Hi Nanatsu and Steins. Added to the issues addressed above, I want to point out a few more things after a quick look.
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General]
00:22:514 - 00:30:914 - This part feels a bit crowded with notes. The song may have a lot of beats here, but still has a calm atmosphere. In Inner Oni, this isn't much of a problem as other sections are denser than this; but in the difficulites below, that difference isn't that clear. It'd be appreciated to have this section reduced a bit in density in Futsuu-Oni.
Suggestions:
Futsuu: Move 00:26:114 (10) - 1 beat forwards, and remove 00:27:014 (12) - . Keep a similar rhythm for next parts. It should be like this:
Muzukashii: Remove 00:24:539 (11,12) - , 00:26:939 (21,22) - , 00:29:339 (31,32) - , 00:31:814 (41) -
Oni: Remove notes like 00:23:714 (13) - , 00:23:939 (15) - , 00:24:614 (21) - , 00:24:839 (23) -, etc.
02:23:864 - For this beat, a big note is much more appreciated and would give a better ending feeling than the spinner.
[
Kantan]
- SV could be 1.40
- 00:37:514 (17) - This note could be moved to 00:37:814 - , like 00:33:014 -.
- Added to Nardo's suggestion for 00:51:914 (42) - , 00:53:114 (44) - can be deleted too, to emphasize better the big notes.
- 01:59:114 (6,7) - There seems to be a sudden layer change here, from bass to the synth, feeling a bit awkward. I'd suggest move 01:59:414 (7) - to 01:59:714 - , 02:01:214 (11) - to 02:00:914 - , and remove 02:00:614 (10) - , this would keep following the bass while focusing a bit on the synth too (resulting rhythm would be dkd d dkd).
- How about adding notes in 02:21:764 - and 02:22:964 - (while moving 02:22:814 (8) - to 02:22:514 - ). This part is relatively quite compared with the song.
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Futsuu]
- 00:01:364 (2,4) - I'd suggest to remove notes like this to keep a bit simple the map, considering Muzukashii has a very similar rhythm.
- 01:26:714 (22,23) - Remove this notes and add a note in 01:27:014 - , it'd fit better the instrument you're following.
- 01:27:614 (26,29) - Shouldn't these notes be removed to be consistent with 01:22:514 (9,10,11,12) - ?
- 01:30:914 (36) - Move this to 01:30:614 - , to follow better the song.
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Muzukashii]
- 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - This section could be a bit different, right now it looks too similar to the next kiai (if not the same), which isn't a bad thing, but I feel it makes the kiai have less emphasis as we're already spoiling it here. There are three ways to change this: making it less dense, making it more don heavy, or following the bass.
[
Oni]
- 01:50:114 (412) - There's a missing slidertick. Extend this by 1/16. Also, check your other sliders.
- 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - Same as Muzukashii
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Inner Oni]
- 01:56:114 - 02:02:114 - Here the density is lower than the kiai! This is what you should've done in Muzukashii and Oni.
That'd be all.