00:00:512 (2,3,4) - Move down
00:00:198 (1) - Move to the right
00:03:339 (3) - Ctrl+H (move back to spot
00:03:653 (4) - ^ Ditto
00:08:051 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:17:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This disrupts flow because you're going from a moderate speed to a very slow one unannounced.
00:19:203 - Note here?
00:20:302 (1) - UGLY SLIDER!!! GET RID OF PLEASE! It also doesn't follow the beat. Do something like
this.
Space 00:20:302 (1) from 00:21:245 (1,2,3,4) 's pattern
00:23:287 (1,2) - Delete
00:22:815 (3) - Add reverse arrow
If you do ^ that, make it flow better into 00:22:815 (3,3,4)
00:26:585 (5) - NC please
<300:38:836 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read
00:43:861 (4,1) - Space more
00:45:590 (4) - This pattern should start here: 00:45:433 (3)
01:01:768 (1) - This cheer sample doesn't work, and gets really annoying imo
01:02:396 (3) - Drag to the left a bit?
01:05:538 (1) - Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, blanked 3 like
this01:05:852 (2) - Ctrl+H, rotate ~60%, move to ~x115 y137
01:06:166 (3) - Move where you want that you feel works nicely
01:08:993 (5) - Move down and to the right a bit
01:10:564 (8) - New Combo
01:10:721 (1) - No NC plz
01:31:925 (5) - NC
01:43:313 - 01:45:747 maybe a spinner?
01:55:171 (1,2,3,4) - This part is too calm for this spacing
01:58:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Ditto
02:45:119 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern starts here: 02:44:805 (6,7)
03:09:936 (2) - This slider looks ugly to me
03:13:705 (5) - Should end 03:14:491
04:11:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern comes out of nowhere. It feels SO out of place.
04:27:841 (1,2,3,4) - This is really ugly
03:51:087 (1) - No NC
03:51:402 (2) - NC
04:50:459 (5) - NC
05:06:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - This part isn't needed, but if you want to keep it, you can.
(I'd atleast cut 05:26:899 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - from it)