00:09:756 (3) - Too much of the same thing, maybe you should add this slider right here?
00:16:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Many boring 2009 sliders here.
00:28:756 (1) - Try to make more of these, i love them.
Try to make more cool shapes, don't repeat something boring.00:36:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Boring, old 2009 shapes, try to play more normal maps and learn from them.
00:23:756 (3,4,5,6) - why, this looks ugly