Mihaugoku wrote:

Sorry, if the mod is bad, i'm just a beginner!
Mod from the Queue

[Vortex's Timeless Oni]
Note: in some parts of the map, the timing bar looks messy. Consider doing something about it.
00:36:566 (308,309,310) - i would place k good idea
02:14:614 (1185,1186,1187,1188,1189,1190) - for me it sound like there should be kdkkkkd or kdkkddd kdkkddk would be a really nice option here, good catch
06:02:011 (284) - d? k is better to match the strong pitch of the guitar
06:02:332 (288,289) - maybe kk? kd would be better

Overall a really good, interesting map. Thank you :3
I hope this mod helps!
Have a good day!

brdzxh wrote:

From my queue~

screenie of playthrough

shitmisses on streams V_V oh nice dude for sightread!

oh nice dude for sightread!
Cool map and an alright song!

First off, it seems like the first part focused more on jumps, while there is much room for some tripples and small streams. It felt a bit lacking, but it played fine. Yep true, because of the constant 1/4 drum throughout the song, decided to only map the drum when it changes in intensity otherwise the guitar/synth thingy/etc
There's room for kiai in the second half of the song yeah I get what you mean I decided on kiaiing the chorus but theres only one unfortunatly, I had the kiai on the deathstream part aswell at first but decided to remove it bc it's distract more than add something to the song for me, will see what to do

00:26:295 (6) - this should be more bent upwards towards 00:26:777 (7) - and this should maybe be moved a bit higher up sure thing will blanket with (4)
00:45:873 (5) - meh, it felt weird to go from a stream to a sideways slider; the 5,6,7,8 pattern plays fine, maybe rotate it a bit? Haven't really had any trouble bc of the slider leniency it should still be in the flow of the stream to (6) gonna keep it for now, will change this up if its gets mentioned again
00:56:785 (1) - this looks ugly with so many grey anchor points, and is unrankable iirc fixed made it rounder, but don't think its unrankble tho aslong as the direction is visible
00:57:427 (3) - ^ ^
00:57:988 (4,5) - maybe make these more visible? agreed made it same ds as between the sliders
01:08:259 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
03:53:306 (1) - idk, this just got my attention while playing ah yeah snapped to blue tick here for polarity with the next blue tick and the shhhh sound (wich starts and the anchor point)
03:59:084 (3) - remove a grey anchor point
04:00:046 (1) - ^
04:01:972 (1) - ^
04:06:786 (3) - ^ fixed all of these
04:07:749 (1) - remove multiple unnecessary anchor point oh god what was that
04:11:430 (2,1) - the stack looked weird >_< true because the sudden 1/6, but should play fine with 04:11:430 (2,1) - being a in the flow of the previous stream so keeping it
04:16:414 (4) - too many anchor points fix
04:17:376 (1) - ^ oh god fixed
04:21:227 (4) - ^fix
04:23:153 (4) - ^fix
05:21:575 (1) - ^ keeping this for now no good other way to recreate it, will wait
05:25:426 (1) - ^ fix
07:08:752 (1) - going downwards like this while coming from a stream that goes upwards will catch people off-guard, might have to change the direction intentional here, I want to break the flow here for the loud vocals and guitar kicking kicking in so was a bit meant to catch off guard like in the song :p, keeping it

There also a note at the end of a stream that triggered me while playing, but I cant seem to find it >_> either 05:59:925 (8) - or this 05:17:403 (1) - prob

I think that's it for my nm, good luck with rank

Mihaugoku wrote:

Sorry, if the mod is bad, i'm just a beginner!
Mod from the Queue

[Vortex's Timeless Oni]
Note: in some parts of the map, the timing bar looks messy. Consider doing something about it. Yeah its on the song/mp3 part unfortunatly not much we can do since I got it straight from the album I don't think theres a 'fixed' version of it somewhere
00:36:566 (308,309,310) - i would place k oh this is taiko my bad ^^
02:14:614 (1185,1186,1187,1188,1189,1190) - for me it sound like there should be kdkkkkd or kdkkddd
06:02:011 (284) - d?
06:02:332 (288,289) - maybe kk?

Overall a really good, interesting map.
I hope this mod helps!
Have a good day!

Wishkey wrote:

Mihaugoku wrote:

[Vortex's Timeless Oni]
Note: in some parts of the map, the timing bar looks messy. Consider doing something about it. Yeah its on the song/mp3 part unfortunatly not much we can do since I got it straight from the album I don't think theres a 'fixed' version of it somewhere

C00L wrote:

IRC mod

ble

2016-06-18 17:40 C00L: hey
2016-06-18 17:40 Wishkey: Yow
2016-06-18 17:41 C00L: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822384 Wintersun - Starchild]
2016-06-18 17:41 C00L: im gonna do a IRC if you dont mind
2016-06-18 17:41 Wishkey: Oh cool sure thing!
2016-06-18 17:43 C00L: 00:25:975 (4,6) -
2016-06-18 17:43 C00L: you could blanket this
2016-06-18 17:44 Wishkey: oh it isn't alrdy?
2016-06-18 17:44 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5418643
2016-06-18 17:45 Wishkey: ah rip the tail yeah fixing that :
2016-06-18 17:48 C00L: 01:52:469 (4) -
2016-06-18 17:48 C00L: you could move this to
2016-06-18 17:48 C00L: x:308 y:248
2016-06-18 17:48 C00L: so that it creates a sort of em
2016-06-18 17:48 C00L: DS similarity with
2016-06-18 17:48 C00L: 01:51:666 (7,7) -
2016-06-18 17:49 C00L: 01:55:197 (7) -
2016-06-18 17:49 C00L: move this to the slider end of
2016-06-18 17:49 C00L: 01:55:839 (1) -
2016-06-18 17:49 C00L: the current overlap aint
2016-06-18 17:49 C00L: good
2016-06-18 17:49 C00L: if you want to keep it as it is allign the slider start with the middle of 01:55:839 (1) -
2016-06-18 17:50 Wishkey: ah yeah gonna pick the latter
2016-06-18 17:50 C00L: latter?
2016-06-18 17:51 Wishkey: last suggestion :
2016-06-18 17:51 Wishkey: with the slider start in the middle
2016-06-18 17:51 C00L: oki
2016-06-18 17:51 C00L: 02:11:244 (1,4) -
2016-06-18 17:51 C00L: you could blanket this
2016-06-18 17:51 C00L: 02:12:689 (5) -
2016-06-18 17:51 C00L: and stack
2016-06-18 17:52 C00L: this note
2016-06-18 17:52 C00L: on top of the slider start
2016-06-18 17:53 C00L: 02:20:873 (1) -
2016-06-18 17:53 C00L: you could
2016-06-18 17:53 C00L: em
2016-06-18 17:53 Wishkey: ah yeah cool idea but don't really like the short ds from 4 to 5 then
2016-06-18 17:53 C00L: blanket this with 02:20:070 (9) -
2016-06-18 17:53 C00L: like so
2016-06-18 17:53 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5418723
2016-06-18 17:54 Wishkey: oh yeah! fixing that
2016-06-18 17:55 C00L: v
2016-06-18 17:55 C00L: 03:14:792 (1,3) -
2016-06-18 17:55 C00L: blanket
2016-06-18 17:56 Wishkey: ah damnit
2016-06-18 17:56 C00L: my ice cream finished x-x
2016-06-18 17:56 C00L: 03:31:161 (1,3) -
2016-06-18 17:56 C00L: this overlap is kinda weird
2016-06-18 17:57 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5418743
2016-06-18 17:57 C00L: try this
2016-06-18 17:57 C00L: no sorry
2016-06-18 17:57 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5418747
2016-06-18 17:57 C00L: this
2016-06-18 17:57 Wishkey: ah yeah looks better
2016-06-18 17:58 C00L: `:D
2016-06-18 17:58 C00L: 03:48:653 (2,1) -
2016-06-18 17:58 C00L: hmm
2016-06-18 17:59 Wishkey: ah yeah wanted to keep the 1.5 ds here like previous parts
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: 03:48:653 (2,1) -
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: yea sure i understand
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: so
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: em
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: but
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: but
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: fuck ds sometimes
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: 03:49:455 (1) -
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: put this
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: on
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: x:320 y:214
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: and then
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: 03:49:776 (2) -
2016-06-18 18:00 Wishkey: haha yeah but the jump would be a bit too sudden during that chill part :p
2016-06-18 18:00 C00L: x:472 y:308
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: nah man its oryt
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: its not that sudden
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: since you have jumps in all around this part
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: if they just appeared
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: the
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: n
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: em
2016-06-18 18:01 C00L: kaput
2016-06-18 18:02 Wishkey: yeah true but most aren't linear so you got that slider lenieny working for ya :
2016-06-18 18:02 C00L: x-x
2016-06-18 18:03 Wishkey: gonna increase it a bit too so it looks nicer and 03:49:134 (3,1) - will play the same dist as 03:49:455 (1,2) -
2016-06-18 18:04 C00L: yh the coordinates i gave you follow the 1,5 DS
2016-06-18 18:04 C00L: after 1,2
2016-06-18 18:05 Wishkey: ah ok cool will try it
2016-06-18 18:06 C00L: 04:33:747 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-06-18 18:06 C00L: this is really accurate
2016-06-18 18:06 C00L: so good
2016-06-18 18:07 Wishkey: haha ty ^^
2016-06-18 18:09 C00L: 07:24:077 (6,1) -
2016-06-18 18:09 C00L: i like this
2016-06-18 18:09 C00L: similar to what i do to emphasise shit
2016-06-18 18:10 C00L: map is good
2016-06-18 18:10 Wishkey: same that bit of a jump loving that :p
2016-06-18 18:10 C00L: id say the main thing about the map isnt the flow or the beat emphasis
2016-06-18 18:10 C00L: but its
2016-06-18 18:10 C00L: like
2016-06-18 18:10 C00L: weird overlaps
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: that make the map look unpolished
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: its little stuff like that
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: but if you find all of them a
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: nd
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: fix them
2016-06-18 18:11 Wishkey: yeah I know what mean the quiet part redoing some stuff
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: you will see a big difference in the way the map looks
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L:
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: apart from that
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: great
2016-06-18 18:11 C00L: the song
2016-06-18 18:12 C00L: dank

1. Taiko diff has weird tag "Mäenpää" fix this with "Mäenpää" replacement
2. soft-hitfinish2.wav has 17ms delay, max delay allowed is 4ms so this hitsound is unrankable.
   
3. Ranking Criteria says all diffs in a map should end at the same point. But your two diffs don't, make sure to fix. (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Guidelines)

1. Add combo colors
2. 00:29:151 - this timing point should be on top of 00:29:184 (1) -
3. 00:31:076 - same as above.
4. 00:47:798 - this one is slightly off, fix
5. 01:39:114 - same as above
   Check all the timing points and see if they are set correct then you should be fine.

Alveryn wrote:

hi from modreqs

[General]

1. Taiko diff has weird tag "Mäenpää" fix this with "Mäenpää" replacement Oh damn that came back, will tell Vortex if he can get it fixed for next update otherwise I'll update on the if/when this gets qualified
2. soft-hitfinish2.wav has 17ms delay, max delay allowed is 4ms so this hitsound is unrankable.
   oh thanks! fixing this gonna pick another hitsound for that! Tho I got it from a ranked map so weird that is has such a long delay
3. Ranking Criteria says all diffs in a map should end at the same point. But your two diffs don't, make sure to fix. (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Guidelines) Doesn't need to be for GD's iirc only your own diffs, but yeah I'll prob extend the slider or aks Vortex to stop at the synth aswell

[Time]

1. Add combo colors Left them unchecked because I don't have a custom skin for the map, so I want people to play with the colors they like
2. 00:29:151 - this timing point should be on top of 00:29:184 (1) -
3. 00:31:076 - same as above.
4. 00:47:798 - this one is slightly off, fix
5. 01:39:114 - same as above
   Check all the timing points and see if they are set correct then you should be fine. Doesn't really matter as long as they aren't unnecessary points and they are placed before the right notes, but might snap them all as a last thing to do, leaving it for now

Alveryn wrote:

If people want to play with their own custom colors they can use "Ignore beatmap skin" function. A std beatmap should have Custom C'ombo Colors set regardless of whether a custom skin is added or not.

MrKOSIEJ wrote:

Hi, from my queue <3

MOD

00:01:101 (4) - Move that circle between 00:00:780 (2,7) so it creates a nice path. The slider is higher and overlapsing so better to make a path
agreed
00:02:706 (2) - move it higher to euqalize the spacing between 00:02:224 (1,3) I want a jump here to emphasize the guitar change

00:05:113 (6,7,8,9) - make those blankets spaced the same sure thing
02:40:772 (4,6,7,9) - ^
00:07:520 (7) - move it lower so it creates a double blanket with 00:06:718 (4,5) not meant to blanket (trying to create an M )
00:23:407 (1,3) - improve blanket seems alright to me
00:25:654 (3,5) - ^ fixed
01:21:987 (5,1) - blanket? changed 01:22:469 (1) - instead
01:28:567 (3,5) - ^ Nope mirroring with (4,6)
07:26:725 (3,1) - ^ nope going for even spacing between 1-2 and 1-3 to keep the same jumps
05:40:187 (5,2) - ^ and maybe the end of 05:41:471 (1) reworked this part a bit to flow it a bit better aswell
01:43:009 (4) - blanket with that stream here 01:43:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) gonna try something here
06:31:040 (5) - ^ with 06:31:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) messes up the previous patter keeping it for now
06:43:718 (1,3,1) - double blanket? sure why not

00:17:469 (4) - eqalize spacing new guitar chord here want it to be a jump
00:26:777 (7) - ^ ^
01:04:488 (6) - ^ working with fixed DS in this section with the end riffs being the larger jump
01:59:209 (5) - ^ hear 4-5-6 higher pitch on 5 then decreasing back to 4 so did the same with the spacing
03:48:492 (1) - ^ 0.9/1.3 ds during all parts for emphasizing in this section not gonna break that
06:12:603 (6) - ^ moved more to the center
06:22:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ and maybe make in the end of 06:23:498 (3) changed slider of 3 only cause I like the visual distance between them here for the pattern
00:22:765 (6,7) - you could equalize the spacing in the path from the end of 00:22:444 (5) to the start of 00:23:086 (8) hmm I like the current square between end of 5 6-7 end of 8 better now tbh because it flows easier from 7-8 and 8-9 then your suggestion so keeping it for now

00:38:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's a bit messy, try with tornado triangle, it looks like it anyway but messed up XD haha yeah dunno what happened there did some something similar

01:30:493 (2,4) - overlapse guess this fixed itself with previous change
02:47:833 (1,4) - minor overlapse fixed
04:44:337 (1,4) - overlapse, maybe blanket with 04:45:300 (1) ? changed some stuff to make it not overlap
06:36:015 (1) - overlapse, maybe move 06:36:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - whole thing down fixed by moving like 30 notes lol

01:30:172 (1) - make the end of this slider in the middle of 01:29:851 (9). Or not, just a suggestion but i see you have more of those, so idk fixed itself with prev stuff

01:31:135 (5) - move a bit to the right to eliminate that minor overlapse ^

01:45:889 (2) - make equal overlapse on both end of this slider to make it looking more symmetrical. I mean 01:46:210 (1,3) - those circlez moved around with 01:45:568 (1,2) - a bit

03:22:174 (1,2,3,4,1) - move that to the middle [horizontaly], it's slightly to the right changed afterwards aswell

03:40:468 (1,2) - i don't think map suggest slider, but idk, do what you want following vocals mainly here, and that would make it an awkward 1/2 blue tick slider, so I decided to map the really soft drums since its at the start of the vocal part

04:32:443 (9,2,4) - you could do "pathing" to make it looking less monothone. By pathing i mean make them progressively further. agreed, auto stacking sucks here so gonna that that instead

04:38:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - do you think that pattern looks good? imo not really nothing wrong with imo 4-5 bigger then 2-3 like in the music and even visual spacce

07:18:381 (1) - that's a harsh slider, i would change it to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5429592 for example it seems hard but plays alot better then it looks, its still in the oval flow movent of 5-6-7-8-9 and the setup to 2 would kinda break it gonna keep it for now but yeah looks a bit ugly tho so might change later on/b]

07:22:633 (6,1) - m8 that look ugly, make it flow with a stream [b]I really wanna start the down right/left zigzag here cause it prepares for 07:22:713 (1,2,3,4) - this momevent
07:24:077 (6,1) - just NO, don't make that space, Don't keeping it tho :p (for now will see if get more complaints) that bit of a jump for the kickin to the vocals works nicely + its on a slider and in the flow so should be fine
07:34:348 (5,6) - spacing, m8, don't make those spaces in the end of a stream oh yeah messed up here fixed

07:44:377 (1) - i would prolly make that a part of that spinner later on, but that's not abad aswell i think, you can leave it i guessyeah its because this still has the echoing vocals so started the spinner later on actually I think I'm gonna extend the slider to 07:49:192 since the guitar drops here

Your diffs don't have the same tags. [STD and Taiko].

Ok, that's it, i hope i helped at least a bit and good luck with your map Love the song and the map. Yep looks cleaner now
Please consider returning the favor and modding my map :3 Oh nice you got a marathon map aswell overlooked that srry, will mod hopefully wednesday but prob this weekend when college ends If you haven't got a mod by saturday message me pls!
Cheers <3

MrKOSIEJ wrote:

I like this map so much that i'll shoot a kudo XD
69 priority umbrellas

pishifat wrote:

well this is gonna be a pain but your .945 decimal thing is nonsense lol
should just be 187bpm all the way through without any offsets pushed back like zz
youd still need the time signature changes of course, but they'll all line up with each other on the timeline
Damn really it kinda sounded off earlier on when I had fllat 187 will make a seperate diff to see again


there's a lot of things which apply to the whole map so try to understand things more than just adjusting the timestamps i mention lol

your soft sampleset usage kinda sucks. like ur putting it on super loud sounds, but its really quiet relative to other hitsounds.
04:39:524 (5) - 05:26:389 (4) - some examples of the ew ahh yeah leftovers from chaning the soft customs rip gonna look for these and changi ti to normal claps/add
either mixing your soft hitnormal with something more than just bass or use it as an addition

i wish you would indicate 1/1 vs 1/2 better ur spacing is like the same for both and interchanged all the time
00:47:798 (1) - in sections like this, but also changed this a bit
04:42:092 (3,1) - 00:42:343 (3,1) - rando places like this ah yeah will look for these again when theres a pause-ish stuff
when using high spacing 1/2 everywhere in the map, people usually go for stacked 1/1 so it's clearly different and allows you to clearly see when to click the next circle true dunno why I didn't do it with these when I did it in the beginning

movement involving sliders is probably the hardest thing about object placement
01:47:975 (4,1,2) - youll want sliders to indicate in some way where the next object is. with this, you're curving 1 downwards, whereas 2 is above it. dont do that thx. youll want the next object to be following the curve and not going against it
02:38:044 (9,1,2) - imagine the opposite of the previous stuff. in most cases youd want object leading into the slider's curve rather than going against it
04:09:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - same idea of circle->slider from the last thing also applies from slider->slider (or slider->curved stream, in this case. would be the same thing) Euhm I mostly do it thourghouth the map but these are kinda intentional to force a flow break like at 04:09:996 (2,3,4,5) - the drum suddenly kicks in while the vocals I was following are still extended during the drum, so I wanted to express that change by forcing a flow break here, same for the second part since I follow the vocals there I want sharp angels and flow breaks since that gives more power to the vocals imo, will change some others that won't fit but no change for these other then the first

complaints about emphasis now, both through rhythm and spacing:
02:47:512 (8,1) - gonna leave this for now, I like how it plays with the decreasing vocals and the guitar drop here 00:31:752 (3,1) - leaving this since 00:31:110 (1,2,3) - its basicly building up to (3) and then starts back again at (1) to build up so wanted a lower ds for the here instead 03:48:171 (5,1) increased a bit - 06:38:583 (4,1) - fixed if anything, downbeats should have more spacing then unimportant stuff lol. can similarly show emphasis for nondownbeat stuff like
00:03:668 (5,6,7) - 6 having the melody instrument here but not being different from 4->5 true changed a bit
emphasis through rhythm is also a thing i need to complain about
02:03:221 (1) - already said how downbeats are big deal, so like if you're expressing a held sound that ends on a downbeat, a 3/4 slider + circle better expresses that + strong thing on the ends true kinda left them out bc they'd feel out of place with the rest of the map but gonna look into that,changed some but deciced to keep alot 1/1 since the extend sound is most of the time stronger than thats what on the downbeat/stanza in the song and it played worse/color]
02:49:437 (7) - is also pretty silly rhythm choice with downbeat um where it is tail um um um uhm yeah
01:32:579 (6,1,2,3) - 3 is an important sound right yes. showing that = important (also 6 ending where it does kinda ew) ah yeah missed that changed this part
03:05:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - is more of an inconsistency with how you emphasize the start of every grouping. like 03:05:405 (4,1) - has the same spacing as the following stream, while 03:05:726 (4,1) - doesnt and has a direction change. like just be consistent about how you handle 4->1s ah yeah fck up here, fixed
03:15:274 (2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - would be another inconsistency in emphasis. the song legit doesnt change but your object desnity does completely. while you may be emphasizing the same stuff by clicking on them technically, it's still gonna be out of place when one section has sliderends and the other doesnt Yeah I get your point, I kinda wanted some diversity here because 03:15:755 (1,2,3,1) - is the highpoint during this segment of the song, so I wanted to do something different then the previous sliders here, so no change
07:10:357 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - has questionable emphasis for less obvious reasons. groupings of 4 means emphasis on every other object, but with a 3/4 time signature, every other object doesnt make much sense to emphasize z yeah true felt more like - 1-3-3-1 initinally gonna change back
02:20:070 (9,10) - dont make me explain this please damn how did I miss that.. should prob do something to make 7-8-9-10 stand out more but might be a bit too much with the 1/4 alrdy
05:59:283 (6,7) - same idea as previous one, except not related to variable lengths this time. just like you don't want to be starting these on red ticks when white ticks have something important on them. Dunno about here, the changing toms start on the red tick tho will see what fits best gonna leave it for now

and other unrelated things:
06:17:978 (8,1) - minor spacing mistake lol. stream is smaller than 8->1 fixed
06:47:088 (7,8) - sliders starting on blue ticks without anything actually on the blue ticks wh a t like as unintuitive as u can get lol ah rip yeah should be in pair of 4s
07:24:077 (6,1) - first 1/4 jump 7 minutes into map could u not ty. when maps have 1/4 jumps like this, you'll see them introduced earlier and used throughout someone mentioned it before so gonna change it
01:20:543 (1) - 01:21:506 (4) - 07:27:046 (1) - sick 2009 curves theyre 2008 now
04:17:376 (1) - sick snappign gotta have that 1/3s in there
07:06:666 (2,4) - when half a pixel of 4's sliderbody is visible youd think overlapping tails is not the best idea Made it a bit more visible
07:44:377 (1) - y axis symmetrical sliderart not in the middle of y axis k k k k k k k yeah.. gonna leave since I don't really want overlaps on this

k k k k k mod this or this t y incoming

giro de pito uh wrote:

Starchild is an awesome song and Wintersun is an awesome band, so I really expect your map gets approved )

Nyan wrote:

[Taiko]


SliderMultiplier:1.40399984111786 -> 1.4

03:33:087 (130) - add Finish
03:40:789 (148) - add Finish
03:48:492 (165) - add Finish
03:56:195 (191) - add Finish
03:57:158 (193) - add Finish
03:58:121 (196) - add Finish
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04:00:046 (202) - add Finish
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04:03:577 (213) - kat
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04:09:675 (232) - add Finish well this gets overcrowded with finishers, decided not to map them
04:11:910 - add a kat
04:13:847 - add a kat
04:15:129 (266) - kat
04:22:832 (291) - kat
04:23:153 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302) - kkk ddd kdddk
04:26:042 (315) - add Finish
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Itasha_S13 wrote:

Yoo

Some stuff

01:49:420 (3) - ctrl+j and move to its actual position Fixed
04:35:137 (1) - this slider feels waird, chek its snap I think it should start in the white tick 04:35:030 - Gonna leave it as it is for now, since those heavy drums start 04:35:137 (1) - extending that slider will make that a bit weird, I could maybe add a circle on the white tick instead for that small snare sound but that kinda doesnt fit with the rest of the map in this section imo, snap is alright for me (1/3)
05:21:575 (1) - this slider shape doesn't look the best, make it something like http://prntscr.com/brlpgq fixed
and this one 05:25:426 (1) - before http://prntscr.com/brlqnj after http://prntscr.com/brlqg3 tried
06:23:498 (3) - this.. move to the left and ctrl+g? this one got me for surprise and almost lost the combono more combo loss

first FC yey

This map needs to be ranked

Jerome wrote:

Lost focus after I missed - just wanted to say awesome map man I love the song and almost tried to map it myself. Hope you get it ranked can't wait to play it again!

Whirl wrote:

Nice map, shot star!

1. there are quite some unsnapped inherited points all through the diff, should get that checked
2. 00:10:248 (3) - 00:33:677 (5) - i suggest similar curve as 00:06:718 (4,5) - , would feel consistent imo, probably it's just ur aesthetic but i feel ur usage of curve seems a bit random..
3. 00:35:603 (4) - soft-hitnormal on slider tail, just like 01:29:851 (9,1) - ?
4. 01:08:259 (4,5,6,7) - unstack maybe? stack made this less intuitive to read
5. 02:12:207 (4) - kinda touch the hp bar
6. 02:20:231 (11) - probably nc here to keep the 02:18:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 02:19:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nc pattern consistent
7. 02:22:638 (9,1) - featuring a jump instead of distance snap at the downbeat would be nice
8. 02:47:512 (8,1) - similarly ^, i would suggest ctrl-g 1
9. 03:15:434 (3,3,1,3) - personally suggest replacing with a slider cuz that plays more fluently
10. 06:20:610 - to 07:22:232 - i don't get enough feedback from ur hitsounds, that made the 1/2 gap jumps awkward to play while the drums goes with intense 1/4 rhythms
11. 07:44:377 (1) - would look nice if it's perfectly centred, so rearrange previous patterns a bit?

Garden wrote:

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1. there are quite some unsnapped inherited points all through the diff, should get that checked Yep fixing this last
2. 00:10:248 (3) - 00:33:677 (5) - i suggest similar curve as 00:06:718 (4,5) - , would feel consistent imo, probably it's just ur aesthetic but i feel ur usage of curve seems a bit random.. yeah agreed, all the same now
3. 00:35:603 (4) - soft-hitnormal on slider tail, just like 01:29:851 (9,1) - ? yep fixed
4. 01:08:259 (4,5,6,7) - unstack maybe? stack made this less intuitive to read yeah true, unstacked
5. 02:12:207 (4) - kinda touch the hp bar bit down now
6. 02:20:231 (11) - probably nc here to keep the 02:18:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 02:19:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nc pattern consistent ah yep
7. 02:22:638 (9,1) - featuring a jump instead of distance snap at the downbeat would be nice agrreed
8. 02:47:512 (8,1) - similarly ^, i would suggest ctrl-g 1 gonna keep this one for the guitar and vocals decreasing so don't really want a jump here like on 02:34:032 (4,5) -
9. 03:15:434 (3,3,1,3) - personally suggest replacing with a slider cuz that plays more fluently someone mentioned it aswell, gonna change
10. 06:20:610 - to 07:22:232 - i don't get enough feedback from ur hitsounds, that made the 1/2 gap jumps awkward to play while the drums goes with intense 1/4 rhythms yeah was a bit underhitsounded, added some hitsounds and increased volume a bit
11. 07:44:377 (1) - would look nice if it's perfectly centred, so rearrange previous patterns a bit? got mentioned before gonna try something

1Computer wrote:

NM from queue~

SPOILER

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1. Uh, your timing points, not a big deal but, you know that if you put it directly on the note, it still applies to that note right? You don't have to put it before or anything. Someone probably already told you this... yep, saving this for last
2. 00:10:248 (3) - Ctrl+G perhaps. changed this a bit aswell
3. 00:19:074 (1,2,3) - Make the triangle equilateral. yep fixed
4. 00:25:654 (3) - Flow's kinda weird, Ctrl+G will fix. wanted this to be a 8 motion for 00:25:012 (5,1,2,3) - and it'll mess up the jump to 00:25:975 (4) - otherwise so keeping this
5. 00:34:640 (3) - Replace with a slider, up to you. Keeping it, the 3 loud drums being the same playablitly wise and that break sounds better here to represent those drums imo
6. 01:42:528 (1,2,3) - Keep the direction the same (move 2 down). Hmm I don't really like the angles of 01:33:863 (2,3,1) - when I put (2) more down, it loses some impact. And a direction change works well here because of the added intrument and you got that smack movement now for (3) so keeping it for now
7. 02:09:319 (1,2) - Fix blanket. sharp eyes! fixed
8. 02:30:501 (1,2,3) - Should make it 90 degrees. good point
9. 03:10:941 (1,2,3,4) - This looks kinda messy, I think you should stack them up. made (3) equal overlap between 03:09:015 (1) - 03:08:694 (6) - and full overlap with (6) head instead, liking the flow here
10. 03:55:553 (1,2,3,4) - Make a proper star. wasnt really going for that but yeah that works too
11. 04:38:220 (5,6,7) - Fix up that triangle. oh yeah nice
12. 04:44:819 (3,4,5) - ^ true could be done better
13. 05:17:403 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing and shape is weird here, might wanna remap these four. Intentional, (1,4) mirror (2,3), (3) is the weakest beat here so wanted this to be lower ds to give 05:18:366 (4) - more impact so keeping it for now since its 1/1 I doubt any one will have trouble with these
14. 05:43:878 (2,3) - Replace with two triples, or at least two sliders. The gap is kinda awkward. True but in the music it suddenly stops extending that sound for these, so sliders wouldn't really fit and the sudden trips would be a bit out of nowhere with what instrument i've been following for this section so I decided with these semi stacks so its better to read that its gonna be 1/1 and have that same pause like in the song. so keeping this for now
15. 05:54:148 (2,3) - Similarly here. ^
16. 06:04:418 (3,4) - ^ ^
17. 07:02:333 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Have this stream blanket 07:02:012 (1). Yeah tried this but I'd be losing more then gaining here like the stack with 07:02:975 (1) - , 07:01:531 (4,1) - symmetry with 07:01:210 (2,5) - etc so decided to keep it as it is for now until I can maybe find something to blanket them that doesn't require some hard changes
18. 07:23:516 (8) - The new combo should be here, and the direction change should be on 07:23:596 (9) instead. oh yeah nice, gonna do something with the new (5) aswell now that I noticed
19. 07:44:377 (1) - This isn't symmetrical. Press Ctrl+H when you're making it to check that it has symmetry. oh wow what happened here fixed

Nice map~!