Lenfried- wrote:

oooookaaaaay im literally ninja-ing a BN check

With a lack of an I diff i am likely not to match the mod you gave me, with that in mind, you can PM anytime for a mod and cut the line of pending reqs.

insane

00:43:116 (43116|2) - would work better on 4 just so that the sounds are made unique in comparison to 00:43:356 oki(43356|0,43476|2,43476|1) -
01:05:916 - idk my pr but this could be different from 01:05:676 (65676|3,65676|1) - just to include that synth in the mix without having to add a note oke
01:37:236 (97236|1,97356|0) - swap col, with the same logic as my first suggestion ye
01:59:436 (119436|2,119436|0,119676|0,119676|2) - like my second suggestion hou
02:09:036 - though this may be done for variety this is one of the weird cases when im up to ctrl h copypasta. It's a pretty short section so previously, [13] would work as the loud sound while [12] represents the kick thingy, and then you just inverted the usage upon switching your lanes sooo its 02:08:076 (128076|2,128076|0,128316|0,128316|1) - versus 02:09:036 (129036|3,129036|1,129276|3,129276|2) - , just not a fan of the switchupit's fine for me
03:04:716 (184716|3,184716|1,184956|1,184956|3) - like previous

hard

00:12:396 (12396|2,12396|1,12396|0) - what makes this so special that 00:10:476 - 00:13:356 - 00:14:316 - 00:15:276 - 00:11:436 - aren't tripled? If there isn't anything special and you want to keep a system where you can avoid tripling 00:11:436 - but still keep the current triple, you should add in 00:14:316 and 00:10:476 - - so it will be:
x - not triple o - triple
from xxoxx to oxoxo fixed lol

00:32:556 - i personally find this weird where you add that LN and just stop charting the 1/4, i dunno ditch the LN and just chart the 1/4. Id do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5635047 i'll reconsider
00:47:916 (47916|2) - since the vocals aren't 1/1s at this point, might as well chart the 1/4 sounds
00:54:156 - idk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5635066
01:26:316 - like previous will reconsider all ^^
01:33:396 (93396|1) - prolly more fun to hit at 3 ok
02:09:036 - refer to insane heu
02:12:316 - you sure this is ok for hard? It's barely easier than just jumptrilling (what you did in Insane) nerfed a bit
02:53:676 - refer to screenshot hoeue

noticed the copypasta, so if i missed repeating a mod from a section that you copypasta'd, check those out

Good luck!

also despite my acquired taste for weird shit like mashcore, i really like kpop

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Ooo, GFRIEND <3 Good luck!

Norman wrote:

Hi Shinzo-



no kds :>

Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check

General

The timing seems a bit late. I suggest using an offset of 2304 . What do you think?
If you agree, you should shift all the timing points by -12 ms and make sure the notes and preview point are resnapped. Make sure you apply the rest of my mod first

Difficulties

You had a lot of hitsound inconsistencies ;n;

Easy

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:33:396
01:59:676
03:04:956
Fixed all
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings yeah actually there's a sound on red and blue, but i choose to layer it on blue to make it consistent with all diff since normal diff will be weird and hard if i layer it on the red hehe sorry
01:32:556 - why double? impact
01:58:956 - 02:00:876 - 02:02:796 - shouldn't these be doubles? For consistency with 01:03:756 - and 03:02:796 - fixed !
02:39:756 - unnecessary clap hitsound yeah xD

Normal

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:59:676
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
Fixed all
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings same
00:55:236 and 02:54:276 - suggest deleting, I don't hear strong bass/drum notes my bad
02:40:716 - suggest deleting the single note because no drum (see 00:45:516 - ) yes !

Hard

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:10:716
01:59:676
02:04:476
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
03:09:756
fixed all
00:08:076 - doubled whistle hitsound, you should just use one sorry x..x
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings same
01:33:276 (93276|0,93396|2) - sounds like the first note should be normal and the second note should be whistle oh ye xD
01:10:956 - missing clap hitsound i don't think so.. there's no clap hs in other diff too
02:04:716 - samesame
03:09:996 - samesame
02:12:556 - maybe the double would fit better at 02:12:636 - ooups
02:39:756 (159756|3) - unnecessary clap hitsound my bad

Insane

missing whistle hitsounds:
01:05:916
01:10:716
01:33:396
01:59:676
02:04:476
02:05:196
02:38:916
03:04:956
03:09:756
Fixed all ^
00:08:076 - doubled whistle hitsound, you should just use one sorry xD
00:10:716 - I think the LN should start here based on the strings same
01:33:276 - unnecessary whistle hitsound wwww
01:50:076 - this crash hitsound should be at 01:49:836 - , not here im so stupud
01:10:956 - missing clap hitsound same as hard
02:04:716 - same same
03:09:996 - same same
02:15:276 - consider adding LN? I hear the synth here good idea
02:39:756 (159756|3) - unnecessary clap hitsound hehhe

Very fun map! Also I can't complain about more Korean songs

Awaiting your response

Nivrad00 wrote:

You didn't respond to my timing suggestion ;n; I think 2304 is more on-sync

Adot wrote:

speedrank is real

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I'm really late.. But shouldn't Source Music be in the tags? Because that's the agency they're under.. o.o

Shinzo- wrote:

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I'm really late.. But shouldn't Source Music be in the tags? Because that's the agency they're under.. o.o

no since in the source there's no SM in the SNSD's song ranked map
or YG on BIGBANG
or JYP on TWICE

so i think i'll just wite it on the tags

but hey, thanks for the star >w<

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I said tags, not source, but okay. xD
And np ^^ (Good luck getting it ranked soon)

• 
  [General Issues]

1. Why you not start the offset at here ? 00:00:384 - since you've already start mapping at that position too
2. Your soft-hitwhistle have much unnecessary blank spot in the end http://puu.sh/qzSsM/b4faa1495c.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/qzSvU/3e85b7e9e9.wav
3. Metadata fine https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se8bbsUFjC8 official record studio on youtube, and also p/5329965
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [Easy]
4. 00:10:824 - LN should be start here just like all other diffs
5. 00:11:424 - 00:13:344 - if you decide to follow same sound like other diff, then it should be 1/2 snap too this time, that's not really hard too for this diff level . . . make it consistent (but if you feel 1/2 LN is hard for Easy, you can change it to single note instead of LN)
6. 00:23:664 (23664|0,24144|0) - that's sound was different this time, try to move this 00:23:664 (23664|0) - into 2nd column (please make this more simply as possible to current rhythm)
7. 01:49:824 (109824|0,109824|1) - swap this to right side, since they're really different instrument with 01:50:304 (110304|1,110304|0) - newbie player will get confuse to read that if you keep that in same column
8. alright no more on this diff (but a little boring hhh, nvm)
   
   [Normal]
9. 00:02:184 - not going to add at least a note in here ? that drum sound was really loud this time
10. 00:26:784 (26784|3,26784|2,27264|3,27264|2) - since they're have different instrument, that would be more good if you place them into different column too
11. 00:33:024 - 00:34:944 - same reason as above ^
12. 01:26:784 (86784|0,86784|1,87264|1,87264|0) - hmm, i would not to repeat again, ayyy
13. Well, fine diff
    
    [Hard]
14. 00:46:464 (46464|0,46944|1) - if you decide to follows vocal with LN here, so this part is need to be given as LN too 00:45:984 (45984|3) - since that parts is start losing all other instrument (except vocals like afterwards pattern)
15. 00:47:904 (47904|2) - this just . . . too ez for this difficulty level laaaa, you can start layering 1/4 here since they're also really loud to map
16. 00:50:544 - add one more note here like 00:54:384 - it have same kick polyrhythm
17. 00:57:504 (57504|0,57504|1,57984|1,57984|0) - well then, they're really different this time . . . suggest to try this http://puu.sh/qzTXf/7d7b7266ee.jpg
18. 01:20:064 (80064|3,80304|3,80544|3) - this just not feels really good, you can layer this 01:20:544 (80544|3,81024|1) - to 2 4 column
19. 01:41:664 (101664|0) - same reason as my previously mod
20. 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1) - those note come too early with guitar sound itself, it's clearly start on 02:23:244 - 02:23:364 - (with 1/8 snaps)
21. 02:25:104 - damn, i think it's same this time . . . those guitar come too late, i highly recommended you to confirm those issue with QAT first (more better to do that before qualify)
22. 02:26:784 (146784|0,146904|1) - this still 1/6 for sure . . . it still have 2 sound in around 02:26:784 - to 02:26:944 -
23. 02:27:104 - same ^ still 1/6
24. 02:57:024 (177024|0,177024|1,177264|0) - Ctrl H . . . it have different instrument from previous pattern
    
    [Insane]
25. 00:02:064 (2064|2,2064|1) - move them to 1 and 4 column ? since the first sound is still same with 00:01:824 - also pressing 1/4 at 2nd column in three times was really pain too i feel
26. 00:10:824 (10824|1) - 00:11:904 (11904|1,12384|2) - 00:14:304 (14304|2) - 00:15:264 (15264|1) - please consider this LN length consistency with your hard diff too . . . that would be more good if you explain why (?) you do that
27. 02:22:344 (142344|1,142464|2,142464|3) - what
28. 02:55:044 (175044|3) - ghost note, i really can't hear clear sound here . . . please delete it
29. I have no more complains with this diff . . . but please check the snap issue like on Hard diff and also LN consistency with other diff

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

ddal ddal song ~

• 
  [General Issues]

1. Why you not start the offset at here ? 00:00:384 - since you've already start mapping at that position too oki
2. Your soft-hitwhistle have much unnecessary blank spot in the end http://puu.sh/qzSsM/b4faa1495c.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/qzSvU/3e85b7e9e9.wav doki
3. Metadata fine https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se8bbsUFjC8 official record studio on youtube, and also p/5329965
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [Easy]
4. 00:10:824 - LN should be start here just like all other diffs
5. 00:11:424 - 00:13:344 - if you decide to follow same sound like other diff, then it should be 1/2 snap too this time, that's not really hard too for this diff level . . . make it consistent (but if you feel 1/2 LN is hard for Easy, you can change it to single note instead of LN)
6. 00:23:664 (23664|0,24144|0) - that's sound was different this time, try to move this 00:23:664 (23664|0) - into 2nd column (please make this more simply as possible to current rhythm)
7. 01:49:824 (109824|0,109824|1) - swap this to right side, since they're really different instrument with 01:50:304 (110304|1,110304|0) - newbie player will get confuse to read that if you keep that in same column
8. alright no more on this diff (but a little boring hhh, nvm)
   all applied here
   
   [Normal]
9. 00:02:184 - not going to add at least a note in here ? that drum sound was really loud this time i'll let it empty siince hard diff just 1 note
10. 00:26:784 (26784|3,26784|2,27264|3,27264|2) - since they're have different instrument, that would be more good if you place them into different column too fixed
11. 00:33:024 - 00:34:944 - same reason as above ^ ookay
12. 01:26:784 (86784|0,86784|1,87264|1,87264|0) - hmm, i would not to repeat again, ayyy LMayo
13. Well, fine diff
    
    [Hard]
14. 00:46:464 (46464|0,46944|1) - if you decide to follows vocal with LN here, so this part is need to be given as LN too 00:45:984 (45984|3) - since that parts is start losing all other instrument (except vocals like afterwards pattern) wut, idk but i'm gonna reject it lol sorry
15. 00:47:904 (47904|2) - this just . . . too ez for this difficulty level laaaa, you can start layering 1/4 here since they're also really loud to map welp okay
16. 00:50:544 - add one more note here like 00:54:384 - it have same kick polyrhythm yap
17. 00:57:504 (57504|0,57504|1,57984|1,57984|0) - well then, they're really different this time . . . suggest to try this http://puu.sh/qzTXf/7d7b7266ee.jpg okay, btw you give a wrong timing
18. 01:20:064 (80064|3,80304|3,80544|3) - this just not feels really good, you can layer this 01:20:544 (80544|3,81024|1) - to 2 4 column okay
19. 01:41:664 (101664|0) - same reason as my previously mod same
20. 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1) - those note come too early with guitar sound itself, it's clearly start on 02:23:244 - 02:23:364 - (with 1/8 snaps)
21. 02:25:104 - damn, i think it's same this time . . . those guitar come too late, i highly recommended you to confirm those issue with QAT first (more better to do that before qualify)
22. 02:26:784 (146784|0,146904|1) - this still 1/6 for sure . . . it still have 2 sound in around 02:26:784 - to 02:26:944 -
23. 02:27:104 - same ^ still 1/6
24. 02:57:024 (177024|0,177024|1,177264|0) - Ctrl H . . . it have different instrument from previous pattern
    
    [Insane]
25. 00:02:064 (2064|2,2064|1) - move them to 1 and 4 column ? since the first sound is still same with 00:01:824 - also pressing 1/4 at 2nd column in three times was really pain too i feel i'll keep it since this bpm wont be really painful
26. 00:10:824 (10824|1) - 00:11:904 (11904|1,12384|2) - 00:14:304 (14304|2) - 00:15:264 (15264|1) - please consider this LN length consistency with your hard diff too . . . that would be more good if you explain why (?) you do that fixed instead
27. 02:22:344 (142344|1,142464|2,142464|3) - what
28. 02:55:044 (175044|3) - ghost note, i really can't hear clear sound here . . . please delete it okay
29. I have no more complains with this diff . . . but please check the snap issue like on Hard diff and also LN consistency with other diff

Call me back when you've already check everything ~

Natsu wrote:

Can I take this mp3?

BTW don't use anime BG

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

okay . . . let's give a try then
Qualified

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

OWO
Congratz aaaa! XD

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

this song o:
congratulation

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg , current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg , current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg , current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.

Shinzo- wrote:

Btw help me to find BG for Gfriend's navillera xD i just can't found a HD BG for this so i use anime bg lol

Muu-chan wrote:

For Shinzo-
Something little that bother me is SV on 02:47:784 - x1.30 in 1/4 snap.. is kinda sudden.. maybe? I'm sorry but i'm bad at SV it just my opinion.. Kalau yang udah tau beatnya mungkin ok ok aja.. cuman buat yg baru denger / main, feels like sudden ;;
I enjoyed the other SV btw :3

Anyway.. congrats!

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg , current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.

+1

Shinzo- wrote:

Btw help me to find BG for Gfriend's navillera xD i just can't found a HD BG for this so i use anime bg lol

There're so many good BGs if you googled "gfriend navillera" it didn't even take an hour to find one.. .__. Since this is still qualified, maybe you can use these:

1 2 3 4 5

On a side note: Just because the girl in the BG looks like one of the members, doesn't mean it fits..

EDIT: Using an anime BG for a non-related anime song is actually fine IMO.. But, at least make it sensible. Don't just put any random anime BG and call it a map. Also, if you looked at this BG and the MV, you'd know that this BG is 0% related to the song..

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

and also there is so much korean people outside that drawing comic/anime-like things too ayy . . . try LINE webtoon

Verniy_Chan wrote:

bnyak yg complain tntng BG, lel XD
Gratz Shin ET~

Draftnell wrote:

lol :v baru sadar w xD KPOP udh rank xD