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hi simple mod

mod
collumn = 1/2/3/4
[Easy]
00:00:644 (644|3,644|2) - my flow sense kinda tells me it had be better if you moved this one line up (blue line)
00:08:804 (8804|0) - move this note one up for concistency with : 00:03:164 (3164|3,3524|3) - , you aren't following the drum at first and even tho you did just here
it had probably be better to just keep to the instrumental rythm
00:44:564 (44564|3) - add one more note to 4
00:46:484 (46484|0) - add one note to 1
^you seems to use doubles for 1/1 , still with all the LNs it might be too hard but thoose two are okay imho
01:33:284 (93284|0) - Remove , this sound isn't a kick nor a snare , 00:39:284 (39284|0,39284|3,39524|3) - here you used it for a kick , but this one example isn't a kick nor a snare
^ still there is a hit hat so up to you I guess
01:38:324 (98324|0) - add one more note on 1
01:40:244 (100244|3) - add to 4
01:47:924 (107924|0,107924|3) - this looks hard for EZ tbh , but mah guess it's okay
02:44:564 (164564|2) - leaving this blank could make a nice effect aswell imho

why every diff sounds like they don't have the correct name ?
feels like EZ is already NM , NM is already HD , and so on xD
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

erlinadewi- wrote:

Hi Shin

M4M

4K Col 1|2|3|4

mod inside
[Easy]
00:17:204 - add LN? buat nerusin 00:16:484 (16484|3) - di add tapi note biasa xD

nice diff shin, mungkin bisa direduce lagi buat EZ nya wkwkwk oke xD

[Normal]
00:55:604 (55604|0) - move to col 3? lebih enak sepertinya boleh
01:03:284 (63284|2) - col 4 untuk menghindari yang kek begini ni 01:02:204 (62204|2,62564|2,63284|2) - nice
01:14:084 (74084|1) - jadiin LN biar gak terlalu kosong diatasnya ehhh ga deh kyknya x..x
01:57:044 (117044|1) - col 1 ok
03:02:324 (182324|2) - col 4 ok

[Hard]
00:53:684 (53684|2,53684|1) - jadiin 3|4 ?
01:09:884 (69884|2) - col 2? biar sama kek yg dibawahnya. pitch sama
02:03:644 (123644|1) - col 3 ^

[Insane]
00:38:324 (38324|1,38324|2) - col 3|4? ok :D :)

waaaa.. udah enak bgt beatmap mu, gak bisa bantu banyak

Goodluck ya~
yeay makasih mod nya elin >w< sorry hard ga ane bales karna di reject hehe gomen ;w;

Eternalie wrote:

hi simple mod

mod
collumn = 1/2/3/4
[Easy]
00:00:644 (644|3,644|2) - my flow sense kinda tells me it had be better if you moved this one line up (blue line) okee xD
00:08:804 (8804|0) - move this note one up for concistency with : 00:03:164 (3164|3,3524|3) - , you aren't following the drum at first and even tho you did just here okay
it had probably be better to just keep to the instrumental rythm
00:44:564 (44564|3) - add one more note to 4 ok
00:46:484 (46484|0) - add one note to 1 ok
^you seems to use doubles for 1/1 , still with all the LNs it might be too hard but thoose two are okay imho
01:33:284 (93284|0) - Remove , this sound isn't a kick nor a snare , 00:39:284 (39284|0,39284|3,39524|3) - here you used it for a kick , but this one example isn't a kick nor a snare my bad ;w;
^ still there is a hit hat so up to you I guess
01:38:324 (98324|0) - add one more note on 1 ok
01:40:244 (100244|3) - add to 4 ok
01:47:924 (107924|0,107924|3) - this looks hard for EZ tbh , but mah guess it's okay nerfed xD
02:44:564 (164564|2) - leaving this blank could make a nice effect aswell imho okay

why every diff sounds like they don't have the correct name ?
feels like EZ is already NM , NM is already HD , and so on xD
okay thanks for mod Eteeeer >w< :D
Draftnell
[Easy]
00:48:404 (48404|0) - move 3
00:48:884 (48884|2) - move 4
00:56:084 (56084|2) - move 2
01:10:244 (70244|3) - knp gak di bikin LN ?

[Normal]
skip aja deh, udh bagus tu wkwk

[Hard]
00:33:764 (33764|1,33884|0) - ctrl J
00:34:004 (34004|2,34124|3) - ctrl J

[Insane]
ummm ini insane....bagian "clap" nya gak dibikin 3 note ? kek 01:37:844 - kan suara "tak" :v
00:35:204 (35204|0,35204|1,35684|0,35684|1) - vokal ?
02:32:084 - until 02:33:764 - jack ny yg sebelah kanan gilee :v re-arrange ?
03:09:284 (189284|2,189284|1,189284|3,189764|0,190004|1,190244|2) - hate with this LN :v

dah tu aj
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Draftnell wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:404 (48404|0) - move 3
00:48:884 (48884|2) - move 4
00:56:084 (56084|2) - move 2
01:10:244 (70244|3) - knp gak di bikin LN ? accept semua

[Normal]
skip aja deh, udh bagus tu wkwk

[Hard]
00:33:764 (33764|1,33884|0) - ctrl J
00:34:004 (34004|2,34124|3) - ctrl J reject semua

[Insane]
ummm ini insane....bagian "clap" nya gak dibikin 3 note ? kek 01:37:844 - kan suara "tak" :v
00:35:204 (35204|0,35204|1,35684|0,35684|1) - vokal ? iya
02:32:084 - until 02:33:764 - jack ny yg sebelah kanan gilee :v re-arrange ? gamau :'v
03:09:284 (189284|2,189284|1,189284|3,189764|0,190004|1,190244|2) - hate with this LN :v :P

dah tu aj
dah makaseh ron :'v
Ibrahim
hai ken m4m

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: -
Other: -


Insane

00:17:324 (17324|2,17564|0) - ini suara apaan?
00:31:844 (31844|3) - nih LN harusnya berenti disini deh 00:32:564 -
00:32:564 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604527 . soalnya disini ada suara bass panajng gitu 00:32:564 -
00:35:204 (35204|1,35204|0,35444|0,35444|1,35684|0,35684|1) - asik :v
00:38:810 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604534 , lebih asik ken ikut vocal juga tuh LN
00:41:924 (41924|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604538, sama kaya di atas
00:44:204 (44204|0) - ghost note?
01:28:964 (88964|2,88964|3,89204|2,89204|3,89444|3,89444|2) - asik :v
01:33:404 - 01:33:644 - missing note
01:40:004 - add note ada suara
01:57:164 - 01:57:284 - ada suara juga
02:30:404 (150404|2,150644|2,150884|2,151124|2) - ini 2 note aja napa =w=
02:34:244 (154244|0,154604|3) - ini juga sama 2 note aja
02:57:284 - add one note like this 02:53:204 (173204|0,173444|0,173684|0) -

sorry ken segitu aja , good luck =w=b
Gravey-
[General]
Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Easy]
01:19:116 (79116|0) - Put the 'W' here.

01:40:236 (100236|1) - Add 'W' here for consistency as you will notice here 00:46:476 and for the drumbeat

02:05:196 (125196|1) - Add 'W'

02:33:756 Add a note in |4| with 'C' since the snare here is continuous as you will notice

02:43:116 (163116|3,163356|2) - Add 'W' since they still have the drumbeat like on the others before it.

[Normal]
00:08:076 (8076|0) - Remove 'W' ? Duplicate

01:40:236 (100236|3) - Add 'W' for the drumbeat

02:39:756 (159756|1) - Move the 'W' here

02:43:116 (163116|2) - Chnange to 'W' insntead as it sounded as drumbeat just like the others

[Hard]
00:00:516 Make this 2 noted as this is just the same sound with 00:00:396 and 00:00:636

01:40:236 (100236|0) - Add 'W' for the drumbeat sound

02:08:076 (128076|2,128076|1,128316|3,128316|0) - Arrange the notes to |1| |4| - |2| |3| for consistency as you will notice the pitch/sound here 02:08:796 on which if you listen closely you will notice the consistency

[Insane]
01:25:356 Make this 3 noted as you will notice here 01:24:396 (84396|2,84396|0,84396|3,84876|1,84876|0,84876|3) - they have the same beat and for consistency

01:49:836 (109836|2,110076|1) - Ctrl + G for better transition and consistency

I do notice you followed some vocals eh haha, i think i heard this song in a tv show~ nice map! Good luck!
You can just not give Kudosu in this MOD~
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[Baim] wrote:

hai ken m4m

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: -
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: -
Other: -


Insane

00:17:324 (17324|2,17564|0) - ini suara apaan? suara hati
00:31:844 (31844|3) - nih LN harusnya berenti disini deh 00:32:564 - tak pikirin lagi yo
00:32:564 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604527 . soalnya disini ada suara bass panajng gitu 00:32:564 - added 1 note
00:35:204 (35204|1,35204|0,35444|0,35444|1,35684|0,35684|1) - asik :v ea
00:38:810 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604534 , lebih asik ken ikut vocal juga tuh LN tak pikirin lagi yo
00:41:924 (41924|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604538, sama kaya di atas
00:44:204 (44204|0) - ghost note? vocal mz
01:28:964 (88964|2,88964|3,89204|2,89204|3,89444|3,89444|2) - asik :v ea
01:33:404 - 01:33:644 - missing note mah bed
01:40:004 - add note ada suara lalu apa yang salah dengan itu ?
01:57:164 - 01:57:284 - ada suara juga gamau ah :P
02:30:404 (150404|2,150644|2,150884|2,151124|2) - ini 2 note aja napa =w= biar "asik :v" ea
02:34:244 (154244|0,154604|3) - ini juga sama 2 note aja nanti jelek =w=
02:57:284 - add one note like this 02:53:204 (173204|0,173444|0,173684|0) - lain mz

sorry ken segitu aja , good luck =w=b
yee thanks for mod baeem :'v >w<

Gravey- wrote:

[General]
Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Easy]
01:19:116 (79116|0) - Put the 'W' here.

01:40:236 (100236|1) - Add 'W' here for consistency as you will notice here 00:46:476 and for the drumbeat

02:05:196 (125196|1) - Add 'W'

02:33:756 Add a note in |4| with 'C' since the snare here is continuous as you will notice i'll think about it

02:43:116 (163116|3,163356|2) - Add 'W' since they still have the drumbeat like on the others before it.

[Normal]
00:08:076 (8076|0) - Remove 'W' ? Duplicate

01:40:236 (100236|3) - Add 'W' for the drumbeat

02:39:756 (159756|1) - Move the 'W' here

02:43:116 (163116|2) - Chnange to 'W' insntead as it sounded as drumbeat just like the others

[Hard]
00:00:516 Make this 2 noted as this is just the same sound with 00:00:396 and 00:00:636

01:40:236 (100236|0) - Add 'W' for the drumbeat sound

02:08:076 (128076|2,128076|1,128316|3,128316|0) - Arrange the notes to |1| |4| - |2| |3| for consistency as you will notice the pitch/sound here 02:08:796 on which if you listen closely you will notice the consistency i just want to make a consistency with the previous pattern instead hehe

[Insane]
01:25:356 Make this 3 noted as you will notice here 01:24:396 (84396|2,84396|0,84396|3,84876|1,84876|0,84876|3) - they have the same beat and for consistency i'll reconsider

01:49:836 (109836|2,110076|1) - Ctrl + G for better transition and consistency

I do notice you followed some vocals eh haha, i think i heard this song in a tv show~ nice map! Good luck!
You can just not give Kudosu in this MOD~
all accept except the pink xD thanks for mod graveey ~ also mfor the HS mod ! it's really help >w<
Hotaru-


Hotaru's Mania Modding KueKue


Mod req Via Pm owo
mungkin modnya cuma sedikit..
tadi dah test play beberapa kali dan rasanya dah bagus banget
untuk easy sama Insane Rasanya gaada masalah deh :3
Feel Free To reject~

Kolom
1|2|3|4|5|6|7


[General]
Uhmmm.. SVnya di mulusin lagi dong :>>

[Biasa]
00:31:844 (31844|1,31964|0) - CTRL + J?? lebih nyaman imo
00:34:484 (34484|2) - move 1 aja deh buat ballance
00:36:044 - mungkin seperti ini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604228
00:54:404 (54404|1) - move ke 4?? lebih nyaman pas di mainkan '3'
01:25:604 (85604|2,85724|3) - CTRL + J?? lebih nyaman imo
01:28:244 (88244|1) - move ke 4???

[Susah]
00:23:444 - hmm sebenarnya bisa di ganti sama LN salah satunya.. why not
00:44:204 (44204|0) - naik ke garis merah jika ngikut suara synth nya (?)... atau mungkin ngikutin liriknya '3'??
00:44:444 (44444|0) - jika diatas di terima maka bagian ini di move ke 2 buat ballance '3'
00:46:244 - hmmm masih bisa di tambah 1 not... why not??
01:05:564 - missing sound
01:07:484 - ^
01:37:964 (97964|3) - naik ke garis merah??? alasan masih sama dengan sebelumnya
01:38:204 (98204|3) - move ke 3 jika saran diatas di terima :3
01:40:004 - missing sound??


That's all my mod owo..
Sorry Kalo modnya terlalu pendek dan Gak membantu ;w;
dan juga kalau ada kata" yang kurang berkenan saya minta maaf
Good Luck! owo)/
Rivals_7
ohai M4M mod here ahue

[Insane]

00:11:204 - Stop LN nya disini. soalnya suara violinnya berhenti
00:12:644 - Stop LN? ^

00:14:564 (14564|3) - gk bikin mini LN aja?

00:18:164 (18164|2,18164|3,19124|0,19124|2) - yg suaranya kayak gini gk triple aja? lebih worthy daripada nge triple kick kayak - 00:19:604 (19604|1,19604|0,19604|3) - imo.

00:32:204 - http://puu.sh/q24da/6897dc369d.jpg

00:54:164 (54164|0,54404|3) - delete? they're kick tho

01:21:524 (81524|1,81524|2) - suara clap disini double tapi di - 01:20:564 (80564|1,80564|2,80564|0) - triple???

01:25:964 (85964|2,86084|1,86204|2) - ganti jadi mini LN kayak pic di atas?

01:32:924 (92924|3,92924|0) - hapus salah satu. impactnya gk gede. jadi ya satu not cukup imo

02:05:444 - dari sini, sebenernya bisa full 1/4 notes imo. byk synth soalnya

02:24:764 (144764|2,144764|3) - salah tempat nih =3= harusnya ke atas dikit

GL~ :D
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

-[Hotaru]- wrote:



Hotaru's Mania Modding KueKue


Mod req Via Pm owo
mungkin modnya cuma sedikit..
tadi dah test play beberapa kali dan rasanya dah bagus banget
untuk easy sama Insane Rasanya gaada masalah deh :3
Feel Free To reject~

Kolom
1|2|3|4|5|6|7


[General]
Uhmmm.. SVnya di mulusin lagi dong :>>

[Biasa]
00:31:844 (31844|1,31964|0) - CTRL + J?? lebih nyaman imo boleh
00:34:484 (34484|2) - move 1 aja deh buat ballance hadeh flow nya break nanti
00:36:044 - mungkin seperti ini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5604228 ^
00:54:404 (54404|1) - move ke 4?? lebih nyaman pas di mainkan '3' ^
01:25:604 (85604|2,85724|3) - CTRL + J?? lebih nyaman imo oke
01:28:244 (88244|1) - move ke 4???sama

[Susah]
00:23:444 - hmm sebenarnya bisa di ganti sama LN salah satunya.. why not karna yg lain ga pake LN kalau hold ny pendek gitu /_.
00:44:204 (44204|0) - naik ke garis merah jika ngikut suara synth nya (?)... atau mungkin ngikutin liriknya '3'?? iya ngikut lirik xD
00:44:444 (44444|0) - jika diatas di terima maka bagian ini di move ke 2 buat ballance '3'
00:46:244 - hmmm masih bisa di tambah 1 not... why not?? nggada suara yg mendukung ._.
01:05:564 - missing sound ga ngikut hit hat di sini :<
01:07:484 - ^
01:37:964 (97964|3) - naik ke garis merah??? alasan masih sama dengan sebelumnya
01:38:204 (98204|3) - move ke 3 jika saran diatas di terima :3
01:40:004 - missing sound??nanti dipikir lagi xD


That's all my mod owo..
Sorry Kalo modnya terlalu pendek dan Gak membantu ;w;
dan juga kalau ada kata" yang kurang berkenan saya minta maaf
Good Luck! owo)/
makasih ya mod nya >w<)~~

Rivals_7 wrote:

ohai M4M mod here ahue

[Insane]

00:11:204 - Stop LN nya disini. soalnya suara violinnya berhenti oke
00:12:644 - Stop LN? ^ oke

00:14:564 (14564|3) - gk bikin mini LN aja? ga deh soalny gada mini LN dari awal sampe sini

00:18:164 (18164|2,18164|3,19124|0,19124|2) - yg suaranya kayak gini gk triple aja? lebih worthy daripada nge triple kick kayak - 00:19:604 (19604|1,19604|0,19604|3) - imo. deleted yg kurang worth tapi yg disuruh triple di keep ya xD

00:32:204 - http://puu.sh/q24da/6897dc369d.jpg sengaja ngikut LN nya nanti di tick putih hehe

00:54:164 (54164|0,54404|3) - delete? they're kick tho vocal xD

01:21:524 (81524|1,81524|2) - suara clap disini double tapi di - 01:20:564 (80564|1,80564|2,80564|0) - triple??? coba liat lagi patternnya xD

01:25:964 (85964|2,86084|1,86204|2) - ganti jadi mini LN kayak pic di atas?

01:32:924 (92924|3,92924|0) - hapus salah satu. impactnya gk gede. jadi ya satu not cukup imo boleh boleh

02:05:444 - dari sini, sebenernya bisa full 1/4 notes imo. byk synth soalnya sengaja soalny part ny kalem gitu masa full stream gitu

02:24:764 (144764|2,144764|3) - salah tempat nih =3= harusnya ke atas dikit ehhh maap x..x fixed

GL~ :D
makasih mod nya rival >w<_)~~
Aras
Insane
* 01:17:204 - how's this? daripada follow suara suling sakti w8 wat? mending ikut bass nya aja, di mix LN sama normal note biar lebih dapat feel transisi masuk ke 01:18:644 - personal opinion of course

* 01:23:324 - ghost?
* 01:23:444 (83444|0,83444|1) - re arrange biar ga sama dengan 01:22:964 (82964|0,82964|1,83804|1,83804|0) - drum nya Don Kat Don disitu, trus yg pertama sama ketiga ada sythnya sedangkan yg kedua ngga
* 02:26:324 (146324|0,146404|1,146484|2,146564|3) - kalau ikutin pitch ini sebenarnya gak ascending berturut gini, this insane after all
* 02:54:644 - add 1, kesusahan? ini aja gak di reduce jadi 2,btw dari awalkat nya kok gak 3 aja . - . tell me please?

Hard
* 01:22:484 (82484|1) - to 4
* 01:25:244 how?

aku gak tau cara post chat ==
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Aras25 wrote:

Insane
* 01:17:204 - how's this? daripada follow suara suling sakti w8 wat? mending ikut bass nya aja, di mix LN sama normal note biar lebih dapat feel transisi masuk ke 01:18:644 - personal opinion of course saya lebih suka suara suling sakti ini kwokwowk tpi nti ane pikirin lagi deh

* 01:23:324 - ghost? nice catch
* 01:23:444 (83444|0,83444|1) - re arrange biar ga sama dengan 01:22:964 (82964|0,82964|1,83804|1,83804|0) - drum nya Don Kat Don disitu, trus yg pertama sama ketiga ada sythnya sedangkan yg kedua ngga okok
* 02:26:324 (146324|0,146404|1,146484|2,146564|3) - kalau ikutin pitch ini sebenarnya gak ascending berturut gini, this insane after all ye
* 02:54:644 - add 1, kesusahan? ini aja gak di reduce jadi 2,btw dari awalkat nya kok gak 3 aja . - . tell me please? added but note di tick biru reduce 1 note

Hard
* 01:22:484 (82484|1) - to 4 ok
* 01:25:244 how? gaada yg salah dengan current pattern imo

aku gak tau cara post chat == /savelog lel
makasih mod nya aras :D >w<)~
Adot
M4M bruh

|1|2|3|4|

Hai kenny..
lgsg aja


Easy
00:39:284 - ini seharusnya dobel buat suara snare. 00:39:524 - terus ini single aja

00:54:164 (54164|0,54404|0) - jangan dijack.. dibentuk kek gini aja polanya 00:50:324 (50324|3,50564|0) - soalnya dr awal juga gaada jack 1/2

02:18:644 (138644|1) - kenapa gak dilanjut sampe 02:20:564 -

02:53:204 (173204|0,173444|0) - jangan ngejack gini.. direarrange. kek yg dah w mention td

02:55:604 (175604|2) - pindah ke 2 biar variasi dobelnya?

Normal
00:32:324 - double buat snare?

00:45:524 - single aja? bukan suara snare soalnya. kan dobelnya buat ngelayer snare.

01:05:684 (65684|2) - pindah ke 1 biar gak double jack

01:32:804 (92804|2,92804|3,93044|1,93044|0) - ini mending dihapus terus tambah dobel note di 01:32:924 - buat fokus ke synth kek yg lu lakuin di waktu2 sblmnya

01:47:444 (107444|1,107684|1) - pindah ke col 1 biar gak berat amat di kol 2

03:04:724 - rearrange lagi biar gak jack ama belakangnya

Hard
02:41:684 - sampe 02:42:884 - w bingung. itu pada gaada instrumen stream kenapa dibikin kek gitu.. welp.. rearrange aja. kasih LN layer voice kek.

02:47:324 (167324|3) - selarasin ama 02:46:964 (166964|0,167084|1,167204|2) - biar gak nanggung

02:47:444 - missing violin sound?

dah itu aja... sori dikit. gasebanding ama yg km kasih.

:(
SYAHME
Good luck.
-[ AmiShici ]-
halooo mz

Pilih Aku!
[Gila]
  1. 00:02:084 (2084|2,2084|1,2204|1,2204|2) - kalo mau ngejack bisa diganti ga posisinya? soalnya menurut gw dan kebanyakan orang ngemap di 2 dan 3 itu susah buat dimainin. jadi jadknya diubah. mau di 12 kek 34 kek 13 kek 24 kek 14kek terserah yang penting bukan 23. demi kenyamanan penumpang w')b
  2. 00:10:844 (10844|1) - ini harusnya start di 00:10:724 -
  3. 00:35:924 - add note di 1? feel ada yg ilang dari ini vocal jack 00:35:204 (35204|1,35204|0,35444|1,35444|0,35684|1,35684|0) -
  4. 00:37:964 - add note buat kick macam ni 00:36:044 (36044|0,36044|2) - ; 00:49:484 (49484|3,49484|0) - dkk
  5. 00:43:724 - ^
  6. 01:31:724 - add note
  7. 01:29:684 - add di 4 sama kek sblmnya
    i see copas reserve here :)
  8. 01:31:724 - add note sama kek sblmnya
  9. 01:33:404 - ; 01:33:644 - missing? beda mz sama sblmnya. Lebih teliti lagi :lol:
  10. 01:37:484 - add note kick. udah dibahas sblmnya ngenk
  11. 01:55:604 - variasi http://puu.sh/q2B3B/a0dbcf02c2.jpg
  12. :D

    [Angel/Susah]
  13. 00:12:764 (12764|1) - new LN di 00:13:124 - pls ;w; awkward kalo ga new atau di stop pls
  14. 00:15:044 - ^same
  15. 00:31:484 (31484|3,31604|1,31604|2,31844|3) - ini ga enak njir. 00:31:604 (31604|1) - pindah ke satu mendingan 'w')b alasan ada di diff Crazy :p
  16. 01:25:364 (85364|2) - ke 4 ^

Waaa kalo ranked bakal jadi lagu korengan pertama dimania nih :v

GL 'w')b
Aras

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Waaa kalo ranked bakal jadi lagu korengan pertama dimania nih :v

GL 'w')b
Kalau ini ranked and respondnya bagus gua mau map Crooked nya si G-Dragon B^)
GL shin owo
PANDAAAAAAAA
hi :D in-game req

Offset = 2316

|1|2|3|4|

[Easy]
00:00:764 (764|2,764|3) - suggest to delete one note because it sames sound with 00:00:404 (404|0) -
00:01:604 (1604|0) - suggest to make it to normal note. i think 00:01:604 (1604|0,1844|1,1844|3) - is too hard for newbie players (imagine if you are newbie player and want to play easy diff)
00:10:004 (10004|0,10844|1) - if you follow violin sound it should be hold and release at 00:10:724 -
00:10:484 (10484|3,10484|2) - suggest to delete one, only snare sound.
00:11:924 (11924|1) - suggest to delete. this part you should follow snare sound only.
00:13:844 (13844|2) - suggest to delete. this part you should follow snare sound only.
00:46:484 (46484|2) - move to 1
00:46:484 (46484|0) - move to 2
00:46:964 (46964|1) - move to 3
00:47:444 (47444|0) - move to 4
00:47:924 (47924|3) - move to 1
01:15:284 (75284|0) - what sound? release at 01:16:004 -
01:40:244 (100244|1) - move to 4
01:40:244 (100244|3) - move to 3
01:40:724 (100724|2) - move to 2
01:41:204 (101204|3) - move to 1
01:41:684 (101684|0) - move to 4
02:41:684 (161684|2) - move to 1
02:43:124 (163124|2,163364|3) - i see you follow vocal sound but i suggest to change them to normal note

[Insane]
00:37:964 - add note? missing drum kit. like you did before 00:36:044 (36044|0,36044|2) -
00:43:724 (43724|0) - ^
00:54:884 (54884|1,54884|2) - only vocal sound why put 2 notes. there isn't any drum kit.
01:31:724 (91724|1) - add note? missing drum kit.
01:33:404 - missing drum kit.
01:37:484 (97484|3) - ^
02:11:924 (131924|3,132084|3,132244|3,132404|3,132564|3,132724|3) - re-pattern?
02:22:004 (142004|3,142124|2,142244|0,142364|1) - i'm not suggest o2jam style.
02:38:924 (158924|0) - missing drum kit.
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Adot wrote:

M4M bruh

|1|2|3|4|

Hai kenny..
lgsg aja


Easy
00:39:284 - ini seharusnya dobel buat suara snare. 00:39:524 - terus ini single aja oke

00:54:164 (54164|0,54404|0) - jangan dijack.. dibentuk kek gini aja polanya 00:50:324 (50324|3,50564|0) - soalnya dr awal juga gaada jack 1/2 boleh

02:18:644 (138644|1) - kenapa gak dilanjut sampe 02:20:564 - no

02:53:204 (173204|0,173444|0) - jangan ngejack gini.. direarrange. kek yg dah w mention td ya

02:55:604 (175604|2) - pindah ke 2 biar variasi dobelnya? oke

Normal
00:32:324 - double buat snare? ngga soalnya ada LN

00:45:524 - single aja? bukan suara snare soalnya. kan dobelnya buat ngelayer snare. oke

01:05:684 (65684|2) - pindah ke 1 biar gak double jack ok

01:32:804 (92804|2,92804|3,93044|1,93044|0) - ini mending dihapus terus tambah dobel note di 01:32:924 - buat fokus ke synth kek yg lu lakuin di waktu2 sblmnyamalah aneh

01:47:444 (107444|1,107684|1) - pindah ke col 1 biar gak berat amat di kol 2 justru suara kick lagi di kolom 2

03:04:724 - rearrange lagi biar gak jack ama belakangnya ya

Hard
02:41:684 - sampe 02:42:884 - w bingung. itu pada gaada instrumen stream kenapa dibikin kek gitu.. welp.. rearrange aja. kasih LN layer voice kek. heee di denger pake 100% playback

02:47:324 (167324|3) - selarasin ama 02:46:964 (166964|0,167084|1,167204|2) - biar gak nanggung ga lah itu suaranya kea finish gitu disitu jadi ya gitu

02:47:444 - missing violin sound? ngga itu cuman kea echo nya

dah itu aja... sori dikit. gasebanding ama yg km kasih.

:(
thanks mod nya adoooot >w<

SYAHME wrote:

Good luck.
Thanks :)

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

halooo mz

Pilih Aku!
[Gila]
  1. 00:02:084 (2084|2,2084|1,2204|1,2204|2) - kalo mau ngejack bisa diganti ga posisinya? soalnya menurut gw dan kebanyakan orang ngemap di 2 dan 3 itu susah buat dimainin. jadi jadknya diubah. mau di 12 kek 34 kek 13 kek 24 kek 14kek terserah yang penting bukan 23. demi kenyamanan penumpang w')b ga sorry soalny bpm ny pelan jadi gpp menurut w :'v
  2. 00:10:844 (10844|1) - ini harusnya start di 00:10:724 - no
  3. 00:35:924 - add note di 1? feel ada yg ilang dari ini vocal jack 00:35:204 (35204|1,35204|0,35444|1,35444|0,35684|1,35684|0) - heee tak pikirin tapi ane keep dulu yak soalnya ntar patternnya jelek wkowkowk
  4. 00:37:964 - add note buat kick macam ni 00:36:044 (36044|0,36044|2) - ; 00:49:484 (49484|3,49484|0) - dkk
  5. 00:43:724 - ^ okeh ^
  6. 01:31:724 - add note ok
  7. 01:29:684 - add di 4 sama kek sblmnya sama
    i see copas reserve here :)
  8. 01:31:724 - add note sama kek sblmnya ok
  9. 01:33:404 - ; 01:33:644 - missing? beda mz sama sblmnya. Lebih teliti lagi :lol: lel sbnarny dah di fix dari mod sblumnya tapi pas ngeHS ane copas lagi wkowkowkw
  10. 01:37:484 - add note kick. udah dibahas sblmnya ngenk iya udah
  11. 01:55:604 - variasi http://puu.sh/q2B3B/a0dbcf02c2.jpg lel ntar saya pikirkan lagi
  12. :D

    [Angel/Susah]
  13. 00:12:764 (12764|1) - new LN di 00:13:124 - pls ;w; awkward kalo ga new atau di stop pls baiklah
  14. 00:15:044 - ^same ^
  15. 00:31:484 (31484|3,31604|1,31604|2,31844|3) - ini ga enak njir. 00:31:604 (31604|1) - pindah ke satu mendingan 'w')b alasan ada di diff Crazy :p re-arranged
  16. 01:25:364 (85364|2) - ke 4 ^ ^

Waaa kalo ranked bakal jadi lagu korengan pertama dimania nih :v

GL 'w')b
thanks for mod ami :'v !!

Aras25 wrote:

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Waaa kalo ranked bakal jadi lagu korengan pertama dimania nih :v

GL 'w')b
Kalau ini ranked and respondnya bagus gua mau map Crooked nya si G-Dragon B^)
GL shin owo
map ny si Rinzler yg zero fill kehitung kpop ga ? :'v kalo kehitung ya ini kedua x..x

nowsmart wrote:

hi :D in-game req

Offset = 2316 ok

|1|2|3|4|

[Easy]
00:00:764 (764|2,764|3) - suggest to delete one note because it sames sound with 00:00:404 (404|0) - you know it was like impact lol
00:01:604 (1604|0) - suggest to make it to normal note. i think 00:01:604 (1604|0,1844|1,1844|3) - is too hard for newbie players (imagine if you are newbie player and want to play easy diff) hmmmm okok
00:10:004 (10004|0,10844|1) - if you follow violin sound it should be hold and release at 00:10:724 - well the next sound i start on blue tick and if i end the LN on red i think it's too hard for easy
00:10:484 (10484|3,10484|2) - suggest to delete one, only snare sound.
00:11:924 (11924|1) - suggest to delete. this part you should follow snare sound only.
00:13:844 (13844|2) - suggest to delete. this part you should follow snare sound only. ok ^
00:46:484 (46484|2) - move to 1
00:46:484 (46484|0) - move to 2
00:46:964 (46964|1) - move to 3
00:47:444 (47444|0) - move to 4
00:47:924 (47924|3) - move to 1 im sorry but i just don't want to make a monotone pattern x..x
01:15:284 (75284|0) - what sound? release at 01:16:004 - okay
01:40:244 (100244|1) - move to 4
01:40:244 (100244|3) - move to 3
01:40:724 (100724|2) - move to 2
01:41:204 (101204|3) - move to 1
01:41:684 (101684|0) - move to 4
02:41:684 (161684|2) - move to 1 same
02:43:124 (163124|2,163364|3) - i see you follow vocal sound but i suggest to change them to normal note i'll reconsider

[Insane]
00:37:964 - add note? missing drum kit. like you did before 00:36:044 (36044|0,36044|2) - fixed
00:43:724 (43724|0) - ^ fixed
00:54:884 (54884|1,54884|2) - only vocal sound why put 2 notes. there isn't any drum kit. mmmm bcs it's vocal+hithat and it only start in a part like that .. you know.. o.o ._. how2explain lel
01:31:724 (91724|1) - add note? missing drum kit. fixed
01:33:404 - missing drum kit.fixed
01:37:484 (97484|3) - ^ fixed
02:11:924 (131924|3,132084|3,132244|3,132404|3,132564|3,132724|3) - re-pattern? why ;w;
02:22:004 (142004|3,142124|2,142244|0,142364|1) - i'm not suggest o2jam style. 1/4 LN will be a bad pattern imo
02:38:924 (158924|0) - missing drum kit. fixed
yeay thanks for mod nowsmart >w< !!
i'll mod your map now !!
lenpai
oooookaaaaay im literally ninja-ing a BN check

With a lack of an I diff i am likely not to match the mod you gave me, with that in mind, you can PM anytime for a mod and cut the line of pending reqs.

insane
00:43:116 (43116|2) - would work better on 4 just so that the sounds are made unique in comparison to 00:43:356 (43356|0,43476|2,43476|1) -
01:05:916 - idk my pr but this could be different from 01:05:676 (65676|3,65676|1) - just to include that synth in the mix without having to add a note
01:37:236 (97236|1,97356|0) - swap col, with the same logic as my first suggestion
01:59:436 (119436|2,119436|0,119676|0,119676|2) - like my second suggestion
02:09:036 - though this may be done for variety this is one of the weird cases when im up to ctrl h copypasta. It's a pretty short section so previously, [13] would work as the loud sound while [12] represents the kick thingy, and then you just inverted the usage upon switching your lanes sooo its 02:08:076 (128076|2,128076|0,128316|0,128316|1) - versus 02:09:036 (129036|3,129036|1,129276|3,129276|2) - , just not a fan of the switchup03:04:716 (184716|3,184716|1,184956|1,184956|3) - like previous

hard
00:12:396 (12396|2,12396|1,12396|0) - what makes this so special that 00:10:476 - 00:13:356 - 00:14:316 - 00:15:276 - 00:11:436 - aren't tripled? If there isn't anything special and you want to keep a system where you can avoid tripling 00:11:436 - but still keep the current triple, you should add in 00:14:316 and 00:10:476 - - so it will be:
x - not triple o - triple
from xxoxx to oxoxo

00:32:556 - i personally find this weird where you add that LN and just stop charting the 1/4, i dunno ditch the LN and just chart the 1/4. Id do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5635047
00:47:916 (47916|2) - since the vocals aren't 1/1s at this point, might as well chart the 1/4 sounds
00:54:156 - idk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5635066
01:26:316 - like previous
01:33:396 (93396|1) - prolly more fun to hit at 3
02:09:036 - refer to insane
02:12:316 - you sure this is ok for hard? It's barely easier than just jumptrilling (what you did in Insane)
02:53:676 - refer to screenshot

noticed the copypasta, so if i missed repeating a mod from a section that you copypasta'd, check those out

Good luck!

also despite my acquired taste for weird shit like mashcore, i really like kpop
Xiaolin
Ooo, GFRIEND <3 Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Lenfried- wrote:

oooookaaaaay im literally ninja-ing a BN check

With a lack of an I diff i am likely not to match the mod you gave me, with that in mind, you can PM anytime for a mod and cut the line of pending reqs.

insane
00:43:116 (43116|2) - would work better on 4 just so that the sounds are made unique in comparison to 00:43:356 oki(43356|0,43476|2,43476|1) -
01:05:916 - idk my pr but this could be different from 01:05:676 (65676|3,65676|1) - just to include that synth in the mix without having to add a note oke
01:37:236 (97236|1,97356|0) - swap col, with the same logic as my first suggestion ye
01:59:436 (119436|2,119436|0,119676|0,119676|2) - like my second suggestion hou
02:09:036 - though this may be done for variety this is one of the weird cases when im up to ctrl h copypasta. It's a pretty short section so previously, [13] would work as the loud sound while [12] represents the kick thingy, and then you just inverted the usage upon switching your lanes sooo its 02:08:076 (128076|2,128076|0,128316|0,128316|1) - versus 02:09:036 (129036|3,129036|1,129276|3,129276|2) - , just not a fan of the switchupit's fine for me :P
03:04:716 (184716|3,184716|1,184956|1,184956|3) - like previous

hard
00:12:396 (12396|2,12396|1,12396|0) - what makes this so special that 00:10:476 - 00:13:356 - 00:14:316 - 00:15:276 - 00:11:436 - aren't tripled? If there isn't anything special and you want to keep a system where you can avoid tripling 00:11:436 - but still keep the current triple, you should add in 00:14:316 and 00:10:476 - - so it will be:
x - not triple o - triple
from xxoxx to oxoxo fixed lol

00:32:556 - i personally find this weird where you add that LN and just stop charting the 1/4, i dunno ditch the LN and just chart the 1/4. Id do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5635047 i'll reconsider
00:47:916 (47916|2) - since the vocals aren't 1/1s at this point, might as well chart the 1/4 sounds
00:54:156 - idk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5635066
01:26:316 - like previous will reconsider all ^^
01:33:396 (93396|1) - prolly more fun to hit at 3 ok
02:09:036 - refer to insane heu
02:12:316 - you sure this is ok for hard? It's barely easier than just jumptrilling (what you did in Insane) nerfed a bit
02:53:676 - refer to screenshot hoeue

noticed the copypasta, so if i missed repeating a mod from a section that you copypasta'd, check those out

Good luck!

also despite my acquired taste for weird shit like mashcore, i really like kpop
thanks for mod Len >w<)~~

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Ooo, GFRIEND <3 Good luck!
<3 thanks xD
Norman
Hi Shinzo-



no kds :>
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Norman wrote:

Hi Shinzo-



no kds :>
Oh yeah hahaha xD checked everywhere too and it's really should be NAVILLERA xD thanks norman :D
Nivrad00
BN check
General
The timing seems a bit late. I suggest using an offset of 2304 . What do you think?
If you agree, you should shift all the timing points by -12 ms and make sure the notes and preview point are resnapped. Make sure you apply the rest of my mod first
Difficulties
You had a lot of hitsound inconsistencies ;n;

Easy

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:33:396
01:59:676
03:04:956

00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings
01:32:556 - why double?
01:58:956 - 02:00:876 - 02:02:796 - shouldn't these be doubles? For consistency with 01:03:756 - and 03:02:796 -
02:39:756 - unnecessary clap hitsound

Normal

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:59:676
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956

00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings
00:55:236 and 02:54:276 - suggest deleting, I don't hear strong bass/drum notes
02:40:716 - suggest deleting the single note because no drum (see 00:45:516 - )

Hard

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:10:716
01:59:676
02:04:476
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
03:09:756

00:08:076 - doubled whistle hitsound, you should just use one
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings
01:33:276 (93276|0,93396|2) - sounds like the first note should be normal and the second note should be whistle
01:10:956 - missing clap hitsound
02:04:716 - same
03:09:996 - same
02:12:556 - maybe the double would fit better at 02:12:636 -
02:39:756 (159756|3) - unnecessary clap hitsound

Insane

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:10:716
01:33:396
01:59:676
02:04:476
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
03:09:756

00:08:076 - doubled whistle hitsound, you should just use one
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings
01:33:276 - unnecessary whistle hitsound
01:50:076 - this crash hitsound should be at 01:49:836 - , not here
01:10:956 - missing clap hitsound
02:04:716 - same
03:09:996 - same
02:15:276 - consider adding LN? I hear the synth here
02:39:756 (159756|3) - unnecessary clap hitsound
Very fun map! Also I can't complain about more Korean songs :)

Awaiting your response
-SoraGami-
LOL i guess i'm late sorry xD
have a star instead~

Goodluck Shinshin
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check
General
The timing seems a bit late. I suggest using an offset of 2304 . What do you think?
If you agree, you should shift all the timing points by -12 ms and make sure the notes and preview point are resnapped. Make sure you apply the rest of my mod first
Difficulties
You had a lot of hitsound inconsistencies ;n;

Easy

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:33:396
01:59:676
03:04:956
Fixed all
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings yeah actually there's a sound on red and blue, but i choose to layer it on blue to make it consistent with all diff since normal diff will be weird and hard if i layer it on the red hehe sorry :(
01:32:556 - why double? impact
01:58:956 - 02:00:876 - 02:02:796 - shouldn't these be doubles? For consistency with 01:03:756 - and 03:02:796 - fixed !
02:39:756 - unnecessary clap hitsound yeah xD

Normal

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:59:676
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
Fixed all
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings same
00:55:236 and 02:54:276 - suggest deleting, I don't hear strong bass/drum notes my bad
02:40:716 - suggest deleting the single note because no drum (see 00:45:516 - ) yes !

Hard

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:10:716
01:59:676
02:04:476
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
03:09:756
fixed all
00:08:076 - doubled whistle hitsound, you should just use one sorry x..x
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings same
01:33:276 (93276|0,93396|2) - sounds like the first note should be normal and the second note should be whistle oh ye xD
01:10:956 - missing clap hitsound i don't think so.. there's no clap hs in other diff too
02:04:716 - samesame
03:09:996 - samesame
02:12:556 - maybe the double would fit better at 02:12:636 - ooups
02:39:756 (159756|3) - unnecessary clap hitsound my bad

Insane

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:10:716
01:33:396
01:59:676
02:04:476
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
03:09:756
Fixed all ^
00:08:076 - doubled whistle hitsound, you should just use one sorry xD
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings same
01:33:276 - unnecessary whistle hitsound wwww
01:50:076 - this crash hitsound should be at 01:49:836 - , not here im so stupud
01:10:956 - missing clap hitsound same as hard
02:04:716 - same same
03:09:996 - same same
02:15:276 - consider adding LN? I hear the synth here good idea
02:39:756 (159756|3) - unnecessary clap hitsound hehhe
Very fun map! Also I can't complain about more Korean songs :)

Awaiting your response
thanks for the check nivrad >w< sorry for late response hehe
and.. wait x..x something wrong when i update it nvm UPDATED :D
Nivrad00
You didn't respond to my timing suggestion ;n; I think 2304 is more on-sync
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Nivrad00 wrote:

You didn't respond to my timing suggestion ;n; I think 2304 is more on-sync
lololol so sorry nivrad xD my lappy is really lag when i'm applying your mod ... i even forgot with the offset x..x

but anyway, fixed timing ->snap the note -> snap the preview point
and updated
Nivrad00
Looks good. Bubbled
Adot
speedrank is real
Hotaru-

Adot wrote:

speedrank is real
SYAHME
GFriend impact is real.
Xiaolin
I'm really late.. But shouldn't Source Music be in the tags? Because that's the agency they're under.. o.o
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I'm really late.. But shouldn't Source Music be in the tags? Because that's the agency they're under.. o.o
no since in the source there's no SM in the SNSD's song ranked map
or YG on BIGBANG
or JYP on TWICE

so i think i'll just wite it on the tags

but hey, thanks for the star >w<
Xiaolin

Shinzo- wrote:

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I'm really late.. But shouldn't Source Music be in the tags? Because that's the agency they're under.. o.o
no since in the source there's no SM in the SNSD's song ranked map
or YG on BIGBANG
or JYP on TWICE

so i think i'll just wite it on the tags

but hey, thanks for the star >w<
I said tags, not source, but okay. xD
And np ^^ (Good luck getting it ranked soon)
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I said tags, not source, but okay. xD
And np ^^ (Good luck getting it ranked soon)
OMG hahahaha xD sorry sorry xD
[ A v a l o n ]
ddal ddal song ~


  • [General Issues]
  1. Why you not start the offset at here ? 00:00:384 - since you've already start mapping at that position too
  2. Your soft-hitwhistle have much unnecessary blank spot in the end http://puu.sh/qzSsM/b4faa1495c.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/qzSvU/3e85b7e9e9.wav
  3. Metadata fine https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se8bbsUFjC8 official record studio on youtube, and also p/5329965

    |1|2|3|4|


    [Easy]
  4. 00:10:824 - LN should be start here just like all other diffs
  5. 00:11:424 - 00:13:344 - if you decide to follow same sound like other diff, then it should be 1/2 snap too this time, that's not really hard too for this diff level . . . make it consistent (but if you feel 1/2 LN is hard for Easy, you can change it to single note instead of LN)
  6. 00:23:664 (23664|0,24144|0) - that's sound was different this time, try to move this 00:23:664 (23664|0) - into 2nd column (please make this more simply as possible to current rhythm)
  7. 01:49:824 (109824|0,109824|1) - swap this to right side, since they're really different instrument with 01:50:304 (110304|1,110304|0) - newbie player will get confuse to read that if you keep that in same column
  8. alright no more on this diff (but a little boring hhh, nvm)

    [Normal]
  9. 00:02:184 - not going to add at least a note in here ? that drum sound was really loud this time
  10. 00:26:784 (26784|3,26784|2,27264|3,27264|2) - since they're have different instrument, that would be more good if you place them into different column too
  11. 00:33:024 - 00:34:944 - same reason as above ^
  12. 01:26:784 (86784|0,86784|1,87264|1,87264|0) - hmm, i would not to repeat again, ayyy
  13. Well, fine diff

    [Hard]
  14. 00:46:464 (46464|0,46944|1) - if you decide to follows vocal with LN here, so this part is need to be given as LN too 00:45:984 (45984|3) - since that parts is start losing all other instrument (except vocals like afterwards pattern)
  15. 00:47:904 (47904|2) - this just . . . too ez for this difficulty level laaaa, you can start layering 1/4 here since they're also really loud to map
  16. 00:50:544 - add one more note here like 00:54:384 - it have same kick polyrhythm
  17. 00:57:504 (57504|0,57504|1,57984|1,57984|0) - well then, they're really different this time . . . suggest to try this http://puu.sh/qzTXf/7d7b7266ee.jpg
  18. 01:20:064 (80064|3,80304|3,80544|3) - this just not feels really good, you can layer this 01:20:544 (80544|3,81024|1) - to 2 4 column
  19. 01:41:664 (101664|0) - same reason as my previously mod
  20. 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1) - those note come too early with guitar sound itself, it's clearly start on 02:23:244 - 02:23:364 - (with 1/8 snaps)
  21. 02:25:104 - damn, i think it's same this time . . . those guitar come too late, i highly recommended you to confirm those issue with QAT first (more better to do that before qualify)
  22. 02:26:784 (146784|0,146904|1) - this still 1/6 for sure . . . it still have 2 sound in around 02:26:784 - to 02:26:944 -
  23. 02:27:104 - same ^ still 1/6
  24. 02:57:024 (177024|0,177024|1,177264|0) - Ctrl H . . . it have different instrument from previous pattern

    [Insane]
  25. 00:02:064 (2064|2,2064|1) - move them to 1 and 4 column ? since the first sound is still same with 00:01:824 - also pressing 1/4 at 2nd column in three times was really pain too i feel
  26. 00:10:824 (10824|1) - 00:11:904 (11904|1,12384|2) - 00:14:304 (14304|2) - 00:15:264 (15264|1) - please consider this LN length consistency with your hard diff too . . . that would be more good if you explain why (?) you do that
  27. 02:22:344 (142344|1,142464|2,142464|3) - what
  28. 02:55:044 (175044|3) - ghost note, i really can't hear clear sound here . . . please delete it
  29. I have no more complains with this diff . . . but please check the snap issue like on Hard diff and also LN consistency with other diff
Call me back when you've already check everything ~
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

ddal ddal song ~


  • [General Issues]
  1. Why you not start the offset at here ? 00:00:384 - since you've already start mapping at that position too oki
  2. Your soft-hitwhistle have much unnecessary blank spot in the end http://puu.sh/qzSsM/b4faa1495c.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/qzSvU/3e85b7e9e9.wav doki
  3. Metadata fine https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se8bbsUFjC8 official record studio on youtube, and also p/5329965

    |1|2|3|4|


    [Easy]
  4. 00:10:824 - LN should be start here just like all other diffs
  5. 00:11:424 - 00:13:344 - if you decide to follow same sound like other diff, then it should be 1/2 snap too this time, that's not really hard too for this diff level . . . make it consistent (but if you feel 1/2 LN is hard for Easy, you can change it to single note instead of LN)
  6. 00:23:664 (23664|0,24144|0) - that's sound was different this time, try to move this 00:23:664 (23664|0) - into 2nd column (please make this more simply as possible to current rhythm)
  7. 01:49:824 (109824|0,109824|1) - swap this to right side, since they're really different instrument with 01:50:304 (110304|1,110304|0) - newbie player will get confuse to read that if you keep that in same column
  8. alright no more on this diff (but a little boring hhh, nvm)
    all applied here

    [Normal]
  9. 00:02:184 - not going to add at least a note in here ? that drum sound was really loud this time i'll let it empty siince hard diff just 1 note
  10. 00:26:784 (26784|3,26784|2,27264|3,27264|2) - since they're have different instrument, that would be more good if you place them into different column too fixed
  11. 00:33:024 - 00:34:944 - same reason as above ^ ookay
  12. 01:26:784 (86784|0,86784|1,87264|1,87264|0) - hmm, i would not to repeat again, ayyy LMayo
  13. Well, fine diff

    [Hard]
  14. 00:46:464 (46464|0,46944|1) - if you decide to follows vocal with LN here, so this part is need to be given as LN too 00:45:984 (45984|3) - since that parts is start losing all other instrument (except vocals like afterwards pattern) wut, idk but i'm gonna reject it lol sorry
  15. 00:47:904 (47904|2) - this just . . . too ez for this difficulty level laaaa, you can start layering 1/4 here since they're also really loud to map welp okay
  16. 00:50:544 - add one more note here like 00:54:384 - it have same kick polyrhythm yap
  17. 00:57:504 (57504|0,57504|1,57984|1,57984|0) - well then, they're really different this time . . . suggest to try this http://puu.sh/qzTXf/7d7b7266ee.jpg okay, btw you give a wrong timing
  18. 01:20:064 (80064|3,80304|3,80544|3) - this just not feels really good, you can layer this 01:20:544 (80544|3,81024|1) - to 2 4 column okay
  19. 01:41:664 (101664|0) - same reason as my previously mod same
  20. 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1) - those note come too early with guitar sound itself, it's clearly start on 02:23:244 - 02:23:364 - (with 1/8 snaps)
  21. 02:25:104 - damn, i think it's same this time . . . those guitar come too late, i highly recommended you to confirm those issue with QAT first (more better to do that before qualify)
  22. 02:26:784 (146784|0,146904|1) - this still 1/6 for sure . . . it still have 2 sound in around 02:26:784 - to 02:26:944 -
  23. 02:27:104 - same ^ still 1/6
  24. 02:57:024 (177024|0,177024|1,177264|0) - Ctrl H . . . it have different instrument from previous pattern

    [Insane]
  25. 00:02:064 (2064|2,2064|1) - move them to 1 and 4 column ? since the first sound is still same with 00:01:824 - also pressing 1/4 at 2nd column in three times was really pain too i feel i'll keep it since this bpm wont be really painful
  26. 00:10:824 (10824|1) - 00:11:904 (11904|1,12384|2) - 00:14:304 (14304|2) - 00:15:264 (15264|1) - please consider this LN length consistency with your hard diff too . . . that would be more good if you explain why (?) you do that fixed instead
  27. 02:22:344 (142344|1,142464|2,142464|3) - what
  28. 02:55:044 (175044|3) - ghost note, i really can't hear clear sound here . . . please delete it okay
  29. I have no more complains with this diff . . . but please check the snap issue like on Hard diff and also LN consistency with other diff
Call me back when you've already check everything ~
i wont reply about the guitar part, i'll confirm it with QAT asap
thanks Avalon >w<)~
Satria_Garuda
Why not add a video to this?
Natsu
Can I take this mp3?

BTW don't use anime BG :(
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