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Adot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, March 22, 2017 at 8:14:49 PM

Artist: ETIA.
Title: Last Battalion
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: sdvx bemani Hard & Catchy KAC2013 オリジナル楽曲コンテスト Original Song Contest KAC 2013 -ULTIMATE MEDLEY HISTORIA SOUND VOLTEX- Emperor Side
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3157kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. BASIC - 4Key (1.31 stars, 351 notes)
  2. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.34 stars, 1403 notes)
  3. MEGA's ADVANCED - 4Key (3 stars, 1032 notes)
  4. NOVICE - 4Key (2.08 stars, 534 notes)
Download: ETIA. - Last Battalion
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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sughoi desu!

ADVANCED by MEGAtive
Davin Fortune
Stair mod
2016-06-06 08:32 Davin Fortune: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/994138 xi - Halcyon]
2016-06-06 08:32 Davin Fortune: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/994138 xi - Halcyon [4K Hyper]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-06-06 08:33 Davin Fortune: hindari stair kalo slow down
2016-06-06 08:33 doykyoto: oi
2016-06-06 08:33 doykyoto: ntaran
2016-06-06 08:33 Davin Fortune: susah
2016-06-06 08:33 doykyoto: namanya juga hard :3
2016-06-06 08:33 doykyoto: h3h3h3
2016-06-06 08:33 Davin Fortune: taek slow down nbya susahg
2016-06-06 08:34 Davin Fortune: ak main hard tp gak sesuasah ini juga :'v
2016-06-06 08:34 doykyoto: aku blm liat..
2016-06-06 08:34 doykyoto: nanti dinormalisasi.
2016-06-06 08:34 doykyoto: main banging burst gih
2016-06-06 08:34 Davin Fortune: kalo stair bagus kasi LN
2016-06-06 08:34 doykyoto: yauda thenks buat komenya
2016-06-06 08:35 doykyoto: flownya ena ga??
2016-06-06 08:35 doykyoto: yaudin gmpg nt di normalisasi
2016-06-06 08:38 Davin Fortune: keseluruhan sip
2016-06-06 08:38 Davin Fortune: cmn bbrp msh kurang
2016-06-06 08:38 doykyoto: di mana
2016-06-06 08:38 Davin Fortune: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/994138 xi - Halcyon [4K Hyper]]
2016-06-06 08:38 doykyoto: what
2016-06-06 08:38 doykyoto: w gaminta mod loo:3
2016-06-06 08:38 Davin Fortune: ak cek dulu yang mana gak enak
2016-06-06 08:38 Davin Fortune: wkwkw
2016-06-06 08:39 doykyoto: kasih timelink aja
2016-06-06 08:39 doykyoto: w impruv nt
2016-06-06 08:39 Davin Fortune: 00:46:916 (46916|3,46994|2,47073|1) -
2016-06-06 08:39 doykyoto: okay
2016-06-06 08:39 doykyoto: wkasihslider
2016-06-06 08:39 doykyoto: ajananti
2016-06-06 08:39 Davin Fortune: 00:54:533 (54533|3,54612|2,54690|1,54769|0,54848|3,54926|2,55005|1,55083|2) -
2016-06-06 08:39 doykyoto: terus?
2016-06-06 08:40 Davin Fortune: yang pertama itu ghost wkkw
2016-06-06 08:40 Davin Fortune: yang kedua kurang ngeh yang bursat kedua
2016-06-06 08:40 Davin Fortune: mod ato enggak bomat ah
2016-06-06 08:40 Davin Fortune: pokok ak fokus ama burstnya wkwk
2016-06-06 08:40 doykyoto: okayla...
2016-06-06 08:40 Davin Fortune: 00:57:282 (57282|3,57361|2,57439|1,57518|0,57596|3,57675|2,57753|1,57832|0,57910|1,57989|2,58067|3) -
2016-06-06 08:40 doykyoto: itu mod;a
2016-06-06 08:40 doykyoto: okay
2016-06-06 08:40 doykyoto: accepted
2016-06-06 08:41 Davin Fortune: 01:01:759 (61759|3,61759|1,61837|0,61837|2,61916|1) -
2016-06-06 08:41 Davin Fortune: 01:05:293 (65293|1,65371|2,65450|3,65528|2,65607|1,65685|0) - terpisah aja kek burst yg lain
2016-06-06 08:41 doykyoto: itugaenak burstnya?
2016-06-06 08:41 Davin Fortune: disamain arahnya aja
2016-06-06 08:42 doykyoto: oala...
2016-06-06 08:42 doykyoto: okey
2016-06-06 08:42 doykyoto: then?
2016-06-06 08:42 doykyoto: w coba 1 arahin nt
2016-06-06 08:42 Davin Fortune: bntr cari burst yg lain
2016-06-06 08:42 doykyoto: ena tau
2016-06-06 08:42 doykyoto: btw
2016-06-06 08:43 doykyoto: lu kaish banyak timelink cepet amat
2016-06-06 08:43 doykyoto: banyak gt
2016-06-06 08:43 doykyoto: pake apa?
2016-06-06 08:43 Davin Fortune: block smw note
2016-06-06 08:43 Davin Fortune: yang kamu ingin kasi liat
2016-06-06 08:43 doykyoto: then
2016-06-06 08:43 Davin Fortune: entar ke block otomatis kalo keklik
2016-06-06 08:43 doykyoto: ha?
2016-06-06 08:43 doykyoto: otomatis?
2016-06-06 08:44 doykyoto: gimana
2016-06-06 08:44 Davin Fortune: kalo kamu klik itu entar di editmu ad note yang berwarna biru
2016-06-06 08:44 Davin Fortune: nah itu fokusan yang ingin ditunjukkin org lain ke kamu
2016-06-06 08:44 Davin Fortune: kalo cm time kek gini 01:51:942 - berrati 1 gars itu doank
2016-06-06 08:45 doykyoto: pencet apa aja ._.
2016-06-06 08:45 Davin Fortune: 01:52:492 (112492|1) - move to 4 biar ngetrill
2016-06-06 08:45 doykyoto: blok not?
2016-06-06 08:45 Davin Fortune: pake mouse
2016-06-06 08:45 doykyoto: lalu pencet apa
2016-06-06 08:45 Davin Fortune: ctrl c
2016-06-06 08:45 Davin Fortune: copy
2016-06-06 08:45 Davin Fortune: ctrl v paste kek biasa
2016-06-06 08:45 doykyoto: oalakay
2016-06-06 08:46 doykyoto: btw
2016-06-06 08:46 doykyoto: btw
2016-06-06 08:46 doykyoto: ygtadi
2016-06-06 08:46 doykyoto: gaenaklo
2016-06-06 08:46 doykyoto: malah
2016-06-06 08:46 Davin Fortune: 01:52:492 (112492|1) - delete
2016-06-06 08:46 Davin Fortune: oo jadi ga enak ya, serah deh
2016-06-06 08:46 Davin Fortune: itu serah yang delete
2016-06-06 08:47 Davin Fortune: karna sapa tau kamu mau jadikan penyambung
2016-06-06 08:47 doykyoto: adadrum disitu
2016-06-06 08:47 doykyoto: engga ko
2016-06-06 08:47 Davin Fortune: kalo didelete berarti cmn fokus ke biola nya
2016-06-06 08:47 doykyoto: aku fokus biola+drum
2016-06-06 08:47 doykyoto: untuk double note+ ln
2016-06-06 08:47 doykyoto: banyak kan itu
2016-06-06 08:47 doykyoto: dari awal juga
2016-06-06 08:48 Davin Fortune: 01:52:492 (112492|1) - delete aja, biar enak ngestairnya
2016-06-06 08:48 doykyoto: cuma aku khawatir flownya aja
2016-06-06 08:48 doykyoto: ntar'
2016-06-06 08:48 Davin Fortune: ato 1 note doank
2016-06-06 08:48 doykyoto: konsistensi
2016-06-06 08:48 doykyoto: menerima perpindahan not aja
2016-06-06 08:48 doykyoto: jangan delete
2016-06-06 08:49 doykyoto: kalo ada saran untuk bentuk pattern... w coba terima
2016-06-06 08:49 Davin Fortune: 01:52:492 (112492|1) - ak rada aneh yg ini
2016-06-06 08:49 Davin Fortune: oke sip dah
2016-06-06 08:49 Davin Fortune: ak kan gak mod pattern lain kan :v
2016-06-06 08:50 doykyoto: okey.
2016-06-06 08:50 doykyoto: itu doang berarti?
2016-06-06 08:50 doykyoto: coba w rearrange
2016-06-06 08:50 Davin Fortune: ya
2016-06-06 08:50 doykyoto: drpd dihapus
2016-06-06 08:50 Davin Fortune: tris yang last
2016-06-06 08:50 Davin Fortune: ad drum
2016-06-06 08:50 Davin Fortune: sana
2016-06-06 08:50 Davin Fortune: jangn lupa
2016-06-06 08:51 doykyoto: yangna
2016-06-06 08:51 Davin Fortune: yang ak blg rada aneh
2016-06-06 08:51 doykyoto: 02:30:502 (150502|3,150502|0,150502|2) - ?
2016-06-06 08:51 doykyoto: owww
2016-06-06 08:52 doykyoto: yauda... w coba arrange lagi
2016-06-06 08:52 doykyoto: thenks vin
2016-06-06 08:52 Davin Fortune: oke
2016-06-06 08:52 doykyoto: monnggo di post chatna
2016-06-06 08:52 doykyoto: sebagai kudosu
2016-06-06 08:52 doykyoto: mgkin aja habis ini ada pendaftaran bn dadakan lu bisa ikut
2016-06-06 08:54 Davin Fortune: HAHAHA
lenpai
ok that last diff has a very underwhelming last section

kiai where?

let's do this

If anything i think this needs an INFINITE diff I can make one if you want

exh
00:02:592 (2592|2) - 1/1 LN?
00:08:105 (8105|0,8916|3) - are different 00:08:916 (8916|3) - having a sound and the other not having a sound
00:12:808 (12808|0,12808|1) - waaay to weak for a double
skipping the chord sectiion atm
00:36:483 - from here, try using some 1/2 LNs
00:57:078 - another 1/1 LN thing
01:06:321 - too weak for doubles again
01:19:132 - not the best pattern to use, though i would like too see descending patterns at 01:19:781 -
01:20:429 - this is just waaaay too repetitive try mixing up your patterns
last section suffers from the same sickness. Overused patterns, don't worry about randomness if it actually works, there's some changing in the flow of the music and such and looping the same pattern just wont cut it. I might actually just say the same about the chord section.

There's quite a lot to be done in this diff but good luck! Do PM me if you want an INF GD.
ArcherLove
hi~
1~4

Basic

01:23:267 (83267|1) - wrong snap? (follow the drum is better imo)
01:50:510 (110510|0) - move to 4?
01:51:402 (111402|3) - move to 2 -> 01:51:564 (111564|0) - move to 3 -> 01:54:159 (114159|3) - move to 1

Novice

00:08:429 (8429|0) - move to 3?
00:19:943 (19943|3) - delete?
01:00:808 (60808|2) - move to 1 -> 01:02:267 (62267|0) - move to 3?

Mega's Adv

no problem, nice to DT

00:03:078 (3078|0) - delete this and 00:02:916 (2916|1) - make this longer?
00:08:105 (8105|0) - move to 3?
00:38:510 (38510|3,38591|2,38673|1,38754|0,38754|2,38835|1,38916|0,38997|1,39078|2,39078|3) - http://puu.sh/q1e05/6ce8b7fba2.jpg
Topic Starter
Adot
updated my diffs sorry, lazy to reply

will reply later. kinda busy now
Ochasan
Hi~

M4M


4K = 1|2|3|4



NOVICE
NOVICE
00:18:714 (18714|3,18876|3) dibalance
00:24:714 (24714|3,24876|2,24876|1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5610304
01:09:308 (69308|1,69524|2,69524|3,69660|0) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5610328 timing note yg benar
01:18:065 (78065|3) pindah ke 3 aja

MEGA's ADVANCED
MEGA's ADVANCED
00:27:957 (27957|1,28119|3,28119|2,28281|1) rearrange
01:42:795 (102795|3,102876|2,102957|3) ga yakin ini advance player bisa read
Kiai isn't snapped! 01:20:429

EXHAUST
EXHAUST
00:22:930 (22930|3,23092|3,23416|3,23579|3) balance ke kanan
00:29:741 (29741|3) ke 1 aja
00:37:687 (37687|0,37687|2,37768|1,37849|0) rearrange biar dibalance
00:42:065 (42065|3,42227|3,42389|3,42552|3) overdose walau keliatan normal, buat 3 jack aja disana
00:55:957 (55957|3) ???
01:09:308 hapus
01:09:200 jadiin bass
01:19:579 pindah ke 2, berikan break setelah jack

DONE!!!
M4M lagi kalau mau :P :P
Topic Starter
Adot

Ochasan wrote:

Hi~

M4M


4K = 1|2|3|4



NOVICE
NOVICE
00:18:714 (18714|3,18876|3) dibalance nope, pitchnya sama
00:24:714 (24714|3,24876|2,24876|1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5610304 rearranged
01:09:308 (69308|1,69524|2,69524|3,69660|0) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5610328 timing note yg benar
01:18:065 (78065|3) pindah ke 3 aja rearranged

EXHAUST
EXHAUST
00:22:930 (22930|3,23092|3,23416|3,23579|3) balance ke kanan
00:29:741 (29741|3) ke 1 aja
00:37:687 (37687|0,37687|2,37768|1,37849|0) rearrange biar dibalance rearranged ^^^
00:42:065 (42065|3,42227|3,42389|3,42552|3) overdose walau keliatan normal, buat 3 jack aja disana rearranged
00:55:957 (55957|3) ???
01:09:308 hapus nope, ada hihat
01:09:200 jadiin bass
01:19:579 pindah ke 2, berikan break setelah jack

DONE!!!
M4M lagi kalau mau :P :P
updated.. wait for MEGA's diff
MEGAtive

ArcherLove wrote:

hi~
1~4

Mega's Adv

no problem, nice to DT I know, right~ :3

00:03:078 (3078|0) - delete this and 00:02:916 (2916|1) - make this longer? But 00:03:146 (3146|0) - sounds long and 00:02:984 (2984|3) - sounds short.
00:08:105 (8105|0) - move to 3? Welp hammering these felt pretty awkward so I made it like this.
00:38:510 (38510|3,38591|2,38673|1,38754|0,38754|2,38835|1,38916|0,38997|1,39078|2,39078|3) - http://puu.sh/q1e05/6ce8b7fba2.jpg Actually it's already my intention to ignore the 4th sound so it's working as a 1/4 Triplets lol

Ochasan wrote:

Hi~

M4M

4K = 1|2|3|4


MEGA's ADVANCED
MEGA's ADVANCED
00:27:957 (27957|1,28119|3,28119|2,28281|1) rearrange It's fine actually, no need to rearrange
01:42:795 (102795|3,102876|2,102957|3) ga yakin ini advance player bisa read 01:42:795 - Deleted
Kiai isn't snapped! 01:20:429 Fixed

DONE!!!
M4M lagi kalau mau :P :P
Thanks for modding AL Ocha
MEGA's ADVANCED
Topic Starter
Adot
updated all diffs
Meiju
Hi, M4M :>

1|2|3|4
BASIC
Add kiai time

00:13:524 - how about finish LN and add here note?

00:20:660 - http://puu.sh/q2uC0/a596bd40ea.jpg - looks better for balance

00:52:768 (52768|3,53092|1,53416|2,53741|0) - you use this pattern second time in a row, but sounds is not the same, so change it, example http://puu.sh/q2uJb/d3b5934cb0.jpg

01:20:660 (80660|3,80984|1,81308|2,81633|0) - rearrange this for same reason

01:24:552 - add one more note
NOVICE
Add kiai time

00:12:065 - you should start new LN here or add note

00:13:524 - add note to 1

00:18:714 (18714|3,18876|3) - you can keep jack here, but i don't think these sounds similar

00:54:714 - add note to 1

01:11:470 (71470|3,71795|1,72119|2,72443|0) - again same patterns in a row, rearrange

01:46:606 - you should add note here

01:50:497 - uhh.. This LN's start is not coincides with basic and advanced diff, but coincides with exhaust diff,
choose one
MEGA's ADVANCED
00:35:903 - are you sure about use 2 notes here? I think sound is too quite

00:37:200 - ^

01:46:443 - add one more note

01:47:741 - add note to 2
EXHAUST
Add kiai time
MEGAtive

SpinForWin wrote:

Hi, M4M :>

1|2|3|4

MEGA's ADVANCED
00:35:903 - are you sure about use 2 notes here? I think sound is too quite

00:37:200 - ^ Yes. To Emphasize the Piano.

01:46:443 - add one more note Nah, not ever kicks should be double.

01:47:741 - add note to 2 No need. I want to differentiate the 01:47:579 section and 01:47:903 one
Okay, thanks for modding
Topic Starter
Adot

SpinForWin wrote:

Hi, M4M :>

1|2|3|4
BASIC
Add kiai time done

00:13:524 - how about finish LN and add here note? okay

00:20:660 - http://puu.sh/q2uC0/a596bd40ea.jpg - looks better for balance rearranged

00:52:768 (52768|3,53092|1,53416|2,53741|0) - you use this pattern second time in a row, but sounds is not the same, so change it, example http://puu.sh/q2uJb/d3b5934cb0.jpg rearranged

01:20:660 (80660|3,80984|1,81308|2,81633|0) - rearrange this for same reason

01:24:552 - add one more note. nope. i didn't layer the impact. but i will consider this again
NOVICE
Add kiai time done

00:12:065 - you should start new LN here or add note

00:13:524 - add note to 1

00:18:714 (18714|3,18876|3) - you can keep jack here, but i don't think these sounds similar rearranged

00:54:714 - add note to 1 nope. no good impact there

01:11:470 (71470|3,71795|1,72119|2,72443|0) - again same patterns in a row, rearrange ok

01:46:606 - you should add note here rearranged[/color]

01:50:497 - uhh.. This LN's start is not coincides with basic and advanced diff, but coincides with exhaust diff,
choose one rearranged

EXHAUST
Add kiai time done
Updated my diffs
Virtue-


Virtue's Mania Modding Queue


Things that you need to know :
  1. this mod contains of suggestions, something that need to be fixed, and my opinions
  2. if your map still need to be fixed, just req in my queue

General
Title/Artist : OK!
Song : OK!
BPM/Offset : OK!
BG/Video : OK!
Hitsounds : NOPE!

BASIC
00:11:741 (11741|3) - move to 3
00:11:903 (11903|3) - move to 4
00:12:389 (12389|0) - move to 1
00:12:714 (12714|3,12876|2) - geser ke kiri

NOVICE
00:40:443 (40443|0) - move to 2

MEGA'S ADVANCED
no comment

EXHAUST
00:00:876 - buat kek GINI, kasian depanny kosong
00:14:497 (14497|1) - move to 1
00:14:660 (14660|0) - move to 4
00:19:687 (19687|1,19849|1,20011|1) - hindari jack kek gitu, buat kek GINI dst
01:18:065 (78065|0,78065|1,78173|2,78173|1,78281|3,78281|2,78389|1,78389|0,78497|1,78497|2,78606|3,78606|2,78714|1,78714|0,78822|2,78822|1,78930|3,78930|2,79038|1,79038|0,79146|2,79146|1,79254|2,79254|3) - jgn konstan kek gitu, buat yg beda DIKIT
01:19:470 (79470|1,79579|2) - ctrl h
01:39:470 (99470|0,99470|3,99470|1) - SV bagian ini ikutin INI, then lakukan hal yg sama ke 01:39:714 (99714|0,99714|3,99714|2) -
01:39:957 (99957|3,99957|1,99957|0) - ikutin INI
01:44:660 (104660|1,104660|0,104660|3,104903|3,104903|0,104903|2,105146|0,105146|3,105146|1,105308|2,105308|0,105308|3) - ikutin langkah" diatas
01:49:849 (109849|3,109849|0,109849|2,110092|0,110092|3,110092|1,110335|3,110335|0,110335|2,110497|0,110497|2,110497|1) - ^
01:50:497 (110497|1,110497|2,110497|0) - yg ini jadiin LN juga ikutin yg LN atas"ny itu(?) (suggestion :\)

-END OF MOD-


SCORES
85/100
John Doe
From your modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

EXHAUST
00:14:660 (14660|0,14660|1,14741|2,14822|0,14903|1,14984|3,14984|2,15065|0,15146|1,15227|0,15308|3,15308|2,15389|1,15470|0,15552|1,15633|3,15633|2,15795|0) I'd change this pattern since it feels a bit unbalanced
Suggestion: https://puu.sh/uXOag/437d0c256f.PNG
01:05:254 (65254|3,65254|2) Delete

Playtest:

Whoa, that is a damn good map xD

MEGA's ADVANCED
00:23:254 Here should be a tripple
00:53:579 (53579|1,53741|3,53741|0,53741|2,53903|1) Patterns like 1, 0/2, 1 are pretty inconsistant and ugly to play, would not use them personally

Playtest:

Nothing wrong here, probably best mapset i testplayed so far

NOVICE
Found nothing, im sorry

BASIC
01:18:065 Add a note here

Sry for the lack of mistakes i found, this mapset is a little bit too good for me to mod xD
MEGAtive

LordTimeWaste wrote:

From your modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

MEGA's ADVANCED
00:23:254 Here should be a tripple Actually for this kind of situation I chose to map double. Like 00:29:741 - etc.
00:53:579 (53579|1,53741|3,53741|0,53741|2,53903|1) Patterns like 1, 0/2, 1 are pretty inconsistant and ugly to play, would not use them personally Actually it made a good blanket pattern if you see it as 00:53:416 (53416|2,53579|1,53741|2,53741|0,53903|1,54065|0) -

Playtest:

Nothing wrong here, probably best mapset i testplayed so far

Sry for the lack of mistakes i found, this mapset is a little bit too good for me to mod xD
Thanks for modding
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