Hoaprox - I Miss U · forum

Shortthu

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-07-04T06:53:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 Tháng Hai 2017 at 15:28:46

Artist: Hoaprox
Title: I Miss U
Tags: LOV3 Diversity Tech Beat Records Vietnamese Progressive House Shamwow
BPM: 128
Filesize: 6656kb
Play Time: 01:07
Difficulties Available:

LOV3 (3,09 stars, 114 notes)
Normal (1,72 stars, 354 notes)
Shamwow's Hard (2,33 stars, 509 notes)

Download: Hoaprox - I Miss U
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1

Normal by me: Done
Hard by Shamwow: Done
LOV3 by me: Remap

MODDERS

Last edited by Shortthu 2017-02-03T08:29:08+00:00, edited 106 times in total.

[ Shamwow ]

239 posts

Joined January 2014

[ Shamwow ] 2016-08-16T01:47:35+00:00

GD is done! (hope i did this right lol)

here

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 126093
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 28573,47323,124198
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:I MISS U
TitleUnicode:I MISS U
Artist:Hoaprox
ArtistUnicode:Hoaprox
Creator:Shortthu
Version:Dave's Hard
Source:LOV3 EP
Tags:Hoaprox, LOV3, Diversity
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.09999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-08-20T09:44:25+00:00

Cần giúp gì thì hỏi nhé xd

Mình cần thêm nhiều mapper việt trong circle của mình :3

Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-20T13:06:26+00:00

Asaiga wrote:
Cần giúp gì thì hỏi nhé xd

Mình cần thêm nhiều mapper việt trong circle của mình :3

cảm ơn bác

))
cơ mà bác mod map này được không ạ

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-08-20T17:12:37+00:00

thật sự thì đã xem qua rồi... mà mod 1 cái thì hơi bị... dài xD
tại vì khá là nhiều lỗi cơ bản

Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-21T03:17:11+00:00

Asaiga wrote:
thật sự thì đã xem qua rồi... mà mod 1 cái thì hơi bị... dài xD
tại vì khá là nhiều lỗi cơ bản

(edited)

Last edited by Shortthu 2016-10-24T10:07:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Astarte

303 posts

Joined December 2014

Astarte 2016-08-23T00:45:52+00:00

Hi! from Turtle's queue

Disclaimer

Have to access laptop now so doing this in computer lab, and ofc no unikey. So I'm gonna mod in English

General

Offset should be around 468. Change this and resnap control points (+ kiai)
Obey DS. Including Hard
Silence sliderslide
This could qualify to be a marathon. So you just need 1 diff. Otherwise, I suggest adding an insane.
Source is nothing. LOV3 EP goes into tags.

Normal

Should be a basic mod since you'll need to remap. Just point out somethings to consider and avoid.

The Basics (since you're a new mapper):
1. Generally for easier diff, NC every 00:13:593 (3) - 1st and 00:17:343 (1) - 3rd big white ticks (start and mid measure that is)
2. Usually press on a strong beat, not release it... ex: 02:13:593 -
3. KEEP THE SAME DS AND OBEY IT... ex: 00:17:343 (1) - and 00:19:218 (4) - A must for E and N. N can stack though
4. Maintain consistency for easier diffs. If music is the same, keep the same pattern. ex: if you use 00:28:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern, then 00:32:343 (1) - this should also be the same. Generally remap this diff and follow consistency
5. Map important notes ex: 01:15:702 - and 01:21:093 -
6. Before doing the above ^, learn about polarity might help a bit with your remap since that's a 1/2 beat t/55282
7. And yea, pay attention to aesthetics. Do blankets more often...
00:30:703 (1) - repeat sliders usually should repeat once, otherwise it feels bad
00:39:375 (1) - why here??? move to 00:43:593 - and map the part. keep same spinner length tho
01:31:171 (1) - haiz can't read this, move somewhere else or stack on 2
01:31:875 (3) - for short sliders, don't bend too much or they look crappy
00:25:781 (7) - ugly shape
01:34:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - see what happen if you don't obey DS? can't read what on earth is going on here
02:05:625 (1) - NC all of the sudden why? ._.
03:57:187 (8,1) - make a good overlap, or none at all
04:52:499 - remember to map important notes, add circle here

Okay so some final thoughts, not bad for a beginner. This is just a basic mod and you need to go over the entire map changing what could be the same problem I mentioned. Ofc I can't mention everything since that'd be long, tedious, and tiring.
You need to do more mapping and learn more patterns from experienced mappers. This diff has bad flow everywhere. Learn about flow and become familiarize with it before remapping https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 | t/86329

Hard

So why did you make the small first part to have multiplier 1.5x while everywhere else is 1.0x, including the kiai? Is there a good reason for that? Also, a change from 1.5x to 1.0x is pretty big for a hard, and your hard isn't that hard... It's more like an advanced instead.
You kept SV 1.1, same as normal. Again, why? The thing that bugged me though, is that the movement between objects is a bit faster than the slider speed. Distance between them is small so it might not be much noticeable to you. That said, the small distance between them, is not something fitting for a hard. I suggest you increase SV to something like 1.4 throughout, with BPM multiplier 1.0x. Then you can increase to BPM multiplier 1.1x - 1.3x for parts like kiai for emphasis. Otherwise, your diff is kinda nonsensical now, fast in the tiny bit of the beginning then slow for the rest.

00:17:109 (9) - so why used 1/6 beats??? pretty sure this part doesn't have 1/6 beats. Same throughout
00:32:109 (9) - this is the exact same but you used 1/4... what? -_-
00:15:468 (5) - I suggest you NC every measure, your combos are pretty long
00:32:109 (9) - circle instead
01:03:241 (2,3,4,5,6) - these seems to not snapped to the music, listen carefully. maybe use 1/8 or 1/12 divisor
03:09:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:28:593 (1,1) - so why only these two are 1 beats, while the entire parts only has 1/2 sliders?
01:59:531 (4,6) - ^ you might want to listen to all piano parts again...
01:32:343 - circle here and NC it for emphasis
01:39:609 (1) - I suggest you make this a circle. then a 1/2 non-repeat slider starts at 01:39:843 - to keep your consistency. Same throughout
If this is a hard, then I suggest adding small streams since it's an upbeat song. 01:50:625 (8) - this would be a good example
02:08:671 (7) - bad idea to blanket a stacked note... either move this somewhere else, or stack it at sliderend. same throughout your map
02:42:773 (3,4) - stack them at sliderend or smaller spacing.
02:49:218 (1) - end here 02:50:858 - I don't like this spinner since you can map this part. A spinner 02:51:093 - that ends 02:54:843 - is better
04:02:812 (2) - bending short sliders too much is just ugly as...
04:12:421 - map the vocals here

That'd be all from me. You seem to be re using pattern mostly. So this'll do.

GL
Happy mapping & learning

Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-23T05:55:12+00:00

Astarte wrote:

Hi! from Turtle's queue

Disclaimer
Have to access laptop now so doing this in computer lab, and ofc no unikey. So I'm gonna mod in English

General
Offset should be around 468. Change this and resnap control points (+ kiai)
Obey DS. Including Hard
Silence sliderslide
This could qualify to be a marathon. So you just need 1 diff. Otherwise, I suggest adding an insane.
Source is nothing. LOV3 EP goes into tags.
Normal
Should be a basic mod since you'll need to remap. Just point out somethings to consider and avoid.
The Basics (since you're a new mapper):
Generally for easier diff, NC every 00:13:593 (3) - 1st and 00:17:343 (1) - 3rd big white ticks (start and mid measure that is)
Usually press on a strong beat, not release it... ex: 02:13:593 -
KEEP THE SAME DS AND OBEY IT... ex: 00:17:343 (1) - and 00:19:218 (4) - A must for E and N. N can stack though
Maintain consistency for easier diffs. If music is the same, keep the same pattern. ex: if you use 00:28:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern, then 00:32:343 (1) - this should also be the same. Generally remap this diff and follow consistency
Map important notes ex: 01:15:702 - and 01:21:093 -
Before doing the above ^, learn about polarity might help a bit with your remap since that's a 1/2 beat t/55282
And yea, pay attention to aesthetics. Do blankets more often...
00:30:703 (1) - repeat sliders usually should repeat once, otherwise it feels bad
00:39:375 (1) - why here??? move to 00:43:593 - and map the part. keep same spinner length tho
01:31:171 (1) - haiz can't read this, move somewhere else or stack on 2
01:31:875 (3) - for short sliders, don't bend too much or they look crappy
00:25:781 (7) - ugly shape
01:34:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - see what happen if you don't obey DS? can't read what on earth is going on here
02:05:625 (1) - NC all of the sudden why? ._.
03:57:187 (8,1) - make a good overlap, or none at all
04:52:499 - remember to map important notes, add circle here
Okay so some final thoughts, not bad for a beginner. This is just a basic mod and you need to go over the entire map changing what could be the same problem I mentioned. Ofc I can't mention everything since that'd be long, tedious, and tiring.
You need to do more mapping and learn more patterns from experienced mappers. This diff has bad flow everywhere. Learn about flow and become familiarize with it before remapping https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 | t/86329
Hard
So why did you make the small first part to have multiplier 1.5x while everywhere else is 1.0x, including the kiai? Is there a good reason for that? Also, a change from 1.5x to 1.0x is pretty big for a hard, and your hard isn't that hard... It's more like an advanced instead.
You kept SV 1.1, same as normal. Again, why? The thing that bugged me though, is that the movement between objects is a bit faster than the slider speed. Distance between them is small so it might not be much noticeable to you. That said, the small distance between them, is not something fitting for a hard. I suggest you increase SV to something like 1.4 throughout, with BPM multiplier 1.0x. Then you can increase to BPM multiplier 1.1x - 1.3x for parts like kiai for emphasis. Otherwise, your diff is kinda nonsensical now, fast in the tiny bit of the beginning then slow for the rest.
00:17:109 (9) - so why used 1/6 beats??? pretty sure this part doesn't have 1/6 beats. Same throughout
00:32:109 (9) - this is the exact same but you used 1/4... what? -_-
00:15:468 (5) - I suggest you NC every measure, your combos are pretty long
00:32:109 (9) - circle instead
01:03:241 (2,3,4,5,6) - these seems to not snapped to the music, listen carefully. maybe use 1/8 or 1/12 divisor
03:09:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:28:593 (1,1) - so why only these two are 1 beats, while the entire parts only has 1/2 sliders?
01:59:531 (4,6) - ^ you might want to listen to all piano parts again...
01:32:343 - circle here and NC it for emphasis
01:39:609 (1) - I suggest you make this a circle. then a 1/2 non-repeat slider starts at 01:39:843 - to keep your consistency. Same throughout
If this is a hard, then I suggest adding small streams since it's an upbeat song. 01:50:625 (8) - this would be a good example
02:08:671 (7) - bad idea to blanket a stacked note... either move this somewhere else, or stack it at sliderend. same throughout your map
02:42:773 (3,4) - stack them at sliderend or smaller spacing.
02:49:218 (1) - end here 02:50:858 - I don't like this spinner since you can map this part. A spinner 02:51:093 - that ends 02:54:843 - is better
04:02:812 (2) - bending short sliders too much is just ugly as...
04:12:421 - map the vocals here
That'd be all from me. You seem to be re using pattern mostly. So this'll do.

GL
Happy mapping & learning

Thanks a lot

I'll fix what you suggest

Last edited by Shortthu 2016-08-23T07:14:50+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-08-23T06:38:24+00:00

post for no kds

Astarte wrote:
General
Okay so some final thoughts, not bad for a beginner. This is just a basic mod and you need to go over the entire map changing what could be the same problem I mentioned. Ofc I can't mention everything since that'd be long, tedious, and tiring.
You need to do more mapping and learn more patterns from experienced mappers. This diff has bad flow everywhere. Learn about flow and become familiarize with it before remapping https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 | t/86329
Sorry mình ko chỉ ra lỗi sai cho bạn Shortthu dc, tại vì nó sai gần hết. Không có lý do gì để mà bị xuống tinh thần nhé. Cái này ai mới vào map cũng thế cả, và làm vài tháng sẽ quen. Nhớ xem qua cái music theory trong cái wiki. Và cái này nữa và cái này nữa.
GL
Happy mapping & learning

Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-24T14:19:23+00:00

[deleted post] :^)

Last edited by Shortthu 2016-12-16T08:20:19+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-08-25T10:32:27+00:00

Cần biết điều gì hay cần nhận xét, giúp sửa chỗ nào cứ tìm mình và Asaiga nhé. Học hỏi nhiều vào thì có khi bạn sẽ còn khá hơn mình nữa cơ =)) good luck

Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-25T14:38:59+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Cần biết điều gì hay cần nhận xét, giúp sửa chỗ nào cứ tìm mình và Asaiga nhé. Học hỏi nhiều vào thì có khi bạn sẽ còn khá hơn mình nữa cơ =)) good luck

ari

<3

Last edited by Shortthu 2016-10-24T10:08:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

TsunLolicon

TsunLolicon 2016-08-26T13:06:39+00:00

Ez Mania diff incoming

Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-27T02:13:49+00:00

TsunLolicon wrote:
Ez Mania diff incoming

QuachTriDat

18 posts

Joined August 2014

QuachTriDat 2016-08-27T04:17:34+00:00

Asaiga wrote:
post for no kds

Astarte wrote:
General
Okay so some final thoughts, not bad for a beginner. This is just a basic mod and you need to go over the entire map changing what could be the same problem I mentioned. Ofc I can't mention everything since that'd be long, tedious, and tiring.
You need to do more mapping and learn more patterns from experienced mappers. This diff has bad flow everywhere. Learn about flow and become familiarize with it before remapping https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 | t/86329
Sorry mình ko chỉ ra lỗi sai cho bạn Shortthu dc, tại vì nó sai gần hết. Không có lý do gì để mà bị xuống tinh thần nhé. Cái này ai mới vào map cũng thế cả, và làm vài tháng sẽ quen. Nhớ xem qua cái music theory trong cái wiki. Và cái này nữa và cái này nữa.
GL
Happy mapping & learning

OMG huge thanks for those guide pages. I've been always into mapping songs, and those pages just gave me even more. :>

Also look forward to this map. Hoaprox upvote!

[ Shamwow ]

239 posts

Joined January 2014

[ Shamwow ] 2016-08-29T19:31:35+00:00

Astarte wrote:
Hard
So why did you make the small first part to have multiplier 1.5x while everywhere else is 1.0x, including the kiai? Is there a good reason for that? Also, a change from 1.5x to 1.0x is pretty big for a hard, and your hard isn't that hard... It's more like an advanced instead.
You kept SV 1.1, same as normal. Again, why? The thing that bugged me though, is that the movement between objects is a bit faster than the slider speed. Distance between them is small so it might not be much noticeable to you. That said, the small distance between them, is not something fitting for a hard. I suggest you increase SV to something like 1.4 throughout, with BPM multiplier 1.0x. Then you can increase to BPM multiplier 1.1x - 1.3x for parts like kiai for emphasis. Otherwise, your diff is kinda nonsensical now, fast in the tiny bit of the beginning then slow for the rest.
00:17:109 (9) - so why used 1/6 beats??? pretty sure this part doesn't have 1/6 beats. Same throughout
00:32:109 (9) - this is the exact same but you used 1/4... what? -_-
00:15:468 (5) - I suggest you NC every measure, your combos are pretty long
00:32:109 (9) - circle instead
01:03:241 (2,3,4,5,6) - these seems to not snapped to the music, listen carefully. maybe use 1/8 or 1/12 divisor
03:09:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:28:593 (1,1) - so why only these two are 1 beats, while the entire parts only has 1/2 sliders?
01:59:531 (4,6) - ^ you might want to listen to all piano parts again...
01:32:343 - circle here and NC it for emphasis
01:39:609 (1) - I suggest you make this a circle. then a 1/2 non-repeat slider starts at 01:39:843 - to keep your consistency. Same throughout
If this is a hard, then I suggest adding small streams since it's an upbeat song. 01:50:625 (8) - this would be a good example
02:08:671 (7) - bad idea to blanket a stacked note... either move this somewhere else, or stack it at sliderend. same throughout your map
02:42:773 (3,4) - stack them at sliderend or smaller spacing.
02:49:218 (1) - end here 02:50:858 - I don't like this spinner since you can map this part. A spinner 02:51:093 - that ends 02:54:843 - is better
04:02:812 (2) - bending short sliders too much is just ugly as...
04:12:421 - map the vocals here
That'd be all from me. You seem to be re using pattern mostly. So this'll do.

GL
Happy mapping & learning

hey, i was away on vacation the last week so i forgot about my diff haha.

4 future reference the person that made the GD is supposed to apply mods to their diff themselves, not the map creator x.x ill get it done asap :p

[ Shamwow ]

239 posts

Joined January 2014

[ Shamwow ] 2016-08-30T15:13:31+00:00

everything should be fixed now

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Shortthu

501 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shortthu 2016-08-31T00:01:55+00:00

-Dave Strider- wrote:

everything should be fixed now

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256,192,294374,12,0,298358,0:0:0:0:

oh thanks

i'll fix when i get home

CookieBite

1,483 posts

Joined August 2014

CookieBite 2016-08-31T08:53:49+00:00

hi there this is just a random mod.

[Normal]

00:12:656 (1,2) - since your mapset doesn't have an easier diffuclty, don't stack them.
00:13:593 (1,2) - ^
00:15:468 (3,4) - ^
00:17:343 (1,2,3) - ds problem (object 2 is far from object 1 but object 3 is short than object 2)
00:19:218 (1) - move the red nod to the slider tick
00:25:781 (7) - kinda miss some sound, don't use a long slider here.
00:30:000 (4,5) - don't stack plz
00:30:234 (5,1) - since 00:30:234 (5) - is on the red tick, 00:30:936 (1) - is on the white tick. I keep messing up here because i think 00:30:936 (1) - is on the red tick but it isn't. Therefore, I suggest you could add a note on 00:30:468 - . If you decide to fix it,
plz fix the ones later on.
01:04:413 (4,2) - nobody cares but overlap here lol
01:05:625 (5,1) - no stack
01:08:437 (4,5) - ^
01:10:312 (6,2) - stack
01:15:702 (1,2,3) - no stack
alright im too tired of writing no stack stack no no, if you see any stacks, don't make them stack.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too boring if you just put all the circles here.
01:36:093 (1,4) - a bit overlap
01:37:499 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - same as before, too boring
01:43:125 (5) - i think normal can't allow this (idk what to call triple silder?)
01:47:343 (1) - not good enough (the side is different)
02:28:593 (1) - too many arrows just 1 arrow plz
02:37:734 (2) - ^
02:37:734 (2) - kinda confuse to me cuz it's on the red tick
02:47:343 (1) - 1 arrow plz
03:36:562 (2,3) - overlap
03:43:593 (1,4) - ^
04:56:250 (2) - 1 arrow plz

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lazygirl

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lazygirl 2016-09-02T15:44:05+00:00

Hey from modding queue for NM!

I can see you're quite new to mapping. I won't mod this in detail, as there's a lot of fixing to be done:

First of, you don't blanket. Check out many recently ranked maps to learn their art of slider design, it's quite important.

The most important thing I can tell you is: map a lot, play a lot, and analyze a lot of maps. That's the only way your mapping will improve. I could go in detail into your map, but I don't think it'll be really worth it for you to stick to what I tell you, you need to develop your own style ^^

Good luck and come back to my queue whenever you think this map has improved, I'll gladly mod it fully ^^

PS: don't give any kudosu for this.

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