As requested~
Some small sugestion from me,
[General]
Need more aesthetic mods and a lot work on hitsound since the music have complicated drum and bass sound
Aku ngantuk, goodluck~
Some small sugestion from me,
[General]
- Might be a unrankable stuff, there's no video on muzukashii and oni and since this mapset have a video so well on each diff better to be consistent to have those video thing as well
- Rhythm:
- 00:41:259 (1,2) - Coba ritmenya dibuat mirip kaya gini 00:46:776 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/hERXZ/623d6fd133.jpg
- 01:16:087 - Tambah circle satu di sana? kaya agak aneh kalo dilewat, terus pake clap circlenya
Placing: - 00:07:294 (1) - Spacing error? kalo Pindah ke x:160 y:64 bgmn?
- 00:15:570 (3,4) - Spacing error? terutama yang (3), coba pindah (3) ke x:350 y:323, grid snap nya dimatiin
- 00:30:225 (3,1) - Spacing error? coba pindah (3) ke x:276 y:160 terus pindah (1) ke x:241 y:299 bgmn?
- 00:32:121 (3) - Spacing error? coba pindah ke x:28 y:132?
- 00:38:501 (1,2) - Spacing error? jauh bgt bedanya 0.06 spacingnya
- 00:43:328 (1,1) - Spacing error? terlalu deket
- 00:48:673 (1) - Coba pindah ke x:340 y:216?
Coba dicek lagi deh spacingnya banyak yang ga konsisten
Hitsound: - 00:00:570 - Bagian itu mungkin pake default soft sampleset mungkin lebih bagus deh, soalnya sayang bgt suara piano di sini 00:00:570 - , 00:01:949 , dan di sini 00:03:328 kurang dapet feelnya, jadi mungkin ditambah whistle dari default soft sampleset bagus, terus jangan lupa slider-slide nya disilent
- 00:07:294 (1) - Kayanya ga begitu perlu deh suara whistle di situ menurut aku
- 00:09:535 (2) - 00:12:294 (2) - Tambah finish di bagian reverse? kan suaranya mirip kaya ini 00:07:294 (1) -
- 00:15:052 (2) - Diganti pake whistle aja bgmn? biar konsisten suaranya sama 00:09:535 (2) - 00:12:294 (2) -
- 00:18:328 (2) - Tambah finish di awal?
- 00:19:190 (3) - Tambah whistle di awal?
- 00:19:535 - Aku ga paham green line S:C4 di sana buat apa, kalo mau ubah suara slider tick jadi kaya gitu minimal harus konsisten, berarti tambah green S:C4 juga di sini 00:22:294 - sama di sini 00:25:052 -
- 00:19:190 (3) - Delete whistle di reverse? pake clap aja juga udah cukup bagus
- 00:20:570 (4) - 00:23:328 (3) - Tambah whistle di bagian awal dan akhir?
- 00:23:845 (4) - Ganti whistle jadi clap di akhir?
- 00:26:087 (2) - Delete finish di awal? kurang cocok terlalu berisik cymbalnya
- 00:31:604 (2) - 00:34:363 (3) - 00:37:121 (2) - 00:48:673 (1) - Tambah whistle di bagian awal dan akhir?
- 01:07:811 (2) - Use clap instead
- 01:15:052 (1) - Delete clap di awal, ubah whistle di akhir jadi clap?
- 01:19:190 (1) - Tambah finish di awal?
Misc.: - 00:17:121 (1,2) - Swap NC? karena (2) udah beda masuk ke lirik jadi bagusnya (2) pake NC
- 00:43:328 (1) - 01:15:052 (1) - Wrong NC, take a look on your NC again
Susunan NC nya masih berantakan banget ga konsisten, terlalu banyak buat disebutin
- Rhythm and placing:
- 00:00:570 (1,2,1) - Agak aneh flownya, dibuat kaya gini lebih bagus http://puu.sh/hEUhY/498f7efaf1.jpg
- 01:15:052 (4,5,1) - Agak susah dibaca overlapnya
- 01:21:949 (1,2,3,4) - Aneh, coba ritmenya dibuat 1/1 slider aja kaya gini http://puu.sh/hEVa7/4da13ddf02.jpg terus setiap white ticknya dikasih clap
Hitsound: - 00:00:570 - Bagian itu mungkin pake default soft sampleset mungkin lebih bagus deh, soalnya sayang bgt suara piano di sini 00:00:570 - , 00:01:949 , dan di sini 00:03:328 kurang dapet feelnya, jadi mungkin ditambah whistle dari default soft sampleset bagus, terus jangan lupa slider-slide nya disilent
- 00:10:914 (4) - Bagian akhirnya whistle ganti clap, terus 00:11:604 (1) - Bagian awal tambah clap
- 00:50:914 (5) - Tambah clap di awal?
- 01:00:914 (3) - Whistle di akhir?
- 01:02:638 (1) - 01:04:018 (1) - 01:05:397 (1) - 01:07:466 (4) - 01:08:156 (1) - Whistle di awal?
- 01:05:914 (2) - 01:06:604 (3) - Bagian awal pake whistle, akhirnya pake clap?
- 01:14:707 (3) - Forget clap?
- 01:15:052 (4) - Tambah clap di awal?
- 01:16:087 - Tambah green line S:C3 di sana biar ticknya suara clap?
- 01:24:707 (1) - Awal pake whistle akhirnya pake clap, terus 01:25:225 (2) - awalnya kosong akhirnya pake whistle?
- 01:25:914 (1) - Tambah finish?
Misc.: - 00:18:328 (6) - Should be NC, soalnya udah beda musik terus masuk ke lirik jadi bagusnya (6) pake NC
- 01:27:466 - Green line-green line untuk bagian terakhir kok volumenya beda sama yang di easy?
Check again your NC
- 00:04:707 (1) - Lupa whistle di awal? dan kayanya ga perlu NC deh kalo diliat masih dalam jangkauan per 2 downbeat dan bagian drum-whistlenya ngebuat aneh, aku kira bagusnya silent di situ
- 00:19:190 (3) - Tambah whistle? terus whistle yang ini juga di awal 00:19:363 (4) - ?
- 00:36:776 (2) - Whistle di akhir? 00:37:294 (3) - Whistle di awal?
- 00:38:845 (3) - 00:44:535 (4) - Pake clap aja deh drpd whistle
- 00:43:328 (1) - Whistle di awal?
- 00:46:087 - Mulai dari situ sampai sini 00:54:363 - kok ga ada hitsoundnya
- 00:53:328 (2,1) - Rasanya flow sama overlap yang itu kurang bagus, mungkin (2) bisa di ctrl+g terus (1) dipindah ke x:359 y:198 http://puu.sh/hEWlU/e523bc90a3.jpg because you make a very lovely heart♥ http://puu.sh/hEWvZ/a2a8cf00ee.jpg
- 01:07:466 (4,1) - Unrankable stuff, beberapa kali aku coba mainin reverse arrownya yang di (1) ga keliatan
- 01:08:156 - Mulai dari situ sampai akhir ga ada hitsoundnya
Need more aesthetic mods and a lot work on hitsound since the music have complicated drum and bass sound
Aku ngantuk, goodluck~