[Cleto] wrote:

Hi ~
From Azmato 's Request

[Normal]
00:13:077 (1) - Delete NC and 00:14:022 (2) - Add NC Fixed

[Insane]
00:03:628 (4,7) - Add NC OK
01:27:487 (4) - Ctrl + G It's intended to arrange like this, to form a jump
01:59:613 (1) - I suggest to Add Note OK, one more modder pick this and I'll add

GL!

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi. Random modding

Azmato's Hard:

00:12:132 (5) - 패턴 바뀌는 부분이니까 여기 뉴콤하면 좋을듯요 ㅇㅋ
00:13:077 (1,3) - 뉴콤 바꿔주는게 음악과 패턴에 맞을듯요ㅇㅋ
00:37:880 (5) - 3/4 슬라이더는 (6) 부터 어울릴것 같네요. 이거는 1/4 줄여주세요.ㅇㅋ
00:48:510 (1,1,1) - 개인적인 감상으로 음악이나 패턴에 뚜렷한 구별이 없거나 읽기 어렵지 않은 부분에서의 뉴콤 스팸은 효과적이지 못하다는 느낌입니다.ㅇㅋ
00:49:928 (1) - 안티점프 여기서 어울릴지 모르겠습니다.안티 점프가 뭐죠..?
00:51:817 (5) - 피니시 제거요ㅇㅋ
00:55:597 (5) - ^ㅇㅋ
01:17:802 (1) - 변속이더라도 이전 슬라이더들과 같은 직선 모양이라서 뭔가 아쉬웠습니다. 진동같은 거라도 넣는게 어떨까요?ㅇㅋ
01:24:652 (1) - 좀 뜬금없는 스핀이라는 느낌이 듭니다.ㅇㅋ
01:32:211 (7) - 1/4 줄이는게 음악과 더 어울릴거 같습니다.ㅇㅋ
01:39:770 (6) - ^ㅇㅋ
01:40:479 (2) - 간격ㅇㅋ
02:14:495 (7) - (208,108) 정도에 놓아서 간격 지키는게 더 나을거라고 생각합니다. 좀 흐름을 끊고 뜬금 점프 같아요.ㅇㅋ
02:19:455 - 쓸모없는 타임라인 삭제
ㅇㅋ
Good luck ^^

1. you need to rearrange the NCs 00:12:132 (1) - from here to 00:32:211 (5) - here
2. 00:49:928 (3) - what about changing the rhythm like this for better match with the vocal?
   
   example

   
3. 00:53:707 (3) - same opinion with above
4. 00:57:959 (1) - delete NC and add NC 00:59:140 (2) - here or 01:00:321 (3) - here for consistence (and 01:01:266 (1) - delete this NC as well if you fix thi)
5. 01:31:266 (1) - delete NC
6. 02:05:518 (3) - add NC here or 01:05:046 (1) - delete this NC
   

• 
  
  did irc mod http://puu.sh/638Z8.txt

1. tick rate 2 fits this song best (and add some slidetick hitsounds as well)
2. 00:06:463 (4) - consider adding NC here for indicating changed pattern and rhythm
3. 00:37:172 (2) - curving this slider to upward feels little bit better than current one imo
   
   for example

   
4. 01:06:699 (5,6,7) - current rhythm feels little bit off, maybe extending the slider length and delete latter note and reversing rhythm will work
   
   example

   
5. 01:17:802 (3) - i'm not sure if this slider is still acceptable, well i'd rather adjust it to less twisted slider
6. 01:35:046 (7,1) - this rhythm should be reversed if you followed with vocal sounds (and it seems you did)
   
   example

   
7. 01:38:825 (10,1) - well another rhythm breaking? try changing this like following image
   
   example

   
8. 01:42:605 (1) - uh.. one more awkward rhythm here, try this
   
   this

   
9. 01:46:384 (5) - NC for consistence and large distance changing
10. 01:48:274 - useless green line
11. 02:17:802 (3) - well actually i placement doesn't look good for playing, reversing this slider by ctrl g can be better flow

W h i t e wrote:

From Azmato's request and M4M



[Hard]
Korean

00:09:298 (6) - 00:08:353 (5) - 와 너무 가까운 것 같습니다. 00:08:353 (5) - 를 Ctrl + Shift + R를 이용해서 각도 조절 하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:15:912 (1,2,3,4) - 하드에서는 안 좋은 패턴 입니다. 차라리 풍차 돌리시는게 어떨까요?

00:27:959 (8) - 중간에 빨간 점을 이용해서 만드는게 더 이쁠것 같아요

00:52:290 (1) - 앞 부분 클랩 추가

00:52:762 (2) - 앞 부분 휘슬 추가

00:53:235 (3) - 앞 부분 클랩 추가

00:56:069 (1,2,3) - 위와 같습니다.

01:24:888 (1,2) - 1에는 휘슬 2에는 클랩 추가

01:25:833 (3) - 휘슬 추가

02:02:211 (2) - 클랩 추가

All applied

Good Song~ And Some funny patterns

Good Luck~

Bellum wrote:

00:31:502 (6) - 스택해주세요 OK
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl +g하는것이 동선이 더 깔끔해집니다OK
02:11:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 슬라이더 틱 이용하셔서 하얀선에 클랩 넣는걸 추천.X

Kibbleru wrote:

00:25:361 (1) - fix blanket a bit OK
00:32:920 (1) - ^ OK

suggestion:
00:40:951 (3) - http://gyazo.com/e8cdcd619b0eac494c04afaae0ac361d ? nice suggestion!

01:03:865 (2) - ctrl g? OK
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl g this too if you did the aboveOK

01:23:943 - needs something here OK

02:07:172 (1) - feels weird to have the end of a spinner as a beat. maybe end the spinner earlier and put a circle here 02:08:825OK
02:14:731 (1) - ^OK but just trying. can be changed

00:43:550 (10,1) - not sure if allowed and it's hard to read :< I can

CET 6 wrote:

00:52:290 (1,2,3) - i think these straight sliders r not very good to look OK
00:50:400 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - there r too many straight slider in this section，may make people feel bored OK
01:24:888 (1,2) - these whistle is good ，why not continue using this effect in later sliders :( I can't make it constantly

00:48:038 (1,2,3,4) - 01:08:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:16:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these kind of pattern is a bit excessiveI don think so

1. 00:44:258 (3) - 这个往上一点, 看起来下个note和下面那组3/4+1一样就行了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337488
2. 00:56:542 (3,4) - 这两个往对侧旋转一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337511
3. 01:35:046 (1) - 没包好
4. 02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - 美丽

1. 00:33:628 (2) - move this note 1 grid to topleft to make blanket perfect
2. 00:54:180 (2) - i think distance is not good, stack a note on 2's top?

1. 看着还好

1. hard diff can not load video file, so try to add it by creator or Caffe_[Latte]

1. 01:35:046 (3,4) - 这里建议这样 试试就知道啦 原来的感觉节奏不太感觉的出来
   
   戳我

   
2. 01:39:770 - 这里建议和上面一样因为是normal难度嘛 不要太多的变化比较好> <
3. 01:55:124 (4) - 这个建议不要这么长 很影响打击的节奏感 折返去掉比较好
   
   比如这样

   

1. Hp+1 (it is so easy to play just increase~~
2. 01:00:558 (1) - slider may changed to a circle at 01:00:794 - (Because it is very closed to spinner, and maybe very hard to catch as it mapped with lyrics.
3. 01:08:589 (1) - this circle also suggest to be removed (01:06:699 (1) - this spinner maybe unnecessary, just remove it and map it with objects)
4. 01:34:573 (6) - why put a jump here, it'll led to inconsistent. just try this
   
   click me

   
   
5. 02:07:172 (1) - also unnecessary (suggest map it with objects but not spinner, spinner played not very good :C
6. 02:14:731 (1) - ^

1. 00:08:353 (1) - 这个靠太近了 spacing感觉不太好 移动到(104,104)怎么样
2. 00:18:746 (2) - 尾巴和前面7的影子最好叠好了 看起来整洁些
3. 00:25:124 (1,2,3,4) - 这个三连合4是不是反了...感觉位置不变4在123前面好些（这个ignore掉吧 咱自己都觉得不改好了> <
4. 00:27:014 (1) - 这里还有后面很多不要偷懒呀 （破坏节奏+形状不好+折返滑条 直接就1分了
   
   比如可以这样

   
   
5. 01:27:487 (4) - ^
6. 00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的跳不太对 7是重音 应该跳远一些 这里反而比较近 把5和7都选中ctrl+G试试
7. 01:19:691 (3) - 移动到（104,148）
8. 01:24:180 (2) - 漏掉一个音效 这里tick都不用 滑条减短就不错的说
9. 02:18:746 (1) - 这个想法挺好的 不过就spacing而言太大了 而且结合视频的情况有些像口水...可以一个非常短的2.0X的滑条
   
   click

   

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢
[General]

1. hard diff can not load video file, so try to add it by creator or Caffe_[Latte] Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:35:046 (3,4) - 这里建议这样 试试就知道啦 原来的感觉节奏不太感觉的出来 OK
   
   戳我

   
2. 01:39:770 - 这里建议和上面一样因为是normal难度嘛 不要太多的变化比较好> < OK
3. 01:55:124 (4) - 这个建议不要这么长 很影响打击的节奏感 折返去掉比较好 用来降星数的..
   
   比如这样

   

[Insane]

1. 00:08:353 (1) - 这个靠太近了 spacing感觉不太好 移动到(104,104)怎么样 OK
2. 00:18:746 (2) - 尾巴和前面7的影子最好叠好了 看起来整洁些 OK
3. 00:25:124 (1,2,3,4) - 这个三连合4是不是反了...感觉位置不变4在123前面好些（这个ignore掉吧 咱自己都觉得不改好了> < 这个三角形antiflow还是挺基本的吧
4. 00:27:014 (1) - 这里还有后面很多不要偷懒呀 （破坏节奏+形状不好+折返滑条 直接就1分了 真不是偷懒..当时只是跟了Vocal没想那么多.不过你说得对，改了一部分
   
   比如可以这样

   
   
5. 01:27:487 (4) - ^ ^
6. 00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的跳不太对 7是重音 应该跳远一些 这里反而比较近 把5和7都选中ctrl+G试试 00:42:369 (5,6) - 是比较重的Base音，所以把比较远的跳放在这里了。
7. 01:19:691 (3) - 移动到（104,148）OK
8. 01:24:180 (2) - 漏掉一个音效 这里tick都不用 滑条减短就不错的说 加上了
9. 02:18:746 (1) - 这个想法挺好的 不过就spacing而言太大了 而且结合视频的情况有些像口水...可以一个非常短的2.0X的滑条 口水,,,你们为何想象力这么好orz 我看看别人会不会这么想，还有就改掉。
   
   click

   

好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢

[Latte's Hard]

1. Hp+1 (it is so easy to play just increase~~ 滑条速度已经比较难了，不能再提升了
2. 01:00:558 (1) - slider may changed to a circle at 01:00:794 - (Because it is very closed to spinner, and maybe very hard to catch as it mapped with lyrics.Removed
3. 01:08:589 (1) - this circle also suggest to be removed (01:06:699 (1) - this spinner maybe unnecessary, just remove it and map it with objects) Fixed
4. 01:34:573 (6) - why put a jump here, it'll led to inconsistent. just try this The jump suits the vocal imo
   
   click me

   
   
5. 02:07:172 (1) - also unnecessary (suggest map it with objects but not spinner, spinner played not very good :C Fixed
6. 02:14:731 (1) - ^ Fixed

好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <

yanlu wrote:

Love!
( ♥´∀`♥)ﾉ-☆

Gabe wrote:

Love , nooooooooo D':

Lally wrote:

;_____; nuuuh why grav? :C

Irreversible wrote:

[Normal]

00:12:132 (4,5,1) - I personally think of this pattern, it Looks slightly better, and it also flows cool! Slider 5 is the symmetry of 00:11:187 (3) - http://puu.sh/8SIkh/3357e9a4a3.jpg Sorry but the pics were lost during such long thime due to my laziness...
00:48:038 (1) - Blanket?Fixed!
01:48:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think symmetry would be quit cool here (if you can shift it to the middle). If it doesn't work, just leave it. OK!

Nice normal !

[Latte's Hard]

00:09:298 (6) - I don't really know why the spacing is different here - although you stacked it, it doesn't really look too nice, I would try to get another pattern here! Changed!
00:12:842 (4,5) - Make sure the spacing is 1.0, and not 0.95 or so, it's quite visible! Fixed!
00:12:132 (1,2,3,4) - How about a pattern liek http://puu.sh/9pmE2.png ? I think the increasing jump would play really well.Changed!
00:17:329 (4) - I guess two circles fit the song way better.Changed!
00:33:628 (2) - BlanketFixed!
00:33:865 (3) - Make sure the start of this is fully covered by the sliderslide of 00:32:920 (1) - Fixed!
00:38:353 (6) - spacingFixed! It's 3/4 here so a little closer!
00:42:841 (2) - blanketFixed!
00:38:353 (1) - Also, NC for indiciating the slowdown and the special vocals?Fixed!
00:38:353 (1,2) - Just a random idea which came to my mind, I think it would look pretty neat. http://puu.sh/9pmOd.pngSorry but the pictures were lost already!
00:40:243 (2,3) - I think you should really try to improve the flow here like this; http://puu.sh/9pmQT.pngSorry but the pictures were lost already!
00:48:038 (1) - Spacing, please increase it. It's the start of the kiai, I don't think decreasing the spacing is a good idea! Incrased!
00:53:707 (1) - Straight flow would work perfectly here, try it! I think it's a lot of fun to play. 168 100 Fixed!
01:00:794 (1) - Really nice part! Actually this pard was made by me! Thanks!
01:26:306 (1) - No need for this antijump here, the song just doesn't call for it. Please use normal spacing. Changed!
01:31:266 (5) - Well.. at least add NC. It fits the vocals good. Changed!
01:38:825 (4) - ^ (add NC on all extended sliders part, please) OK!
01:49:455 (3,4) - Ehh, I kow what you tried here, but try this instead: http://puu.sh/9pndH.png The spacing should increase, and not decrease, it plays a lot better.Though the pics were lost but I got u idea! Changed!
01:51:345 (2) - Doesn't look too neat, the sliders are really close together, do you mind pushing them a bit further? OK!
01:51:817 (3) - Please move this a bit up, for a better flow. OK!
01:59:849 (4) - Looks a bit weird, can you try another spacing here? OK! Changed!
02:14:967 (1) - Your rhythm is slightly wrong here; try this instead. http://puu.sh/9pnvq.png The reason is that you want to follow the heavy drum, not just a weak one! Though the pics were lost but I got u idea! Changed!

The map itself is fine, some spacing errors tho, please go over your map again carefully, to check it out yourself, and improve your map!

[Insane]

It's pretty good so far, but I still Need to mention some things. I'll do this tomorrow xD

1. bg.jpg is 964x723 wich is not a rankable size provide a correct size

1. 01:29:613 (1) - i would curve this one
2. HP 6.5 atleast

1. 00:09:298 (6) - i would do something like that
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:44:258 (1) - :C
3. 00:48:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would totally use sliders here
4. 01:38:117 (1,2,3) - i would do a regular spacing here
5. HP 5.5

1. HP 3

1. 00:05:518 (1) - ctrl+g才比较符合你前面的那个梗

1. 00:48:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太难了太难了，00:48:510 (3,4) - 和00:49:455 (3,4) - 改成滑条

1. 00:35:991 (1,2) - 00:39:770 (1,2) - 00:57:959 (1,2) - 01:29:140 (1,2) - 01:40:243 (1,2) - 01:59:613 (5,1) - 交换nc

1. 00:41:660 (5) - 听歌的话，叠在6

1. 00:50:872 (5,7) - 交换位置好些
2. 美丽

1. up to you i would change this 02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - to a spnner for giving more score difference

Lally wrote:

[Normal]

1. up to you i would change this 02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - to a spnner for giving more score difference

OK

after this we're fully ready o3o!!!

cobaltboyX wrote:

can anyone tell what anime is the vid from?