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nyanmi-1828
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2020年4月6日 at 18:39:34

Artist: Remo Prototype (CV: Hanamori Yumiri)
Title: Sendan Life
Source: ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags: vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World KitajimaYN Yuni kai53247 anime movie film japanese KTYN rimo D.backup
BPM: 227
Filesize: 3145kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.45 stars, 177 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (5.09 stars, 585 notes)
  3. kai's Beginner (0.86 stars, 56 notes)
  4. Kantan (1.46 stars, 95 notes)
  5. Oni (4.22 stars, 461 notes)
  6. Yuni's Inner Oni (4.95 stars, 538 notes)
  7. Yuni's Muzukashii (3.14 stars, 320 notes)
Download: Remo Prototype (CV: Hanamori Yumiri) - Sendan Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Faputa and Gamelan4 thank you for nominate!


Muzu&Inner by KitajimaYN
Beginner by kai53247

Overmaped diff Vitreous Oni , yuni's kitigai

_kotachi_'s STD&Taiko map (Hard)

Thanks
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Lyrics
近未来ってそう思うんじゃない
人が人を棄てるような時代
無惨に折り重なって
痛い痛いと一斉に鳴いた
妄想が不毛なように
誰も私を取り込もうとしない
不安に目を逸らして
有象無象テンション合わせる

綺麗な顔を歪めて
二度と来ない昨日に手を伸ばして
消えてく明日は蜃気楼に
なってしまった世界は夜に向かう

Bye-Bye
望遠鏡の焦点合わして
水平線の消点探した
漏れた溜息が苦くても
水銀灯の照明落として
降参なんて冗談じゃないって
ほんの一瞬だけ笑った
bank78952
がんばってね!

i wanna do this song for rank too XDD
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

bank78952 wrote:

がんばってね!

i wanna do this song for rank too XDD
ありがとう!ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ

I'll do my best! ( 'ω')b
Akitoshi
(ノ´・ω・)ノ ミ★★★★ シカエシwwwww
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

Akitoshi wrote:

(ノ´・ω・)ノ ミ★★★★ シカエシwwwww
ありがとう!ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
bank78952
konnichiwa o/
Random mods (maybe? lolz)
[General]
everything are fine :3
[Oni]
00:22:258 (98) - k
00:28:602 (130) - K for better sound?
00:30:716 (140) - k to follow rhythm
00:37:721 (175) - k ^
00:38:514 (177) - d ^
00:39:835 (182) - k ^ and vocals
00:50:805 (228,229,230) - kdk i think it's better
anyways i feel note is unsnap (1sec unsnap) try to resnap after check and fix my mods
[Muzukashii]
00:20:143 (60) - k to follow rhythm?
00:24:504 (21) - k is better?
00:36:134 (74) - d to follow vocal?
00:38:117 (82) - k high pitch sound here
00:47:368 (119) - move to 00:47:500 - and change to k for better sound?
p.s.i already map this song in taiko but it not good enough ;w; now i map in ctb XD
gl :3
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

bank78952 wrote:

konnichiwa o/
Random mods (maybe? lolz)
[General]
everything are fine :3
[Oni]
00:22:258 (98) - k ok
00:28:602 (130) - K for better sound? follow vocal here. no change
00:30:716 (140) - k to follow rhythm fix
00:37:721 (175) - k ^ ^
00:38:514 (177) - d ^ ^
00:39:835 (182) - k ^ and vocals ^
00:50:805 (228,229,230) - kdk i think it's better ^
anyways i feel note is unsnap (1sec unsnap) try to resnap after check and fix my mods
p.s.i already map this song in taiko but it not good enough ;w; now i map in ctb XD
gl :3
Thanks~ :)
5urface
M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?

I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.

Kantan

00:28:601 - how about adding a d here to follow the sound? Also would be consistent with 00:20:143 (18)
01:01:112 (5,6) - I would move these to forward 1 white tick to 01:00:848 and 01:01:376

Futsuu

00:28:601 - This sound is not mapped again... If you are following the vocals that would be fine but it is rather prominent. Just consider mapping this sound ^^
01:09:306 This is a suggestion how this section could also be mapped:
01:11:155 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - This triplet section feels a little bit monotone and not quite up to par with the rest of the map. Maybe you could revisit this part again.

Yuni's Muzukashii

00:08:910 (6) - D?

Oni

00:36:135 (169) - k
00:37:324 (174) - how about moving this one up to 00:37:191 to follow the vocals?
01:10:100 (343,344,345) - I would use a ddd triplet here instead


I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

5urface wrote:

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?

I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.

Kantan

00:28:601 - how about adding a d here to follow the sound? Also would be consistent with 00:20:143 (18) umm...I think not follow sound...
01:01:112 (5,6) - I would move these to forward 1 white tick to 01:00:848 and 01:01:376 ok~

Futsuu

00:28:601 - This sound is not mapped again... If you are following the vocals that would be fine but it is rather prominent. Just consider mapping this sound ^^ same as kantan
01:09:306 This is a suggestion how this section could also be mapped: I tryed "d k d k kkd k" ^^
01:11:155 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - This triplet section feels a little bit monotone and not quite up to par with the rest of the map. Maybe you could revisit this part again. add notes.

Oni

00:36:135 (169) - k fix
00:37:324 (174) - how about moving this one up to 00:37:191 to follow the vocals? ? I think no sound here
01:10:100 (343,344,345) - I would use a ddd triplet here instead fix


I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
Thanks for mod~ :)
Micka
Futsuu

00:57:940 (135) - try a big K?

Muzu

00:18:028 (49) - d
00:22:852 - add note?
00:35:738 - ^
00:58:073 (172) - k
01:06:531 (216) - k

so far this diff is fine

Oni

00:58:073 (286,287) - how about a ddk triple?

refined diff, cool

_____________________________________________

Overall this map is pretty refined already, can't find much.
Waribashi

RenzMichael wrote:

Futsuu

00:57:940 (135) - try a big K?

Muzu

00:18:028 (49) - d keep
00:22:852 - add note? fixed nice idea
00:35:738 - ^ fixed
00:58:073 (172) - k sorry keep
01:06:531 (216) - k ^

so far this diff is fine really?? thanks! :)

Oni

00:58:073 (286,287) - how about a ddk triple?

refined diff, cool

_____________________________________________

Overall this map is pretty refined already, can't find much.
thanks MOD :)
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

RenzMichael wrote:

Futsuu

00:57:940 (135) - try a big K?

Oni

00:58:073 (286,287) - how about a ddk triple?

refined diff, cool

_____________________________________________

Overall this map is pretty refined already, can't find much.
Sorry, all keep.

Thanks for mod~ :)
Skylish
Hi, from my taiko modding queue. Sorry for delay and I am back in modding again :D.

[General]

> Check the tag: You should not add cloudsplash16 (or 'Little', how he called himself now) He is not involved in this mapset. Probably, you copied all metadata from the ranked one, right?

> 01:11:156 (366) - kiai should end at here where is the replay of the introduction part.

[Oni]

> The timing points of Oni is different from the others. It is better to unify the timing points among your difficulties. (You can take a look of your Futsuu.)

> 00:11:950 (19,20,21) - / 00:13:007 (27,28,29) - / 00:14:064 (35,36,37) - I prefer not using aany triplets here. There are two main reason: firstly, you use a cleaner pattern at 01:11:156 (366) - which is as same as the beginning part. Secondly, the first part can be lighter to create an effect of layering.

+ Hence, you should use triplets at 01:15:386 (397,398) - / 01:16:443 (405,406) - / 01:17:501 (413,414) - . The principle is just the same. You can see the differences between the head and the tail.

> 00:17:897 (66) - change to d? kkk sounds weird for me.

> 00:27:941 (127) - use dkdK D D?
00:28:073 - is added because you mapped 00:27:544 (125) - the guitar chord with k. 00:28:337 (130,131) - K D sounds rhythmic. 00:28:866 (132) - it should be D because of the presence of strong drum hit.

> 00:44:064 - add k here, drum kick exists.

> 01:04:152 (323,324,325,326) - I can see that why you did not use triplets in the similar pattern in the first part of the Kiai session. However, I think it's the time to add some triplets in these positions now. 01:04:218 - add k here?

> 01:06:332 - same token as above, add d here?

[Yuni's Muzukashii]

> 00:12:214 (20,21,22) - / 00:13:271 (25,26,27) - / ... Using only kkd for the same music is boring, although it is correctly mapped. Maybe try using some kdd for variations.

> If you intend to use Finish at 00:20:407 (1) - , you can increase the note density of the previous pattern b4 the Finish note. 00:19:482 (57) - try dkkdkd (in 1/2)?

You also used a pattern with 6 x 1/2 at 00:18:557 (51) - .

> 00:47:764 (126) - use Finish note, same case at 00:45:650 (114) -

> 00:48:954 (132) - ^, the cymbal crash sound is clear and loud.

> 00:53:843 - add d here? not necessary though

> 00:57:808 (176) - change to k to prevent the repeating use of a single pattern.

> 01:01:509 (193) - change to k to match the cymbal, that's clear again.

> 01:06:266 (221) - change to k, same case before at 00:57:808 (176) -

> Triplets can be used at the second part of the Kiai ( 01:02:698 (200) - )
+ 01:04:284 (209) - / 01:06:399 (222) - / you can use ddd in 1/4 to make the pattern be more complicated.

> 01:11:421 (249,250,251) - / 01:12:478 (254,255,256) - / ... again, kkd pattern is too boring... Try making some variations there.

[Futsuu]

> 00:07:720 (1) - The patterns there are not stable at all. Sometimes the notes are matching on the on-beat drum hit, sometimes on the off-beat drum hit or even virtual notes appear. Try this?

> 00:09:835 (8) - ^. You can copy the structure again because it is as same as the pattern before at 00:07:720 (1) - before. This is Futsuu, I think such repeating structure are acceptable.

> 00:37:323 (80) - / 00:39:438 (85) - / You should match the BGM with 1/4 beat. Try this? [/img]http://puu.sh/p0uhg/6d65379e18.jpg[/img]

> 00:52:390 - / 00:52:918 - add d k respectively here because the drum set exists which can support some notes on it. The space leaving there seems too porous.

> 01:01:509 - add k here, the loud cymbal crash sound was not mapped.

> 01:19:350 - add k here, to symbalise the rising pitch and emphasize the Finish at the end at 01:19:614 (210) - .

That's pretty much. I cannot play Inner Oni or above level, rip me.
I hope my mod is helpful! :D
Waribashi

bank78952 wrote:

konnichiwa o/
Random mods (maybe? lolz)
[General]
everything are fine :3
[Muzukashii]
00:20:143 (60) - k to follow rhythm? fixed
00:24:504 (21) - k is better? fixed
00:36:134 (74) - d to follow vocal? keep
00:38:117 (82) - k high pitch sound here fixed
00:47:368 (119) - move to 00:47:500 - and change to k for better sound? fixed
p.s.i already map this song in taiko but it not good enough ;w; now i map in ctb XD
gl :3
thanks mod! :)
Waribashi

5urface wrote:

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Pretty decent mapset already, good job
It might be worthwhile to convert the background image to .jpg to save some space (just a suggestion)
The difficulty curve from Futsuu up to Oni feels a little steep but should still be acceptable
The Vitreous Oni might be a little excessive tbh. And how about calling it Ura Oni to stick with the standards?

I don't want to meddle with your mapping style too much so I will focus on suggestions that will keep your style in mind.


Yuni's Muzukashii

00:08:910 (6) - D? fixed


I hope this was at least somewhat helpful ^^
Good luck with your map :3
thanks MOD! :)
Waribashi

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my taiko modding queue. Sorry for delay and I am back in modding again :D.

[Yuni's Muzukashii]

> 00:12:214 (20,21,22) - / 00:13:271 (25,26,27) - / ... Using only kkd for the same music is boring, although it is correctly mapped. Maybe try using some kdd for variations. hmm keep

> If you intend to use Finish at 00:20:407 (1) - , you can increase the note density of the previous pattern b4 the Finish note. 00:19:482 (57) - try dkkdkd (in 1/2)?

You also used a pattern with 6 x 1/2 at 00:18:557 (51) - .fixed

> 00:47:764 (126) - use Finish note, same case at 00:45:650 (114) - fixed

> 00:48:954 (132) - ^, the cymbal crash sound is clear and loud. fixed

> 00:53:843 - add d here? not necessary though fixed

> 00:57:808 (176) - change to k to prevent the repeating use of a single pattern. fixed so good :D

> 01:01:509 (193) - change to k to match the cymbal, that's clear again. fixed

> 01:06:266 (221) - change to k, same case before at 00:57:808 (176) - fixed

> Triplets can be used at the second part of the Kiai ( 01:02:698 (200) - ) keep
+ 01:04:284 (209) - / 01:06:399 (222) - / you can use ddd in 1/4 to make the pattern be more complicated. high BPM so keep.

> 01:11:421 (249,250,251) - / 01:12:478 (254,255,256) - / ... again, kkd pattern is too boring... Try making some variations there. nice idea

I hope my mod is helpful! :D
thanks mod :)
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my taiko modding queue. Sorry for delay and I am back in modding again :D.

[General]

> Check the tag: You should not add cloudsplash16 (or 'Little', how he called himself now) He is not involved in this mapset. Probably, you copied all metadata from the ranked one, right? oh...That's right. Thanks ><

> 01:11:156 (366) - kiai should end at here where is the replay of the introduction part. fix

[Oni]

> The timing points of Oni is different from the others. It is better to unify the timing points among your difficulties. (You can take a look of your Futsuu.)fix.

> 00:11:950 (19,20,21) - / 00:13:007 (27,28,29) - / 00:14:064 (35,36,37) - I prefer not using aany triplets here. There are two main reason: firstly, you use a cleaner pattern at 01:11:156 (366) - which is as same as the beginning part. Secondly, the first part can be lighter to create an effect of layering.

+ Hence, you should use triplets at 01:15:386 (397,398) - / 01:16:443 (405,406) - / 01:17:501 (413,414) - . The principle is just the same. You can see the differences between the head and the tail.

> 00:17:897 (66) - change to d? kkk sounds weird for me. fix.

> 00:27:941 (127) - use dkdK D D?
00:28:073 - is added because you mapped 00:27:544 (125) - the guitar chord with k. 00:28:337 (130,131) - K D sounds rhythmic. 00:28:866 (132) - it should be D because of the presence of strong drum hit. umm...follow vocal here. keep

> 00:44:064 - add k here, drum kick exists. fix.

> 01:04:152 (323,324,325,326) - I can see that why you did not use triplets in the similar pattern in the first part of the Kiai session. However, I think it's the time to add some triplets in these positions now. 01:04:218 - add k here? keep

> 01:06:332 - same token as above, add d here? keep

[Futsuu]

> 00:07:720 (1) - The patterns there are not stable at all. Sometimes the notes are matching on the on-beat drum hit, sometimes on the off-beat drum hit or even virtual notes appear. Try this?

> 00:09:835 (8) - ^. You can copy the structure again because it is as same as the pattern before at 00:07:720 (1) - before. This is Futsuu, I think such repeating structure are acceptable.

> 00:37:323 (80) - / 00:39:438 (85) - / You should match the BGM with 1/4 beat. Try this? [/img]http://puu.sh/p0uhg/6d65379e18.jpg[/img]

> 00:52:390 - / 00:52:918 - add d k respectively here because the drum set exists which can support some notes on it. The space leaving there seems too porous.

> 01:01:509 - add k here, the loud cymbal crash sound was not mapped.

> 01:19:350 - add k here, to symbalise the rising pitch and emphasize the Finish at the end at 01:19:614 (210) - .

Futsuu is all keep...><

That's pretty much. I cannot play Inner Oni or above level, rip me.
I hope my mod is helpful! :D
Thanks for mod! :)
yuzu__rinrin
1diffでガバガバなのでnokdsでよろです
クソガバガバIRC
15:22 KitajimaYN: あ、そうだまた譜面見てもらってもいいすか?
15:22 *KitajimaYN is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969751 Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life]
15:22 KitajimaYN: 是非おねがいします
15:23 yuzu__rinrin: クソほどやる気出ないし、そこまで難しい譜面は俺見れないよ
15:24 KitajimaYN: んにゃ見て欲しいのはMuzuなんだよね
15:24 KitajimaYN: 一つだけちょこっと見て欲しいなって
15:24 yuzu__rinrin: とりあえずクイックチェックみたいな感じでペラ~って見てみる
15:26 KitajimaYN: お願いしますゾ
15:26 yuzu__rinrin: いま時間ありますかね?
15:27 KitajimaYN: 余裕で
15:27 KitajimaYN: ある
15:27 yuzu__rinrin: 分かり哲也
15:27 yuzu__rinrin: muzuのエディット開いて、どうぞ
15:27 KitajimaYN: hoi
15:28 yuzu__rinrin: 00:17:896 (48) - del ?
15:29 KitajimaYN: fixed
15:29 yuzu__rinrin: 00:18:293 - ここはdかな
15:29 yuzu__rinrin: さっき変えたのなら
15:30 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:30 yuzu__rinrin: で 00:18:954 (53) - delかな、詰め込みすぎても良くないと思うし
15:31 KitajimaYN: 消しとこう
15:32 yuzu__rinrin: ウ~ン,00:20:936 -
15:33 yuzu__rinrin: こっからなんか dkって言うのが気持ち悪いかもしれん、俺の主観だが
15:33 KitajimaYN: うーんここは1/2の3連にしとこか
15:33 KitajimaYN: ddk
15:33 KitajimaYN: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5210706
15:34 yuzu__rinrin: okdesu
15:34 yuzu__rinrin: 00:25:165 -
15:35 yuzu__rinrin: あ、dね
15:35 KitajimaYN: そこらへんのとこ全部ddkに変更しといあ
15:35 yuzu__rinrin: おk
15:37 yuzu__rinrin: 00:27:808 (41) - を 00:27:940 - に?
15:37 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:38 yuzu__rinrin: 00:27:676 - ここdにしちゃう?
15:38 KitajimaYN: ウーンここボーカルに合わせてえなあ
15:38 KitajimaYN: 声が多かったカエルってことで
15:39 yuzu__rinrin: wakarimashita
15:40 yuzu__rinrin: あと一番の問題点がパターン化されてないことかも
15:40 yuzu__rinrin: 00:20:407 -
15:40 yuzu__rinrin: 00:28:865 -
15:41 KitajimaYN: fm
15:41 KitajimaYN: 前あったとこと同じにしたほうがいいのかな
15:41 KitajimaYN: よしちょっといじくってみよう
15:41 yuzu__rinrin: 色は違ってもあんまり言われないんだけどここあたりは言われるかもなぁ
15:42 yuzu__rinrin: と言うか色を変えないと面白くないというw
15:43 KitajimaYN: 箇所箇所でパターンと配色を変えてみた
15:43 KitajimaYN: 基本的な構成は前あったところと同じようにしてみた
15:44 yuzu__rinrin: わかった、そこの色はあとでいろいろと考えてみて
15:44 yuzu__rinrin: つぎいきま
15:44 KitajimaYN: おk
15:45 yuzu__rinrin: 00:44:857
15:45 KitajimaYN: ん
15:45 yuzu__rinrin: 00:45:121
15:45 yuzu__rinrin: あみすた
15:46 KitajimaYN: お、うん
15:46 yuzu__rinrin: 00:45:121
15:46 yuzu__rinrin: 座標いかね
15:47 KitajimaYN: 00:45:121 (26) -
15:47 yuzu__rinrin: それ
15:47 KitajimaYN: ここをどうすればいい?
15:47 yuzu__rinrin: そこ消してもよくない?特に音ないし
15:48 yuzu__rinrin: あとよりvoに合うかと
15:48 KitajimaYN: ほんとや
15:48 KitajimaYN: なんもなってへんかった
15:48 KitajimaYN: 勢いで置いてたw
15:48 yuzu__rinrin: Muzuノリノリで置くと無限に言われるのほんとひで
15:49 KitajimaYN: Muzuが一番作りにくいと思う
15:49 KitajimaYN: こなみかん
15:49 yuzu__rinrin: MuzuとFutsuがポッチャマなところある
15:49 yuzu__rinrin: 00:47:500 - k
15:50 KitajimaYN: ナオキ
15:50 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:51 yuzu__rinrin: 00:49:879 - finisher  シンバル音あるはず?
15:52 KitajimaYN: たしかになってるな
15:52 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:54 yuzu__rinrin: 01:04:813 - ここdはどうかな? 次のkを高く聞かせたいという主観
15:54 KitajimaYN: いいっすね
15:55 yuzu__rinrin: 01:08:645 - del?
15:57 KitajimaYN: おっけい
15:57 yuzu__rinrin: 01:09:438 - add k
15:58 yuzu__rinrin: ここ入れるとキッツくなるかもしれない
15:59 KitajimaYN: けしたで
15:59 yuzu__rinrin: iya add
16:00 KitajimaYN: あ、そっか
16:00 KitajimaYN: でもここ周辺のパターン変えたから
16:00 KitajimaYN: そこまでキッツくはならない
16:00 yuzu__rinrin: さっき消したしま、多少はね?
16:01 yuzu__rinrin: あとはそこまで気になるところは無いと思う
16:01 KitajimaYN: やったぜ
16:02 yuzu__rinrin: 少しみただけだからまだあり祖う
16:02 KitajimaYN: とりあえず
16:02 KitajimaYN: 更新する
Shinsekai-
i'll mod this cuz i love this song :D! GL RANKING THIS BRO LET'S START!!


[General]

- Seens good :O


[Kantan]

- NOPE 00:10:892 (4) - quit the finish
- add k here cuz you need folow the piano in that part in my oppion can be good for the diff :D! 00:11:685 (5) -
- change to d 00:15:121 (11) - follow the pattern if (Y) is good if that is d k d, and is the same sond has before so XD Keep following that
- Move this 00:19:350 (17) - to 00:19:218 (17) - yep use 1/2 in this part :3 sounds better and follow the rhythm
- change to k 00:20:143 (19) - ~ Pian sound
- change to k for more varity 00:28:865 (31) -
- change to d 00:35:209 (38) - Keep the pattern
- change this to K 00:37:323 (42) - trust me... is good for the sound of that part
- You need cut this 00:52:125 (1) - cuz you need put this 00:53:711 (1) - cuz is other piano sound xD ( is a k :O )
- same has before 01:14:328 (31) -

[Futsuu]

- mmm this diff in the beging is a little weird... i'll recomend Remap that part ( 00:07:720 (1) - , 00:11:949 (11) - )
- 00:15:121 (18) - same has before FOLLOW THE PATTERNS XD
- change to k 00:20:143 (31) - piano sound
- maybe you forgot put this note 00:41:553 (85) - a d here please...
- chaneg to k is better XD 00:58:205 (135) - you know follow the voice is <3
- Delete this 01:14:196 (190) - don't make this :C keep this part simple

[Yuni's Muzukashii it's funny cuz my girlfriend is Yuni too haha]

- 00:07:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - this... idk if this can be ranked... so i recommend fix it... keep this note with the finish 00:07:720 (1) -

[Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) - listen the sound in that part
- add a d here 00:23:183 (104) - sounds good
- mm well i'll recomend make this 00:53:711 (260,261,262) - like and stream ... kkkkd can work (NOTE if you make this stream... don't put things like kkkkD that's unrankeable)
- add a k here 01:19:482 (433) - sound 10/10 :D!

[Yuni's Inner Oni]

- this sounds weird... 00:07:324 (1,2,3) - delete or make it 1/6 or delete this 2 notes 00:07:390 (2,3) -
- add a k in this point 00:27:940 (146) -
- delete this too 00:44:989 (254) -
- make a kkkkk stream 00:53:711 (329) - , 00:53:976 (331) - cuz the piano sound is too strong in that part

[Inner Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) -
- you should cut this 00:19:351 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - and make more simple
- add a k here too 00:37:191 (235) -

God damn GOOD inner dude D:!

[Vitreus Oni]

- change this to k 00:11:817 (21) - sounds better
- add a d here 00:24:306 (150) -

[Comments]

WOW THIS MAPSET IS <3 <3 <3 PURE LOVE DUDES ;A; i hope you can rank this very soon dude :3 good Inner Onis, Good Oni XD good all <3 i hope this mod can help you huehue o7 take this 2 KDS too
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828
No reply = fix
This color = keep

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

i'll mod this cuz i love this song :D! GL RANKING THIS BRO LET'S START!!


[General]

- Seens good :O XD


[Kantan]

- NOPE 00:10:892 (4) - quit the finish
- add k here cuz you need folow the piano in that part in my oppion can be good for the diff :D! 00:11:685 (5) - umm...I think not match :< keep here><
- change to d 00:15:121 (11) - follow the pattern if (Y) is good if that is d k d, and is the same sond has before so XD Keep following that fix
- Move this 00:19:350 (17) - to 00:19:218 (17) - yep use 1/2 in this part :3 sounds better and follow the rhythm oh... nice advice :3
- change to k 00:20:143 (19) - ~ Pian sound
- change to k for more varity 00:28:865 (31) -
- change to d 00:35:209 (38) - Keep the pattern
- change this to K 00:37:323 (42) - trust me... is good for the sound of that part
- You need cut this 00:52:125 (1) - cuz you need put this 00:53:711 (1) - cuz is other piano sound xD ( is a k :O ) I fixed here :3 and I put 00:52:125 - ,00:52:125 - ,00:53:051 - XD for follow instrumental <3
- same has before 01:14:328 (31) -

[Futsuu]

- mmm this diff in the beging is a little weird... i'll recomend Remap that part ( 00:07:720 (1) - , 00:11:949 (11) - )
I've changed to

- 00:15:121 (18) - same has before FOLLOW THE PATTERNS XD
- change to k 00:20:143 (31) - piano sound
- maybe you forgot put this note 00:41:553 (85) - a d here please... follow vocal here >< keep
- chaneg to k is better XD 00:58:205 (135) - you know follow the voice is <3
- Delete this 01:14:196 (190) - don't make this :C keep this part simple

[Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) - listen the sound in that part
- add a d here 00:23:183 (104) - sounds good
- mm well i'll recomend make this 00:53:711 (260,261,262) - like and stream ... kkkkd can work (NOTE if you make this stream... don't put things like kkkkD that's unrankeable) umm...keep.
- add a k here 01:19:482 (433) - sound 10/10 :D!

[Inner Oni]

- change to K 00:09:571 (9) -
- you should cut this 00:19:351 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - and make more simple okok :) I think too~ >w<
- add a k here too 00:37:191 (235) -

God damn GOOD inner dude D:! Thanks~!!! :) :) :)

[Vitreus Oni]

- change this to k 00:11:817 (21) - sounds better
- add a d here 00:24:306 (150) -

[Comments]

WOW THIS MAPSET IS <3 <3 <3 PURE LOVE DUDES ;A; i hope you can rank this very soon dude :3 good Inner Onis, Good Oni XD good all <3 i hope this mod can help you huehue o7 take this 2 KDS too
This mod is very helpful \>w</ Thanks a lot! :)
Thanks for mod~ :)
Waribashi

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

i'll mod this cuz i love this song :D! GL RANKING THIS BRO LET'S START!!


[General]

- Seens good :O



[Yuni's Muzukashii it's funny cuz my girlfriend is Yuni too haha]

- 00:07:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - this... idk if this can be ranked... so i recommend fix it... keep this note with the finis 00:07:720 (1) - keep sorry but nice idea


[Yuni's Inner Oni]

- this sounds weird... 00:07:324 (1,2,3) - delete or make it 1/6 or delete this 2 notes 00:07:390 (2,3) - keep
- add a k in this point 00:27:940 (146) - fixed
- delete this too 00:44:989 (254) - fixed
- make a kkkkk stream 00:53:711 (329) - , 00:53:976 (331) - cuz the piano sound is too strong in that part fixed nice idea


[Comments]

WOW THIS MAPSET IS <3 <3 <3 PURE LOVE DUDES ;A; i hope you can rank this very soon dude :3 good Inner Onis, Good Oni XD good all <3 i hope this mod can help you huehue o7 take this 2 KDS too
thanks MOD :)
Mayoi Namekuji
Hi, just trying my hand at modding. Hope you like it!
KANTAN
00:08:777 - This kat does not need to be there. As far as I can hear, it doesn't follow anything in the song. Either delete it or move it to 00:09:570
00:10:892 - Same as the previous one. Either delete it or move it to 00:12:469
01:01:376 - Change to kat. It follows the vocal line better

MUZUKASHII
00:24:636 - This kat does not need to be there. As far as I can tell, you are following the vocal line in this diff and it doesn't really make sense to me why that note should be there.
01:19:086 (203,204) - Change to dons, follows the melody better


VITREOUS ONI
00:19:350 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - This stream is unnecessarily long. Maybe cut 00:19:350 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - and add like three halfs where they fit into the rhythm?
01:11:222 (571,572) - Delete those two dons. The stream is long as it is, and those make it sound unnecessarily stretched out.
01:00:583 (448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - another unnecesarily long stream in my opinion. I would delete 01:01:707 (465,466,467,468,469,470,471) - and add a don at 01:01:905

That's about it! English is not my strong point, so if you find anything you don't understand, please don't hesitate to ask me!
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828

Mayoi Namekuji wrote:

Hi, just trying my hand at modding. Hope you like it!
KANTAN
00:08:777 - This kat does not need to be there. As far as I can hear, it doesn't follow anything in the song. Either delete it or move it to 00:09:570 fix. I move it.
00:10:892 - Same as the previous one. Either delete it or move it to 00:12:469 ^
01:01:376 - Change to kat. It follows the vocal line better fix

VITREOUS ONI
00:19:350 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - This stream is unnecessarily long. Maybe cut 00:19:350 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - and add like three halfs where they fit into the rhythm?
01:11:222 (571,572) - Delete those two dons. The stream is long as it is, and those make it sound unnecessarily stretched out.
01:00:583 (448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - another unnecesarily long stream in my opinion. I would delete 01:01:707 (465,466,467,468,469,470,471) - and add a don at 01:01:905
英語で返せないので返信はしませんが、全て自分なりに直しました

That's about it! English is not my strong point, so if you find anything you don't understand, please don't hesitate to ask me!
Thanks for mod! :)
Waribashi

Mayoi Namekuji wrote:

Hi, just trying my hand at modding. Hope you like it!

MUZUKASHII
00:24:636 - This kat does not need to be there. As far as I can tell, you are following the vocal line in this diff and it doesn't really make sense to me why that note should be there. keep
01:19:086 (203,204) - Change to dons, follows the melody better fixed

That's about it! English is not my strong point, so if you find anything you don't understand, please don't hesitate to ask me!
thanks mod :)
xtrem3x
Removing my laziness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

All diffs with SV 1.40 obligatory (in muzukashii and lower diffs can use inherited points with velocity 0.80x or similar)
In all diffs hitsound volume in 80% ... is too loud combinated with song.


kai's Beginner

  • inherited points in this diffs are same ... but don't need changes why don't exist overmapped or white lines in bad position.


Kantan

  • 00:11:949 - Add finish in this note ...
    00:28:865 - Same ...

    00:37:324 - move this inherited point to 00:37:588- to avoid these"error" about these white line during play.
    00:45:649 - move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... ^

    00:48:954 - add finish in this note ... have cymbal sound.

    01:07:984 (20,21,22) - in these 3 notes remove finish from note 20 and note 22 ... note 21 have cymbal.

    01:11:156 - Add finish here ... complementary with above point ^


Futsuu


  • 00:07:720- to 00:11:949 - in this section just 2 notes can have finish for consistence and combination with cymbal sound ( 00:09:570- and 00:11:949- )

    00:19:218 - Add finish in this note ... same reason as above point.

    00:21:465 - Change this note to k .. have same intensity as previous note.

    00:28:337 - Remove finish from this note and add it in 00:28:865-

    00:28:865 - this section is more fit with ... Ddk kdd ... specially focusing in vocal sound.

    00:37:324 - move this inherited point to 00:37:588- to avoid these"error" about these white line during play.

    00:41:553 - add d note here ... have bass sound.
    00:43:667 - Same

    00:45:649 - move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... almost same reason as 00:37:324-

    00:48:954 - add finish in this note ... have cymbal sound.

    01:07:984 - Remove this finish ... don't have cymbal sound or something.


Yuni's Muzukashii

  • inherited points in 00:37:324- and 00:45:649- in start no problem, but in finish part is a bit confuse... is rare have velocity changes in muzukashii and lower diffs and have a bit problem about precision when pass in these last part... then is possible change position one inherited point from 00:45:649- to 00:45:782-

    00:35:738 - Change this note to k ... have same intensity as next note.

    01:06:927 - finish in this note ... (?)


Oni

  • 00:13:404 (31,33) - ctrl+g in these notes ... the rhythm in this part is obvious but in this section is more fit with 2 blue notes in this point.

    00:15:650 - Change this note to d ... I feel a bit broken this part.

    00:17:236 - Change all these notes for ddd k k d d k ... almost same reason as 00:13:404-

    00:24:636 - add d note here .. have bass sound.

    00:28:865 - Add finish in this note, have same hit sound as previous 2 notes...

    00:33:095 - add d note here ... same as 00:24:636-

    00:37:324 - Move this inherited point to 00:37:456- ... is more fluid specially for down velocity, with 00:37:324- seems overmapped, with this change can skip this problem.

    00:38:954 - Add finish in this note ... have cymbal sound.
    00:52:125 - Same
    00:53:051 - Same
    00:54:240 - Same here ... but in this point is more than nothing for a typical situation about start kiai time ... (as almost all known maps)

    01:00:584 - Remove finish in this note
    01:01:112 - Same here ... not have hit / bass sound for this.

    01:02:566 - add k note here and ...
    01:02:698 - Change this note to D ... for consistence with start kiai time.

    01:07:984 - Remove finish in this note ... same reason as 01:00:584-


Inner Oni

  • 00:11:949 - Add finish in this note and ...
    00:12:015 - Move this note to 00:12:147- ... is more fit leave as priority a finish note in this part.

    00:19:218 - Add finish in this note and ...
    00:19:416 - Delete this note ... for more emphasis in finish note ^

    00:20:011 - in this part can be better a combination as ... kkkd d D (the pile of 4-notes is in 1/6).

    00:24:636 - add d note here ... have notable hit sound.

    00:28:965 - Add finish here ... have same sound as previous 2 notes...

    00:37:324 - Move this inherited point to 00:37:456- ... is more fluid specially for down velocity, with 00:37:324- seems overmapped, with this change can skip this problem.
    00:45:649 - Move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... Complementary with above point ... ^

    00:48:954 - this part is more fit with this combination = K d K d ... specifically to follow cymbal and combine with vocal sound.

    00:52:125 - Add finish in this note ... Cymbal
    00.53:051 - Same

    00:53:843 - in this plie of notes delete 00:54:042- and 00:54:174- ... in 00:54:240- add finish to prioritize the sound of this note.
    01:02:434 - Same in this part ... Delete 01:02:500- and 01:02:632 - ... add finish in 01:02:698- ^

    01:08:910 - Change this note to k ... for variety and not combine with next part (is alternate but here not)

    01:00:584 - Remove finish ... in 01:01:112- too... and just add finish in 01:01:509- ...
    01:01:707 - Delete this note ... with these changes is more fluid according with Cymbal sound and possible "break" ...

    01:07:986 - Remove finish .. don't have cymbal sound or something...


Yuni's Inner Oni

  • 00:35:077 - in this part seems more fit a sequence as ... k d ddd k ddd d k ... triples are in bad position imo...

    00:37:324 - Move this inherited point to 00:37:456- ... is more fluid specially for down velocity, with 00:37:324- seems overmapped, with this change can skip this problem.
    00:45:649 - Move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... Complementary with above point ... ^

    00:51:927 - Delete this note...
    00:52:059 - Delete this too ...
    00:52:125 - Add finish in this note ... with this change have major priority a big note with emphasis in cymbal.

    01:00:848 - Remove finish ... not nessesary, have high vocal sound but not.

    01:06:927 - Add finish in this note ... have cymbal.

    01:08:976 - Delete this note...
    01:09:042 - Add finish in this ... same reason as 00:51:927-

    01:09:769 - Add d note here ... have same rhythm for a triple in this point.

    01:18:425 - Remove finish from this note and ...
    01:18:557 - Add d note here ... this space have sufficient sound.


Vitreous

  • In Process...
Topic Starter
nyanmi-1828
No reply = fix
This color = keep
This color = Comments (& fix XD)

xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my laziness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

All diffs with SV 1.40 obligatory (in muzukashii and lower diffs can use inherited points with velocity 0.80x or similar)
It is not obligatory. Futsuu and lower diffs can use SV 1.20. No change ><
In all diffs hitsound volume in 80% ... is too loud combinated with song.
It didn't consider :o Thanks for Pointing out.

Kantan

  • 00:11:949 - Add finish in this note ...
    00:28:865 - Same ...

    00:37:324 - move this inherited point to 00:37:588- to avoid these"error" about these white line during play.
    00:45:649 - move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... ^ keep

    00:48:954 - add finish in this note ... have cymbal sound.

    01:07:984 (20,21,22) - in these 3 notes remove finish from note 20 and note 22 ... note 21 have cymbal.

    01:11:156 - Add finish here ... complementary with above point ^


Futsuu


  • 00:07:720- to 00:11:949 - in this section just 2 notes can have finish for consistence and combination with cymbal sound ( 00:09:570- and 00:11:949- )

    00:19:218 - Add finish in this note ... same reason as above point.

    00:21:465 - Change this note to k .. have same intensity as previous note.

    00:28:337 - Remove finish from this note and add it in 00:28:865-

    00:28:865 - this section is more fit with ... Ddk kdd ... specially focusing in vocal sound.

    00:37:324 - move this inherited point to 00:37:588- to avoid these"error" about these white line during play.

    00:41:553 - add d note here ... have bass sound.
    00:43:667 - Same

    00:45:649 - move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... almost same reason as 00:37:324-

    00:48:954 - add finish in this note ... have cymbal sound. keep

    01:07:984 - Remove this finish ... don't have cymbal sound or something.

Oni

  • 00:13:404 (31,33) - ctrl+g in these notes ... the rhythm in this part is obvious but in this section is more fit with 2 blue notes in this point.

    00:15:650 - Change this note to d ... I feel a bit broken this part.

    00:17:236 - Change all these notes for ddd k k d d k ... almost same reason as 00:13:404-

    00:24:636 - add d note here .. have bass sound.

    00:28:865 - Add finish in this note, have same hit sound as previous 2 notes...

    00:33:095 - add d note here ... same as 00:24:636-

    00:37:324 - Move this inherited point to 00:37:456- ... is more fluid specially for down velocity, with 00:37:324- seems overmapped, with this change can skip this problem.

    00:38:954 - Add finish in this note ... have cymbal sound. keep
    00:52:125 - Same
    00:53:051 - Same
    00:54:240 - Same here ... but in this point is more than nothing for a typical situation about start kiai time ... (as almost all known maps)

    01:00:584 - Remove finish in this note
    01:01:112 - Same here ... not have hit / bass sound for this.

    01:02:566 - add k note here and ... keep. I think haven't sound here.
    01:02:698 - Change this note to D ... for consistence with start kiai time.

    01:07:984 - Remove finish in this note ... same reason as 01:00:584- keep.


Inner Oni

  • 00:11:949 - Add finish in this note and ...
    00:12:015 - Move this note to 00:12:147- ... is more fit leave as priority a finish note in this part.

    00:19:218 - Add finish in this note and ...
    00:19:416 - Delete this note ... for more emphasis in finish note ^

    00:20:011 - in this part can be better a combination as ... kkkd d D (the pile of 4-notes is in 1/6). Thanks nice idea. but I tryed "d kkkk D".

    00:24:636 - add d note here ... have notable hit sound.

    00:28:965 - Add finish here ... have same sound as previous 2 notes...

    00:37:324 - Move this inherited point to 00:37:456- ... is more fluid specially for down velocity, with 00:37:324- seems overmapped, with this change can skip this problem.
    00:45:649 - Move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... Complementary with above point ... ^

    00:48:954 - this part is more fit with this combination = K d K d ... specifically to follow cymbal and combine with vocal sound. I tryed "K d k d"

    00:52:125 - Add finish in this note ... Cymbal
    00.53:051 - Same

    00:53:843 - in this plie of notes delete 00:54:042- and 00:54:174- ... in 00:54:240- add finish to prioritize the sound of this note.
    01:02:434 - Same in this part ... Delete 01:02:500- and 01:02:632 - ... add finish in 01:02:698- ^
    very greet advice...!!!

    01:08:910 - Change this note to k ... for variety and not combine with next part (is alternate but here not)

    01:00:584 - Remove finish ... in 01:01:112- too... and just add finish in 01:01:509- ...
    01:01:707 - Delete this note ... with these changes is more fluid according with Cymbal sound and possible "break" ...

    01:07:986 - Remove finish .. don't have cymbal sound or something... keep.

Vitreous

  • In Process...
Thanks for mod! :)
Lundlerol
mod req via game chat.
夜勤明け体調崩して頭痛いんで一気に見る気力ないので徐々にみていきます。

kantan
none
Futsuu
none
Muzu
none
Oni
00:20:406 - D ここは音的にもDが無難だと思います。最難度の譜面はストリームでくっついてるのでDじゃなくても良いですがInnerも大音符になっているので合わせておいたほうがいいと思います。大音符にしたからといって難易度差が激しく変わるわけでもないので。
00:28:335 -00:28:600 -  両方とも大音符は若干うるさく感じます。 後者のほうが前者よりも残響があるんで後者のみを大音符にしたほうが聞こえがいいです。また、違いを出す方法として前者をd、後者を大音符のKでもいいと思います。次にある大音符00:28:864 - がDなので後者をKにした方ががしっくりくるはず。 
00:29:921 - ~ 00:30:846 - この部分だけ他の部分と比べると3連が2つあることで不自然に詰まってる様に思いました。

なので

こんな感じにしたほうが他の部分と同じように構成出来ます。序盤で詰めておいてそのあと3連1つしかない部分が複数あると個人的にはどうしても違和感が・・・
00:36:926 - ピアノに合わせてここから3連でも5連でもお好みで。本来は00:36:794 - ここから連打入れたいんですがOniということで抑え目に・・・
00:37:454 - 個人的にここからかなりリズムが不規則で殆どリズムが取れませんでした。(自分が上手くないためなのと音やボーカルに従順なため・・)
00:39:172 - 00:41:287 - ここはボーカルも楽器の音もあるのでノートを置いてみてはどうでしょうか?他は置いてるのにこの2つだけ置いてないのは理由が?区切りのために置いてないのなら恐らくここは区切る必要のない部分だと思います。
00:44:855 - ここは単純に音が鳴っているから・・・とだけ。
00:45:384 - 次の大音符までに音が鳴ってるのでdを置いて00:45:516 - ここにkを置く・・・。そしたら違和感なくなるかと。k d k Dになるわけですがkの間のdは難易度考慮?してあってもなくてもいいと思います。
00:48:952 - 大音符で。 コレと同じ音→ 00:47:763 -
01:07:983 - dに変更。シンバルの音でもなければ音に残響があるわけでもないので無難にdでいきませんか?dにする場合は左右の開いたスペースにノーツを置いて3連を増やしてみることも出来ます。
01:09:040 - ~ 01:09:833 - ここは頭だけ大音符でいいです。(めっちゃうるさい・・・)
そのあとに01:09:437 - 01:09:701 - この空いたところにdを置く等・・・。 01:09:965 - おまけでここに置いて次の3連に繋げても面白いかも?
01:11:155 - 大音符で。もしくは最初00:11:948 - と同じ3連か 両方大音符か3連かお好みで。自分は大音符派です。(Innerでは大音符置いてましたね。)
01:12:212 -01:13:269 - 01:15:384 - 01:16:441 - 01:17:498 - 3連で。前述と同様最初のパートだとここの入り方は全部3連だったので合わせて3連で置いたほうが無難だと思います。もしくは最初のパートを単発の入り方にしておいてこのパートだけ3連から入るように違いを出してあげるかのどちらかをオススメします。
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Lundlerol wrote:

mod req via game chat.
夜勤明け体調崩して頭痛いんで一気に見る気力ないので徐々にみていきます。

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Futsuu
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Muzu
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Oni
00:20:406 - D ここは音的にもDが無難だと思います。最難度の譜面はストリームでくっついてるのでDじゃなくても良いですがInnerも大音符になっているので合わせておいたほうがいいと思います。大音符にしたからといって難易度差が激しく変わるわけでもないので。

00:28:335 -00:28:600 -  両方とも大音符は若干うるさく感じます。 後者のほうが前者よりも残響があるんで後者のみを大音符にしたほうが聞こえがいいです。また、違いを出す方法として前者をd、後者を大音符のKでもいいと思います。次にある大音符00:28:864 - がDなので後者をKにした方ががしっくりくるはず。 
自分も若干うるさいかなと感じてましたがそうですよね(´-ω-`) 前者をd,後者をKにする形で。

00:29:921 - ~ 00:30:846 - この部分だけ他の部分と比べると3連が2つあることで不自然に詰まってる様に思いました。

なので

こんな感じにしたほうが他の部分と同じように構成出来ます。序盤で詰めておいてそのあと3連1つしかない部分が複数あると個人的にはどうしても違和感が・・・
言われてみると超不自然; 散々3連のテンポ合わせろって言われてるのに治りませんw許してくださいなんでも(ry

00:36:926 - ピアノに合わせてここから3連でも5連でもお好みで。本来は00:36:794 - ここから連打入れたいんですがOniということで抑え目に・・・

00:37:454 - 個人的にここからかなりリズムが不規則で殆どリズムが取れませんでした。(自分が上手くないためなのと音やボーカルに従順なため・・)
ここ後ろのすごい小さい音に合わせてるので軽くover mappingかも…

00:39:172 - 00:41:287 - ここはボーカルも楽器の音もあるのでノートを置いてみてはどうでしょうか?他は置いてるのにこの2つだけ置いてないのは理由が?区切りのために置いてないのなら恐らくここは区切る必要のない部分だと思います。
00:44:855 - ここは単純に音が鳴っているから・・・とだけ。
00:45:384 - 次の大音符までに音が鳴ってるのでdを置いて00:45:516 - ここにkを置く・・・。そしたら違和感なくなるかと。k d k Dになるわけですがkの間のdは難易度考慮?してあってもなくてもいいと思います。
00:48:952 - 大音符で。 コレと同じ音→ 00:47:763 -

01:07:983 - dに変更。シンバルの音でもなければ音に残響があるわけでもないので無難にdでいきませんか?dにする場合は左右の開いたスペースにノーツを置いて3連を増やしてみることも出来ます。
ここむっちゃ直せって言われて納得しなかったんですけど、3連置いたら超しっくりきました。thx

01:09:040 - ~ 01:09:833 - ここは頭だけ大音符でいいです。(めっちゃうるさい・・・)
現実でもよくうるさいって言われます

そのあとに01:09:437 - 01:09:701 - この空いたところにdを置く等・・・。 01:09:965 - おまけでここに置いて次の3連に繋げても面白いかも?
01:09:437 - ここだけd無しで 01:09:172 - 01:09:701 ここに置いてみました

01:11:155 - 大音符で。もしくは最初00:11:948 - と同じ3連か 両方大音符か3連かお好みで。自分は大音符派です。(Innerでは大音符置いてましたね。)
大音符派です。

01:12:212 -01:13:269 - 01:15:384 - 01:16:441 - 01:17:498 - 3連で。前述と同様最初のパートだとここの入り方は全部3連だったので合わせて3連で置いたほうが無難だと思います。もしくは最初のパートを単発の入り方にしておいてこのパートだけ3連から入るように違いを出してあげるかのどちらかをオススメします。
最初のパートの方を単発にしてみました。
わかりやすいmodありがとうございますm(_ _)m
Waribashi
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Yuni's Muzukashii

  • inherited points in 00:37:324- and 00:45:649- in start no problem, but in finish part is a bit confuse... is rare have velocity changes in muzukashii and lower diffs and have a bit problem about precision when pass in these last part... then is possible change position one inherited point from 00:45:649- to 00:45:782- sorry no change

    00:35:738 - Change this note to k ... have same intensity as next note. no change

    01:06:927 - finish in this note ... (?)fix!

Yuni's Inner Oni

  • 00:35:077 - in this part seems more fit a sequence as ... k d ddd k ddd d k ... triples are in bad position imo... fix

    00:37:324 - Move this inherited point to 00:37:456- ... is more fluid specially for down velocity, with 00:37:324- seems overmapped, with this change can skip this problem. no change
    00:45:649 - Move this inherited point to 00:45:782- ... Complementary with above point ... ^ no change

    00:51:927 - Delete this note... fixed
    00:52:059 - Delete this too ... fixed
    00:52:125 - Add finish in this note ... with this change have major priority a big note with emphasis in cymbal. fixed

    01:00:848 - Remove finish ... not nessesary, have high vocal sound but not. fixed

    01:06:927 - Add finish in this note ... have cymbal. fixed

    01:08:976 - Delete this note...
    01:09:042 - Add finish in this ... same reason as 00:51:927- fixed

    01:09:769 - Add d note here ... have same rhythm for a triple in this point. fixed

    01:18:425 - Remove finish from this note and ...
    01:18:557 - Add d note here ... this space have sufficient sound. no change
thank you MOD :)
Waribashi
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