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Shiokara-zu - Shiokara-Bushi [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2015-07-13T23:15:19+00:00

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-11-09T14:00:58+00:00

SPlatter (best pun ever I swear)

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiokara-Bushi192.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3830,17071,30312,43554,56795,70036,83278,96519,109761,123002,136243,228878
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shiokara-Bushi
TitleUnicode:シオカラ節
Artist:Fujii Shiho
ArtistUnicode:藤井 志帆
Creator:ZiRoX
Version:Hyperion's SPlatter
Source:Splatoon
Tags:nintendo シオカラーズ squid sisters inkling ink octoling
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:7.6
ApproachRate:7.6
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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No hitsounds yet, I'll work something out once all the diffs are uploaded.

MBomb

MBomb 2016-01-21T14:01:14+00:00

My salad, completed on time as promised! :^)

Salad

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-01-22T00:39:21+00:00

F U L L S P R E A D H Y P E

Edit: Hitsounding as requested - boop

Any problems, let me know.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-01-24T22:25:37+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
F U L L S P R E A D H Y P E

Edit: Hitsounding as requested - boop

Any problems, let me know.

Thanks for the help~

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-02-02T03:56:07+00:00

interesting

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-01T16:43:00+00:00

It's back :^)
Nice diff names!
What it needs now is a good "Wild's Splooge" (^:

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-05-07T21:04:33+00:00

why isn't this giving me 2 kudosu you liar

[

General]

Tags

Could consider adding Callie and Marie
アオリ、ホタル
Inkopolis wouild be a good tag too wew lad
add your GDers to tags kek

Metadata

/me slaps

Spread/Other

your AR's are currently 5/6.5/7.6/8.5. I'd suggest scaling them linearly, by changing the Cup's AR to 5.5 and lowering the platter by .1 wew
Cup and Salad are at the same HP, dunno if it's intentional or not.
Might be suggested to get an appropriate timing check, even though the new timing is better, it probably isn't quite perfect. It's best to be on the safe side.

Hitsounds

hitsounds are by jbh ~~so let's just assume they're good~~ nice job

[

Ink Cup]

General

00:04:480 (2,3) - Adding a bit more distance in between these would be beneficial (change to maybe the distance at 00:05:308 (3,4) - ) considering that the catcher ends up waiting a bit too long for 3 to fall due to getting there too fast.
00:07:790 (2) - Tilt this to the right instead maybe? It feels better when coming out of the left side of the grid from 00:07:170 (1) - and it will help create a better directional change going into 00:08:618 (3,1) - .
00:10:273 (2,1,2) - This linear pattern is actually quite boring, on top of the fact that it forces the player to walk a bit weirdly. I'd suggest making it into a back and forth movement, like this, which would mean 00:12:549 (2) - would need to have a direction change. In my opinion, this pattern better compliments the music and allows for a better playability.
00:21:239 (2,1) - This pattern requires a lot of movement for a cup, are you sure about it? For me, I'd change 00:22:066 (1) - to just a straight line of notes rather than a back and forth that's already coming out of another back and forth.
00:24:549 (2,1) - Same as above, I think that changing it to a straight line would help the player with clarity here.
00:36:135 (5,1) - With so much space in between them, I think having these notes be further away from each other would be better here. Where it is now, it's promoting for the catcher to nearly be unmoving, which shouldn't be the case when trying to create movement throughout the song.
01:15:032 (1,2) - again with this pattern, I think it should be simplified a bit.
01:29:515 - There's an upswing note here that you could probably add a circle at. It's pretty strong and it shouldn't be ignored imo.
01:48:136 (1,2,3,4) - You might wanna increase the distances here a bit, as right now they're a bit easy to overshoot for a new player that probably won't pause their movement to catch the note.
01:55:584 (3) - I'd rotate this by ~40-45 degrees. Right now, the curve is a bit weird which puts the big droplet in an awkward position. Having a clean curve will increase the clarity for newer players.

[

MBomb's Squid Salad]

General

gay
00:22:066 (1,2) - having this be a pause isn't 100% reccomended, since after hitting 00:22:066 (1) - , a player at that level may begin to start moving right after seeing 00:22:480 (3) - and miss 00:22:273 (2) - or just barely catch it. I'd suggest moving 2 a bit more to the right so that way it creates a bit of a safety net for this and also promotes more catcher movement.
00:23:515 (5,1) - This distance is catchable by walking. I'm sure it's intended to be a dash, so I'd increase the distance a bit to show that the player is meant to dash here.
00:36:549 (4,1) - I think if you made 00:36:963 (1) - a left-facing slider, it would be easier on a newer player. The current pattern is almost like antiflow, since the player is expected to dash left and then walk right, which could be quite difficult when they are expecting to dash AND walk to the left.
00:51:032 (3) - Are you sure this fits the music as a standalone with 00:50:825 (2) - ? Turning it into a circle would sound better in my opinion and maybe give you some room for a dash.
00:55:584 (2) - Why not try making this vertical with a bit of tilt to the right? That way this flow isn't so sharp for a new player and they're still expecting to go to the right with the direction the slider is pointing.
01:00:963 (3) - Still not sure about this rhythm, adding the extra noise at 01:01:170 - sounds a bit wrong in my opinion. I'd suggest changing it simply to a circle again.
01:01:791 (1,2) - A slight increase in distance here would be nice, since it's still walkable.
01:27:446 (3,1) - The curve into a pattern like 01:28:273 (1,2) - is really tricky for a salad, and should really be changed. I'd make 01:28:273 (1,2) - look a bit like this so that way you can keep your intended pattern but make it play a bit nicer and smoother coming out of the slider.
01:28:687 (2,3,1) - These distances are REALLY high, I'd suggest reducing them a bit, maybe in comparison to the other distances you've been using.
01:38:204 (1) - maybe turn this into a repeat slider for rhythm consistency?
01:53:928 (3) - 01:54:135 - man.. these end notes ;A; they don't feel right at all

[

Hyperion's SPlatter]

General

00:15:860 (2,3) - Are you sure about the hyperdash here? It feels like the hyper would be more fitting at 00:15:446 (1,2) - , especially since you've decided to use a finisher on the sliderhead of 00:15:860 (2) - . In my opinion, you could do something like this[ for those 4 sliders to have it more properly emphasize what I'm guessing you desire here.
00:20:204 (4,5,1) - I'd suggest making this pattern a bit more spaced out horizontally, currently, with the jump from 00:19:997 (3) - , it feels a bit sharp and could be easy to overshoot for a player of this level, so creating a bit of a buffer zone for that would be beneficial here.
00:42:342 (2,3) - This last distance can be pretty painful for a player that leaves (2) a bit too early or too late, and could be the difference between catching the next pattern at 00:43:170 (4,5,6,7) - . I'd decrease the distance in order to make it so one jump doesn't completely ruin a player's chances to pass.
01:19:066 (2) - I think deleting this note would be more beneficial, simply so you can separate the rhythm that you're trying to emphasize, notably at 01:19:169 (3,4,1,2) - . by deleting this note, it brings out the noises there that should really be prominent.
01:35:308 (2,3) - Same as above with this distance, I think taking it down a peg should help the playability here.
nic diff

[

Mememaker]

General

00:06:756 (5) - Maybe tilt this to the left to (slightly) increase the flow into 00:07:170 (1) - ? Kinda minimal but it'll help
00:10:480 (1,2) - Is there a reason these are hdash'ed together but the others of the same sound are not? I'd make it consistent by removing the hdash and turning it into simply a regular dash.
00:19:584 (3,1) - Add an hdash as you did before
00:22:273 - There's actually a really strong note here that you're missing completely, I'd just extend 00:22:066 (1) - to a repeat slider, and maybe make it hdash into the stream?
01:00:135 (1,2,3) - why not hdash these together like in the previous pattern? It fits fine and you significantly lowered the distances here for some reason.
01:18:136 (3,1) - By adding an hdash here, you could really emphasize the downbeat at 01:18:342 - and it would play nicer in this pattern rather than having a triple regular dash.
01:39:860 (1) - Adding some distance here (preferably an hdash) would really help this pattern out, considering it's a downbeat into the next segment and could use a little variety to it).
rank ikazuchi

JBH, you have an odd tendency to map or gd on songs that I find to be horrible

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

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JBHyperion 2016-05-08T08:26:43+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
JBH, you have an odd tendency to map or gd on songs that I find to be horrible

I aim to please <3

~~Will check this out tonight or tomorrow (hopefully).~~

Ascendance wrote:
Spread/Other
your AR's are currently 5/6.5/7.6/8.5. I'd suggest scaling them linearly, by changing the Cup's AR to 5.5 and lowering the platter by .1 wew don't mind doing this, but will see what zirox wants to do with his diffs first
Hitsounds
hitsounds are by jbh ~~so let's just assume they're good~~ nice job My first hs attempt was rejected but hopefully we're all happy with the second set
[/notice]

[ Hyperion's SPlatter]

General

00:15:860 (2,3) - Are you sure about the hyperdash here? It feels like the hyper would be more fitting at 00:15:446 (1,2) - , especially since you've decided to use a finisher on the sliderhead of 00:15:860 (2) - . In my opinion, you could do something like this[ for those 4 sliders to have it more properly emphasize what I'm guessing you desire here.Made the hdash between (1,2), but decided to do something a little different by splitting (4) into 2 circles to emphasize the drum sounds better
00:20:204 (4,5,1) - I'd suggest making this pattern a bit more spaced out horizontally, currently, with the jump from 00:19:997 (3) - , it feels a bit sharp and could be easy to overshoot for a player of this level, so creating a bit of a buffer zone for that would be beneficial here. Agreed, increased spacing betweenn these 3 and also reduced the jump from 00:19:997 (3) very slightly
00:42:342 (2,3) - This last distance can be pretty painful for a player that leaves (2) a bit too early or too late, and could be the difference between catching the next pattern at 00:43:170 (4,5,6,7) - . I'd decrease the distance in order to make it so one jump doesn't completely ruin a player's chances to pass. Reduced to 1.80x, should be much more comfortable now
01:19:066 (2) - I think deleting this note would be more beneficial, simply so you can separate the rhythm that you're trying to emphasize, notably at 01:19:169 (3,4,1,2) - . by deleting this note, it brings out the noises there that should really be prominent. You're right, and for added emphasis I flipped the following notes before the spinner to make the new 01:18:963 (1,2) a hdash
01:35:308 (2,3) - Same as above with this distance, I think taking it down a peg should help the playability here. Did the same as before
nic diff nic mod

Splatteroni

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TitleUnicode:シオカラ節
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Source:Splatoon
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MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-17T19:37:59+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
why isn't this giving me 2 kudosu you liar

[ MBomb's Squid Salad]

General

gay - Done.
00:22:066 (1,2) - having this be a pause isn't 100% reccomended, since after hitting 00:22:066 (1) - , a player at that level may begin to start moving right after seeing 00:22:480 (3) - and miss 00:22:273 (2) - or just barely catch it. I'd suggest moving 2 a bit more to the right so that way it creates a bit of a safety net for this and also promotes more catcher movement. - I feel the lack of the movement here nicely emphasises the way the sounds are so similar, and there is enough reaction time for a player to not miss in the way you described.
00:23:515 (5,1) - This distance is catchable by walking. I'm sure it's intended to be a dash, so I'd increase the distance a bit to show that the player is meant to dash here. - Not sure what sane person wouldn't dash there but increased anyway.
00:36:549 (4,1) - I think if you made 00:36:963 (1) - a left-facing slider, it would be easier on a newer player. The current pattern is almost like antiflow, since the player is expected to dash left and then walk right, which could be quite difficult when they are expecting to dash AND walk to the left. - The curve on the slider allows for a more acceptable reaction time, and the strongness of the sound fits the antiflow nicely.
00:51:032 (3) - Are you sure this fits the music as a standalone with 00:50:825 (2) - ? Turning it into a circle would sound better in my opinion and maybe give you some room for a dash. - I don't think a dash really fits there, and even if it did, the slider plays nicely in my opinion, as the vocal is held like that.
00:55:584 (2) - Why not try making this vertical with a bit of tilt to the right? That way this flow isn't so sharp for a new player and they're still expecting to go to the right with the direction the slider is pointing. - This kind of antiflow isn't too hard for a salad player, as the antiflow following this movement is quite light due to the low slider velocity.
01:00:963 (3) - Still not sure about this rhythm, adding the extra noise at 01:01:170 - sounds a bit wrong in my opinion. I'd suggest changing it simply to a circle again. - Same as earlier, vocal is held.
01:01:791 (1,2) - A slight increase in distance here would be nice, since it's still walkable. - Same as earlier, idk why anyone would do this normally but increased anyway.
01:27:446 (3,1) - The curve into a pattern like 01:28:273 (1,2) - is really tricky for a salad, and should really be changed. I'd make 01:28:273 (1,2) - look a bit like this so that way you can keep your intended pattern but make it play a bit nicer and smoother coming out of the slider. - Did it slightly differently, but essentially the same.
01:28:687 (2,3,1) - These distances are REALLY high, I'd suggest reducing them a bit, maybe in comparison to the other distances you've been using. - But you've been telling me to increase the others... this seems fine to me.
01:38:204 (1) - maybe turn this into a repeat slider for rhythm consistency? - Sure.
01:53:928 (3) - 01:54:135 - man.. these end notes ;A; they don't feel right at all - Not really getting what you mean here, these feel fine to me.

Thanks for the mod!

osu file format v14

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-05-18T01:56:51+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
why isn't this giving me 2 kudosu you liar

General

Tags
Could consider adding Callie and Marie
アオリ、ホタル
Inkopolis wouild be a good tag too wew lad
add your GDers to tags kek Everything added, additionally added Calamari Inkantation which is the official english name
Spread/Other
your AR's are currently 5/6.5/7.6/8.5. I'd suggest scaling them linearly, by changing the Cup's AR to 5.5 and lowering the platter by .1 wew Applied
Cup and Salad are at the same HP, dunno if it's intentional or not. HP3 would be too low, drain is already low in Cup
Might be suggested to get an appropriate timing check, even though the new timing is better, it probably isn't quite perfect. It's best to be on the safe side.

Ink Cup

General

00:04:480 (2,3) - Adding a bit more distance in between these would be beneficial (change to maybe the distance at 00:05:308 (3,4) - ) considering that the catcher ends up waiting a bit too long for 3 to fall due to getting there too fast. Increased a little bit, didn't do it that much because I want to keep it easy for the intro
00:07:790 (2) - Tilt this to the right instead maybe? It feels better when coming out of the left side of the grid from 00:07:170 (1) - and it will help create a better directional change going into 00:08:618 (3,1) - . Done
00:10:273 (2,1,2) - This linear pattern is actually quite boring, on top of the fact that it forces the player to walk a bit weirdly. I'd suggest making it into a back and forth movement, like this, which would mean 00:12:549 (2) - would need to have a direction change. In my opinion, this pattern better compliments the music and allows for a better playability. Tried to do something else because
00:21:239 (2,1) - This pattern requires a lot of movement for a cup, are you sure about it? For me, I'd change 00:22:066 (1) - to just a straight line of notes rather than a back and forth that's already coming out of another back and forth. This doesn't require that much movement, and the 1/2 repeat fits the song as there are distinguishable sounds as opposed to other parts where I did use a 1/1 slider.
00:24:549 (2,1) - Same as above, I think that changing it to a straight line would help the player with clarity here. Same as above
00:36:135 (5,1) - With so much space in between them, I think having these notes be further away from each other would be better here. Where it is now, it's promoting for the catcher to nearly be unmoving, which shouldn't be the case when trying to create movement throughout the song. Moved the whole lot at 00:36:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - to the left, as it has the same distance before and after it.
01:15:032 (1,2) - again with this pattern, I think it should be simplified a bit. Again a no, reasons stated above
01:29:515 - There's an upswing note here that you could probably add a circle at. It's pretty strong and it shouldn't be ignored imo. This part is clearly focusing on the vocals.
01:48:136 (1,2,3,4) - You might wanna increase the distances here a bit, as right now they're a bit easy to overshoot for a new player that probably won't pause their movement to catch the note. I think increasing the distance would make the pattern harder.
01:55:584 (3) - I'd rotate this by ~40-45 degrees. Right now, the curve is a bit weird which puts the big droplet in an awkward position. Having a clean curve will increase the clarity for newer players. Worst explanation ever, but applied

Mememaker

General

00:06:756 (5) - Maybe tilt this to the left to (slightly) increase the flow into 00:07:170 (1) - ? Kinda minimal but it'll help Done
00:10:480 (1,2) - Is there a reason these are hdash'ed together but the others of the same sound are not? I'd make it consistent by removing the hdash and turning it into simply a regular dash. Yes, it's called build up.
00:19:584 (3,1) - Add an hdash as you did before Added
00:22:273 - There's actually a really strong note here that you're missing completely, I'd just extend 00:22:066 (1) - to a repeat slider, and maybe make it hdash into the stream? Adding it as a repeat sounds bad, and I'm focusing on other sounds here
01:00:135 (1,2,3) - why not hdash these together like in the previous pattern? It fits fine and you significantly lowered the distances here for some reason. The sliders are shaped differently, so they don't flow that well into and from a hyperdash. Also, the normal dash is also fitting, imo.
01:18:136 (3,1) - By adding an hdash here, you could really emphasize the downbeat at 01:18:342 - and it would play nicer in this pattern rather than having a triple regular dash.Done
01:39:860 (1) - Adding some distance here (preferably an hdash) would really help this pattern out, considering it's a downbeat into the next segment and could use a little variety to it). Done
rank ikazuchiD E N I E D

JBH, you have an odd tendency to map or gd on songs that I find to be horrible

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-06-25T19:18:15+00:00

Heyoooo!
YOUR A KID NOW! YOUR A SQUID NOW! (oh wrong one)
Here for a mod req by Kek ZiRoX.

General
Most of the time it's strongly recommended to include at least 1 spinner in a diff as only JBH's diff has 1. I would suggest adding one to the ending of where you have mapped when there is still music playing.

One Object is not snapped in MB's diff.

This is a very small suggestion but consider maybe altering the mp3 you're using to match more with where your beatmap ends as it continue's to play the song which could be mapped to. Also I noticed that right at the end at around 02:16:273 - the next verse can be heard and just thought it would be nicer to cut before you hear this.

Ink Cup

00:22:894 (2) - Try consider removing the reverse on this slider and adding a circle note where it ended on originally to have more prompt sound on the "Oh oh" sound. It will also make a nice difference from all the sliders used here.

00:56:825 (1,2,1) - Just thought the movement here was a little slow even for a cup. Would be nice if these slider gradually got more slanted like this. It feels really nice in play and allows the player to glide better with movement. (maybe even ctrl + G some notes to have nice changes in direction bit like 01:49:791 (1,2,1) - ).

01:00:135 (1,2,3) - ^ (won't mention again).

02:02:825 - for the last build up try adding another note here at x:144 for a nice triplet which fits with the vocals also.

Really nice cup

MB's Squid Sobad (^:

(Loving these hitsounds)

00:04:480 - You don't have a note here but you do for 00:10:273 (4,1) - I would add one in and it would be better for a salad also.

00:05:515 (3) - I feel this slider is too long and should look something like this instead as imo it does not fit so great. This way below fits better with vocals I would say.

00:07:791 - Same as first suggestion.

00:11:928 - ^

00:12:135 (4) - Slider reason like before.

00:16:894 - having a note here at x:208 feels a lot better with a build up and also fits with vocals nicely.

00:23:308 - maybe note here also ?

00:29:928 (5,6,7,8,1) - I feel this part is a bit too much to have a stream in a salad. try this instead to remove one of the notes.

00:33:446 (5) - I think you need some breaks around here so perhaps remove this note?

00:35:101 (4) - ^

00:38:618 (1,2) - For another break try remove (2) and make (1) a reverse slider.

01:01:791 (1,2,3) - I think just a little bit too big of a jump here. Try move (2, 3) right a little to say x:64.

01:03:239 (5,1) - (1) is a big drum including you hitsound. Try make a jump here.

01:09:239 (3,4,5) - It be nice if these were Ctrl + H'ed to fix a little bit of antiflow (Might want to move right a bit also).

01:10:066 (5) - NC for strong note ?

01:16:480 (1,2) - Jump ?

01:22:894 (5,6,7,8,1) - Same stream reason as before. Although can be fine it's still weird to see in a lower diff like this and feels overmapped.

01:39:446 (4) - Ctrl + H'ing this and moving to x:16 would make this SO much more smoother imo.

01:42:756 (4,1) - Very weak for a strong hitsound and drum in music. Would say make a jump here.

02:02:618 (4) - Try Ctrl + H this also and move to x:104 like suggestion earlier. Makes it so much nicer. (although yeah need to move 02:03:032 (5) - left more if doing this).

JBH's Splatter

00:19:791 (1,2,3) - Considering how sloped your previous notes and slider are it felt like this was a flow stopper and I would recommend slant these triplets a little more. even just slightly like this.

00:30:135 (2) - ^ almost similar suggestion but this slider could again be sloped a little more right as it would be better flow to the little jump to the right after. Incline at x:216 felt nice.

00:43:480 (7,1) - There should really be a hyper here for kiai. Try something like this with 00:43:584 (1,2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/pFYfi/7c70c3a932.jpg

00:58:273 (4,1) - I know I mention these a lot to you in the past but this time I really would recommend mirroring these sliders due to slant change which could potentially confuse the player a little and make it seem that they don't glide the same like many of your other sliders have beforehand. (if that made sense).

00:59:101 (2,3) - I thought maybe just a tiny bit big of a gap here to jump for a platter. Try (3) nudged left a little till it's in the centre grid at x:256.

01:02:204 (2,3,1) - ^ try move (3) right a bit to x:280.

01:09:963 (6,7) - Only a little suggestion but would be nice if this was a hyper leading into the break.

01:19:169 (2,3,1,2) - Mirror reason as before. I would match the 2nd set to the first as they have nicer slants imo and glide nicer.

01:36:446 (7,1) - Why no hyper again ;-;. It craves a hyper for the kiai WHAM! (please buy the WildOne94 sound effects CD and get a bonus disc of Withered Lotus furiously mashing his keyboard free!).

01:43:066 (6,1) - ^ Maybe here also for loud hitsound and drum placed down ?

01:53:722 (3) - Slight anti-flow but Idm that too much. What's bothering me is the slant which makes small awkward movements. Perhaps slant more to the right ?

01:55:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Although catch-able I still think this is a slightly weird stream set up imo. Maybe something like this instead ?

02:02:928 (4,5) - Go on add a hyper for final section for me (^:

Rainmaker

00:06:342 (4,5) - This might be totally wrong with what I am about to say but are these slider intentional to be upright a the start ? For like a slow slider slant start ? I was going to say that these are kind of anti flow as it makes the players stop a lot instead of glide but just thought I would mention anyways in case deciding on changing.

00:08:825 (3,4) - If above you keep (which I think you will) then these sliders would match the music better like this and it just some how feels better in play imo. It does not give that awkward direction flow then.

00:15:446 (5,6,7,8) - Just another little small suggestion for these slider. Wouldn't it be cooler if the sliders gradually get more slanted ? I think you should keep (5,6) the way they are and slant (7,8) equally together slightly more to get that build up feel if that makes sense ?

00:42:756 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't know about you but I some how kept missing here on the build up because of the slant and spacing between notes. I would really recommend something else like this example as now it also has a hard hyper at the end of it too after trying to keep to grips with the stream dashing.

00:46:480 (4,1) - Due to previous spacing and spacing after this... It feels a bit too close together imo and does not match the others. It kind of stops the player also. Try move (1) left more to say something like x:168 so it has a nice jump.

00:56:825 (1,3) - This is a little suggestion but it's hard to hyper dash to the next notes with the slider ends being curved upwards and can make players miss the tails of the sliders. Perhaps curve right a bit more ?

01:06:342 (4,1) - Should really be a hyper between here in this section more than ever because you have a finish sound and a strong beat at (1).

01:08:411 (1,2,3,4) - ^ but up to you with this one since I don't know if you want that many hypers but they are very strong notes.

01:09:653 (4,1) - I think defo a hyper here also.

01:16:170 (3,4,5) - It's very awkward to try catch (5) after (3,4) due to facing in the wrong direction. Either reduce distance here or try change the direction by making (4) left side of (3).

01:19:480 (3,4,5) - ^

01:29:723 (5,1) - Maybe hyper here also ? could move (5) to x:192.

01:35:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same stream reason as before.

01:36:550 (1) - For some reason in play it's hard to catch the droplets on this slider. Consider slanting the tail end more left to curve more.

01:41:929 (2,3) - I'd say it's fairly close to becoming a hyper jump here so try to increase spacing.

01:51:238 (4,1) - Try stay consistent with 01:50:411 (2,3) - as this had a hyper jump here but this one didn't for some reason.

02:02:204 (3) - I think this should be moved left a little more to something like x:120 due to how close it is with previous slider to fit with this section.

All done! Hue
Good luck <3 Love the song.
(I don't mean to be one of them guys but it can potentially have an overdose in this mapset as it has enough sounds to work with).

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-06-26T18:44:19+00:00

WildOne94 wrote:
JBH's Splatter
00:19:791 (1,2,3) - Considering how sloped your previous notes and slider are it felt like this was a flow stopper and I would recommend slant these triplets a little more. even just slightly like this. Sure, gave it a bit more of a slant for better flow

00:30:135 (2) - ^ almost similar suggestion but this slider could again be sloped a little more right as it would be better flow to the little jump to the right after. Incline at x:216 felt nice. Done

00:43:480 (7,1) - There should really be a hyper here for kiai. Try something like this with 00:43:584 (1,2,3,4) - Sorry, 1/4 hdash at BPM >120 is unrankable (see the new Ranking Criteria for more details), and I really don't want to skip that last 1/4 note on the roll to force a 1/2 hyper. Strong 1/4 dash still gives a decent amount of emphasis
http://puu.sh/pFYfi/7c70c3a932.jpg

00:58:273 (4,1) - I know I mention these a lot to you in the past but this time I really would recommend mirroring these sliders due to slant change which could potentially confuse the player a little and make it seem that they don't glide the same like many of your other sliders have beforehand. (if that made sense). Angled it a bit more for better flow, but these sliders are mapping different sounds so I see no reason to make them totally symmetrical

00:59:101 (2,3) - I thought maybe just a tiny bit big of a gap here to jump for a platter. Try (3) nudged left a little till it's in the centre grid at x:256. Double dash is maybe a tiny bit tight, so sure, went for x-260

01:02:204 (2,3,1) - ^ try move (3) right a bit to x:280. ^ x-268

01:09:963 (6,7) - Only a little suggestion but would be nice if this was a hyper leading into the break. Okay, removed 01:09:963 (6) and added a 1/2 hyper here, and made 01:08:825 (2,3) a normal dash instead to balance

01:19:169 (2,3,1,2) - Mirror reason as before. I would match the 2nd set to the first as they have nicer slants imo and glide nicer. These are intended to be played as stopped-flow to match the sharpness of the drum sounds. I feel they play fine so I'll keep the current patterning

01:36:446 (7,1) - Why no hyper again ;-;. It craves a hyper for the kiai WHAM! (please buy the WildOne94 sound effects CD and get a bonus disc of Withered Lotus furiously mashing his keyboard free!). Same explanation as before

01:43:066 (6,1) - ^ Maybe here also for loud hitsound and drum placed down ? Done, also changed at 00:50:101 (7,1) - 01:03:238 (5,1) - 01:56:204 (5,1) - for consistency

01:53:722 (3) - Slight anti-flow but Idm that too much. What's bothering me is the slant which makes small awkward movements. Perhaps slant more to the right ? Ok, angled it a bit more horizontally

01:55:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Although catch-able I still think this is a slightly weird stream set up imo. Maybe something like this instead ? Kept the stream pattern since I like the variety, but did make it a more comfortable 1/2 instead of 1/4 jump as explained above

02:02:928 (4,5) - Go on add a hyper for final section for me (^: Had to remove 02:02:928 (4) but ok, done

All done! Hue
Good luck <3 Love the song.

Thanks for the mod! Also tweaked a few patterns via self-mod.

Best Pun Diffname of all time

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-07-13T23:35:29+00:00

WildOne94 wrote:
Heyoooo!
YOUR A KID NOW! YOUR A SQUID NOW! (oh wrong one)
Here for a mod req by Kek ZiRoX.

General
Most of the time it's strongly recommended to include at least 1 spinner in a diff as only JBH's diff has 1. I would suggest adding one to the ending of where you have mapped when there is still music playing.

One Object is not snapped in MB's diff.

This is a very small suggestion but consider maybe altering the mp3 you're using to match more with where your beatmap ends as it continue's to play the song which could be mapped to. Also I noticed that right at the end at around 02:16:273 - the next verse can be heard and just thought it would be nicer to cut before you hear this.

Ink Cup
00:22:894 (2) - Try consider removing the reverse on this slider and adding a circle note where it ended on originally to have more prompt sound on the "Oh oh" sound. It will also make a nice difference from all the sliders used here. Done

00:56:825 (1,2,1) - Just thought the movement here was a little slow even for a cup. Would be nice if these slider gradually got more slanted like this. It feels really nice in play and allows the player to glide better with movement. (maybe even ctrl + G some notes to have nice changes in direction bit like 01:49:791 (1,2,1) - ). Done

01:00:135 (1,2,3) - ^ (won't mention again). Done

02:02:825 - for the last build up try adding another note here at x:144 for a nice triplet which fits with the vocals also. Making this a 1/2 pattern would require smaller distances, which makes this lose its emphasis a bit.

MB's Squid Sobad (^:
(Loving these hitsounds)

00:04:480 - You don't have a note here but you do for 00:10:273 (4,1) - I would add one in and it would be better for a salad also. Added

00:05:515 (3) - I feel this slider is too long and should look something like this instead as imo it does not fit so great. This way below fits better with vocals I would say. Done

00:07:791 - Same as first suggestion. Done

00:11:928 - ^ I decided to not add this to keep the 1/2 beat before the slider clear as it is on previous patterns.

00:12:135 (4) - Slider reason like before. Done

00:16:894 - having a note here at x:208 feels a lot better with a build up and also fits with vocals nicely. I think the current 1/1 dash provides more emphasis than a 1/2 pattern would.

00:23:308 - maybe note here also ? I think the 3/4 pattern works really nice here.

00:29:928 (5,6,7,8,1) - I feel this part is a bit too much to have a stream in a salad. try this instead to remove one of the notes. Sounds nice!

00:33:446 (5) - I think you need some breaks around here so perhaps remove this note? I think the vocal is important here, so I'm keeping it

00:35:101 (4) - ^ ^

00:38:618 (1,2) - For another break try remove (2) and make (1) a reverse slider. I think all the vocals here are equally important

01:01:791 (1,2,3) - I think just a little bit too big of a jump here. Try move (2, 3) right a little to say x:64.Done

01:03:239 (5,1) - (1) is a big drum including you hitsound. Try make a jump here. I couldn't come up with a not-awkward jump for this one

01:09:239 (3,4,5) - It be nice if these were Ctrl + H'ed to fix a little bit of antiflow (Might want to move right a bit also). Done

01:10:066 (5) - NC for strong note ? Kinda unnecessary, as a break comes after this and it drops the fruits anyway.

01:16:480 (1,2) - Jump ? From what I get, this pattern is mapped to the synth, so I prefer keeping its current distance.

01:22:894 (5,6,7,8,1) - Same stream reason as before. Although can be fine it's still weird to see in a lower diff like this and feels overmapped.Done

01:39:446 (4) - Ctrl + H'ing this and moving to x:16 would make this SO much more smoother imo. Done

01:42:756 (4,1) - Very weak for a strong hitsound and drum in music. Would say make a jump here. I didn't like the jump ;w;

02:02:618 (4) - Try Ctrl + H this also and move to x:104 like suggestion earlier. Makes it so much nicer. (although yeah need to move 02:03:032 (5) - left more if doing this). Done

Rainmaker
00:06:342 (4,5) - This might be totally wrong with what I am about to say but are these slider intentional to be upright a the start ? For like a slow slider slant start ? I was going to say that these are kind of anti flow as it makes the players stop a lot instead of glide but just thought I would mention anyways in case deciding on changing. They are compeltely intentional, the idea is to emphasize the jumps.

00:08:825 (3,4) - If above you keep (which I think you will) then these sliders would match the music better like this and it just some how feels better in play imo. It does not give that awkward direction flow then. Fixed

00:15:446 (5,6,7,8) - Just another little small suggestion for these slider. Wouldn't it be cooler if the sliders gradually get more slanted ? I think you should keep (5,6) the way they are and slant (7,8) equally together slightly more to get that build up feel if that makes sense ? Done

00:42:756 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't know about you but I some how kept missing here on the build up because of the slant and spacing between notes. I would really recommend something else like this example as now it also has a hard hyper at the end of it too after trying to keep to grips with the stream dashing. Done

00:46:480 (4,1) - Due to previous spacing and spacing after this... It feels a bit too close together imo and does not match the others. It kind of stops the player also. Try move (1) left more to say something like x:168 so it has a nice jump.Done

00:56:825 (1,3) - This is a little suggestion but it's hard to hyper dash to the next notes with the slider ends being curved upwards and can make players miss the tails of the sliders. Perhaps curve right a bit more ? Done

01:06:342 (4,1) - Should really be a hyper between here in this section more than ever because you have a finish sound and a strong beat at (1).Done

01:08:411 (1,2,3,4) - ^ but up to you with this one since I don't know if you want that many hypers but they are very strong notes. Increased the distance to make a jump, not an hyperdash

01:09:653 (4,1) - I think defo a hyper here also. Done

01:16:170 (3,4,5) - It's very awkward to try catch (5) after (3,4) due to facing in the wrong direction. Either reduce distance here or try change the direction by making (4) left side of (3). Slanted the patterns a bit.

01:19:480 (3,4,5) - ^ Same

01:29:723 (5,1) - Maybe hyper here also ? could move (5) to x:192.Added an hyper in a different way

01:35:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same stream reason as before. Fixed

01:36:550 (1) - For some reason in play it's hard to catch the droplets on this slider. Consider slanting the tail end more left to curve more. Tried to fix it kek

01:41:929 (2,3) - I'd say it's fairly close to becoming a hyper jump here so try to increase spacing. Reduced the spacing

01:51:238 (4,1) - Try stay consistent with 01:50:411 (2,3) - as this had a hyper jump here but this one didn't for some reason.Fixed

02:02:204 (3) - I think this should be moved left a little more to something like x:120 due to how close it is with previous slider to fit with this section.

All done! Hue
Good luck <3 Love the song.
(I don't mean to be one of them guys but it can potentially have an overdose in this mapset as it has enough sounds to work with).

Thanks for the mod! Gonna get to the mp3 thing tomorrow because I wanted to apply stuff with the current offset so the timestamps in your mod are still correct, in case the offset changes when re-encoding the mp3.

EDIT: Added ending spinners on my diffs and MB's. Edited the mp3 so the last verse can't be heard and it ends with a fade out.

Lacrima

Beatmap Nominator

377 posts

Joined September 2014

Lacrima 2016-07-24T14:56:29+00:00

SPLATOOOOOOOOOn. (mod is my queue if anyone cares)
[Cup]

00:57:714 (2) - no one did not notice that? (well I hope that's a mistake, if it's not then CHANGE THIS OMG, doesn't fit the music at all!)
well that's only the problem in cup

[MBomb's Squid Salad]

00:55:232 (1,2) - pretty hard conception for a salad, change this into something, when you don't need to turn into the opposite direction after dashing, and then again, I think this plays awkward becuase of this 00:56:059 (3,4) so keel that in mind, you can change this also, so 00:55:232 (1,2) would be fine
01:08:266 (4,1) - reduce the distance a little bit, so this dash will be a little bit easier, like a warning pattern for the next dashes?

omg perfect platter, can't say anything about it lol

[Rainmaker]

00:42:818 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what about to change this somehow like this
screen
00:49:025 (2) - what about to move this => x440
01:08:473 (1) - and this => x512
01:16:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why there's so much just a simple streams? I think you really can make this more interesting adding some hdashes into it!
01:20:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same^
01:35:784 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the same suggestion at the first one

well that's it, omg I think this mod would be the smallest one of mine xd

Thievley

osu!artist

219 posts

Joined July 2014

Thievley 2016-07-24T15:13:43+00:00

couldn't help but notice there aren't any combo colors

maybe something like these would work?

Combo1 : 182,128,255
Combo2 : 255,130,233
Combo3 : 164,254,148
Combo4 : 140,255,250

Last edited by Thievley 2016-07-25T14:12:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

MBomb

MBomb 2016-07-25T00:01:27+00:00

Myle wrote:
SPLATOOOOOOOOOn. (mod is my queue if anyone cares)

[MBomb's Squid Salad]
00:55:232 (1,2) - pretty hard conception for a salad, change this into something, when you don't need to turn into the opposite direction after dashing, and then again, I think this plays awkward becuase of this 00:56:059 (3,4) so keel that in mind, you can change this also, so 00:55:232 (1,2) would be fine - Considering the only dash is to 2, and then the other part is just walkable patterns, I think this is fine, especially considering the small SV.
01:08:266 (4,1) - reduce the distance a little bit, so this dash will be a little bit easier, like a warning pattern for the next dashes? - Lowered distances.

Thanks for the mod! Changed some stuff myself too.

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42623
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 3

[Metadata]
Title:Shiokara-Bushi
TitleUnicode:シオカラ節
Artist:Shiokara-zu
ArtistUnicode:シオカラーズ
Creator:ZiRoX
Version:MBomb's Squid Salad
Source:Splatoon
Tags:JBHyperion MBomb  Magic Bomb nintendo シオカラーズ squid sisters inkling ink octoling 藤井 志帆 Fujii Shiho keity.pop  菊間まり Kikuka Mari Callie Marie  アオリ、ホタル Inkopolis Calamari Inkantation
BeatmapID:884464
BeatmapSetID:333960

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-07-25T01:03:06+00:00

Myle wrote:
SPLATOOOOOOOOOn. (mod is my queue if anyone cares)
[Cup]
00:57:714 (2) - no one did not notice that? (well I hope that's a mistake, if it's not then CHANGE THIS OMG, doesn't fit the music at all!)
well that's only the problem in cup Nice catch!
[Rainmaker]
00:42:818 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - what about to change this somehow like this Done because it didn't boost the SR
screen
00:49:025 (2) - what about to move this => x440 Moved to x:424 because the jump felt a bit large at x:440
01:08:473 (1) - and this => x512 Done
01:16:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why there's so much just a simple streams? I think you really can make this more interesting adding some hdashes into it!
01:20:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same^ All the sounds the stream is mapped to are around the same, so adding an hyperdash doesn't make sense to me on this part. It's different with the one you mentioned before the Kiai, as there's the buildup and you can hear a significant change in the pitch of the sounds.
01:35:784 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the same suggestion at the first one Done
well that's it, omg I think this mod would be the smallest one of mine xd

@Thievley: I couldn't get to like those colors, I think pastels don't suit the BG that much.

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-08-02T05:12:08+00:00

M4M as requested!

General

Bg size should be 1366x768, the rest seems fine to me.

Ink Cup

00:05:370 (3,4) - Talking about consistency, I feel that could reduce the distance because it does not increase any sound or something specific, it would be better, try x: 188. Well, you should check the same in : 00:11:163 (1,2) - these sliders.
00:19:645 (2,1) - I feel it breaks the flow, but if you move with Ctrl + G, would be repetitive, I suggest you try to make another pattern, a little different, for now I no not think, but if I can think of, you I'll let you know.
00:23:577 (3,1) - I don't know why, here you have more distance, if I feel it's the same sound 00:08:680 (3,1) - here, but with a little less intensity, I suggest that you reduce the distance or you increase 00:08:680 (3,1) - here.
00:07:025 - I forgot, missing drum.
00:31:853 - Missing drum here, as you did 00:34:543 (2,3) - here.
00:40:335 - ^, is the downbeat, I feel that you should add a note.
00:42:404 (2,3) - Despite the intensity, I feel I can be consistent in these notes, (2) x: 408 (3) x: 227 (Lest this close to the next slider, here it is well x1.30)
00:50:887 (2,3,4,1) - - I feel that you can add movement to these notes.
01:04:129 (2,3,4,1) - ^, the same.
01:10:128 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I feel that you could have put a "Break Time" perfect fit, but out of respect for modders, so is better.
01:24:818 - Missing drum.
01:34:956 (1,2,3) - As before I mentioned it.
01:43:853 (2,3,4,1) - Same as i said before.
01:57:094 (2,3,4,1) - ^.
02:01:853 (2,3,4,5) - Keep these distances constantly x1.30 works.

MBomb's Squid Salad

00:15:508 (3,4,5,6) - You could increase a little these notes.
00:29:990 (5,1) - Dash fit.
00:41:577 (4,1) - Dash, and 00:42:404 (2,3) - dash.
00:53:163 (4,1) - Increase a bit.
00:54:197 (2,3) - ^.
00:59:784 (4,1) - Decrease the distance.
01:21:715 (1,2) - If you want to put a dash should be here. 01:21:508 (3,1) - I recommend removing it. (1,2)
01:22:956 (5,1) - Dash fit.
01:34:542 (4,1,2,3) - The same i said before.
01:41:577 (1,2) - Hard 2 catch, ctrl+G solve it, so give some of space to (3).
00:38:680 (1,2) - ^, the same, sorry i forgot.
01:54:818 (1,2) - Dash doesn't fit.
02:02:680 (4,5) - Could be end with dash.

Hyperion's SPlatter

00:06:404 (2,1) - This breaks the flow, I recommend putting it on the opposite side.
00:10:335 (4,1) - h-dash works.
00:13:232 (3,1) - ^.
00:39:094 (2,3) - The same i said before about flowbreaker.
00:43:542 (7,1) - Kiai times beggins, could be emphasized with an h-dash.
01:32:474 (3,4) - h-dash works here too.
01:53:577 (2,3) - The same i said before about flowbreakaaa.
01:55:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird stream, maybe could make many mistakes with the movement to the next note (1)
Good work

Rainmaker
Ok, this difficulty I like to express myself better I'll do it in my native language. kekl

00:04:749 (2,3) - Puedes cometer muchos errores aquí, te recomiendo Ctrl+G para un ,mejor movimiento.
00:06:818 (5,1) - Intenta agregar un h-dash aquí, la verdad es que encaja muy bien a pesar de ser una zona muy "tranquila".
00:09:301 (4,5) - ^ lo mismo.
00:28:749 (1) - Puedes sustituir este slider, hay demasiados sonidos que puedes mappear.
00:40:128 (6,1) - El h-dash encaja bien, solo evita salirte del borde.
00:41:577 (4,1) - Aquí es casi obligatorio poner un h-dash.
00:41:990 (1,2) - Y sí quieres, acá también.
00:46:542 (4,1) - Ctrl+G y un poco a la derecha.
00:53:163 (4,1) - Enfatiza más con un h-dash.
01:33:094 (6,1) - Es el mismo sonido que el que mencione, así que para la consistencia te recomiendo un h-dash.
01:34:543 (4,1,2) - Lo mismo que mencione anteriormente.
01:55:232 (2,3) - Enfatiza más con un h-dash.
Me gusta esta dificultad en general.

I hope I have helped, if so, let me know, I'd appreciate it.

GOOD LUCK

When i heard this song.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-08-02T23:23:44+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
M4M as requested!

Hyperion's SPlatter

00:06:404 (2,1) - This breaks the flow, I recommend putting it on the opposite side. Not really, 00:06:404 (2,3) is an easily walkable transition, as if there was another repeat here
00:10:335 (4,1) - h-dash works. I want to avoid too much emphasis here since the start of the song is calm. Regular dash is enough for this one
00:13:232 (3,1) - ^. ^
00:39:094 (2,3) - The same i said before about flowbreaker. Antiflow is intentional to highlight the pitch difference on 00:40:128 (4)
00:43:542 (7,1) - Kiai times beggins, could be emphasized with an h-dash. 1/4 hdash at this BPM is unrankable ):
01:32:474 (3,4) - h-dash works here too. Sorry, vocal is weak here and not deserving of hdash imo
01:53:577 (2,3) - The same i said before about flowbreakaaa. Plays fine to me, just a little wiggle and intentional to build emphasis leading into the next stanza
01:55:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird stream, maybe could make many mistakes with the movement to the next note (1) What would you suggest instead? This plays fine to me :<
Good work

I hope I have helped, if so, let me know, I'd appreciate it.

GOOD LUCK

Thanks for the suggestions, but I honestly prefer things the way they are currently. No changes from me for the moment, though if you have an idea for that last 5plet stream I'll consider it.

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2016-08-06T07:47:26+00:00

From Discord, I'll try not to give myself cancer.

General

- I guess the BG looks fine even if it's not the 'usual' rankable size, it's close enough.
- Ink Cup should be HP 3 so it's a 3,4,5,6 spread.
- Hyperion's Splatter ends earlier than the rest of the diffs, something should be done about that like add a spinner like all the other diffs did.

Ink Cup

- I'll point out some border stuff that bothered me before anything else:
00:34:543 (2,3) – I don't really like how this overlaps the border a bit, it feels a bit awkward. You could move 00:34:543 (2,3,4,5) a bit to the right to X=200 to get rid of the overlap.
01:35:370 (2) – This is right on the border, it would be better if (2) was on X=352.
01:42:405 (3,1) – Slider (3) overlaps the border a bit that it's noticeable while playing. I wasn't sure exactly how to fix without screwing up flow from the previous pattern.
- Okay, now here's the rest:
00:42:404 (2,3) – It almost feels as if you have to dash here, move (3) to the right to X= 232.
02:02:680 (4,5) – This is almost a dash and is too easily miss-able for a Cup, put (5) on X=80.

Mbomb's Squid Salad

00:28:749 (1,2) – This jump felt a little large to me while playing and I kept missing, maybe it would be better if reduced slightly since the tone doesn't change too much here either. I'd move (2) to X=167.
01:21:715 (1,2) – This is a pretty large dash for a Salad. Move (2) to X=320.
01:29:163 (3,4,1) – The spacing in-between these is a bit large. Try moving (4) to X=344 so it plays better.

Hyperion's SPlatter

- Some border stuff before I look at anything else:
00:11:163 (2) – I don't like how this is on the border. It would seem better on X=460 just so it's not to bad to catch.
00:26:680 (5) – I don't really like how it ends on the border, maybe move it to X=398?
- Okay, other stuff:
00:35:163 (4,1,2) – I found (1) is a bit hard to catch. It would be better with (1) on X=292.
00:42:404 (2,3) – This 1/1 dash is a bit rough to catch, it would work better if (3) is on X=128.
00:43:232 (4,5,6,7) – This stream looks ugly. Put (6) on X=472 so it flows better.
00:51:715 (5) – This is unnecessarily hard to catch. Move to X=184.
01:08:887 (2,3) – This feel unnecessarily large of dash to me, move (3) to X=124.
01:10:128 (6) – This would be slightly better if on X=28 in my opinion just because the h-dash feels hard for some reason.
01:17:577 (2,3,4,5) – This would look better if (4) is on X=340.
01:19:025 (1) – This is hard to catch but if you wanna keep the emphasis, you can move it slightly so it's on X=372 and it won't be as hard to catch.

Rainmaker

- I don't feel like going in-depth with Rain but I'll point out some border stuff that triggered me:
00:33:715 (1) – I don't really like the h-dash going into this slider on the border, move to X=32 to fix.
00:40:335 (1) – On the border and it make the catch awkwardly stop while catching it. It would be slightly better on X=16.

Good luck on your map.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-08-08T01:20:25+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
M4M as requested!

General

Bg size should be 1366x768, the rest seems fine to me. BG is 1280x720, which is a 16:9 resolution. As such, 1366x768 is the maximum size it can be, not the size it must be, so the BG is fine.

Ink Cup

00:05:370 (3,4) - Talking about consistency, I feel that could reduce the distance because it does not increase any sound or something specific, it would be better, try x: 188. Well, you should check the same in : 00:11:163 (1,2) - these sliders. Done
00:19:645 (2,1) - I feel it breaks the flow, but if you move with Ctrl + G, would be repetitive, I suggest you try to make another pattern, a little different, for now I no not think, but if I can think of, you I'll let you know. While there's antiflow, the distance is really small, so it's still an easy pattern.
00:23:577 (3,1) - I don't know why, here you have more distance, if I feel it's the same sound 00:08:680 (3,1) - here, but with a little less intensity, I suggest that you reduce the distance or you increase 00:08:680 (3,1) - here. Even you agreed the first one has less intensity, so it's reasonable that it has a smaller distance.
00:07:025 - I forgot, missing drum. Having a 1/1 distance allows for more emphasis on the downbeat at 00:07:232 -
00:31:853 - Missing drum here, as you did 00:34:543 (2,3) - here. These sliders are mapped to the vocals, there's nothing missing here.
00:40:335 - ^, is the downbeat, I feel that you should add a note. Added
00:42:404 (2,3) - Despite the intensity, I feel I can be consistent in these notes, (2) x: 408 (3) x: 227 (Lest this close to the next slider, here it is well x1.30) I truly don't understand what's wrong of having a small build up.
00:50:887 (2,3,4,1) - - I feel that you can add movement to these notes. Unstacked them a bit
01:04:129 (2,3,4,1) - ^, the same. Same
01:10:128 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I feel that you could have put a "Break Time" perfect fit, but out of respect for modders, so is better.
01:24:818 - Missing drum. Mapped to the vocals.
01:34:956 (1,2,3) - As before I mentioned it. A small build up doesn't hurt.
01:43:853 (2,3,4,1) - Same as i said before. Unstacked them a bit
01:57:094 (2,3,4,1) - ^. Unstacked them a bit
02:01:853 (2,3,4,5) - Keep these distances constantly x1.30 works. A small build up doesn't hurt.

Rainmaker
Ok, this difficulty I like to express myself better I'll do it in my native language. kekl

00:04:749 (2,3) - Puedes cometer muchos errores aquí, te recomiendo Ctrl+G para un ,mejor movimiento. Hecho
00:06:818 (5,1) - Intenta agregar un h-dash aquí, la verdad es que encaja muy bien a pesar de ser una zona muy "tranquila". La verdad me gusta como está esta sección actualmente, con las distancias aumentando de a poco.
00:09:301 (4,5) - ^ lo mismo. Lo mismo
00:28:749 (1) - Puedes sustituir este slider, hay demasiados sonidos que puedes mappear. Sigue bien el ritmo introducido por el slider previo
00:40:128 (6,1) - El h-dash encaja bien, solo evita salirte del borde. Arreglado, debería haber sido uno.
00:41:577 (4,1) - Aquí es casi obligatorio poner un h-dash. Agregado
00:41:990 (1,2) - Y sí quieres, acá también. No siento que el doble HDash vaya bien en esta sección
00:46:542 (4,1) - Ctrl+G y un poco a la derecha. Lo prefiero como está ahora
00:53:163 (4,1) - Enfatiza más con un h-dash. Hecho
01:33:094 (6,1) - Es el mismo sonido que el que mencione, así que para la consistencia te recomiendo un h-dash. Hecho
01:34:543 (4,1,2) - Lo mismo que mencione anteriormente. Hecho
01:55:232 (2,3) - Enfatiza más con un h-dash. Creo que el dash con antiflow ya hace un buen trabajo enfatizando, no todo tiene que ser HDash.
Me gusta esta dificultad en general.

RoseusJaeger wrote:
From Discord, I'll try not to give myself cancer.

General

- I guess the BG looks fine even if it's not the 'usual' rankable size, it's close enough. It's still a rankable size (it's a 16:9 resolution below the 1366x768 max size)
- Ink Cup should be HP 3 so it's a 3,4,5,6 spread. Done

Ink Cup

- I'll point out some border stuff that bothered me before anything else:
00:34:543 (2,3) – I don't really like how this overlaps the border a bit, it feels a bit awkward. You could move 00:34:543 (2,3,4,5) a bit to the right to X=200 to get rid of the overlap. Fixed
01:35:370 (2) – This is right on the border, it would be better if (2) was on X=352. Fixed
01:42:405 (3,1) – Slider (3) overlaps the border a bit that it's noticeable while playing. I wasn't sure exactly how to fix without screwing up flow from the previous pattern. Fixed
- Okay, now here's the rest:
00:42:404 (2,3) – It almost feels as if you have to dash here, move (3) to the right to X= 232. All these distances are walkable.
02:02:680 (4,5) – This is almost a dash and is too easily miss-able for a Cup, put (5) on X=80. All these distances are walkable.

Rainmaker

- I don't feel like going in-depth with Rain but I'll point out some border stuff that triggered me:
00:33:715 (1) – I don't really like the h-dash going into this slider on the border, move to X=32 to fix. Fixed
00:40:335 (1) – On the border and it make the catch awkwardly stop while catching it. It would be slightly better on X=16. Fixed, although on a different way, with previous mod

Good luck on your map.

Thanks for your mods, both of you!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-08-23T21:16:26+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
From Discord, I'll try not to give myself cancer.

General

- Hyperion's Splatter ends earlier than the rest of the diffs, something should be done about that like add a spinner like all the other diffs did. Added a spinner same as other diffs

Hyperion's SPlatter

- Some border stuff before I look at anything else:
00:11:163 (2) – I don't like how this is on the border. It would seem better on X=460 just so it's not to bad to catch. Went to x-484, I don't want the spacing to be low enough to create a flowstop
00:26:680 (5) – I don't really like how it ends on the border, maybe move it to X=398? Moved 00:26:577 (4,5) left slightly to avoid this
- Okay, other stuff:
00:35:163 (4,1,2) – I found (1) is a bit hard to catch. It would be better with (1) on X=292. Moved (4) right instead to keep consistent spacing in the following pattern
00:42:404 (2,3) – This 1/1 dash is a bit rough to catch, it would work better if (3) is on X=128. Donezo
00:43:232 (4,5,6,7) – This stream looks ugly. Put (6) on X=472 so it flows better. Don't kill mapper spirit! Fixed though cus yeah it was ugly as heck
00:51:715 (5) – This is unnecessarily hard to catch. Move to X=184. Reduced here and 00:52:335 (2,3,4) also
01:08:887 (2,3) – This feel unnecessarily large of dash to me, move (3) to X=124. Moved (2) left instead as it reduces both simultaneously
01:10:128 (6) – This would be slightly better if on X=28 in my opinion just because the h-dash feels hard for some reason. Sure
01:17:577 (2,3,4,5) – This would look better if (4) is on X=340. But think of the irrelevant beautiful polygons you're destroying! ;w; Ok then I guess
01:19:025 (1) – This is hard to catch but if you wanna keep the emphasis, you can move it slightly so it's on X=372 and it won't be as hard to catch.Reduced it a bit further, and then removed the next hdash because it was an uncomfortable flowstop

Good luck on your map.

Thanks for the mod! Fixed some weird flow and nerfed some tricky hypers whilst I was at it.

Puns of Damage

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MBomb

MBomb 2016-09-29T14:32:03+00:00

yo this response is on time right

Jusenkyo wrote:
MBomb's Squid Salad

00:15:508 (3,4,5,6) - You could increase a little these notes. - I prefer to be able to catch all non-dashes very comfortably in salads, to make the dashes stand out more.
00:29:990 (5,1) - Dash fit. - Added.
00:41:577 (4,1) - Dash, and 00:42:404 (2,3) - dash. - Added dash to both.
00:53:163 (4,1) - Increase a bit. - Done.
00:54:197 (2,3) - ^. - Yeah.
00:59:784 (4,1) - Decrease the distance. - This is meant to be dash for vocals.
01:21:715 (1,2) - If you want to put a dash should be here. 01:21:508 (3,1) - I recommend removing it. (1,2) - 2 sounds stronger to me for the sudden pitch change.
01:22:956 (5,1) - Dash fit. - Yeah, done.
01:34:542 (4,1,2,3) - The same i said before. - Done.
01:41:577 (1,2) - Hard 2 catch, ctrl+G solve it, so give some of space to (3). - Whilst this is harder than some other parts of the map, this adds a bit of variety into movements, and it's not really too hard for a salad, just a bit more difficult. Also because this is during kiai, I think it's fine.
00:38:680 (1,2) - ^, the same, sorry i forgot. - This one isn't a dash, so it's fine.
01:54:818 (1,2) - Dash doesn't fit. - Dash is for pitch change.
02:02:680 (4,5) - Could be end with dash. - This is a dash?

GOOD LUCK

When i heard this song.

RoseusJaeger wrote:
Mbomb's Squid Salad

00:28:749 (1,2) – This jump felt a little large to me while playing and I kept missing, maybe it would be better if reduced slightly since the tone doesn't change too much here either. I'd move (2) to X=167. - I think the pitch change is enough for a dash, and this is a dash already right now.
01:21:715 (1,2) – This is a pretty large dash for a Salad. Move (2) to X=320. - Same as above.
01:29:163 (3,4,1) – The spacing in-between these is a bit large. Try moving (4) to X=344 so it plays better. - These were also intended to be dashes, 4 for the pitch change, 1 for the strong cymbalish sound here.

Good luck on your map.

Thanks for the mods! Did some self-modding too.

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Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2016-09-29T14:33:35+00:00

i enjoy squids

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2016-10-05T20:28:41+00:00

oh shit I did agree to this

[I couldn't think of any bad flavor text here so I'll just write cup]
00:10:335 (2) - I would honestly move the NC here. This still follows the same pattern as the combo before it, and (2) is the new phrase, as well.
00:22:956 (2,3,1) - The distance between (2,3) and (3,1) are essentially the same even though (3,1) has a smaller length time-wise between the two notes. Lower the distance between (3,1).
01:33:715 (7) - NC. The combo gets long here.
01:39:922 (1,2) - Are these sliderends really necessary? I get they hit a beat, but they're not as essential and kinda make the cup unnecessarily denser.
00:25:439 (1) vs 01:18:404 (1) these are part of the same pattern in the same place, but you treat these sliders differently, one being a 1/2 repeat slider while the other being a 1/1 slider. Perhaps you want to main consistency and do a 1/2 repeat slider for both.

[You're a squid, you're a salad]
00:15:508 (3) - Personally would think about NC here simply because it lowers the stack on the plate.
00:22:128 (1,2) - Bleah, I feel like this stacked placement is kind of boring overall. Why not move (2) further away from x=0?
00:36:611 (4,1) - This jump is a little hard to distinguish whether it is a HDash or a regular dash. Increase the distance or lower it.
01:21:715 (1,2,3) - Perhaps you might want to simplify this movement a bit for salad players.
01:41:577 (1,2) - Don't you think this movement is a little advanced for a salad?

[Splatter hype]
00:52:335 (2,3,4) - I honestly feel how this juts out so much is a little awkward.
01:25:439 (1) - I understand you're hitting a main beat, but it just doesn't feel strong enough to justify a hitcircle here.
01:35:990 - I would add a hitcircle here and create a 1/2 dash to the next note to identify the buildup that occurs to the kiai.

[(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ Rainmaker ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)]
00:19:646 (3,1) - This hyper is kind of boring in its context. I wish that the catcher would have to change directions to reach the next note, or something that doesn't just make the movement "tap dash".
00:28:749 (1) - Personally, I would follow those 1/2 (whooshing?) sounds in the background instead of the 2/3 here. Replace with two 1/2 sliders.
00:46:542 (4,1) - There's no hyper here, the main beat, but there's hypers on every other beat in the measure! You may want to change that.
01:09:715 (4,1) - Maybe strengthen the hyper here to accent the music as well.
01:17:474 (8,1) - Place a hyper here?
01:22:956 (2,1) - Forgive me if I'm wrong, but... isn't this jump unrankable? (Wall-to-wall hyper)

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-10-10T13:48:14+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
oh shit I did agree to this

[Splatter hype]
00:52:335 (2,3,4) - I honestly feel how this juts out so much is a little awkward. Brought 00:51:922 (1,2,3) - closer together
01:25:439 (1) - I understand you're hitting a main beat, but it just doesn't feel strong enough to justify a hitcircle here. Your suggestion contradicts itself, why would a strong beat not warrant being mapped? Skipping this throws the rhythm off significantly imo
01:35:990 - I would add a hitcircle here and create a 1/2 dash to the next note to identify the buildup that occurs to the kiai. Made (3) a 1/2 slider here with hdash and also at 00:42:818 (3,4,5,6,7) - since it's the same rhythm

Thanks for the suggestions!

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-10-10T18:31:40+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
oh shit I did agree to this

[I couldn't think of any bad flavor text here so I'll just write cup]
00:10:335 (2) - I would honestly move the NC here. This still follows the same pattern as the combo before it, and (2) is the new phrase, as well. Rearranged the NCs in this part
00:22:956 (2,3,1) - The distance between (2,3) and (3,1) are essentially the same even though (3,1) has a smaller length time-wise between the two notes. Lower the distance between (3,1). I think the higher distance is justified by the strong sound at 00:23:784 - , which is also emphasized with a finish. However, I moved (1) so the overall movement requires 1 direction change instead of 2.
01:33:715 (7) - NC. The combo gets long here. Wew lad
01:39:922 (1,2) - Are these sliderends really necessary? I get they hit a beat, but they're not as essential and kinda make the cup unnecessarily denser. Given that this is the Kiai Time, I don't feel like the "higher" density is an issue.
00:25:439 (1) vs 01:18:404 (1) these are part of the same pattern in the same place, but you treat these sliders differently, one being a 1/2 repeat slider while the other being a 1/1 slider. Perhaps you want to main consistency and do a 1/2 repeat slider for both. Fixed and rearranged the following patterns.

[(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ Rainmaker ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)]
00:19:646 (3,1) - This hyper is kind of boring in its context. I wish that the catcher would have to change directions to reach the next note, or something that doesn't just make the movement "tap dash". Rejected because
00:28:749 (1) - Personally, I would follow those 1/2 (whooshing?) sounds in the background instead of the 2/3 here. Replace with two 1/2 sliders. I think the sound this 3/4 repeat is following is more prominent than those 1/2s.
00:46:542 (4,1) - There's no hyper here, the main beat, but there's hypers on every other beat in the measure! You may want to change that. Fixed
01:09:715 (4,1) - Maybe strengthen the hyper here to accent the music as well. Ctrl+G'd the previous object (01:09:715 (4) - ) to increase the HDash strenght, I didn't want to mess the distances for the following patterns.
01:17:474 (8,1) - Place a hyper here? For a diff that barely has 1/4 HDashes, I think adding a 1/4 HDash on a non-Kiai section for this sound is not fitting.
01:22:956 (2,1) - Forgive me if I'm wrong, but... isn't this jump unrankable? (Wall-to-wall hyper) This is within the limits specified by the ranking criteria for HDashes to objects near the wall, so it isn't unrankable. I decreased the intensity of the HDash a bit though by moving 01:22:956 (2) - closer to the other objects.

MBomb

MBomb 2016-10-13T03:30:47+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
oh shit I did agree to this

[You're a squid, you're a salad]
00:15:508 (3) - Personally would think about NC here simply because it lowers the stack on the plate. - Currently fits with guideline and consistency, so I'd prefer to leave it as is.
00:22:128 (1,2) - Bleah, I feel like this stacked placement is kind of boring overall. Why not move (2) further away from x=0? - I disagree, it adds some variety to the pattern, and also gives the player a kind of "break point".
00:36:611 (4,1) - This jump is a little hard to distinguish whether it is a HDash or a regular dash. Increase the distance or lower it. - Gonna assume (And really hope considering you said increase it as a possible option) that you mean whether it's a dash or regular movement. Increased slightly.
01:21:715 (1,2,3) - Perhaps you might want to simplify this movement a bit for salad players. - This movement is already pretty simple, and the antiflow is very weak considering the reaction time you have to move to 3.
01:41:577 (1,2) - Don't you think this movement is a little advanced for a salad? - Commented on this in previous mods, but I really don't think this is too hard for a salad at all, it's difficult, but this is kiai, and it feels fine to play in my eyes.

Thanks for the mod!

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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2016-10-23T16:23:08+00:00

:^)

[Rainmaker]

00:06:818 (5,1) - No vas a añadir un HDash o al menos una distancia mayor entre esas notas? Es algo raro que uses la misma distancia que con (4,5) para ese salto.
00:21:094 (2,3) - En partes similares a esta usabas HDash pero aquí la distancia es bastante menor. Considera mover (2) bastante más a la derecha para crear un salto mayor. Podrías probar en x:336, pero tendrías que cambiar algo la forma del slider anterior para que se suavice algo más el salto anterior.
00:46:128 (3,4) - Quedaría mejor si hicieras esos sliders algo más verticales para separarlos un poco más. Ahora mismo no hace falta usar el dash para hacerlos, pero podría hacerlo más interesante.

[Hyperion's SPlatter]

Worst diffname pun ever
00:28:335 (5,1) - Quite exaggerate dash on this one. Consider moving (4,5) just a few grids to the left to soften it.
00:33:094 (3,1) - Hm... Not quite sure if a HDash is the best option for this transition. Placing a normal dash instead would look better on this part. HDashes can be placed like you did on 00:37:025 (1) - , where the music is sorta intense.
00:35:577 (2) - It'd be a nice idea to soften those zigzags a bit more, as they're not that ideal with such a low AR. Try moving (2) to at least x:164 to reduce the distance.
00:56:059 (3,4) - Similar case as in a previous section, having a edge dash. Funny that the 1/4 doesn't generate a HDash with bigger distance than the 1/2 afterwards. Not cool.
01:26:060 (3,1) - If you removed the similar HDash mentioned before, you should do something similar with this one too to keep it consistent.
01:49:025 (3,4) - Copypasta monsta :^(
01:56:059 (3,4,5) - Please reduce a bit this curve by moving (4) slightly to the right, as the next jump is going to the complete opposite direction.
02:00:611 (3,4) - Quite ugly transition tbh. Placing (4) at the left part of the slider (3) instead will make me love it instead. Have fun keeping the HDash on the next slider (1) though.
02:02:576 (4,1) - Mean distance, at the border of the HDash trigger. Use something like 2.50x instead?

[MBomb's Squid Salad]

00:45:301 (1,2) - This part is just odd talking about flow, and also because of the possible missing beat at 00:45:715 - . What about adding a repetition on (1) to kill two birds with the same stone?
01:22:335 (3,4,5) - Compared with the other difficulties this part is quite dense. Try to simplify the timeline on it.
01:26:680 (1) - Is it possible to move this note a bit to the left? The dash doesn't need to be that hard.
01:27:508 (3,1) - I'd also get this one reduced if possible. It's more fitting in parts of the melody like 01:29:577 (4,1) - where you can hear the crash sound (or however it's called).
02:03:094 (5,1) - You'll need to keep at least 1 bar between note and spinner. Otherwise I'd be sad.

[]
(^:

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-10-23T16:46:03+00:00

(^:

Deif wrote:
:^)

[Rainmaker]
00:06:818 (5,1) - No vas a añadir un HDash o al menos una distancia mayor entre esas notas? Es algo raro que uses la misma distancia que con (4,5) para ese salto. Hecho
00:21:094 (2,3) - En partes similares a esta usabas HDash pero aquí la distancia es bastante menor. Considera mover (2) bastante más a la derecha para crear un salto mayor. Podrías probar en x:336, pero tendrías que cambiar algo la forma del slider anterior para que se suavice algo más el salto anterior. Coincido en que la distancia era bastante menor, así que la incrementé un poco, aunque no tanto como sugerías (moví (2) a x:288)
00:46:128 (3,4) - Quedaría mejor si hicieras esos sliders algo más verticales para separarlos un poco más. Ahora mismo no hace falta usar el dash para hacerlos, pero podría hacerlo más interesante.Hice el primer slider más vertical
(^:

:^)

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-10-23T21:12:11+00:00

Deif wrote:
:^)
[Hyperion's SPlatter]
Worst diffname pun ever This is the exact reason I chose it :^D
00:28:335 (5,1) - Quite exaggerate dash on this one. Consider moving (4,5) just a few grids to the left to soften it. Moved to x-396
00:33:094 (3,1) - Hm... Not quite sure if a HDash is the best option for this transition. Placing a normal dash instead would look better on this part. HDashes can be placed like you did on 00:37:025 (1) - , where the music is sorta intense. Fair argument, made this a linear slider with normal dash
00:35:577 (2) - It'd be a nice idea to soften those zigzags a bit more, as they're not that ideal with such a low AR. Try moving (2) to at least x:164 to reduce the distance. Done, but also reduced 00:35:370 (1,2) - slightly so it's walkable rather than repeated dash
00:56:059 (3,4) - Similar case as in a previous section, having a edge dash. Funny that the 1/4 doesn't generate a HDash with bigger distance than the 1/2 afterwards. Not cool. Alright, reduced 00:56:059 (3,4) - considerably
01:26:060 (3,1) - If you removed the similar HDash mentioned before, you should do something similar with this one too to keep it consistent. Did the same thing, but also flipped 01:23:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - around so it's different to the previous time
01:49:025 (3,4) - Copypasta monsta :^( You know what they say, if it's not broken don't fix it!!!1! But this was broken so I fixed it lol
01:56:059 (3,4,5) - Please reduce a bit this curve by moving (4) slightly to the right, as the next jump is going to the complete opposite direction. Reduced (2) and (4) to 1.2x
02:00:611 (3,4) - Quite ugly transition tbh. Placing (4) at the left part of the slider (3) instead will make me love it instead. Have fun keeping the HDash on the next slider (1) though. Ew yeah I think this was accidental somehow. Moved (4) to the left but kept it facing right, straightened out 01:59:784 (1) - a bit to push the rest of that combo right and give me more space to play with
02:02:576 (4,1) - Mean distance, at the border of the HDash trigger. Use something like 2.50x instead? Sure thing boss
(^:

Thanks for the mod!

Best pun diffname ever and you can't stop me

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MBomb

MBomb 2016-10-24T14:12:44+00:00

Deif wrote:
:^)

[MBomb's Squid Salad]
00:45:301 (1,2) - This part is just odd talking about flow, and also because of the possible missing beat at 00:45:715 - . What about adding a repetition on (1) to kill two birds with the same stone? - Done.
01:22:335 (3,4,5) - Compared with the other difficulties this part is quite dense. Try to simplify the timeline on it. - Done.
01:26:680 (1) - Is it possible to move this note a bit to the left? The dash doesn't need to be that hard. - Done.
01:27:508 (3,1) - I'd also get this one reduced if possible. It's more fitting in parts of the melody like 01:29:577 (4,1) - where you can hear the crash sound (or however it's called). - Reduced.
02:03:094 (5,1) - You'll need to keep at least 1 bar between note and spinner. Otherwise I'd be sad. - That makes me want to keep it :^)
[]
(^:

Thanks for the mod!

osu file format v14

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-10-24T21:19:26+00:00

Updated everything (^:

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2016-10-28T07:31:02+00:00

I'm late, I'm late! Just realised about the comboburst you included lol. Anyway, difficulties are looking better since the last time I checked it. Good job!

Bubbled

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2016-11-06T22:15:50+00:00

Guess I'm back for a check. Going through this with a finer-toothed comb than before, I guess?

Add "Wii U" to tags, perhaps?

wait shit i pressed post instead of save post will finish this tomorrow

[Cup]
Just some very minor things:
00:25:439 (1) - Remove the whistle here--it doesn't fit the rest of the hitsounding pattern.
00:28:749 (3) - I feel like in this case, the strength of the synths in the 1/2 pattern trump following the melody here only. Turn this pattern into two 1/2 sliders.
00:38:680 (3) - NC here. The combo gets a little long.
00:46:956 (1,2) - This is the only time that you do a 1/2 slider pattern in the kiai and it feels a little weird going against the pattern. Mimic the rhythms at 00:44:473 (2,3).
01:11:784 (1) - Again, with the hitsounding, do you want a whistle here? If so, then you might add a whistle at 01:18:404 (1) at the end of the slider, not the middle repeat.
01:21:715 (1) - Same as 00:28:749 (3).
01:31:646 (3) - NC here. This exceeds combo limit of 8 objects.
01:32:887 (6,1) - Underwhelming movement here that kind of breaks the catcher's flow; I would increase the distancing slightly.
01:39:922 (1,2) - Same as 00:46:956 (1,2).
02:00:404 (2) - Move to x=336 for more uniformity in the movement to (3).

[MBomb's Salad]
00:22:956 (4,5,1) - This movement may be a little bit complicated for a salad.
00:30:197 (7,1) - A little far, considering a 1/2 isn't very long (time-wise) at this bpm. Lower distance slightly to make the movement easier.
00:41:577 (4,1) - This movement looks deceptively low distance(walkable). I would increase the distance so that it's more apparent as a dash.
00:51:094 (3) - Strange that this isn't a hitcircle because there's nothing it really hits, and the combo before does not suggest that there should be a sliderend here.
00:52:749 (3,4) - Increase distance here, could be perceived as a walk instead of a dash. (If it's walkable, it's too hard to catch due to the direction change).
01:08:473 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of underwhelming as a conclusion for the kiai. Increase distancing overall in the pattern.
01:25:853 (2,3) - Move (3) to x=240 to soften the movement to (1).
01:41:577 (1,2) - I guess it would pass fine, but the movement itself is kind of challenging, requiring a directional change right after a dash. Ctrl+G (2), perhaps.
01:54:818 (1,2) - This kind of breaks flow here. Make the distances equal between (1,2).

[Hyperion's SPlatter]
00:09:301 (2,3) - This movement kind of looks like a walk. Increase the distance to accent that it's a dash instead.
00:10:335 (4,1) - While I understand you're trying to either make variety in distance or accent the first beat, the huge distancing still seems weird next to 1/4 short slider.
00:29:990 (1,2,1) - I know the distance increase is meant to emphasize the first beat of the phrase, but it just plays weirdly in the map. Lower distance.
00:41:163 (2,3,1) - Don't you think this is a little difficult? Soften the dash.
00:46:956 (1) - The movement to here feels a little awkward, due to the surprisingly large gap.
01:01:439 (4,5) - Lower distancing here, the larger gap is a little strange and unexpected.
01:16:542 (1,2) - I disagree with using the hyper here. I don't feel there's anything that warrants such a strong movement in the music.
01:21:715 - Why cover these notes with the spinner? I think it's a good place to start mapping the notes again.
01:44:474 (4,5,1) - Kind of a sharp movement here, I would suggest simplifying it.
01:46:129 (5,1) - You could make this a HDash to symbolize the change in the rhythm of the vocals.
01:55:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you sure platter players won't overshoot (4,5) and miss the hyper to the next combo? I would flip this pattern around so the catcher's momentum is facing left. That means switching the x-coordinates of (2) and (4).

[Rainmaker]
00:10:542 (1,2) - Be consistent in spacing and don't make this a Hdash, but 1.69x spacing instead as you do at the start.
00:46:956 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure why you've suddenly put a spike of hypers here. You could flip (3) to make the pattern a little more varied. (note that you may have to move (3) to the right to make the jump not too sharp.)
01:48:198 (1,2,3,4) - Again, this pattern is kind of repetitive with the back-forth movement. Perhaps you could vary it by making reverse stairs instead.
01:49:439 (4,1) - Perhaps this jump is a little too strong. Lower distancing so it's still a hyper, but the movement is smaller.
02:01:232 (4,1) - Move (1) to x=96 to create a larger dash both to (2) and from (4) to make the pattern a bit more similar to 01:08:473 (1,2,3,4).

Apply these and then call me back and then I'll do a recheck after I get through a bit of other stuff.

Last edited by Absolute Zero 2016-11-10T00:46:08+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

Topic Starter

ZiRoX 2016-11-07T00:27:29+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
Guess I'm back for a check. Going through this with a finer-toothed comb than before, I guess?

Add "Wii U" to tags, perhaps?

wait shit i pressed post instead of save post will finish this tomorrow

[Cup]
Just some very minor things:
00:25:439 (1) - Remove the whistle here--it doesn't fit the rest of the hitsounding pattern. Removed the whistle on the tail, which was the inconsistent hitsound.
00:28:749 (3) - I feel like in this case, the strength of the synths in the 1/2 pattern trump following the melody here only. Turn this pattern into two 1/2 sliders. I still think what I'm following is the strongest thing in music. Besides, following the same rhythm and shape than the previous object makes it easier to play as players already know what to expect.
00:38:680 (3) - NC here. The combo gets a little long. It breaks consistency in NC patterning. It's over 1 fruit over the recommended combo, so I don't think it's an issue.
00:46:956 (1,2) - This is the only time that you do a 1/2 slider pattern in the kiai and it feels a little weird going against the pattern. Mimic the rhythms at 00:44:473 (2,3). Fixed but they were 1/1 :^)
01:11:784 (1) - Again, with the hitsounding, do you want a whistle here? If so, then you might add a whistle at 01:18:404 (1) at the end of the slider, not the middle repeat. Fixed the inconsistency by leaving whistles on the head only
01:21:715 (1) - Same as 00:28:749 (3). Same reasoning as there.
01:31:646 (3) - NC here. This exceeds combo limit of 8 objects. Same here. I think NC consistency is enough of a reason to break the guideline by 1 fruit.
01:32:887 (6,1) - Underwhelming movement here that kind of breaks the catcher's flow; I would increase the distancing slightly. Fixed
01:39:922 (1,2) - Same as 00:46:956 (1,2). Fixed
02:00:404 (2) - Move to x=336 for more uniformity in the movement to (3). Fixed

MBomb

MBomb 2016-11-09T19:14:33+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
[MBomb's Salad]
00:22:956 (4,5,1) - This movement may be a little bit complicated for a salad. - Movement to 5 is easy without dashing, and then from 5 is a pretty simple dash, so it should be fine, even with the direction change.
00:30:197 (7,1) - A little far, considering a 1/2 isn't very long (time-wise) at this bpm. Lower distance slightly to make the movement easier. - It's actually possible to overdash this right now, so decreasing the distance more makes little sense to me, considering I want to keep this as a dash movment whilst keeping it comfortable.
00:41:577 (4,1) - This movement looks deceptively low distance(walkable). I would increase the distance so that it's more apparent as a dash. - This is a higher distance than the previous one, however you said that one was too hard and this one is too easy? This confuses me a lot.
00:51:094 (3) - Strange that this isn't a hitcircle because there's nothing it really hits, and the combo before does not suggest that there should be a sliderend here. - This is consistency with the previous sections, and fits the stronger synth sound on the sliderend.
00:52:749 (3,4) - Increase distance here, could be perceived as a walk instead of a dash. (If it's walkable, it's too hard to catch due to the direction change). - Same as earlier, this distance is higher than the one earlier, but you said that one was too high.
01:08:473 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of underwhelming as a conclusion for the kiai. Increase distancing overall in the pattern. - Done.
01:25:853 (2,3) - Move (3) to x=240 to soften the movement to (1). - And again, now you're telling me to soften a movement which is easier than the ones you told me to make harder earlier? This doesn't make much sense at all.
01:41:577 (1,2) - I guess it would pass fine, but the movement itself is kind of challenging, requiring a directional change right after a dash. Ctrl+G (2), perhaps. - Replied to this one already multiple times, but basically, I think this, whilst definitely the hardest pattern in the difficulty, is still easy enough for a salad player, and considering it's the last kiai, a slightly more difficult movement should be fine to add some variety.
01:54:818 (1,2) - This kind of breaks flow here. Make the distances equal between (1,2). - I'm not really sure how it breaks flow, unless you're talking about the non-dash and then dash in the same way, which I think is easy enough for a salad player to read and play.

Thanks for the mod! Also removed some unnecessary greenlines.

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-11-09T21:39:50+00:00

holy shit is it finally tomorrow

Absolute Zero wrote:
Guess I'm back for a check. Going through this with a finer-toothed comb than before, I guess?

[Hyperion's SPlatter]
00:09:301 (2,3) - This movement kind of looks like a walk. Increase the distance to accent that it's a dash instead. It's intended to be a walk, since I want to avoid too many dashes in the intro
00:10:335 (4,1) - While I understand you're trying to either make variety in distance or accent the first beat, the huge distancing still seems weird next to 1/4 short slider. There's no 1/4 here... are you modding the right diff?
00:29:990 (1,2,1) - I know the distance increase is meant to emphasize the first beat of the phrase, but it just plays weirdly in the map. Lower distance. Moved 00:29:990 (1,2) - to the right a little
00:41:163 (2,3,1) - Don't you think this is a little difficult? Soften the dash. Reduced a little
00:46:956 (1) - The movement to here feels a little awkward, due to the surprisingly large gap. Moved (1,2) a little closer
01:01:439 (4,5) - Lower distancing here, the larger gap is a little strange and unexpected. Done
01:16:542 (1,2) - I disagree with using the hyper here. I don't feel there's anything that warrants such a strong movement in the music. Heavy drum sound and strong vocal not enough for you? Fits fine to me
01:21:715 - Why cover these notes with the spinner? I think it's a good place to start mapping the notes again. Fair enough, hopefully the spinner isn't too short and weird
01:44:474 (4,5,1) - Kind of a sharp movement here, I would suggest simplifying it. Made this and the next spacings walkable instead of streamed dash
01:46:129 (5,1) - You could make this a HDash to symbolize the change in the rhythm of the vocals. Swapped hdash with 01:44:681 (5,1) - due to weak vocal here
01:55:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you sure platter players won't overshoot (4,5) and miss the hyper to the next combo? I would flip this pattern around so the catcher's momentum is facing left. That means switching the x-coordinates of (2) and (4). Good idea, was wondering what to do to improve this

Thanks for the mod! Also changed up a few potential antiflow+hyper patterns in the last kiai that might have caused trouble later on (:

Platter

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiokara-Bushi192.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42623
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Shiokara-Bushi
TitleUnicode:シオカラ節
Artist:Shiokara-zu
ArtistUnicode:シオカラーズ
Creator:ZiRoX
Version:Hyperion's SPlatter
Source:Splatoon
Tags:JBHyperion MBomb  Magic Bomb nintendo シオカラーズ squid sisters inkling ink octoling 藤井 志帆 Fujii Shiho keity.pop  菊間まり Kikuka Mari Callie Marie  アオリ、ホタル Inkopolis Calamari Inkantation
BeatmapID:821809
BeatmapSetID:333960

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
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ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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ZiRoX

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ZiRoX 2016-11-10T01:17:26+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
[Rainmaker]
00:10:542 (1,2) - Be consistent in spacing and don't make this a Hdash, but 1.69x spacing instead as you do at the start. Done
00:46:956 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure why you've suddenly put a spike of hypers here. You could flip (3) to make the pattern a little more varied. (note that you may have to move (3) to the right to make the jump not too sharp.) Done
01:48:198 (1,2,3,4) - Again, this pattern is kind of repetitive with the back-forth movement. Perhaps you could vary it by making reverse stairs instead. Noice
01:49:439 (4,1) - Perhaps this jump is a little too strong. Lower distancing so it's still a hyper, but the movement is smaller. Done
02:01:232 (4,1) - Move (1) to x=96 to create a larger dash both to (2) and from (4) to make the pattern a bit more similar to 01:08:473 (1,2,3,4). Moved to x:120 instead because x:96 felt a bit tight.

Updated JBH and MB's diffs too.

Absolute Zero

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Absolute Zero 2016-11-13T23:35:38+00:00

No kudosu, recheck
Pretty neat mapset

[Ink Cup]
00:48:611 (1,2,3) - Small thing--I would suggest making these the same distance instead because they're the same distance apart on the timeline.

[MBomb's Squid Salad]
00:11:163 - Now that I think about it, why not add a hitcircle like before? That way, you follow a similar pattern.
01:00:197 (1) and 01:01:025 (3) - Make these 1/2 repeat sliders instead, because the slider end sounds strange hanging by itself. Alternatively, you could make these single hitcircles.

[Hyperion's SPlatter]
00:41:990 (1,2,3) - I personally think these jumps are a little harsh due to them being in a back-forth pattern as well as long dashes. I would lower these distances slightly.
01:04:128 (3) - Perhaps you want to split (3) into a 1/2 slider and a hitcircle. Then, create a dash between the two to kind of mimic what you have going on at 01:03:300 (5,1).
01:34:956 (1,2,3) - I know you probably got this but same comment as 00:41:990 (1,2,3).
01:44:888 (1) - Make this slider tilt 45 degrees to the left to allow the player to continue moving left from 01:44:681 (5).

[Rainmaker]
00:15:300 (4) - Try moving this hitcircle to x=416. It mimics 00:13:853 (1,2) (due to the voices also being the same).
00:42:404 (2,3) - You might increase this distancing slightly. This lowers the difference between the strength of 00:41:990 (1,2) and 00:42:404 (2,3).
01:04:957 (8) - This is more of a stylistic change, but perhaps you may consider moving (8) to x=196. This would probably mean switching the positions of 01:05:163 (1,2) to preserve the dash otherwise (probably means you also have to switch up patterns later).
02:02:680 (4) - Perhaps Ctrl+G the direction of this slider for a little variety.

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