art of perfection <3
Fixed all thx for your modSpinForWin wrote:
Leah's Normal00:02:608 - add note
00:03:586 - ^
00:05:217 - ^
00:06:195 - ^
00:13:043 - ^
00:14:021 - ^
00:15:652 - ^
00:16:630 - ^
00:31:304 - ^
00:32:608 - ^
00:37:826 - ^
00:40:108 - ^
00:41:086 - ^
00:50:217 - 00:50:869 - 00:55:434 - 00:56:902 - 00:57:717 - 00:59:510 - ^ and etc...
01:21:847 - http://puu.sh/pWFwl/647efe7e2d.jpg - looks better
01:36:521 - add note
01:37:499 - ^ and etc...
18:53 *Akary is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1010808 ginkiha - nightfall [Stars]]
18:53 Akary: 00:24:864 - а сюда не нужно ноту стамить? >_>
18:54 [Shana Lesus]: секунду Маакс
18:54 [Shana Lesus]: и чекну
18:54 [Shana Lesus]: я карту обновлю
18:54 Akary: 00:27:309 - ^
18:54 Akary: Оке
18:56 [Shana Lesus]: обнови
18:56 Akary: 00:24:888 -
18:57 Akary: 00:27:333 -
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: на 24 и 27 добавил
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: точнее
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: на 27
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: уже есть нота
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: и лн
18:57 Akary: 00:29:942 -
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: или ты хочешь чтобы было 2 ноты ?
18:57 Akary: Не
18:58 Akary: Там же есть звук
18:58 Akary: А не
18:58 Akary: Сорян :D
18:58 [Shana Lesus]: а
18:58 [Shana Lesus]: не
18:58 Akary: А нет
18:58 Akary: Есть
18:58 [Shana Lesus]: там лучше ноту не ставить
18:58 Akary: 00:29:942 -
18:59 [Shana Lesus]: понял
18:59 Akary: 00:32:469 - ^
18:59 [Shana Lesus]: но лучше ставить не буду :D
18:59 [Shana Lesus]: не хочу спокойный ритм ломать
18:59 Akary: 00:32:551 - ^
18:59 Akary: :D
19:00 Akary: Ну, я ток такие могу находить, в остальном все нормально
19:01 [Shana Lesus]: прям
19:01 [Shana Lesus]: все все ?
19:02 Akary: 03:49:915 - ноту добавь
19:02 Akary: 03:52:197 - тут ты главное делал по 2 ноты
19:02 Akary: 03:49:915 - а тут нет
19:02 Akary: Падазрительно
19:03 [Shana Lesus]: ОООООООООООООО
19:03 *[Shana Lesus] runs
19:03 [Shana Lesus]: добавил
19:03 Akary: Дальше еще посмотри
19:03 Akary: Там также
19:04 Akary: 04:07:197 - адд
19:05 Akary: 04:07:523 - и сюда я думал тоже
19:05 Akary: 04:10:458 (250458|2) - а ее удалить
19:06 [Shana Lesus]: най
19:06 [Shana Lesus]: с
19:06 [Shana Lesus]: мой герой
19:07 [Shana Lesus]: все сделал
19:07 Akary: 01:56:763 - может тоже добавить?
19:07 [Shana Lesus]: не не
19:07 Akary: 02:01:980 - и сюда
19:08 Akary: 01:59:371 (119371|3) - однако ж ты сюда добавил
19:08 [Shana Lesus]: ауч
19:08 Akary: 02:12:415 - сюда б я еще поставил нотку
19:08 [Shana Lesus]: не бей
19:08 [Shana Lesus]: добавил
19:09 Akary: 1\8 нотки не будешь делать?
19:09 [Shana Lesus]: неть
19:09 [Shana Lesus]: тут и не слышал толком
19:10 Akary: 02:48:284 - сюда нотку?
19:10 Akary: 02:53:502 - ^
19:11 Akary: Ну, вроде все
19:11 [Shana Lesus]: спасибо дорогой
19:11 Akary: Честно говоря, я б еще много где нотки поставил :D
19:12 [Shana Lesus]: где ?
19:12 Akary: Да я про 1\8 все говорю
19:12 Akary: :D
19:12 [Shana Lesus]: изыйди демон
19:12 [Shana Lesus]: :D
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: пости ирк чат на форум
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: я кудосай дам
19:13 Akary: 00:22:034 - а то тут есть
19:13 Akary: А в других похожих местах нет
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: хорошо
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: предлагай
19:13 Akary: *мунфейс*
19:14 Akary: 00:29:860 - ну вот, момент один
19:14 Akary: 00:32:469 - второй
19:14 Akary: 00:42:904 - пианка считается? XD
19:15 Akary: Ну и все в этом духе
19:15 [Shana Lesus]: вот теперь
19:15 [Shana Lesus]: надо сидеть и думать
19:16 [Shana Lesus]: ставить или не ставить
19:16 [Shana Lesus]: а если ставиь
19:16 [Shana Lesus]: придется делать ре-рейнж
19:17 Akary: Ну, в общем это все
all fixed, thankseyes wrote:
StarsSPOILER00:32:469 - http://puu.sh/pWXP1/2c25e9a9b9.jpg
00:35:241 - http://puu.sh/pWXSF/a7a979a0f4.jpg
00:37:768 - добавь ноту
00:39:154 - ^
00:42:985 - ^
00:53:339 - http://puu.sh/pWY3M/d7b5dd7d73.jpg
00:56:437 - я бы еще ноту добавил
01:49:589 - ^
02:19:589 - http://puu.sh/pWYgn/e35ade5643.jpg
02:24:725 - http://puu.sh/pWYjh/c841d6c5d1.jpg
02:27:252 - http://puu.sh/pWYl5/226fc5914e.jpg
02:32:551 - http://puu.sh/pWYop/3992b7c2dc.jpg
02:37:360 - добавь ноту
02:37:768 - ^
02:48:121 - http://puu.sh/pWYu3/2182a46278.jpg
02:56:002 (176002|0) - это сюда>02:55:947
02:56:110 (176110|3) - этот лн отсюда>02:56:110 (176110|3)
02:56:110 (176110|3) - добавь ноту
Thanks for mod Wolfy, almost all advices have been taken !WolfyArmato- wrote:
Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
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Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in EnglishStars02:08:828 - add note at |1|, because emphasize sound here
02:20:893 (140893|2) - Delete, maybe flow better
02:31:328 (151328|1) - ^
02:39:154 - very emphasize sound here add note at |2|
02:41:110 (161110|2) - Yeah.. I can here the sound, but it's really light, maybe delete
04:08:502 - add note at |3|
04:08:828 (248828|2) - move to |4| because different sound with 04:09:154 (249154|2)
04:09:806 - maybe add 1 note here
04:10:784 (250784|1) - change to normal note ,I didn't hear long sound here xD
Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
Fixed all thxWolfyArmato- wrote:
Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
|1|2|3|4|
Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in EnglishLeah's Night00:01:980 (1980|2) - move to |1|
00:09:154 (9154|3) - move to |2| ,because 00:07:850 - 00:09:806 becuase pattern is repetitive
00:28:067 (28067|2) - move to |2| maybe flow better
00:41:110 (41110|3,41110|0,41273|1,41437|2,41600|3,41763|0,41763|2) - Ctrl+H ?
01:36:545 (96545|1,96545|3,97034|2,97034|0,97523|1,97523|2) - I think change to single note will be consistency with 01:26:110 (86110|3,86600|2,87089|3) - I think it isn't emphasize so make it be single note
01:40:458 (100458|1) - to |3| ?
02:00:023 (120023|2) - end here 02:02:469
02:19:589 - add note at |2|, because you make double in 02:30:023
03:53:176 - maybe add note at |1| ?
04:03:610 - ^
Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
updated- [ L e a h ] - wrote:
Fixed all thxWolfyArmato- wrote:
Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
|1|2|3|4|
Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in EnglishLeah's Night00:01:980 (1980|2) - move to |1|
00:09:154 (9154|3) - move to |2| ,because 00:07:850 - 00:09:806 becuase pattern is repetitive
00:28:067 (28067|2) - move to |2| maybe flow better
00:41:110 (41110|3,41110|0,41273|1,41437|2,41600|3,41763|0,41763|2) - Ctrl+H ?
01:36:545 (96545|1,96545|3,97034|2,97034|0,97523|1,97523|2) - I think change to single note will be consistency with 01:26:110 (86110|3,86600|2,87089|3) - I think it isn't emphasize so make it be single note
01:40:458 (100458|1) - to |3| ?
02:00:023 (120023|2) - end here 02:02:469
02:19:589 - add note at |2|, because you make double in 02:30:023
03:53:176 - maybe add note at |1| ?
04:03:610 - ^
Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
http://puu.sh/pXXof/1dd12840cf.osu
Thank you for mod, waiting reply Leah ~Benson_Miakoun wrote:
I just want to suggest few things for you..... ^^Leah's NightI have a link to my dropbox for the osz file of this mod in "Leah's Night" difficulty....
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e01weyfhxfu706n/ginkiha%20-%20nightfall.osz?dl=0
00:25:295 - move this note to the 3rd column….I found this pattern better & most relative to the change of pitch in the music ( though it's not 100%
accurate since we're in just 4Keys)…. This will make the player feel the pitch of the music better……
00:35:730 - move this note to the 3rd column…
00:45:350 - add a note...( better at 1st column)
00:51:545 - I recommend removing the single note here (There is no corresponding beat or musical note)…..This will do better…. Making your holds pattern
richer….
02:20:078 - move this note to the 3rd column…
02:29:697 - move the long note to the 1st column (to fit my adjustments above this note)
02:30:023 - move this two notes one column to the right (resulting to one note in the 2nd column and one in the 4th)
02:30:187 - move it to 3rd column
02:30:350 - move it to 2nd column
02:30:513 - move it to 3rd column
02:30:676 - move it to 4th column
02:30:839 - move it to 3rd column
02:31:002 - move it to 2nd column
02:31:165 - move it to 1st column
02:31:328 - move this two notes one column to the right (one on the 2nd and one on the 4th)
02:31:654 - move it to the 3rd column
02:31:980 - move it to the 1st column
02:35:567 - add note (better in 3rd column)
02:40:132 - also add note (better in 3rd column)
02:46:328 - remove the single note here to make your holding patterns richer (same reason earlier, the "note" have no relative beat, "musical note" or pitch)
03:59:371 - add note (better in the 4th column)
04:05:893 - add note (better in 3rd column)
04:05:219 - move note to 2nd column (to fit with the change in 4:05:893)
04:10:947 - move it to 2nd column
04:11:110 - move it to 4th column………I suggest you end you map here….We know that it is better to map your "notes" relative to audible music notes
especially when it is low in tempo and not very high in difficulty….. It would surely make the player "feel the music more"….I really appreciate the
music and patterns from the start but I'm so sorry because I didn't feel the beauty of the music while seeing this pattern from 04:11:437 towards
above it…. But still, it's just my own suggestion……. it's all up to you…
Everything here is only my suggestions........^^ Again, it's all up to you.... ^^
Your Beatmap is almost perfect for ranking..!!!!
I really love the song ... ^^
I fixed them all thx for your modBenson_Miakoun wrote:
I just want to suggest few things for you..... ^^Leah's NightI have a link to my dropbox for the osz file of this mod in "Leah's Night" difficulty....
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e01weyfhxfu706n/ginkiha%20-%20nightfall.osz?dl=0
00:25:295 - move this note to the 3rd column….I found this pattern better & most relative to the change of pitch in the music ( though it's not 100%
accurate since we're in just 4Keys)…. This will make the player feel the pitch of the music better……
00:35:730 - move this note to the 3rd column…
00:45:350 - add a note...( better at 1st column)
00:51:545 - I recommend removing the single note here (There is no corresponding beat or musical note)…..This will do better…. Making your holds pattern
richer….
02:20:078 - move this note to the 3rd column…
02:29:697 - move the long note to the 1st column (to fit my adjustments above this note)
02:30:023 - move this two notes one column to the right (resulting to one note in the 2nd column and one in the 4th)
02:30:187 - move it to 3rd column
02:30:350 - move it to 2nd column
02:30:513 - move it to 3rd column
02:30:676 - move it to 4th column
02:30:839 - move it to 3rd column
02:31:002 - move it to 2nd column
02:31:165 - move it to 1st column
02:31:328 - move this two notes one column to the right (one on the 2nd and one on the 4th)
02:31:654 - move it to the 3rd column
02:31:980 - move it to the 1st column
02:35:567 - add note (better in 3rd column)
02:40:132 - also add note (better in 3rd column)
02:46:328 - remove the single note here to make your holding patterns richer (same reason earlier, the "note" have no relative beat, "musical note" or pitch)
03:59:371 - add note (better in the 4th column)
04:05:893 - add note (better in 3rd column)
04:05:219 - move note to 2nd column (to fit with the change in 4:05:893)
04:10:947 - move it to 2nd column
04:11:110 - move it to 4th column………I suggest you end you map here….We know that it is better to map your "notes" relative to audible music notes
especially when it is low in tempo and not very high in difficulty….. It would surely make the player "feel the music more"….I really appreciate the
music and patterns from the start but I'm so sorry because I didn't feel the beauty of the music while seeing this pattern from 04:11:437 towards
above it…. But still, it's just my own suggestion……. it's all up to you…
Everything here is only my suggestions........^^ Again, it's all up to you.... ^^
Your Beatmap is almost perfect for ranking..!!!!
I really love the song ... ^^
Спасибо !EYA- wrote:
FRIEND REQUEST stars00:21:871 (21871|0,21871|2) - может расположить их на 2 | 4 ? фикс
00:39:480 (39480|3,39806|0) - я бы убрал их, и добавил ноту 00:39:480 (39480|3,39806|0) - так как там самый громкий sound пиано
00:56:437 (56437|1,56600|0) - ctrl+j продолжает следующий паттерн
01:23:176 (83176|2) - может в 2 колонку? ^
00:56:437 (56437|1,56600|0) - ctrl+j ^
01:12:415 (72415|1,72578|2) - ^ ^
01:12:415 (72415|1,72578|2) - ^ столько раз используешь этот паттерн, что я запутался, стоит ли и правда юзать ctrl+j, прост немного раздражает глаза когда вижу это, но если все же примешь, сделай все такие же паттерны которые будут дальше так же ^
02:30:023 (150023|0,150187|1,150350|2,150513|1,150676|3,150839|2,151002|1,151165|0) - этот парт могбы сделать по аналогии с 02:19:670 (139670|2,139752|1,139915|2,140078|1,140241|0,140404|1,140567|2,140730|3) - во втором парт начало начинается с 1/8, да и чутка разнообразия не помешает
02:29:697 (149697|1) - лишняя ниет
02:53:176 (173176|3) - ^ ^
02:58:719 (178719|1,178719|0) - мне кажется что ноты отстают от звука, послушай на 25, ну и вроде все хлопки выше тоже отстают все совпадает, сбавь музыку, а хс на 100 поставь, weird stuff
03:06:545 (186545|3) - вот здесь вот пожадничал с нотами 03:06:708 (186708|2,187197|2,187523|1) - я выделял только этот бит
03:16:980 - и здесь тоже ^
03:17:632 (197632|3,197958|1) - не понимаю предназначение даблов здесь, можно было бы и оставить синглы 2 инструмента = 2 ноты
03:55:784 (235784|3) - здесь вроде звук затихает(сингл) не хочу нарушать атмосферу арта
fixed all thxCritical_Star wrote:
nyahalo Shana-nyan 'w')/
mod as requested~
column 1 2 3 4
Leah's Night
00:07:523 - add a note? there is a piano sound here
00:15:676 - maybe try http://puu.sh/q3nHx/afddd04f8b.png ? i think it fit better to the sound pitch
00:17:958 - like before add a note for piano sound?
00:18:284 - try http://puu.sh/q3nMo/e81fd288db.png ? the pitch are ascending here, this is just an example how the double note sound should be like
00:24:480 (24480|1) - make into a LN like 00:34:915 (34915|0) - for consistency
00:40:621 - 00:40:947 - missing note>? i just thought they are the same 1/4 sound like 00:35:404 (35404|2,35567|1,35730|2,35893|3,36056|2,36219|1,36382|0) -
00:47:306 (47306|2,47632|1) - CTRL+GF for pitch?
00:48:937 (48937|3,49100|2,49263|1) - CTRL+G? i think it fit better to the pitch
00:50:893 (50893|3) - i would prefer to use LN for this sound 00:50:567 (50567|2) - instead this, the piano sound are much more noticeable here
00:53:502 (53502|3,53502|2) - swap column? well is just to make a different column from 00:54:806 (54806|3) - which this have higher pitch
01:26:600 (86600|2,87089|3) - i feel a little odd here because u didnt map at 01:26:763 - 01:27:252 - which is the same sound, i would suggest to add them here.
01:32:632 - how about http://puu.sh/q3od7/ce5b26bce6.jpg? pattern suggestion
01:36:545 (96545|3,97034|2,97523|1) - same like before, i feel kind of odd, i know u wanted to keep it simple, but i don't think will be hard for novice player to play here.
01:43:067 - http://puu.sh/q3oiq/027098d997.jpg ? instead repeating 4-3-2-1, u can use a jump pattern here for piano melody
01:58:719 (118719|1) - maybe move to 3 to avoid same column usage with 02:00:023 (120023|1) -
02:25:132 (145132|1,145458|2) - how about CTRL+G? it fit really nice for pitch here.
03:20:893 (200893|1,201382|2,201871|0) - same reason like before
03:23:176 (203176|2,203339|3) - maybe CTRL+G and 03:23:502 (203502|2) - move to 1? just to variate the pattern here
03:30:023 (210023|3) - should end at 03:31:165 -
03:31:328 (211328|2,211817|3,212306|2) - same before
03:59:697 (239697|1,240023|2,240350|1) - maybe CTRL+H?
04:04:589 - how about http://puu.sh/q3oGL/0a4274f527.png? pattern suggestion
beautifulmappersong ;w;
good luck with it! have a lucky *star*
Critical_Star wrote:
beautiful mapper here
Thank you Awawon <3 all fixed, metadata too ![ A v a l o n ] wrote:
Bubble Check
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[General]waaa beautiful song and map here
- Song Setup & Metadata
Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 2&event=96- Audio & Hitsounds
192kbps audio is good . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms- BPM & Timing
all fine owo- Background
1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Since i already modded this long ago and the pattern itself has well-made, so i wiill only point out some issues here
[Stars]- 00:03:610 - not going too add LN here ? actually it have same feelings like 00:01:002 - >w<
- 00:32:306 (32306|0,32469|0,32632|0) - this might be a little confuse to press imo, you can reduce a note on this 00:32:306 - since they're not really have a big instrument impact like 00:31:328 -
- 00:40:621 (40621|2,40947|1) - hmm it just an echoes from previous impact, maybe you can delete that . . . up to you btw, the sound is still clear too >w<)b ///// 00:41:273 (41273|1,41600|1) - here same sound, keep
- 00:42:985 (42985|2) - this note come too late from current piano sound, it should be snapped on 1/12 for more accurate 00:42:958 - put in on here
- 01:42:904 (102904|3,103067|3,103230|3) - i feel this part should be have a different taste imo . . . try to move 01:42:904 (102904|3) - into the second column
- 01:44:045 (104045|3,104208|3,104371|3) - owo same reason as above, please try my suggestion http://puu.sh/qg4hX/ebb217969e.jpg ><)/
- 02:00:023 (120023|2) - you can end that LN on here 02:02:469 - yea the long sound was physically end on that, like on Leah's diff
- 02:11:763 (131763|3) - and 02:13:067 (133067|0) - you can end at this time on each 02:12:904 - 02:14:208 - same reason as above ^
- 02:27:089 (147089|3,147252|3) - same as my mod on 00:32:306 -
- 02:37:768 (157768|1) - this note come too late it should be snapped on 1/12 again this time 02:37:741 -
- 03:37:687 - hmm, maybe you already know what the issue on here XD yea it's actually same as my previous mod here
- 03:53:176 - add LN here, it have same feelings like 03:50:567 -
alsoCritical_Star wrote:
beautiful mapper here
>///< ) /
call me back ~
fixed all thx Avalon >w<[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
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[General]waaa beautiful song and map here
- Song Setup & Metadata
Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 2&event=96- Audio & Hitsounds
192kbps audio is good . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms- BPM & Timing
all fine owo- Background
1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Since i already modded this long ago and the pattern itself has well-made, so i wiill only point out some issues here
[Leah's Night]- Maybe you need to change this diffname ==> Leah's Night to Leah's Normal . . . idk your current diffname is still acceptable or not, according to this newest issue https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226552
- 01:26:600 (86600|2,86763|3,87089|2,87252|3) - i feel that section have different sound/pitch right now . . . then it should be different coloumn this time, it just similar like 01:26:110 (86110|3,86273|2) -
- 01:32:632 (92632|3,92958|3) - same reason as above ^ you can try my suggestion here http://puu.sh/qg3ab/f1b01b816e.jpg
- 01:36:545 - add LN like on this part ? 01:26:110 (86110|0) - it's similar phase and also please keep it consistent
- 01:58:719 (118719|0,120023|1) - swap this column for better pitch, and also 02:02:632 - you can try this http://puu.sh/qg3pL/ac35753548.jpg it feels more better imo
- 02:33:937 (153937|3,154263|2) - please convert this single note into LN, because that part is still have same sound like 02:33:284 (153284|1,154589|1,155241|3) - it's more better if you put that on same feelings too
- 02:45:676 (165676|3) - i can't understand this LN . . . it's not contains any same sound like 02:46:980 (166980|0) - and even the background music doesn't show the long sound too in this part, you've better to delete that LN
- 03:05:241 (185241|0) - end this LN on this timing 03:06:545 - to focusing the piano sound . . . btw, it's actually same as you did in this part 01:11:763 -
- 03:20:893 (200893|1,201056|2,201382|1,201545|2) - remember they're have different sound, consider to arrange that into different column too
alsoCritical_Star wrote:
beautiful mapper here
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waaaa, thank you <3[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
Bubbled congratulations !
wow thx ^^[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
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Accepted, thanks.genkicho wrote:
FastMod
OMG Nice song... this reminds me when first time i play unturned in winter PEI
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