yanaginagi - Haru Modoki (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

Niko-nyan

Joined June 2011

newyams99 wrote:
Capital Letters=finishers
Niko's Muzukashii

Suggestions:
00:07:294 (18) - Change to K. K finishers give the most sound, so I think it should be the one that introduces the first high time of the song. - i don't think so, because the next k a bit lower than the finisher

00:16:432 - Add a k. Making this part the same as the Oni isn't a big deal. -Making a break also a big deal for muzukashii player

00:17:121 - Same Thing. - ^

00:45:742 (116,117,118) - Switch the colours for these three hits. - it's fit imo but i add few note

Optional:
00:18:328 (54) - Add a finisher to this hit. - nope because no cymbal from drum

00:58:673 - This part lacks in difficulty, both in the Muzukashii and the Oni. Make them harder. I'd make it a ddk 1/4 triplet at 00:58:673. Then, 1/2 a beat after put a d, then another 1/2 beat later, a k, then every 1/2 beat after that, some d's. Starting from 00:58:673, it should look like ddk d k d d d k. (Spaces are worth a 1/4 beat). - i don't agree with this very much, the flow of the drum / guitar doesn't fit for muzu or oni that's why.

00:59:880 (152) - Add a finisher for this hit. - NO CYMBAL BAKA :<<<<

01:26:087 - Idk, but I think the kiai time should last until here. Your choice.

Niko's Oni

Suggestions:
00:07:294 (21) - Change to K, for same reasoning as Muzukashii. After changing this, I'd recommend putting in three 1/4 d's between hits 20 and 21 to make a 1/4 stream of ddddK. - same reason

00:09:880 - Add a hit, your choice of colour. I suggest a d. - i won't add anything

00:12:638 - Same Thing. I suggest a d. - ^

00:15:397 - Same Thing. I suggest a k. - ^

00:16:432 (66) - Change to k. - k

00:49:190 - Add a k. - won't

00:49:707 - Add a d. - ^

01:08:501 (251,252) - Switch colours for both of these hits. - it's fit imo

01:10:570 - Same Thing. ^

01:10:656 - Same Thing. - ^

01:12:983 (268) - Change to k. - the instrument's sound doesn't increase

01:13:673 (270) - Change to d. - the instrument's sound increase in here

01:17:466 (286,287,288,289,290,291) - I think this should match the rhythm exactly the same as hits 01:16:432 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285).
Optional:
00:39:535 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - Where'd the ddddd stream in the Muzukashii here go? You should replace it with that, but the current rhythm is fine to. - i want to make a diferent thing :>

00:58:673 - This part lacks in difficulty, as said before. In the Oni, I think you could add a stream starting from this point all the way to hit 00:59:880 (205). Starting from this point, every 1/4 beat there should be in this order a ddkdddkkddddddk. If you don't understand, PM me in game. - same reason (muzukashii)

00:59:880 (218) - Change to finisher, if you want to. - nothing to add finisher ;w;

01:26:087 - As said before, I think the kiai time should end here, but it's your choice.

I love Yanaginagi <3 Great song from a great anime, hope it gets ranked

Oni

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ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

Welp
Im not finish with my EXAM
Please Hold on the Modding till my Exam is Finished
Thank You!
Edit : Exam Finished! Will update At Saturday

Last edited by Haruto 10 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

newyams99

694 posts

Joined December 2013

newyams99 10 years ago

Niko-nyan wrote:

newyams99 wrote:
Capital Letters=finishers
Niko's Muzukashii

Suggestions:
00:07:294 (18) - Change to K. K finishers give the most sound, so I think it should be the one that introduces the first high time of the song. - i don't think so, because the next k a bit lower than the finisher

00:16:432 - Add a k. Making this part the same as the Oni isn't a big deal. -Making a break also a big deal for muzukashii player

00:17:121 - Same Thing. - ^

00:45:742 (116,117,118) - Switch the colours for these three hits. - it's fit imo but i add few note

Optional:
00:18:328 (54) - Add a finisher to this hit. - nope because no cymbal from drum

00:58:673 - This part lacks in difficulty, both in the Muzukashii and the Oni. Make them harder. I'd make it a ddk 1/4 triplet at 00:58:673. Then, 1/2 a beat after put a d, then another 1/2 beat later, a k, then every 1/2 beat after that, some d's. Starting from 00:58:673, it should look like ddk d k d d d k. (Spaces are worth a 1/4 beat). - i don't agree with this very much, the flow of the drum / guitar doesn't fit for muzu or oni that's why.

00:59:880 (152) - Add a finisher for this hit. - NO CYMBAL BAKA :<<<<

01:26:087 - Idk, but I think the kiai time should last until here. Your choice.

Niko's Oni

Suggestions:
00:07:294 (21) - Change to K, for same reasoning as Muzukashii. After changing this, I'd recommend putting in three 1/4 d's between hits 20 and 21 to make a 1/4 stream of ddddK. - same reason

00:09:880 - Add a hit, your choice of colour. I suggest a d. - i won't add anything

00:12:638 - Same Thing. I suggest a d. - ^

00:15:397 - Same Thing. I suggest a k. - ^

00:16:432 (66) - Change to k. - k

00:49:190 - Add a k. - won't

00:49:707 - Add a d. - ^

01:08:501 (251,252) - Switch colours for both of these hits. - it's fit imo

01:10:570 - Same Thing. ^

01:10:656 - Same Thing. - ^

01:12:983 (268) - Change to k. - the instrument's sound doesn't increase

01:13:673 (270) - Change to d. - the instrument's sound increase in here

01:17:466 (286,287,288,289,290,291) - I think this should match the rhythm exactly the same as hits 01:16:432 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285).
Optional:
00:39:535 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - Where'd the ddddd stream in the Muzukashii here go? You should replace it with that, but the current rhythm is fine to. - i want to make a diferent thing :>

00:58:673 - This part lacks in difficulty, as said before. In the Oni, I think you could add a stream starting from this point all the way to hit 00:59:880 (205). Starting from this point, every 1/4 beat there should be in this order a ddkdddkkddddddk. If you don't understand, PM me in game. - same reason (muzukashii)

00:59:880 (218) - Change to finisher, if you want to. - nothing to add finisher ;w;

01:26:087 - As said before, I think the kiai time should end here, but it's your choice.

I love Yanaginagi <3 Great song from a great anime, hope it gets ranked

Oni

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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Haruto_Aizawa
Version:Niko's Muzukashii
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:oregairu My teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU zoku my youth love comedy snafu yahari ore no sheisun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Niko-nyan Frans_Niko NewIpas Anxient
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k thx for replying. Most of my mods were ignored xD Still pretty new (and not that great) at modding, but gonna learn some stuff from your arguments.

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

-Kanzaki wrote:
Hello from my queue.

Hard :

00:03:328 (1) - delete this circle (following the vocal is better because the vocal more powerfull than the piano)and then 00:03:673 (5) - 00:04:018 (6) - add circle to this points. no, i want to keep the current

Start that heart slider at 00:04:363 (7) - and finish it at 00:06:432 here if possible.(why not follow the both vocal and that wind sound instrean of following only wind) well i think i want to keep this sorry

00:59:880 (1) - use faster SV 1.10 is good i think i dont want to make it more harder, its a light Hard btw

01:10:914 (1) - use even more faster SV 1.20 and then of course fix the sliders. SV not changed sorry, fixed the sliders

01:25:397 (3) - End this reverse slider at 01:25:742 and then add a circle at 01:25:914 (4) (deleted that last slider btw) it looks fit! thanks!

01:26:432 (5) - Add a reverse slider http://puu.sh/i70P5/709ac0f5e4.jpg and then start the spin at 01:27:207 (1) - nope, sorry

Nice map, i like this song escpeccialy that non stop drum part thanks!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~

Easy
Not much to say here, it is good!
00:54:363 (1) - Clap in the repeat sounds awkward
01:08:156 (5) - New combo.
01:13:673 (1,2,3,4) - Clock-looking like pattern can be improved to something else. i dont get the point sorry
01:20:052 (2) - Move the second anchor point bit down, so that the blanket can be improved.
01:23:328 (5) - Move the second anchor point to the right 1 grid. Blanket can be improved again. fixed on my own, thanks!

Normal
00:04:363 (1) - Instead of a spinner starting here, why not a circle here? And move this to 00:04:535, and make it last until 00:06:087. keeping the current one sorry
00:21:604 (1) - My opinion, but this can be a single circle. okay i agree with it
00:24:363 (1) - ^^ (^)
01:21:949 (1,2,3,4) - Clock-looking like pattern can be improved to something else. i dont get the point, sorry

Hard
00:23:501 (8) - I don't suggest a repeat here. Instead you can add a circle at 00:24:190 to fill up the missing space. keep current one, sorry
00:24:880 (3,4) - I don't recommend you to overlap extended sliders like this. You may as well just make some spaces between these 2.
00:31:776 (5) - Same reason like 00:23:501 (8). applied
01:25:914 (1) - My opinion again, but I think this should end 1/4 space afterwards. Move the timing point also. changed with something else

Good mapset I can't say much... GL! Thanks!

Thanks guys for the mods!

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 10 years ago

-Hakurei- wrote:
may i go for a round 2 mod?

[Ipas' Insane]
00:17:638 (1) - not really fit with the note using 1/8 ~ This one is being noticed by a BN, and suggest me to use this slider like this way, so no changes . I'm using 1/6, not 1/8 though @@
00:28:673 (2) - ummm... that doesn't fit with 1/8 ~ ^
00:41:949 (1) - tbh, i don't think finish is really fit with this note
00:43:328 (1) - ^
00:50:225 (1) - is it just me or there's something not fitable according to the hitsound?
00:58:501 (1) - remove this?
01:01:259 (1) - feels not right with finish
01:08:932 (2,3,4,5) - up a bit so the Insane players can handle this easily ~ I didn't get this one, no changes
01:12:294 (1) - not good with finish
01:13:673 (1) - ^
01:15:052 (1) - ^
01:25:914 (7) - i'd suggest you set the end of the slider to 1/1 (lower the slider speed for this) ~ I like the way it is, no changes
gotta need a hitsound mod for this
GL! ~ Thanks

-Kanzaki wrote:
Hello from my queue.

Ipas' Insane :

00:03:328 (1,2) - delete both and 00:03:673 (3) - create a reverse slider which ends at 00:04:363 and then start the spin at 00:04:449 (1) ~ No, it's fine

00:15:914 (2) - 00:16:087 (3) - add circle or a slider. ~ I'm supposed to use break here

00:16:432 (4) - 00:16:776 (5) - 00:17:121 (1) - 00:17:466 (2) - add circle ~ ^

00:45:742 (5,6,1) - what happened the distance here

00:52:466 (4,1) - ^

00:52:638 (1,2) - you use this distance and then 00:52:811 (2,3) - what is this distance

00:59:880 (1) - use faster SV 1.10 is good i think ~ No

01:10:914 (1) - use even more faster SV 1.20 and then of course fix the sliders. ~ No

01:10:914 (1) - 01:12:294 (1) - 01:13:673 (1) - 01:15:052 (1) - this sliders are so for this part.this part is the most excited part(Drum never stops at this part when listened carefully.) dont give that much break at this part more single tap or short sliders. ~ No changes, you said that it is fine though

Uhhh, At least I had a mood to reply mods xD
Non-replied : Applied
http://puu.sh/ilqAN/7e2ccdc139.zip
Go rank~

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

I think Everything is Fine now
Will call a std|taiko BN then!

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 10 years ago

Moddu

[Easy]

00:15:570 (3) - Shouldn't this be a new combo?

00:20:570 (3,1,3,4) - Look at these, same guitar + drum and rhythm, but check how you did the combo, it should really be more consistent.

00:34:363 (3) - Why does the end of this slider is a clap instead of a whistle like these 00:20:570 (3,3,2,1,2) - , same drum sound + guitar.

00:44:707 (1,2,3) - How about all these in one combo? Because this sound 00:46:087 (3) - mostly look like is a finish of the drum before.

01:02:638 (1,2,3,1) - This is easy, but the flow is a bit weird compare to the whole difficulty. Try doing the pattern with mouse, like here 01:02:638 (1,2) - , need to do a huge turning to go to (2).

01:21:949 (4) - Uwahh I think you forgot an NC here XD.

[Normal]

Carefull of your NC, it really feel a bit random, probably what I explain in Easy could help you see that a bit in normal. Can call me back to fully recheck on NC, want you to try and see for yourself 1st :3

00:24:707 (2,3) - You were really carefull about your spacing, mostly easy, is like really exact 1.10x

!! In normal, is mostly around 1.00, but these 2 make a 0.84x which is close to 0.80x or 0.90x. You probably want to fix that even if is not detect by AImods.

00:31:259 (2,3,4) - Try to give more break to normal player so can feel more the guitar? This rhythm with the guitar should be the same as 00:20:570 (3,4) - and 00:23:328 (5,6) - or 00:34:018 (2,3) - .

01:09:621 - Hahaha that's a lots of funny slider point, I find it cute~ x3. But um I think is always more precise when you just put a few important one like this http://puu.sh/iBcer.jpg to make it more symetrie in the curve. Anyway the thing I want to really point out is, put your red point on the circle here http://puu.sh/iBckT.jpg , I'm pretty sure your trying to fit the drum XD.

01:16:432 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Give more break for normal player, this really make a huge long snake~ XD.

[Hard]

00:35:742 (2,1) - This feel really rush, you try to stack them, but they aren't really stack because you made 2 slider instead of copie paste, try copie paste then press Ctrl + g, to flip it.

00:47:466 (1,2,3) - This honnest look like it took you a while to do, but I'm really unsure about this pattern, can be really weird for FL player because on slider 1 it have a circle on it in-game @.@, really suggest avoiding such overlap. http://puu.sh/iB7Pf.jpg

00:59:305 (1) - I'm pretty sure your trying to match that triple drum sound =w=, but is wrongly snapped. And the drum here isn't the same rhythm, you can hear don don...(delay) DON! LOL I hope you understand XD I so baka! Here how the snapping look http://puu.sh/iB8pc.jpg, is on 1/6. Drum sound : 00:59:363 - , 00:59:420 - and 00:59:535 - . ALSO tell Anxient and Ipas that they did the same error, important to fix snap issue.

01:14:363 (3,2) - This overlap really don't look great in-game :S : http://puu.sh/iB8Bl.jpg .

01:15:052 (1,2,3,4) - You really should take time making these pattern more XD, because 01:15:742 (3,4) - these are touching while not the other, should rotate it more.

01:21:776 - to 01:25:914 - is ok somethimes puting a note in the center and map around, but since your distance spacing is really low on all the hard difficulty, the end really feel way to crowd. I'm pretty sure you can make something that look nicer here, take your time, anyway is the end so you won't ruin your pattern after this, since is only a spinner.

01:21:949 (1,4,2,2,4) - Also if you want to make these in the center and map around, always try to really stack these. You can click on the point I mention and see that they aren't all stack together in the center.

01:25:914 (4) - maybe this make a soft finish or normal instead of drum, since can hear the cymbal sound clear, and the drum that continue isn't the same sound as the drum finish you put here 01:25:397 (3) - . Also you did it on Normal and Easy.

Haruto, nice jobs improving from the lastest map I saw from you. Less crowded and hitsound improved :3. The only thing is just, you probably want to put spacing a bit higher on Hard, it doesn't feel as crowded as your previous map, but the note really feel to close ><.
Keep it up harutoo

! Really happy about the improvement !!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

Julie

Julie wrote:
[Easy]

00:15:570 (3) - Shouldn't this be a new combo? i dont know ._. i think yes? will consider this

00:20:570 (3,1,3,4) - Look at these, same guitar + drum and rhythm, but check how you did the combo, it should really be more consistent. okie fixed

00:34:363 (3) - Why does the end of this slider is a clap instead of a whistle like these 00:20:570 (3,3,2,1,2) - , same drum sound + guitar. x__x i forgot to change it, changed anyway

00:44:707 (1,2,3) - How about all these in one combo? Because this sound 00:46:087 (3) - mostly look like is a finish of the drum before.

01:02:638 (1,2,3,1) - This is easy, but the flow is a bit weird compare to the whole difficulty. Try doing the pattern with mouse, like here 01:02:638 (1,2) - , need to do a huge turning to go to (2). actually i dont understand what are you pointing out, but what i fix is ctrl+<'ed (1) and rotate it a bit, then make (2) blanket with (1)

01:21:949 (4) - Uwahh I think you forgot an NC here XD. fixed xD

[Normal]

Carefull of your NC, it really feel a bit random, probably what I explain in Easy could help you see that a bit in normal. Can call me back to fully recheck on NC, want you to try and see for yourself 1st :3 sometimes i NC it when there's a new Vocal/Lyric of the song and sometimes i NC it in the Big Tick

00:24:707 (2,3) - You were really carefull about your spacing, mostly easy, is like really exact 1.10x !! In normal, is mostly around 1.00, but these 2 make a 0.84x which is close to 0.80x or 0.90x. You probably want to fix that even if is not detect by AImods.

00:31:259 (2,3,4) - Try to give more break to normal player so can feel more the guitar? This rhythm with the guitar should be the same as 00:20:570 (3,4) - and 00:23:328 (5,6) - or 00:34:018 (2,3) - .

01:09:621 - Hahaha that's a lots of funny slider point, I find it cute~ x3. But um I think is always more precise when you just put a few important one like this http://puu.sh/iBcer.jpg to make it more symetrie in the curve. Anyway the thing I want to really point out is, put your red point on the circle here http://puu.sh/iBckT.jpg , I'm pretty sure your trying to fit the drum XD.

01:16:432 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Give more break for normal player, this really make a huge long snake~ XD. FIXED ALL OF YOU POINT OUT XD, btw fixed too the spacing hue. lol

[Hard]

00:35:742 (2,1) - This feel really rush, you try to stack them, but they aren't really stack because you made 2 slider instead of copie paste, try copie paste then press Ctrl + g, to flip it.

00:47:466 (1,2,3) - This honnest look like it took you a while to do, but I'm really unsure about this pattern, can be really weird for FL player because on slider 1 it have a circle on it in-game @.@, really suggest avoiding such overlap. http://puu.sh/iB7Pf.jpg aaa i dont know what i have to do right now @@

00:59:305 (1) - I'm pretty sure your trying to match that triple drum sound =w=, but is wrongly snapped. And the drum here isn't the same rhythm, you can hear don don...(delay) DON! LOL I hope you understand XD Im so baka! Here how the snapping look http://puu.sh/iB8pc.jpg, is on 1/6. Drum sound : 00:59:363 - , 00:59:420 - and 00:59:535 - . ALSO tell Anxient and Ipas that they did the same error, important to fix snap issue. oh...OH!!, now i get it!, thanks for pointing out!

01:14:363 (3,2) - This overlap really don't look great in-game :S : http://puu.sh/iB8Bl.jpg . fixed!

01:15:052 (1,2,3,4) - You really should take time making these pattern more XD, because 01:15:742 (3,4) - these are touching while not the other, should rotate it more. fixed on my own owo

01:21:776 - to 01:25:914 - is ok somethimes puting a note in the center and map around, but since your distance spacing is really low on all the hard difficulty, the end really feel way to crowd. I'm pretty sure you can make something that look nicer here, take your time, anyway is the end so you won't ruin your pattern after this, since is only a spinner. i know, but i dont know what i have to do with it right now uwu

01:21:949 (1,4,2,2,4) - Also if you want to make these in the center and map around, always try to really stack these. You can click on the point I mention and see that they aren't all stack together in the center. yeah ikr

01:25:914 (4) - maybe this make a soft finish or normal instead of drum, since can hear the cymbal sound clear, and the drum that continue isn't the same sound as the drum finish you put here 01:25:397 (3) - . Also you did it on Normal and Easy. changed

Haruto, nice jobs improving from the lastest map I saw from you. Less crowded and hitsound improved :3. The only thing is just, you probably want to put spacing a bit higher on Hard, it doesn't feel as crowded as your previous map, but the note really feel to close ><. i know, because its light hard, ~~and right now i dont want to change the spacing uwu~~ edit : adjusted the spacing to x1.2 huehue
Keep it up harutoo ! Really happy about the improvement !! thank you ~~Senpai~~sensei ><

Fixed Everything owo
~~will reply them after pray owo~~ and Updated

Last edited by Haruto 10 years ago, edited 3 times in total.

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 10 years ago

Do you've changed the BG?

If not:
According to this post, better to use original backround instead of current one~

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

NewIpas wrote:
Do you've changed the BG?

If not:
According to this post, better to use original backround instead of current one~

Edit : Changed with no Name, because it makes the Size too big. Julie will check the Standard Tommorow

Shurelia

Global Moderator

2,813 posts

Joined December 2013

Shurelia 10 years ago

おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]

- Add "Opening" or "Op" to the tags.

[Easy]

00:15:570 (1) - Coba kurangin suara HSnya jadi 55~60% di sini? Lebih sedap menurut saya soalnya lagunya juga rendah suaranya di sini.

[Normal]

00:04:363 (1) - di bagian sini menurutku lebih enak kita menekan object ketimbang spinner. Jadi coba pindahin spinnernya ke 00:04:535 (1) - dan tambah object (+finish) di 00:04:363 - lebih enak menurut saya. (jangan lupa untuk mengatur ulang panjang spinnya)
00:15:570 (1) - Sama kayak di diff easy.
00:23:845 (6) - tambah finish di kepala~
00:32:121 (4) - ^^^
01:18:156 (2) - ini coba dilurusin sama objek sebelumnya~ http://puu.sh/iJJPM.jpg
01:25:225 (2,3) - Bad Blanket atau memang sengaja? o.o

[Hard]

00:15:570 (1) - ya
00:16:776 (3) - di ctrl + G lalu kayaknya slider ini agak kurang rapih.
00:19:363 (4) - ketimbang manjangin slidernya sampai ke garis biru, bagaimana kalau pendekin slidernya ke garis putih lalu kasih objek di garis biru? lebih enak didengar menurut saya. http://puu.sh/iJK4m.jpg
00:21:087 (5) - Finish di kepala~
00:23:501 (8) - ^^^ di repeat
00:24:880 (3,4) - sama seperti 00:19:363 (4) -
00:29:363 (1) - Finish di kepala.

[Anxient's Hard]

00:04:707 (1) - menurut saya lebih enak kita menekan circle ketimbang lansung spinner. Pindahin spinnernya ke 00:04:880 (1) - dan beri circle di 00:04:707 - lebih enak menurut saya. (atur pangang spinner juga).
00:15:914 (1) - yep sama seperti diff-diff sebelumnya .
00:19:190 (4,1) - rhythm seperti terdengar tidak cocok dengan saya. .-. , coba http://puu.sh/iJKwQ.jpg
00:21:087 (1) - Finish di kepala.
00:23:845 (1) - Finish (kalau kamu memang sengaja ga masang finish , then ignore this.)
00:24:707 (3,4) - sama kayak 00:19:190 (4,1)
00:32:121 (1) - finish di kepala.
01:08:156 (1) - ^^^
01:10:914 (1) - ^^^

[Ipa's Insane]

00:52:638 (1) - Jump tiba-tiba di sini kurang nyaman menurut saya. kurangin distancenya.
01:25:914 (1) - NC di sini akhir dari stream.

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]
- Add "Opening" or "Op" to the tags.| Okay added

[Easy]
00:15:570 (1) - Coba kurangin suara HSnya jadi 55~60% di sini? Lebih sedap menurut saya soalnya lagunya juga rendah suaranya di sini.| Added greenline and Volume set to 55

[Normal]
00:04:363 (1) - di bagian sini menurutku lebih enak kita menekan object ketimbang spinner. Jadi coba pindahin spinnernya ke 00:04:535 (1) - dan tambah object (+finish) di 00:04:363 - lebih enak menurut saya. (jangan lupa untuk mengatur ulang panjang spinnya) | oke dipindah, added object too
00:15:570 (1) - Sama kayak di diff easy.
00:23:845 (6) - tambah finish di kepala~
00:32:121 (4) - ^^^
01:18:156 (2) - ini coba dilurusin sama objek sebelumnya~ http://puu.sh/iJJPM.jpg
01:25:225 (2,3) - Bad Blanket atau memang sengaja? o.o

[Hard]
00:15:570 (1) - ya
00:16:776 (3) - di ctrl + G lalu kayaknya slider ini agak kurang rapih.
00:19:363 (4) - ketimbang manjangin slidernya sampai ke garis biru, bagaimana kalau pendekin slidernya ke garis putih lalu kasih objek di garis biru? lebih enak didengar menurut saya. http://puu.sh/iJK4m.jpg
00:21:087 (5) - Finish di kepala~ err finish disini gak cocok deh kak, suaranya gak terlalu nyaring
00:23:501 (8) - ^^^ di repeat same
00:24:880 (3,4) - sama seperti 00:19:363 (4) -
00:29:363 (1) - Finish di kepala.
[]
That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Thanks kak modsnya!
Waiting For GDers Response then update

Kasuga

225 posts

Joined January 2012

Kasuga 10 years ago

Holla, Random Mod Appears!

[Easy]
- 00:03:328 (3) - ekornya diperpanjang ampe 00:04:363 - ? suggestion though
- 01:26:087 (1) - diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- lalu pasang volume 5% gmana?

[Normal]
- 01:26:087 (1) - diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- lalu pasang volume 5% gmana?

[Hard]
- 00:01:259 (2) - Ctrl + G ? Lebih enak liatnya bagi gw hue
- 00:20:570 (3,4) - Ctrl + G lalu taruh circle 4 nya di kepala slider 00:21:087 (5) -
- 00:26:259 (8) - distack ke 00:26:604 (1) - aja gmana? biar ada jumpnya
- 00:29:018 (9) - di stack ke kepala 00:29:363 (1) - gmana?
- 01:26:087 (1) - diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- lalu pasang volume 5% gmana?

[Anxient's Hard]
- 01:27:294 (1) - hapus spinnernya ato ga spinnernya disamain kyk diff lain

[Ipas's Insane]
- 00:00:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Bagaimana kalo patternnya diganti kek gini aja?
- 00:59:363 (2,3,4) - dibikin 1/4 semua ato 1/6 nya dibikin slider aja kyk 00:17:638 (1,2) - ini? susah bacanya orz
- 01:17:638 (6) - di stack ke kepala slider 01:17:121 (4) - aja gmana? lebih ada flownya dibanding lurus gitu
- 01:25:914 (7) - hapus, ganti pake circle aja ditempat yg sama. lalu spinner 01:26:432 (1) - dipindah ke 01:26:087 (1) - lalu diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- dan pasang volume 5%

Good luck! =w=b

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 10 years ago

random mod :< sebenernya sih gak sengaja D:
@Ipas : 00:59:363 (2,3,4) - kenapa gak dibikin di 1/4 aja? lebih natural loh also NC aja btw soalnya ada break D: kalau mau tetap sih (2,3) ganti slider aja

Anxient

1,573 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 10 years ago

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!

~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~
[Anxient's Hard]
00:04:707 (1) - menurut saya lebih enak kita menekan circle ketimbang lansung spinner. Pindahin spinnernya ke 00:04:880 (1) - dan beri circle di 00:04:707 - lebih enak menurut saya. (atur pangang spinner juga). - yaudh. applied
00:15:914 (1) - yep sama seperti diff-diff sebelumnya . - 55%. blng dong nanti >.< gw jdi pusing
00:19:190 (4,1) - rhythm seperti terdengar tidak cocok dengan saya. .-. , coba http://puu.sh/iJKwQ.jpg - coba deh 25%. ada drumny
00:21:087 (1) - Finish di kepala. - ngk ah >.> udh pas kok
00:23:845 (1) - Finish (kalau kamu memang sengaja ga masang finish , then ignore this.) - ^
00:24:707 (3,4) - sama kayak 00:19:190 (4,1) - drumming
00:32:121 (1) - finish di kepala. - applied
01:08:156 (1) - ^^^ - ^
01:10:914 (1) - ^^^ - ^

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck! - wah hitsound mod ya o3o

Kasuga wrote:
Holla, Random Mod Appears!

[Anxient's Hard]

- 01:27:294 (1) - hapus spinnernya ato ga spinnernya disamain kyk diff lain - gw apusin slider akhir karena aneh. gw trus majuin spinnerny.

Good luck! =w=b

wanjir indo banyak banget >.>

asdf

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 59880
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GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:春擬き
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ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
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Version:Anxient's Hard
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

Mod Replies

Kasuga wrote:
Holla, Random Mod Appears! Hai :3

[Easy]
- 00:03:328 (3) - ekornya diperpanjang ampe 00:04:363 - ? suggestion though nice idea
- 01:26:087 (1) - diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- lalu pasang volume 5% gmana? Suaranya sudah berakhir di 01:28:845 - kak, dan bolume di bawah 20% itu unrankable sekarang

[Normal]
- 01:26:087 (1) - diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- lalu pasang volume 5% gmana? sama kaya easy

[Hard]
- 00:01:259 (2) - Ctrl + G ? Lebih enak liatnya bagi gw hue kuganti dengan yg lain
- 00:20:570 (3,4) - Ctrl + G lalu taruh circle 4 nya di kepala slider 00:21:087 (5) - aduh, nanti spacingnya berantakan kak
- 00:26:259 (8) - distack ke 00:26:604 (1) - aja gmana? biar ada jumpnya jumpnya besar amat kak gak deh
- 00:29:018 (9) - di stack ke kepala 00:29:363 (1) - gmana? aku buat segitiga disitu, jadi.. gak
- 01:26:087 (1) - diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- lalu pasang volume 5% gmana? same as easy and normal
[]
Good luck! =w=b

Thanks kak modsnya!
Edit : ~~Waiting for NewIpas~~
Ipas is having a Holiday, so i'll Take care his diff while he go~~
[]

Shurelia wrote:
[Ipa's Insane]
00:52:638 (1) - Jump tiba-tiba di sini kurang nyaman menurut saya. kurangin distancenya. | No, imo this is already fine
01:25:914 (1) - NC di sini akhir dari stream. | Added

[]

Kasuga wrote:
[Ipas's Insane]
- 00:00:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Bagaimana kalo patternnya diganti kek gini aja?. | Nope, too many 1/2.
- 00:59:363 (2,3,4) - dibikin 1/4 semua ato 1/6 nya dibikin slider aja kyk 00:17:638 (1,2) - ini? susah bacanya orz. | Fixed by myself. for this 00:17:638 (1,2) - its fine in my opinion, there's no need to add a repeat there
- 01:17:638 (6) - di stack ke kepala slider 01:17:121 (4) - aja gmana? lebih ada flownya dibanding lurus gitu.| No, i assume this will break the Spacing here, and i dont want to break my Friend Diff.
- 01:25:914 (7) - hapus, ganti pake circle aja ditempat yg sama. lalu spinner 01:26:432 (1) - dipindah ke 01:26:087 (1) - lalu diperpanjang ampe 01:29:190- dan pasang volume 5%. | Nope, its fine

[]

Niko-nyan wrote:
random mod :< sebenernya sih gak sengaja D:
@Ipas : 00:59:363 (2,3,4) - kenapa gak dibikin di 1/4 aja? lebih natural loh also NC aja btw soalnya ada break D: kalau mau tetap sih (2,3) ganti slider aja. | I already change it to a 1/6 Slider with 2x repeat, no need to add NC

Yep, thanks all for the Mods!

Okay, updated

Last edited by Haruto 10 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 10 years ago

@haruto : btw ada yg lupa aku fix wwww 00:37:638 - dikasih clap ya di muzukashii aku ;w; #pantesan-aneh

Karen

2,873 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 10 years ago

Quick check as request:
Hard
00:20:225 (2,3,4) - this flow can be improved imo
01:08:156 (1,1) - avoid stacking sliders like this in Hard, it's hard to read.

SPOILER

00:35:742 (2,1) - avoid stacking or overlapping here, it looks too weird for me. ;_;
00:46:087 (1) - NC
01:21:776 (6) - DS here
01:21:776 (6,7,4) - stack better
00:54:363 (1) - why ignore the music in background here. It should be mapped imo since it's a Hard diff
00:42:638 (4,1) - i suggest to reduce the using of this pattern, it's not that good imo ;_;

Insane
01:21:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream is too long in a easy insane like this imo, should reduce the amount to 7

others are fine, only the Hard should be improved a bit

also, in Taiko-Muzukashi:
00:18:328 - unsnapped green line.

good luck with this mapset!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

Thank you Karen for the Quick Check
I will reply them as soon as possible

Karen wrote:
Quick check as request:
Hard
00:20:225 (2,3,4) - this flow can be improved imo
01:08:156 (1,1) - avoid stacking sliders like this in Hard, it's hard to read.
SPOILER
00:35:742 (2,1) - avoid stacking or overlapping here, it looks too weird for me. ;_;
00:46:087 (1) - NC
01:21:776 (6) - DS here
01:21:776 (6,7,4) - stack better
^Did a Remap on those Parts^
00:54:363 (1) - why ignore the music in background here. It should be mapped imo since it's a Hard diff Rip the Love Slider ;_; changed with Spinner
00:42:638 (4,1) - i suggest to reduce the using of this pattern, it's not that good imo ;_;

others are fine, only the Hard should be improved a bit yeah it is ;_;

also, in Taiko-Muzukashi:
00:18:328 - unsnapped green line. Fixed

good luck with this mapset!

Thanks for the Check!

, btw Fycho's Insane in your mapset seems Fine imo, if i check it, I will mention some Nazi Things on it.

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 10 years ago

Fix Karen's

Thanks

SPOILER

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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

Updated

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,652 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 10 years ago

[Ipas Insane]

00:10:052 (1,2) - No jump?
00:15:914 - Ehh why break xPP.
00:24:707 (3,4) - This jump/flowbreak doesn't work for me Doesn't emphasize much.
00:26:259 (5,1) - Would rather see a bigger jump here haha.
00:31:604 (4,1) - Why not blanket them? Would look cool.
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4) - Not even going to acknowledge the 1/4;s here? Like you could at least do 1/4 repeat sliders or something .

[Anxient's Hard]

00:00:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Such a long combo lol. Ipas Insane NC's every measure
00:12:638 (4) - Why not make this a circle and put another 1/2 slider at 00:12:811 -
00:15:914 (1) - Same here. Circle? and put a 1/2 slider on 00:16:087 - .
00:23:328 (9,1) - Awkward spacing here... Make it bigger so its clear theres a 1/1 gap
01:01:087 (5,6) - Ctrl+G this please, so the downbeat is clickable xPP.
00:59:880 - Also, Why do you NC after like 4 measures.. You should NC on 01:01:259 -
01:04:018 (5) - And also NC here... etc you know the pattern.

[Hard]

00:15:052 (3,4,5) - I really wouldn't recommend putting spaced triplets on a Hard lol.
00:19:707 (1,2) - This kind of overlap doesn't look nice cuz you only overlap the slider-edges which makes it look like a mistake rather than being intentional xPP.
00:25:138 (4) - Yea, spaced 1/4's idk... This isn't even an important triplet .
00:36:776 (2,3) - This is good overlap.
00:39:880 (6,1) - This overlap, not so much .
00:42:294 (2,6) - You really ened to watch how you're blanketting this pattern. You're reusing the same location so you need to be perfect when mapping this sort of pattern.
00:54:449 (1) - End this spinner earlier... like on 00:56:776 -
00:57:121 - Have a circle or something begin here.
01:06:432 (3,3) - Stack them perfectly.
01:08:156 (1,1) - I really dislike these kinds of patterns where you reuse the same slider so soon after the next one. You can already see the second slider even before the first one finishes playing due to the AR.

good luck

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 10 years ago

General

Metadata - Your metadata is good matches the ranked versions ✔
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Easy

00:03:328 (3) - It seems like you are going with symmetry with the other 2 notes previous to this one so why not make this slider even on each side and put it in the middle so you continue with the symmetrical patterning it will look a bit neater
00:07:638 (2,3,1) - here is something quite subjective feel free to ignore if you please i am personally not so fond of how this is placed the turn seems a bit too straight i would suggest you ease up 3 and make it less sharply curved This would make the gameplay a bit more smooth since the transition of the notes would be less sharp.The placement of the notes would look a bit better aswell
Screenshot
00:11:604 (1) - Try fixing the blanket on 3's tail currently it could use some improvement to make it more appealing try making it like this
Screenshot
00:12:294 (2) - Personally i feel like you could have made a better slider shape than this since the current one makes the flow between 2 and 3 a bit too sharp since you have the slider's body flowing more away from the general path of the next notes placement making the turn between them much more smooth.maybe try something like this.
Screenshot
00:15:052 (2) - The rhythm between this and 1 will come as a surprise to the new players playing the map i highly suggest you make 2 a slider that extends to 00:15:225. This will make the rhythm transition between them will be newbie friendly since it will read as a 1/1 distance
00:15:570 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 notes needs more work as you made 1's slider body flow away from the next notes placement causing an awkward transition between i suggest you make the slider body's path flow more into the next note for an easier smoother transition
00:17:811 - The rhythm between this and 1 will come as a surprise to the new players playing the map i highly suggest you make 2 a slider that extends to 00:17:983 - . This will make the rhythm transition between them will be newbie friendly since it will read as a 1/1 distance
00:18:328 (1,2) - The placement between these 2 doesnt seem very well it feels too crowded it feels too mushed together maybe try reworking the placement so that the notes don't feel so cluttered this way your notes will look more cleaner like so
Screenshot
00:21:949 (2) - This slider shape could be vastly improved currently it doesn't look quite good and the transition between this and 3 is quite rough i suggest maybe making the slider more like this so that transition and flow become more smooth and suitable for an easy diff also it makes the pattern look much cleaner
Screenshot
00:24:707 (2) - You should improve this blanket it looks a bit unclean right now ,even 1 pixel back can make a vast difference. make sure your Grid level is on 4
00:26:087 (3,4) - Another subjective thought here Personally i think have another slider appear after the previous can be tricky for a noob since normally when a noob is playing they are expecting the notes to be a straight forward path so usually going back and fort between note placement can be a tad bit confusing.I suggest you place this slider somewhere, where it wont interact with the previous slider body
00:29:363 (2) - This slider shape could use a bit more work i suggest you remove that red point in the sliders body and just use 3 white ticks lined together this way you get the curve you desire while still letting the curve be delicate and clean looking
Screenshot
00:30:914 (1) - Subjective I suggest you add a slight curve to this slider since you made 3 non curve sliders in a row it would feel better if you made this a bit more curved to make the slider feel less repetitive dont go crazy wth the curve it should only be slight
00:32:121 (3) - I know this is nazi but the blanket could be better even 1 pixel can make a difference also the placement of the not could be better why not try this way
Screenshot
00:32:983 (1) - why dont you remove the repeat off and try this rhythm currently you are making that repeat end on the Stanza which normal where you start a note
Screenshot
Another thing this rhythm will make the placement easier to arrange i suggest you try something along these lines since i think it looks much better more clean and the flow would be vastly better since it flows very smoothly
Screenshot
00:34:880 (1,2) - This placement is sorta a flow wrecker too much back and front movement with these 2 it creates a awkward transition plus it doesnt look as good as it can be maybe try this
Screenshot
00:38:501 (1,2) - This is really subjective cause there isnt anything wrong with but more I have always found this sorta placement to be very clumped together a bit too much it makes it feel too close to each other
00:41:604 (2) - In my opinion this sounds really awkward as there is no reason for you to hit the 1/2 note. Now through out this whole diff you have never actually tried to hit the note 1/2 note that comes after the stanza i know there is a sound there but this whole diff you havent tried to hit it. dont try to force a new rhythm so suddenly especially when new the rhythm has a extremely prominent stanza like this one does her voice and the bgm are both elevated on the stanza so you should not ignore that nor should you try making a slider end on it so dont try that. This should be properly emphasized That means do a new note at the stanza. Also the placement of 00:41:604 (2,3,4) - could be revised again subjective but its feels to clumped together
00:44:363 (5,6,7,1) - Okay this rhythm pattern needs to be worked out try something along the lines of this, You see you are missing a note at 00:44:535 - which makes the rhythm sound a bit forced so making the slider hit that will take care of that not and then there is a much more prominent note that is here 00:44:880 - so the next takes care of that and lastly adding a circle at 00:45:742 - will make 1 which has a Finish on it have a good steady build up to it so the generally feeling while will feel more appropriate.
Screenshot
00:47:121 (3) - In my opinion this sounds really awkward as there is no reason for you to hit the 1/2 note. Now through out this whole diff you have never actually tried to hit the note 1/2 note that comes after the stanza i know there is a sound there but this whole diff you havent tried to hit it. dont try to force a new rhythm so suddenly especially when new the rhythm has a extremely prominent stanza like this one does her voice and the bgm are both elevated on the stanza so you should not ignore that nor should you try making a slider end on it so dont try that. This should be properly emphasized That means do a new note at the stanza. Also the slider shape could use more revision making a creative slider is okay but dont try to make them in clumps together it makes your map look silly
00:50:914 (3) - I was hoping that you were going to make this slider go in the other direction cause currently you are making the flow of the map go into a circle flow too much its starting to feel repetitive I suggest you make this go into the other way see
Screenshot
00:52:638 (3) - I think you know what i will say about this expect this one has a more prominent here 00:53:328 - that i dont think a slider tick hitsound can justify I really suggest you rework the rhythm and make it so that you will hit that prominent note
00:59:880 (1,2) - Nice sliders it looks nice
01:02:638 (1) - I think you should a try a new rhythm right here cause right now you are making the slider end at the start of her speaking which makes the rhyhtm sound a bit awkward try doing this it will sound alot better
Screenshot
01:04:018 (4,1) - This placement is not okay it looks too unclean and unpolished now if you followed my previous suggestion about the rhythm it will make figuring out a new placement much easier. maybe try doing something more like this that way the flow and the appearance is much better
Screenshot
01:06:259 (2) - I highly suggest you make this 2 circles because that finish on the end of the slider is far too strong to not me be hit you will make the gameplay much more interactive this way
01:08:845 (2,3,4) - The postiotioning is getting far too clumped together i highly suggest that you make the placement of the notes more free instead of trying to get 4's tail to blanket with 2 it will look much more clean that way I gave you enough Screenshots to help you raise your creative thought bubble
01:10:914 (1,2,3,4) - I assuming because of the previous slider you didnt have much choice of placement so hopefully after lchanging the previous slider you could come up with something that visually looks better and plays better more smoothly
01:16:432 (1,2) - Another subjective thought here this is a spot where you can do something like you did here 00:18:328 (1,2) - but A bit more properly maybe try doing something like this and then try making this 01:18:501 (3) - slider a straight slider like this. Your placement itself will look much better and more clean
Screenshot
01:20:052 (2) - I highly suggest you make this 2 circles because that finish on the end of the slider is far too strong to not me be hit you will make the gameplay much more interactive this way. And if not then make the shape different cause it looks a bit odd now a regular curve slider would be a bit better
01:21:949 (1,2) - Im surprised i like this placement even though im not big fan of close together sliders good job
01:24:707 (1) - This slider would be some much better if you made it compliment 01:24:018 (3) - a bit more maybe something more like this
Screenshot

I feel like the Easy has good potential but it could be more polished and your rhythm choice could be better its not too bad but it needs more work to raise the quality You are free to call me to help you even more in game so i can give more clear explanations im here to help so dont feel hesitant

Ill be doing the other diffs aswell

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 10 years ago

monstrata wrote:
[Ipas Insane]

00:10:052 (1,2) - No jump? No
00:15:914 - Ehh why break xPP. Please xD It's fine tho
00:24:707 (3,4) - This jump/flowbreak doesn't work for me Doesn't emphasize much. It creates nice movement here
00:26:259 (5,1) - Would rather see a bigger jump here haha.
00:31:604 (4,1) - Why not blanket them? Would look cool. Such nazi
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4) - Not even going to acknowledge the 1/4;s here? Like you could at least do 1/4 repeat sliders or something . They're not supposed to be 1/4 here, I don't want too much 1/4, guess that stream on kiai is enough
good luck

Thanks for mod!

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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 10 years ago

monstrata wrote:
[Hard]
00:15:052 (3,4,5) - I really wouldn't recommend putting spaced triplets on a Hard lol. Stacked them C:
00:19:707 (1,2) - This kind of overlap doesn't look nice cuz you only overlap the slider-edges which makes it look like a mistake rather than being intentional xPP. looolll! xDD fixed tbh xD
00:25:138 (4) - Yea, spaced 1/4's idk... This isn't even an important triplet . s a m e
00:36:776 (2,3) - This is good overlap. Not really xPP
00:39:880 (6,1) - This overlap, not so much . Improved xD
00:42:294 (2,6) - You really ened to watch how you're blanketting this pattern. You're reusing the same location so you need to be perfect when mapping this sort of pattern. oh yeah, sorry ;( fixed those part
00:54:449 (1) - End this spinner earlier... like on 00:56:776 -
00:57:121 - Have a circle or something begin here.
01:06:432 (3,3) - Stack them perfectly.
01:08:156 (1,1) - I really dislike these kinds of patterns where you reuse the same slider so soon after the next one. You can already see the second slider even before the first one finishes playing due to the AR. Changed the Slider Shape, i hope the New one is fine

good luck

Thanks Monstrata!

and Updated
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@Lexia : I'll Check your mods when you're done Checking the other diffs too
also, the unused Hitsound that you are mentioned, I Remove it, thanks for noticing that!

Anxient

1,573 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 10 years ago

because my current diff in this set literally gave me cancer, i remapped it.

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
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Tags:opening oregairu My teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU zoku my youth love comedy snafu yahari ore no sheisun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku season 2 TV Size Niko-nyan Frans_Niko NewIpas Anxient Haruto_Aizawa
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0,0,"BGsss.jpg",0,0
Video,-400,"videoo.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 10 years ago

Second Mod From Simple Taiko Modding Queue

p/4159578

About

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note

General

here comes another vocal-sounded map D:
about OD and HP read here~~ new rules :3

Muzukashii

It seems like futsuu~~
HP -> 6

01:09:535 (175) - move to 01:09:363 - feels better imo
01:09:880 (177) - delete this note, to keep consistency with your previous patterns
from 01:15:052 - to 01:16:087 - have more emphasis than 01:16:432 (192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - that's the reason to don't follow voice.
00:42:121 (106) - delete to keep balance on this part ( from 00:40:570 - to 00:51:604 - )
00:51:604 (127,128,129,130) - omg why so bored? since 00:50:914 - start a new effusive part

Oni

seems like muzukashii~~ xD

00:28:673 - 00:28:759 - you should add notes here, a triplet is really needes imo
I'm not sure about 00:41:949 (141,142,143,144,145) - 00:44:535 (149,150,151,152,153,154) - 00:47:466 (158,159,160,161,162) -
first move 00:42:121 (142) - to 00:41:604 -
second 00:44:707 (150) - 00:45:052 (152) - 00:45:225 (153) - should be removed, because is more important to add notes at 00:45:570 - 00:45:914 - to follow instrumental better
third 00:47:638 (159) - move to 00:47:121 - to keep consistency with first ^^
00:50:225 (167) - move to 00:50:570 - to follow voice better imo
add a note at 00:52:466 - to add more emphasis to the next part ( from 00:54:363 - to 00:58:328 - )
add a note at 01:22:638 -
01:23:845 - same as above ^

Sorry for poor mod D: I have a lot of request, so... I'm cleaning old request by queue, Best of luck~~

HabiHolic

5,458 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 9 years ago

Easy :3

Habi's Easy

osu file format v14

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Version:Habi's Easy
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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zeborg

116 posts

Joined July 2015

zeborg 9 years ago

pls be gentle with my modding ;w;

General

AIBat

Insane

00:32:801 (3) - a little displaced when compared with 00:33:318 (6,2,4) , thus making it odd
00:32:628 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks a bit confusing, possibly due to sudden change in direction at 00:34:008 (4,5,6) which makes it hard to move cursor in such a little distance (and since I'm still a scrub, I found the combo hard to read as well, but I'm not sure if it really is)

Expert

00:57:972 (3,2) - looks better if 2 is moved over the slider head
01:15:731 (3,4) - too close, consider giving it same distance as 01:16:248 (5,1)

~~Team Yui Forever!~~Team Yukinon Forever!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 9 years ago

I didnt request any mod but Thank You for it!! Really Appreciate it :3
disclaimer, SB and the map is still WIP. please dont point out unused SB stuff ty c:

-NanoRIPE-

2,062 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 9 years ago

izin ngemod ya :3
seingat saya map ini dulu banyak banget diffnya xd

[General]
good ~

[Easy]
00:01:939 (3,2) - overlap :> (maybe move to right side ~ )
00:11:594 (3,2) - ^
00:14:352 (3) = ctrl j? for better flow
00:57:110 (1) - move the end of spinner to previous red tick ~
00:59:524 - circle? *drum sound emphatize
01:26:765 - maybe add inherited timing here to reduce the sound :>

[Normal]
ohh masih wip ya
00:04:697 (1,1) - nih pattern rada awkward bagiku ~ mungkin ganti dengan spinner?
00:18:318 (1,2,3,4) - ^ sama dengan di atas rada awkward gitu xd (walaupun prefer ke vocal bagiku masih agak kurang pas gitu xd)

[Hard]
00:15:559 (7) - hmm coba di geser ke bawah aja (jgn di stack) biar enak gitu
00:19:697 (1) - ctrl g xd
wip xd

[Insane]
00:32:801 (3,6) - nggk di stack aja? (biar konsistent dengan pattern lain)

wew walaupun masih wip tapi udah bagus overallnya xd
and also Nice SB (hampir kayak di opnya)
GL ~ kak

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 9 years ago

Here's the diff with updates I made myself!

EDIT: Also add me and habiholic to tags!

.osu

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Haruto
Version:ProBox's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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104,284,59007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,83,59179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,226,59352,1,0,3:0:0:0:
219,307,59524,5,12,0:0:0:0:
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392,279,64179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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169,317,65214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,146,65903,2,0,P|429:142|510:233,1,175,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,258,68662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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407,256,69179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,348,69352,6,0,P|385:366|306:288,1,175,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,138,69869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
497,204,70041,6,0,B|447:187|425:138|425:138|383:179|319:178,1,192.500005874634,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,100,70559,1,8,0:0:0:0:
187,81,70645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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112,98,70817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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165,179,71421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,171,73317,2,0,L|456:159,1,87.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,87,73662,5,2,0:0:0:0:
251,188,73834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,29,74007,2,0,P|96:87|101:118,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,241,74352,2,0,P|95:257|137:249,1,87.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,104,75386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,207,75559,2,0,L|471:194,1,87.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,58,75903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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319,290,77800,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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190,262,79007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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95,265,81852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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244,50,83662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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293,225,85472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,190,85559,1,2,0:0:0:0:
293,155,85645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,124,85731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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425,22,86421,2,0,L|420:118,1,78.7499975967408,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 9 years ago

Updated all! will check to mods soon o/

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 9 years ago

mod this k thx https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439012

@Del05 kata elu masih bljr buat SB, tapi SB ny luamayan dah, apaan elu dah :v wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

[Expert]

pls hitsound ny ga beres bnr, karena lu ga setkan dgn benar (bnyk yg lewat)
00:04:784 (1) - mendingan ga usah lu set normal hitsound sini. soft aja udah cukup
00:15:042 (6) - missing clap
00:17:801 (7) - apa ada simbal disini? ga ada ni. remove finish
00:20:559 (3,1) - ^
00:23:318 (4,1) - ^
00:26:077 (4) - ^
00:28:835 (2) - ^
00:32:111 - 00:39:870 - yg paling aneh adalah kenapa lu set normal hitsound di bagian disini? padahal w dgr ny beat aja, bukan downbeat begitu. yg lu buat di bagian 00:18:318 - kan udah bnr hitsound ny
00:31:594 (5,1) - lagi, simbal ny ga ada
00:34:352 (4) - ^
00:37:111 (5) - ^
00:39:008 (1) - tail drum
00:39:525 (2) - set finish
00:39:870 (4,5) - urutan utk hitsoud --> clap clap dc (drum clap) dc dc df (drum finish)
00:44:524 (4) - remove finish. cuma drum sampleset aja dah ckp
00:44:696 (1) - remove clap
00:45:386 (3) - tail drum clap
00:45:731 (4) - drum finish
00:48:834 (1) - remove finish
00:49:524 (3) - clap + kenapa ga buat jump aja kalau ada downbeat kek gini?
00:50:041 (6) - remove finish. cuma drum sampleset aja dah ckp
00:54:524 - 00:58:317 - coba perhatikan bagian ini baik2 utk hitsound. kan aneh hitsound disini sihh coba kek gini kalau mau lebih ok lagi 00:54:696 (4) - drum sampleset 00:54:869 (6) - clap soft 00:55:041 (1) - drum sampleset 00:55:386 (5) - soft clap 00:55:731 (1,3,5) - drum sampleset | soft clap | drum sampleset 00:56:421 (1) - soft clap 00:56:765 (5) - drum sampleset 00:57:110 (1,3) - drum sampleset head 00:57:800 (2) - soft clap head 00:57:972 (3) - drum clap head 00:58:145 (1) - drum finish head
00:59:869 - 01:05:386 - normal sampleset lagi? :/
01:05:386 - 01:25:903 - whistle ny diganti jadi drum sampleset
01:09:007 (5) - ini jadi drum finish
01:09:868 (3) - clap
01:15:041 (1) - clap + remove whistle
01:15:731 (3) - clap
01:16:248 (5) - drum sampleset
01:18:662 (5) - drum sampleset
01:19:265 (2) - ini overmap jdi ny, karena ni ga ada note ny dri musik tersebut
01:20:042 (3) - remove clap, karena ga ada suara drum disini
01:21:248 (1) - remove whistle
01:21:593 (1) - ^
01:22:627 (5) - clap
01:22:800 (6) - drum sampleset
01:24:179 (6) - drum sampleset
01:24:524 (8) - ^
01:25:386 (3) - drum sampleset
01:25:472 (4,5) - drum clap
01:25:731 (6) - drum finish

tu aja hitsound mod ny. gameplay mod coming soon

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 9 years ago

lit120 wrote:
@Del05 kata elu masih bljr buat SB, tapi SB ny luamayan dah, apaan elu dah :v wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

LOL
serius kak lit aku msh belajar, yg sakura itu juga baru belajar ama Kanari xD

Makasih pujiannya wkwkwk

@Haruto nih sb aku selesai in kalo bs sebelum pergi tp kalo gk bs yah.. sesempetnya aku disana kerja lol lmao xD

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 9 years ago

00:07:284
00:40:559
extra redlines are not needed, every ranked map doesn't have those

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 9 years ago

Underforest wrote:
00:07:284
00:40:559
extra redlines are not needed, every ranked map doesn't have those

they aren't needed indeed but im just putting them for the NCing so it should be fine but i'll manage to remove or keep them.

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 9 years ago

ok, gameplay mod on Expert diff

mod this k thx bye https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439012

00:06:766 (5) - mendingan setkan jump ny aja disini karena downbeat drum ny
00:34:525 (5,6,1) - pertanyaan ny adalah, kenapa spacing 00:34:870 (1) - ini rendah amat dgn downbeat sekeras kek gini, tapi 00:34:525 (5,6) - ini spacing ny jauh dripada 00:34:870 (1) -
00:49:524 (3) - ini spacing ny perlu dijauhkan karena downbeat ny
00:54:179 (6,1,2) - coba buatkan spacing ny equal?
00:57:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - gunakan octagon shape utk ni, biar lebih cocok amat visual ny
01:06:076 (3,4) - dekat kali spacing ny
01:07:110 (2) - spacing downbeat ny
01:10:386 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ini flow dri 1 note ke stream ny aneh amat liat ny. coba kek gini contoh

end

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 9 years ago

M4MMMMMMMMMMMMMM
=w= or meh = i dont like the flow, might be linear or big angle XD

[Expert]

00:09:525 (6,7,8) - i dont find a reason to decreased the spacing here :\
00:10:559 (3,4,5) - meh =w=
00:16:077 (2,3,4) - well i recommend to stack these at sliderend
00:18:835 (2,3,4,5) - this will cause misread imo, since you stack it with 1/2 but stack again with 1/4, you can spaced the 1/2 part, try put 2 at 156 323 or sth
00:19:352 (5,1) - spacing is quite big imo, since the hitwindow is small
00:22:284 (6) - ill delete this note, make a pause at here is a good choice and you can emphasized the vocal either
00:24:870 (5,1) - yap same here
00:25:904 (3,4,5) - try to make the spacing 3>4 and 4>5 equal since the cymbol sound is intense at both part
00:31:594 (5,6,7) - ill swap the spacing here, the spacing at 6>7 is suppose to be at 5>6 cuz 5 and 6 got cymbol sound to emphasized, and 7 doesnt, so it makes no sense to make the spacing bigger at 6>7
00:34:352 (4,5,6) - same here
00:58:145 (1,2) - imo you can spaced more, try 56 192
01:06:076 (3,4,1) - meh
01:08:490 (2,3,4,5,6) - =w=
01:17:283 (6) - ill delete this note, same as 00:22:284 (6) -
01:17:800 (1,2,3) - meh :\

[ProBox's Insane]

00:02:456 (2) - itll look nicer if you put 2 at the middle of 1 and 3's sliderend
00:13:318 (2,3) - stacking here seems inconsistent with the structure here, since you are mapping this part jumpy
00:25:128 - add a note here for consistent
00:35:387 (2) - itll look nicer if you put 2 at the middle of 3 and 4
00:46:076 (1,4) - lol
00:48:490 - sound like missing sth here since it seems like you are filling all the tick at this part
00:48:834 (1,2,3) - consist the spacing ?
01:05:041 (5,6) - dont prefer stacking at kiai, ill move 6 stack with 01:04:179 (2) -
01:05:386 (1) - itll look nicer if you put 1 at the middle of 2 and 3

[Insane]

00:19:352 (4,1) - ypa same problem
00:20:559 (3,4) - make spacing bigger for emphasized, like 00:23:318 (4,5) -
00:24:870 (4,1) - same
00:43:317 (1,2) - blanket lol, nicer plz XD
00:51:593 (1,2,3) - meh
01:09:352 (1,2,3) - =w=
01:18:145 (3,4,5) - meh
01:24:696 (1,2,3) - meh
01:25:903 (1,2,3) - meh =w=

ok it seems like my mod was all whining about flows XD

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 9 years ago

Hi

M4M here xD

General

The slider body color is too bright imo,ik colors are from the text on SB but considering most of the players are using 100% background dim it somehow causes an eyestrain
Expert diff's SB still have the default BG on (idk on other diffs since it causes lag to me when i switch)
00:07:284 - Red timing point is unnecesarry here imo I saw other ranked versions don't have that one, remove the next one as well
01:29:955 - Why does the deafult BG suddenly shows here?
The word comedy has been repeated thrice. Idk if that is necessary

Habi's Easy

00:08:146 (1) - The object appeared completely while the spinner is still ongoing, consider having more break after spinner, Idk if this is unrankable but I'm sure that DQ would be issued if you keep this break from spinner to an object
00:15:732 (1,1) - ^
00:24:697 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:30:215 (2) - Set sampleset to auto and add clap and remove clap at the tail
00:32:973 (2,3) - ^, If you remove the second timing point, I'm sure you will see the difference
01:08:834 (2,3) - Fix blanket

Normal

00:17:801 - I think this should be mapped, drum hits are strong :v
00:18:663 (2) - Try to use reverse slider or 1/2 and a circle here? cuz you ignore the drum hit at 00:18:835 and there is also a vocal there
00:21:077 (1) - I thing this 3/2 reverse doesn't follow the music properly, I would remove the reverse then put 1/1 at 00:21:939
00:28:835 - Already mentioned above about the drum hits
01:08:145 (5) - NC
01:10:903 (10) - ^
01:13:662 (16) - ^
01:16:421 (21) - ^, won't mention anymore xD
01:25:903 (3) - Make it linear with the angle of 01:25:214 (2) - looks cleaner than overlapping and also personal preference

Hard

00:15:646 (1) - This should end at 00:17:801 or earlier if you want to map that drum hits and downbeat is important
00:19:352 (3,1) - Too big jump imo, thus there timeline gap is close lol recommending to use DS instead, even though you want to emphasize drums here, consider the calmness that indicated at this part
00:42:627 (3,4,5) - I gotta confused on this part ._.
01:09:352 (1,3) - I was expecting a jump at this objects since intrumentals are trigerring :v

Insane

00:09:352 (3,5) - I think blanketing these two objects would make a better jump impact at 00:10:042 (1) -
00:33:490 (1,2) - Turn into slider for vocals? spamming circles here doesn't make any emphasis for such strong sounds :v
00:51:593 (1,5) - Stack?
01:15:386 (3,6) - Stack at the slider end? cuz this is a drum hit so making 01:15:386 (3,4) - close than 01:15:214 (2,3) - makes more sense to me because of drum hit
01:16:421 (1) - Split into 1/2 and circle? this part is like a climax of the song so why are you doing easy rhythm?

ProBox's Insane

00:02:456 (2) - This is too sudden and the vocal here is really weak, maybe remove?
00:18:318 (1) - Add clap at slider end and make it clickable? drum hit there
01:08:662 (3) - Put at 140|238 for aesthetics?

Feel free to slack off on modding my map since the quality of my modding is meh xD Goodluck

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 9 years ago

edit :
changed some stuff with hitsounding. can't mention them right now

lit120 wrote:
ok, gameplay mod on Expert diff

mod this k thx bye https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439012

00:06:766 (5) - mendingan setkan jump ny aja disini karena downbeat drum ny uh, gw buat jump di downbeat yg ticknya panjang. ini mah bukan downbeat
00:34:525 (5,6,1) - pertanyaan ny adalah, kenapa spacing 00:34:870 (1) - ini rendah amat dgn downbeat sekeras kek gini, tapi 00:34:525 (5,6) - ini spacing ny jauh dripada 00:34:870 (1) - perasaan sama aja deh spacingnya
00:49:524 (3) - ini spacing ny perlu dijauhkan karena downbeat ny harus ya? bukan downbeat tho
00:54:179 (6,1,2) - coba buatkan spacing ny equal? fixed i guess
00:57:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - gunakan octagon shape utk ni, biar lebih cocok amat visual ny ga! ntar symmetrynya ilang ):
01:06:076 (3,4) - dekat kali spacing ny dekat paan :^(
01:07:110 (2) - spacing downbeat ny bukan downbeat zz
01:10:386 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ini flow dri 1 note ke stream ny aneh amat liat ny. coba kek gini contoh hmm will consider this
end

sorry hakupoi gw deny beberapa stuff ttng gameplay karena lu point kebanyakan ke downbeat spacing. downbeat kalo gw bilang yg ticknya tinggi/panjang.

@Zeborg : for expert. 1st point, if i moved it to head it'll be unreadable and hard. 2nd point, 3>4 aren't downbeat so it should be okay.
for insane. 1st point, can you explain more or just point out the thing so i can fix it? 2nd point, changed the direction from 5>6>7.

@Nano : Insane : itu sudah distack kok o.o distack gimana btw?
Hard : itu dua2nya buat emphasize kak jadi gpp
Normal : kalo gw kasi spinner entar recovery timenya yg dipermasalahin so no, sorry ;;

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4MMMMMMMMMMMMMM
=w= or meh = i dont like the flow, might be linear or big angle XD

[Expert]
00:09:525 (6,7,8) - i dont find a reason to decreased the spacing here :\ increased back then xd
00:10:559 (3,4,5) - meh =w= seems fine imo, considering the song's synth is kinda "lowerin" so i made the flow to lower movement then lol
00:16:077 (2,3,4) - well i recommend to stack these at sliderend would lose its emphasis for the whistle
00:18:835 (2,3,4,5) - this will cause misread imo, since you stack it with 1/2 but stack again with 1/4, you can spaced the 1/2 part, try put 2 at 156 323 or sth i asked probox and others, said its fine :/ nothing to worry
00:19:352 (5,1) - spacing is quite big imo, since the hitwindow is small cuz emphasize
00:22:284 (6) - ill delete this note, make a pause at here is a good choice and you can emphasized the vocal either it'll lose its emphasize there ):
00:24:870 (5,1) - yap same here for emphasize xdd
00:25:904 (3,4,5) - try to make the spacing 3>4 and 4>5 equal since the cymbol sound is intense at both part agree, fixed
00:31:594 (5,6,7) - ill swap the spacing here, the spacing at 6>7 is suppose to be at 5>6 cuz 5 and 6 got cymbol sound to emphasized, and 7 doesnt, so it makes no sense to make the spacing bigger at 6>7 uh, can you explain it a bit more simple? just the point, i dont understand your point now
00:34:352 (4,5,6) - same here for this, it was made for emphasize from 6>1 so it should be okay
00:58:145 (1,2) - imo you can spaced more, try 56 192 sure, fixed but didn't placed on the coordinate you give
01:06:076 (3,4,1) - meh i've lost inspiration to create nice flow
01:08:490 (2,3,4,5,6) - =w= same
01:17:283 (6) - ill delete this note, same as 00:22:284 (6) - nah, didnt want to put any gap in this diff xd
01:17:800 (1,2,3) - meh :\ yheja
[Insane]
00:19:352 (4,1) - ypa same problem emphasis for downbeat xd
00:20:559 (3,4) - make spacing bigger for emphasized, like 00:23:318 (4,5) - agree
00:24:870 (4,1) - same smae
00:43:317 (1,2) - blanket lol, nicer plz XD yhjea lmao
00:51:593 (1,2,3) - meh
01:09:352 (1,2,3) - =w=
01:18:145 (3,4,5) - meh
01:24:696 (1,2,3) - meh
01:25:903 (1,2,3) - meh =w= didnt fix the flow thingy cuz i've lost inspiration before when mapping this xd
ok it seems like my mod was all whining about flows XD

Janpai wrote:
Hi M4M here xD
General
The slider body color is too bright imo,ik colors are from the text on SB but considering most of the players are using 100% background dim it somehow causes an eyestrain hmm will ask others opinion about this
Expert diff's SB still have the default BG on (idk on other diffs since it causes lag to me when i switch) dw i have the same problem but this actually isn't like this, just some hardware problems on our pc i guess xD
00:07:284 - Red timing point is unnecesarry here imo I saw other ranked versions don't have that one, remove the next one as well it was made for nc'ing will keep these for a while
01:29:955 - Why does the deafult BG suddenly shows here? hardware stuff xDD
The word comedy has been repeated thrice. Idk if that is necessary this should be fine i guess, i'll try to remove them once the set is bubbled

Normal
00:17:801 - I think this should be mapped, drum hits are strong :v mapped xD
00:18:663 (2) - Try to use reverse slider or 1/2 and a circle here? cuz you ignore the drum hit at 00:18:835 and there is also a vocal there sure
00:21:077 (1) - I thing this 3/2 reverse doesn't follow the music properly, I would remove the reverse then put 1/1 at 00:21:939 well the slider here was made to follow the vocal+instrument, idk how to explain but you can deeply look on it i guess lol
00:28:835 - Already mentioned above about the drum hits same
01:08:145 (5) - NC
01:10:903 (10) - ^
01:13:662 (16) - ^
01:16:421 (21) - ^, won't mention anymore xD fixed i forgot to nc them before like hoyl
01:25:903 (3) - Make it linear with the angle of 01:25:214 (2) - looks cleaner than overlapping and also personal preference sure

Hard
00:15:646 (1) - This should end at 00:17:801 or earlier if you want to map that drum hits and downbeat is important hm agree fixed
00:19:352 (3,1) - Too big jump imo, thus there timeline gap is close lol recommending to use DS instead, even though you want to emphasize drums here, consider the calmness that indicated at this part well... the drum sounds loud so it should be okay too
00:42:627 (3,4,5) - I gotta confused on this part ._. did something instead stacking xd
01:09:352 (1,3) - I was expecting a jump at this objects since intrumentals are trigerring :v made a little triangle jump there

Insane
00:09:352 (3,5) - I think blanketing these two objects would make a better jump impact at 00:10:042 (1) - i would do this but it seems too far on the intro.. lets keep things easier on intro xD
00:33:490 (1,2) - Turn into slider for vocals? spamming circles here doesn't make any emphasis for such strong sounds :v well thats the point, i made it for difficulty increase so yeah should be fine xD
00:51:593 (1,5) - Stack? sure
01:15:386 (3,6) - Stack at the slider end? cuz this is a drum hit so making 01:15:386 (3,4) - close than 01:15:214 (2,3) - makes more sense to me because of drum hit huh? i didnt understand, just point the thing with simplier words xD
01:16:421 (1) - Split into 1/2 and circle? this part is like a climax of the song so why are you doing easy rhythm? well... i wanted to decrease the difficulty overall here as i already spammed circles and such before... so yeah

Feel free to slack off on modding my map since the quality of my modding is meh xD Goodluck

thanks guys for the mods! i'll go with the m4m soon with you guys. sorry i declined many things, especially emphasize cuz they are basically emphasized on the right beat so yeah xd
SB is also finished, time to call monstrata/ipas i guess? xD

Last edited by Haruto 9 years ago, edited 2 times in total.

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 9 years ago

Janpai wrote:
ProBox's Insane
00:02:456 (2) - This is too sudden and the vocal here is really weak, maybe remove? Sure
00:18:318 (1) - Add clap at slider end and make it clickable? drum hit there I prefer the current way
01:08:662 (3) - Put at 140|238 for aesthetics?Sure

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[ProBox's Insane]
00:02:456 (2) - itll look nicer if you put 2 at the middle of 1 and 3's sliderend I removed the circle
00:13:318 (2,3) - stacking here seems inconsistent with the structure here, since you are mapping this part jumpy I like the stack here since it's a good transfer to the sliders
00:25:128 - add a note here for consistent Sure
00:35:387 (2) - itll look nicer if you put 2 at the middle of 3 and 4 I prefer the current way
00:46:076 (1,4) - lol oops
00:48:490 - sound like missing sth here since it seems like you are filling all the tick at this part Following vocals
00:48:834 (1,2,3) - consist the spacing ? Meh no need such a small difference
01:05:041 (5,6) - dont prefer stacking at kiai, ill move 6 stack with 01:04:179 (2) - I don't want to unstack to be consistent
01:05:386 (1) - itll look nicer if you put 1 at the middle of 2 and 3 Prefer current way

Thanks for the mods!

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micchi_chi

764 posts

Joined July 2013

micchi_chi 9 years ago

Hey, M4M from my modding Q~
Kinda late, sorry

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

Check AiMod, pretty much stuff there, kiai stuffs especially.

[Normal]

SPOILER

Cek lagi deh AiModnya, masih ada DS problems tuh
00:06:077 (1) - ini perlu banget ya? .-. meskipun di big white tick, tpi karena bagian lagunya masih bagian lagu yg tenang, jadinya kayaknya ga terlalu ada suara yang terlalu signifikan buat di map pake circle deh. Kenapa circlenya ga di delete aja terus slidernya dipanjangin sampe big white tick? Kayaknya bakal lebih cocok kayak gitu. Ato kalo menurut aku bakal lebih cocok lagi kalo dipanjangin terus slidernya sampe sini 00:06:766 biar slidernya bisa nge-cover background sound sama vocalnya secara lebih penuh lagi. Btw, kalo tetep mau pake circle, kayaknya mendingan jangan di stack deh soalnya takutnya dikira 1/2 pattern...
00:31:594 (6) - Bagian ini ngga di map kayak ini 00:28:835 (1,2) - ? suara piano (?) nya masih ada kok .-. Mungkin bisa pake 1/2 reverse slider biar ke cover semua soundnya...
00:33:318 (3,4,5) - Hmmm, bagian ini kayaknya rhythmnya butuh di rework deh, agak miss emphasizenya. Suara drum disini 00:33:318 mendingan pake circle aja soalnya di bagian yang ini ada suara vocal yang gede di white tick, jadi kalo drumnya dipakein circle, suara vocalnya bisa di support pake slider, singkatnya ini 00:33:318 (3,4) - di balik lah. Terus suara di 00:34:352 itu kenceng banget, biasanya juga di map jadi kalo ga di map jadi kesannya agak aneh gitu, jadi mendingan 00:34:008 (5) - dipendekkin sampe red tick aja terus di add circle abis itu. Jadi kurang lebih begini rhyhtmnya http://puu.sh/pYSR5/7089031b44.jpg bakal lebih cocok sih imo.
00:37:284 (5,1) - tajem banget nih sudutnya xD ga terlalu enak buat dimainin... mungkin 00:37:628 (1) - bisa di puter ke kanan dikit, terus kalo di apply, 00:38:490 (2,1,2) - bisa di geser dikit ke kanan biar ngga overlap http://puu.sh/pYSXP/a89aeca1c1.jpg gampang kok DSnya -w-
00:41:938 (1,2) - Bagian ini mungkin juga bisa diputer dikit ke kiri biar keliatan kayak symmetry sama bagian dari slider wave 00:40:559 (1) - yang sebelumnya. http://puu.sh/pYT32/3596195403.jpg blanketnya juga masih bisa di improve tuh :v
00:44:696 (2,3,4,5) - Gimana kalo dibikin circular flow aja? http://puu.sh/pYTbG/4b1b3fe5ff.jpg kayaknya bakal lebih enak daripada linear flow yang setengah2...
00:52:800 (5,6,7,8) - bisa diatur lah biar letaknya di tengah http://puu.sh/pYTgE/896f03971f.jpg 00:51:593 (3,4) - bisa agak di kananin dikit, gerakkinnya bareng bareng biar ngga berubah overall patternya. http://puu.sh/pYTj4/fef4df2f97.jpg
00:54:352 (8) - NC? Kayaknya biasanya di NC...
01:10:559 ada drum lumayan gede nih disini, bisa paling ngga add circle buat nge support drumnya, ato kalo mw, lebih bagus lagi kalo pake 1/2 slider biar bisa sekalian support streamnya...
01:13:662 (1,2) - kalo ini di ctrl+g, bakal lebih bagus sih jadi 1/1 slidernya bisa full nge support vocal doang, tpi emphasizenya agak terganggu (?) terserah sih .-.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:00:560 (1,2,3,4) - Di Normalnya di NC, di Hard ngga, maunya gimana nih jadinya :v dibikin konsisten aja deh NC bagian sininya.
00:04:784 (1) - Dipanjangin lah, paling ngga sampe white tick yang selanjutnya, lebih bagus lagi kalo sampe red tick, tpi mungkin jangan karena Hard. Soalnya suara "wuuuuzzhhh" nya itu lanjut terus sampe sesaat sebelom stream jadi agak aneh kalo spinnernya dipotong.
00:10:732 (3,4) - agak aneh nih rasanya soalnya big soundnya tuh ada di red tick disini 00:10:904 sama 00:11:249 makannya kamu pake rhythm kayak gini 00:07:801 (2) - tetep bisa cocok soalnya ada suara drum. Tpi kalo mw di support pake slider kayak bagian yang kedua ini, mendingan didengerin lagi bagian yang bignya, kayak yg udh dibilang, di bagian ini, suara di red ticknya lebih gede soalnya ada suara drum jadi agak aneh kalo cuman di support pake slider tail. Mungkin bisa dicoba rhythm kayak gini http://puu.sh/pYTLJ/c7e6cbd1fa.jpg biar lebih cocok lagi.
00:11:249 (4,1) - Kalo misalnya ^ di apply, lebih bagus lagi deh kalo ini digabungin aja pake 1/2 slider soalnya disini suara 00:11:594 (2) - itu lebih gede daripada 00:11:421 (1) - tapi gara2 mereka sama2 circle, efeknya jadi agak ilang. Kalo misalnya 00:11:249 (4,1) - digabungin jadi slider, terus NC nya di 00:11:594 (2) - bakal lebih cocok karena (2) lebih ke emphasize.
00:19:352 (3,1) - agak jauh tuh spacingnya buat Hard .-. seriusan lebih mirip kayak 1/2 pattern daripada 1/4 .-. biasanya ini kan pattern buat Insane... buat Hard mendingan di overlap aja deh...
00:24:870 (3,1) - ^ Apalagi bagian ini (1) simetris sama 00:24:352 (2) - , karena 00:24:352 (2,3) - 1/2 pattern dan 00:24:352 (2,1) - itu simetris, pasti pada ngiranya 00:24:870 (3,1) - itu 1/2 pattern juga...
00:28:663 (1) - Pake triplets aja deh xD ato paling ngga 1/4 reverse slider...
00:31:421 (7) - kayaknya extra baget deh note ini xD di bagian ini ga ada suara sama sekali jadi mendingan di delete aja deh. Ato kalo tetep mw ada note, buat menuh2in, mendingan 00:31:249 (6,7) - digabungin pake 1/2 slider. Soalnya extra banget kalo pake circle di tempat yang ngga ada bunyi apa apa xD
00:33:835 (2,3) - Kayaknya mendingan ctrl+g deh biar 1/2 reverse slider dulu baru 1/2 slider yang biasa soalnya big sound yang di 00:34:352 sama 00:34:525 jadi kurang ke emphasize kalo pake reverse sama slider tail doang. Kalo di apply, lebih bagus lagi kalo 00:34:352 (3,4) - di ctrl+g juga biar big sound nya sama sama clickable jadi lebih ke emphasize lagi. Jadi beginilah rhythmnya http://puu.sh/pYU9U/86202e214d.jpg
00:35:387 (2,3,4) - Hmmhhh xDD gimana yak, emphasizenya kayaknya ga bener nih. Mungkin 00:35:387 (2,3) - bisa di ctrl+g soalnya suara di 00:35:732 itu gede dan similar sama ini 00:35:904 jadi aneh aja gitu kalo di map cuma pake slider tail...
00:36:249 (1,2,3) - ini juga.... mungkin bisa dicoba rhythm semacam ini http://puu.sh/pYUlN/b20d412f81.jpg
00:54:438 (1) - Kayaknya mendingan di akhirin di sini deh 00:58:317 soalnya di big white tick itu cuma vocal dan ga segede suara di 00:58:317
00:59:352 (1,2) - Kayaknya ini pattern buat Insane deh xD mendingan pake triplet biasa ato 1/4 reverse slider... ato paling ngga di DS ato di stack.
Yang lainnya cukup oke sih, emphasizingnya agak berantakan aja kayaknya...

Aduh pusingnya nge mod pake storyboard xD
Good storyboard btw :3
Dan cemungudh yaa ^^ Maap cuman bisa 2 diff, soalnya 2 diff aja lama ngemodnya xD
Good luck for rank~

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 9 years ago

habi
00:00:560 (1,2,3) - try to change a bit (3)'s shape a bit, then copy/paste it and replace it instead of (1) to make a bit like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5680444 it looks better visually
also 70% it's too loud for a "calm" part I think you should decrease a bit
00:07:284 (1) - it would more readable for beginners to restart to play at 00:07:284 - imo
as for example: stop your spinner at 00:06:766 (3) - and start a slider at 00:07:284 - and finish it at 00:07:801 - as you did for 00:10:042 (1,2,3) - (just an example, you can keep it if you really want to I just wanted you to get noticed xd)
01:17:800 (3) - move it a bit down to blanket with 01:16:421 (1) -
01:26:765 (4) - it is really necessary ? I think it'll plays better if you stop at 01:25:903 - and add a spinner after imo

normal
00:04:697 (1,1) - I think you should simply finish your slider at 00:06:077 (1) - instead of add a circle imo
00:47:627 (4) - missing clap on its head
01:25:903 (1) - as easy

hard
00:12:284 (5,6,1) - they should have more spacing than 00:11:939 (4,5) -
00:28:663 (1) - maybe a 1/4 slider reverse works too ? or try copy/paste'ing 00:59:352 (1,2) -
00:47:627 (4) - missing clap

insane
01:17:455 (5,6) - ctrl+g here would be better since emphasis should be on (5) not (6) imo
good diff

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two last diffs seems also good, good luck Haruto!

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,652 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 9 years ago

Expert

00:00:560 - Why is the SV so fast o.o" Can you use something slower? like 0.75, or 0.6x? It feels quite forced in the intro imo

.
00:15:559 (1,2) - Blanket is still kinda off even after enabling stacking.
00:39:870 (4) - I'd NC them for clarity. Since these are 1/6's.
01:12:283 (1,2) - This jump is so big compared to the other jumps.
01:14:179 (2,3) - Don't stack here. You should emphasize 3 cuz of the vocals. Do a jump instead?
01:22:110 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is so confusing to read... Can you arrange them so you don't have to guess where the next object will be?

Insane

00:23:146 (3,4,5) - 180 degree turns just play relaly poorly when the next circle is also a really linearly placed object. 3>4>5 theres barely any angle change so its hard to snap. Theres also a spacing change which makes it even more uncomfortable. Do a triangle with 00:23:146 (3) -

hopefully you can see what im doing here

00:33:318 (6,1,2,3,4) - Less stacks like this please xP. It's actually really annoying to play stuff like this when the back and forths are stacked on one side, and switching locations on the other.
00:49:524 (3,4) - Why is there a jump here, 4 isn't emphasized. The slider-end stack is kinda unnecessary here imo... just do something more readable?
00:50:041 (6) - This however, has an audible drum beat so put some spacing to it instead of stacking it under 5.
00:54:007 (6) - 1/2 slider instead? The sound kinda lingers.
00:54:869 (2,3,4,5,1) - Pls, these stacks xP. Like, its weird how you do a 1/1 stack 00:55:386 (5,1) - here, then like half a second later you do a 1/2 stack with 00:56:076 (3,4) - . and theres also a 1/2 stack with 00:54:869 (2,3) - . It's just really confusing cuz of all the different stacks with different rhythms.
00:57:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yea this is so confusing. 00:57:972 (6,7) - Ctrl+G this so its up down up down up down and the movement is predicable.
01:02:627 (1,2,3,1) - Again with stacks that are different rhythms xP. 01:02:283 (4,1) - As well

.
01:14:352 (3,4) - I think you can do a larger jump here.
01:15:903 (6,7) - Ctrl+G' the rhythm? Sounds better imo. 01:16:076 - should be clickable.
01:17:110 (3,4) - Stacks are really confusing here too because you go back from 4>5, and then you have another series of back/forth jumps like 01:17:627 (6,1,2) - but the problem is 6>1 should have higher spacing due to the emphasis in the music, 01:17:972 (2) - isn't even a drumbeat, just a vocal.

Hmm... not liking the way you used stacks in this diff xP. You can arrange the notes in a way that don't confuse the player. Or you can just use more note placements instead of using stacks so often. The point of hexagon grids is to give you a lot of placement options that also make the map structurally sound.

Hard

00:20:215 (2,3,4,1) - Now this is how you do stacks correctly. 1/1 = stacked. 1/2 = movement. This is good.
00:27:887 - Is this break intentional? You don't do it for other diffs.
00:42:627 (3,1) - Spacing here could be larger to indicate 1/1 gap.
00:44:007 (3,1) - Why is there such a large jump here... It's a slow section.
01:01:938 (3,1) - I think the repeat is being covered too much for Slider 1.
01:06:076 (3,1) - Stacks are off,
01:07:800 (4,1) - Larger spacing to indicate its a 1/1 gap?
01:25:903 - Kinda weird you just put a spinner here. On your other diffs you map the vocals out.

Normal

00:18:663 (2,3,4,5) - I think this rhythm is too dense for Normal.. Can you simplify and reduce some 1/2 clicking rhythms? 1/2 click rhythm = player has to click two beats within 1/2 a beat apart. so like 00:18:663 (2,3) - is 1/2 clicking rhythm but 00:18:835 (3,4) - is not, because even tho its 1/2, players click and have more time to release before clicking again.
01:04:524 (2,3,4,1) - This is so confusing xP. 2>3 and 3>4 are spaced, then 4>1 is stacked. I think this isn't good for beginners. Can you just use a 1/2 slider or delete 01:05:214 (4) - and put a 1/1 gap?

Habi's Easy

Please check AiMod. There are some Kiai snapping errors.
00:04:697 (1) - This isn't enough spinner recovery time. You need 1 measure (4 beats) of recovery time for Easy. Can you map a long slider here or something?
00:15:732 (1,1) - Same here, this isn't enough recovery time for an Easy.
01:06:248 (2,3) - Spacing here is 1.11x, should be 1.00x
01:17:110 (2,3) - Spacing can be more consistent here too.

Storyboard

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SB\sakura.png
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SB\thnx.png
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SB\LYRIC SENTENCES\1st v\sa.png
SB\LYRIC SENTENCES\1st v\shi.png
SB\LYRIC SENTENCES\1st v\shu.png
SB\LYRIC SENTENCES\1st v\Shutsu.png
SB\LYRIC SENTENCES\1st v\soku.png
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Are all unused. Get your storyboarder to go check them. I think there are a lot of duplicate images. For example, SB/1 and SB/a are the same image, but one is a larger (and unrankable) resolution.

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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 9 years ago

LOL THOSE SB STUFF LMAO
ok seems like i did something very wrong xd its all caused by me. i'll fix everything tonight! thanks Monstra, hanyuu, mugiwara for the mods <3
edit :

Monstrata wrote:
Expert

00:00:560 - Why is the SV so fast o.o" Can you use something slower? like 0.75, or 0.6x? It feels quite forced in the intro imo . sure, changed the intro sv
00:15:559 (1,2) - Blanket is still kinda off even after enabling stacking. k
00:39:870 (4) - I'd NC them for clarity. Since these are 1/6's. alright nc'ed
01:12:283 (1,2) - This jump is so big compared to the other jumps. reduced
01:14:179 (2,3) - Don't stack here. You should emphasize 3 cuz of the vocals. Do a jump instead? doing a sharp jump on 2 so the vocal will have its feedback from 1>2 jump
01:22:110 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is so confusing to read... Can you arrange them so you don't have to guess where the next object will be? hmm i agree. i'll rerarrange this jumps

Insane

00:23:146 (3,4,5) - 180 degree turns just play relaly poorly when the next circle is also a really linearly placed object. 3>4>5 theres barely any angle change so its hard to snap. Theres also a spacing change which makes it even more uncomfortable. Do a triangle with 00:23:146 (3) - alright did the same thing like what you did
hopefully you can see what im doing here
00:33:318 (6,1,2,3,4) - Less stacks like this please xP. It's actually really annoying to play stuff like this when the back and forths are stacked on one side, and switching locations on the other. fixed xd
00:49:524 (3,4) - Why is there a jump here, 4 isn't emphasized. The slider-end stack is kinda unnecessary here imo... just do something more readable? make it moarrr readable than before lol
00:50:041 (6) - This however, has an audible drum beat so put some spacing to it instead of stacking it under 5. oh i put a jump instead here, hope its okay tho xd
00:54:007 (6) - 1/2 slider instead? The sound kinda lingers. added a note instead
00:54:869 (2,3,4,5,1) - Pls, these stacks xP. Like, its weird how you do a 1/1 stack 00:55:386 (5,1) - here, then like half a second later you do a 1/2 stack with 00:56:076 (3,4) - . and theres also a 1/2 stack with 00:54:869 (2,3) - . It's just really confusing cuz of all the different stacks with different rhythms. slightly reduced the stacks by placing sliderjumps instead
00:57:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yea this is so confusing. 00:57:972 (6,7) - Ctrl+G this so its up down up down up down and the movement is predicable. sure, ctrl+g'ed
01:02:627 (1,2,3,1) - Again with stacks that are different rhythms xP. 01:02:283 (4,1) - As well . did something here
01:14:352 (3,4) - I think you can do a larger jump here. nahh i dont think i should make a bigger jump there xP the drum isn't strong anyways, my main follow on this part is the drum so i dont want to emphasize any vocal here.
01:15:903 (6,7) - Ctrl+G' the rhythm? Sounds better imo. 01:16:076 - should be clickable. sure
01:17:110 (3,4) - Stacks are really confusing here too because you go back from 4>5, and then you have another series of back/forth jumps like 01:17:627 (6,1,2) - but the problem is 6>1 should have higher spacing due to the emphasis in the music, 01:17:972 (2) - isn't even a drumbeat, just a vocal. fixed this by ctrl+g'ing 6>1>2 or you could see the changes instead

Hmm... not liking the way you used stacks in this diff xP. You can arrange the notes in a way that don't confuse the player. Or you can just use more note placements instead of using stacks so often. The point of hexagon grids is to give you a lot of placement options that also make the map structurally sound. i knowww, i just love doing stacks but seems like it turned out into a disaster or smth xd

Hard

00:20:215 (2,3,4,1) - Now this is how you do stacks correctly. 1/1 = stacked. 1/2 = movement. This is good. yeah, i usually do this thing thats why the stacks on insane looks like a disaster lo
00:27:887 - Is this break intentional? You don't do it for other diffs. nahh i wanted to put a break here. wait what o.o? im not doing it on other diffs? i was placing the break on normal smhw. i'll doublecheck this then.
00:42:627 (3,1) - Spacing here could be larger to indicate 1/1 gap. fixed, hope its larger enough
00:44:007 (3,1) - Why is there such a large jump here... It's a slow section. hmm idk how to fix this but i placed the jump here 00:43:834 (2,3) - instead to emphasize the drum sound
01:01:938 (3,1) - I think the repeat is being covered too much for Slider 1. isn't it, repeats that is covered with another slider is just a guideline? i'll consider to fix this if it have be fixed
01:06:076 (3,1) - Stacks are off, only a little but ok xD
01:07:800 (4,1) - Larger spacing to indicate its a 1/1 gap? i think its large enough to me.
01:25:903 - Kinda weird you just put a spinner here. On your other diffs you map the vocals out. thats what im doing with the lower diffs mostly. i used spinner too on normal btw ;o

Normal

00:18:663 (2,3,4,5) - I think this rhythm is too dense for Normal.. Can you simplify and reduce some 1/2 clicking rhythms? 1/2 click rhythm = player has to click two beats within 1/2 a beat apart. so like 00:18:663 (2,3) - is 1/2 clicking rhythm but 00:18:835 (3,4) - is not, because even tho its 1/2, players click and have more time to release before clicking again. well it wasnt like this before, someone mentioned that the part should be mapped so i mapped it instead. reverting it into doing some 1/1 slider
01:04:524 (2,3,4,1) - This is so confusing xP. 2>3 and 3>4 are spaced, then 4>1 is stacked. I think this isn't good for beginners. Can you just use a 1/2 slider or delete 01:05:214 (4) - and put a 1/1 gap? deleted 4 then

Storyboard

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SB\Himeringo.png
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SB\im gay.jpg
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SB\sakura.png
SB\spotlight.png
SB\syber.png
SB\thnx.png
SB\tilts.png
SB\white privilege.jpg
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SB\K n H\Ru.png
SB\K n H\Yaku.png
SB\K n H\~Tsu.png
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SB\Lyric\c7.png
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SB\STATIX\static_0002.jpg
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SB\STATIX\static_0005.jpg
SB\STATIX\static_0006.jpg
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SB\K n H\ASFSDFGHDf.psd
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Are all unused. Get your storyboarder to go check them. I think there are a lot of duplicate images. For example, SB/1 and SB/a are the same image, but one is a larger (and unrankable) resolution. Removed all lul

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You can call me back when everything is properly responded to.

MugiwaraSekai wrote:
normal
00:04:697 (1,1) - I think you should simply finish your slider at 00:06:077 (1) - instead of add a circle imo nahh i actually likes how the slider ends currently :s
00:47:627 (4) - missing clap on its head oops, added
01:25:903 (1) - as easy nahh, that wont give any feedback to the vocal tho xd

hard
00:12:284 (5,6,1) - they should have more spacing than 00:11:939 (4,5) - nahh this should be fine imo
00:28:663 (1) - maybe a 1/4 slider reverse works too ? or try copy/paste'ing 00:59:352 (1,2) - do you know why i didnt put 1/6 slider here? if i put it... that would make the slider a bit unreadable which is bad. so placing 1/4 might makes people thinks that im snapping it in a wrong way xD
00:47:627 (4) - missing clap oops, fixed

insane
01:17:455 (5,6) - ctrl+g here would be better since emphasis should be on (5) not (6) imo already fixed on monstrata's mod
good diff

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two last diffs seems also good, good luck Haruto!

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hey, M4M from my modding Q~
Kinda late, sorry

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

Check AiMod, pretty much stuff there, kiai stuffs especially.

[Normal]
SPOILER
Cek lagi deh AiModnya, masih ada DS problems tuh gaa, itu gara2 stack aja. gw placing stacknya manually jadi kek gitu
00:06:077 (1) - ini perlu banget ya? .-. meskipun di big white tick, tpi karena bagian lagunya masih bagian lagu yg tenang, jadinya kayaknya ga terlalu ada suara yang terlalu signifikan buat di map pake circle deh. Kenapa circlenya ga di delete aja terus slidernya dipanjangin sampe big white tick? Kayaknya bakal lebih cocok kayak gitu. Ato kalo menurut aku bakal lebih cocok lagi kalo dipanjangin terus slidernya sampe sini 00:06:766 biar slidernya bisa nge-cover background sound sama vocalnya secara lebih penuh lagi. Btw, kalo tetep mau pake circle, kayaknya mendingan jangan di stack deh soalnya takutnya dikira 1/2 pattern... ok.. karena banyak org yg mention jadi gw extend slidernya TwT
00:31:594 (6) - Bagian ini ngga di map kayak ini 00:28:835 (1,2) - ? suara piano (?) nya masih ada kok .-. Mungkin bisa pake 1/2 reverse slider biar ke cover semua soundnya... ga deh, gw pake 1/1 buat vokal btw. dan gaada maksud buat ngikut drum dari awal since the diff mainly follows vocal so it should be okay
00:33:318 (3,4,5) - Hmmm, bagian ini kayaknya rhythmnya butuh di rework deh, agak miss emphasizenya. Suara drum disini 00:33:318 mendingan pake circle aja soalnya di bagian yang ini ada suara vocal yang gede di white tick, jadi kalo drumnya dipakein circle, suara vocalnya bisa di support pake slider, singkatnya ini 00:33:318 (3,4) - di balik lah. Terus suara di 00:34:352 itu kenceng banget, biasanya juga di map jadi kalo ga di map jadi kesannya agak aneh gitu, jadi mendingan 00:34:008 (5) - dipendekkin sampe red tick aja terus di add circle abis itu. Jadi kurang lebih begini rhyhtmnya oke patternnya gw ctrl+g tapi untuk memperpendek slidernya keknya ga. itu mainly buat ngasi feedback sama long vocal so hopefully you are okay with it http://puu.sh/pYSR5/7089031b44.jpg bakal lebih cocok sih imo.
00:37:284 (5,1) - tajem banget nih sudutnya xD ga terlalu enak buat dimainin... mungkin 00:37:628 (1) - bisa di puter ke kanan dikit, terus kalo di apply, 00:38:490 (2,1,2) - bisa di geser dikit ke kanan biar ngga overlap http://puu.sh/pYSXP/a89aeca1c1.jpg gampang kok DSnya -w- nahh prefer this angle tho. sorry main reason = doesnt seem that sharp since the spacing isnt large too so its okay
00:41:938 (1,2) - Bagian ini mungkin juga bisa diputer dikit ke kiri biar keliatan kayak symmetry sama bagian dari slider wave 00:40:559 (1) - yang sebelumnya. http://puu.sh/pYT32/3596195403.jpg blanketnya juga masih bisa di improve tuh :v fixed the blanket :v
00:44:696 (2,3,4,5) - Gimana kalo dibikin circular flow aja? http://puu.sh/pYTbG/4b1b3fe5ff.jpg kayaknya bakal lebih enak daripada linear flow yang setengah2... hmm gw consider deh kurang ngerti juga mau dibuat circular gimana ntar struktur diffnya ancur ><
00:52:800 (5,6,7,8) - bisa diatur lah biar letaknya di tengah http://puu.sh/pYTgE/896f03971f.jpg 00:51:593 (3,4) - bisa agak di kananin dikit, gerakkinnya bareng bareng biar ngga berubah overall patternya. http://puu.sh/pYTj4/fef4df2f97.jpg aaa gw takut squarenya ancur /w\
00:54:352 (8) - NC? Kayaknya biasanya di NC... oops, nc'ed
01:10:559 ada drum lumayan gede nih disini, bisa paling ngga add circle buat nge support drumnya, ato kalo mw, lebih bagus lagi kalo pake 1/2 slider biar bisa sekalian support streamnya... slider sebelumnya itu buat ngasi feedback synth soundnya, kalo ngikut drum jadi agak aneh gimana gitu. considering deh gw kurang ngerti juga mau diubah gimana xD
01:13:662 (1,2) - kalo ini di ctrl+g, bakal lebih bagus sih jadi 1/1 slidernya bisa full nge support vocal doang, tpi emphasizenya agak terganggu (?) terserah sih .-. idk deh, will consider this ._.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:00:560 (1,2,3,4) - Di Normalnya di NC, di Hard ngga, maunya gimana nih jadinya :v dibikin konsisten aja deh NC bagian sininya.
00:04:784 (1) - Dipanjangin lah, paling ngga sampe white tick yang selanjutnya, lebih bagus lagi kalo sampe red tick, tpi mungkin jangan karena Hard. Soalnya suara "wuuuuzzhhh" nya itu lanjut terus sampe sesaat sebelom stream jadi agak aneh kalo spinnernya dipotong. ga deh, gw mau place gap diantara spinner>stream takutnya kalo dipanjangin malah susah diread due to low AR
00:10:732 (3,4) - agak aneh nih rasanya soalnya big soundnya tuh ada di red tick disini 00:10:904 sama 00:11:249 makannya kamu pake rhythm kayak gini 00:07:801 (2) - tetep bisa cocok soalnya ada suara drum. Tpi kalo mw di support pake slider kayak bagian yang kedua ini, mendingan didengerin lagi bagian yang bignya, kayak yg udh dibilang, di bagian ini, suara di red ticknya lebih gede soalnya ada suara drum jadi agak aneh kalo cuman di support pake slider tail. Mungkin bisa dicoba rhythm kayak gini http://puu.sh/pYTLJ/c7e6cbd1fa.jpg biar lebih cocok lagi. ini ngeflownya mainly ke drum btw so it should be okay
00:11:249 (4,1) - Kalo misalnya ^ di apply, lebih bagus lagi deh kalo ini digabungin aja pake 1/2 slider soalnya disini suara 00:11:594 (2) - itu lebih gede daripada 00:11:421 (1) - tapi gara2 mereka sama2 circle, efeknya jadi agak ilang. Kalo misalnya 00:11:249 (4,1) - digabungin jadi slider, terus NC nya di 00:11:594 (2) - bakal lebih cocok karena (2) lebih ke emphasize.
00:19:352 (3,1) - agak jauh tuh spacingnya buat Hard .-. seriusan lebih mirip kayak 1/2 pattern daripada 1/4 .-. biasanya ini kan pattern buat Insane... buat Hard mendingan di overlap aja deh... sebenarnya noticable kok dari ARnya, ini juga buat emphasize so its ok
00:24:870 (3,1) - ^ Apalagi bagian ini (1) simetris sama 00:24:352 (2) - , karena 00:24:352 (2,3) - 1/2 pattern dan 00:24:352 (2,1) - itu simetris, pasti pada ngiranya 00:24:870 (3,1) - itu 1/2 pattern juga... considering lol
00:28:663 (1) - Pake triplets aja deh xD ato paling ngga 1/4 reverse slider... hmm... kalo pake 1/4 ntar dikira wrong snapped atuh ><
00:31:421 (7) - kayaknya extra baget deh note ini xD di bagian ini ga ada suara sama sekali jadi mendingan di delete aja deh. Ato kalo tetep mw ada note, buat menuh2in, mendingan 00:31:249 (6,7) - digabungin pake 1/2 slider. Soalnya extra banget kalo pake circle di tempat yang ngga ada bunyi apa apa xD gw masi ngemap synth sound dari vokalnya sih wkwk jadi gpp ini~
00:33:835 (2,3) - Kayaknya mendingan ctrl+g deh biar 1/2 reverse slider dulu baru 1/2 slider yang biasa soalnya big sound yang di 00:34:352 sama 00:34:525 jadi kurang ke emphasize kalo pake reverse sama slider tail doang. Kalo di apply, lebih bagus lagi kalo 00:34:352 (3,4) - di ctrl+g juga biar big sound nya sama sama clickable jadi lebih ke emphasize lagi. Jadi beginilah rhythmnya http://puu.sh/pYU9U/86202e214d.jpg kalo dictrl+g ntar flownya ancur >< repeat disitu buat ngefollow drumnya gitu
00:35:387 (2,3,4) - Hmmhhh xDD gimana yak, emphasizenya kayaknya ga bener nih. Mungkin 00:35:387 (2,3) - bisa di ctrl+g soalnya suara di 00:35:732 itu gede dan similar sama ini 00:35:904 jadi aneh aja gitu kalo di map cuma pake slider tail... hm.. considering
00:36:249 (1,2,3) - ini juga.... mungkin bisa dicoba rhythm semacam ini http://puu.sh/pYUlN/b20d412f81.jpg considering, gw gamau triangular patternnya ancur ><
00:54:438 (1) - Kayaknya mendingan di akhirin di sini deh 00:58:317 soalnya di big white tick itu cuma vocal dan ga segede suara di 00:58:317 ih gabakal cocok ><
00:59:352 (1,2) - Kayaknya ini pattern buat Insane deh xD mendingan pake triplet biasa ato 1/4 reverse slider... ato paling ngga di DS ato di stack. kan dah gw bilang kalo 1/4 bakal dikira wrong snapped. sekali2 lah pake stuff begini di hard
Yang lainnya cukup oke sih, emphasizingnya agak berantakan aja kayaknya... ga berantakan lol cuma gw jarang aja buat emphasize gede di hard jadinya lu kira berantakan xD

Aduh pusingnya nge mod pake storyboard xD
Good storyboard btw :3
Dan cemungudh yaa ^^ Maap cuman bisa 2 diff, soalnya 2 diff aja lama ngemodnya xD
Good luck for rank~ Thanks for the mod! dont mind the red colours the mod was totally awesome but next time please make the explaination a bit more shorter, longer explaination would makes people lazy to write the long explaination too xD

Thanks for the mods guys!! i'll wait for Habi to fix them <3

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 9 years ago

On Normal, Insane, and Expert, the spinnner begins on 01:27:196 -

On Hard, the spinner begins at 01:25:990 - . So it's kinda inconsistent, thats why I pointed it out xD.

Surono

7,197 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 9 years ago

rip tacos, karena tacos tydac enak jika berlebihan atau terlalu di diamkan xd

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Haruto 9 years ago

Monstrata wrote:
On Normal, Insane, and Expert, the spinnner begins on 01:27:196 -

On Hard, the spinner begins at 01:25:990 - . So it's kinda inconsistent, thats why I pointed it out xD.

oh the spinner start time xD i'll fix them asap after school
@surono : didnt want to put the taikos back cuz its hard ranking it with taiko thank

Surono

7,197 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 9 years ago

thank it, kiddo tacos sungguh ta sedap di santab lagi wwww jika bumbu2nya tidak sedap *membuat tapi peralatan tak memadai ww*

HabiHolic

5,458 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 9 years ago

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 58491
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Haruto
Version:Habi's Easy
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
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Monstrata

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Monstrata 9 years ago

Unused:

SB\Lyric\c-44.jpg

That's all

Haruto

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Haruto 9 years ago

Monstrata wrote:
Unused:

SB\Lyric\c-44.jpg

That's all

oh. kk gotta fix it immediately

Underforest

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Underforest 9 years ago

just a quick note before getting this bubbled

it's intended that there's 2 zoku on tags?

opening oregairu My teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU zoku my youth love comedy snafu yahari ore no sheisun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku season 2 Haruto_aizawa Haruto- ProfessionalBox HabiHolic tv size

i think you can just leave one

Haruto

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Haruto 9 years ago

Underforest wrote:
just a quick note before getting this bubbled

it's intended that there's 2 zoku on tags?
opening oregairu My teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU zoku my youth love comedy snafu yahari ore no sheisun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku season 2 Haruto_aizawa Haruto- ProfessionalBox HabiHolic tv size
i think you can just leave one

woops, going to fix that as well! thanks for pointing out. Also updated and removed that file! (the .jpg one right)

Monstrata

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Monstrata 9 years ago

Bubbled! Good luck with ranking Haruto, Haru Modoki.

-Eriri-

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-Eriri- 9 years ago

M4M

Expert
00:00:560 - SV：0.7→0.5 may be more appropriate.Volume I think 35% is enough.
00:54:524 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Sound confusing
01:10:559 - Kiai?
01:19:524 (5,6,1) - not good, i think 6 can use a 1/4 slider
01:20:386 (1) - Fill it with circle may be better

CTRL+SHIFT+A, I saw Kiai isn't snapped!..

e.. My English is very poor and is willing to forgive me

PatZar

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PatZar 9 years ago

widi

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Sonnyc 9 years ago

Easy.
00:56:076 - 드럼이 더 적절해보이네요.
01:21:248 (3,1) - 작은 간격 불일치가 있는데 의도된 설정인가요?

Normal.
00:41:938 (1) - Remove NC. It's inconsistent with 00:47:455 (3).
00:51:593 (3) - Consider NC. Also consider removing nc at 00:50:214 (1). It will follow the song better.
01:01:248 (1) - 01:04:007 (1) - Remove NC. The combo went too short to indicate its pattern properly. Also you even didn't placed NC at the second part of the kiai. It wasn't nice in consistency.

Hard.
00:15:646 (1) - Other diffs made by you had a break here. Why is only hard having a spinner here?
01:01:938 (3,1) - The reverse arrow of (1) isn't viewable from the beginning due to the overlap. Though I feel there is enough time to read the reverse properly, can you think of another rhythm here instead using some edgy settings?

PB's Insane.
Do not use sliderslide hitsounds in a way that would replicate a hitsound on a circle, slider start, slider end, slider tick, or slider repeat. You'll want to think of an alternative way to represent your hitsound other than the current way. Issue present on soft-sliderslide4.wav.

Expert.
00:26:939 - This is the only difficulty that the break starts here. Is this an intended setting? If so, please apply also for other diffs. If not, make it like the other diffs. Consistency issue.
00:47:627 - Here too, along PB's Insane. This setting is unrankable.

Fine map. I liked the object's placement decision overall.
Popping over some obvious issue for now.

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