neonat wrote:
General
Could use a little bit more time before the first object with lead-in, no harm
Beginner
00:00:159 (1,2,3,4) - actually I would think you should follow the rhythm of 00:06:474 (1,2,3) instead because if you did, you would click something at 00:03:316 where the music is stronger Fixed
00:12:790 (5) - should have started the NC here Fixed
00:13:580 (1) - you can really adjust this shape to blanket and curve around better, you can still +/- around 0.03 from the snap, I adjusted it to around 0.82x and it seemed better:
Not fixed like you made, but that's fine now~
00:30:553 - don't NC, doesn't follow the other patterns Fixed
00:38:053 (4) - NC Fixed
00:38:843 (5,6) - don't overlap, find another position Fixed
00:42:790 (1) - don't NC Fixed
Good Luck
Thanks !
Update
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1
[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
BeatmapSetID:371997
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fantasy-dreamworld.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
[TimingPoints]
159,394.736842105263,4,2,1,45,1,0
44369,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
69632,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,58,86
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 233,170,39
SliderBorder : 250,215,90
[HitObjects]
320,108,159,6,0,P|372:100|420:108,2,100.000001192093,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,2527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,188,3316,2,0,P|372:196|420:188,2,100.000001192093,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,5685,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,228,6474,6,0,P|308:228|356:236,2,100.000001192093,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,256,8843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,280,9632,2,0,P|104:332|112:380,2,100.000001192093,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,200,12001,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,132,12790,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,108,13580,2,0,P|104:68|152:52,1,100.000001192093
152,132,15158,2,0,P|156:212|176:232,1,100.000001192093,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,16737,2,0,L|256:316,2,50.0000005960464,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,18316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,240,19106,6,0,P|84:288|92:340,1,100.000001192093,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,340,20685,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,340,21474,2,0,L|304:340,2,50.0000005960464,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,336,23053,2,0,P|148:272|164:224,1,100.000001192093,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,24632,2,0,P|164:136|156:116,2,50.0000005960464,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,184,26211,6,0,P|292:184|340:192,2,100.000001192093,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,188,28580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,256,29369,2,0,P|204:308|232:356,1,100.000001192093,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,332,30948,2,0,P|304:280|276:232,1,100.000001192093,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,160,32527,6,0,B|212:160|212:160|176:196,2,100.000001192093,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,34895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,308,35685,2,0,P|204:304|180:280,2,100.000001192093
348,272,38053,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,38843,2,0,P|336:140|352:96,2,100.000001192093
364,268,41211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,42001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,352,42790,2,0,P|316:360|352:332,1,100.000001192093,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,44369,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,216,45158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,280,45948,2,0,L|440:352,2,100.000001192093,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,224,48316,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,248,49106,2,0,L|184:264,2,50.0000005960464,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,50685,6,0,P|376:228|404:248,1,100.000001192093,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,300,52264,2,0,L|344:352,2,50.0000005960464,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,308,53843,2,0,P|160:308|96:244,1,200.000002384186
124,168,56211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,96,57001,6,0,B|208:84|208:84|256:84,2,100.000001192093,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,132,59369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,176,60158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,60948,2,0,L|4:284,2,100.000001192093,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,63316,6,0,P|148:180|116:144,1,100.000001192093,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,64895,2,0,L|28:236,2,50.0000005960464,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,144,66474,2,0,P|148:180|152:232,2,100.000001192093,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,68843,2,0,L|0:80,2,50.0000005960464,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,148,70422,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,176,71211,2,0,L|240:188,2,50.0000005960464,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,164,72790,2,0,P|104:216|100:268,1,100.000001192093,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,74369,2,0,L|208:332,1,50.0000005960464,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,75158,2,0,L|300:336,1,50.0000005960464,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: