Sangatsu no Phantasia - Hajimari no Sokudo · forum

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-05-30T07:01:58+00:00

Hello !, from #modreqs !. Whoo, Anime Song ?. I hope I can be helpful here. XD

General :
Excellent !

Easy :
01:07:835 (1) - I don't know but I think you wanna make it a straight slider. The end of the dot is not straight

Normal :
01:27:600 (1) - Lower the audio for this slider end will be lovelier

Hard :
01:27:600 (1) - Lower the audio for this spinner end will be lovelier

Ky's Insane :
Excellent !

Insane :
00:49:835 (3) - 00:51:776 (6) - Smoother the blanket

01:27:600 (1) - Lower the audio for this slider end will be lovelier

Nah, I guess that's all. I hope I'm correct and not changing the style. Good luck

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-05-30T22:31:21+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Hello !, from #modreqs !. Whoo, Anime Song ?. I hope I can be helpful here. XD

General :
Excellent !

Easy :
01:07:835 (1) - I don't know but I think you wanna make it a straight slider. The end of the dot is not straight adjusted

Normal :
01:27:600 (1) - Lower the audio for this slider end will be lovelier 20%

Hard :
01:27:600 (1) - Lower the audio for this spinner end will be lovelier 20%

Insane :
00:49:835 (3) - 00:51:776 (6) - Smoother the blanket did a small adjustment
01:27:600 (1) - Lower the audio for this slider end will be lovelier 20%

Nah, I guess that's all. I hope I'm correct and not changing the style. Good luck

thx for the mod

, really appreciate it

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-06-05T14:22:17+00:00

From my queue

[Ky's Insane]

HP +1, For spread
00:06:070 (2) - Sooooo.... It seems that you emphasize the vocals by separating the flow on every heavy vocals at the beginning..... But this slider did have slider vocal sound at the end, yet the vocal sound it held past 00:06:247 (3) - so i guess you can do something like this:
:::
Or 3 circles if you wish to
00:14:894 (5) - You are ignoring the vocal sound on the red tick. I know that you're mapping to the piano sound but since 00:14:188 (1,2,3,4) - were mapping to the vocals so the transition is not that great.
00:36:423 - There's drum sounds that is asking for a short stream, not sure why you're ignoring them...
00:43:659 (1) - While it's acceptable for vocal mapping, but there's a sound supporting the downbeat so i don't recommend you to ignore it
00:57:953 (1,2,3,4) - Wow, i am not expected a stack there when i am playing it
01:11:894 (1) - Same here, there's also a sound supporting the downbeat
01:20:365 (2,1) - Swapping NC feels better for me, Even that you wanted to emphasize 01:20:541 (1) - , but i think there's more like an other part of the piano
01:21:600 (2,1) - swap NC here, 01:21:600 (2) - has a clear difference than 01:20:541 (1) -
01:22:835 (4) - A clear piano sounds exist there, why you want to ignore them?
:::

[Insane]

HP +1, For spread, maybe 2
00:02:012 (4,6) - Kinda touching there
00:16:306 (2,3) - ^
00:40:835 (5,1) - While This overlap is acceptable, but i don't like this because it's easy to get tripped there
00:45:953 (6,1) - This 1/1 distance is similar to 00:45:600 (3,6) - , which is 1/2, there's a good change to get player confused, stack it or make a bigger distance
So this diff is mapped mostly with constant DS, For Insane, You can disable DS and map some jump patterns like 00:55:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , Otherwise it will be very plain and no clear emphasization on the music

GL~

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-06-06T07:43:11+00:00

[Insane]

HP +1, For spread, maybe 2
00:02:012 (4,6) - Kinda touching there adjusted
00:16:306 (2,3) - ^ small adjustment, i think its fine now
00:40:835 (5,1) - While This overlap is acceptable, but i don't like this because it's easy to get tripped there honestly I don't like this too, lol, I'll try a few things when I can, hopefully I remember >.<
00:45:953 (6,1) - This 1/1 distance is similar to 00:45:600 (3,6) - , which is 1/2, there's a good change to get player confused, stack it or make a bigger distancepretty sure things like this are fine for Insane, I'll see what others have to say
So this diff is mapped mostly with constant DS, For Insane, You can disable DS and map some jump patterns like 00:55:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , Otherwise it will be very plain and no clear emphasization on the musicyah I should change some areas up, when I'm not lazy , I might just end up doing constant DS then a jump then constant DS again or so idk I'll see...

GL~[/quote]

thx for the mod, really appreciate it

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-06-07T00:24:59+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
From my queue

[Ky's Insane]
HP +1, For spread fixed
00:06:070 (2) - Sooooo.... It seems that you emphasize the vocals by separating the flow on every heavy vocals at the beginning..... But this slider did have slider vocal sound at the end, yet the vocal sound it held past 00:06:247 (3) - so i guess you can do something like this:
:::
Or 3 circles if you wish to
fixed, same modding applied to 00:03:776 -
00:14:894 (5) - You are ignoring the vocal sound on the red tick. I know that you're mapping to the piano sound but since 00:14:188 (1,2,3,4) - were mapping to the vocals so the transition is not that great. I think I will remain atm, I will think of it later.
00:36:423 - There's drum sounds that is asking for a short stream, not sure why you're ignoring them... I would like to emphasise the beat 00:36:776 - .
00:43:659 (1) - While it's acceptable for vocal mapping, but there's a sound supporting the downbeat so i don't recommend you to ignore it fixed
00:57:953 (1,2,3,4) - Wow, i am not expected a stack there when i am playing it then please several times more, then you will remember it is stacking.
01:11:894 (1) - Same here, there's also a sound supporting the downbeat fixed
01:20:365 (2,1) - Swapping NC feels better for me, Even that you wanted to emphasize 01:20:541 (1) - , but i think there's more like an other part of the piano
01:21:600 (2,1) - swap NC here, 01:21:600 (2) - has a clear difference than 01:20:541 (1) - I added several nc for it.
01:22:835 (4) - A clear piano sounds exist there, why you want to ignore them?
:::
I think it is better to use slider for the piano sound at 01:22:835 - .

GL~

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-06-07T05:43:02+00:00

hi~ nm from my queue

[General]
you should use custom hitsounds :v
since you changed bg you should change the combo colours too. the pink feels out of place. generally you want to follow stuff thats in the bg. so like the white shirts, light blue tie and maybe the red and orange hair colours to contrast.

[Easy]
nc structure needs to be reworked a little. the difference between 00:12:776 (1) - and 00:14:188 (1) - isn't big so there shouldn't be an nc. whereas a note like 00:17:012 (3) - has the guitar starting so there should be a nc here. also this beat is really dominant 00:19:835 (3) - so should be nc'ed too. heres an example of an nc structure that would work for the starting part.

00:12:776 (1) - remove nc
00:15:600 (1) - remove
00:17:012 (3) - add
00:18:423 (1) - remove
00:19:835 (3) - add
00:21:247 (1) - remove

this pretty much screws up your previous combo's so you'll mostly likely have to fix the rest of the map's combos if you agree with this. also look out for this in the future when comboing maps! ok now lets mod.
00:23:365 (4,1) - a little bit too close to each other. maybe change the angle of 00:24:070 (1) - or make it a blanket
00:34:659 (2) - move this down a bit so it won't overlap
00:33:247 (2,3) - stack
01:00:776 (3) - copy paste the same slider as 00:59:365 (1) -
01:14:894 (2) - theres actually more beats here than a 1/1 slider. maybe try something like http://puu.sh/pjFOu/872eadf498.jpg

[Normal]
u should fix up those nc's i mentioned in easy for this diff as well
00:14:894 (5,1) - use the same slider
00:25:482 (1,2,3) - this is kinda monotonous. since its normal you can probably follow vocals here like http://puu.sh/pjFXt/9350deb258.jpg
00:33:600 (1,2) - swap nc
00:43:835 (3,4) - i'd either blanket this or move it more to the left so it doesn't look too close to the slider
00:39:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i feel that the density spikes up here too much when there isn't any vocals. maybe you should increase density elsewhere to balance this out.
00:48:070 (1,2,3,4) - heres an example where there are a lot of vocals you can map here that are on red ticks. this will help increase density
01:06:423 (3,4) - blanket could be better
01:21:953 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - see like the density here seems to be more than what is used in the kiai time and this can be seen from ur intensity graph where the two final peaks are bigger than kiai times peaks. the easiest solution is increase density in kiai time by mapping the vocals more closely

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:01:835 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here doesn't really follow vocals. you could fix this by ctrl g'ing 00:01:835 (2,3) - and then 00:02:365 (4,5)
00:19:659 (1) - tbh you want this slider to land on the big white tick even tho there is a vocal here because the downbeat is so important
00:55:129 (1,2) - you should make this a 1/1 slider since its a held vocal
01:12:070 - strong downbeat here should be clickable
01:16:835 (2,3) - move up a little. its too close atm
01:16:306 (1) - would also look nicer if this was a blanket
i like this diff. flows really well

[Ky's Insane]
00:02:365 (3,1) - increase ds or rotate to avoid overlap
00:06:247 (3,4) - these are a little too close too
00:35:894 (6) - should nc this for easier reading
00:47:012 (2,3) - i got caught of guard by this because the stream isn't supported by the music until 00:47:365 (1) - and its quite a high density increase. i'd just make this 2 circles instead
01:17:365 (4,5,1) - keep consistency with your stacking. this seems really close and so does 01:18:423 (4,5) - compared to 01:20:365 (1,1) - and 01:22:835 (4,1)

[Insane]
kinda disappointing you didn't work with the 3/4 rhythm
00:00:953 (5,6) - ctrl g rhythm
00:31:129 (7,1) - swap ncs
00:31:659 (3,4) - distance between these two should increase since this is a clap instead of 00:31:835 (4,5) - being the one to increase
00:39:600 (1,2) - this should be a 1/1 to emphasise vocal since you did it on 00:40:306 (4) -
00:39:776 (2,4) - also make these two sliders parallel with each other
01:09:776 (4,5,6) - see how the flow here is kind of strange. the jump should flow into the stream
01:11:188 (3,4) - parallel!! you can do this by copy pasting the same slider and doing ctrl h j
01:11:894 (1) - ^

i really like this song :3 can i do a gd for insane?

anyways. hope this helped!

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-06-07T14:53:04+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hi~ nm from my queue

[Ky's Insane]
00:02:365 (3,1) - increase ds or rotate to avoid overlap fixed
00:06:247 (3,4) - these are a little too close too fixed
00:35:894 (6) - should nc this for easier reading fixed
00:47:012 (2,3) - i got caught of guard by this because the stream isn't supported by the music until 00:47:365 (1) - and its quite a high density increase. i'd just make this 2 circles instead remain. 00:47:100 - music transition. fixed for 00:47:247 - for wrong snapping. (1/6)
01:17:365 (4,5,1) - keep consistency with your stacking. this seems really close and so does 01:18:423 (4,5) - compared to 01:20:365 (1,1) - and 01:22:835 (4,1) fixed.

anyways. hope this helped!

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Artist:Sangatsu no Phantasia
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B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-06-07T23:48:49+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hi~ nm from my queue

[General]
you should use custom hitsounds :v I have my own skin's hitsound so thats why I don't use custom hitsound haha
since you changed bg you should change the combo colours too. the pink feels out of place. generally you want to follow stuff thats in the bg. so like the white shirts, light blue tie and maybe the red and orange hair colours to contrast. I think combo color is fine, I'll prob. change the green to something else

[Easy]
nc structure needs to be reworked a little. the difference between 00:12:776 (1) - and 00:14:188 (1) - isn't big so there shouldn't be an nc. whereas a note like 00:17:012 (3) - has the guitar starting so there should be a nc here. also this beat is really dominant 00:19:835 (3) - so should be nc'ed too. heres an example of an nc structure that would work for the starting part.
00:12:776 (1) - remove nc
00:15:600 (1) - remove
00:17:012 (3) - add
00:18:423 (1) - remove
00:19:835 (3) - add
00:21:247 (1) - remove
fixed NCs, but overall I think its fine now
this pretty much screws up your previous combo's so you'll mostly likely have to fix the rest of the map's combos if you agree with this. also look out for this in the future when comboing maps! ok now lets mod.
00:23:365 (4,1) - a little bit too close to each other. maybe change the angle of 00:24:070 (1) - or make it a blanket adjusted
00:34:659 (2) - move this down a bit so it won't overlap did some adjustments
00:33:247 (2,3) - stack not necessary anymore, because I did adjustments
01:00:776 (3) - copy paste the same slider as 00:59:365 (1) - looks the same to me now
01:14:894 (2) - theres actually more beats here than a 1/1 slider. maybe try something like http://puu.sh/pjFOu/872eadf498.jpg sure

[Normal]
u should fix up those nc's i mentioned in easy for this diff as well
00:14:894 (5,1) - use the same slider looks the same now to me at least
00:25:482 (1,2,3) - this is kinda monotonous. since its normal you can probably follow vocals here like http://puu.sh/pjFXt/9350deb258.jpg sure, did adjustments
00:33:600 (1,2) - swap nc k
00:43:835 (3,4) - i'd either blanket this or move it more to the left so it doesn't look too close to the slider blanket better
00:39:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i feel that the density spikes up here too much when there isn't any vocals. maybe you should increase density elsewhere to balance this out. piano, I think this is fine
00:48:070 (1,2,3,4) - heres an example where there are a lot of vocals you can map here that are on red ticks. this will help increase density
01:06:423 (3,4) - blanket could be better looks good to me now
01:21:953 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - see like the density here seems to be more than what is used in the kiai time and this can be seen from ur intensity graph where the two final peaks are bigger than kiai times peaks. the easiest solution is increase density in kiai time by mapping the vocals more closely ok, I'll try to do some more things in kiai mode when I'm not lazy >.<, hopefully I remember
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:01:835 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here doesn't really follow vocals. you could fix this by ctrl g'ing 00:01:835 (2,3) - and then 00:02:365 (4,5) adjusted
00:19:659 (1) - tbh you want this slider to land on the big white tick even tho there is a vocal here because the downbeat is so important did some adjustments
00:55:129 (1,2) - you should make this a 1/1 slider since its a held vocal sure
01:12:070 - strong downbeat here should be clickable sure, did adjustments
01:16:835 (2,3) - move up a little. its too close atm adjusted
01:16:306 (1) - would also look nicer if this was a blanket adjusted
i like this diff. flows really well

[Insane]
kinda disappointing you didn't work with the 3/4 rhythm
00:00:953 (5,6) - ctrl g rhythm maybe, it's just a hassle to change note placing haha
00:31:129 (7,1) - swap ncs ughh might as well, I just don't like a triple with the 3rd note NC, unless it's a slider
00:31:659 (3,4) - distance between these two should increase since this is a clap instead of 00:31:835 (4,5) - being the one to increaseI say this is fine as it is, I may change it
00:39:600 (1,2) - this should be a 1/1 to emphasise vocal since you did it on 00:40:306 (4) - naw, I don't really like to map much 1/1 sliders on Insane
00:39:776 (2,4) - also make these two sliders parallel with each other adjusted
01:09:776 (4,5,6) - see how the flow here is kind of strange. the jump should flow into the stream did an adjustments
01:11:188 (3,4) - parallel!! you can do this by copy pasting the same slider and doing ctrl h j adjusted
01:11:894 (1) - ^ ^

i really like this song :3 can i do a gd for insane?

anyways. hope this helped!

thx for the mod, really appreciate it

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-06-09T04:45:37+00:00

beep boop

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did hitsounds as well

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-06-10T23:30:14+00:00

@Pentori if you want to add your own custom hit sound feel free to do so, if I somewhat like it, I'll prob add it to mine too haha. sorry for late notice

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-06-11T01:09:01+00:00

cool. well heres a zip of the hitsounds i added
http://puu.sh/polxt/1463dee4d2.zip

and heres my updated diff

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio-1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 36776
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 88283
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Hajimari no Sokudo
TitleUnicode:はじまりの速度
Artist:Sangatsu no Phantasia
ArtistUnicode:三月のパンタシア
Creator:B r o k e n
Version:Pentori's Insane
Source:キズナイーバー
Tags:Kiznaiver Spring 2016 TV Size Ed Ending Kyle_Y Pentori
BeatmapID:998193
BeatmapSetID:449396

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"screenshot.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
71,352.941176470588,4,2,1,40,1,0
71,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
11365,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
19129,-100,4,3,1,50,0,0
19835,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
22129,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
22659,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
28306,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
29718,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
29894,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
36776,-90.9090909090909,4,1,1,80,0,1
49482,-90.9090909090909,4,2,2,80,0,1
50718,-90.9090909090909,4,1,1,80,0,1
76306,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
79129,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
81600,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
81953,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
84776,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
87070,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
87688,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 191,0,213
Combo2 : 94,54,231
Combo3 : 251,47,62
Combo4 : 13,201,3

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Kyle Y

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Kyle Y 2016-06-13T13:50:41+00:00

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437,65,82306,2,0,P|393:64|352:85,1,85,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
479,190,82659,1,0,2:0:0:0:
276,101,82835,2,0,B|273:55|294:32|294:32|235:103|158:82,1,212.5,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
144,79,83365,6,0,P|100:70|48:76,1,85,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
150,176,83718,2,0,P|194:185|246:172,1,85,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
393,236,84070,2,0,P|349:227|297:240,1,85,0|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
119,293,84423,2,0,P|163:302|215:289,1,85,8|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
440,178,84776,6,0,P|466:244|397:312,1,170,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
294,148,85306,1,0,2:0:0:0:
441,92,85482,2,0,P|486:102|515:139,1,85,0|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
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224,43,86012,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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-NanoRIPE-

2,022 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-14T05:15:16+00:00

Hi ~ NM request from my q

[General]
looks fine

[Easy]
the hitsound not 100% complete
00:18:776 (4) - hmm make the slider curved to blanket with (3)
00:44:894 (4) - move to x:320 y:72 to avoid overlap with (2)
00:48:776 (2,4) - overlap
01:06:423 (3) - make the sllider curve to blanket with (4)
01:14:894 (2) - ctrl j

*for make the diff looks better try to use curve sliders or repeat sliders ~ because too many straight sliders on this diff

[Normal]
00:17:718 (5) - move to x:256 y:316
00:24:070 (1) - remove NC
00:24:776 - NC
00:55:129 (1) - remove NC and NC at 00:55:835 (3)
01:22:835 (2) - move to x:292 y:244 for better flow

[Hard]
00:42:070 (5) - ctrl h
01:11:894 (1,2) - fix stack

GL~ sorry for short mod

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-06-14T05:49:12+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ NM request from my q

[General]
looks fine

[Easy]
the hitsound not 100% complete
00:18:776 (4) - hmm make the slider curved to blanket with (3) naw, I rather not
00:44:894 (4) - move to x:320 y:72 to avoid overlap with (2) ughh...you probally did something wrong here, x320 y2 is a bad spot
00:48:776 (2,4) - overlap I don't think it's an issue, but I did some adjustments....and did another overlap? haha
01:06:423 (3) - make the sllider curve to blanket with (4) might as well
01:14:894 (2) - ctrl j this is fine

*for make the diff looks better try to use curve sliders or repeat sliders ~ because too many straight sliders on this diff hmmm, sure I'll try to rework some areas

[Normal]
00:17:718 (5) - move to x:256 y:316 didn't move it to that exact spot, but adjusted
00:24:070 (1) - remove NC naw this is fine, main reason for change of NC is that it's for the piano, I don't want to NC it midway
00:24:776 - NC ^
00:55:129 (1) - remove NC and NC at 00:55:835 (3) naw this is fine, well at least to me it is
01:22:835 (2) - move to x:292 y:244 for better flow sure, if you believe this is better

[Hard]
00:42:070 (5) - ctrl h sure, did adjustments
01:11:894 (1,2) - fix stack adjusted

GL~ sorry for short mod

it's fine, ty for the mod, really appreciate it

ncuh

185 posts

Joined July 2013

ncuh 2016-06-20T16:02:33+00:00

NM request from my queue

Pentori's Insane

00:01:041 (4,5) - I'm not sure about mapping this moment for vocal. I guess there's should be just 1/2 slider from white tic
00:01:482 (1) - 1/2 slider + tap better

Insane

00:50:894 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:58:306 (5) - http://i.imgur.com/kTgy3rY.png
01:09:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - http://i.imgur.com/YIsxHQY.jpg
01:27:600 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/Dg6ufN2.png

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-06-21T00:23:45+00:00

@M1k0 no changes, the vocal mapping is fine in the calmer part of the song and the 1/1 slider is to represent the held vocal

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-06-21T01:19:45+00:00

Insane

00:50:894 (1,2) - fix blanket it looks fairy good to me
00:58:306 (5) - http://i.imgur.com/kTgy3rY.png sure
01:09:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - http://i.imgur.com/YIsxHQY.jpg I had it curve at one point, but on a prevous mod I changed it making note 4 go stright into the stream instead of a curve stream, if you understand what i mean haha, I like it like this more, prob won't change it
01:27:600 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/Dg6ufN2.png did a small adjustments, but not on that spot

thx for the mod, really appreciate it

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Foxy Grandpa 2016-06-27T08:35:59+00:00

Hiya! from my queue~

Pentoris Insane

00:00:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3 and 4 feel very off because you start off with the slider in the beginning following the guitar part.

00:24:776 (4,5) - Awkward slider again, Just make 4 a repeating slider.

00:55:835 (4,5,6) - ^^^

I'd say other than these, it looks good!

Insane Mods

00:30:423 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a personal thing but, i would maybe save jumps like these for the direct buildup to the chorus, because the direct buildup as of now just feels not as powerful as it should be. By no means take these out my suggestion is just saying to make the buildup more... Pizazzy :p

01:09:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - I'd say for here make it something like...

Hey i'm the thing he was talking about you should click on me

Love Kiznaiver, Good luck

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-06-28T22:19:33+00:00

FoxyGrandpa wrote:
Insane Mods

00:30:423 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a personal thing but, i would maybe save jumps like these for the direct buildup to the chorus, because the direct buildup as of now just feels not as powerful as it should be. By no means take these out my suggestion is just saying to make the buildup more... Pizazzy :pthis whole area I used it as a build up, is it too much? not entirely sure what you ment

01:09:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - I'd say for here make it something like...doing this would mess up slider note 1 placing, so I'll try something else

Hey i'm the thing he was talking about you should click on me

Love Kiznaiver, Good luck

sorry for late reply, thx for the mod

, i'll consider adjusting some things

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-07-03T16:35:43+00:00

NM From my Weekend Modding Queue

Normal

Normal:
• 00:14:188 (4) - you dont really need to stack it with (1), half overlap is fine
• 00:22:659 (1,2,3) - improve pattern
• 00:39:600 (1,2,3) - make it in line
• 00:42:953 - since you start kiai with following vocal, missing note here
• 01:06:953 - ^
• 01:17:718 (3) - add curve here
• 01:22:835 (2,3,1,2,3) - improve indeed
i cant do much with pattern since its not kind of my style
+ if possible do same start like hard and above diff, its fine if you keep it blank if its easy

Hard

Hard:
• 00:03:776 (4,1) - blanket
• 00:08:012 (4) - straight slider instead
• 00:10:659 (2) - the bass start on blue tick actually, so the end slider stands for nothing imo, circle instead
• 00:21:247 (1) - remove NC?
• 00:22:835 (2) - stack with (3)
• 00:35:894 (5) - add 1 more reverse then replace (4)
• 00:41:012 - move NC here
• 00:48:953 (4) - move the end slider more to right
• 00:50:365 (4,5,6) - make them straight line so the stack is move to (6,1)
• 00:51:247 (2,3,4) - improve pattern
• 00:59:894 (2) - blanket this as well, ten replacing (3) closer to
• 01:01:306 (3) - this supposed to be 1/1 slider
• 01:10:129 (5) - same as before
• 01:13:482 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/pOULM/652f1fdbb1.jpg
• 01:20:012 - missing note
• 01:21:247 - ^

There's my mod, good luck

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-07-05T06:10:03+00:00

eclipselotus wrote:
NM From my Weekend Modding Queue

Normal
Normal:
• 00:14:188 (4) - you dont really need to stack it with (1), half overlap is fine adjusted, I was never too sure if it was fine to overlap this or stack, I didnt want to stack it, but I stacked it becuase it seems like the right thing to do, but if it's fine to not stack it, adjusted it
• 00:22:659 (1,2,3) - improve pattern adjusted the direction of the return slider, the biggest issue is the return silider, not entirely sure what to do
• 00:39:600 (1,2,3) - make it in lineadjusted
• 00:42:953 - since you start kiai with following vocal, missing note here sure
• 01:06:953 - ^I'll consider it, it was just too much of a hassle to make ajustments to notes haha
• 01:17:718 (3) - add curve here sure
• 01:22:835 (2,3,1,2,3) - improve indeed I tired
i cant do much with pattern since its not kind of my style
+ if possible do same start like hard and above diff, its fine if you keep it blank if its easyI'll think about it

Hard
Hard:
• 00:03:776 (4,1) - blanket I rather not
• 00:08:012 (4) - straight slider instead sure
• 00:10:659 (2) - the bass start on blue tick actually, so the end slider stands for nothing imo, circle instead vocal
• 00:21:247 (1) - remove NC? NC every bit white tick
• 00:22:835 (2) - stack with (3) sure
• 00:35:894 (5) - add 1 more reverse then replace (4) confused on what you're saying xD
• 00:41:012 - move NC here NC is already here
• 00:48:953 (4) - move the end slider more to rightadjusted
• 00:50:365 (4,5,6) - make them straight line so the stack is move to (6,1)not entirely sure what you ment, but I think I understand
• 00:51:247 (2,3,4) - improve pattern it looks fine to me
• 00:59:894 (2) - blanket this as well, ten replacing (3) closer to adjusted
• 01:01:306 (3) - this supposed to be 1/1 slider making it a 1/1 would make it ignore the white tick normal hit sound, and I didn't like it let that to I did this
• 01:10:129 (5) - same as before this one is fine
• 01:13:482 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/pOULM/652f1fdbb1.jpg sure, looks good
• 01:20:012 - missing note it's fine, a note seems like a pretty good idea too, I'll consider it
• 01:21:247 - ^^

There's my mod, good luck

thank you very much for the mod, I really appreciate it:D

tatemae

836 posts

Joined November 2014

tatemae 2016-07-10T11:37:13+00:00

yo

pentori

00:18:070 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - The music isnt that intense yet fam :/ as here 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) . I don't see a need for such a large jump here, especially compared to the distance you use on other jumps. It's a bit inconsistent that you use jumps here, but nowhere else in the intro. This jump actually makes it really hard to go into that stream, at least imo

insane

00:02:718 (7,1) - Maybe add more distance between these 2 since it would make them look better imo. Listen music again.
00:04:129 (5,1) - ^
00:05:894 (2) - ^ and try changing it to 1/2 slider, like this:00:02:894 (1,1) -
00:20:894 (3,1) - too small distance between sliders imo
00:56:541 (1,3,4,8) - i dont like this overlaps
01:02:188 (1) - cntrl+g?
01:23:365 (1) - 180°

ky insane

00:47:012 (2,1,2) - could you please avoid such overlapping
01:04:306 (3,1) - same

Good luck boiz~

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-07-11T08:02:30+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
yo

insane
00:02:718 (7,1) - Maybe add more distance between these 2 since it would make them look better imo. Listen music again.it's good as it is
00:04:129 (5,1) - ^ ^
00:05:894 (2) - ^ and try changing it to 1/2 slider, like this:00:02:894 (1,1) - I personally like the back track jump here
00:20:894 (3,1) - too small distance between sliders imo adjusted
00:56:541 (1,3,4,8) - i dont like this overlaps it's fine, I like doing back and forth notes same distance/bigger/smaller, I'll try to clean it up more
01:02:188 (1) - cntrl+g? sure, I'll give this a try, doing this almost makes it look like a back track, suits my taste
01:23:365 (1) - 180°this is fine

thx for the mod, really appreciate it

_IxApplePie_

246 posts

Joined November 2013

_IxApplePie_ 2016-07-11T14:11:57+00:00

Oh my fudge. This is some niice song <3
Okok, hi.
Nm from my WQ

Insane

00:15:247 (6) - maybe straight slider? any distance you want lol [url]puu.sh/pXTQE/afafb9b1c8.jpg[/url]
00:19:835 (1,2) - blanket
00:26:012 (3) - straight slider?
00:41:718 (4) - ^
00:45:423 (2) - overlap with 00:44:718 (5) - head?
00:46:659 (1,2) - pls give some other shapes than this /.\
00:55:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really messy, fix it if you could
01:05:894 (5,6,3) - imo the flow will be better like this
http://puu.sh/pXU8G/eadd0d7369.jpg
http://puu.sh/pXU9B/046f8b0f45.jpg

place your 01:05:894 (5) - following the flow of 01:05:365 (2,3,4), then 01:06:247 (6) - could overlap with 01:06:600 (2) and place 01:06:776 (3) as a "connector" for 01:06:600 (2,4) :")
01:24:247 (5) - this feels out of place imo, maybe do some better jumps for 01:24:247 (5)

Ky

00:47:188 (3) - you don't need this imo, just copy paste 00:47:012 (2) - beat for this.

Normal

01:25:659 (3,4,5,6) - for the back part i think this would be better as it's ending

And I don't think they can hit continuously for that long lol

GL~!

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-07-12T07:06:57+00:00

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
Oh my fudge. This is some niice song <3 nice song with poor mapper? :/
Okok, hi.
Nm from my WQ
Insane
00:15:247 (6) - maybe straight slider? any distance you want lol [url]puu.sh/pXTQE/afafb9b1c8.jpg[/url] sure, looks good
00:19:835 (1,2) - blanket loos good to me now
00:26:012 (3) - straight slider? yah, might as well, from the slider to note 4 isn't even a nice curve into it, might as make this straight
00:41:718 (4) - ^ it's fine, although it does look a bit weird, I'll consider it
00:45:423 (2) - overlap with 00:44:718 (5) - head? you mean the stack? it is suppose to be like this
00:46:659 (1,2) - pls give some other shapes than this /.\ adjusted, / \ shape does seem out of place
00:55:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really messy, fix it if you could ok. I'll adjust some notes, but overall I do like it going back and froth same/different distance
01:05:894 (5,6,3) - imo the flow will be better like this leaving this as it is, it suits my taste of having a backtrack note with bigger distance, but if it's an issue I'll change it
http://puu.sh/pXU8G/eadd0d7369.jpg
http://puu.sh/pXU9B/046f8b0f45.jpg

place your 01:05:894 (5) - following the flow of 01:05:365 (2,3,4), then 01:06:247 (6) - could overlap with 01:06:600 (2) and place 01:06:776 (3) as a "connector" for 01:06:600 (2,4) :")
01:24:247 (5) - this feels out of place imo, maybe do some better jumps for 01:24:247 (5)I believe it's fine, I might make it same as 01:22:482 (2,3,4,5) - if ppls see it as an issue

Normal
01:25:659 (3,4,5,6) - for the back part i think this would be better as it's endingsure

And I don't think they can hit continuously for that long lol

GL~!

thank you very much for the mod, I really appreciate it

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2016-07-17T18:42:28+00:00

yo, i think i saw this in modreqs once upon a time and it seems your still looking for mods
i only modded the 2 highest diffs. hope it helps

SPOILER

Pentori's Insane

00:02:894 (1) - morespacing it is the downbeat
00:04:306 (1) - ^
00:14:718 (2,3,1) - this isnt a triple
00:18:423 (1) - 1/2 slider instead?
00:20:188 - start note here
00:11:718 (2,3,4,5) - copy the idea you got here over at 00:21:247 (1,2,3,4) - were you have the vocals with higher spacing
00:28:306 (1) - more spacing?
00:35:541 (3) - dont end this on the white tick so change to something like http://puu.sh/q4SL2/9cee090608.jpg 1 is at 00:35:365 (1) -

Insane

00:08:541 (1,2,3) - i dont get why you suddenly follow vocals here
00:15:953 - start note here
00:24:600 - ^
00:36:070 (8) - youve got this slider to show the change in the music but its happening at 00:36:247 - so move it over there and at 00:36:423 (9) - the stream should still be mapped not the vocal
00:36:776 (1) - slider here
01:09:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - this doesnt look good imo, just make it straight or make it curvier
01:10:482 - kick slider here
01:19:129 (1,2) - i dont get why your only mapping some of the vocals then stopping either map it all or not at all
01:27:600 (1) - dont like how this looks. maybe more like this? http://puu.sh/q4Tty/7a5a9910b4.jpg i had to move the stream up a bit to make it fit.

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-07-18T04:17:22+00:00

ikorza wrote:
yo, i think i saw this in modreqs once upon a time and it seems your still looking for mods :O, rarely ever get mods from #modreq haha
i only modded the 2 highest diffs. hope it helps

Insane

00:08:541 (1,2,3) - i dont get why you suddenly follow vocals here been following vocal like @ 00:06:247 (4) -
00:15:953 - start note here the 1/1 is for the entire slider sound, although I can add a note 00:16:129 piano hit sound
00:24:600 - ^ sliders all for piano
00:36:070 (8) - youve got this slider to show the change in the music but its happening at 00:36:247 - so move it over there and at 00:36:423 (9) - the stream should still be mapped not the vocal I just removed the 1.20 instead, Keeping slider for vocal
00:36:776 (1) - slider here adjusted
01:09:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - this doesnt look good imo, just make it straight or make it curvier did an adjustment
01:10:482 - kick slider here hmmm...maybe, I'm just too lazy to make adjustments haha
01:19:129 (1,2) - i dont get why your only mapping some of the vocals then stopping either map it all or not at all did an adjustment
01:27:600 (1) - dont like how this looks. maybe more like this? http://puu.sh/q4Tty/7a5a9910b4.jpg i had to move the stream up a bit to make it fit.I think it's fine, well its more like I'm just too lazy to try to adjust it te he xD

tyvm for the mod, really appreciate it

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-07-19T07:26:14+00:00

FoxyGrandpa wrote:
00:00:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3 and 4 feel very off because you start off with the slider in the beginning following the guitar part. ya i agree. made it a slider

00:24:776 (4,5) - Awkward slider again, Just make 4 a repeating slider. heres its fine becos music has picked up

00:55:835 (4,5,6) - ^^^ ^

I'd say other than these, it looks good!

SherryCherry wrote:
00:18:070 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - The music isnt that intense yet fam :/ as here 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) . I don't see a need for such a large jump here, especially compared to the distance you use on other jumps. It's a bit inconsistent that you use jumps here, but nowhere else in the intro. This jump actually makes it really hard to go into that stream, at least imo tweaked distances a bit

ikorza wrote:
00:02:894 (1) - morespacing it is the downbeat na its stacked + calmer part of song
00:04:306 (1) - ^ there is already enough spacing and its almost out of grid if i keep going
00:14:718 (2,3,1) - this isnt a triple the piano??
00:18:423 (1) - 1/2 slider instead? no ._. i'm mapping drums
00:20:188 - start note here 1/1 for section intro
00:11:718 (2,3,4,5) - copy the idea you got here over at 00:21:247 (1,2,3,4) - were you have the vocals with higher spacing ok
00:28:306 (1) - more spacing? leading into a slower section
00:35:541 (3) - dont end this on the white tick so change to something like http://puu.sh/q4SL2/9cee090608.jpg 1 is at 00:35:365 (1) - uh, i prefer the spinner tbh

thanks

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:はじまりの速度
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ArtistUnicode:三月のパンタシア
Creator:B r o k e n
Version:Pentori's Insane
Source:キズナイーバー
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Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-07-27T12:32:12+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
ky insane
00:47:012 (2,1,2) - could you please avoid such overlapping
01:04:306 (3,1) - same
Good luck boiz~
remain atm, I don't think this overlapping affect playing.

_IxApplePie_ wrote:
Ky
00:47:188 (3) - you don't need this imo, just copy paste 00:47:012 (2) - beat for this.
remain, they are in different snapping.

Could you mind to send me a message when I have modding? because I seldom check if there is new modding.

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-07-27T22:49:49+00:00

Could you mind to send me a message when I have modding? because I seldom check if there is new modding.

Sir, yes sir, I'll send you a message when theirs at least 2 mods, sorry for getting mods slowly xD

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2016-07-28T22:10:36+00:00

PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:

Pentori's Insane

00:10:659 (1,2,3) - I don't get why you skip 00:10:923 but then map 00:11:276 (3) - when there's no real beat there in the song.
00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Super weird rhythm for playing a basic drumroll. This will be played as triple -> hold -> click blue tick. Triples feel weird when they end on a red tick because it's not fitting with the quarter note rhythm. And starting a repeat slider on a blue tick is really weird because the basic beat pattern of a song puts emphasis on white and red ticks, not blue ticks. Highly recommend you change this.
01:13:747 (2) - idk if this vocal slider fits because there's a vocal beat on the white tick still.

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Insane

The spacing of the jump patterns in your intro is the same as the spacing of the jump patterns in your kiai. I don't think this fits at all because the intro is so quiet. In fact most of the superquiet intro is spaced higher than everything after 00:11:365 (1) - , which really doesn't make sense.
00:54:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty sure you want this to be a straight line w/ uniform ds? It looks like this right now though.
01:04:835 (6,7,1) - You should move this further away from 01:04:482 (5) - , or else people will complain about blankets :v
01:20:365 (4,5,6) - You can't really use a triple here because these piano keys have no snap (and there are 4 of them). The gd'ers got around this by using a repeat slider. (also applies to Hard diff)

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Ky's Insane

00:36:247 (5) - ? there's nothing here that calls for this 1/8 repeat.. it'd be better if you just mapped out the rest of the drums w/ like a 1/4 repeat or something.
01:09:953 (1,2,3) - nice

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Easy

Maybe add a break after the kiai, so you don't have 2 whole measures of hp drain.

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-07-29T07:13:16+00:00

UndeadCapulet wrote:
PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:
Pentori's Insane
00:10:659 (1,2,3) - I don't get why you skip 00:10:923 but then map 00:11:276 (3) - when there's no real beat there in the song. slight overmap to place emphasis on downbeat
00:35:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Super weird rhythm for playing a basic drumroll. This will be played as triple -> hold -> click blue tick. Triples feel weird when they end on a red tick because it's not fitting with the quarter note rhythm. And starting a repeat slider on a blue tick is really weird because the basic beat pattern of a song puts emphasis on white and red ticks, not blue ticks. Highly recommend you change this. ya i agree. made it work better with 1/4
01:13:747 (2) - idk if this vocal slider fits because there's a vocal beat on the white tick still. made it a triplet instead

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B r o k e n 2016-07-29T22:16:21+00:00

UndeadCapulet wrote:
PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:

Insane
The spacing of the jump patterns in your intro is the same as the spacing of the jump patterns in your kiai. I don't think this fits at all because the intro is so quiet. In fact most of the superquiet intro is spaced higher than everything after 00:11:365 (1) - , which really doesn't make sense. reduced distances for most notes by .2, left pattern as it is
00:54:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty sure you want this to be a straight line w/ uniform ds? It looks like this right now though. adjusted, stright line, and 1.2 distance
01:04:835 (6,7,1) - You should move this further away from 01:04:482 (5) - , or else people will complain about blankets :v adjusted
01:20:365 (4,5,6) - You can't really use a triple here because these piano keys have no snap (and there are 4 of them). The gd'ers got around this by using a repeat slider.adjusted, snap 1/8 return slider with single note like Ky (also applies to Hard diff)adjusted to like Pentori's
Easy
Maybe add a break after the kiai, so you don't have 2 whole measures of hp drain. adjusted

thank you very much for the mod, really appreciate it

Eni

1,437 posts

Joined May 2013

Eni 2016-07-30T20:58:46+00:00

Hi m4m

[General]

Video is missing in Pentori's diff
Instead of having three difficulties named "Insane", try using a different name for the hardest difficulty that relates to the song or anime.
All difficulties by the mapset creator should start and end at the same time.
Similar to this map, please do not use Kyle Y as a tag. Since tags are separated by spaces, the "Y" makes no practical sense since there is already a "Y" in kyle. As such, a better tag would be KyleY.

[Easy]

00:16:306 (4,3) - Having these objects touch but not stack kind of plays bad, especially since the overlap from the hit will be in a different position than that of the next object. I suggest that you move circle 3 somewhere else instead of blanketing it, as slider 4's track in 00:17:718 (2,3,4) - is really close to the circle. Perfectly playable, but aesthetics wise this looks a bit odd. Additionally, at 00:19:129 - there is a loud sound that the player should tap to. Using a repeat on 00:18:776 (4) - defeats this purpose. Try a circle at 00:18:776 - and a slider at 00:19:129 - to make it play better.
00:21:247 (3,4,1) - Visually wise, these objects have the same spacing but their horizontal distance between each other varies, making it look somewhat off. Increase the horizontal distance between 00:21:953 (4) - and 00:22:659 (1) -.
00:37:482 (2,4) - Avoid having these slider heads touch each other, especially in the lowest difficulty. Using the same y-coordinate here does not improve aesthetics. It should be an easy fix by moving 00:38:894 (4) - slightly to the left and adjusting the other objects accordingly.
00:43:129 (2,4) - This is a no-go. Your slider tail is touching circle 4. Same for the slider tail of 3 and the slider head of 2 at 00:43:835 (3,2) -. Do something like this instead:

~
01:13:482 (1,2,1) - This pattern feels kind of off since 01:16:306 (1) - is positioned strangely at the center when nothing else has been like this prior. Try using a pattern like this instead for more flow:

~

[Normal]

Overall you need to fix the overlaps that occur throughout the map. Parts like 00:12:776 (1,3) - and 00:14:188 (4,1) - are not very fun to play and you can space these out better. There is a lot of extra space available to map that prevents an overlap like this from occurring. Use this to your advantage. Please note that although I only listed two timestamps, you should check your overlaps for the entire difficulty.
00:55:835 (3) - This is the first time you use a sharp slider, almost a minute into the song. This pattern does not appear anywhere else, either. There is not a strong emphasis here, so I strongly suggest that you make it a curved or straight slider instead for consistency.

[Hard]

00:03:776 (4,1,2) - You should increase the spacing here to be consistent with 00:02:365 (4,5) - and to also prevent the circle head from blobbing into the slider track.
00:35:188 (5,1,2,3,4) - Try to make this pattern simpler. As it stands, this pattern does not fit the rest of the map. Even though this is a critical part of the song, you can make the pattern much simpler without sacrificing difficulty.
01:00:423 (3,3) - Similar to what I said about the other slider heads. These should not be touching each other. As you map more, you should start to recognize these mistakes and eventually get better at it.
01:16:306 (1,3) - The slider tail is hidden behind the slider track of 1. You must fix this as it's outright doesn't fit the "Hard" difficulty and may be DQ'able when the mapset is nominated.

[Ky's Insane]

Plays fine to me. Good job.

[Insane]

00:31:482 (3,4,5) - Anti-jump doesn't fit here; rather, it's awkward to play since this is the beginning of the emphasis in the song. Increase the spacing similar to how you did it for the other parts.
Overall some objects could be placed better like 00:38:188 (1,4) - and 00:36:776 (1,3) - (these should really be the same slider).
00:59:365 - During the second part of the chorus you significantly increase the spacing and difficulty, even though it's basically the same rhythm. You should adjust 00:36:776 - to match the patterns that you have in the second part accordingly. One example of an inconsistency in this difficulty is that you use a jump at 01:02:012 (6,1) - but not at 00:39:247 (5,1) - even though it's the same vocal.
01:27:600 (1) - This slider could be better. Look at the inside edges and you can see that the shape is a bit too sharp on the inside.

[Pentori's Insane]

Looks like the video got removed from this diff somehow. It needs to be fixed ASAP if you want to rank this!
Only major problem I found is that 00:35:541 (3) - has two repeats but 00:35:894 (4) - only has one. Even if you did this intentionally, this does not play very well as both sliders are similar in design and the player would expect to hold the same length for each slider. Is there any reason why you didn't map 00:36:159 -?

Good luck!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-07-31T00:48:18+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
Hi m4m
[Pentori's Insane]
Looks like the video got removed from this diff somehow. It needs to be fixed ASAP if you want to rank this! fix this for me pls
Only major problem I found is that 00:35:541 (3) - has two repeats but 00:35:894 (4) - only has one. Even if you did this intentionally, this does not play very well as both sliders are similar in design and the player would expect to hold the same length for each slider. Is there any reason why you didn't map 00:36:159 -? hm well i originally left out 00:36:159 - because there is no drum there but i guess i'll add it for the sake of playability
Good luck!

thanks

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B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

B r o k e n 2016-08-05T23:49:23+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
Hi m4m I don't remember requesting any m4m, I'll take a look at your maps when I can, I doubt I'll be able to help tho :/,sorry I took a lot longer then I should had to reply to the mod haha,

[General]
Video is missing in Pentori's diff fixed
Instead of having three difficulties named "Insane", try using a different name for the hardest difficulty that relates to the song or anime. maybe, I'll let Pentori decide on that his difficulty
All difficulties by the mapset creator should start and end at the same time. really? well if that's the case I'll go with 1:28
Similar to this map, please do not use Kyle Y as a tag. Since tags are separated by spaces, the "Y" makes no practical sense since there is already a "Y" in kyle. As such, a better tag would be KyleY.
I'll let him decide how he wants his tag to be

[Easy]
00:16:306 (4,3) - Having these objects touch but not stack kind of plays bad, especially since the overlap from the hit will be in a different position than that of the next object. I suggest that you move circle 3 somewhere else instead of blanketing it, as slider 4's track in 00:17:718 (2,3,4) - is really close to the circle. Perfectly playable, but aesthetics wise this looks a bit odd. Additionally, at 00:19:129 - there is a loud sound that the player should tap to. Using a repeat on 00:18:776 (4) - defeats this purpose. Try a circle at 00:18:776 - and a slider at 00:19:129 - to make it play better. adjusted overlap and change the mention area into slider + slider, to avoid 2 single notes in a row
00:21:247 (3,4,1) - Visually wise, these objects have the same spacing but their horizontal distance between each other varies, making it look somewhat off. Increase the horizontal distance between 00:21:953 (4) - and 00:22:659 (1) -.adjusted
00:37:482 (2,4) - Avoid having these slider heads touch each other, especially in the lowest difficulty. Using the same y-coordinate here does not improve aesthetics. It should be an easy fix by moving 00:38:894 (4) - slightly to the left and adjusting the other objects accordingly. did a different adjustment
00:43:129 (2,4) - This is a no-go. Your slider tail is touching circle 4. Same for the slider tail of 3 and the slider head of 2 at 00:43:835 (3,2) -. Do something like this instead: adjusted

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01:13:482 (1,2,1) - This pattern feels kind of off since 01:16:306 (1) - is positioned strangely at the center when nothing else has been like this prior. Try using a pattern like this instead for more flow: adjusted

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[Normal]
Overall you need to fix the overlaps that occur throughout the map. Parts like 00:12:776 (1,3) - and 00:14:188 (4,1) - are not very fun to play and you can space these out better. There is a lot of extra space available to map that prevents an overlap like this from occurring. Use this to your advantage. Please note that although I only listed two timestamps, you should check your overlaps for the entire difficulty. adjusted a lot of overlaps that I believe were an issue
00:55:835 (3) - This is the first time you use a sharp slider, almost a minute into the song. This pattern does not appear anywhere else, either. There is not a strong emphasis here, so I strongly suggest that you make it a curved or straight slider instead for consistency. adjusted
[Hard]
00:03:776 (4,1,2) - You should increase the spacing here to be consistent with 00:02:365 (4,5) - and to also prevent the circle head from blobbing into the slider track.naw, the intro with small same distance is good as it is
00:35:188 (5,1,2,3,4) - Try to make this pattern simpler. As it stands, this pattern does not fit the rest of the map. Even though this is a critical part of the song, you can make the pattern much simpler without sacrificing difficulty. removed the single note 1 and 2 extended a kickslider
01:00:423 (3,3) - Similar to what I said about the other slider heads. These should not be touching each other. As you map more, you should start to recognize these mistakes and eventually get better at it. adjusted
01:16:306 (1,3) - The slider tail is hidden behind the slider track of 1. You must fix this as it's outright doesn't fit the "Hard" difficulty and may be DQ'able when the mapset is nominated.I always thought about it myself too, if this will be an issue or not too, not so sure
[Insane]
00:31:482 (3,4,5) - Anti-jump doesn't fit here; rather, it's awkward to play since this is the beginning of the emphasis in the song. Increase the spacing similar to how you did it for the other parts. what I wanted to do in between 00:30:423 (2) - to 00:31:835 (5) - was 3 note small distance into 3 note big distance into 4 5 smaller distance, to make it feel a bit interesting to play, unless just adding more distance makes it better for note 4 and 5, I'll think about it small->bigger jumps->back into small-> then the rest of the afterwards notes all bigger
Overall some objects could be placed better like 00:38:188 (1,4) - and 00:36:776 (1,3) - (these should really be the same slider).
00:59:365 - During the second part of the chorus you significantly increase the spacing and difficulty, even though it's basically the same rhythm. You should adjust 00:36:776 - to match the patterns that you have in the second part accordingly. One example of an inconsistency in this difficulty is that you use a jump at 01:02:012 (6,1) - but not at 00:39:247 (5,1) - even though it's the same vocal. adjusted 00:39:247 (5,1) will rework some area's distance
01:27:600 (1) - This slider could be better. Look at the inside edges and you can see that the shape is a bit too sharp on the inside.ughh.... well removed slider added single note with spin forget the slider now haha
Good luck!

thank you for the mod, I really appreciate it

Last edited by B r o k e n 2016-08-11T06:56:50+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-08-10T14:43:05+00:00

UndeadCapulet wrote:
PANIC QUEUE MOD #9:
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Ky's Insane
00:36:247 (5) - ? there's nothing here that calls for this 1/8 repeat.. it'd be better if you just mapped out the rest of the drums w/ like a 1/4 repeat or something. remain, please listen carefully in 25% then you will here 1/8 sound.
01:09:953 (1,2,3) - nice
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Weriko

182 posts

Joined December 2015

Weriko 2016-08-18T03:42:37+00:00

Hey :p

Mod from queue

Pentori's Insane

00:27:423 (3,4,5,7) - i think you could stack this

00:28:306 (1,1) - stack?

00:42:953 (2,5) - stackkkkk????

..... i think thats all.... everything is perfect :p imo

ky's insane

00:15:247 (6,1) - Blanket police

00:18:070 (4,1) - non important overlap

00:36:247 (5) - i think this is either 1/6 or doesnt exist..... im not sure

00:47:188 (3) - im not sure if 1/6

...

SORRY!!!! if this doesnt help at all ;-;

your map was already good :p

Good luck!!!!

love this song :p

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-08-18T04:34:05+00:00

no changes sorry, but thanks for taking a look!
those overlaps are all intentional :p

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2016-09-03T04:51:11+00:00

Hi

Just gonna point out important stuffs so not to enlarge the modpost of repeating issues xdd
[- -

General - -]

- The Hard diff has it's widescreen support unchecked, while the rest of the diffs are checked tbh. It's the only one tho.
- Well spread and seems fine here. Gj!

[- -

Easy - -]

00:26:188 (2,3) - Optional objective: You could at least curve one of these sliders since flowing is quite linear imo, well if only that's what you want.
00:31:835 (4) - Well, probably the same thing as above. But I suggest this one should do a little curve, or maybe a blanket idk. If applied, it might improve structure and aesthetics in the same time. So yeah, just polishing~
01:16:306 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds a little empty without at least a few whistles. For consistency, try to do the same hitsounding as the Hard/Insane on this diff to fill them.
01:27:953 (1) - For a short spinner on a 170bpm on easy diffs, I don't think this is highly recommended. And I'm pretty sure it's barely noticeable over beginners to spin that quick tho. I prefer removing 01:27:600 (1) - and start the spinner from there.

[- -

Hard - -]

00:12:070 (2,3,4) - I do like the stacking when circle (3) is on the head of slider (4) instead. It probably has stronger emphasis imo which fits better than the current. It wouldn't hurt the playstyle too, so dw.
00:17:012 (1,5) - The overlap here is a little awkward. Basically it's not very noticeable in gameplay, but it can be seen if it's being looked at very deep. How about moving it more right? But if you kinda dislike moving things out completely, try not to let slider (5)'s tail touch slider (1)'s head. Moving right or blending in sliders won't hurt aesthetics at all tbh.
00:22:835 (2,3,4) - Nearly the same thing as 00:12:070 (2,3,4) -, according to the stacking on 00:23:541 (5,6) - . Try to create a little pattern consistency, it'd improve pretty much a lot.
00:43:659 (1,2) - The rhythm you made previously were better until here. I prefer making a Ctrl + G on these two notes to follow the track more correctly. Not actually the best one but it suits more than the current.
01:01:659 - Well, at least try filling this part up for the rhythm composition with a little consistent on 00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) -. And speaking about rhythm, it's literally inconsistent removing out that reverse arrow on the slider. Perhaps a circle wouldn't hurt here as well, as long as it's filled for that.
01:20:365 (3) - Why not add an NC here? HP6 on hard diffs is probably high imo, so adding some more NCs on every measure can help players not to direct-fail on emptiness.

Probably that's all ;p
Good Luck~

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