1. 00:53:498 (3) - flip horizontally, better flow
2. 01:02:936 (2) - not blanket neatly?
3. 01:21:812 (4) - at "back and forth" slider, not using clap rather than whistle? well just seeing your reference at 00:21:138 (5) - , or is it the opposite, because i just saw there's only one slider that have clap at "back and forth slider" and that's 00:21:138 (5) -
4. 01:27:206 (5) - DS, and (opinion) I prefer blanket it with 01:26:531 (4) - or "Z" or wave slider (like the other) vertical to diagonal up to 10-20 degrees
5. 01:40:352 (4) - DS, it's not that visible though (AImod) reference

1. 00:14:228 (5) - move it to 00:14:397 - . It's a bit confused when you follow vocal there, and I think it has a good pace at the new timing
2. 00:20:296 (7,8,1) - better make it symmetry (did i spell it right?) and you can stack start of the slider 00:21:981 (2) - with 00:20:633 (8) - (you're rarely using stack, so it's just personal opinion)
3. 00:34:284 (3) - flip vertically and then rotate 90 degrees clockwise, has a better flow, though, it would affect some of the next pattern (and need to remake it)

1. 02:13:554 (3) - its placing is a bit annoying, I recommend place it at x:264 y:252 or perfectly stack the end point of the slider with 02:13:048 (1) - the start point of slider
2. 01:51:475 (1) - well, move it to x:92 y:240
3. 01:21:307 (3) - how about curve it a bit, and make it blanketing red point of 01:20:464 (1) - and move it up a bit
4. nice slider pattern

1. 01:00:576 - till 01:01:588 - i thought you can add more pressure here, al so 02:01:251 - till 02:02:262 -
2. 01:45:239 (2,3,4,5,6) - reduce jump scale?, i want to mention 02:29:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too, but it's up to you
3. 02:16:756 (4) - move it a bit further from 02:16:925 (5) - diagonally downright, the coordinate more like x:264 y:304
4. 02:17:430 (6) - ^ not as further as above though

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Source:THE iDOLM@STER Cinderella Girls
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Loneight wrote:

Hi o/

• 
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:56:194 (1,2) - try to CTRL+G? the rhythm will more smooth. 01:56:869 (1,2) - ,02:58:891 (1,2) - Same as this - umm no, I prefer my rhythm because I want to emphasize the strong sound in 00:58:048. nice suggestion tho. I like it.
2. 01:16:419 (5) - did it miss something at rotation? maybe add a whistle - ah, yes. nicely spotted.
3. 01:50:464 (2) - add a clap in the slider-end, the sound would be more harmonious - ok

Good job!

[Normal Collab]

1. nothing

A feeling that it's a "Hard" Normal (run away

[Hard Collab]

1. 02:19:284 (4) - a little worry that it will make player misunderstand that its rhythm same as 02:18:947 (3) - , how about switch the NC of 02:19:790 (1) -
   
2. 02:26:531 (1,2,3,4) - the distance?

Nice! - Runa_Hime's part. please wait for him.

[Insane]

1. I can't find anything to tell, lol

Nice Insane! - tbh I doubt it. but thanks for checking this.

don't give me KD for the poor modding (cry
it's not have any problem for me, just the normal..., Good Job and Good Luck! - remapped normal anyway~ also, nice short mod. thank you.

pkhg wrote:

[Easy]

00:09:003 (4) - i'd nc this. the hp keeps draining and the gap is huge from the previous note - make sense. changed.
01:26:531 (4,5) - a little spacing issue - fixed
01:39:340 (3,4) - ^ - keep, for the sake of pattern.
00:48:442 (2) - this has whistles on normal diff - ok
01:49:116 (1) - ^ - ok
03:12:037 (3) - finish instead of clap, like u did on the other diffs - ok

literally nothing to say ;w;

cute map - thank you

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ Kak

[General]
untuk judulnya coba pakai CV. gitu kayak https://.ppy.sh/s/461071

[Easy]
00:44:060 (1,3) - nggk apa2 nih overlap? - pas dimainin ga bakal keliatan kok. fine.
01:04:284 (3) - coba slidernya majukan ke 01:03:947 terus tambah circle di 01:04:958 - imo kurang enak didengar. terlalu berat ke vokal jadinya. aku maunya selang seling gitu. part ini khusus vokal, trus part itu khusus musik.
01:05:633 (4,5,2,3) - ehh coba di stack - nope. bagus sih kalo di stack, flownya halus. cuma, menurutku ga cocok sama musiknya. ga ada kesan "loopy".
01:27:206 (5) - coba pakai slider melengkung supaya blanket dengan circle sebelumnya - blanket with edgy slider.
02:19:790 (1,2) - blanket? - definitely no
02:28:891 (2) - coba pakai clap - ok

[Hard]
00:04:790 (3) - slidernya coba di geser kebawah dikit ~ - nope. intended.
01:23:498 (1) - hapus finish ~ - ganti pakai clap dah
01:24:509 (5) - ctrl j - no. definitely no.
01:50:970 (6,1) - stack? - engga deh
--- Runa_Hime's Part ----
01:53:498 (3) - slidernya di lengkungkan *kalau slider lurus rada aneh gitu lihatnya
01:58:554 (6) - geser ke atas sedikit biar enggak bersentuhan dengan slider sebelumnya
02:02:262 (1,2) - blanket?
02:13:048 (1) - geser ke atas dikit dan lengkungkan juga agar blanket dengan slider (3)
02:14:902 (6) - hapus clap?
02:26:869 (1,2,3,4) - bukannya ini terlalu dekat?
02:34:621 - taruh break disini ~ masa map 3 menit nggk ada istirahat ~ kalau miss stress orang kwkwkw
-------
03:23:666 (6) - NC? - nice. ga enak juga ya combonya sampai 10. NC-nya disini 03:23:329 (1)

hmm insanenya menyusul aja ya ~ udah capek nih :3

[Insane]
00:10:183 (4) - NC? - engga deh. biar konsisten NC setiap 2 downbeat.
00:11:700 (1) - whistle - sounds good. ok
01:01:588 (1) - finish - wdw saya lupa. nice
01:23:498 (1) - hapus finish - well, okay
01:47:262 (9,2) - di stack? - ini sebenarnya dimana sih? timestamp nya disana tapi notenya jauh. o.o
01:52:487 (4) - NC? *biar nggk sampai 10 combonya ~ - nope. NC setiap 2 downbeat.
02:03:273 (5) - ^ - no
02:06:981 (8) - ^ - no
02:29:228 (1) - finish *cymbalnya cukup keras disini ~ - nicely spotted
02:43:048 (2) - clap? - good one
02:46:419 (5) - NC *alasannya sama dengan sebelumnya - no. buat yang dibawah juga. seandainya NC diberlakukan, itu seharusnya di sini 02:46:756 (6).
02:52:149 (6) - ^
03:05:295 (4) - ^
03:09:003 (8) - ^

GL kak ~

MineSweeper wrote:

Hi, from my que

[Insane]
00:46:756 (8) - NC - fair enough. okay.
01:56:363 (8) - insert strems. This song contains very few 1/4 beats, so I think It is better not ignore those - did you mean add a note here 01:56:447 ? if that is the case, no then. because considering the entire map, it won't be good. it's not balanced. beside, I want to make this a jump map. you can see from the object count. it's only few.
02:04:790 (10) - I can't hear the beat here, how about make 02:04:621 (9) - slider? - good
02:18:947 (2,3,4,5) - first 3 beat has not same intervel, main melody of this part is - alright, this seems good but I'm still not sure. I will consult about this with more people.

so my suggetion is change like

03:24:340 (1) - I'd better 'hit' the last beat 03:24:846 - , so how about change this slider to 2 circles - will be considered. no change for now

[Hard]
00:46:756 (8) - NC (I found this same as insane, but because other parts similar to this like 01:47:430 (1) - uses NC) - yes changed
00:55:520 (6,7) - stack isn't good, because it is between 00:54:509 (4,5) - and 00:55:857 (8,1) - witch are 1/1, although it is not actually same but i think it can still confuse - very nice suggestion
--- Runa_Hime's part ---
02:18:779 (2,3,4) - same as insane
02:27:037 (2) - , 02:27:543 (4) - use stack with 02:27:206 (3) - , 02:27:711 (1) -
----
03:11:026 (1,2,3) - use same distance 03:09:678 (1,2,3) - it's the same, actually. I copy-paste and flip it horizontally. then I swap this 03:11:194 (2,3) because the flow is better this way

nice song
Good luck! - very good mod. thank you!

Shoga wrote:

from queue

Insane

1. 00:27:711 (9) - careful this overlap - I don't see any problem with this. no change.
2. 01:47:430 (1,2) - Might be a problem sight read - I think they will do just fine in this part because I already did same thing before in here 00:46:756 (1,2)

Good map
me sucks.
Gl~ - thank you for your time. sorry no kudosu because no change made in this map.

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DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi~

Insane

1. 00:08:666 (8,9) - ctrl+g ? flow will be better imo - no, I prefer current pattern.
2. 00:14:228 - make this clickable? - umm...no
3. 00:43:807 - i can clearly here 1/4 drums in the background , leaving these is not cool ~ atleast put a circle at red tick like u did here 01:44:565 (6) - will be considered, no change for now. but if I were by any chance want to keep this, it might be because I want to make first part easier so that people will understand the music and able to read my pattern in the next similar part.
4. 00:50:801 (1,5) - weird overlap imo ~ move it up a bit? - still overlapped but moved a bit to match (4) DS, 2.01
5. 01:24:172 (4,5) - fix blanket - meh, okay.
6. 02:12:206 (7,1) - increasing spacing a little here wont hurt since the piano sound at big white tick needs more emphasizing - okay
7. 02:31:588 - add a circle here and start spinner afterwards? - no, even though it would be good if I do, still a nope.
8. 02:45:071 (6,1) - normal stack please - no, I moved it a bit instead.

Sorry for the very shitty and small mod ;3; i feel super lazy right now D:

Great map btw .. gl gl - ty ty~

CrystilonZ wrote:

Hi there~
from the queue

Red - Unrankable according to the ranking criteria
Bold - You really should give it some thoughts
Normal - just typical stuff

best - what?

General

1. Your background is in png format and drains a lot of space. Change this to jpg to reduce the overall file size, but if you really do prefer png, you can keep this. - nice
2. uncheck widescreen support on every difficulty - why is this needed and why is it unrankable?
3. Actually, you should include the mappers' name in both collabs, because you have two collabs and they're named in the exact same way. This is to make player recognize the mapper's name by just looking at the diff's name. You may try something like joint names. Rukaru_Hime and Scakaru maybe? I suck

- lmao thanks for suggestion but I prefer like this. I listed the name in map info so it will be fine.

Easy

1. 00:09:003 (4) - nc this. I know it's for the guiding line thingy, but you should add some ncs for health replenishing. - alright for now. might change it later.
2. 00:14:397 (1) - on the other hand, remove nc on this one. This is according to your nc pattern - ok
3. 01:36:644 (4) - I prefer something like 01:33:947 (1) - . It goes well with the vocal at 01:37:655 and 01:37:824, and also the snare - ah, yeah. I also thought that at first but in the end I prefer to make a gap between them. it would be too intense for beginner if I make it like how you mention above. I want player to have some rest in the middle of playing.
4. 01:51:475 (1,2) - fail parallel? - lol yes. thanks
5. 00:52:149 (2,3) - This rhythm might go better with the vocal and the cymbal - hm... maybe no. this map based 1/1 rhythm. when I do that it sounds like normal diff. I know this is kiai time but no. not now. I will consider this tho
6. ^ applies to all the same spots like 01:02:936 (2,3) - 01:54:172 (3) - etc.
7. 02:27:880 (2) - @_@ can you fix this - how?
8. 03:03:273 (4,1) - pls don't reverse the flow here ;w; - it's fine. nothing wrong with that.

Normal Collab

1. 00:05:970 (4,1) - dis blanket tho ;w; - blame stacked notes. no change
2. 00:19:790 (5,1) - swap the nc here. This is according to your nc pattern, and it will also make 00:19:790 (5) - easier to read - ok
3. 01:33:273 (5,6) - I think something like 00:32:599 (5,6) - goes better with the music. Because they are circles, they put some emphasis on the vocal.
4. 01:50:464 (1) - this nc is unnecessary
5. 03:12:374 (1) - put this somewhere around 412/153 to make this blend with 03:09:678 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   or 399/71 to form a triangle o/

gonna stop here because i'm lazy >//< - :/

Good luck! - thanks

Weriko wrote:

hey :p - hello there!


Mod from queue :p

[Normal]00:25:857 (2,3) - i think that the first slider shouldt be a line... so it keeps the flow better - actually, it doesn't affect much with the flow. I want to keep this for pattern sake. it looks good and play normal. not weird at all.

00:27:880 (1,3) - this might be confusing for a normal diff - I think it is fine. I give the player some time to think by this 00:27:880 (1) slider. the flow is also easy to predict because I don't have much space in left and it feels unnatural if I add the note on slider tail. the only answer for it is keeping circular flow by adding a note in (1) slider head. even if you play with flashlight, it will be easily spotted.

00:27:880 (1,3) - same as above - umm, yeah. basically the same.


i think everything else is perfect :p - thank you


[Insane]
00:01:251 (2,3,4) - i know you meant to overlap this but... i think you could either stack them or move themsorry, nope. I don't see the reason why I should move them. I find it better if I do it like current one.

00:44:565 (2,5) - overlap? - yes, intended.

00:49:453 (1,4) - stack to the end - ok for now. might change later.


Sorry for not being able to help more ;-; but i think its already good :p


Good luck!!! - thanks for your help.

kanor wrote:

Hi! From my moddingQ!><

there are some warnings in the AImod!
[E@sy]
00:41:700 (2,3) - DS - ok
01:39:340 (3,4) - DS - nope

[Norm@l]
----- Scavanger's part -----
01:39:340 (3,4) - DS
01:48:779 (3,4) - DS
01:50:127 (1) - why this place should be NC? i am a little confused...
-----
02:29:565 (6) - i thought here should be NC - ah... yeah, you're right.

[H@rd]
02:26:531 (1,2,3) - DS in this place is different from other places and it may be too narrow...can you make them have a bigger DS?
02:58:722 - there have a vocal in the place, i deeply recommend you to put a circle - ok

[Ins@ne]
02:29:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you want to make a pattern like a hexagon, may be it is not sucn accurate...plz check it again - fixed
how about change the diff name into Ins@ne? it sounds excited! - nah, nope. I personally don't like it.

touching song and nice map! - thank you!
GL

Agatsu wrote:

hi from q :3

[Insane]
00:25:183 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing - nothing wrong with it.
00:26:195 (4,5) - is this properly stacked? check it - fixed
00:45:071 (4) - you could make this straight to match 00:44:734 (3) - I was thinking the same thing but in the end I prefer this one.
01:21:138 (3) - delete the red point and make it blanket 01:20:464 (1) - roger

heh
pretty solid map imo - and a nice short mod

good luck! - thank you very much.

:3

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue! - hi, thanks for coming.
RIP 10 DAYS AGO REQUEST
[Normal]

1. 00:20:633 (2,3) - Blanket improve - k
2. 01:54:678 (2,3) - ^ - no
3. 02:43:722 (3,4) - Try to blanket it?? - k

[Hard]

1. 01:10:352 (3,5) - Try to blanket it? - no
   ----- Runa_hime's part ------
2. 02:06:307 (1,2) - Blanket improve
3. 02:13:048 (1,3) - Try to avoid this overlap
4. 02:21:138 (1,1) - Stack this two?
5. 02:26:531 (1,2,3,4) - Imo it's too close, but it's hard to change :/

[Insane]

1. 00:36:475 (2,4) - Blanket improve - k
2. 01:54:172 (1,2) - ^ - no

END!
Tbh it's very nice map. Imo you must start to finding a BN to this map - I'm trying.
GOOD LUCK! - thanks for mod.

10nya wrote:

heyhoo forgive my rotten modding skill lol

[General]

1. might add 'imas' to the tag? ease people to search instead of idolmaster imo - yea sure

[Easy]

1. 00:37:318 (1) - : move to 472 308 ? your current one has 0.80 dx - ok
2. 00:53:498 (3) - : move this to 00:53:161 - ? current one doesn't follow anything and the vocal is really loud here. thus you can leave 00:54:509 - empty to let player rest after sudden 1/1 - hm.. gimana jelasinnya ya? imo ga cocok buat follow vocal di sini. tapi kalo dibilang ga ngikutin apa-apa bener juga sih. susah jadinya. tapi menurutku kalau di easy ga harus 100% ngikutin musik. aku buat easy kali ini kebanyakan ngikutin beat supaya pemula nyaman mainnya.
3. 01:04:284 (3) - : ^ - ^ ini juga
4. 02:04:958 (3) - : ^ and all similar parts hue - ^ good suggestion tho.
5. 02:56:194 (3) - : idk flownya agak aneh imo, reshape like this? - oke deh
   

[Normal Collab]

1. 00:20:633 (2) - : idk i feel this one is a bit odd since it follow nothing on the music, move this 1/2 after would be better - kinda odd but it following the music properly. there's bass sound although a bit faint.
2. I think reduce some 1/2 patterns since the gap of rhythm used is a bit far from Easy - but the star rating tho

[Hard Collab]

1. 00:49:790 (5,7) - : add clap to both head and tail? It'll support the music better - whoa good
2. 01:44:565 - : add note to support the drum here? - um, no. I specially made it full antijump there.
3. 01:50:464 (5,7) - : same as 00:49:790 - yes ofc
   -------------------
4. 02:15:408 (8,1) - : swap NC? it'll make player easily realize its 1/2 jump

[Insane]

1. 00:10:352 (6) - : NC ? to support the change of the music, besides combo till 10 is quite big nice
2. 00:11:700 (1) - : might put this as jump as well, it's kinda strange to leave this no jump meanwhile previous notes has big jump. I suggest to put it like - looks good. this?
3. 00:43:891 - : add notes to support the drum ? - considered. I don't have any idea about the pattern right now
4. 00:49:790 (2,3,5) - : same hs suggestion as Hard - yea
5. 00:58:891 (4) - : add NC here would be nice. i think it'll support the music better like you did on 01:59:565 - ok

Neat beatmap ><
sorry for the poor mod aaa ;w; - good mod imo thank you
good luck <3

Juiceys wrote:

Just a short mod to finish my night

Easy:
01:01:588 (1,2) - Blanket these for aesthetics - nah nope. it already good for me.
02:10:352 (1) - Ctrl + J - okay
02:23:835 (1) - Weird Flow, I would move This above (3) - no
02:42:711 (3,5) - Stack these - it already stacked actually.
03:24:846 (3) - NC - ok
00:11:700 (1,2,3,4) - Some Pretty boring circles imo, would change at least 2 of them to a slider ok

Osuology wrote:

[Insane]
whoa, I postpone this for a moment. it takes time to explain a lot of thing
00:22:992 (2) - Distance is weird here, it's not proper between 1 and 2, since 2 is a snare I think distance should be more. Since 3 isn't a powerful sound spacing as is is fine. - ok

00:28:385 (2,3,4,5) - what even xD You don't seem to have a consistent reasoning behind many of your jumps. 2 deserves a jump just as much as 5, like what?? - for aesthetic sake

01:11:194 (6,7) - Distance isn't much here, due to the way 6 will play, the player won't move from the slider head, so try to think in terms of distance from the head of 6 here. - I think it is fine. it follow a certain sound which is fit for stacked notes.

01:35:633 (6,7) - Having to compensate a jump for a stack isn't very pretty or structured well. Just use normal DS. - ok

01:51:475 (1,2,3) - Why so low spacing here? Chorus deserves more... you use bigger DS only like 1 beat later so why? - for more balanced spacing and flow. I mean, it would be awkward to have (2) has same space as (4) because of this kind of pattern.

02:29:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Whoahoaohw why now so big definitely fixed

I'm not going to point out DS issues, so look for them yourself if you fixed the previous ones.

[Hard Collab]
Nothing to say here

[Normal Collab]
not much to say here either

[Easy]
I would really recommend putting some faster rhythms in the chorus, like an occasional 1/2. Otherwise your spread is kinda bad to be honest...


I could see this getting ranked after the insane goes through some polish. Good luck!

Bubblun wrote:

From the Bubblicious Modding queue.
I'm SO SORRY I couldn't get to this sooner. I promise occasions like these will be very rare. - no prob. I also two months late for reply lol

General
You use the custom sample sets in every difficulty except easy. I suggest making each diff have consistent hit-sounding. It's reasonable for guest difficulties, but this is your diff, so it's preferred.

Easy
Although this is not a big deal, I think OD 2 would be more fun. But OD 1 is okay I guess.
01:40:352 (4) - This note isn't snapped. You'll have to fix this. - it already snapped perfectly.
00:48:105 (4) - I'd suggest placing a slider that stretches from 00:47:767 - to where this circle is now as it fits better with the 'sayo-naaaaaaaaaaaraaaaa.' Plus the spacing in the timeline is a bit weird feel for, so this is easier to read - nice

Normal
01:48:779 (3,4) - Re-snap these notes. done
02:50:127 (6) - I recommend angling this so it aims more towards 1. I see reasoning for why it is what it is now, but just suggesting. - well, it looks better that way for me. so nope.

Hard
02:03:273 (4,1) - You might want to angle 1 a bit so it's not being overlapped by 4, but in a way so you keep the blanket.
02:30:576 (4,5) - Considering the spacing on the timeline and how close they are on the play field, it doesn't match very well. I'd space 5 out more.
03:13:048 (3) - Personal suggestion, but I think it looks better if you angle this so it blankets 2, or turn this into a straight slider aiming at 4. - ah, no. but nice suggestion tho. it just doesn't fit with my taste
03:14:734 (1) - To fix this overlap, you could make it bump up, then down instead of down then up. - I see no problem with overlap

Insane
00:57:543 (1,2) - You can add red-points at the ends of these sliders so you can make them slightly aim towards each other. I think it looks and flows better this way. - delish~ nice