N00dle wrote:

HeyGuys

00:00:592 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - inconsistent spacing

00:22:855 (2,3) - increase spacing a bit

00:25:381 (7,8) - delete them and make it a slider, works better that way

00:26:802 (3) - overlap

00:28:223 (4) - NC and shorten to the white tick so you can make 00:29:013 (5) - a reverse slider and move it to where the end of (4) is currently (or add a circle there)

00:35:486 (7) - remove and extend 00:35:644 (1) - + move it to (7)'s position

00:36:749 (3,4) - stack less

02:00:324 (3) - delete and put a slider at 02:00:640 (3) -

02:04:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I suggest fixing these squares and using ctrl+D

02:32:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here

03:10:114 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - not sure about that NC spam

03:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - get's more spaced at the end, intentional?

03:32:850 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spam

03:53:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are the notes on the blue ticks in and after this part intentionally placed there? Something about this part until 04:01:981 (1) - feels wrong

04:23:376 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2) - holy NC spam

04:38:849 (2,3) - move them a bit out of the slider to make them more visible

04:39:481 (5,6) - same

04:40:112 (2,3) - same

04:53:533 (11,12,1) - NC at 11 pls and remove at (1)

04:55:902 (11) - NC

05:13:270 (11) - NC




no kds needed

brdzxh wrote:

N00dle wrote:

no kds needed

thx for mod, free kudosu

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi!

also, reduce the volumen, the sound its too loud for the music already changed
I'd recommend to use the sliders first (01:47:219 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ) and then the circles so you get used to the new rythm better fixed
02:09:956 (1,1) - no need NC on these fixed
03:30:166 (3) - this stack here killed me every time xD changed the position for better visibility


map is fun to play, I just noticed some inconsistency overall but its good :ppp GL, hope this little mod helps

Rammler wrote:

00:45:592 (2,3,1) - increase the spacing here The difference in spacing between this and the others was pretty big so I increased it :^)
00:46:855 (2,3,1) - ^ Spacing here is in line with the rest so I didn't change it a lot, sorry. Thanks for the suggestion though.
01:13:381 (2,3) - increase the spacing between these notes I moved the two sliders a bit further away from each other if that seems right.
01:17:170 (3,4) - ^ Did the same as ^

Rammler wrote:

02:08:850 (3,4) - ^ fixed
02:40:429 (9,10,11,12) - maybe do a NC on all of these? thx for suggestion
03:10:114 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - these parts feel kind of weird because e.g. 03:10:114 (1,2) - these two are overlapped but there is quite some spacing between these two 03:10:823 (4,5) - both is overlapped, so I dont really get what you mean; it plays fine imo and it is supposed to be a bit different because of change in music

03:13:903 (1) - move to x:52 y:248 fixed
03:14:219 (2) - move to x:212 y:224 fixed
03:17:614 (2) - NC fixed?
03:20:693 (1) - NC im not really sure what this is referring to as its mid stream

Rammler wrote:

Hi

Thats a really nice map you made there but I just wanted to point out a few things.
Remember these are just suggestions. Im not a mapping pro or anything.

03:57:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing between 4 and 5 please - Ty for telling me. I totally overlooked that ;-;
04:00:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same here with 8 and 9 - ^
04:05:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - idek - Fixed it, no idea what went wrong here
04:12:008 (5) - 04:13:271 (1) - please add something between this (music is still going ham but you just stopped the flow) - Changed it up a bit to keep it fast
05:01:271 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - spacing between 10 and 11 - Fixed <3
05:03:482 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing between 4 and 1 (srsly dont do this, this just looks and plays in a really awkward way imo) - Spacing fixed, Also what do u mean by feels awkward?
05:10:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase spacing between 6 and 7
..and thats pretty much it. Good Luck!

Hobbes2 wrote:

00:00:592 (1,1) - I could see people mistaking this for a failed blanket. Maybe make blue slider slightly less curved so it doesn't bend into the red one?
My friend changed it . Fixed it
00:20:802 (1,3) - Use more slider points on 1 to get this blanket better.
Same happened as above... Fixed again.
00:41:802 (2,1) - You can avoid this overlap by chaning 1 a bit.
Alright, small change applied. Thanks
01:08:328 (2) - Move 2 so its not touching 1
I placed it one square to the right on the grid. Thanks for pointing this out.
01:34:855 (3,6) - maybe stack these?
Definitely makes it look better. I put the 6 under 3 here.

Hobbes2 wrote:

Heyo, thanks for requesting a m4m in the sea of NMs. As a reminder, the maps you can choose from are in my profile (pick either goosebumps or any of two GD maps at the bottom) Boy, I had almost forgotten about this request, will do the mod asap

On to the mod..

02:31:035 (1) - Move this to 02:31:035 and then extend it so it ends in the same spot fixed

02:38:377 (3,1) - maybe stack? I feel like it wont fit, so I moved them a bit closer instead

02:40:587 (1) - ctrl G i liked how they looked before, but alright fixed

02:40:903 (1) - ctrl G ^

02:45:403 (5) - prev: .95x, next: 1.09x? is this intentional good catch, fixed - i probably missed it when I fixed the streams a while ago

02:56:219 (1,3) - maybe blanket these Fixed - but I pushed it a bit further down for some variety

03:12:956 (2,3,4,5) - fluctuations in spacing here, make it consistent fixed

03:24:481 (2,4) - move 2 so it stacks under 4 fixed

03:27:640 (2,2) - blanket fixed?

This area around here the comboing is all over the place. I suggest NCs at the downbeat Will recheck the map for NCs later, thanks for letting me know!

Overall comments -

The sliders were cool! Some could use some work in terms of how they look, but I didn't comment on any because then I'd be commenting on a LOT of sliders lol. I agree that some sliders look at little odd, but they were intentionally made like it! But again you are right, I will fix some of the weirder shapes

This map needs heavy work in the new combo department. Like I said earlier, I suggest combos on the downbeat, and then from there you can NC for emphasis, like you did in many parts where you had individual NCs on sliders, which was cool. As I also mentioned above

Good luck ~

Plaudible wrote:

Accidental M4M, yay! IDK XD Newbie modder, i'll do my best ^_^
______

01:50:377 (3,1) - Put these closer fixed
02:03:798 (2,3) - ^ Wiggly sliders make rhythm hard to follow here straightened them out a bit and fixed spacing
02:39:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lumpy stream is lumpy, add another curve maybe and pull the stream head right. im not really sure what you meant, but I improved the curve
02:47:929 (5) - Bring this left fixed
02:55:350 (3,4,5) - Adjust these to flow better onto 1 fixed
03:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - C'mon, you can align better than this fixed
03:20:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Pretty lumpy, flow it! improved
03:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well done with this one thx
03:36:640 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Inconsistent spacing with slider 1, unless intended was originally made to flow into the next combo but I improved the positioning a bit
03:41:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel like an arc stream could do better, map it on a slider for accuracy. Crappy attempt: http://puu.sh/pu96h/5fbc52d9b1.jpg i liked the old stream ;-;, but I made it as a one curve instead of two
03:42:324 (1,2,1) - Center the hitcircle between sliders? Why not? Might look nice. done
03:42:640 (2) - Actually... now that I'm looking at this, this would look nice aligned with the 03:41:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) stream. Maybe adjust the 2 sliders to do that when/if you fix your stream and then center the hitcircle. done!

Love the slider mapping though, reminds me of bookmark memories - grimoire gl ranking!

Plaudible wrote:

00:31:697 (2) - For beauty's sake - stack note on end of 00:32:013 (1)
Agreed on this part. I also put 1 above 2 like this: http://puu.sh/pv0uy/9ca6df12f0.jpg
01:02:013 (2,3) - These feel terrible to play, along with the rest of the iterations, though I'm not sure how to improve it. If you're dead set on keeping them it's fine, though I suggest change.
I really wanted to use kicksliders in the kiai part so I'm keeping them

collector7 wrote:

Hi! Sorry for the delay. For M4M

Collab
I think you should rework sliders at the beginning. They looks kinda messy imo. Maybe try to check long sliders on another maps.
Was planning on removing them, since they feel boring to me :^)
00:20:802 (1) - this should end on white tick
I think I messed this one up after the last mod. Fixed now <3
00:30:434 (4) - maybe end this on next blue tick
Done and made it closer to the next slider.
01:31:065 (4) - ^
Done the same
00:41:013 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - don't ignore big white ticks in this part. You can map slider-3 notes-repeat. and put a clap on every 2nd white tick
Wasn't too sure how to map this part. Feels a lot better now


About sliders. Read this 2 topics (1, 2) if you didn't already. It should help you alot. And then try to improve your sliders. Right now they looks kinda messy
Good Luck!

collector7 wrote:

Hi! Sorry for the delay. For M4M

Collab

01:42:166 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I know that it may be boring but try spinner there. I think you can put him from this 1:41:693 - to 1:44:535 - added a spinner
01:52:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3) - follow vocal maybe?ill take a look at it later
03:32:535 (2) - http://puu.sh/pEgQe/668341a873.jpg done

Good Luck!

SherryCherry wrote:

yo

00:24:166 (3,4,5,6) - These could be paralleled better
Not sure how, but I stacked them now.
00:57:955 (4,1) - stack
Done~
00:56:692 (4,3) - overlapping can be avoided
No more overlap now.
01:09:955 (4) - improve wave-slider
I think it should look better now, ty for pointing that out.
01:41:218 (9) - too ugly :/
Made it a wave slider now :>

SherryCherry wrote:

yo

02:00:688 (3) - ^ improved, was a bit buggy from a red anchor point
02:08:267 (1,2,3,4) - This looks too uneven too improved
04:37:951 (4) - funny keeping that as it fits to the wubby part
05:16:477 (1) - change pls keeping the same shape, but I moved an anchor point so it looks a bit better now
05:36:560 - there aren't enough notes theres many musical elements you can follow in this part, and if you try to follow them all it just gets messy. That is why I tried to stick to one and eventually changing to another for a smooth ending. If you are talking about not enough drain, it has currently 5:05 drain so its fine

Gl~

VenixPL wrote:

Add tags: Glitch hop
00:24:797 (5,6) - move to up
I stacked those sliders cause of the previous mod. I think it's fine the way it is now :S
00:59:297 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - change shape, that shape is to eggy xd
Made the whole stream more curvy now

VenixPL wrote:

Add tags: Glitch hop done
02:42:372 (1) - its better position to set preview point ;p It would have been a nice timing if this only were Camellia which it isnt. Since kradness doesnt do a lot of collabs with Camellia I thought it would be better to focus on the vocals because its going to be the part of the song people remember it as. Most people know that camellias maps has a lot of wubs and hardcore dnb so I dont think its necessary highlight those over the vocals.
02:59:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad spacing changes, make that stream again this spacing is intentional, because the volume of the "stream" changes in the song and thus changing the spacing, but I might take another look at it, but I will most likely keep the same spacing

nice map ;d

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Hi NM （Forum req ）

Imagination

1. 00:40:587 (7,8) - try to make this,may be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5575458
   Done that :^). Other parts have the same and I didn't see that this one was different. Thanks <3
2. 01:02:534 - 01:03:797 - 01:07:587 - 01:08:850 - ......why not try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5575478 (don't pass this rhythm,you can make it like 01:22:587 (3) - )
   I was looking for a way to make those sliders start on the big white tick and this is the perfect solution . The changes have been applied.
3. 01:35:218 (4) - NC
   Change applied.
4. 01:40:113 - try nothing at here
   No idea why there was a return slider there, change applied.
5. 01:40:271 (6) - NC
   Change applied.
   

good luck！

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Hi NM （Forum req ）

Imagination

1. 01:41:741 - here volume level is too low,suggest over 80% fixed
2. 02:12:056 - ↑50% and add hitsound finish done
3. 02:09:530 (1,2,3) - ds make it same done
4. 03:07:319 (5,6,7,8,1) - stack 03:06:609 (2) - i didnt get what you meant, but I stacked the sliderend with the 8
5. 03:31:319 (4,3) - stack done
6. 03:33:609 - 03:34:714 - try to add a circle I think this is fine as it is, but at the same time I am not entirely sure what you meant
7. 03:41:898 (4,2) - stack done
8. 03:43:004 (1) - volume level over 80% fixed
9. 04:05:741 (1,4) - stack done
10. 04:06:214 (3,6,7,1) - ↑ done
11. 04:12:293 - add a circle stack at 04:12:372 (7) - I think this is also fine as it is, but I am not sure what you meant
12. 04:29:662 - consider add a circle done
13. 04:30:293 - ↑ no :c
14. 04:30:925 - ↑04:31:004 (9) - stack done
15. 04:32:425 - ↑ music changes, so there is no beat here
16. 04:51:214 (1) - stack done
17. 04:54:372 (1) - ↑ fixed stack with earlier 1
18. 04:57:293 - consider add a circle doesnt fit here imo
19. 04:59:662 (2,3) - stack done
20. 05:00:925 (2,3) - ↑ done
21. 05:07:004 (1,2) - ↑ done
22. 05:15:214 (1,1) - ↑ i dont see what could have been done here :l

good luck！

• [Imagination]

1. 00:25:587 (8) - delete this note, no music to support
2. 00:29:061 (5) - is nicer if you change to 2 notes
3. 00:32:061 (1) - change the shape, this is ugly lol
4. 00:33:324 (1) - avoid sliderend overlap
5. 00:37:113 (1) - slider art can be improve
6. 01:12:166 (2,3) - spaced more would be better
7. 01:24:008 (1) - is the red node on sliderend necessary lol?
8. 01:47:267 (1,2,3,4) - would look nicer if you dont overlap them
9. 01:55:319 (3,4,5) - spaced more, the spacing is similar with 1/2
10. 01:57:846 - same here
11. 02:00:688 (1,2) - stack would be nicer
12. 02:29:741 (3) - NC
13. 02:39:451 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing
14. 03:07:319 (5) - NC
15. 03:10:162 - consist the spacing at this part
16. 03:37:951 - same ^
17. 03:43:083 - why dont map this part lol?
18. 04:27:214 (2) - NC here instead
19. 05:12:688 (1,2,3) - stack perfectly
20. 05:16:477 (1) - uhh the slider -w-
21. 05:32:898 (3) - NC
22. 05:40:477 - add sth here, the music stop at 05:44:109 -

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

sry for the late mod ;w;

• [Imagination]

1. 00:25:587 (8) - delete this note, no music to support
   Change applied.
2. 00:29:061 (5) - is nicer if you change to 2 notes
   Placed two stacked circles there.
3. 00:32:061 (1) - change the shape, this is ugly lol
   I can agree on that. Change applied. I hope it looks better now.
4. 00:33:324 (1) - avoid sliderend overlap
   I think I've improved it? Might want to take a look again :S
5. 00:37:113 (1) - slider art can be improve
   I made the slider more wavy. I think it looks better this way.
6. 01:12:166 (2,3) - spaced more would be better
   Made the sliders vertical so it would fit. Spacing is bigger now.
7. 01:24:008 (1) - is the red node on sliderend necessary lol?
   No idea why that's there :S. Didn't notice it. Thanks!
   

gl~
nice song

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

sry for the late mod ;w;

• [Imagination]

1. 01:47:267 (1,2,3,4) - would look nicer if you dont overlap them fixed
2. 01:55:319 (3,4,5) - spaced more, the spacing is similar with 1/2 done
3. 01:57:846 - same here done
4. 02:00:688 (1,2) - stack would be nicer done
5. 02:29:741 (3) - NC done
6. 02:39:451 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing fixed
7. 03:07:319 (5) - NC done
8. 03:10:162 - consist the spacing at this part somewhat intended but I looked over it again
9. 03:37:951 - same ^ intended, so didnt change
10. 03:43:083 - why dont map this part lol? this was intended as a break between 3 collabs, but then some arguments happened and I decided to remap the whole part myself. This part would some long streamy low spaced part which I dont feel like fits to the song, so I am leaving this as it is
11. 04:27:214 (2) - NC here instead done
12. 05:12:688 (1,2,3) - stack perfectly the game wont let me ;w;
13. 05:16:477 (1) - uhh the slider -w- i liked this slider, but since you and another guy commented on it, I changed it ;w;
14. 05:32:898 (3) - NC done
15. 05:40:477 - add sth here, the music stop at 05:44:109 - added some more notes

gl~
nice song

Ultima Fox wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

Imagination

00:24:166 (3) - This might be a stretch but maybe you could add a NC here or at (4)
00:28:271 (4) - NC here, so it's like all the other parts (i.e. 00:20:850 (1,2,3,1) and 00:25:903 (1,2,3,1) )
00:29:534 (1,2,3) - For neatness purposes, you could copy and paste one of these sliders and just ctrl r (by 120 degrees)
I'm keeping the second slider, but I will change the third one to be like that
00:34:587 (4) - NC
00:42:166 (4,1) - I personally don't like these stacked patterns (also at 00:43:429 (4,1) and 00:44:692 (4,1) ), buts that just my opinion
I think I'll keep the stacks there for some variety. I might change it if I get more complaints :<
01:09:955 (6) - NC
I placed all the NC where you suggested them to be :3

Ultima Fox wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

Imagination

01:50:425 (3,1,2) - This part from (3) felt really weird with the transition, it's probably a good idea not to switch to the background sounds for that short amount of time, and just stay with what you were doing for the rest of the part I get what you mean, but I think it sounds better actually atm, and it would be more boring imo
01:57:214 (2,3) - I don't know what you're trying to do with this part, but if you trying to follow the vocal your rhythm should look something like this , and if you're trying to follow the bg noise, then it should be something like this . Just a suggestion because this part seemed out of place Was a bit skeptical to this, but I changed it the first suggestion, might change it later on though if I find out the other one felt better
02:42:372 (1) - From here to 03:20:188 it seems there is a large number of unneeded NCs (for example 02:43:241 (1) and 02:43:951 (1) ) (Just a thought) I have gone over this part multiple times for NCs and I am satisfied with its current state - NCs at the start of each section and NCs on downbeats where the streams are and NCs where the wub changes (I am not sure if you got what I meant and it might look spammy but I have gone over it a couple of times to make sure that everything is alright
02:51:846 (2,3,4) - Change to something like this to make it more comfortable to play this is alright considering the snare sound is the same and it flows fine into 02:52:319 (4) -
02:55:004 (1) - Make something like this because what you had before was a little awkward I tried to make a slider that kinda illustrate the wubs, and this one feels better tbh - a normal curve slider wouldnt really emphasize the wub and thus making it more awkward
04:22:398 (2) - Ctrl + J this nah I feel like it would make the flow worse since its a buildup
05:05:741 (5,6) - I think you should spread these out I think this also plays fine, but I might change spacing and/or position later if it turns out to be a major issue
05:19:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ the "wubs" are kinda unclear and kinda goes on top of each other in the music, so I feel like it is fine - but its true I spaced them earlier twice actually, but them are back and forth and not heading the same way

Also one thing, I didn't even know this was a collab until I looked at the forum, so i think there should be some indication (maybe via storyboard) that there are more than one person making this map. (I know it's in tags, but that's not enough) If you want, I might be able to help with a storyboard of your names where you mapped Sure! I have no idea how to make a storyboard, but its not like most people around this level would look at the storyboard while playing so I feel like its not necessary. If you want to help me out, feel free to do so! or I might just make a small storyboard myself

Another PS, I love this map a lot, with all the weird flowing sliders and space streams it's a lot of fun Thx

Really love this map and song a lot, hope this gets ranked!~ ^.^

1. What about something like this http://puu.sh/q2Ly2/adeea79137.jpg @ 00:23:771 -
2. 00:26:850 (3) - What about these coordinates x=278 / y=309 ?
3. 00:27:955 (2) - ^ x=297 / y=289 ?
4. 00:29:850 (2,3) - Is this intentional or just a bug in my version? If not please move 00:30:087 (3) - to 00:30:008 -
5. 00:33:166 (3) - x=317 / y=265 ?
6. 01:01:271 (1) - This sliders tail should be clickable 'cause it's a pretty strong beat
7. 01:02:534 (3) - ^
8. 01:03:797 (3) - ^ (Either fix all of those or none)
9. I suggest extending 01:41:218 (4) - to 1:41:653 -
10. 01:50:425 (3) - This seems kinda random. You never mapped stuff this like in your map before I would change this to a normal cirlce @ 01:15:425 -
11. Change 02:55:635 (1,2) - to something like this http://puu.sh/q2Mrh/4cfcbac237.jpg
12. 03:30:214 (3) - x=296 / y=108 ?
13. 03:36:846 (2) - x=272 / y=100 ?
14. 03:40:319 - Maybe add a cirlce here?
15. 04:12:688 (1 ,2) - I would suggest to unstack these cause it's kinda weird in a jumpy part like this
16. 04:17:109 (3) - x=160 / y=260 ?
17. Stack 04:17:583 (5) - onto 04:17:109 (3) - and move 04:17:741 (1,2) - to x=32 / y=352 ?
18. Unstack 04:17:741 (1,2) -
19. Use these coordinates for 04:34:162 (3,4,5,6) - looks a lot smoother 04:34:162 (3) - x=148 / y=212 ; 04:34:319 (4) - x=244 / y=44 ; 04:34:477 (5) - x=312 / y=212 ; 04:34:635 (6) - x=408 / y=44
20. 04:46:477 (2) - x=384 / y=264 ?
21. I recommend using the same distance snap for 04:47:425 (1,2,3) -
22. 04:56:583 (2) - fix this blanket please

KinkyKitten wrote:

Imagination

1. 01:50:425 (3) - This seems kinda random. You never mapped stuff this like in your map before I would change this to a normal cirlce @ 01:15:425 - This is a collab with me and another guy and this part is start of mine and its there as a smooth transition between the notes
2. Change 02:55:635 (1,2) - to something like this http://puu.sh/q2Mrh/4cfcbac237.jpg Ops, didnt notice the slider had been extended, fixed
3. 03:30:214 (3) - x=296 / y=108 ? Moved it, but made it stack with 03:29:425 (4) - and moved 03:30:056 (2) - a bit for better visibility
4. 03:36:846 (2) - x=272 / y=100 ? also fine, but I made 03:36:688 (1) - stack with 03:37:635 (3) - so the spacing is fine
5. 03:40:319 - Maybe add a cirlce here? Literally no music or beat here, so no
6. 04:12:688 (1 ,2) - I would suggest to unstack these cause it's kinda weird in a jumpy part like this stacked these because there is a double kick and then a snare afterwards and it is not conflicting with the jumpy part - this part in the music is a filler, so it is fine
7. 04:17:109 (3) - x=160 / y=260 ? blanket with 04:16:635 (1) -
8. Stack 04:17:583 (5) - onto 04:17:109 (3) - and move 04:17:741 (1,2) - to x=32 / y=352 ? following that above, fine as it is
9. Unstack 04:17:741 (1,2) - no, double kick
10. Use these coordinates for 04:34:162 (3,4,5,6) - looks a lot smoother 04:34:162 (3) - x=148 / y=212 ; 04:34:319 (4) - x=244 / y=44 ; 04:34:477 (5) - x=312 / y=212 ; 04:34:635 (6) - x=408 / y=44 moved 6, rest is fine because of blankets and shapes
11. 04:46:477 (2) - x=384 / y=264 ? done
12. I recommend using the same distance snap for 04:47:425 (1,2,3) - fixed
13. 04:56:583 (2) - fix this blanket please improved a bit

Overall cute map =^-^= even though I'm not a fan of those weird slider shapes but that is pretty much personal preference. Sorry that this is not a really good mod~ Don't have that much time atm.
Anyways, good luck on getting it ranked <3

N00dle wrote:

v2

03:07:319 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing is different compared to the other 5 note bursts not sure if intended intentional, but moved the last slider as itr seemed like it was out of place

03:20:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - spacing difference too big to 03:21:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo its ok

03:40:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same here 03:41:741 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^above

04:38:583 (1) - move to x:53 y:112 and 04:40:319 (1) - to x:163 y:376 so you can do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5622053 improved this section, thanks fam

04:40:793 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/q3LEs/18d928d945.png ? ^above

05:03:530 (1,2,3,4,1) - could be spaced more idk following drums here so this spacing is fine, but I noticed a slider was out of place

KinkyKitten wrote:

Imagination

1. What about something like this http://puu.sh/q2Ly2/adeea79137.jpg @ 00:23:771 -
   I tried it out, but it feels really awkward to play :S
2. 00:26:850 (3) - What about these coordinates x=278 / y=309 ?
   Sure, these 3 00:25:903 (1,2,3) - are in a straight line now, thanks!
3. 00:27:955 (2) - ^ x=297 / y=289 ?
   After looking at this circle, I've decided to stack it on 00:26:850 (3) -
4. 00:29:850 (2,3) - Is this intentional or just a bug in my version? If not please move 00:30:087 (3) - to 00:30:008 -
   Small mistake here I guess :S Didn't see it. Thanks for notifying me about it!
5. 00:33:166 (3) - x=317 / y=265 ?
   Looks better with the slider now, thanks!
6. 01:01:271 (1) - This sliders tail should be clickable 'cause it's a pretty strong beat
7. 01:02:534 (3) - ^
8. 01:03:797 (3) - ^ (Either fix all of those or none)
   I don't think I'd like to change that because it would feel awkward like what you suggested at 00:23:771
9. I suggest extending 01:41:218 (4) - to 1:41:653 -
   I made the slider longer, but not too close to 01:41:741 (1) - cause of the timing change.

N00dle wrote:

v2

00:25:429 (5) - make this a slider
Done BrokeBack

• [Immagination]

1. 00:30:955 (1,2,3) - You should move this down so 2 can overlap with the end of 00:32:061 (1) -
   
2. 01:01:271 (1,2,3) - Heres theres a very faint sound on 01:01:982 - and if you were to do something like
   this

   
   for there and for 01:02:534 (1,2,3) - here something like
   this

   
   It captures the full sound and still keeps the flow.
   
3. 02:48:293 - Add a circle here, in between 1 and 3
   
4. 02:53:109 (1,2,3) - Try
   this

   
5. 04:58:162 (3) - I feel like this could be a stream or something instead, there's a lot of stuff going on in the background.
   
6. 05:08:977 (1) - A spinner i feel doesn't work here, I think a longer slider would work better.
   
7. 05:44:109 - Just a tiny note for Ultima Fox, I think this should be on the screen for longer than a flash.