M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022
General
Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?
I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.
Kantan
00:28:601 - how about adding a d here to follow the sound? Also would be consistent with 00:20:143 (18)
01:01:112 (5,6) - I would move these to forward 1 white tick to 01:00:848 and 01:01:376
Futsuu
00:28:601 - This sound is not mapped again... If you are following the vocals that would be fine but it is rather prominent. Just consider mapping this sound ^^
01:09:306 This is a suggestion how this section could also be mapped:
01:11:155 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - This triplet section feels a little bit monotone and not quite up to par with the rest of the map. Maybe you could revisit this part again.
Yuni's Muzukashii
00:08:910 (6) - D?
Oni
00:36:135 (169) - k
00:37:324 (174) - how about moving this one up to 00:37:191 to follow the vocals?
01:10:100 (343,344,345) - I would use a ddd triplet here instead
I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?
I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.
00:28:601 - how about adding a d here to follow the sound? Also would be consistent with 00:20:143 (18)
01:01:112 (5,6) - I would move these to forward 1 white tick to 01:00:848 and 01:01:376
00:28:601 - This sound is not mapped again... If you are following the vocals that would be fine but it is rather prominent. Just consider mapping this sound ^^
01:09:306 This is a suggestion how this section could also be mapped:
01:11:155 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - This triplet section feels a little bit monotone and not quite up to par with the rest of the map. Maybe you could revisit this part again.
00:08:910 (6) - D?
00:36:135 (169) - k
00:37:324 (174) - how about moving this one up to 00:37:191 to follow the vocals?
01:10:100 (343,344,345) - I would use a ddd triplet here instead
I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3