1. DEBUT (1.7 stars, 135 notes)
2. MASTER (4.77 stars, 516 notes)
3. MASTER+ (5.7 stars, 552 notes)
4. PRO (3.77 stars, 355 notes)
5. REGULAR (2.7 stars, 248 notes)

DEBUT = Easy 1.7 Star Difficulty
REGULAR = Normal 2.7 Star Difficulty
PRO = Hard 3.77 Star Difficulty
MATSER = Insane 4.77 Star Difficulty
MATSER+ = Expert 5.7 Star Difficulty

Asahina Momoko wrote:

ウサミン！ウサミン！

Reya wrote:

hello Chata, its my m4m for you. xd
General

Nothing

DEBUT

00:15:371 (1,2) - a bit cosmetic change, maybe you replace 00:15:371 (1) - a bit left? Its looks more better
00:19:959 (2) - my opinion is - this slider to high in editor is no problem. but, accept your advice
00:39:724 - you must start from this tick, becuase it have a really strong beat and new vocal section started here.i'm getting singularity in the 'usamin usamin' vocal part. it remains for the time being
00:41:136 - same ^same as. in the 'vvvvwa^q^' voice
00:52:430 - same ^ check all pls, It is the most important thing in this diff, because flow and objects looks great same as
00:54:901 (4) - a bit high please ( x144, y288 )
01:05:136 (3) - looks a bit wierd xd, just make it more beautiful http://makina.s-ul.eu/MWftsBiI nope!
diff looks great, but i think you have problem with ticks. for example - 01:31:254 (2) - finish on big tick sounds good on that section, but 00:15:724 (2) - not good.
Its only my opinion.

REGULAR

00:12:901 - 00:15:018 - why you not mappe this section? btw, unused greenlines 00:14:048 - 00:14:312 -00:13:254 - ummm...it so little easter egg https://youtu.be/Mp6xrDyMySw?t=23s. and unused greenlines is not unrankable issue. is not be a problem/color]
00:17:136 - same problem with big ticks in first song section
00:36:195 (3) - change form, http://makina.s-ul.eu/fbrwpEjS
00:43:959 - its not a good thing to skip strong beats. It needs objectthat becomes too difficult to this diff.. that's not big importance than vocal imo
00:55:254 - ^same as
00:55:430 (1) - looks good, but idk, regular means advanced diff? This slider have problem with "in what direction it moves". Fix it please, hard for newbiessaving this. i'm recognize that.
01:48:901 (1) - looks not very good xd I like this (*´﹃｀*) u-samin
This diff are good too.

PRO

00:16:430 (3) - maybe make its symmertical? its looks more kawaii~ xd ( 00:16:959 (4) - a bit left too ) http://makina.s-ul.eu/lQptFHey 00:16:959 (4) - move to left. but, do not make symmetry(´﹃｀)
00:31:959 (3) - whoa, this object too low, just up themnice
00:46:783 (1,2,3,4) - why you not used all beats? i hear 1\2 < 00:48:195 (1,2,3,4) - its have same rhythmbecause, that's boring =3= saving this
00:55:959 (2) - same problem in regularit is semi insane. is not problem to insane players. maybe
nice hard xd

PRO

00:23:842 (1) - cosmetic changes http://makina.s-ul.eu/CzRSYHz3
00:53:136 (3) - xd
00:58:077 (1,4) - xd
01:00:195 (4) - just create more beautiful sliders xd
01:38:312 (1) - |common all diff's make '?' form
01:47:136 (4) - cosmetic changes
01:58:783 (1,2) - idk, this section sounds like 1\6, but its not 1\6. Actually, its not 1\4. We need bn or qat to check that ok. i'll check that.

Map are really good. I love this song so much. Hope its get ranked <3 Good luck.
(ty for m4m)

Neoskylove wrote:

m4m.

[debut]
안쓰이는 녹색선 제거해주세요. 사실 볼륨이나 sv같은 특수한것 외의 미사용 타임라인은 언랭이 아닙니다
00:28:430 (3,4) - 이런 흐름은 정말 어려울 것 같다고 생각됩니다. 3번 슬라이더의 프름에 맞게 4번 글라이더를 배치해주세요. 보류. 특별히 어렵다고는 생각안되네요
00:40:077 - 여기에도 비트가 추가되었으면 좋겠습니다. 여기는 패스
00:55:254 - ^ 여기는 추가
02:00:371 (1,2) -사실상 이지난이도인데 1/2 슬라이더 2개 연속으로 붙이는건 조금 아니라고 생각됩니다.마지막 노트라 큰 상관없다 생각하는데 반발이 심할시 지울게요
[regular]
00:23:489 (3,1) - 갑자기 스택하니 이상한 느낌이 났습니다. 스택 빼주세요. 그리고 뒤에 1번도 뉴콤 지워주시는걸 권장합니다.이상하다고 느껴질 스택은 아니라 생각되네요. 뉴콤보는 지움
00:33:371 (3,5) - 오버랩 보기 안좋네요. 피해주세요.
01:56:312 (2,3,1) - 거리가 안맞는것 긑습니다. 확인해주세ㅛ.이상없음

[pro]
00:41:371 - 보컬 생각해서 비트 추가 해주세요. 1/8요?
01:49:606 (3,4,5,6,7) - 잘 가다가 갑자기 7번에서 흐름을 꺾어버리신 이유를 모르겠습니다. 흐름에 맞게 96.312 로 옮겨주세요.단조로움을 피하기 위한 꺾기입니다

[master]
01:07:783 (1) - 강조음이니깐 앞에 패턴처럼 거리 띄워ㅅ주시면 좋을 것 같아요

굳럭

ekafjr wrote:

m4m

[REGULER]
00:44:489 (2,3) - not perfect blanket
just it lol

[pro]
00:12:195 (3) - i think need nc at here for readability maybeI don't think so
00:55:959 (2) - hmm direction not clear make a confused
01:34:783 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ahh so cute :V of course :3


[master]
00:12:901 (1) - need more emphasize at here
00:14:312 (1) - so long why instrument soft at here :v?

aahh i cant mod fine map
so bad mod lol
if my mod its so bad dont give me kudosu :v

Lami wrote:

pp

02:13 *-Chata- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1022070 Abe Nana(CV : Miyake Marie) - Marchen Debut!]
02:13 -Chata-: 모딩해주시면 뭐든할게여
02:13 Lami: ㅋㅋ 님..
02:13 Lami: 오프스크린부터
02:13 Lami: 고치시는건 어떨까요?
02:14 -Chata-: 그게 머징..
02:14 Lami: 님..
02:14 Lami: 하면 안되는거요..
02:14 -Chata-: 뉴비라 그런걸 몰라여..
02:14 -Chata-: 하나 있던거 고쳤는데 그거말고 또있나
02:15 Lami: 01:48:901 (1) - 곧 오프스크린
02:15 Lami: 한단계 낮은 난이도 00:59:136 (1) - ㄹㅇ 오프스크린
02:15 -Chata-: 올
02:16 -Chata-: 써주심 될듯
02:16 Lami: ㅋㅋ
02:16 Lami: 그냥 여다가 적고 irc로그올리면됨?
02:17 Lami: soft-hitfinish11.wav, soft-sliderslide.wav 안쓰는 힛사
02:19 Lami: 제가 칠때 자꾸 틀려서 짱남 00:38:665 (3,4,1) -
02:20 -Chata-: 흠
02:20 -Chata-: 왜틀리심
02:20 -Chata-: 근데 저도틀림
02:20 Lami: 님 일단
02:20 Lami: 저런 점프는..매우..
02:21 -Chata-: 00:49:959 (3,4,1) - 여긴 안틀리던데..
02:21 Lami: 아 저기는 더\틀림
02:21 Lami: 1/4간격을 중지로치는저에게는..
02:22 Lami: 00:35:489 (1,2,3) - 치는느낌이 좀 1/4간격같은데 1/2임..
02:23 Lami: 00:45:371 (1,2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/qmaqY.jpg
02:25 Lami: 00:29:136 (1,2) - 랑 01:52:430 (1,2,3,4) - 랑 같게?
02:25 Lami: 모딩할게없음
02:26 -Chata-: 00:35:489 (1,2,3) -
02:26 -Chata-: 여기는가 1/4 간격같다는게
02:27 Lami: 간격 존나 짧아서요
02:27 -Chata-: 훔.. 그렇게 짧은가
02:27 Lami: 앞에서 1/4슬라뒤에는 전부 1/4간격으로 다음노트가 왔었음.,.
02:28 -Chata-: 간격 늘렷고
02:28 -Chata-: 00:29:136 (1,2) - 이것도 연타로 하라구염?
02:29 Lami: 그냥
02:29 Lami: 뒤에랑 똑같은 파트인데
02:29 Lami: 뒤에는 점프연타인데 앞에는 그냥 1/4슬라 2개라서
02:29 Lami: 좀 차이 많이나는거같아서여
02:29 -Chata-: 뒤에파트가 은근 살짝 더 어려워서
02:29 -Chata-: 연타패턴을 넣긴햇는데..
02:30 Lami: 님 하고싶은대로 하심될듯
02:30 Lami: 00:57:371 (1,3) - NC스왑해야되지않나
02:31 -Chata-: 00:38:665 (3,4,1) - 우사밍 우사밍은
02:31 Lami: 모르겟다
02:31 -Chata-: 테스트 플레이어좀 찾아봄
02:31 -Chata-: 스왑함
02:32 Lami: 01:37:606 (1) - 이거 2 모양으로 고쳐야됨
02:33 -Chata-: nope
02:33 -Chata-: 나나는 17살임
02:34 Lami: 아니 진짜나이를 적어야죠..
02:34 -Chata-: 나나는 진짜로 17살인데..
02:36 Lami: 님 난이도 레이팅 왜끝에 어떤건 .77이고 어떤건 왜 .7이;ㅁ
02:36 -Chata-: 다 만들고보니 .7~인건 77로 끌어올려맞추고
02:36 -Chata-: .6~7인건 .7이 되었음..
02:37 -Chata-: pro는 상당한 역작입니다
02:38 Lami: 프로에 뭔짓하심?
02:38 -Chata-: 서클 177 슬라 177 난이도 3.77
02:39 Lami: ㅋㅋ님 몬스트라타냐구요...
02:39 -Chata-: 몬스트라타보다 더할듯한데
02:39 -Chata-: 몬스트라타는 밑난이도는 포기했으니까..
02:43 Lami: 모딩할게없음 걍 접겟음
02:43 Lami: ㅋㅋ..
02:43 Lami: 저도 밑난이도는 포기함
02:43 Lami: 모딩을..
02:44 -Chata-: ㅋㅋ
02:44 -Chata-: 충분한듯

Leaf wrote:

[PRO]

01:31:254 (3,4) - ctrl+g ㄲ?놉
01:52:077 (2) - ^놉. 하드에 좀 안맞는듯함

[MASTER]

01:22:783 (4,1) - 둘중하나 복사해서 ctrl+g,h 하면 더 좋을듯 의도된 슬라이더
01:39:371 (1) - x:196 y:24 쯤에 놔보는건 어떨까용? 두 점프패턴이 다르게끔 의도됨

[MASTER+]

00:53:136 (5,6) - 1/2에서 5점슬라는 전 별로같다 생각함 이건걍 무시하셔도됨모양 괜찮다 상각되서 이대로
01:17:665 (7,1) - 수평맞추기 ㄲ?　 맞춤


맵을 너무 잘만드셔서 구경만 하다갑니다...

rui wrote:

ミミミンミミミンウーサミン
[DEBUT]
00:21:371 (1) - ほんとくだらない事だけど1grid下げて1マス下げると下のスライダーと平行になるよ
00:40:077 (x) - ここ音欲しい。単発にするとSD上がるのは確認したから無理やり感あるけど00:40:077 (2,3) - を1/2スライダーにまとめてしまう?
[REGULAR]
00:11:136 (1) - 何も音がないところから始まるのは変な感じ。00:11:312 (1) - から始めてスライダーでつむぐ感じに音とっていい気がします http://puu.sh/qxtAO.jpg
01:16:783 (2,3) - 「うさみん」と「パワー」は違う単語だし、面白みにかけてしまうが1/2スライダー2つに分けたほうがいい
[PRO]
00:11:136 (1) - 音ないところから始まるの違和感あるので00:11:312 から始めたほうがいいと思う
00:56:665 (1,2) - 早めのスライダーからの狭い距離 + overlapでかなりやりにくいので、こだわりがなければ(139,168)あたりに移動することをお薦めする
[MASTER]
俺ができないだけかもしれないけどAR9.2は早くない?AR9.0で十分な配置な気がする9.0では遅すぎる気もするけど、まあいい
00:11:136 (1) - 同じ
[MASTER+]
00:11:136 (1) - 同じ

特にまともな指摘箇所もみつからなかったので星投げて消えます
グッドラック

Mei wrote:

sorry for being sooo late

[REGULAR]

1. 00:57:724 (4,5) - change to a slider will be better?

[PRO]

1. 00:13:254 you should map this part as wellummm.. it is just ester egg

[Master]

1. 00:20:842 (4) - this kick slider should start from 00:20:665 ?　no. 00:20:842 - this red line have surely a beat
2. 00:17:842 (1,2,3,4) - try this I don't like pattern like this
3. 00:22:783 (1) - ctrl+g?
4. 00:26:665 (3,4) - too far? it seems not imo
5. 01:57:548 (3) - NC here is better

[Master+]

1. 00:18:459 (4) - remove this note would sound better for me
2. 00:35:489 (1,2) - use a 1/2 slider here is totally fine imo
3. 00:36:459 (3) - remove this note?
   
   all not fixed. that's increase the objects are break the balance imo. mainly 'Goroawase'

(つд⊂) sorry for short mod, ☆ instead

DaPiePiece wrote:

m4m

GENERAL

Pretty good mapset. Overall what needs fixing is flow and overlaps, as well as the difficulty of MASTER+

DEBUT

01:14:312 (2,3) - overlap?
01:40:430 (3,4) - maybe unstack and make this flow better

REGULAR

00:12:548 (3,4) - make this flow better
00:15:371 (1,2) - overlap
01:15:371 (2,3) - stack these
01:18:901 (4,5,1) - stack these
01:19:959 (3,1,2) - make this flow better
01:25:959 (6,1) - overlap unneeded

This diff flows the best

PRO

00:29:489 (7,8,1) - pattern a bit too hard for that difficulty
01:23:842 (3,4) - overlap unneeded

Great diff. Flows really well, mapped really well.

MASTER

00:11:312 (1) - Move this to the left a bit for better spacing and flow. Maybe make it curve into the 2 after
00:15:724 (1) - ctrl+g this? Flows better.
00:17:136 (1,2,1,2) - This doesn't flow that well, I'd change the pattern a bit
00:20:489 (3,4) - space this better
00:21:371 (1,2) - move this more down and to the right
00:29:489 (3) - curve this into the next circle
00:42:371 (8,1) - overlap
00:42:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix the spacing
00:43:959 (7,1) - overlap
00:50:665 (3,1,2) - same
01:17:136 (5) - curve this
01:24:195 (4) - I'd curve this
01:32:489 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this look nicer
01:34:342 (6,1,2) - same

This diff is well mapped, the only problem is spacing and flow. Improve those 2 and the map will be great.

MASTER+

00:18:459 (4,1) - move this up for better flow
00:23:665 (2,1) - overlap
00:25:430 (4,5,1) - stack
00:28:254 (4,5,1) - same
00:41:489 (4,5,6,1) - this flow badly
00:49:959 (3,4,1) - imo, unplayable. Change this pattern
00:54:548 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - make this look nicer
01:42:548 (1,3) - overlap unneeded
01:44:489 (4,5,1) - there is no triple in the song at this point. Make it a low slider velocity slider if you want a cursor stop there
01:45:018 (3,1,4) - overlap
01:48:724 (4,5,1) - stack
01:51:548 (4,5,1) - same
01:52:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice idea, but plays not so well, just stack them
01:54:371 (4,5,1) - stack

I see that you wanted to make a harder difficulty. It's nicely mapped, but turns out to be unplayable and overmapped. This is, in comparison to the other diffs, is the worst difficulty. It's not bad, but it needs fixing. For example, patterns like these 01:54:371 (4,5,1) - tend to be unplayable, and are better of stacked at this difficulty. If you compare this diff to other 5.7 stars, you see a clear difference in difficulty. So as I said before, make the patterns more playable, and maybe reduce the spacing on some of the jumps or sliders.

GL on the rank. Also god damn the song is catchy!

Mamayu wrote:

(ΦωΦ)ﾌﾌﾌ…

DEBUT

1. 00:21:371 (1,2) - 音変わらんしサークルで統一したい スライダーにした。1.71になっていろいろ変えてたらこうなってた
2. 00:33:724 (2) - ここ00:34:077 - から00:34:254 - の間音無いしちょっと違和感を感じるかな 私ならこう取るんだけどどう？？
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:06:548 (5) - NC?
4. 01:40:430 (3) - 最易diffでここだけstackってのは流石に避けたい

REGULAR

1. 00:27:724 (3,4,5) - どうせなら「ミ」「ミ」「ミン」で叩かせたくない？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:30:548 (3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:33:371 (3) - ここわざと？ ここで止める理由があんまりないっていうか・・・ あとここらへんREGULARだけボーカル合わせになってるの少し変に感じたからメロディーに合わせたいって思ったエラーだった
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:53:842 (3,4,5) - same as 00:27:724 (3,4,5) -
5. 01:57:371 (1,2,3) - ボーカルが云々っての合ってるんじゃない？

PRO

1. さすがにAR8.7はやり過ぎじゃない? AR7~8のdiffが1つもないのはちょっとまずい気がする・・・ 7.7にしない?するつもりはなかったけど、7.7に惹かれた
2. 00:44:665 (2,1) - ぶっちゃけどっちでもいいけどスペーシングもうちょっと欲しいなあって思った
3. 01:57:371 (1,2,3) - れぎゅらーとおなじれぎゅらーとおなじ

MASTER

1. 00:20:489 (3,4) - う～んなんか不自然 やっぱり00:20:665 - からリバーススライダー置きたい
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:02:842 (6) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが若干流れいい・・・?このままのほうが好き。
3. 01:20:577 (5) - もうちょっと(4)に寄せない?ちょっと叩き辛そう少しだけだぞ？
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:27:459 (2,1) - さすがに離れ過ぎかなあ ただでさえ青線から始まってるリバーススライダー使った特殊なリズムなわけだし01:27:018 (1,2,1) - のDSは同じかそれに近いものにしたい2012年にこのパターンを使い始めてこれでミスるひとや難しいと言ったひとはいなかった。むしろ単発感覚で叩いたほうが繋ぎやすい。このままで
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:39:018 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? ここらへん全部下から上のAIMにした方がやりやすいし綺麗だと思う
6. 01:47:136 (4) - 序盤の同じとこはNCついてるしここもつけていいかも
7. 01:58:430 (4) - ここ普通に1/4じゃない？ 01:58:430 (4,1) - が同じにしたくないにしても1/6じゃなくて1/8が妥当な気がする あと少しずつvolumeあげていくのもいいかも自分お耳では1/6ではない。でも01:58:783 (1) - こことは多分違うし差を置きたい。前に01:58:783 (1) - この後の部分が1/6じゃないかって言われたけど1/4で合ってるし、このままでいいと思う。volumeのことは少し失敗したけど（OSUのボリュウーム設定のせい）77％が気に入るし、ランクインに響かないかぎりこうしてよう

hitsoundまで1の位が7なのは草生えた探せばもっとあるぞ
MAS+はクリアできないからパス！
GL~