Offset might be a few ms late?

Rain
Why so short? Just looks like laziness to me. Map some more of it.

hyb's Storm
01:48:286 (1,1) - I can understand why these are quieter, but maybe they're a little too quiet?
02:43:875 (1,1) - Don't have a note so soon after the spinner

SK's Catastrophe
Really not liking the overuse of slowdowns, I think they just make the map boring :
01:15:110 (1,2,1,2) - These jumps don't make sense and I didn't see them coming. There's nothing in the song to suggest that
01:41:934 (2) - Vertically flip this, it looks nicer.
01:49:345 (2) - This slowdown is even worse than the rest... WHY?

Meteor
00:43:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - These don't fit the music at all.
01:22:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Wtf? Really confusing jumps
Combos are weird bot, okay.

Armageddon
Why are the combo colours different? Keep them consistent. These ones blend in too much.
00:34:875 (1) - I don't think any player will see this coming, change it.
01:11:934 (1) - Why a one note combo? Remove this new combo.
01:12:816 (1) - ^
01:39:463 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I dislike this pattern. It's long, cramped and boring.
01:49:698 (1) - Another one note combo.

Mashley wrote:

SK's Catastrophe
Really not liking the overuse of slowdowns, I think they just make the map boring :
01:15:110 (1,2,1,2) - These jumps don't make sense and I didn't see them coming. There's nothing in the song to suggest that It's the same as 01:26:404 (1).So no.
01:41:934 (2) - Vertically flip this, it looks nicer. It looks usual.
01:49:345 (2) - This slowdown is even worse than the rest... WHY?Have no idea.

Thanks.

Why are the combo colours different? Keep them consistent. These ones blend in too much.

It's pending approval. So i want something special =P

Thanks for modding.

Some changes made,please update.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [SK's Catastrophe].osu

updated

As per your request:

[Skin]
Looks like the spinner is a little off-center and has a wharbly effect.

[Rain]
01:14:051 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It'd be easy to trim the spinner in this case, at least.
..so short.

[hyb's Storm]
01:20:404 (2,3,1) - You sure you want to do spacing like this? Especially the 3 -> 1. :/
02:04:169 (2,3) - What. Space that out please.
02:39:816 (1) - I've been keeping quiet for a lot of them, but this is just way too soon after a spinner for this type of difficulty.
02:45:463 (1) - ^

[SK's Catastrophe]
01:48:992 (1,2,1,2) - wth just happened?
The slider speed changes were a bit disorienting, but it's a fun diff regardless.

[Meteor]
Ugh, I already get where this difficulty is going. :/
01:09:816 (1) - Why end so late? Doesn't fit the music well.
01:19:875 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is just a mess - especially at this OD.
01:23:228 (3,4,1) - These jumps felt a bit extreme for the way the difficulty has been set up thus-far.
Kind of a dull difficulty due to the lack of dynamic rhythms. It's mostly just eighth notes the entire time.

[Armageddon]
Ugh, another one but with smaller hit circles. >>
Why does this difficulty only have one combo color?
00:32:757 (1) - Space this out more. The .5 section messed up the spacing.
00:55:875 (5,1) - Spacing
01:23:228 (3,4,1) - Really?
I think I'm going to just stop here. This map is just really tiring and not very fun at all.

It's technically fine, but the majority of the maps just don't have much fun-factor to me.

Modding legend:

Unrankable.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Possible fix suggestion.
If there's one black bold line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS DOESN'T MEAN I WILL STAR THE MAP IF THERE IS NO BLACK BOLD LINE. Learn to mathematical implication.

Rain:
00:55:698 (1) - Clap ?

Meteor:
02:11:581 (1) - You can make this slider prettier.

Storm:
Normal diff ?
02:11:228 (1) - Move it three grids (lvl 3) down ?

Catastrophe:
Insane ?
This diff is easier than Meteor.
01:50:228 (2) - That sudden 2x section is bad idea, although it's playable.

Armageddon:
Insane ?
00:49:257 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:38:404 (1) - ^
02:27:816 (1) - ^
02:52:522 (1) - ^
02:53:228 (5) - Spacing.
03:11:228 (3) - ^
03:57:816 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - no. No that's just retarded and silly, at least make the jumps less wide.
Hurrrr... this diff.

The ranked ones are good. I'll star.

yo~
add cursortrail skin to match the cursor~ and spinner is kinda wobbly, not too much though, you don't -have- to fix
I'll try not to repeat anything since you haven't applied the last two mods
Your bg image is 1024x748 (usually its 1024x768), so there are odd black lines on top and bottom of the background, not big deal though

Rain-
01:09:286 (1) - hm... start this 1/2 later, and end this 4 beats earlier (on to 01:12:286)? (if you do, then add note to 01:13:698)
O.o Easy+? okay

hyb's-
01:48:286 (1,1) - too quiet~
its playable, but please do double check the spacing, some parts... could be spaced better (-points at Garven's mod-)

SK's-
01:49:345 (2,2) - already mentioned, its okay though... >.>
Great~

Meteor-
Blaaah, I know what you're following, but its still kinda overmapped
OD+1... no, +2 >_> theres way too many notes, it makes the map annoyingly clustered
01:09:816 (1) - end this on a white tick (match 01:59:404 (1)~)
01:23:228 (3,4,1) - yea, no, that was completely random
waay too much clicking (then some longer sliders during the second half... which could've also been during the first half), yea, quite dull >.>
v_v

Armageddon-
some aspects of this is better than Meteor (.. more sliders... and higher OD), but much more overmapped >_>
Why is this the only one with custom hitcircle colours
00:32:757 (1) - spac- oh wait, already mentioned
00:55:875 (5,1) - ^
01:23:228 (3,4,1) - wh- oh, darn also mentioned ._.
01:39:639 (1,2,3,4) - don't like theses patterns at all, more cuz the map is so continuous and it stacks in an awkward way
01:59:757 (1) - add a repeat?!
02:11:846 (1,2,3) - what? this doesn't need to start and end on 1/4 at all, it sounds awkward and plays just as bad
02:12:639 (4,5) - this too, though I would assume most people are too busy clicking to notice how this sounds (it plays better though)
triplet storm! xD
03:36:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I would say no to these streams, cuz I don't like how they look and stack :D
03:57:816 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - lol! clearly no, the whole map is already streamy, quite overmapped, and not to mention monotone... then WTF jumps to kill people at the very end? hahaha... No.

*sigh* >____>

Odaril wrote:

Catastrophe:
Insane ?
This diff is easier than Meteor.
01:50:228 (2) - That sudden 2x section is bad idea, although it's playable.

I am waiting already for almost a week.My difficulty stilll hadn't been updated.There's no 2x section in updated one.

Shinxyn wrote:

SK's-
01:49:345 (2,2) - already mentioned, its okay though... >.>
Great~

Same as above

Thanks.

Sorry for the delay. ._.

Shinxyn wrote:

yo~

hyb's-
01:48:286 (1,1) - too quiet~
its playable, but please do double check the spacing, some parts... could be spaced better (-points at Garven's mod-)

^All fixed.

Thanks you two!

Add "Roddie" in the tags, Louis.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [Roddie's Storm].osu

Yes
No
Don't understand

[quote]01:09:286 (1) - hm... start this 1/2 later, and end this 4 beats earlier (on to 01:12:286)? (if you do, then add note to 01:13:698)
O.o Easy+? okay
[/quote]

Blaaah, I know what you're following, but its still kinda overmapped
OD+1... no, +2 >_> theres way too many notes, it makes the map annoyingly clustered such OD is just to make possible using Hardrock. If it is unrakble i can fix.
01:09:816 (1) - end this on a white tick (match 01:59:404 (1)~)
01:23:228 (3,4,1) - yea, no, that was completely random
waay too much clicking (then some longer sliders during the second half... which could've also been during the first half), yea, quite dull >.>
v_v - and again, if it is unrakble i can fix that.

Armageddon-
some aspects of this is better than Meteor (.. more sliders... and higher OD), but much more overmapped >_>
Why is this the only one with custom hitcircle colours bcz i want to make special difficulty, which i wanna get approved
00:32:757 (1) - spac- oh wait, already mentioned
00:55:875 (5,1) - ^
01:23:228 (3,4,1) - wh- oh, darn also mentioned ._. - it's jump ._.
01:39:639 (1,2,3,4) - don't like theses patterns at all, more cuz the map is so continuous and it stacks in an awkward way =/
01:59:757 (1) - add a repeat?!
02:11:846 (1,2,3) - what? this doesn't need to start and end on 1/4 at all, it sounds awkward and plays just as bad
02:12:639 (4,5) - this too, though I would assume most people are too busy clicking to notice how this sounds (it plays better though)
triplet storm! xD
03:36:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I would say no to these streams, cuz I don't like how they look and stack

03:57:816 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - lol! clearly no, the whole map is already streamy, quite overmapped, and not to mention monotone... then WTF jumps to kill people at the very end? hahaha... No.
YES!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDD Well, it's gonna be approved, so i think it's okey xD

Thanks you two!

Add "Roddie" in the tags, Louis.

:3

ehh you didn't give me PM D:

[Roddie]
01:50:404 (1) - This note is playing alone D: Not good

[Meteor,Armageddon]
Begining note ~ Until "hit" sound type starts: Personally, I don't like this part's hitsound.
Add whistle sound a bit in this part or make sound 10%-20% lower

ehh you didn't give me PM D:

I'm Sorry, i could not enter osu yesterday =/


Thanks for modding.
Added Whistles and volume was discreased by 10%
About Roddie's difficulty: i'll tell him, it will be fixed soon! : )

minyeob wrote:

[Roddie]
01:50:404 (1) - This note is playing alone D: Not good Fixed.

Thanks for the mod, minyeob.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [Roddie's Storm].osu

Bubbled.
Note: Armageddon is for approved

[General]

1. Add the following skin elements (if you're not going to force the skin):
   
   1. approachcircle.png
   2. cursortrail.png
2. Well, the skin preference is only set in one difficulty. I don't think this is intended.
3. Maybe make the Audio-LeadIn the same for all difficulties?
4. "star.png" is not used so you must delete it.
5. The spinner-circle isn't perfectly centered. A bit picky, but I think it must be fixed nevertheless.

[Rain]

1. Probably the laziest easy difficulty I've ever seen... at least make the hitsounds consistent so it feels less lazy. I'd appreciate if you mapped until the other finish points, though.

[Armageddon]

03:57:816 - You evil dog you.

Pop.

Due to popped bubble,please update my difficulty.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [SK's Catastrophe].osu

To Gens:
Really minor changes.Some micro off-Grid Snap corrections to the single circles placement.

star

Fixed
Thanks for stars~

Use this as the spinner-circle: http://puu.sh/7Tv

And please do what I said for [Rain]... I'm not going to force you, but you'll appreciate it later then. If you didn't know what I meant with "making hitsounds consistent", it was using the Normal sampleset at all times, instead of switching from soft to normal. =/

Done ^_~

Some rather-extensive IRC modding, and here's your Bubble #1 again.

(Cannot provide logs because my connection broke mid-ways)

Получи! :3

йух

Хорошая мапа

Эдик :3

БраТство навсегда <3

Эдо <3

Bubble #1 again after adding video.

star

Good job LC <3
sRAR!

And someone see any mistakes?? O_o
I cant see any mistake, Star :3

Thanks guys :3

nice song
star~

Bubble #2.

YES!!!!!!

[Armageddon]
03:05:214 (4,5,6) - The only anti-jumps in this difficulty. Not to mention 03:06:449 (3,4,5) - looks like those anti-jumps as well.
So if you could space 03:05:214 (4,5,6) out, that'd be great.

I'm not really sure how to approve 1 difficulty while getting the others ranked so I'd be happy to rebubble if this gets fixed.

Edit: Looks good now and everything else. So pretty much Bubble #3

Congrats, Louis!

Thanks~ :3

I can't download this beatmap.

Can others confirm the same problem of me?

osuplayer111 wrote:

I can't download this beatmap.

Can others confirm the same problem of me?

same here

the size is 8mb

but the download stop at 4,5 mb

dNextGen wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

I can't download this beatmap.

Can others confirm the same problem of me?

same here

the size is 8mb

but the download stop at 4,5 mb

Works fine for me >_>?

Also got a friend to test it that uses IE (I use firefox) and it still worked---idk if browser would make a difference or not but anyway

Yeah the download always interrupt.

Strange you downloaded it James :/

Works for me too! o/

Works for me too (I'm that friend James mentioned) rofl

might as well make an APPERANCE

tee hee

=/

Ranked! Congrats!

Oh, and by the way.

Genre: Unspecified (Other)

._.?

The jumps at the end of armageddon are too much, it's way too huge of a difficulty boost imo. Rest of map is great, but the ending is just.. not fun.

T_T

Louis Cyphre wrote:

T_T

Note how I said the rest of the map is great. I like the way the jumps and streams are made. I just pointed out one spot in the map that I don't like, the final few seconds

So overall, good job.

facedesk... you should make Approach Rate to 8 on [Meteor]
It might be more playable w/o hr then
sadly..

facedesk... you should make Approach Rate to 8 on [Meteor]
It might be more playable w/o hr then
sadly..

I put such low AR for making map "hardrockable".


Надо именно было вот такое поставить и не больше и не меньше! XD
Да и что тебе мешает добавить хардрок и играть, даже больше очков получишь =_=