Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles
Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggestion and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!
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[Onozuka's Journey on the Sanzu River]
SPOILER
00:25:029 (25029|1) - move to 1 for better vision and to remove the awkwardness in the 2nd column where 00:24:335 (24335|1,25029|1,25202|1) - . Moving to 1 can solve the awkward feeling plus it fits to the sound of bass which is similar to 00:30:405 (30405|2,30578|2) -
00:43:757 (43757|1,43931|2) - move to 3 and 1 respectively as it feels awkward in this part because of 00:43:410 (43410|0,43584|0,43584|1,43757|1) -
00:45:231 (45231|1,45318|2) - move to 1 and 4 respectively as they are different percussion sounds and feels weird if just trill in 2 columns.
01:06:821 - add note to 1? pretty strong sound to finish this phase and it fits well.
01:08:208 - atlast 1/4ths for the hihat-like sounds yay.
01:18:266 - add note to 3 since snare-like sound + that additional sound that is echoing.
01:21:734 (81734|0,81734|1) - swap column notes for better view and already LN occured at 2nd column: 01:20:694 (80694|1) - which is kind off to repeat again at the same column.
01:41:503 (101503|1) - move to 3 seems more comfortable for 01:41:676 (101676|1) - and also not repeating the note pattern of the different sound at 01:41:156 (101156|1,101156|0,101156|3) -
02:02:832 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/p4Tw7/b6e98c8d81.png for clearer vision and not awkward to execute.
02:14:798 - add note to 3, strong cymbal sound which gives more impact and also to differ with 02:14:451 (134451|0,134451|1) - . It is similar to 02:20:347 (140347|0,140347|2,140347|1) -
02:46:705 (166705|2) - move to 4 to give 02:46:705 (166705|2) - a better execution.
02:56:069 (176069|1,176243|2) - move to 4 and 2 respectively for more comfortable pattern in this part.
02:59:191 - until 03:21:387 - I suggest to change those single notes to long notes as the flute sounds give the long sound feeling that you should hold them like you hold an actual flute. Still up to you, Sir.
03:35:087 (215087|1,215260|1) - move to 3 where the kick sound in 03:35:260 - felt more with two fingers at right hand.
03:36:647 (216647|3) - move to 1, same feeling above but left hand.
04:08:555 (248555|2,248728|2,248902|2) - kinda hard to execute, suggesting to rearrange some notes here like you did at 04:19:653 (259653|1,259827|1,260000|2) - .
Though I am wondering about 04:08:642 (248642|1,248815|3) - because all of sudden 1/4 notes appeared here and it feels awkward imo. I also suggest to remove them. Same with 04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - . It is still up to you, sir.
04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - add note to 1 strong cymbal sound. If added, move 04:26:763 (266763|0) - to 2 which the note will become 1/2 jack in 2nd column, fits for the percussion sound.
04:27:457 (267457|1) - move to 1, same reason a previous, different percussion sound and pitch.
04:31:272 (271272|0) - move to 2 to avoid that sudden 3-note stack at 1st column.
04:43:931 (283931|1) - move to 3 for clearer vision.
04:49:306 - suggesting http://puu.sh/p4UXY/487f78422e.png which is hand balance, alternative pattern for the percussion and comfortable to execute where it does not conflict with 04:49:913 (289913|2,290000|1,290087|0) -
05:00:405 (300405|2,300578|3) - move to 4 and 1 respectively as this part is kinda awkward and the vision is too confusing.
00:43:757 (43757|1,43931|2) - move to 3 and 1 respectively as it feels awkward in this part because of 00:43:410 (43410|0,43584|0,43584|1,43757|1) -
00:45:231 (45231|1,45318|2) - move to 1 and 4 respectively as they are different percussion sounds and feels weird if just trill in 2 columns.
01:06:821 - add note to 1? pretty strong sound to finish this phase and it fits well.
01:08:208 - atlast 1/4ths for the hihat-like sounds yay.
01:18:266 - add note to 3 since snare-like sound + that additional sound that is echoing.
01:21:734 (81734|0,81734|1) - swap column notes for better view and already LN occured at 2nd column: 01:20:694 (80694|1) - which is kind off to repeat again at the same column.
01:41:503 (101503|1) - move to 3 seems more comfortable for 01:41:676 (101676|1) - and also not repeating the note pattern of the different sound at 01:41:156 (101156|1,101156|0,101156|3) -
02:02:832 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/p4Tw7/b6e98c8d81.png for clearer vision and not awkward to execute.
02:14:798 - add note to 3, strong cymbal sound which gives more impact and also to differ with 02:14:451 (134451|0,134451|1) - . It is similar to 02:20:347 (140347|0,140347|2,140347|1) -
02:46:705 (166705|2) - move to 4 to give 02:46:705 (166705|2) - a better execution.
02:56:069 (176069|1,176243|2) - move to 4 and 2 respectively for more comfortable pattern in this part.
02:59:191 - until 03:21:387 - I suggest to change those single notes to long notes as the flute sounds give the long sound feeling that you should hold them like you hold an actual flute. Still up to you, Sir.
03:35:087 (215087|1,215260|1) - move to 3 where the kick sound in 03:35:260 - felt more with two fingers at right hand.
03:36:647 (216647|3) - move to 1, same feeling above but left hand.
04:08:555 (248555|2,248728|2,248902|2) - kinda hard to execute, suggesting to rearrange some notes here like you did at 04:19:653 (259653|1,259827|1,260000|2) - .
Though I am wondering about 04:08:642 (248642|1,248815|3) - because all of sudden 1/4 notes appeared here and it feels awkward imo. I also suggest to remove them. Same with 04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - . It is still up to you, sir.
04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - add note to 1 strong cymbal sound. If added, move 04:26:763 (266763|0) - to 2 which the note will become 1/2 jack in 2nd column, fits for the percussion sound.
04:27:457 (267457|1) - move to 1, same reason a previous, different percussion sound and pitch.
04:31:272 (271272|0) - move to 2 to avoid that sudden 3-note stack at 1st column.
04:43:931 (283931|1) - move to 3 for clearer vision.
04:49:306 - suggesting http://puu.sh/p4UXY/487f78422e.png which is hand balance, alternative pattern for the percussion and comfortable to execute where it does not conflict with 04:49:913 (289913|2,290000|1,290087|0) -
05:00:405 (300405|2,300578|3) - move to 4 and 1 respectively as this part is kinda awkward and the vision is too confusing.
[Overall]
Atlast, a Genryuu Kaiko o!m map hooray~ been waiting for this. Although I believe it can be harder but this marathon is actually fun to play and enjoyable atleast for most of mania players. Thanks for the request and good luck, Sir Feerum ^o^)/