:05+00:00

From my queue

lack of custom hitsounds is unfortunate, but not overly detrimental
00:29:108 (1) - not sure if i could cheese a spinner to make a map longer than 30 seconds, i just reccomend extending the mp3 in some way, rather than spin in silence for 2 seconds
Timing is correct, no problems here

Medium

00:01:628 (4,5) - some thoughts behind this stack, I feel like there isn't emphasis form a stack, and you don't do it anywhere else, it just feels odd, maybe look into placing it elsewhere

00:10:029 (1,2) - this isn't properly blanketed

00:10:988 (1) - this slider could be extended to the next red tick, as that's where the vocal ends. The slider end is stopping on no noise, seems odd

00:16:268 (3,4) - the music doesn't necessarily entail a ds 1.45 change on this note specifically, why did you choose to?

Something worth looking into is that your Kiai time ds is the same as the rest of your maps ds. Yes this is a normal difficulty, but your map seems a little stale as I am going in circles at the same rate

00:17:228 (1) - unnecessary nc

00:18:668 (3,4,5) - no triple sound here, a reason for this?

00:22:748 (2,3,4) - same thing here, there's this huge 1/2 clap sound here in the music, so you could possibly get rid of this triple and increase the ds to these 2 circles from the 1 circle? I feell like that could do it some more justice

00:28:268 (2) - x60 y236 for a proper blanket

Mapper

00:04:028 (1) - this slider is very odd, it could be turned into a unique slider that possibly blankets this circle 00:03:548 (2) ?

00:09:308 (4,5,6) - these 1/4 sliders don't fit the song very much here, and are very loud and distracting from the song, I believe 1/2 sliders even moreso than circles would work better

00:11:708 - recommend turning down the slider end to a lower volume, around 30%

00:13:628 (3) - highly recommend blanketing this slider with this stream 00:13:988 (4,5,6,7)

00:18:188 (3,4,5,6,7) - is there a reason that every note has its own ds? seems very odd as there are no specifically changing and unique sounds that the singer is doing

This kiai has similar problems, it is actually the same as the rest of the map . We want to emphasize the kiai, so lets bump up the ds, and get some more intricate patterns moving to give the map more flavor

00:25:868 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is everywhere, a small ds change is fine, but when there's nothing to emphasize, a switch from 2.00 to 2.7 is actually startling

00:28:268 (1) - this ds 3.5 is pretty huge, i think you should either nerf it, or make the rest of that combo just as big to emphasize the ending

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2016-10-09T04:25:17+00:00

Mentai wrote:
From my queue

lack of custom hitsounds is unfortunate, but not overly detrimental
00:29:108 (1) - not sure if i could cheese a spinner to make a map longer than 30 seconds, i just reccomend extending the mp3 in some way, rather than spin in silence for 2 seconds i've tried doing everything possible and this is the best option we got so far.
Timing is correct, no problems here

Medium
00:01:628 (4,5) - some thoughts behind this stack, I feel like there isn't emphasis form a stack, and you don't do it anywhere else, it just feels odd, maybe look into placing it elsewhere i noticed just now that there's a strong sound on the blue tick so i made a triplet there.

00:10:029 (1,2) - this isn't properly blanketed lol fixed

00:10:988 (1) - this slider could be extended to the next red tick, as that's where the vocal ends. The slider end is stopping on no noise, seems odd yeah i agree fixed

00:16:268 (3,4) - the music doesn't necessarily entail a ds 1.45 change on this note specifically, why did you choose to? because the pattern is really nice, i use it in nearly all my maps lol. also it's the beginning of kiai so why not bump it up a bit

Something worth looking into is that your Kiai time ds is the same as the rest of your maps ds. Yes this is a normal difficulty, but your map seems a little stale as I am going in circles at the same rate

00:17:228 (1) - unnecessary nc oml how did it get there, fixed

00:18:668 (3,4,5) - no triple sound here, a reason for this? my bad, fixed

00:22:748 (2,3,4) - same thing here, there's this huge 1/2 clap sound here in the music, so you could possibly get rid of this triple and increase the ds to these 2 circles from the 1 circle? I feell like that could do it some more justice i mapped the triple to the vocals here
00:28:268 (2) - x60 y236 for a proper blanket thx lol

thanks for modding ;w;;

headphonewearer

790 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-10-11T17:49:43+00:00

Mentai wrote:
Mapper
00:04:028 (1) - this slider is very odd, it could be turned into a unique slider that possibly blankets this circle 00:03:548 (2) ? did something

00:09:308 (4,5,6) - these 1/4 sliders don't fit the song very much here, and are very loud and distracting from the song, I believe 1/2 sliders even moreso than circles would work better i like the way it is

00:11:708 - recommend turning down the slider end to a lower volume, around 30% sure

00:13:628 (3) - highly recommend blanketing this slider with this stream 00:13:988 (4,5,6,7) fixed

00:18:188 (3,4,5,6,7) - is there a reason that every note has its own ds? seems very odd as there are no specifically changing and unique sounds that the singer is doing ye, the woman singing sings in different tones. higher tones = higher spacing. and imo it fits anyway

This kiai has similar problems, it is actually the same as the rest of the map . We want to emphasize the kiai, so lets bump up the ds, and get some more intricate patterns moving to give the map more flavor idk i mean the kiai is still pretty chill

00:25:868 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is everywhere, a small ds change is fine, but when there's nothing to emphasize, a switch from 2.00 to 2.7 is actually startling oops

00:28:268 (1) - this ds 3.5 is pretty huge, i think you should either nerf it, or make the rest of that combo just as big to emphasize the ending changed to 3

Thanks!

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Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2016-10-16T21:03:51+00:00

IRC Mod~

16:48 Nuolong: ok in medium, I feel like you should emphasize 00:03:308 (4,5) - these two beats more to go along with the clap
16:48 Nuolong: and when one of the claps ends on a slider it doesn't seem to be emphasized enough
16:49 Firetruck: o
16:49 Nuolong: so I can suggest something here
16:49 Nuolong: for these two
16:49 Nuolong: 00:02:828 (2,3) - you can make this into a slider
16:49 Firetruck: yay
16:49 Nuolong: and then these two into circles
16:50 Nuolong: and then this 00:03:788 (5) - is alright as is because it is a slider starting on the clap
16:50 Firetruck: yah t's much better
16:51 Nuolong: also here which is just a little recommendation; not mandatory to change 00:04:268 (1) - 
16:51 Nuolong: the slider isn't pointing directly at 00:04:748 (2) - 
16:51 Nuolong: which just ruins my nonexistent ocd a lil
16:51 Nuolong: but i'd say it's fine to keep unless you have an idea on how you'd like to change it
16:51 Firetruck: xD moved dat a bit
16:52 Firetruck: hm ill see
16:52 Nuolong: 00:04:748 (2,6) - make this a little less curvy
16:52 Nuolong: like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6341046
16:53 Firetruck: gotcha
16:53 Nuolong: i would rotate this to look like this (i dont remember what commands i used to rotate it lol so you can mess around wit it) 00:09:068 (3) - 
16:53 Nuolong: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6341059
16:54 Nuolong: this is so that it will flow better to this circle 00:09:788 (4) - 
16:54 Nuolong:  -- Now to Small --
16:55 Firetruck: i cant find the commands LOL
16:55 Nuolong: 00:19:628 (1) - remove the grid snap to adjust the vertexes to make it more symmetrical
16:55 Nuolong: the commands ctrl+h and g and j 
16:56 Nuolong: oh
16:56 Nuolong: i did
16:56 Firetruck: its just the same thing again
16:56 Nuolong: ctrl j ctrl h and ctrl g and then adjusted it
16:56 Firetruck: xd
16:56 Nuolong: oh
16:56 Nuolong: LOL
16:56 Nuolong: OKAY WaiT GiME seC
16:56 Firetruck: xD
16:56 Nuolong: lol this irc mod gonna look so stupid
16:57 Firetruck: tru
16:57 Nuolong: ctrl right arrow, then j then g
16:58 Nuolong: okay back to -- Small --
16:58 Nuolong: so yeh 00:19:628 (1) - remove grid snap and make it nicer
16:58 Firetruck: http://prntscr.com/cv51lj wutfuk
16:58 Nuolong: same 00:27:308 (1) - 
16:59 Nuolong: oh did u ctrl click da normal anchor
16:59 Firetruck: i fixd it
17:00 Firetruck: xD
17:00 Nuolong: okei
17:00 Nuolong: so yeah the only two in small are those same sliders need to look neater
17:01 Firetruck: o
17:01 Firetruck: gotcha
17:02 Nuolong: okai~
17:03 Firetruck: thxhx

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