applied all mod

http://puu.sh/77cMT.zip

To AR3 & 春卷：
All applied
Updated

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢
[General]

1. hard diff can not load video file, so try to add it by creator or Caffe_[Latte]

[Normal]

1. 01:35:046 (3,4) - 这里建议这样 试试就知道啦 原来的感觉节奏不太感觉的出来
   
   戳我

   
2. 01:39:770 - 这里建议和上面一样因为是normal难度嘛 不要太多的变化比较好> <
3. 01:55:124 (4) - 这个建议不要这么长 很影响打击的节奏感 折返去掉比较好
   
   比如这样

   

[Latte's Hard]

1. Hp+1 (it is so easy to play just increase~~
2. 01:00:558 (1) - slider may changed to a circle at 01:00:794 - (Because it is very closed to spinner, and maybe very hard to catch as it mapped with lyrics.
3. 01:08:589 (1) - this circle also suggest to be removed (01:06:699 (1) - this spinner maybe unnecessary, just remove it and map it with objects)
4. 01:34:573 (6) - why put a jump here, it'll led to inconsistent. just try this
   
   click me

   
   
5. 02:07:172 (1) - also unnecessary (suggest map it with objects but not spinner, spinner played not very good :C
6. 02:14:731 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:08:353 (1) - 这个靠太近了 spacing感觉不太好 移动到(104,104)怎么样
2. 00:18:746 (2) - 尾巴和前面7的影子最好叠好了 看起来整洁些
3. 00:25:124 (1,2,3,4) - 这个三连合4是不是反了...感觉位置不变4在123前面好些（这个ignore掉吧 咱自己都觉得不改好了> <
4. 00:27:014 (1) - 这里还有后面很多不要偷懒呀 （破坏节奏+形状不好+折返滑条 直接就1分了
   
   比如可以这样

   
   
5. 01:27:487 (4) - ^
6. 00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的跳不太对 7是重音 应该跳远一些 这里反而比较近 把5和7都选中ctrl+G试试
7. 01:19:691 (3) - 移动到（104,148）
8. 01:24:180 (2) - 漏掉一个音效 这里tick都不用 滑条减短就不错的说
9. 02:18:746 (1) - 这个想法挺好的 不过就spacing而言太大了 而且结合视频的情况有些像口水...可以一个非常短的2.0X的滑条
   
   click

   

好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢
[General]

1. hard diff can not load video file, so try to add it by creator or Caffe_[Latte] Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:35:046 (3,4) - 这里建议这样 试试就知道啦 原来的感觉节奏不太感觉的出来 OK
   
   戳我

   
2. 01:39:770 - 这里建议和上面一样因为是normal难度嘛 不要太多的变化比较好> < OK
3. 01:55:124 (4) - 这个建议不要这么长 很影响打击的节奏感 折返去掉比较好 用来降星数的..
   
   比如这样

   

[Insane]

1. 00:08:353 (1) - 这个靠太近了 spacing感觉不太好 移动到(104,104)怎么样 OK
2. 00:18:746 (2) - 尾巴和前面7的影子最好叠好了 看起来整洁些 OK
3. 00:25:124 (1,2,3,4) - 这个三连合4是不是反了...感觉位置不变4在123前面好些（这个ignore掉吧 咱自己都觉得不改好了> < 这个三角形antiflow还是挺基本的吧
4. 00:27:014 (1) - 这里还有后面很多不要偷懒呀 （破坏节奏+形状不好+折返滑条 直接就1分了 真不是偷懒..当时只是跟了Vocal没想那么多.不过你说得对，改了一部分
   
   比如可以这样

   
   
5. 01:27:487 (4) - ^ ^
6. 00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的跳不太对 7是重音 应该跳远一些 这里反而比较近 把5和7都选中ctrl+G试试 00:42:369 (5,6) - 是比较重的Base音，所以把比较远的跳放在这里了。
7. 01:19:691 (3) - 移动到（104,148）OK
8. 01:24:180 (2) - 漏掉一个音效 这里tick都不用 滑条减短就不错的说 加上了
9. 02:18:746 (1) - 这个想法挺好的 不过就spacing而言太大了 而且结合视频的情况有些像口水...可以一个非常短的2.0X的滑条 口水,,,你们为何想象力这么好orz 我看看别人会不会这么想，还有就改掉。
   
   click

   

好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <

多谢mod 很有帮助!

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢

[Latte's Hard]

1. Hp+1 (it is so easy to play just increase~~ 滑条速度已经比较难了，不能再提升了
2. 01:00:558 (1) - slider may changed to a circle at 01:00:794 - (Because it is very closed to spinner, and maybe very hard to catch as it mapped with lyrics.Removed
3. 01:08:589 (1) - this circle also suggest to be removed (01:06:699 (1) - this spinner maybe unnecessary, just remove it and map it with objects) Fixed
4. 01:34:573 (6) - why put a jump here, it'll led to inconsistent. just try this The jump suits the vocal imo
   
   click me

   
   
5. 02:07:172 (1) - also unnecessary (suggest map it with objects but not spinner, spinner played not very good :C Fixed
6. 02:14:731 (1) - ^ Fixed

好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <

Fix all for Latte
Updated.

yanlu wrote:

Love!
( ♥´∀`♥)ﾉ-☆

Thank U yanlu!!! :3

Revived.
Changed hitclap

Love , nooooooooo D':

Gabe wrote:

Love , nooooooooo D':

boy r u?

No, I'm obviously a girl

I hope it'll be ranked asap, because playing this map is simply fun

KUTGW!

[Normal]

00:12:132 (4,5,1) - I personally think of this pattern, it Looks slightly better, and it also flows cool! Slider 5 is the symmetry of 00:11:187 (3) - http://puu.sh/8SIkh/3357e9a4a3.jpg
00:48:038 (1) - Blanket?
01:48:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think symmetry would be quit cool here (if you can shift it to the middle). If it doesn't work, just leave it.

Nice normal !

[Latte's Hard]

00:09:298 (6) - I don't really know why the spacing is different here - although you stacked it, it doesn't really look too nice, I would try to get another pattern here!
00:12:842 (4,5) - Make sure the spacing is 1.0, and not 0.95 or so, it's quite visible!
00:12:132 (1,2,3,4) - How about a pattern liek http://puu.sh/9pmE2.png ? I think the increasing jump would play really well.
00:17:329 (4) - I guess two circles fit the song way better.
00:33:628 (2) - Blanket
00:33:865 (3) - Make sure the start of this is fully covered by the sliderslide of 00:32:920 (1) -
00:38:353 (6) - spacing
00:42:841 (2) - blanket
00:38:353 (1) - Also, NC for indiciating the slowdown and the special vocals?
00:38:353 (1,2) - Just a random idea which came to my mind, I think it would look pretty neat. http://puu.sh/9pmOd.png
00:40:243 (2,3) - I think you should really try to improve the flow here like this; http://puu.sh/9pmQT.png
00:48:038 (1) - Spacing, please increase it. It's the start of the kiai, I don't think decreasing the spacing is a good idea!
00:53:707 (1) - Straight flow would work perfectly here, try it! I think it's a lot of fun to play. 168 100
01:00:794 (1) - Really nice part!
01:26:306 (1) - No need for this antijump here, the song just doesn't call for it. Please use normal spacing.
01:31:266 (5) - Well.. at least add NC. It fits the vocals good.
01:38:825 (4) - ^ (add NC on all extended sliders part, please)
01:49:455 (3,4) - Ehh, I kow what you tried here, but try this instead: http://puu.sh/9pndH.png The spacing should increase, and not decrease, it plays a lot better.
01:51:345 (2) - Doesn't look too neat, the sliders are really close together, do you mind pushing them a bit further?
01:51:817 (3) - Please move this a bit up, for a better flow.
01:59:849 (4) - Looks a bit weird, can you try another spacing here?
02:14:967 (1) - Your rhythm is slightly wrong here; try this instead. http://puu.sh/9pnvq.png The reason is that you want to follow the heavy drum, not just a weak one!

The map itself is fine, some spacing errors tho, please go over your map again carefully, to check it out yourself, and improve your map!

[Insane]

It's pretty good so far, but I still Need to mention some things. I'll do this tomorrow xD

;_____; nuuuh why grav? :C

Lally wrote:

;_____; nuuuh why grav? :C

Waiting for Irre's mod on Insane
Send him a message for me if u like

Irreversible wrote:

[Normal]

00:12:132 (4,5,1) - I personally think of this pattern, it Looks slightly better, and it also flows cool! Slider 5 is the symmetry of 00:11:187 (3) - http://puu.sh/8SIkh/3357e9a4a3.jpg Sorry but the pics were lost during such long thime due to my laziness...
00:48:038 (1) - Blanket?Fixed!
01:48:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think symmetry would be quit cool here (if you can shift it to the middle). If it doesn't work, just leave it. OK!

Nice normal !

[Latte's Hard]

00:09:298 (6) - I don't really know why the spacing is different here - although you stacked it, it doesn't really look too nice, I would try to get another pattern here! Changed!
00:12:842 (4,5) - Make sure the spacing is 1.0, and not 0.95 or so, it's quite visible! Fixed!
00:12:132 (1,2,3,4) - How about a pattern liek http://puu.sh/9pmE2.png ? I think the increasing jump would play really well.Changed!
00:17:329 (4) - I guess two circles fit the song way better.Changed!
00:33:628 (2) - BlanketFixed!
00:33:865 (3) - Make sure the start of this is fully covered by the sliderslide of 00:32:920 (1) - Fixed!
00:38:353 (6) - spacingFixed! It's 3/4 here so a little closer!
00:42:841 (2) - blanketFixed!
00:38:353 (1) - Also, NC for indiciating the slowdown and the special vocals?Fixed!
00:38:353 (1,2) - Just a random idea which came to my mind, I think it would look pretty neat. http://puu.sh/9pmOd.pngSorry but the pictures were lost already!
00:40:243 (2,3) - I think you should really try to improve the flow here like this; http://puu.sh/9pmQT.pngSorry but the pictures were lost already!
00:48:038 (1) - Spacing, please increase it. It's the start of the kiai, I don't think decreasing the spacing is a good idea! Incrased!
00:53:707 (1) - Straight flow would work perfectly here, try it! I think it's a lot of fun to play. 168 100 Fixed!
01:00:794 (1) - Really nice part! Actually this pard was made by me! Thanks!
01:26:306 (1) - No need for this antijump here, the song just doesn't call for it. Please use normal spacing. Changed!
01:31:266 (5) - Well.. at least add NC. It fits the vocals good. Changed!
01:38:825 (4) - ^ (add NC on all extended sliders part, please) OK!
01:49:455 (3,4) - Ehh, I kow what you tried here, but try this instead: http://puu.sh/9pndH.png The spacing should increase, and not decrease, it plays a lot better.Though the pics were lost but I got u idea! Changed!
01:51:345 (2) - Doesn't look too neat, the sliders are really close together, do you mind pushing them a bit further? OK!
01:51:817 (3) - Please move this a bit up, for a better flow. OK!
01:59:849 (4) - Looks a bit weird, can you try another spacing here? OK! Changed!
02:14:967 (1) - Your rhythm is slightly wrong here; try this instead. http://puu.sh/9pnvq.png The reason is that you want to follow the heavy drum, not just a weak one! Though the pics were lost but I got u idea! Changed!

The map itself is fine, some spacing errors tho, please go over your map again carefully, to check it out yourself, and improve your map!

[Insane]

It's pretty good so far, but I still Need to mention some things. I'll do this tomorrow xD

I have one thousand words for the reason why I replied it after 10 months... but in a word, I'm graduating!
Time is limited but I must reply every modder even if I would probably could't find a job after graduating...but I still love osu!
Since the GDer has already afked for such a long time, I would take care of his diff instead in order to get this ranked.
Updated.

nice to see this pending again o3o

[General]

1. bg.jpg is 964x723 wich is not a rankable size provide a correct size

[Insane]

1. 01:29:613 (1) - i would curve this one
2. HP 6.5 atleast

[Hard]

1. 00:09:298 (6) - i would do something like that
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:44:258 (1) - :C
3. 00:48:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would totally use sliders here
4. 01:38:117 (1,2,3) - i would do a regular spacing here
5. HP 5.5

[Normal]

1. HP 3

get 1-2 mods and call me back o3o

1 mod here

[Insane]

1. 00:05:518 (1) - ctrl+g才比较符合你前面的那个梗

[Latte's Hard]

1. 00:48:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太难了太难了，00:48:510 (3,4) - 和00:49:455 (3,4) - 改成滑条

insane和hard都有一个地方是后面物件放在折返上的，最好问问qat有没有问题。。我不太清楚
要飞啦!

~~~~~

[Normal]

1. 00:35:991 (1,2) - 00:39:770 (1,2) - 00:57:959 (1,2) - 01:29:140 (1,2) - 01:40:243 (1,2) - 01:59:613 (5,1) - 交换nc

[Latte's Hard]

1. 00:41:660 (5) - 听歌的话，叠在6

[Insane]

1. 00:50:872 (5,7) - 交换位置好些
2. 美丽

我也喜欢疯狂挡滑条头。。
要飞啦!

Thx for modding！
Updated

[Normal]

1. up to you i would change this 02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - to a spnner for giving more score difference

after this we're fully ready o3o!!!

Lally wrote:

[Normal]

1. up to you i would change this 02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - to a spnner for giving more score difference

OK

after this we're fully ready o3o!!!

Updated

Nominate

Grats !

尿了

贺电wwwwww

gong hei nei a

woooooow! congratz!! sorry that i never modded insane

can anyone tell what anime is the vid from?

cobaltboyX wrote:

can anyone tell what anime is the vid from?

Hyouka