hey
[Koa%wer]
hm i don't really understand this diff name. if it's in relation to something u better clarify it for BNs
00:15:687 (1,2,3) - you should introduce an angle into this so flow isn't linear
http://puu.sh/qdz1W/77354e15b1.jpg00:18:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo has mostly low ds yet the next combo 00:19:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - randomly has increased ds :/
00:21:173 (1) - blanket with 00:21:516 (2) - would look nicer
00:21:687 (3,5) - overlap doesn't look nice
00:22:716 (2) - move the red slider point closer to the centre for a nicer slider
00:26:316 (5) - ^
00:26:659 (1,2,3) - make this a perfect triangle
00:29:402 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - eh this whole thing kind of plays weirdly because the note that should have the most ds are notes like 00:29:916 (1) - (you can compare this to how you mapped earlier 00:24:259 (3,4) - ) but the way you did this is that the distance between these two is really small eg. 00:29:745 (2,1)
00:32:145 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - the music hasn't really picked up yet and you should stick to circles + sliders until then
00:42:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this plays awkwardly because the player has to slow down their cursor speed a lot to play the stream because of the fast jump beforehand
00:48:259 (8,1) - you should put a lot more distance in between these two because of the finish
01:00:945 (1) - like i said earlier move the red tick to make this look nicer
01:01:459 (3,4,5,6,7) - these streams look really ugly :v are you using slider to stream tool?
01:03:688 (1,2) - why's the distance so close here? its a clap and should have a lot more distance
01:05:059 (1,2,3) - make this a perfect triangle. use polygon tool or distance snap
01:06:430 (1,2) - same story. distance should be larger
01:09:002 (7,8,1,2,3) - generally mappers like to have higher spacing on the beats that matter (vocals, claps etc.) and use lower spacing on the beats that don't really matter. here there is a clap on 01:09:516 (3) - so the distance between 01:09:345 (2,3) - should be larger than that of 01:09:173 (1,2) . try keep this in mind with your future mapping too as it is a good convention to map by.
01:25:802 (2,3) - ur using like double the spacing here compared to 01:25:973 (3,4) - i would tone this down
eh i feel like the rest of the map has recurring themes and if i keep modding this i'll just be repeating myself forever ;w;
i feel like there are a lot of things you could fix yourself such as: cleaning up some streams with the slider to stream tool eg. 02:08:659 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - where the curve isn't smooth and continuous. more things you could fix include the claps having a larger spacing than beats that aren't important as well as some of your circle placements which have a strange flow to it eg. 01:30:773 (8,1) - the slider is pointing away indicating flow that way then it just awkwardly moves to 01:31:116 (1) . also some of your sliders look really ugly to me
01:51:688 (1) - is an example where the red tick is way too close to the end and doesn't look as nice when you could do something like
http://puu.sh/qdA4l/f80fd0c35e.jpg which looks a lot nicer imo.
good luck