Xinely wrote:

General:
- maybe STR 1 for easy and normal to not make spam with ticks? but it exactly matches the background ticks

Easy :
- 00:23:114 (1) - maybe add whistle to head as i still hear the bell sound ok
- 00:26:314 - whistle for consistency from what you did in Lunatic ok
- 01:37:514 - maybe supposed to has whistle there? ok
- 01:46:314 (2) - 1,33x looks inconsistency here going from 1.33x to something 1.4-ish means I have to move (2) four osu!pixels to the top. Is it of any importance, really?

Normal :
- 00:45:114 (4) - i think flow feels better if the tail points to next slider's head example http://puu.sh/pRL2L/3b1c7fe308.jpg it's what's in the map right now
- 01:35:514 - i think this sound feels important to be mapped, how about shorten the slider end to this time at circle at 01:35:714 - ? I was trying to add more diversity to the rhythm, but okay

Hard :
- 00:22:314 (4) - somehow i feel weird to see the slider goes to rightward again when 00:20:714 (2) - was in leftward, try http://puu.sh/pRLns/a5c0758870.jpg instead? don't like it
- 01:09:714 (2) - somehow i dont understand why a high jump for this? both music and vocal arent strong so i think normal spacing works better uhh.. the last ぴょん (pyon) is special due to lower pitch
- 01:15:114 (1,2,3,4) - would be nicer if they were 1/4 slider repeats, its hard imo for some players who still learning to play hard. normal diff also only a spinner which is easy okay
- 01:37:914 (6) - ctrl+g i guess? after did 1/4 triplet, i think a 1/2 jumps for twice would be a bit hard for some players believe me, sliders are VERY, very lenient. Have you tested this pattern yourself? But alright, I reversed it
- 01:42:714 (5,6) - use them 1,8x as their normal spacing? just 2x spacing looks like jump that imo its not time for doing jumps ...okay
- 01:56:314 (2) - 116,216 i guess? to keep consistent spacing and from the design itself it looks neater honestly, they are equally "neat", but okay, changed

Lunatic :
- 00:22:714 (8) - maybe make it like http://puu.sh/pRM26/b79c6a20c2.jpg? so at least it looks a bit same with 00:21:514 (5,6) - looks worse than it is now, besides, it was meant to look more like 00:20:714 (3,4) where the second slider makes an almost 90° turn
- 00:45:514 (1) - somehow the curve looks a bit too curvy, how about move node of head to 432,304? ok
- 01:11:514 (2) - maybe 224,88 to make the spacing keep consistent? changed in another way
- 01:58:114 (3) - aaa 0,78x spacing is inconsistency here i guess not really, just the whole stream has increasing spacing, yet it's approx. of the same value (0.8 -- 1.0 -- 1.2)
- 01:58:414 (2) - i guess in here should use 1,0x instead? that's for a smoother loop
- 01:58:814 (2) - 0,94x is inconsistency too i guess? see my reply before the previous
- 01:59:214 (2,4) - 1,17x and 1,04x here too respaced the whole section to APPROXIMATELY 1.2

felys wrote:

on the Lunatic Collab I found 00:26:114 (1,1) - this kinda strange to play (maybe because the "charging sound" is still on at 00:26:114 -), if you remove 00:26:114 (1) - and make the spinner longer there it's more "flowy" well yeah, but someone has asked me to add a note for vocals, and I'd rather not change it back and forth

Sonnyc wrote:

~General~

1. Is it only me who experience audability issue in normal-hitnormal only hitsounded objects? I'm not pretty sure if they are giving a proper feedback of the gameplay. there are two hitnormals. If you talk about the one that ticks, it's audible enough and well-distinguishable from the corresponding sample from the song; if you mean the one I used on streams.. well, that's debatable, but from what I've managed to get from people who played the map, onlky one of them said that streams weren;'t giving enough feedback
2. A color change of "Kyubey" appears around 00:57:514 due to the following code. Is this an intended setting? If so, I strongly believe this color change was sudden since there wasn't a major change in this part of the song to demand such effect. It isn't even consistently used through this song, only to end as a one-time effect. yes, it is intended, I decided to keep it after removing the rest of the storyboard because the very last ふわ (fuwa) apparently differs from the rest of the line and is accented
   

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~Hard Collab~

1. 00:50:914 (1) - I can see there was a sv change here behind this new combo, but since the effect wasn't that drastic, using a new combo felt awkward in appearance. The rhythm is already readable due to the slider tick settings. Consider removing this new combo. thanks for noticing, I managed to remove all such NCs but this one
2. 01:17:514 (1) - Unlike Lunatic, the length itself is really similar with 01:16:714 (1,2) to discern it's rhythm properly. Mind using a sv that is little faster than now? I'll just remove the inherited offset and that's it

~Lunatic~

1. 01:09:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems to lack structure imo. Spacings of (1,2), and (3,4) are inconsistent each. The clap of (1,3) aren't expressed along a jump, while (5) was having a big jump. The playability of the flow of (3,4,5,6) was questionable compared to the overall map. I think you can make some adjustment here. 1 has nothing to do with 2, and 3 is barely connected with 4, the whole 01:09:714 (2,3,4) - triangle is spaced from (1) due to vocals, the same goes for the slider 01:10:314 (5) - after it, and the not-so-sudden stop 01:10:714 (6,7) - is made that way because of vocals, too. Best I can do here is reduce the spacing between the stack and 01:10:314 (5,1) - which I already did