xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my lazyness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

ADN's Kantan

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  00:30:151 - Is possible add k note here? ... specifically to follow piano sound. The snapping would be rather complicated for Kantan.
  00:36:151 - Same ^ same as ^
  00:42:151 - Same ^ ^
  00:48:151 - Same ^ ^
  
  starts spinner in 01:33:190- and finish same in 01:35:290- ... I think the current start point sounds much more natural.

ADN's Oni

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  00:54:901 - change this note to k ... to follow vocal sound (?) No change as vocal pitch is the same as 00:54:526 (190) -
  
  01:01:839 - In this part is confuse, but is possible add note? I would like to focus more on the vocal in this session.
  
  01:21:057 - is possible fill this part ... for focus in piano sound (?) Retained for break consistency as 01:09:057 -

xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my lazyness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

Futsuu

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  starts spinner in 01:33:190- and finish same in 01:35:290- I think the current start point sounds much more natural.

Muzukashii

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  starts spinner in 01:33:190- and finish in 01:35:290- focusing in vocal sound but ends where have last BG sound. think the current start point sounds much more natural.

1. 5 OD is fine.
   
2. 00:08:589 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - You don't need this many notes here, I think. The song is peaceful like Futsuu maps it.
3. 00:19:464 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - There are parts like this in Muzukashii that are the same as Oni, when they could instead be made easier to have better spread with Futsuu. Any difference would help.
4. 00:25:839 (87,88) - These notes don't really fit any rhythm.
5. 00:50:589 - Here the spread thing kinda happens too. Futsuu is clost to Kantan but Muzu is close to Oni. Especially 00:55:839 (174,175,176,177,178,179) - lol.
   
6. 01:09:526 - Add a note?
7. 01:11:964 (222,223,224,225,226,227) - Less notes?
8. 01:17:964 (245,246) - Swap? Since you have a lot of dk dk
9. 01:22:464 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - Probably don't need 1/4

1. 00:18:339 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - Too many breaks here, try to add a note somewhere.
2. 00:25:839 (44) - Should go at 00:25:745
   
3. 00:26:589 - For some reason this slow part is one of the hardest parts of the map. Remove notes from this and from Muzukashii.
4. 00:50:589 (93,94,95,96) - Same, less breaks.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Muzukashii]

1. 5 OD is fine. OD +0.5 to 5
   
2. 00:08:589 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - You don't need this many notes here, I think. The song is peaceful like Futsuu maps it. Fixed, removed the notes that stick together (1/2 and 1/4 pattern)
3. 00:19:464 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - There are parts like this in Muzukashii that are the same as Oni, when they could instead be made easier to have better spread with Futsuu. Any difference would help. Reduced Note Density at kiai part.
4. 00:25:839 (87,88) - These notes don't really fit any rhythm. Moved 1/4 before.
5. 00:50:589 - Here the spread thing kinda happens too. Futsuu is clost to Kantan but Muzu is close to Oni. Especially 00:55:839 (174,175,176,177,178,179) - lol. Same, Reduced some notes to maintain the spread.
   
6. 01:09:526 - Add a note? Added, following vocal.
7. 01:11:964 (222,223,224,225,226,227) - Less notes? Added few 1/2 notes.
8. 01:17:964 (245,246) - Swap? Since you have a lot of dk dk nice catch, Changed to kd
9. 01:22:464 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - Probably don't need 1/4 kdddk is fine, Thanks!

[Futsuu]

1. 00:18:339 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - Too many breaks here, try to add a note somewhere. Added 00:19:464 (30) - and 00:20:964 (34) -
2. 00:25:839 (44) - Should go at 00:25:745 I am not sure with this 1/4, but I agree with you, fixed.
   
3. 00:26:589 - For some reason this slow part is one of the hardest parts of the map. Remove notes from this and from Muzukashii. I am following the vocal part, if this is empty, it's really strange. but, I can see your point. Thanks for pointing out this. I will consider to remove this.
4. 00:50:589 (93,94,95,96) - Same, less breaks. Added 00:50:964 (96,97) - and 00:52:464 (100,101) -

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Here is an IRC mod as requested by Prophecy to fix the spread issues present in Futsuu and Muzukashii.

IRC mod with Prophecy, June 18, 2016

16:27 Prophecy: hi nardo
16:27 *Prophecy is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/945421 Shoujo Fractal - Samayoi no Mei (MV Short)]
16:28 Prophecy: Can you help me to improve the spread in this set?
16:28 Prophecy: It's quite confusing with the spread between Futsuu and Muzukashii
16:28 Nardoxyribonucleic: Hmm
16:30 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:11:026 - add d as the music is a bit different from 00:08:964 -
16:30 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/945421 Shoujo Fractal - Samayoi no Mei (MV Short) [Muzukashii]]
16:31 Prophecy: oh, I see
16:37 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:56:120 (165) - move to 00:54:901 - and delete 00:56:026 (165) -
16:37 Prophecy: Following vocal, ok!
16:40 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:13:839 (220) - add finish and delete 01:14:026 (221) - to reduce note density.
16:41 Prophecy: OK!
16:42 Nardoxyribonucleic: It seems that you reduced the note density from 01:04:089 - to 01:08:964 - , but it turned out to be a bit undermapped for Muzukashii.
16:43 Prophecy: but Ozzy said the gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii is a little bit big!?
16:44 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:05:401 - add k, 01:06:901 - add d and change 01:07:089 (199) - to K.
16:44 Prophecy: I changed dk dk -> dkddk
16:44 Nardoxyribonucleic: But now the spread with Oni is a bit wide now
16:44 Prophecy: ok!
16:45 Prophecy: Still put a don between dk dk ?
16:45 Nardoxyribonucleic: no need
16:45 Prophecy: OK!
16:46 Nardoxyribonucleic: add k ? The gap sounds a bit weird.
16:46 Nardoxyribonucleic: at 01:08:964 -
16:47 Prophecy: yep, I added
16:48 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:12:432 (217) - as Ozzy said, maybe delete this?
16:49 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:17:401 - add k and 01:18:901 - add d ? Same as the first part of kiai
16:50 Prophecy: It Sure !
16:50 Prophecy: *
16:50 Prophecy: Maybe we should add few notes on Futsuu?
16:51 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes, I will go over Futsuu with you after Muzukashii
16:51 Prophecy: ok
16:52 Nardoxyribonucleic: From 01:14:964 - to 01:16:089 - maybe try d k kkk d k D ? I think the kiai should contain a bit more 1/4 notes
16:52 Nardoxyribonucleic: http://puu.sh/pwYDO.jpg
16:54 Prophecy: nice idea,
16:54 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:21:526 - add d to improve the spread with Oni ?
16:54 Prophecy: yea
16:54 Prophecy: How about the spinner part?
16:56 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:26:776 (272) - move to 01:27:432 - and change to k, then change 01:27:151 (273) - to k ?
16:57 Nardoxyribonucleic: This is to cohere with the pattern at 01:14:964 -
16:57 Prophecy: but kkd is better :^)
16:57 Prophecy: ok, kkk is the best
16:57 Prophecy: in Muzu
16:58 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:19:464 (245,246) - use k D instead of K d.
16:59 Nardoxyribonucleic: The stress is wrongly put imo
17:00 Prophecy: 01:18:526 (242,243,244,245) - dkdk is weird here imo
17:00 Nardoxyribonucleic: you should take a look at 01:06:526 - then.
17:01 Prophecy: ok, is fine now
17:02 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/861252 Shoujo Fractal - Samayoi no Mei (MV Short) [Futsuu]]
17:02 Prophecy: ok!
17:06 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:19:464 (30,34) - change to k for a smoother flow?
17:07 Prophecy: yeah, same as Muzu
17:09 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:29:214 (53) - move to 00:27:714 - and change to k, then delete 00:26:964 (48) - ?
17:09 Nardoxyribonucleic: The gap with Kantan is big, so you need to avoid 1/2 notes
17:10 Prophecy: yeas
17:10 Prophecy: *yes
17:10 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:29:964 (54) - delete too
17:10 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:32:964 (58) - ^
17:11 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:35:214 (63) - and 00:35:964 (65) - ^
17:11 Prophecy: ok!
17:12 Prophecy: but the gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii will larger than before.
17:12 Nardoxyribonucleic: I will go back to Muzukashii later.
17:13 Prophecy: ok
17:14 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:38:964 (68) - move to 00:39:714 - , delete 00:41:214 (73) - and 00:41:964 (75) -
17:14 Nardoxyribonucleic: then 00:42:526 - add k
17:14 Nardoxyribonucleic: to keep the pattern consistent with the previous one
17:15 Prophecy: yeah, the pattern is simple now
17:15 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:44:964 (78) - 00:47:214 (83) - 00:47:964 (85) - delete
17:15 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:48:526 - add k
17:19 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:14:026 - add d
17:19 Nardoxyribonucleic: Now you need to make the kiai in Futsuu harder
17:20 Prophecy: yeah
17:20 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:14:589 (138) - D as you did in Muzukashii?
17:23 Nardoxyribonucleic: Done? It wouldn't hurt if you add k at 01:09:339 - and 01:09:714 -
17:25 Nardoxyribonucleic: How come you went AFK in the middle of the irc lol
17:27 Prophecy: lol
17:27 Prophecy: I go to WC, sorry ;*
17:28 Prophecy: ok, added
17:29 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:15:339 - add k and change 01:15:714 (141) - to k for the same sense as above
17:29 Prophecy: same as before kkd
17:30 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:21:339 - 01:21:714 - as well
17:30 Prophecy: ok!
17:32 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:25:651 - add k and change 01:25:089 (162) - to D for density increase?
17:32 Prophecy: yep, it's nice
17:33 Nardoxyribonucleic: Now we should go back to Muzu
17:33 Prophecy: OK!
17:35 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:27:714 (86) - 00:30:714 (95) - delete to keep a gap with Oni
17:35 Prophecy: nice
17:35 Nardoxyribonucleic: The same goes to the remaining 3 similar patterns
17:36 Nardoxyribonucleic: delete 8 notes in total
17:36 Prophecy: done.
17:38 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:38:964 (111,112) - swapping these notes to k d could make it consistent with 00:26:964 (83,84) -
17:38 Prophecy: it would be strange here (00:39:901 (115,116) - ) maybe using a dk?
17:39 Nardoxyribonucleic: dk cannot fit the 1/1 kats afterwards
17:40 Prophecy: GIve me 5 mins, something need to do
17:40 Prophecy: sorry for this
17:41 Nardoxyribonucleic: That's all from me already :3

OzzyOzrock wrote:

THANK YOU

Bubbled!

Regraz wrote:

Fix hitsounds issues, let's try!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

THANK YOU

Surono wrote:

Thank you, Surono 3< 3

IamKwaN wrote:

I could only find this, so no suffix is more suitable. MV　ショート (Romanisation: MV Short) describes the MV instead of the song.

Better use 少女フラクタル as the Artist as shown in the video, the romanisation is Shoujo Fractal. '柚木梨沙' and 'Yuzuki Risa', with '幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ～ Border of Life', 'Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura ~' belong to the Tags.

Other fields are fine.

http://puu.sh/o9uuN/50ab3756b7.png from http://www.yuuhei-satellite.jp/2999

o/

Surono wrote:

re-gz, prop

also Footshoe diff fullmods, ez? :^)

Satellite wrote:

Great First ranked 少女フラクタル song xd congrats :p