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kamome sano - Citrus [OsuMania]

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Viandanesh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 Maret 2019 at 12:16:00

Artist: kamome sano
Title: Citrus
Source: jubeat prop
Tags: jubeat plus jubeat series sdvx 3 gravity wars bemani summer diary 2015 leoudel konami
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2137kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced Lv.7 - 4Key (2,16 stars, 555 notes)
  2. BANGKE's ExTrA Lv.12 - 4Key (3,91 stars, 1196 notes)
  3. Basic Lv.4 - 4Key (1,43 stars, 266 notes)
  4. Extreme Lv.9 - 4Key (3,19 stars, 960 notes)
Download: kamome sano - Citrus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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so i dont know if there is already ranked version of this song lol.
GRAVED
Enjoy!
- Ly0572 -
hi~
req from my sh♥ty queue

1|2|3|4

basic
00:02:454 (2454|2) - delete if you are following the guitar sound
00:04:006 (4006|2,4178|0) - delete ^
00:05:902 (5902|3) - delete ^
00:06:247 (6247|2) - this LN starts here 00:06:075 - i believe
00:31:937 (31937|2) - move to 4 better flow
00:32:281 (32281|2) - move to 2 ^
00:32:454 (32454|0) - move to 3 ^
00:32:799 (32799|1) - delete
00:32:971 (32971|0) - move to 4 better flow
00:34:868 (34868|3) - ^ 3
00:42:971 (42971|1) - ^ 3
00:43:316 (43316|1) - ^ 1
00:45:902 (45902|3) - ^ 3
00:46:075 (46075|3,46247|1) - ctrl+j
00:47:454 (47454|2) - move to 1
00:47:799 (47799|2,47971|3) - CTRL+j
01:01:592 - add to 1
01:01:764 (61764|3) - LN should start here 01:01:937 - ends here 01:02:626 -
01:12:971 (72971|2) - move to 4
01:13:316 (73316|3) - move to 3
01:18:833 (78833|2) - ^ 3
01:19:264 - add to 3
01:26:764 (86764|3,88086|1) - i thing u should fix this Ln's
01:32:626 (92626|0) - move to 3
01:32:644 - add Ln to 1, ends here 01:33:316 -
01:37:713 - add to 2
01:37:799 (97799|1) - move to 1
01:46:075 (106075|2) - this Ln should end here 01:47:454 -
01:47:281 (107281|0) - and this starts here 01:47:454 - ends here 01:48:316 -
advance
00:42:454 (42454|1) - move to 1
00:42:540 (42540|2,42626|0,42626|1,42799|3) - - ctrl+h
00:47:626 (47626|1) - add to 2
00:50:730 (50730|2) - Ln starts here 00:50:902 - ends here 00:52:971 -
01:00:902 (60902|3) - move to 1
01:01:075 (61075|1,61247|2,61419|3) - ctrl+j
01:01:764 (61764|2) - delete
01:15:730 - forgot to put note here?
01:15:557 (75557|0) - delete
01:15:902 (75902|2) - ^
Topic Starter
Viandanesh
wogh will apply asap ><
im still in my way to my hometown ;-;
Topic Starter
Viandanesh
Thanks for mods ><)/

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi~
req from my sh♥ty queue

1|2|3|4

basic
00:02:454 (2454|2) - delete if you are following the guitar sound i dont wann delete it because i hear guitar sound there
00:04:006 (4006|2,4178|0) - delete ^ same^
00:05:902 (5902|3) - delete ^ same^
00:06:247 (6247|2) - this LN starts here 00:06:075 - i believe nope, when i hear it in 50% speed it start here 00:06:247 -
00:31:937 (31937|2) - move to 4 better flow done
00:32:281 (32281|2) - move to 2 ^ nope it has same pitch like previous note
00:32:454 (32454|0) - move to 3 ^ rejected
00:32:799 (32799|1) - delete nope, there is piano sounds there
00:32:971 (32971|0) - move to 4 better flow done
00:34:868 (34868|3) - ^ 3 no, same pitch
00:42:971 (42971|1) - ^ 3 done
00:43:316 (43316|1) - ^ 1 nope
00:45:902 (45902|3) - ^ 3 nope
00:46:075 (46075|3,46247|1) - ctrl+j nope
00:47:454 (47454|2) - move to 1 nope
00:47:799 (47799|2,47971|3) - CTRL+j nope
01:01:592 - add to 1 done
01:01:764 (61764|3) - LN should start here 01:01:937 - ends here 01:02:626 - okay rejected, i hear the synth voice start here 01:01:764 -
01:12:971 (72971|2) - move to 4 done
01:13:316 (73316|3) - move to 3 done
01:18:833 (78833|2) - ^ 3 nope
01:19:264 - add to 3 i dunno but it think that will not fit the rythm
01:26:764 (86764|3,88086|1) - i thing u should fix this Ln's lol, i hear in 50% speed that LN is start in 1/6 note so there no something wrong
01:32:626 (92626|0) - move to 3 nope i will keep it
01:32:644 - add Ln to 1, ends here 01:33:316 - for what sound that LN?
01:37:713 - add to 2 done
01:37:799 (97799|1) - move to 1 done
01:46:075 (106075|2) - this Ln should end here 01:47:454 - nope, you must hear it with 50% speed
01:47:281 (107281|0) - and this starts here 01:47:454 - ends here 01:48:316 - ^
advance
00:42:454 (42454|1) - move to 1 done
00:42:540 (42540|2,42626|0,42626|1,42799|3) - - ctrl+h done
00:47:626 (47626|1) - add to 2 done
00:50:730 (50730|2) - Ln starts here 00:50:902 - ends here 00:52:971 - nope
01:00:902 (60902|3) - move to 1 done
01:01:075 (61075|1,61247|2,61419|3) - ctrl+j done
01:01:764 (61764|2) - delete done
01:15:730 - forgot to put note here? uwauwauwa my mistake ><
01:15:557 (75557|0) - delete done
01:15:902 (75902|2) - ^ done
- Ly0572 -
Oh god that was a useless mod xD sorry bout that

Tried my best
leoudel
woosh woosh
leoudel
http://puu.sh/qdHZn/5507970ebd.rar

selfmod v.2
Topic Starter
Viandanesh

leoudel wrote:

http://puu.sh/qdHZn/5507970ebd.rar

selfmod v.2
whoosh whoosh
updated
EYA-
lazy quick mod

extra
Bg= ok
00:04:005 - add note to col 4
00:10:815 - add to col 2
00:13:660 (13660|2) - i dont think what this note is good idea after LN burst, 2 notes is enough, but this is 50/50, so reject it if u want
00:18:660 - http://puu.sh/qlhSI/27c5965684.jpg
00:21:419 - http://puu.sh/qlhUb/4aa59736ad.jpg
00:22:971 (22971|1) - http://puu.sh/qlhZd/bc4826936a.jpg
00:31:591 - http://puu.sh/qli5G/a92d018533.jpg
00:32:798 - http://puu.sh/qli7i/e622f0ba65.jpg

~End of NM contract~(fallen sleep)
leoudel

EYA- wrote:

lazy quick mod

extra
Bg= ok
00:04:005 - add note to col 4 //no im just layering double note in snare like this 00:04:695 (4695|0,4695|1) - etc.
00:10:815 - add to col 2 //no, same reason ^
00:13:660 (13660|2) - i dont think what this note is good idea after LN burst, 2 notes is enough, but this is 50/50, so reject it if u want //nope, this is cymbal
00:18:660 - http://puu.sh/qlhSI/27c5965684.jpg
00:21:419 - http://puu.sh/qlhUb/4aa59736ad.jpg
00:22:971 (22971|1) - http://puu.sh/qlhZd/bc4826936a.jpg
00:31:591 - http://puu.sh/qli5G/a92d018533.jpg
00:32:798 - http://puu.sh/qli7i/e622f0ba65.jpg
^^^^^ all reject

~End of NM contract~(fallen sleep)
thank for modding, sorry for rejecting your mod 'w'
fix some problems + selfmod
-BloowX
Hi vianda! :)

here my mod

COLUMNS:
|1|2|3|4|



FIRST CHECK THE VOLUMEN SECTION, ARE UNDER 5% PUT MINIMUM IN 10% (to avoid certain sounds that are the hitsounds ...)

Diff: BANGKE's ExTrA Lv.12
in this difficult mainly, I do not know if it was the idea leave the map well, but lacks some hits at certain point on the map,

00:09:091 - here
00:09:781 - ^
00:10:815 - ^

00:28:919 - ^
00:29:005 - ^
00:29:091 - ^
00:29:178 - ^
00:29:264 - here possibly
------------------------------------------

in this part you can put another triple
00:40:384 - the sound is not very different from the previous hit

00:44:436 (44436|1,44522|3,44609|0) - Here, because cutting the string sound?

00:44:522 (44522|3) - move to col 1
00:44:609 (44609|0) - move to col 4
---------------------------------------------

00:50:126 - missing note here, why? xD
00:50:643 - ^ reorganize, you can put another here
-----------------------------------------------------------------

01:12:281 - why not a triple here?
01:12:626 - this sound is for double note, why triple? xD
--------------------------------------------------------------------

01:22:281 (82281|0,82453|1) - here dont cut the synchronization, move 2 columns to the right

01:23:315 (83315|0,83402|1) - ^ same
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01:31:419 (91419|0) - due the sound you can move to the column 2

01:31:936 (91936|3) - and here to the column 3
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up here, I did not see much to fix in the other difficulties

Good luck with your map! :) /
Ochasan
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Topic Starter
Viandanesh
well, i think its dead
sorry for dissappearing cuz im busy right now with my school ;_;
maybe i will continue this map soon
Topic Starter
Viandanesh
well back to business
sorry for the previous mods T_T i really really not have time because i must focus finishing my semester but now i think i have little time to continue this map since i already finish all my job i real life ^^
Umo-
NM req from Umo-'s modding queue

1|2|3|4

Extream
00:01:936 - could add a double note here
00:02:453 (2453|1) - change to double for a loud sound
00:03:315 - add a note
00:04:005 (4005|1) - double
00:04:522 (4522|1) - double
00:04:695 - add a note here for a snare sound
00:05:212 (5212|2) - change to double
00:05:384 - missing note, you can hear a kick sound
00:06:074 - add double
00:14:178 (14178|1,14695|3) - could add a note on those timing because there is a loud sound on those parts
00:16:074 (16074|0) - ghost note
00:34:695 (34695|2,34867|2,35040|2) - move to 1 so that its not the same as 00:31:936 (31936|2,32109|2,32281|2) -
00:44:264 (44264|2,44436|2,44609|2,44781|2,44953|2) - anchor, avoid
00:46:678 (46678|2,46850|2,47022|2,47281|2,47453|2) - ^
00:49:695 (49695|3,49695|1) - shouldn't be double
00:55:729 - rip column one
00:59:695 (59695|0) - ends at 00:59:867 -
01:04:695 - rip column 1
01:10:384 (70384|0,70384|1) - shouldnt be double
01:12:109 (72109|2) - remove
01:17:712 (77712|0,77884|0) - avoid
01:21:247 - could add a normal note or a LN for a crash sound
01:23:488 (83488|1,83660|0) - ctrl+j
01:27:224 (87224|0) - ghost note
01:28:718 (88718|2) - ghost note, I can't even hear a sound with 25% speed
01:37:971 (97971|1,97971|2) - reason why this is a double?
01:41:764 (101764|2,102109|3,102281|0,102281|1) - same as 01:20:040 -
01:53:833 (113833|1,113833|0,114005|0,114005|1) - change to single note
01:54:178 - add a note on 1
eh I don't really feel like modding other difficulties but pm if you want me to finish them
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Viandanesh

Umo- wrote:

NM req from Umo-'s modding queue

1|2|3|4

Extream
00:01:936 - could add a double note here maybe youre right, i first i think to make it different from the extra :D
00:02:453 (2453|1) - change to double for a loud sound rejected, i think the sound is not louder as the main beat. i just put double for main beat
00:03:315 - add a note done
00:04:005 (4005|1) - double same reason as the first one
00:04:522 (4522|1) - double ^
00:04:695 - add a note here for a snare sound doneeee
00:05:212 (5212|2) - change to double nope
00:05:384 - missing note, you can hear a kick sound roger
00:06:074 - add double at there i only follow the guitar sound
00:14:178 (14178|1,14695|3) - could add a note on those timing because there is a loud sound on those parts i think one note is okay cuz a ln there so its can be counted as two note right ? D:
00:16:074 (16074|0) - ghost note well its not die yet XD. i hear three slow snare voice there after brrrt sound.lol
00:34:695 (34695|2,34867|2,35040|2) - move to 1 so that its not the same as 00:31:936 (31936|2,32109|2,32281|2) - kay. maybe more variation is fine :3
00:44:264 (44264|2,44436|2,44609|2,44781|2,44953|2) - anchor, avoid i jump on it
00:46:678 (46678|2,46850|2,47022|2,47281|2,47453|2) - ^ now i roll to the left xD
00:49:695 (49695|3,49695|1) - shouldn't be double ettooo its loud synth, so i think should be double D:
00:55:729 - rip column one w h a t
00:59:695 (59695|0) - ends at 00:59:867 - eeeeeeeh, my mistake
01:04:695 - rip column 1 well i revive it with my dragonball
01:10:384 (70384|0,70384|1) - shouldnt be double thats for synth sound
01:12:109 (72109|2) - remove eeeh why ;-;. he is a nice guy
01:17:712 (77712|0,77884|0) - avoid i jump over it. again
01:21:247 - could add a normal note or a LN for a crash sound roger
01:23:488 (83488|1,83660|0) - ctrl+j doneeee
01:27:224 (87224|0) - ghost note well, i dont believe with ghost
01:28:718 (88718|2) - ghost note, I can't even hear a sound with 25% speed i hear it. i swear
01:37:971 (97971|1,97971|2) - reason why this is a double? because, i love you. /me slapped. just my mistake xD
01:41:764 (101764|2,102109|3,102281|0,102281|1) - same as 01:20:040 - i know
01:53:833 (113833|1,113833|0,114005|0,114005|1) - change to single note whaaaaaaaay
01:54:178 - add a note on 1you said i must avoid that
eh I don't really feel like modding other difficulties but pm if you want me to finish them
Good Luck!
Thanks for the mods umooooo xD
updated!
Botan

colums 0|1|2|3

Advanced
00:05:902 (5902|1) - I don't think this LN fits the music well. The second LN works well as it encompasses the entire sound but this sound is a guitar pluck followed by a mute.
Maybe try this: http://imgur.com/a/Ardwc - Then we can get that sound at 00:06:074 - too.
00:07:798 (7798|1) - Move to column 0 and 00:07:971 (7971|0) - move to column 1. Fits your structure a bit better. Too many stairs currently.
>> FOR 00:34:178 - AND BEYOND. I think you should map this violin stab whenever you can.
00:35:902 - Here and the other violin spots as well. This would require a bit of work to fit in the patterns so just consider it, not a big deal if you don't.
>>
00:49:695 (49695|1) - Move to column 3 and 00:49:867 (49867|3) - move to column 1? Fits nicely with the pitch of the notes.
00:57:281 - Definitely add a note here.
00:59:522 - Add an LN here, you did it for 00:56:764 (56764|2)
01:00:040 - Definitely add a note here.
01:01:764 - Definitely add a note here. Unless you just wanted to map only percussion in this section to create a disparity between the two kiais.
01:51:247 to 01:54:178 - I can't play anything above NM in Mania... I could not play this pattern. Not sure if it's too hard or if I suck so just letting you know.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Viandanesh

Botan wrote:


colums 0|1|2|3

Advanced
00:05:902 (5902|1) - I don't think this LN fits the music well. The second LN works well as it encompasses the entire sound but this sound is a guitar pluck followed by a mute. well youre right. my mistake xD
Maybe try this: http://imgur.com/a/Ardwc - Then we can get that sound at 00:06:074 - too. roger
00:07:798 (7798|1) - Move to column 0 and 00:07:971 (7971|0) - move to column 1. Fits your structure a bit better. Too many stairs currently. roger. changed. sorry for my bad map styles ;w; this my first time i mapped a song so maybe still need much learning xD
>> FOR 00:34:178 - AND BEYOND. I think you should map this violin stab whenever you can. okay maybe i should remap that part little bit.
thanks for your suggestion :D

00:35:902 - Here and the other violin spots as well. This would require a bit of work to fit in the patterns so just consider it, not a big deal if you don't.
>>
00:49:695 (49695|1) - Move to column 3 and 00:49:867 (49867|3) - move to column 1? Fits nicely with the pitch of the notes. roger
00:57:281 - Definitely add a note here. oh its high pitch. doneeeeee
00:59:522 - Add an LN here, you did it for 00:56:764 (56764|2) doneeee.i can easily forget to map same sound with same note xD
01:00:040 - Definitely add a note here. doneeee
01:01:764 - Definitely add a note here. Unless you just wanted to map only percussion in this section to create a disparity between the two kiais. yep thats my purpose. i just try make more variation in the map so the map will less boring
01:51:247 to 01:54:178 - I can't play anything above NM in Mania (same with me, im suck at mania ;w;)... I could not play this pattern. Not sure if it's too hard or if I suck so just letting you know for advanced diff its not that hard so rejected D: also i just want to increase the difficulty of that diff because its just too easy for advanced diff :D.

Good luck!
Thanks Botan >w<
updated!
Akunosu
From my queue


0|1|2|3

 BANGKE's ExTrA Lv.12 :
  1. 00:07:453 - a double?, here the sound is similar to 00:06:074 -
  2. 01:09:867 - here shouldn't you put a triplet?, you put a triple in sounds like this: 01:10:557 -
  3. 01:12:971 - change to a double
  4. 01:24:781 - add a LN bcs there is a sound :3
  5. 01:24:867 - ^
  6. 01:37:712 - here the sounds is similar to the next tick, imo they must be same

that is all
Good Luck! :D
Sandalphon
Increase the overall volume
[Basic Lv.4]
00:05:212 (5212|0,5902|1) - Suggest ryou make the LN and the note stop at 00:06:074 - for the strong beat, feels weird not to have a note for that sound
00:22:281 (22281|3,22798|0) - Change them to normal note? as 1/2 LN in EZ diff is kinda hard
00:47:281 (47281|2,47453|2) - suggest move them to 1st col, current pattern is too heavy on the right hand
00:49:522 - Since you were following the snare drum and kick sound mainly in the previous part, i suggest delete these two note 00:49:695 - 00:50:212 - since they are main sound, so player wouldnt confuse with what you're trying to follow. (img)
00:54:695 - a note on 1st col?
00:56:936 (56936|1) - 00:59:695 (59695|2) - You can clearly hear the stop sound here so using LN wouldnt show that feeling (as LN usually for continuous sound), just simply change it into normal note
01:16:591 (76591|2) - 01:35:902 (95902|3) - This sound is only 1/2 beat long, so change to normal note perhaps
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