Asserin wrote:

~Hello! heya

[With You]

1. 00:26:484 (1) - It is too far compared to the other I think it's fine
2. 00:33:380 (1) - Problem with hitsound ? Imo it shouldn't be clap XD fixed
3. 00:55:794 (2,2) - Hmm imo 00:57:174 (2) - Is stronger beat and you make there lower ds then 00:55:794 (2) XD Try to correct it i'm following another sound there 00:57:174 (2) -
4. 01:07:174 (2,2) - ^ try to correct other the same pls ^
5. 01:03:553 (4) - This is bad pleace for that imo :/ Stack it on 01:02:518 (2) - if you want make sth similar XD I like the movement it makes, I will keep it
6. 01:21:312 (6,1) - Make a bigger distance there cus its ugly a little :c http://puu.sh/pm7xP/770c11b1c5.jpg <=Should be okey fixed
7. 01:27:518 (1,2) - You cant stack it for real ;-; actually I can, to make the rhythm more comfortable to follow
8. 01:49:760 (1) - Its too rigid imo :d that's ok

[Hard]

1. 00:44:415 (1) - I know you like stack circles but its weird pleace for that imo try to put it there => http://puu.sh/pm8pJ/637921c051.jpg fixed
2. 01:03:380 (6) - Im not sure but its not too far ? (I dont really sure XD) that's ok
3. 01:16:484 (2,3) - Its bad idea for hards cus its rigid flow it flows nice imo
4. 01:17:001 (3,1) - And 01:17:518 (1) - Have bad pleace after 01:17:001 (3) I don't think it's making anything wrong or bad there
5. 01:49:760 (2) - Its hard so you should make easy flow for real, try to make this => http://puu.sh/pm8DP/019c698957.jpg it's pretended to be hard, just to emphasize that last jump

Hobbes2 wrote:

NM from queue

[Normal]

Distance problems according to aimod :C fixed

01:15:449 (2,3) - Looks like an unintentional overlap it's intentional and fine imo

01:25:622 - There's a sound here worth mapping not really, actually where's that sound?

Nice difficulty!


[Hard]

00:42:001 (2,3) - this like super slight overlap gets on my nerves, but it could be fine if you want it like that like what? anyway fixed

[With You]

00:38:122 (3,4) - Move this up so it's not offscreen that's actually not offscreen > http://prntscr.com/bew2f4

01:00:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Consider increasing hitsound volume as the song gets louder fixed

01:10:622 (1,2) - the distance between these makes it not clear they're 1/8 notes apart and not 1/4 notes apart as the game is about rhythm, you should feel the song and read the map as well to know it's not 1/4

01:21:656 (1,2) - ^Sort of? This might be fine. that's ok

01:24:415 (1,2) - ^ ^

Otherwise map looks great. Fun patterns.

Nice mapset, sorry the mod wasn't great. Gave a star.

Good luck! thank you -w-

like what? anyway fixed

01:25:622 - There's a sound here worth mapping not really, actually where's that sound?

Hobbes2 wrote:

like what? anyway fixed

Like what as in like you had it. I meant if you wanted that slight overlap then it was fine, sorry for not being clear.

01:25:622 - There's a sound here worth mapping not really, actually where's that sound?

Hm? Sounds clear to me? I guess you dont' mave to map it but there's definitely a sound there

Similar sound at 01:20:105 - (where it's also not mapped)

Didn't mention this in the mod, but I love the song! Can't wait to see it ranked

Tio Fenrir wrote:

Yo sup

[Hard]

Geral: AR=8 maybe? fixed

00:57:174 (2,3,4) - Talvez algo assim, pra seguir melhor o som ao fundo. Prefiro manter assim mesmo

01:15:449 (3) - Sugiro diminuir o slider até o tick vermelho e no próximo ponto branco colocar uma single note, ou faz um slider que comece aqui 01:15:794 - e termine aqui 01:15:967 - Prefiro que assim fique, para uma melhor percepção desse som no qual sigo.
( 01:34:760 - 01:40:105 - 01:45:622 - ) Eu até entendo que no Insane pra dar um plus na dificuldade é valido colocar umas triplets as vezes, mas no hard talvez não tenha necessidade, ainda mais porque não tem nada na música que exija triplets nestes pontos. Minha sugestão é ou tu deixar como apenas duas single notes nesses pontos, ou transformar em sliders curtos. Na verdade há sim, se tu for parar pra ouvir direito o vocal mescla com a batida dando sentido para o tick azul

01:28:553 (4) - Acho que ficaria maneiro se tu fizesse algo desse tipo usando uma time section bem lenta. Por exemplo. Just saying, não que o jeito que está agora precise ser mudado. Vou deixar assim mesmo, mas a sugestão foi boa.

[With You]

01:27:691 (2) - Stack em baixo da nota 3 ao invés da 1, fica melhor na hora de jogar. fixed

01:42:691 (3,4) - Slider maybe? E a seguir, em 01:43:036 (1,2) - tu transforma em 4 notas sendo fiel as patterns que tu fez ao decorrer da diff. fixed

01:50:277 (2,4) - Remove o new combo se possível. fixed

1. Metadata source: https://soundcloud.com/liquicityrecords ... eat-kostja
2. Clear!

1. 01:09:243 (1,2) - What is this flow? This flow is bad!, Can you used a simple flow? So it's can reading by newbie player!
2. 01:12:001 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:13:380 (3,4) - ^
4. 01:20:277 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:24:415 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:40:967 (4) - How about used this slider?
7. 01:50:967 (1) - Spinner started in 01:50:794-, not 01:50:967-

1. 00:21:312 (1,1) - Blanket in tail
2. 01:03:036 (5,6,7) - I don't know if this flow is good for hard diff <___<
3. 01:50:105 (1,2,3) - Why you not used triangle flow, like this?

1. 00:21:312 (1,1) - Click here!
2. 00:27:174 (3,1) - Blanket
3. 01:17:863 (2) - NC
4. 01:26:139 (2,4) - Blanket
5. 01:28:553 (7) - NC

KittyAdventure wrote:

As request!

Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]

1. Metadata source: https://soundcloud.com/liquicityrecords ... eat-kostja
2. Clear!

[Normal]

1. 01:09:243 (1,2) - What is this flow? This flow is bad!, Can you used a simple flow? So it's can reading by newbie player! fixed
2. 01:12:001 (1,2) - ^ fixed
3. 01:13:380 (3,4) - ^ fixed
4. 01:20:277 (1,2) - ^ fixed
5. 01:24:415 (3,4) - ^ fixed
6. 01:40:967 (4) - How about used this slider? seto's part
7. 01:50:967 (1) - Spinner started in 01:50:794-, not 01:50:967- fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:21:312 (1,1) - Blanket in tail fixed
2. 01:03:036 (5,6,7) - I don't know if this flow is good for hard diff <___< fixed
3. 01:50:105 (1,2,3) - Why you not used triangle flow, like this? fixed

[With You, I Can't Live Together Without You]

1. 00:21:312 (1,1) - Click here! fixed
2. 00:27:174 (3,1) - Blanket fixed
3. 01:17:863 (2) - NC fixed
4. 01:26:139 (2,4) - Blanket fixed
5. 01:28:553 (7) - NC fixed

No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~

UndeadCapulet wrote:

wendao's Advanced

1. 01:33:553 (5) - would really like to have a 1/2 slider to map both drum beats. Applies to all similar strong drum beats in the kiai. Though I guess you're mapping to vocals maybe, so idk lol you want mods on your diff right here's mods unfortunately yep, it's following the vocal xD

hi wendao >w< hi~

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, M4M from PM request (wow late)

General

1. Nothing to say

Senhor Seto's Normal

1. 01:24:415 (1) - Any reason to make this curve? There is no wub/strong guitar sound or whatever weird sound to have a slider totally different than the others imo and it overlaps with 01:15:449 (2) - ????
2. 01:28:553 (4,1) - Blanket? depends from what Seto's is gonna do after his changes
3. 01:44:070 (4,1) - Fix blanket Seto
4. 01:49:760 (4,5,6) - Here it feels a bit weird and untidy compared to the rest of the map, you could add a curve to 4 and make something prettier Seto

Hard

1. 01:23:036 (1) - Maybe the same curve as 01:24:415 (1) - for consistency the consistency is fine there

With You

1. 00:36:829 (2) - Maybe add a little curve to this slider like here 00:34:760 (1) - so it's more consistent fixed
2. 01:06:829 (1,3) - Blanket maybe for a better flow I think it's fine

Really nice map, can't find many things so it can be a NM if you want
Good luck!

UndeadCapulet wrote:

At your request:

With You

I think you start using big jumps too early for the build-up part. 00:57:346 (3,4) - is even larger than any of the jumps in 01:03:036 (1,2,3,4) - . If you make the spacing throughout 00:55:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - much smaller, the drums afterwards will feel more powerful. fixed

1. 00:31:656 (3) - I found this slider to be a weird clicking rhythm because there's no sound here. Imo, you should delete this slider, and use this rhythm instead, that way it matches up with the repeat at 00:29:587 (2) - . Or, if you don't like a slider repeat more than once, this can also work. fixed
2. 00:43:380 (2) - This 3/4 slider is sort of weird to me, because this part of the song is an "echo" of the previous vocal line, it's weaker in feeling, but you use a more complex rhythm here. I think it's fine imo
3. 01:37:174 (3,4) - Making this a 3/4 slider so the vocal rhythms matches with 01:35:794 (3) - would be nice. Same for 01:48:208 (3,4) - . The idea here is to make the map more harder, making jumps that follows the rhythms and the vocal
4. 01:39:932 (2) - NC here to be consistent with 01:17:863 (1) - . fixed
5. 01:49:243 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ah, this part was nice :> thank you =w=

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Hard

1. NC job in the intro is very inconsistent, you should redo it so parts like 00:24:070 (1) - and 00:35:105 (4) - , etc. have the same NC patterning. fixed
2. 01:39:932 (2,3,4) - 1/2 slider into triplet motion is a very tricky rhythm for Hard level players. It shouldn't be the first triplet that appears in your difficulty, especially when the song is about to end, this is a spike in difficulty. fixed

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Senhor Seto's Normal

Not sure about this difficulty.. very weird rhythms, randomly switches between keyboard melody and drum beats, inconsistently so. I think you should get more opinions about the rhythming in this diff. Talnatch, algo de errado não está certo.

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• [With You]

1. 00:39:846 - o you put a inherited point but forgot to mute
2. 00:43:639 - better mute here either, is a calm part, these kinda sliderend without mute always sound really awkward
3. 01:00:967 - yay pp jumps
4. nice diff, got a suggestion for you, well isnt a suggestion just my personal opinion, 01:20:277 (1,2) - 01:23:380 (3,4) - 01:34:070 (1,2) - the flow these kinda stuff got are really awkward, i would avoid them in a jumpy map like this, cuz the movement these got are just so inconsistent with the jump part, like 01:20:277 (1,2) - , is awkward flow, but try to ctrl + g at 01:20:622 (2,3) - would be much better, and the movement is more consist with this jump part, same thing at other part

• [Giralda's Insane]

1. just gonna mention some part that you should NC, 00:25:105 (3) - 00:27:863 (5) - 00:30:622 (5) - 00:36:139 (3) - 00:38:898 (6) - 00:41:656 (6) -
2. lol dont copy paste =w=
3. 01:02:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to slowly increasing the spacing here, is a good way to emphasized the music here
4. 01:24:760 (1) - unnecessary NC
5. 01:28:553 (5) - stack on 01:28:898 (1) - would be nicer
6. 01:36:829 (3) - NC for consistent
7. 01:41:656 (4) - ^

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue
i think you need to consider to change a BG, the current BG isnt that fit to the music imo =w= actually, it's to fit to another thing =w=

• [With You]

1. 00:39:846 - o you put a inherited point but forgot to mute fixed
2. 00:43:639 - better mute here either, is a calm part, these kinda sliderend without mute always sound really awkward fixed
3. 01:00:967 - yay pp jumps lol
4. nice diff, got a suggestion for you, well isnt a suggestion just my personal opinion, 01:20:277 (1,2) - 01:23:380 (3,4) - 01:34:070 (1,2) - the flow these kinda stuff got are really awkward, i would avoid them in a jumpy map like this, cuz the movement these got are just so inconsistent with the jump part, like 01:20:277 (1,2) - , is awkward flow, but try to ctrl + g at 01:20:622 (2,3) - would be much better, and the movement is more consist with this jump part, same thing at other part I like the movement it makes, gonna keep it. Anyway, that was a good suggestion, thank you for your effort

GL~
pp map confirmed

Kocari wrote:

From VNO Modding Team

[With You]

00:27:130 - You can here an extra beat during this part, I think you can map this out fixed
00:32:648 - Same as ^ as well as the others if you choose to do so fixed
00:56:484 (1) - For this slider you can copy paste 00:56:829 (1) - it's more balanced to have what you have with straight slider then curves sliders to end your pattern http://puu.sh/qe8Kp/4437690f0c.jpg This slider was made to give emphasys to the next pattern, essencially to make the flow more intentional

[Hard]

00:30:277 (3,1) - Spacing here is kinda weird (3) three and (1) needs to be a bit further to play better fixed
01:02:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can also double up here and do something like this http://puu.sh/qe9mw/14004e4c4b.jpg Gonna keep it, I really like what I did =w=
01:40:105 (3,4,5) - Can be 1.2 spacing Somebody told me it was better stacked since it's Hard and keeps the consistency
01:50:105 (1,2) - Ctrl+G will make flow stand out more fixed

Others are not bad

Kocari wrote:

01:40:105 (3,4,5) - Can be 1.2 spacing Just to sum up, I meant you can change from 1.3 to 1.2 DS to keep it consistent but you can keep the triplet

1. 69 sliders is nice
2. 00:22:346 (1,2) - fix symmetry
3. 01:27:174 (1) - end this 01:28:208 - here, it makes more sense rhythmically and gives increased recovery time
4. 01:50:708 (1) - You don't have to, but it would make more sense if you ended your spinner in the same places the other difficulties end, 01:50:708 (1) - here

1. 01:49:243 (1) - NC?

1. 00:23:036 (2,3,1) - fix symmetry, or change it to be less symmetrical
2. 00:25:105 (2,3) - fix those blankets
3. I think you should use more hitsounds to emphasize the kicks in the music:
   01:06:829 - 01:07:518 - 01:08:208 - 01:08:898 - etc.
   it continues into your kiai 01:29:587 - 01:30:277 - 01:30:967 -

1. 00:26:829 (1) - move this somewhere else, it looks like it was supposed to be symmetrical with 00:26:484 (7) - this
2. 00:35:105 (2) - similar ^

Plaudible wrote:

M4M from your queue~ <3 my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/480736
___________________

Hard
01:02:001 (6,5) - Not so visible, but the way these two stack feels awkward to see in editor... fixed
01:03:380 (7) - Feels out of place with previous pattern. fixed
01:14:760 (1) - Blanket needs improvement. Position at 01:15:105, then look at approach circle of 01:15:277 (2). It's ok also you saw it wrong it's blanket with 01:15:449 (3) -
01:31:829 (2,3) - Maybe just an idea, stack these and position 3 "centered" above 01:31:312 (1), if that makes sense? Gonna keep it since it's making more sense for the consistency (I aprecciate the idea)
01:35:449 (1) - Make sure the first part of this slider is parallel to the end part, needs work. It doesn't need to be parallel and my idea there was to make it more "flexible"

Generally I feel the same about this diff as wendao's, both very nice.

With You
00:23:036 (2) - Feel like you should pull this slider up more. Make the middle of 2 align so it goes straight on w/ 00:23:725 (1) if that makes sense. Actually I just want to keep it blanket
00:24:415 (2) - ^ Though this may make it go offscreen, may require raising if you choose to change. You blanketed both sides nicely though~ It's not offscreen but nice suggestion (owo)-b
00:38:122 (3,4) - Interesting way to map these, I like it. Thank you !! =w=

No other complaints here. Fun jumps, well mapped. Nicely done! Good luck~

Jonawaga wrote:

M4M

[hard]

1. 00:23:036 (2,3,1) - fix symmetry, or change it to be less symmetrical what do you mean? I wasn't aiming to symmetry
2. 00:25:105 (2,3) - fix those blankets they're fine
3. I think you should use more hitsounds to emphasize the kicks in the music:
   01:06:829 - 01:07:518 - 01:08:208 - 01:08:898 - etc.
   it continues into your kiai 01:29:587 - 01:30:277 - 01:30:967 - the kicks are emphasized by itself

good luck!!

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello SrSkyPlayer,
NM

Hard
01:01:656 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g? (time line) I'm gonna keep it because of my rhythm's choice
01:23:553 (2,3) - ^ fixed
01:40:191 (4) - i don't hear anything different here for unexpected triple. beat + vocal
01:45:708 (3) - ^ Anyway You didn't used 1/4 before, so any reason for start? that's because the vocal fits to the beat just here

2 high diffs seems pretty cool. Well done.
I think i stop here , definitely I'm too tired today pls kill me
I'm out. Goodluck.

Jonawaga wrote:

[wendao]

1. 01:49:243 (1) - NC? oh yes, thanks for noticing this one

Mitkoff wrote:

Advanced
hello wendao, hi, and I just summarized your mod

00:28:553 (2) - idk why but i dislike this visual spacing oo.. changed a bit

00:37:174 (1) - Nc should be here i think -> 00:37:863 (2) - I don't really like it, but seems logical enough, fix

01:13:380 (4,5,6,1) - yeah i dislike full this part well it was my mapping style, but yeah, that rhythm change looks awkward tho

01:14:587 - (literally last pic) tried to follow this one, seems it just make it harder to follow, and basically got the same rhythm as now (following the synth)

wendao wrote:

rank this now

wendao wrote:

wendao wrote:

rank this now