Beginner:
00:15:381 (4,5) - Those two sliders are not very well aligned. Try to move it a bit higher and it would be good.
00:19:381 (1,2) - The blanket between those two notes are not really good, try to rework a little bit on the slider, I'm sure you can give a better visual effect on this
00:34:048 (1) - Please correct that blanket.
00:42:048 (7) - This blanket is not really well done with the previous slider, you should try to rework it ^^
00:49:381 (5) - Blanket out there too.
01:05:244 (8) - Try to move a bit, the end of the reversed slider to the left (the part where there is the little "↓") because the blanket is not really well done.
01:07:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to align those sliders on those parts, because this part seems to be quite randomly placed. Like try to give some curves on the sliders, or let it like that, tbh, if it's your mapping style, then let keep it like that, that's just my opinion ! :3
01:14:844 (6) - Blanket here
01:18:044 (2,3) - Out there, you should rework the flow, because it's pretty hard on a Beginner to put some note without giving flow.
01:33:896 (4) - Blanket !
01:38:467 (1) - Out there, I would recommand you to don't do that, because you know... It could be hard for a beginner, and he would probably don't know that there is a little... stoppy out there, so you should try to do a simple slider, because it seems that it cut the flow of those sliders. You can keep it like this if you want. It's just my opinion.
01:40:753 (3) - The blanket here, try to move at least the slider or the note, it's up to you.
01:47:610 (9) - To give a better visual effect, I would recommand you to use the ctrl+c/ ctrl+v to ctrl+j/h/g to remove this slider, and try to have the same slider form as this slider: 01:45:324 (7) - . Here is a screenshot to give you help: http://puu.sh/qhnW4/18c0d6ff1e.jpg
01:54:467 (5) - This slider got a blanket problem, it looks like there is a bad blanket here, but it looks good on this one, maybe you should try the ctrl+c/ ctrl+v to ctrl+j/h/g command? Here is a screen of how it should be: http://puu.sh/qho6v/5103ff8e7f.jpg
02:01:324 (3,4,5) - Again there is a lack of flow here, don't forget that it's a beginner, so this map should be very basic for starting player, and they have to learn basics, so this map should have a better flow
To be honest, this diff have a very high potential, I'm sure that you will do this, good luck !
If you need something, or asking something that you didn't understand, feel free to ask, it would be a pleasure to help you!
00:15:381 (4,5) - Those two sliders are not very well aligned. Try to move it a bit higher and it would be good.
00:19:381 (1,2) - The blanket between those two notes are not really good, try to rework a little bit on the slider, I'm sure you can give a better visual effect on this
00:34:048 (1) - Please correct that blanket.
00:42:048 (7) - This blanket is not really well done with the previous slider, you should try to rework it ^^
00:49:381 (5) - Blanket out there too.
01:05:244 (8) - Try to move a bit, the end of the reversed slider to the left (the part where there is the little "↓") because the blanket is not really well done.
01:07:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to align those sliders on those parts, because this part seems to be quite randomly placed. Like try to give some curves on the sliders, or let it like that, tbh, if it's your mapping style, then let keep it like that, that's just my opinion ! :3
01:14:844 (6) - Blanket here
01:18:044 (2,3) - Out there, you should rework the flow, because it's pretty hard on a Beginner to put some note without giving flow.
01:33:896 (4) - Blanket !
01:38:467 (1) - Out there, I would recommand you to don't do that, because you know... It could be hard for a beginner, and he would probably don't know that there is a little... stoppy out there, so you should try to do a simple slider, because it seems that it cut the flow of those sliders. You can keep it like this if you want. It's just my opinion.
01:40:753 (3) - The blanket here, try to move at least the slider or the note, it's up to you.
01:47:610 (9) - To give a better visual effect, I would recommand you to use the ctrl+c/ ctrl+v to ctrl+j/h/g to remove this slider, and try to have the same slider form as this slider: 01:45:324 (7) - . Here is a screenshot to give you help: http://puu.sh/qhnW4/18c0d6ff1e.jpg
01:54:467 (5) - This slider got a blanket problem, it looks like there is a bad blanket here, but it looks good on this one, maybe you should try the ctrl+c/ ctrl+v to ctrl+j/h/g command? Here is a screen of how it should be: http://puu.sh/qho6v/5103ff8e7f.jpg
02:01:324 (3,4,5) - Again there is a lack of flow here, don't forget that it's a beginner, so this map should be very basic for starting player, and they have to learn basics, so this map should have a better flow
To be honest, this diff have a very high potential, I'm sure that you will do this, good luck !
If you need something, or asking something that you didn't understand, feel free to ask, it would be a pleasure to help you!