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Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara

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ekafjr
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Topic Starter
ekafjr
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 7, 2016 at 12:41:08 AM

Artist: Happy Clover
Title: Ashita de Ii kara
Source: あんハピ♪
Tags: ending Anne-Happy Hanakoizumi Yumiri Hanamori Ruri Hibarigaoka Haruka Shiraishi Botan Kumegawa Kiyono Yasuno Hibiki Hagyu Hibiku Yamamura Ren Ekoda Mayu Yoshioka Mako Sakata
BPM: 130
Filesize: 12928kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.77 stars, 184 notes)
  2. Insane (3.42 stars, 276 notes)
  3. Mako's Easy (1.3 stars, 86 notes)
  4. Normal (1.61 stars, 122 notes)
Download: Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara
Download: Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「明日でいいから
(Anne - Happy) Ending Theme Song

Easy by Mako Sakata
Normal Done
Hard Done
Insane Done
Hitsound by Blizs
Mp3 by Momichikun


Spesial Thanks :
Blizs
Del05
Last edited by ekafjr , edited 172 times in total.
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr
UPDATE!!
PotatoJA
81 posts
Joined November 2014
PotatoJA
Eyy from modreq

All 3 difficulties looks great, hope this will get ranked >3<
Anyways, here's your mod :3

Normal
Everything's clean in this diff so I'll just point out these.

00:07:636 (4) - make it longer https://i.imgsafe.org/6622d5df64.png end point at the white line
00:46:636 (1,2) - uhm.. here
00:48:021 (4,5,6) - Blanket would be nice
00:50:790 (2,4) - add a hitcircle between them (red line)
01:17:809 (5,6) - align with slider
Hard
00:08:790 (5) - nc
00:23:559 (1,2) - fix this blanket, reverse blanket. i dunno how to call it but here https://i.imgsafe.org/666e856082.png
00:30:944 (1,2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - looks better here imo https://i.imgsafe.org/669092ddaa.png
00:54:320 (6) - nc
Insane
00:10:175 (5,6) - follow slider direction
00:35:098 (3,4) - ^
00:41:098 (4) - looks off imo, maybe change it like this? https://i.imgsafe.org/66b59a1470.png
00:54:320 (8) - nc

Hope this helped , if it did don't forget to give a Kudosu :D
Good luck!
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

PotatoJA wrote:

Eyy from modreq

All 3 difficulties looks great, hope this will get ranked >3<
Anyways, here's your mod :3

Normal
Everything's clean in this diff so I'll just point out these.

00:07:636 (4) - make it longer https://i.imgsafe.org/6622d5df64.png end point at the white line :) keep
00:46:636 (1,2) - uhm.. here folow vocal at here
00:48:021 (4,5,6) - Blanket would be nice oke
00:50:790 (2,4) - add a hitcircle between them (red line)^
01:17:809 (5,6) - align with slider no keep this
Hard
00:08:790 (5) - nc fix
00:23:559 (1,2) - fix this blanket, reverse blanket. i dunno how to call it but here https://i.imgsafe.org/666e856082.png fix
00:30:944 (1,2) - ^ oke
00:45:944 (3) - looks better here imo https://i.imgsafe.org/669092ddaa.png keep,ds consistence
00:54:320 (6) - nc oke
Insane
00:10:175 (5,6) - follow slider directionfix
00:35:098 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:41:098 (4) - looks off imo, maybe change it like this? https://i.imgsafe.org/66b59a1470.png oke
00:54:320 (8) - nc Ok

Hope this helped , if it did don't forget to give a Kudosu :D
Good luck!
thanks for mod
Chihara Minori
1,235 posts
Joined December 2013
Chihara Minori
RIP EYES 2016 please use better color selection to reply
blue-commenting
green-agreement
red-disagreement
the current reply color hurt my eys sooo bad lol (i mean it)

modsnya nyusul nanti www
Shad0w1and
1,589 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
I

00:05:444 - fill
00:25:175 - clickable here. end your slider early
00:28:867 - same here
00:35:444 (3,4) - equal spacing
00:49:406 - clickable
00:55:059 (2) - NC
01:03:059 (3) - NC for downbeat and finish
01:05:059 - clickable
01:07:434 - could fill, up to u
01:08:809 (1) - cancel NC

H

00:06:021 (3) - blanket
00:10:406 - clickable here, 1/1 slider would be good
00:35:444 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:944 (4,5) - blanket?
00:55:059 (2) - NC
01:15:809 (3) - ugly:/
01:22:809 - blanket
SPOILER
Julie
1,416 posts
Joined March 2013
Julie
Call me back later :D!!

irc mods~
2016-07-01 20:57 ekafjr: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016936 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
2016-07-01 20:59 Julie: what do you mean you do not udnerstand what is wrong on your map?
2016-07-01 20:59 Julie: did something point out something and you dont understand?
2016-07-01 21:00 Julie: Im suprise you only have 3 maps xD
2016-07-01 21:00 Julie: and this is actually suprising nice
2016-07-01 21:00 ekafjr: 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - why really need to read
2016-07-01 21:00 ekafjr: ahh sorry :v
2016-07-01 21:00 Julie: which difficulty?
2016-07-01 21:00 ekafjr: 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - why really hard to read
2016-07-01 21:00 ekafjr: insane
2016-07-01 21:01 Julie: how is that hard to read?
2016-07-01 21:01 ekafjr: yeah someone tell me it hard to read
2016-07-01 21:01 Julie: you mean this one 00:01:406 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-07-01 21:01 Julie: nop impossible that this is hard to read
2016-07-01 21:01 Julie: is actually really easy to read
2016-07-01 21:02 Julie: is just that this spacing 00:02:329 (3,4) - might look really similar to 00:01:406 (1,2,3) -
2016-07-01 21:02 Julie: which make it confusing to get a good accuracy on it
2016-07-01 21:02 Julie: for this note 00:02:675 (4) -
2016-07-01 21:02 Julie: but that pattern is really easy to read, the beat is on 1/1
2016-07-01 21:02 Julie: shouldn't have any problem
2016-07-01 21:02 ekafjr: ohh
2016-07-01 21:03 Julie: well thats my opinion XD
2016-07-01 21:03 Julie: 00:02:329 (3,4) - is fine xD
2016-07-01 21:03 Julie: im just adding the possibility
2016-07-01 21:04 ekafjr: ahh fine :3 i really wired :3
2016-07-01 21:05 Julie: wired? xD
2016-07-01 21:05 ekafjr: how about this 00:31:406 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
2016-07-01 21:05 Julie: also um just randomly pointing out but um 00:23:098 (5) - for the head of this finisher put it at 00:23:559 (1) - , since the 2nd cymbal sound is way more important and emphasize a new part of the song
2016-07-01 21:06 Julie: 00:23:098 (5) - while this, the loud hithat from the song is fine already xD
2016-07-01 21:06 Julie: easy to read
2016-07-01 21:06 Julie: that part you mention
2016-07-01 21:07 Julie: since you kept your spacing consistent as well :D
2016-07-01 21:07 Julie: no overlap
2016-07-01 21:07 Julie: not an easy map to map, but I think you did a good jobs :D
2016-07-01 21:08 ekafjr: thanks alot
2016-07-01 21:08 Julie: for the the point Im pointing out, is just because if you add the finish hitsound on the first one, is kinda too loud, your making it louder then this 00:23:559 (1) - ;w;
2016-07-01 21:08 Julie: that's my opinion
2016-07-01 21:09 ekafjr: oke
2016-07-01 21:09 Julie: and try not to spam too much finish hitsound like this 00:26:559 (4,5,6) - , it could be a bit too loud while the song here have some nice drum
2016-07-01 21:09 Julie: I believe is because you hear a small hithat that you add a finish hitsound
2016-07-01 21:09 Julie: but is really low compare to the actual hitsound
2016-07-01 21:10 ekafjr: hmm
2016-07-01 21:11 ekafjr: can you check my normal diff
2016-07-01 21:11 Julie: sure x3
2016-07-01 21:11 ekafjr: need to re map or not
2016-07-01 21:12 Julie: why do you want it remap? Some people say is not good? Or is it you? xD
2016-07-01 21:12 ekafjr: some people say need remap
2016-07-01 21:12 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016936 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Normal]]
2016-07-01 21:13 Julie: seriously?
2016-07-01 21:13 Julie: hmm
2016-07-01 21:13 ekafjr: yeah
2016-07-01 21:13 Julie: tbh this can be improve, I think remapping might be going too far, except if you are willing to try and make it better :D
2016-07-01 21:14 Julie: When is really really bad and impossible to mods
2016-07-01 21:14 Julie: I would say remap
2016-07-01 21:14 Julie: for this diff, is your choice, you are the creator
2016-07-01 21:14 Julie: also 00:52:406 (4) - this might be confusing
2016-07-01 21:14 Julie: since you still clearly hear instrument at 00:52:867 - and 00:53:098 -
2016-07-01 21:15 Julie: so basically ending the part at 00:52:867 - or 00:53:098 - would be better no?
2016-07-01 21:15 Julie: 01:04:059 (3,4) - this is REALLY not suggested in normal
2016-07-01 21:15 Julie: well for me
2016-07-01 21:16 Julie: really confusing and might cause beginner/normal player to chock
2016-07-01 21:16 Julie: since the spacing doesn't look really far because the end of the slider (4) is stick to the end of slider(3)
2016-07-01 21:16 Julie: also more confusing for FL player that want to play a relaxing normal
2016-07-01 21:17 Julie: like flip 01:05:059 (4) - this the other way
2016-07-01 21:18 ekafjr: ah sorry you waiting :3
2016-07-01 21:18 Julie: np x3
2016-07-01 21:19 Julie: 01:16:059 (3) - remove the clap in the middle slider? so that we can feel the bass instead of the clap sound being too loud?
2016-07-01 21:20 Julie: http://puu.sh/pNeLQ/03eba839e8.jpg
2016-07-01 21:20 ekafjr: oke
2016-07-01 21:20 Julie: cool :D
2016-07-01 21:20 ekafjr: lolol
2016-07-01 21:21 ekafjr: 00:52:406 (4) - confusing ? need to change
2016-07-01 21:21 Julie: yeahh since you've been mapping for the drum those slider
2016-07-01 21:21 Julie: and the drum still continue to 00:52:867 -
2016-07-01 21:22 Julie: so after finishing that slider (in play) it feel like something is still missing
2016-07-01 21:22 Julie: people wont miss or anything, but it really feel like something is still missing after finishing this slider
2016-07-01 21:23 ekafjr: hmm
2016-07-01 21:24 ekafjr: 00:52:406 (4) - remove :3
2016-07-01 21:24 Julie: uwahh why remove!!
2016-07-01 21:24 Julie: make it longer baka XD
2016-07-01 21:24 Julie: remove will feel way more empty in this part! xD
2016-07-01 21:25 ekafjr: ahh :V
2016-07-01 21:25 Julie: ahahaha take your time by the way
2016-07-01 21:25 ekafjr: i newbie owo :v
2016-07-01 21:26 Julie: np
2016-07-01 21:26 Julie: and that is why I'm here to help x3
2016-07-01 21:26 Julie: so I'm really patient tbh, you should see my first few map
2016-07-01 21:26 Julie: mine was soo bad, you would laugh say : HAHAHA JULIE MAP NOOB XD
2016-07-01 21:28 ekafjr: wkwkwkwk nooo your first map its so gratz :3
2016-07-01 21:28 Julie: I remap it xD
2016-07-01 21:28 ekafjr: remap ?
2016-07-01 21:28 Julie: Im happy of my first rank map xD
2016-07-01 21:28 Julie: yeahh
2016-07-01 21:28 Julie: my first map like um, when I first sstart mapping (not the rank one)
2016-07-01 21:29 ekafjr: is tragic :v
2016-07-01 21:30 Julie: ahahaha
2016-07-01 21:30 ekafjr: btw would be better http://puu.sh/pNaGQ.PNG
2016-07-01 21:30 ekafjr: or not
2016-07-01 21:31 Julie: that part is?
2016-07-01 21:33 ekafjr: 00:52:406 (4) -
2016-07-01 21:33 Julie: hmm
2016-07-01 21:33 Julie: I dont get with your screen MUCHmush
2016-07-01 21:33 Julie: much*
2016-07-01 21:34 ekafjr: ah sorry http://puu.sh/pNftv.PNG
2016-07-01 21:35 Julie: 00:53:098 - you added slider (5) here?
2016-07-01 21:35 Julie: no no no dont do that xD
2016-07-01 21:35 Julie: 00:53:559 - no new sound, it will be unrankable issue
2016-07-01 21:36 ekafjr: uuh :v
2016-07-01 21:36 Julie: 00:52:406 (4) - just make this slider a bit longer
2016-07-01 21:36 ekafjr: hard please check wkwkwkw
2016-07-01 21:36 Julie: oki x3
2016-07-01 21:36 ekafjr: oke
2016-07-01 21:38 ekafjr: iam sorry to take alot your time :3
2016-07-01 21:38 Julie: 00:09:944 (4) - the drum sampleset hitsound doesn't really match a lots the song ;w;
2016-07-01 21:38 Julie: you only use it on your hard (I didnt finish check the whole diff)
2016-07-01 21:38 Julie: and np xD
2016-07-01 21:40 Julie: hitsound isn't your force right?
2016-07-01 21:41 Julie: 00:33:021 (2) - ouff this is not good, the end of the slider doesn't fit on every resolution
2016-07-01 21:42 ekafjr: hmm hitsound :3 sorry about that
2016-07-01 21:42 Julie: hahah
2016-07-01 21:42 Julie: you'll learn with more mapping
2016-07-01 21:42 Julie: the tips I'll like to give you for starting hitsound
2016-07-01 21:42 Julie: is try to make it same with all your difficulty
2016-07-01 21:42 Julie: start with this one
2016-07-01 21:42 ekafjr: i cant make a hitsound :V
2016-07-01 21:43 ekafjr: same all diff
2016-07-01 21:43 Julie: your usage of hitsound isn't really bad, but I could feel that you sometimes dont know what your doing xD
2016-07-01 21:43 Julie: yeah start with same all diff
2016-07-01 21:43 Julie: it will help
2016-07-01 21:44 ekafjr: oke
2016-07-01 21:45 Julie: 00:54:320 (1,2) - isn't that spacing a bit too far?
2016-07-01 21:45 Julie: for a spart that go lower bpm
2016-07-01 21:46 ekafjr: this kai
2016-07-01 21:47 Julie: omg long time I didn't point out a blanket! 01:15:809 (3,4) - but this , you can make it really more beautiful by taking your time for that blanket
2016-07-01 21:47 Julie: kiai doesnt mean it should be higher spacing
2016-07-01 21:47 Julie: the spacing should be higher due to the cymbal and yeah kiai, but this might be a bit too much
2016-07-01 21:47 Julie: since the song bpm go lower (well thats how I feel
2016-07-01 21:48 Julie: 01:10:559 (8,1) - because look even here, the spacing doesnt go like 3+
2016-07-01 21:49 ekafjr: oke i will fix all
2016-07-01 21:51 ekafjr: idk about this 01:15:809 (3,4) - Lv
2016-07-01 21:51 Julie: make it MORE BEAUTIFULL!!
2016-07-01 21:52 ekafjr: yeah its hard
2016-07-01 21:52 ekafjr: its so long to make blanket
2016-07-01 21:53 Julie: http://puu.sh/pNgkf/20fce729ae.jpg
2016-07-01 21:53 Julie: and move a bit this note 01:16:309 (4) - so it do 1.20 x spacing
2016-07-01 21:53 Julie: 01:15:809 (3) - fix this first, make a nice blanket, then move a bit this 01:16:309 (4) -
2016-07-01 21:53 Julie: thats what I did xD
2016-07-01 21:56 ekafjr: http://puu.sh/pNgpF.PNG
2016-07-01 21:57 Julie: more beautifull >w<, except yuou might want to mode (4) for the spacing 1.20
2016-07-01 21:57 Julie: take your time with slider :D
2016-07-01 21:58 ekafjr: ahh :v
2016-07-01 22:00 ekafjr: http://puu.sh/pNgEb.PNG more ?
2016-07-01 22:00 Julie: is good >w<
2016-07-01 22:00 Julie: as long as is the spacing you want :D
2016-07-01 22:01 Julie: see you take time make a slider
2016-07-01 22:01 Julie: and the result = look better right? :D
2016-07-01 22:01 ekafjr: yeah lol :3
2016-07-01 22:02 ekafjr: take alot time :V
2016-07-01 22:02 Julie: I don't know about other mapper
2016-07-01 22:02 Julie: but I sometimes take up to 10min for 1 slider =w=
2016-07-01 22:02 ekafjr: what 10min 1 slider :V
2016-07-01 22:03 ekafjr: its gratz lolol
2016-07-01 22:04 Julie: ahahahah
2016-07-01 22:04 Julie: but I'm happy if is beautifull and look good in-game xD
2016-07-01 22:06 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016934 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Hard]]
2016-07-01 22:06 Julie: 00:33:021 (2) -
2016-07-01 22:06 Julie: you fixed this right?
2016-07-01 22:08 ekafjr: what wrong ?
2016-07-01 22:08 Julie: http://puu.sh/pNh1j/8c7b1fed65.jpg
2016-07-01 22:08 Julie: this is OUT of thhe screen
2016-07-01 22:08 Julie: in-game too
2016-07-01 22:08 Julie: http://puu.sh/pNh2h/caeb72caeb.jpg
2016-07-01 22:08 Julie: unrankable!
2016-07-01 22:08 Julie: and Im using 1920 x 1080 resolution
2016-07-01 22:09 ekafjr: hmm oke
2016-07-01 22:10 Julie: all note should always be full viewable in the screen!
2016-07-01 22:17 ekafjr: julie thanks you so much :3
2016-07-01 22:18 Julie: npp, now try your best on getting more modder, then if you want me to explain you thing and check more tell me xD
2016-07-01 22:18 Julie: I think giving too much information right now might make you confuse, learn bit by bit, and the map is overall nice
2016-07-01 22:19 ekafjr: oke thanks alot julie you really nice BN ever :v
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Shad0w1and wrote:

I

00:05:444 - fill keep
00:25:175 - clickable here. end your slider early oke
00:28:867 - same here fix
00:35:444 (3,4) - equal spacing fix
00:49:406 - clickable fix
00:55:059 (2) - NC fix
01:03:059 (3) - NC for downbeat and finish fix
01:05:059 - clickable oke
01:07:434 - could fill, up to u keep
01:08:809 (1) - cancel NC oke

H

00:06:021 (3) - blanket fix
00:10:406 - clickable here, 1/1 slider would be good hmm keep
00:35:444 (3,4) - spacing fix
00:42:944 (4,5) - blanket? oke
00:55:059 (2) - NC ^
01:15:809 (3) - ugly:/ its not ugly lol
01:22:809 - blanketfix
SPOILER
thanks for mod
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
`L_` dem son

tadi in-game ada perlu apa? Eee nthng



oyy sahur sahur `<`)

hmm, mp3 dapet dari map ini? kalau iya kenapa minta bantuan buat fix offsetnya? kan timingnya bisa ambil dari beatmapnya itu. kalau emang si mp3 ada perubahan karena compress/encode nanti aku bantu (tapi pengalaman, nemuin offset masih kurang jaog banget ww) atau tanya orang di atas kamu tersebut, si BN.

GL
Sylphi
osu! Alumni
3,301 posts
Joined February 2012
Sylphi
Simple modding via in-game pm \ ( > w<)/

[General]
  1. It would be better considering to add easy difficulty. current normal difficulty may be a bit hard for beginners although star rating is 1.64.
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:790 (1) - I think this stack is not good idea. try to other pattern.
  2. 00:17:098 (2,3) - Change to 1/2 slider. actually you didn't use circles like that anytime in this difficulty
  3. 00:18:944 (6) - 00:20:790 (3) - Add soft-finish on slider's end for consistency.
  4. 00:25:406 (3) - It would be fit more the music changing to 1/1 slider.
  5. 00:30:944 (1) - Remove clap on slider's head for consistency.
  6. 00:32:559 (3) - Remove this and add note on 00:34:175 instead. maybe it would be better feeling.
  7. 00:40:867 (4,5) - This clap is a bit awkward to hear. how about removing clap?
  8. 00:43:867 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
  9. 00:43:867 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:790.
  10. 00:46:636 (1) - 00:50:329 (1) - Overused new combo. please keep new combo cycle.
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:406 (4) - Add new combo?
  2. 00:53:098 - Add circle.
  3. 00:55:559 (2) - Remove clap on slider's end following vocal pitch?
  4. 01:08:809 (5) - Add new combo for consistency.
  5. 01:18:059 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo on 01:19:059 (4) instead for consistency.
  6. 01:16:309 (4) - In my opinion, it would be better removing clap because it feels to be lower sound.
  7. 01:20:559 (1) - 01:22:059 (1) - 01:24:059 (1) - Remove new combo / 01:21:059 (3) - 01:23:059 (5) - add new combo
  8. 01:24:059 (1) - Remove clap on slider's end? it would be not bad feeling.
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:406 (1,2,3,4) - Increase distance of 1, 2 circles. those are too similar distance although that rhythm is difference.
  2. 00:14:098 (3) - It can be improved pattern imo.
  3. 00:35:559 (4) - Move to 356, 88 for keeping stream distance.
  4. 00:37:175 (4) - It feels to be a bit far compared overall pattern. how about decreasing distance?
  5. 00:41:098 (4) - This pattern really looks not good. i'd recommend trying other pattern.
  6. 01:10:559 (1,2,3,4) - is there the reason to use that stream pattern? actually i think this pattern is not bad. but maybe some people'll say about that.
Good luck!
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Sylphi wrote:

Simple modding via in-game pm \ ( > w<)/

[General]
  1. It would be better considering to add easy difficulty. current normal difficulty may be a bit hard for beginners although star rating is 1.64.
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:790 (1) - I think this stack is not good idea. try to other pattern.
  2. 00:17:098 (2,3) - Change to 1/2 slider. actually you didn't use circles like that anytime in this difficulty
  3. 00:18:944 (6) - 00:20:790 (3) - Add soft-finish on slider's end for consistency.
  4. 00:25:406 (3) - It would be fit more the music changing to 1/1 slider.
  5. 00:30:944 (1) - Remove clap on slider's head for consistency.
  6. 00:32:559 (3) - Remove this and add note on 00:34:175 instead. maybe it would be better feeling.
  7. 00:40:867 (4,5) - This clap is a bit awkward to hear. how about removing clap?
  8. 00:43:867 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
  9. 00:43:867 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:790.
  10. 00:46:636 (1) - 00:50:329 (1) - Overused new combo. please keep new combo cycle.
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:406 (4) - Add new combo?
  2. 00:53:098 - Add circle.
  3. 00:55:559 (2) - Remove clap on slider's end following vocal pitch?
  4. 01:08:809 (5) - Add new combo for consistency.
  5. 01:18:059 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo on 01:19:059 (4) instead for consistency.
  6. 01:16:309 (4) - In my opinion, it would be better removing clap because it feels to be lower sound.
  7. 01:20:559 (1) - 01:22:059 (1) - 01:24:059 (1) - Remove new combo / 01:21:059 (3) - 01:23:059 (5) - add new combo
  8. 01:24:059 (1) - Remove clap on slider's end? it would be not bad feeling.
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:406 (1,2,3,4) - Increase distance of 1, 2 circles. those are too similar distance although that rhythm is difference.
  2. 00:14:098 (3) - It can be improved pattern imo.
  3. 00:35:559 (4) - Move to 356, 88 for keeping stream distance.
  4. 00:37:175 (4) - It feels to be a bit far compared overall pattern. how about decreasing distance?
  5. 00:41:098 (4) - This pattern really looks not good. i'd recommend trying other pattern.
  6. 01:10:559 (1,2,3,4) - is there the reason to use that stream pattern? actually i think this pattern is not bad. but maybe some people'll say about that.
Good luck!
All fix thanks for mod :3
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr
Update All diff :3
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Lost some IRC for Insane diff
IRC code
12:33 DreaM117er: ok, im back
12:34 ekafjr: im here :3
12:36 DreaM117er: 01:02:559 (1,2) - it's hard to read, try to do same distance like 01:00:309 (6,7,1) -
12:36 DreaM117er: 01:02:559 (1) - then remove nc here
12:37 DreaM117er: 01:04:809 (6,1) - I'd like to see you change 4 circle here :)
12:37 DreaM117er: follow vocal
12:40 ekafjr: `like this http://puu.sh/pPz2O.PNG
12:40 DreaM117er: yes
12:41 DreaM117er: very well
12:41 DreaM117er: 00:41:098 (4) - I think you can fix blanket
12:42 DreaM117er: http://puu.sh/pPz86/d3fb9d7792.jpg
12:42 DreaM117er: well...your rhythm is nice for me in Insane diff
12:46 ekafjr: ahh 01:04:809 (6,1) - i prefer slider at here :3
12:46 DreaM117er: ok
12:47 ekafjr: idk but if i am change to circle rhyhtm is bad
12:47 DreaM117er: really??
12:48 DreaM117er: I don't think so
12:48 ekafjr: yeah :v
12:49 ekafjr: 01:04:809 (6) - this not clickable :V
12:49 ekafjr: this just my opinion :v
12:50 DreaM117er: fine. respect your choise :D
12:51 DreaM117er: keep Hard diff
12:51 ekafjr: hard diff what wrong :3
12:51 DreaM117er: ohohoh, one suggestion: more sounds better
12:52 ekafjr: hitsound lolol
12:52 DreaM117er: haha
12:52 ekafjr: yeah sorry about that
12:52 DreaM117er: yeah
12:52 ekafjr: i cant make hitsound better :V
12:53 DreaM117er: let's do hitsounds next time, back to hard diff
12:54 DreaM117er: 00:03:252 (1) - it's different rhythm with Insane diff here
12:54 ekafjr: ahh :3
12:54 ekafjr: fix
12:56 DreaM117er: 00:28:521 (6,1) - a slider from 00:28:521 - to 00:28:867 - ??
12:57 ekafjr: ah no sound like hit hat at here
12:57 DreaM117er: I know
12:58 DreaM117er: but I feel strange that when I was playing
13:00 ekafjr: hmm
13:00 DreaM117er: 00:32:213 (4,1) - same here
13:03 DreaM117er: 01:00:309 (6,7,1,2,3) - haha, you can try ctrl+g this rhythm. It's nice imo
13:06 ekafjr: all fix
13:08 DreaM117er: :3
13:09 DreaM117er: ok, nothing in Hard diff
13:09 DreaM117er: let normal diff
13:10 ekafjr: ah lol
13:12 DreaM117er: 00:02:329 (2) - it's fine to use 3/4 rhythm in Normal diff: http://puu.sh/pPAsf/2b7b5dbb64.jpg
13:15 ekafjr: oke
13:21 ekafjr: you here :v
13:22 ekafjr: if i make this pattern http://puu.sh/pPASj.PNG hard to read new player or not
13:29 DreaM117er: a little hard
13:30 ekafjr: ahh can you sugest me how to create gratz pattern :v
13:31 DreaM117er: 00:02:329 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/pPBkX/74b215b88a.jpg
13:32 DreaM117er: just suggestion :)
13:32 ekafjr: yeah iam stack :v
13:34 DreaM117er: a question that why you use 1.1x speed here00:38:329 -
13:35 DreaM117er: I think use 1.0x enough
13:35 ekafjr: new sound :V make more emphasize
13:37 ekafjr: really its not problem
13:37 ekafjr: for me
13:37 DreaM117er: so you are fixing hitsounds now??
13:39 ekafjr: hitsound will be update now hard same with insane
13:39 ekafjr: but idk about normal wwwkw
13:39 DreaM117er: I see
13:51 DreaM117er: I try to make forum mod to you (for Normal diff)

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  1. That's all :)

:) :) :)
ekafjr
146 posts
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Topic Starter
ekafjr

DreaM117er wrote:

Lost some IRC for Insane diff
IRC code
12:33 DreaM117er: ok, im back
12:34 ekafjr: im here :3
12:36 DreaM117er: 01:02:559 (1,2) - it's hard to read, try to do same distance like 01:00:309 (6,7,1) -
12:36 DreaM117er: 01:02:559 (1) - then remove nc here
12:37 DreaM117er: 01:04:809 (6,1) - I'd like to see you change 4 circle here :)
12:37 DreaM117er: follow vocal
12:40 ekafjr: `like this http://puu.sh/pPz2O.PNG
12:40 DreaM117er: yes
12:41 DreaM117er: very well
12:41 DreaM117er: 00:41:098 (4) - I think you can fix blanket
12:42 DreaM117er: http://puu.sh/pPz86/d3fb9d7792.jpg
12:42 DreaM117er: well...your rhythm is nice for me in Insane diff
12:46 ekafjr: ahh 01:04:809 (6,1) - i prefer slider at here :3
12:46 DreaM117er: ok
12:47 ekafjr: idk but if i am change to circle rhyhtm is bad
12:47 DreaM117er: really??
12:48 DreaM117er: I don't think so
12:48 ekafjr: yeah :v
12:49 ekafjr: 01:04:809 (6) - this not clickable :V
12:49 ekafjr: this just my opinion :v
12:50 DreaM117er: fine. respect your choise :D
12:51 DreaM117er: keep Hard diff
12:51 ekafjr: hard diff what wrong :3
12:51 DreaM117er: ohohoh, one suggestion: more sounds better
12:52 ekafjr: hitsound lolol
12:52 DreaM117er: haha
12:52 ekafjr: yeah sorry about that
12:52 DreaM117er: yeah
12:52 ekafjr: i cant make hitsound better :V
12:53 DreaM117er: let's do hitsounds next time, back to hard diff
12:54 DreaM117er: 00:03:252 (1) - it's different rhythm with Insane diff here
12:54 ekafjr: ahh :3
12:54 ekafjr: fix
12:56 DreaM117er: 00:28:521 (6,1) - a slider from 00:28:521 - to 00:28:867 - ??
12:57 ekafjr: ah no sound like hit hat at here
12:57 DreaM117er: I know
12:58 DreaM117er: but I feel strange that when I was playing
13:00 ekafjr: hmm
13:00 DreaM117er: 00:32:213 (4,1) - same here
13:03 DreaM117er: 01:00:309 (6,7,1,2,3) - haha, you can try ctrl+g this rhythm. It's nice imo
13:06 ekafjr: all fix
13:08 DreaM117er: :3
13:09 DreaM117er: ok, nothing in Hard diff
13:09 DreaM117er: let normal diff
13:10 ekafjr: ah lol
13:12 DreaM117er: 00:02:329 (2) - it's fine to use 3/4 rhythm in Normal diff: http://puu.sh/pPAsf/2b7b5dbb64.jpg
13:15 ekafjr: oke
13:21 ekafjr: you here :v
13:22 ekafjr: if i make this pattern http://puu.sh/pPASj.PNG hard to read new player or not
13:29 DreaM117er: a little hard
13:30 ekafjr: ahh can you sugest me how to create gratz pattern :v
13:31 DreaM117er: 00:02:329 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/pPBkX/74b215b88a.jpg
13:32 DreaM117er: just suggestion :)
13:32 ekafjr: yeah iam stack :v
13:34 DreaM117er: a question that why you use 1.1x speed here00:38:329 -
13:35 DreaM117er: I think use 1.0x enough
13:35 ekafjr: new sound :V make more emphasize
13:37 ekafjr: really its not problem
13:37 ekafjr: for me
13:37 DreaM117er: so you are fixing hitsounds now??
13:39 ekafjr: hitsound will be update now hard same with insane
13:39 ekafjr: but idk about normal wwwkw
13:39 DreaM117er: I see
13:51 DreaM117er: I try to make forum mod to you (for Normal diff)

[Normal]
  1. That's all :)

:) :) :)
thanks for mod fix all :)
Rixilia
51 posts
Joined May 2015
Rixilia

eclipselotus wrote:

RIP EYES 2016 please use better color selection to reply
blue-commenting
green-agreement
red-disagreement
the current reply color hurt my eys sooo bad lol (i mean it)

modsnya nyusul nanti www
ANJIR GW PUSING MBACA DIA MBALES PAKE KUNING :V
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
DeRandom Otaku
Hi

Insane

  1. 00:07:636 (1,4) - i would rather not overlap these
  2. 00:09:252 (2) - missing clap on sliderhead
  3. 00:15:712 (4) - clap
  4. 00:16:636 (2) - ^
  5. 00:18:482 (2) - ^
  6. 00:41:098 (4) - the end of slider could look better if u adjust the anchor point a little
  7. 00:49:406 (7) - nc starts from here instead of 00:49:636 (1) -
  8. 00:54:320 (1) - this shape doesnt go well with the background music , maybe try a different shape
  9. 01:00:309 (6) - clap on slider end
  10. 01:03:059 (1) - ^
  11. 01:08:559 (7) - clap
  12. 01:09:559 (2) - clap on head
  13. 01:18:559 (2) - clap
  14. 01:22:559 (2) - ^
i guess thats all .. please review your hitsounds properly in all diffs since there are so many mistakes u made

GL!~ =w=
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi

Insane

  1. 00:07:636 (1,4) - i would rather not overlap these Its not problem
  2. 00:09:252 (2) - missing clap on sliderhead
  3. 00:15:712 (4) - clap
  4. 00:16:636 (2) - ^
  5. 00:18:482 (2) - ^
  6. 00:41:098 (4) - the end of slider could look better if u adjust the anchor point a little consider it
  7. 00:49:406 (7) - nc starts from here instead of 00:49:636 (1) -
  8. 00:54:320 (1) - this shape doesnt go well with the background music , maybe try a different shape consider it
  9. 01:00:309 (6) - clap on slider end
  10. 01:03:059 (1) - ^
  11. 01:08:559 (7) - clap
  12. 01:09:559 (2) - clap on head
  13. 01:18:559 (2) - clap
  14. 01:22:559 (2) - ^
i guess thats all .. please review your hitsounds properly in all diffs since there are so many mistakes u made

GL!~ =w=
ahh i m so sorry about that,i really not understand about hitsound
Chihara Minori
1,235 posts
Joined December 2013
Chihara Minori
*insert dory memes*
"my map will never get notice by nominator . . .
oh look nominator"

modnya nyusul nanti :v
(itupun kalo gu masih kuat sama cobaan ini)
*nangis dipojokan*
Syarika
449 posts
Joined August 2014
Syarika
mod via irc..

mod here
06:43 ekafjr: bang arika
06:44 [ Arika ]: halo?
06:44 ekafjr: bisa minta tolong gak tes map ane
06:44 [ Arika ]: lagi engga bisa main hehe
06:44 [ Arika ]: kalau cek masih bisa
06:44 ekafjr: yaahh
06:44 ekafjr: cek aja deh
06:44 *ekafjr is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016935 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
06:44 [ Arika ]: sebentar ya
06:46 ekafjr: siap
06:46 [ Arika ]: mapsetnya butuh easy itu
06:47 ekafjr: aih enggak deh
06:47 ekafjr: normalnya aja udah kegampangan
06:47 [ Arika ]: Normal ya
06:47 *[ Arika ] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016936 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Normal]]
06:48 [ Arika ]: 00:10:867 (4,5) - ini coba jangan overlap
06:48 [ Arika ]: kalau ditaruh di bagian atas slidernya diputar kayaknya lebih bagus
06:48 [ Arika ]: 00:10:175 (3) - ini di ctrl+g
06:49 ekafjr: keep ds bang :V
06:49 [ Arika ]: 00:10:867 (4,5) - ini ctrl+ > *2x* terus ctrl+h deh? nanti sisanya tinggal ikut distance snap aja
06:50 [ Arika ]: 00:09:252 (2) - bisa di blanket dengan ini juga
06:50 [ Arika ]: yap. kalau dia overlap untuk mapset rendah engga bagus loh btw
06:50 [ Arika ]: cuman saran ya
06:50 [ Arika ]: itu buat bagus mapsetnya kok
06:51 ekafjr: ini udah move 00:09:252 (2) - x260 Y140 jadi gak overlap
06:51 ekafjr: ane soalnya lagi males nih bang mindah"in dsnya lagi wkkwwk
06:52 [ Arika ]: hmm.. ok
06:52 [ Arika ]: buat saran aja ya, mapsetnya jangan downbeat terus.. karena ini mapset terendah
06:52 [ Arika ]: jadi lebih baik pakai 1/2 beat terus pakai beat besarnya juga jangan terlalu banyak dibuat downbeat
06:53 [ Arika ]: aku lihat disini semuanya downbeat
06:53 [ Arika ]: kalau mau di keep coba dipindah offsetnya deh
06:53 [ Arika ]: 00:16:636 (1,2,3,4) - aku kurang suka dengan pattern ini.. engga tau bisa di acc sama bn / engga ya
06:54 ekafjr: waduh jelek yah
06:54 [ Arika ]: 00:34:175 - tambah not satu deh
06:54 [ Arika ]: beatnya ke skip 1 disini
06:55 [ Arika ]: 00:35:790 (2) - ini dipindah ke 00:35:559 - dan buat repeat slider sampai di 00:36:021 - 
06:55 [ Arika ]: 00:37:175 (4) - menurutku lebih baik diubah ke slider aja dan mulai dari 00:36:944 - karena kamu skip 1 not lagi disini
06:56 [ Arika ]: 00:43:867 (1,2) - lebih baik jangan dibuat overlap disini deh, mengurangi tingkat kebaikan mapsetnya
06:57 [ Arika ]: kalau menurutku, kalau memang masih mau di keep overlap bisa dipindah 00:44:790 (3) - di kepala 00:45:252 (4) - dan 00:44:329 (2) - dipindah ke tempat 00:44:790 (3) - 
06:58 ekafjr: http://puu.sh/pNaGQ.PNG spacing dah bener kok
06:58 ekafjr: following vocal soalnya jadi drumnya gak ane ambil
06:58 [ Arika ]: 00:48:482 (5,6) - kamu bisa buat ini lurus atau blanket supaya lebih bagus
06:59 [ Arika ]: tapi kalau di skip pasti newbie bakal ngira slider itu sampai disitu atau ada satu not yang dia skip *padahal tidak*
07:00 ekafjr: ds ane jauhin
07:00 [ Arika ]: memang masalahnya bukan di spacing loh
07:00 [ Arika ]: yadehh~
07:00 [ Arika ]: kan cuman saran
07:00 [ Arika ]: 00:54:320 (5) - ini di nc loh
07:01 [ Arika ]: 01:07:059 (1) - overlapnya engga bagus '^'
07:02 [ Arika ]: yahh kalau memang *malas* untuk remap engga masalah sih, nanti bakal susah aja '^'
07:02 [ Arika ]: lanjut ya, aku engga mau cek semuanya btw
07:02 [ Arika ]: *recheck*
07:03 *[ Arika ] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016934 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Hard]]
07:03 [ Arika ]: Hard ya.
07:04 ekafjr: wkwkwk ane nub bang jadi lama klo benerin mod
07:04 [ Arika ]: iya deh~
07:06 [ Arika ]: kamu butuh 1 diff lagi buat tutupin star rating kamu antara normal-hard
07:09 [ Arika ]: 00:03:252 (1) - repeatnya sampai beat putih loh
07:09 [ Arika ]: 00:05:098 (1,2) - aku lebih prefer kalau bagian ini dibuat lurus aja
07:10 [ Arika ]: 00:15:713 (6,1) - mending di blanket deh menurutku
07:11 [ Arika ]: 00:31:867 (3,4) -  ini dibuat lurus aja deh
07:11 [ Arika ]: 00:34:175 (5,1) - aku agak kurang suka kalau slidernya satu arah kayak gini sih sebenarnya
07:12 [ Arika ]: 00:35:098 (2,3,4) - kalau menurutku ini dibuat sama deh ds nya
07:13 [ Arika ]: 00:35:790 (5,6,1) - ini buat bingung player btw.. dan langsung dibuat sudden kayak 00:36:021 (6,1) - 
07:13 [ Arika ]: 00:49:175 (1) - downbeat lagi
07:14 [ Arika ]: ini engga cocok kalau dibuat slider disitu '^'
07:14 [ Arika ]: bukan masalah di following beat / vocal ya.. itu memang bener" downbeat dan musti di remap
07:14 [ Arika ]: 00:55:059 (2) - New Combo
07:14 [ Arika ]: 01:00:059 (5,6) - bisa dibuat blanket
07:15 [ Arika ]: 01:03:059 (2,5) - again ^
07:15 ekafjr: itu hard
07:16 [ Arika ]: 01:15:059 (2,5) - lebih prefer di stack deh
07:16 [ Arika ]: kenapa hard?
07:16 [ Arika ]: 01:27:059 (1) - remove combonya aja deh kayak kamu buat di Normalnya
07:16 [ Arika ]: sudah ya~
07:17 [ Arika ]: 1.65*-2.84* itu ketinggian btw
07:17 ekafjr: bingung 00:32:559 (3,4) -  mod yg mana sih
07:17 ekafjr: hard apa normal
07:18 ekafjr: ohh itu masih normal
07:18 [ Arika ]: normal kok
07:18 [ Arika ]: iya
07:37 ekafjr: udh bang modnya
07:37 [ Arika ]: ok~ aku savelog ya
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
tatemae
yo
Insane
00:04:636 (2,3,4) - maybe isosceles triangle? (00:06:944 (1,2,3) - like this)
00:36:252 (1) - remove nc
00:36:713 (2) - nc
00:51:021 (1) - same as above
00:41:098 (4,1) - improve blanket
Hard
00:05:559 (2,3) - can you blanket better? 00:06:944 (1,2) - like this
00:15:713 (6,1) - ^
00:23:559 (1,2) - ^
00:24:021 (2,1) - nazi stack
Nice song. Good luck \:D/
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

SherryCherry wrote:

yo
Insane
00:04:636 (2,3,4) - maybe isosceles triangle? (00:06:944 (1,2,3) - like this) this not triangle
00:36:252 (1) - remove nc keep
00:36:713 (2) - nc ^
00:51:021 (1) - same as above consider it
00:41:098 (4,1) - improve blanket done

Hard
00:05:559 (2,3) - can you blanket better? 00:06:944 (1,2) - like this
00:15:713 (6,1) - ^ not blanket
00:23:559 (1,2) - ^ fix
00:24:021 (2,1) - nazi stack what wrong

Nice song. Good luck \:D/
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr
Update !!
insane

Increase ds for kiai 2,2
Haruto
1,815 posts
Joined December 2013
Haruto
hello, just some quick look while testplay. i hope you can check it soon cuz you haven't replied anything/respond to my concerns xD
IRC tho
22:25 ekafjr: bang haruto bisa test map bentar
22:26 Haruto: bisa
22:26 Haruto: bentar gw main dulu
22:26 ekafjr: wahh
22:26 *ekafjr is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016935 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
22:26 ekafjr: cobain ya bang
22:28 Haruto: map itu lagi?
22:28 ekafjr: iya wkwkwkw
22:29 ekafjr: aneh sih mapnya wkwkw
22:30 Haruto: quick look aja ya
22:30 ekafjr: quick look apaan tuh
22:31 Haruto: check mapnya sekilas gitu
22:31 Haruto: 00:09:252 (2,3,4,5) - imperfect square
22:31 Haruto: 00:16:636 (2,3) - spacing bisa lebih jauh
22:31 Haruto: 00:18:482 (2,3,4,5,1) - imperfect stack+square
22:32 Haruto: 00:22:059 (2) - recommended buat distack aja ini
22:32 Haruto: 00:24:021 (2,1) - harusnya (1) stacked dibawah (2)
22:33 Haruto: 01:03:059 (2,5) - blanket ga ini?
22:33 Haruto: dah itu aja sih di hard wkw
22:34 Haruto: insane
22:34 Haruto: 00:26:098 (3,5) - hampir kesentuh, mungkin (5) bisa dijauhin lagi
22:34 Haruto: other than that seems fine
22:34 Haruto: 00:54:320 (1) - oh ini
22:34 Haruto: curvenya dong pls
22:34 Haruto: mz ekafjr hl
22:34 Haruto: tolong dicek ya c:
22:35 ekafjr: hl apa bang
22:35 Haruto: highlight
22:35 Haruto: maksudnya manggil kamu lol
22:35 ekafjr: wkwkkww
22:36 ekafjr: siap bang makasih modnya
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Haruto wrote:

hello, just some quick look while testplay. i hope you can check it soon cuz you haven't replied anything/respond to my concerns xD
IRC tho
22:25 ekafjr: bang haruto bisa test map bentar
22:26 Haruto: bisa
22:26 Haruto: bentar gw main dulu
22:26 ekafjr: wahh
22:26 *ekafjr is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016935 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
22:26 ekafjr: cobain ya bang
22:28 Haruto: map itu lagi?
22:28 ekafjr: iya wkwkwkw
22:29 ekafjr: aneh sih mapnya wkwkw
22:30 Haruto: quick look aja ya
22:30 ekafjr: quick look apaan tuh
22:31 Haruto: check mapnya sekilas gitu
22:31 Haruto: 00:09:252 (2,3,4,5) - imperfect square
22:31 Haruto: 00:16:636 (2,3) - spacing bisa lebih jauh
22:31 Haruto: 00:18:482 (2,3,4,5,1) - imperfect stack+square
22:32 Haruto: 00:22:059 (2) - recommended buat distack aja ini
22:32 Haruto: 00:24:021 (2,1) - harusnya (1) stacked dibawah (2)
22:33 Haruto: 01:03:059 (2,5) - blanket ga ini?
22:33 Haruto: dah itu aja sih di hard wkw
22:34 Haruto: insane
22:34 Haruto: 00:26:098 (3,5) - hampir kesentuh, mungkin (5) bisa dijauhin lagi
22:34 Haruto: other than that seems fine
22:34 Haruto: 00:54:320 (1) - oh ini
22:34 Haruto: curvenya dong pls
22:34 Haruto: mz ekafjr hl
22:34 Haruto: tolong dicek ya c:
22:35 ekafjr: hl apa bang
22:35 Haruto: highlight
22:35 Haruto: maksudnya manggil kamu lol
22:35 ekafjr: wkwkkww
22:36 ekafjr: siap bang makasih modnya


so fast mod lol :v
kunka
1,569 posts
Joined July 2012
kunka
Hi.
From your request.
General

  1. Unnecessary Inherrited points is set. The same setting is not necessary. Please remove it. 00:23:559 - 01:16:559 - http://puu.sh/pR8gs.png
  2. The suggestion of the hitsounds is effective in all diff.
Insane

  1. 00:03:252 (7) - The end point thinks that 00:03:598 - is good imo. The 00:03:713 - isn't bad. However, It seems slightly unnatural. And the NC is different from hard diff. I think that NC of the hard diff is right.
  2. 00:07:636 (1) - I think that the NC is not necessary.
  3. 00:32:444 - I think that hit object is necessary here. But it becomes difficult to playing when it add a circle. Therefore, I suggest it as follows. http://puu.sh/pR3WH.jpg
  4. 00:41:790 - There is a sound. Would you add a circle?
  5. 00:44:559 (5) - It is rhythm same as 00:44:098 (2,3,4) - and 00:45:021 (6,7,1) - . I recommend the same triple to make a flow.
  6. 01:00:309 (6,7,1,2) - Rhythm is strange tbh. try this pls http://puu.sh/pR4zA.jpg I recommend that I pick up the sound of the snare with a slider.
  7. 01:02:059 (5) - This is overmap. Because, there is no sound here. You change the playback rate to 25%, and please hear it. Therefore, I suggest it as follows. http://puu.sh/pR4WK.jpg
  8. 01:07:059 (1) - finish to head.
  9. 01:07:559 (2) - ^
  10. 01:08:434 (6) - ^ I think that this is not necessary. (overmap)
  11. 01:11:059 (1) - finish to head.
  12. 01:12:559 (1,2) - swap NC.
  13. 01:14:559 (1,3) - ^
  14. 01:16:559 (1) - Because a sound is strong, I recommend a jump. And I think that the NC is not necessary. I think that you should make it the same as hard diff. and pls add finish.
  15. 01:18:059 (1) - I think that the NC is not necessary.
  16. 01:19:059 (1) - finish to head.
  17. 01:20:559 (1) - ^
  18. 01:22:059 (1,5) - swap NC.
  19. 01:23:059 (5) - finish to head.
  20. 01:24:059 (1) - I think that the NC is not necessary.
Hard

  1. 00:03:252 (1) - It is the same as Insane diff. http://puu.sh/pR69l.jpg
  2. 00:49:175 (1,2) - I recommend ctrl+G. http://puu.sh/pR6n1.jpg
  3. 01:00:309 (6,7,1,2) - It is the same as Insane diff.
  4. 01:00:811 (1) - unsnapping error
  5. 01:06:934 - I think that the sound of this snare is necessary. Would you add a circle?
Normal

  1. I think that AR is low. I recommend 4.5 or 5.0. Hard diff and balance improve by changing it.
  2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - Please remove overlap. How about this? http://puu.sh/pR6Mg.jpg
  3. 00:21:713 (4,5) - Snapping of 1/6 is difficult for normal diff. It can substitute it with a reverse slider. http://puu.sh/pR7dS.jpg
  4. 00:41:098 (5) - unsnapping error
  5. 00:42:944 (2) - ^
  6. 00:46:636 (2,3,4) - fmm,,A flow is a straight line. I hope for the change of the flow personally. For example http://puu.sh/pR7rN.jpg
  7. 01:16:059 (3) - This doesn't have any problem. However, The 01:16:559 - is a very strong sound. So I think that hit object is good. How about this? http://puu.sh/pR7N0.jpg
GL ;)
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
[Normal]
00:11:098 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - TOO MANY FINISHES
00:03:252 (3) - This is pretty off-beat, especially for the end of the slider.

[Hard]
00:03:021 (5,6,1) - This sounds bad ;w; Also it makes the gap between Normal and Hard too large.
00:52:406 (5,6) - put them further from each other, it looks like 1/4.
01:13:809 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/pVNxk/0f65784aa3.jpg
01:26:059 (3,1) - Too far

[Insane]
00:18:482 (2) - 1/2 slider plays better here, otherwise it feels too empty
00:39:252 (3,4) - Too far
00:40:175 (5,7) - Stack
Rhythms are well.
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Seems there needs improvement in Insane about pattern and layout.
Hard and Normal are ok though.

Good luck!
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missa1912
512 posts
Joined July 2015
missa1912
hi! mod from my queue :3

Normal

  1. 00:15:252 (5) - move it a bit up, so it flows better from 4
  2. 00:24:482 (2,3) - those sliders feel a bit off, try end those on blue thick, and add a note in 00:25:175 - like: http://puu.sh/pRfn7/86098d5880.jpg
  3. 00:28:175 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:31:867 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:55:809 (2) - i think this need to start at the blue thick next like: http://puu.sh/pRhml/7bc6a3451c.jpg
  6. 01:11:809 (2) - ^
  7. 01:18:809 - add a note(?

Hard

  1. CS 3.5(? cause normal is 3, insane is 4 and it fits very well imo
  2. 00:10:175 (5,6) - what about this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5545042 cause a pause there doesnt fit very well (following vocal)
  3. 01:18:934 - triple(?
  4. 01:07:934 - note here(?

Insane

  • 00:06:713 (5,1,2,3,4) - ugly star ;A; make it with ctrl+shift+d
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Regraz wrote:

[Normal]
00:11:098 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - TOO MANY FINISHES
00:03:252 (3) - This is pretty off-beat, especially for the end of the slider. consider it I cant think about other rhythm

[Hard]
00:03:021 (5,6,1) - This sounds bad ;w; Also it makes the gap between Normal and Hard too large.
00:52:406 (5,6) - put them further from each other, it looks like 1/4.oke

Continue later
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

missa1912 wrote:

hi! mod from my queue :3

Normal

  1. 00:15:252 (5) - move it a bit up, so it flows better from 4
  2. 00:24:482 (2,3) - those sliders feel a bit off, try end those on blue thick, and add a note in 00:25:175 - like: http://puu.sh/pRfn7/86098d5880.jpg reserve slider change
  3. 00:28:175 (2,3) - ^ ^
  4. 00:31:867 (2,3) - ^ ^
  5. 00:55:809 (2) - i think this need to start at the blue thick next like: http://puu.sh/pRhml/7bc6a3451c.jpg consider
  6. 01:11:809 (2) - ^ ^
  7. 01:18:809 - add a note(?

Hard

  1. CS 3.5(? cause normal is 3, insane is 4 and it fits very well imo no its not problem
  2. 00:10:175 (5,6) - what about this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5545042 cause a pause there doesnt fit very well (following vocal) fix
  3. 01:18:934 - triple(? no
  4. 01:07:934 - note here(? consider

Insane

  • 00:06:713 (5,1,2,3,4) - ugly star ;A; make it with ctrl+shift+d
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cisphobia
136 posts
Joined July 2012
cisphobia
hello! m4m from my queue
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/472474

Insane


00:05:098 (1,2) - Make the followpoint straight; move 1 to x:220 y:308

00:06:713 (5) - NC, and take off 00:06:944 (1) 's NC to get rid of slow followpoint

00:07:406 (4) - Move this a bit to the left to make an upside-down star shape?

00:13:636 (1) - NC cause big pause in the song

00:26:559 (4) - Move to the left a bit to make the triangle look less crooked, atm its leaning more to the right

00:30:482 (6,7,8) - Move more to the left so that the followpoint is in the same direction as the triplet

00:37:175 (4) - Move down 3 grid spaces or to y:200, to make it even with the first note of the triangle

01:07:934 (3,4) - These aren't following the slider, they're a bit lower

01:08:059 (4,5) - Make the followpoint straight

01:11:059 (1) - I think you should make this curve with 01:10:559 (6,7,8,9) , rather than going straight down

Hard


00:13:636 (6) - NC, big pause

00:14:098 (1) - If you do this^, take off NC

00:31:406 (2,3,4,1) - All 4 of these sliders overlap in some way, and they look crowded. Space them out a bit

00:45:482 (1,2,3) - Make this straighter

01:16:559 (5,1) - Touching, doesn't look that great

Normal


No problems with this diff ;o

This map is already really good, and I think ready for ranking.
Good luck! ;) ;)
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr
Any thinks fix Thanks for mod
Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
1,072 posts
Joined May 2012
Dailycare
okay
^^b
2016-07-06 16:49 ekafjr: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016935 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
2016-07-06 16:49 ekafjr: my second map i hope this can be ranked lol
2016-07-06 16:49 Dailycare: lol hope you rank it xd
2016-07-06 16:49 Dailycare: oh
2016-07-06 16:49 Dailycare: song sounds cute xd
2016-07-06 16:50 ekafjr: rip engglish wkwkkw
2016-07-06 16:51 Dailycare: lol xd
2016-07-06 16:51 ekafjr: ahh rip acc
2016-07-06 16:51 Dailycare: i'm not good at DT :p
2016-07-06 16:51 ekafjr: is bad or not ?
2016-07-06 16:51 ekafjr: ohh
2016-07-06 16:51 ekafjr: i see :v
2016-07-06 16:51 Dailycare: TwT
2016-07-06 16:51 Dailycare: um
2016-07-06 16:52 Dailycare: i think it's not bad but
2016-07-06 16:52 Dailycare: it would be more better if you could improve some patterns
2016-07-06 16:53 Dailycare: some notes seem to be put randomly imo x.x
2016-07-06 16:53 Dailycare: btw is it your second map?
2016-07-06 16:53 ekafjr: yeah
2016-07-06 16:54 Dailycare: awesome
2016-07-06 16:54 ekafjr: all note on my map always keep ds :v
2016-07-06 16:54 Dailycare: i know xd
2016-07-06 16:55 Dailycare: but..
2016-07-06 16:55 Dailycare: 00:03:944 (2,3,4) - 
2016-07-06 16:55 Dailycare: such notes make players a bit confused TwT
2016-07-06 16:55 ekafjr: `ahhh :v
2016-07-06 16:55 Dailycare: anyway
2016-07-06 16:56 Dailycare: i think you have an ability to rank it
2016-07-06 16:56 ekafjr: how i can get better :V
2016-07-06 16:56 Dailycare: um
2016-07-06 16:56 ekafjr: 00:03:944 (2,3,4) -  its really suck kwkwkwwk
2016-07-06 16:57 Dailycare: lol or
2016-07-06 16:57 Dailycare: what about decreasing the spacing between (3,4)?
2016-07-06 16:58 Dailycare: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5548859
2016-07-06 16:58 ekafjr: ahh my star :v
2016-07-06 16:58 Dailycare: lol
2016-07-06 16:58 ekafjr: oke i try
2016-07-06 16:58 Dailycare: :D
2016-07-06 17:00 ekafjr: 00:06:713 (5,1,2,3) - it same
2016-07-06 17:01 Dailycare: yea it's similar
2016-07-06 17:01 Dailycare: but it's not a big issue xd
2016-07-06 17:02 Dailycare: just change them if you want
2016-07-06 17:02 ekafjr: lol no change :v
2016-07-06 17:02 Dailycare: k cool xd
2016-07-06 17:02 Dailycare: and..
2016-07-06 17:02 Dailycare: 00:12:944 (7,1) - 
2016-07-06 17:02 Dailycare: it made me little confused too TwT
2016-07-06 17:03 Dailycare: 00:15:252 (1) - what about moving it to (432,28)?
2016-07-06 17:04 ekafjr: why :3
2016-07-06 17:04 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5548881
2016-07-06 17:04 Dailycare: for better shape :p
2016-07-06 17:05 Dailycare: also you can reject it
2016-07-06 17:07 ekafjr: oke
2016-07-06 17:08 Dailycare: um.
2016-07-06 17:08 Dailycare: 01:13:559 (1,1) - 
2016-07-06 17:09 Dailycare: why did you set NCs here?
2016-07-06 17:09 ekafjr: new sound XD
2016-07-06 17:10 Dailycare: hm it seems like NC spams..
2016-07-06 17:10 ekafjr: remove it lol
2016-07-06 17:10 Dailycare: c,cool
2016-07-06 17:11 Dailycare: also consider removing NC at 01:20:559 (1) - 
2016-07-06 17:12 ekafjr: cymbal cant to nc ?
2016-07-06 17:13 Dailycare: actually that NC setting is not bad
2016-07-06 17:15 Dailycare: if you want to keep it then sure, you can keep it
2016-07-06 17:15 Dailycare: anyway
2016-07-06 17:15 Dailycare: 01:18:934 - 
2016-07-06 17:15 ekafjr: change lol :V
2016-07-06 17:15 Dailycare: oh o.o
2016-07-06 17:16 Dailycare: why didn't you put a circle here..?
2016-07-06 17:16 Dailycare: for emphasizing 01:19:059 (1) - ?
2016-07-06 17:16 ekafjr: vocal it so strong :v
2016-07-06 17:16 ekafjr: i m prefer follow vocal
2016-07-06 17:17 Dailycare: yea it's better imo
2016-07-06 17:18 Dailycare: could you increase the spacing between 01:24:059 (1,2) -  slightly?
2016-07-06 17:19 ekafjr: oke
2016-07-06 17:19 Dailycare: nice
2016-07-06 17:19 Dailycare: oh hey
2016-07-06 17:20 Dailycare: 00:05:559 (2,3) - you should increase this
2016-07-06 17:20 ekafjr: nani :v
2016-07-06 17:20 ekafjr: ahh my blanket :v
2016-07-06 17:20 Dailycare: um
2016-07-06 17:21 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5548923
2016-07-06 17:21 Dailycare: what about this?
2016-07-06 17:21 Dailycare: that blanket is also not bad to see...
2016-07-06 17:22 ekafjr: oke change it
2016-07-06 17:22 Dailycare: yea
2016-07-06 17:22 Dailycare: rest seem fine
2016-07-06 17:23 ekafjr: can i ask
2016-07-06 17:24 Dailycare: um?
2016-07-06 17:24 ekafjr: why this 01:06:184 (5,6) -
2016-07-06 17:24 ekafjr: and this 01:07:934 (3,4) -
2016-07-06 17:24 ekafjr: and 01:10:184 (4,5) -
2016-07-06 17:25 ekafjr: its really hard to get good acc :v
2016-07-06 17:25 ekafjr: why ?
2016-07-06 17:25 ekafjr: overmap ?
2016-07-06 17:25 Dailycare: um maybe they are kinda hard to play lol
2016-07-06 17:25 Dailycare: slider-circle-circle
2016-07-06 17:26 Dailycare: it's little hard for me
2016-07-06 17:26 ekafjr: no no you re good play my map
2016-07-06 17:26 Dailycare: hehe
2016-07-06 17:27 Dailycare: but some players may be hard to play it well
2016-07-06 17:27 ekafjr: yeah
2016-07-06 17:27 ekafjr: its so hard lol
2016-07-06 17:27 Dailycare: yea TwT
2016-07-06 17:28 ekafjr: first time play this map acc just a 92 with dt lol
2016-07-06 17:28 ekafjr: pp 5000 :v
2016-07-06 17:28 Dailycare: oh ;w;
2016-07-06 17:28 ekafjr: for first time you re really good :3
2016-07-06 17:29 Dailycare: xD
2016-07-06 17:29 Dailycare: glad to hear that xd
2016-07-06 17:30 ekafjr: lol and this my problem i m really not understand why my map it so hard to get good acc :V
2016-07-06 17:30 ekafjr: btw thanks alot daily care :v
2016-07-06 17:30 Dailycare: ehh
2016-07-06 17:30 Dailycare: np XD
2016-07-06 17:31 Dailycare: but it's not a big problem that it's hard to get better acc x.x
2016-07-06 17:31 Dailycare: don't care about it lol
2016-07-06 17:31 ekafjr: hahahaha
2016-07-06 17:31 Dailycare: just do your best hehe
2016-07-06 17:32 ekafjr: thanks :V
2016-07-06 17:32 Dailycare: np~
Izzywing
osu! Alumni
2,248 posts
Joined March 2016
Izzywing
Hi, this is a NM from my queue :)

[Insane]

00:06:713 (5,1,3) - maybe put these the same distance apart so it looks neater

00:20:329 (2,6,7,8) - reposition so these don't overlap maybe

00:38:329 (1,2) - I think this looks nice if they have the same amount of curve, right now 2 is very flat and it looks kinda weird

00:47:559 (1) - space this note out more I think, its a downbeat and a loud vocal sound

00:47:559 (1,3) - very slight overlap

00:53:097 (7) - new combo

That's all from me. Good luck! nice song.
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