I'll take 04:00:167 - 04:30:894

Add every collab participants into the tag.

<Collab>
unfinished? o.o

00:22:349 (2) - up a bit
00:23:076 (5) - down a bit
00:29:985 (1) - use soft hitsounds from here >_>
02:48:531 (2,3) - right a bit

<Kotomin-sane>
00:16:894 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Although readable but I suggest rearranging these notes
01:29:258 (10) - left a bit
02:51:803 (5,6) - right a bit
03:21:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove whistle
04:20:531 (1,2) ... - this 2x inherit doesn't fit the song at all, please remove

star

short mod because 2 late.
I will edit this post 4 further mod.

<All>
change hitcircle color plz,I can't see hit objects in such bg.
white,purple or pink are good(I love Hitagi and these r her suit color ).

<Collab>
y not use more soft hitsound? soft part need soft hitsound.
some snaps and newcombos need fix.

will edit in 1week.
star.

Mi partesilla

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

Done~ Its pretty

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

hola


Here you are~

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu


[TimingPoints]

328207,1454.54545454545,4,1,1,40,1,0
332570,363.636363636364,4,1,1,0,1,0
332660,-100,4,1,1,0,0,0
335024,-100,4,2,1,39,0,0

[HitObjects]

168,80,302025,5,4
248,48,302207,1,0
328,16,302389,2,0,B|368:56|368:120|328:168|328:168,1,140,8|0
392,216,302934,1,0
312,248,303116,2,0,B|304:344|200:336|200:336,1,140,8|0
144,304,303662,2,8,B|104:344|104:344|96:344,2,35
80,248,304025,2,2,B|24:160|128:112|128:112,1,140
160,64,304571,6,0,B|232:32|232:32,1,70,8|0
176,104,304934,2,8,B|280:88|280:88,1,70,8|0
184,152,305298,2,0,B|264:152|264:152,1,70,8|0
336,152,305662,6,0,B|424:160|432:248|432:248,1,140,4|8
280,304,306389,2,0,B|201:367|137:327|137:327,1,140,0|8
149,332,306934,2,2,B|165:236|85:196|85:196,1,140
102,207,307480,2,0,B|37:164|77:76|77:76,1,140,8|0
216,168,308207,6,0,B|304:160|312:72|312:72,1,140,8|0
310,79,308752,2,2,B|390:17|454:57|454:57,1,140
312,160,309480,1,2
392,192,309662,1,8
320,240,309843,2,2,B|386:284|346:372|346:372,1,140
272,336,310389,5,8
200,296,310571,1,0
192,216,310752,1,8
272,248,310934,1,8
344,208,311116,5,0
312,128,311298,1,0
392,144,311480,1,8
424,224,311662,1,0
432,304,311843,5,8
344,304,312025,1,0
384,232,312207,1,8
296,232,312389,1,8
240,168,312571,5,0
200,96,312752,1,0
120,120,312934,1,8
160,192,313116,1,0
200,264,313298,6,4,B|40:264|40:264,1,140,4|0
104,104,314025,5,0
256,32,314389,1,0
216,192,314752,1,0
368,120,315116,1,0
456,120,315298,2,0,B|488:152|488:152,4,35,0|0|0|0|4
368,120,315843,6,2,B|296:64|296:64,1,70,2|2
312,77,316207,2,0,B|208:77|208:77,1,70
242,77,316571,2,2,B|146:77|146:77,1,70
172,77,316934,2,8,B|100:141|100:141,1,70
120,208,317298,6,2,B|192:264|192:264,1,70
175,250,317662,2,0,B|279:250|279:250,1,70
245,250,318026,2,2,B|341:250|341:250,1,70
315,250,318389,2,8,B|387:186|387:186,1,70
448,200,318752,6,0,B|408:112|408:112|368:80|368:80,1,140,0|8
312,32,319298,1,0
232,64,319480,2,0,B|144:104|144:104|112:144|112:144,1,140,0|8
184,192,320025,1,0
104,208,320207,2,0,B|224:360|224:360|248:368|248:368,1,210,8|0
88,168,321298,2,0,B|176:128|176:128|208:88|208:88,1,140,8|8
368,104,322025,5,0
248,224,322389,2,0,B|152:248|152:248|120:280|120:280,1,140,8|0
280,224,323116,2,0,B|400:72|400:72|424:64|424:64,1,210
280,280,324207,2,8,B|192:320|192:320|160:360|160:360,1,140
88,200,324934,5,0
88,112,325116,1,0
152,160,325298,1,8
216,104,325480,2,8,B|256:96|304:104|304:104,1,70,0|8
368,104,325843,5,0
456,104,326025,1,0
416,176,326207,1,8
368,248,326389,2,8,B|384:288|368:328|368:328,1,70,8|0
288,312,326752,5,8
272,232,326934,1,8
192,240,327116,1,8
208,320,327298,1,8
256,192,328207,6,4,B|320:88|256:-8|136:-8|48:120|120:192|176:208|224:208|224:208,1,420
256,192,332660,12,2,335479

that's my part,add it into .osu file,its convient~

Aqui está mi parte~ Como no habia casi breaks meti dos pequeñitos en mi parte, asi los que jueguen tienen algo de descanso para reacomodarse xD

Varias cosas de todas formas o.o:

- Tendrás que cambiar el mp3 de nuevo. La minima velocidad de transmision de audio rankeable es 128 kbps, tu mp3 tiene 64 kbps :/
- Añade todos los nombres de los mappers en los Tags... y quitale la N del final a "Mion-Nyan" xD

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

Como pudieron mapear con el timing tan mal? :x
Lol, yo que iba a venir a postear para sugerir un nuevo mp3, pero ya beuchi se me adelanto, pero bueh, tambien quisiera agregar que el timing esta muy atrasado en mi opinion.

Por lo menos para este mp3 de 64kbps me dio un offset de alrededor de los 2600's (no quise ser tan preciso ya que de todos modos tenias que cambiar el mp3 ademas de que tampoco soy el experto en tming >_>), en comparacion con el collab que es de 2662 y la difficultad de kotomi-sane que es de 2622.

Y aprovecho para agregar tambien que en un mismo conjunto de mapas, todas las dificultades deberian tener el mismo timing. Las secciones verdes pueden avriar de dificultad en dificultad, pero las rojas deberian ser iguales en todas la dificultades.

Fixed

//Background and Video events
0,0,"srcl-7081-2.jpg"
Video,0,"Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari - Nico Nico Douga Chorus.flv"
//Break Periods
2,12771,16034
2,61498,119307
2,182225,209489
2,240407,301125
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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_S,0,10025,10389,0.8259201,0.72352 
_F,0,29298,29662,1,0 
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_F,0,61298,61480,0,1 
_S,0,61480,,0.7030397 
_F,0,61480,61662,1,0 
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_F,0,62025,90752,1 
_F,0,90752,91116,1,0 
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/Ignacio.png",320,240
_M,0,90934,,133,412 
_S,0,90934,,0.66208 
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_F,0,91298,119480,1 
_R,0,91480,91662,0.1023999,0.02048034 
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_F,0,119480,119843,1,0.02208008 
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_R,0,120025,,0 
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_M,0,152934,,155,412 
_S,0,152934,,0.6928 
_F,0,152934,153298,0,1 
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_F,0,153298,180934,1 
_F,0,180934,181298,1,0 
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_S,0,182207,,0.6723199 
_R,0,182207,,0 
_M,0,182207,182389,147,96 
_F,0,182207,182389,0,1 
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_F,0,182389,210025,1 
_M,0,182571,182752,137,99,150,91 
_M,0,182752,182934,150,91,147,92 
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_S,0,210207,,0.70304 
_M,0,210207,210389,180,450,174,440 
_F,0,210207,210389,0,1 
_M,0,210389,210571,174,440,168,430 
_F,0,210389,211991,1,0.97952 
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_F,0,215387,215401,0.9436798 
_F,0,215401,215415,0.9436798 
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_F,0,222569,240025,0.9231998,1 
_F,0,240025,240207,1,0 
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_S,0,240207,,0.7132802 
_F,0,240207,240389,0,1 
_F,0,240389,240571,1,0.5904 
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_F,0,240752,240934,0,1 
_F,0,240934,270752,1 
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_S,0,271116,,0.6416 
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Download: SB.rar

how idiot i am....look on 'v' as 'y'

ErufenRito wrote:

Como pudieron mapear con el timing tan mal?

Lol, milagro~

...

o.O

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

"Re-DL: New MP3 and SB Added 13/06/10"

Umm interesante... considerando que este map apenas existio en el mes de julio hohoho

Por cierto, tengo el presentimiento de que lo que hiciste fue usar el mismo mp3, pero subirlo a 320 kbps... pues... eso no funciona >_>
Te recomiendo que uses este mp3 de este link: http://www.mediafire.com/?dwj4wygynylojnt

Y... medio saque un timing ahi, y me dio bpm = 165, y offset = 695
Digo medio porque hay algunas partes que no me cuadran bien y me aburri de tratar de sacarle el timing >_>

Y todavia tienes el pequeño problema de diferentes timing en las dos dificultades.
Collab offset = 9652
Kotomin-sane = 9656
Sep, deberian ser exactamente iguales si usan el mismo mp3.

ErufenRito wrote:

"Re-DL: New MP3 and SB Added 13/06/10"

Umm interesante... considerando que este map apenas existio en el mes de julio hohoho

Por cierto, tengo el presentimiento de que lo que hiciste fue usar el mismo mp3, pero subirlo a 320 kbps... pues... eso no funciona >_>
Te recomiendo que uses este mp3 de este link: http://www.mediafire.com/?dwj4wygynylojnt

Eh... El mp3 que has pasado no me sirve porque lo que yo e echo es un NNC (Nico Nico Chorus) y el que me has pasado es normal .-.

Ahi esta mi parte
los hitsound los veo luego

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

FPRC16 wrote:

Eh... El mp3 que has pasado no me sirve porque lo que yo e echo es un NNC (Nico Nico Chorus) y el que me has pasado es normal .-.

Lol? interesante, me parecian que eran las mismas xD
Bueh de todos modos aun asi, te recomiendo una nueva, el mp3 que tienes orita es simplemente horrible en mi opinion >_>

o.O Una de las timing sections en la parte de Nerv estaba mal puesta asi que tambien la cambie:
Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

Por cierto, borra los archivos:
Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb
Supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

y haz un Full Submit la proxima vez que actualices.

sorry for the delay u.uU

my part :3

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab (Lissette)].osu

dejo mi huella

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night~].osu

[Overall]
The mapset feels to still need work, you should check everything before asking any mod. (Well, imo)
Aside from this, Collab and Kotomin-sane were fun.

[Mion Night~]
Hitsounds feel somewhat random :/
Notes are unsnapped.
Don't forget to add offset to all your timing sections.
02:52:565 - From here to 03:15:474, you should raise the volume.
02:55:837 - Soft hitsounds sounds better, I think.
00:29:837 - Add a note.

[Collab]
00:56:201 - Why kiai? o.o
02:08:928 - ^
01:59:106 (6,1,1,2) - I don't understand the logic behind these new combos :/
02:00:201 - Mion-Nya part is exactly the same as the Mion Night~ diff. In purpose?
02:58:201 - Follow the instrument? (Three notes)
04:00:565 - animask's 2x sliders just completely feel out of place from the rest of the map o.o...
04:24:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think following you should follow the instruments more.
04:27:833 (8) - New combo?
05:15:106 (4) - Should be 1/2 sooner? or add a note 1/2 sooner... huh.

[Kotomin-sane]
Don't know why so much whistles, but why not use the custom hitsounds? It sounds better.
00:29:656 (10) - Why soft?
01:28:019 (5,6) - Spacing.
02:58:565 - Add a note.

Star~

Inozuma wrote:

[Kotomin-sane]
Don't know why so much whistles, but why not use the custom hitsounds? It sounds better.
00:29:656 (10) - Why soft?
01:28:019 (5,6) - Spacing.
02:58:565 - Add a note.

Star~

The whistle thing, before FPRC16 changed the whistles custom for clap, I mapped the diff The other day I changed the hitsounds, but looks that I have to do that again
The rest of the modding is done, I gonna post the diff when the hitsounds are fixed (again) >_<

PD. Srry for my bad english~
Edit: Kotomin-sane done~

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Kotomin-sane].osu

:3

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Keneazzy!].osu

☆

star~

Suggestions~

[Kotomin-sane]
Timeline is not bad but jumps are really weird :/
00:11:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hum, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17359 like this ?
00:37:570 - huh change lengh of sliders~
04:59:837 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - randoms x2 are not cool :/

[Collab]
Resnap all notes ~
Beuchi and Lissette parts are really cool °.°
Animask part is so horrible :/
Nothing to say~

[Mion Night~]
03:52:712 (6) - that sound off

[Normal]
Resnap all notes ~
00:46:934 (7) - allign with (6)
01:02:110 (1) - beginning 1/4 before
01:55:474 (6) - that sound off
01:57:110 (1) - ^

[Keneazzy!]
resnap all notes ~

diff actualisacion

Download: Supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night~].osu

star~

[General]
2 .osb file? Delete the "Supercell. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb" one. I don't think it fits.
Hell, the song is 5min+ long?...

[Kotomin-sane]
Weird jump @_@
I think it's better keep jump spacing for a while and change to normal spacing...
01:58:201 (5,6,7) - Stacking
02:18:019 (2) 02:18:746 (1) - - What's this...jump?
04:56:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - something wrong with this part...

Zzz...Need quite a bit of work...

[Collab]
00:32:019 (8) - Remove the reverse? And elongate the slider.
00:34:746 (10) - Remove the reverse?
01:51:474 (3,4) - Spacing?
02:30:383 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:31:110 (4) - Lower the volume? It's really noisy...
03:36:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - keep the same 1.5x spacing?
03:52:565 (10,11,1,2 ....etc) - 1 grid up
animask part BPM 2X? Some warning plz
04:35:837 (3) - 1 grid right & 1 grid down to make the same distance among 1,2,3
04:53:110 (2,3) - Evil jump...3 is too far apart 2
04:55:292 (1,2,3,4,5) 04:56:928 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Why different distance spacing between these streams?

[Mion Night]
Keep the same spacing please...

00:23:622 (4,1) - 1 grid up?
00:59:440 (5,6) - Unreasonable spacing change...
01:16:712 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:08:894 (2) - Remove these 2 timing sections
and...these...copy&paste from the collab? Come on...at least change some arrangement...
02:44:349 (3,4) - 1 grid right?
02:46:531 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:30:349 (7) - Lower the voice?


[normal]
Resnap all notes, and Recalculate the slider Length
01:22:292 (4,1,2,3) – all move 1 stick forward
01:35:383 (2) -^
01:45:474 (3,4,5,6) –Stacking, and these shouldn’t be in normal diff…

[Keneazzy!]
00:39:837 (6) – Why not change to 1/1 slider
00:53:292 (1,1) – More time between these 2 plz.



Ahhh, tired...

refresh

Download: Supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night~].osu

~Normal
00:21:292 - (5,6,7,8) fijate en corregir los sliders de forma ke keden ensimados menos 1 xD, y luego acomoda el 8
00:30:019 - (1,2,3) fijate el spacing
00:35:292 - (6) fijte ke kede convinando con el hit final del 5
00:38:746 (5,6) - spacing
00:39:837 (6) - movelo 1 tick a la derecha
00:42:474 (1,2,3) - muevelo a 00:42:383 - (1 tick a la isquierda) y quitale el newcombo y ponecelo a el 2 y luego arregla el spacing de lo demas
00:43:383 (3) - kitale una repeticion y arregla spacing
00:46:837 (7) - movelo a la isquierda 1 tick
00:47:474 (1) - spacing
00:58:019 (1) - new combo?
01:04:746 (2) - movelo 1 tick a la derecha
01:06:019 (3) - new combo?
01:07:837 (1) - movelo 1 grid abajo y luego el spacing de los demas kitale el new combo
01:08:928 (2) - ponele el new combo
01:09:655 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:12:746 (7,8) - spacing
01:21:292 (3) - lo noto rarito D: fijate
01:24:019 (2) - este 2 no tiene nada que hacer aqui, si kieres movelo a 01:24:110 (un tick a la derecha
01:31:019 (1) - terminalo en 01:34:019 [tick blanco]
01:35:383 (2) - kitale una repeticion y terminalo en 01:35:746
01:36:019 - agrega un circle aqui si quieres
01:42:746 (1) - agregale una repeticion si quieres o arreglalo, queda muy vacio y si le agregas una repeticion fijate spacing
01:43:837 (2) - agregale una repeticion
01:45:474 (3,4,5,6) - agrega new combo y arregla el encimado
01:47:474 (6) - agregale una repeticion <.< y arregla el spacing
01:48:565 (1) - no me agrada el spacing..
01:51:292 (5) - new combo? la repeticion ke pusiste no tiene sentido alguno
01:54:746 (2) - me parece un poco dificil para normal
01:56:201 (7,8,9) - confunde, arregla esta parte o borrala
01:57:110 (1) - no tiene sentido arreglalo
01:58:292 (4) - achica un poco el slider ya ke este no tiene sentido >_< y spacing :3
02:00:201 0(6,1) - spacing con el anterior combo
02:00:201 0(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - horrible spacing y la forma en que los colocaste en la barra de tiempo, para otra forma solo hace un slider o 3 con repeticiones e_e
02:14:746 (1) - lo arreglas o lo silencias a el final
02:16:201 (2) - terminalo en 02:16:928
02:18:837 (1) - yo lo moveria a 02:18:746
02:21:655 (5) - new combo?
02:22:655 (8) - movelo a 02:22:565
02:22:928 (9) - hace la repeticion en 02:23:292
02:24:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - fijate el spacing
02:25:565 (4) - movelo a 02:25:474
02:26:201 (1) - silencialo
02:28:565 (1) - kitale una repeticion
02:30:565 (4) - fijate donde lo terminas
02:31:474 (5,6) - no me agrado >_< fijate y para el 6 mira donde lo terminas
02:34:292 (4) - movelo a 02:34:201 <_>
02:37:201 (1) - comenzalo en 02:37:110
02:39:474 (2) - silencialo a el final >_<
02:40:565 (3) - silencialo a el final :1
02:42:383 (5) - terminalo en 02:43:292
02:43:292 (1) - empesalo en 02:43:656 y terminalo en 02:46:746
02:47:837 (1) - quitale la repeticion y fijate ya que cuando se la quites quedara algo vacio
02:56:565 (5) - pone la repeticion en 02:56:746
02:57:655 (7) - pone la repeticion en 02:58:019 y fijate el spacing
02:58:746 (8) - new combo, pone la repeticion en 02:58:928
03:01:383 (12) - cambialo con un spinner
03:07:474 (4) - new combo
03:11:383 (10) - no tiene nada que hacer aqui movelo a 03:11:292 y pon la repeticino en 03:11:474 y agregale una repeticion mas
03:12:474 (11) - no tiene nada ke hacer movelo 1 tick atras

~Otro
Feña esto te lo dijieron miles de veces BORRA LOS ARCHIVOS .OSB <_<

lo dejo ahi <_<
mañana lo termino

Annoying x2 part deleted ;w;

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Kotomin-sane].osu

Collab-
02:30:565 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:32:201 (5) - Add a finsih
03:34:019 - Don't you think that the notes at this section notes feel better with sof whitles instead of the normalhitnormals?
03:37:110 (4) - Delete?
04:00:565 - YAY for x2 speed sections in SLOW PLACES ;D! (Add a warning, seriously)
04:33:655 (2) - Move the endpoint up a bit?

Normal-
00:47:474 (1,2,3....8) - Normalmente estos lugares quedan mejor con sliders que con circulos.
Prefiero hacer el mod via IRC, continuo mañana (recuerdame *_*)
Modded via IRC

Hum... Needs more mods.
Star for incentivation~

La inscription en español para ti :p

Mas importantes problemas: debrias de cambiarlos.
Pequeños problemas: no tienes que cambiarles, pero si no les cambies, dime porque.
Sugerencias: no son problemas para el jugador, puedes cambiarles o no.
Commentarios.
Si hay una linea roja, or tres azules, no daré mi estrella.

General:
Dos ficheras .osb vacias. Suprimales, y haz un "full submit".
Todas las dificultades tienen que durar el mismo tiempo.

Keneazzy:
Pienso que no debrias utilizar un distance snapping de 1,3x para una mapa facil.
00:16:928 (1) - [pattern] Eso es escondido por (5). No es un problema para el gameplay pero es feo.
00:35:837 (1) - [distancia] Es desmasiado cercano de (3).
00:39:837 (6) - [forma] Feo spinner.
01:26:383 (1) - [pattern] Eso es escondido por (5).
01:29:655 (2) - [distancia] Demasiado cercano de (1).
01:35:110 (1) - [timing] No tiene nada que hacer con la musica or la voz.
01:50:019 (2) - [forma] Mueva esto una grid (lvl 3) a la izquierda para que haga una linea con (1).
02:03:837 (5) - [distancia/pattern] Demasiado cercano de (4). Tienes que cambiar tu pattern para mover esto a una buena distancia.
02:08:928 (1) - [pattern] Esta nota es too temprano despues del spinner, y no la ponga en el centro de la pantalla, porque sera secondida por el 300 o el 100 cuanto has acabado el spinner.
02:28:565 (1) - [pattern] No hagas esto: poner un slider que va en la direction opuesta a la de raton, es confuso para nuevos jugadores.
02:58:746 (2) - [pattern/form] Es escondido por (1). Es feo y confuso.
03:02:746 (1) - [form] huh... Este slider es feo.

Normal:
00:19:474 - [pattern] Pienso que es confuso para un nuevo jugador.
00:21:292 (5,6,7,8) - [pattern] Demasiado dificil para un nuveo jugador.
00:30:019 (1) - So rapido D: es una sorpresa, nada en la musica deja de pensar que puede haber una.
00:33:656 (5,6,7) - [pattern] Confuso.
00:42:019 (2,3) - [pattern] Son escondidos por el 6 D:
01:06:383 (2) - [pattern] Escondido por el (2).
01:22:201 (4) - [timing] Empieza uno 1/4 tick tarde.
D: me voy a stopar aqui, hay demasiados notas escondidas por otras.

Lol, el timing me parece algo temprano xD pero bueh, peudes ignorarme por completo.

borra estos archivos:

Supercell. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).txt
Thumbs.db (esta dentro de la carpeta de mappers)
Y haz full resubmit. Si no ves uno de esos archivos, considera re descargar tu map.

Kotomi-sane

00:17:837 (1,1) - Me parece muy malvado hacer esto, al menos quita new combo a 00:17:837 (1). Lo digo porque al principio pense que 00:18:019 (1) - iba antes de 00:17:837 (1) -
02:00:211 (1) - Podrias ponerlo mas alejado?
04:42:029 (3) - Los sliders donde no se puede ver claramente hacia que direccion va no son rankables.

Collab:

Eh... supongo que esta bien

Mion night:

Tiene offset diferente a los demas dificulates.

Sighs... lo siento... pero ya me aburri de modear esto D:

ErufenRito wrote:

Kotomi-sane
04:42:029 (3) - Los sliders donde no se puede ver claramente hacia que direccion va no son rankables.

SB con flechita que indique hacia donde deba ir? :3 ...
Ejem, lo demás arreglado y algunos arreglos que hacen más divertido el juego de paso~

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Kotomin-sane].osu

Download: SB.rar

just a try

i have sent you a pm

and you can ask me to fix or you can ignore this

All Fixed @_@

Tardé mucho... Es una canción muy larga, pero bueno. ¡¡Comenzemos el mod!!


A excepción de "Kenneazy!", me gustaron todas las dificultades. Tu mapa tiene potencial. Ahora sólo te pido un favor: no lo mandes a cementerio.

Pretty map !

Star !

Aqui esta... no le hice cambios tan grandes solo algunos hitsounds ><
y en timing setup panel cambie el audio en algunas partes

Ehmm...Existen dos archivos .osb creo que debes borrar este :
Supercell. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

;3

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Keneazzy!].osu

[Keneazzy!]
01:11:474 (2,3) - the 3 is too close to the 2
01:16:565 (1,2) - the 2 is too close to the 1
02:41:656 (2,3) - the 3 is too close to the 2

[Normal]
Slider Velocity is a little high

[Mion Night~]
terrible mappset...distance of notes are confusion

[Collab]
04:00:565 (1) - you'd better to make a SB to point out it will be x2 speed slider

[Kotomin-sane]
distance of notes are confusion------hard to read,hard to beat

star for the great song

Grax por el mod neo adonis xD
pero no entendi algunas cosas

(!) 00:56:201 - Mismo problema del destello Kiai. Quítalo.
arreglo el destello o lo quito

refresh X:

Download: Supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night~].osu

Attention

about font size



Download: lyrics.rar

Collab en mi parte >.>
04:35:474 (1,2,3) - esto deberia ser un triangulo
04:53:292 (3) - no me gusto como cambiaste eso, se que fue para quitarle el salto, pero ponlo de esta forma mejor (ve screenshot075)
04:53:837 (1,2,3,4) - y luego sube este combo para quitar el salto de 3 a 1 (que no pega) (screenshot076)

put those picture into SB/mapper..

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//Break Periods
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2,97128,101306
2,169855,174397
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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_S,0,24201,,0.9590399
_M,0,24201,24928,156,43,166,162
_R,0,24201,24928,-0.02048004,-0.2048001
_F,0,24201,29656,1
_R,0,24928,25656,-0.2048001,0.3276801
_R,0,25656,26019,0.3276801,0.02048034
_F,0,29656,30019,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/KenezzEdward.png",320,240
_M,0,24201,,178,95
_R,0,24201,,0
_F,0,24201,24928,0,1
_F,0,24928,29656,1
_S,0,25656,26019,0.9692799,1.0512
_S,0,26019,26383,1.0512,0.97952
_F,0,29656,29928,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

add this code into [Keneazzy!]

//Background and Video events
0,0,"srcl-7081-2.jpg"
Video,0,"Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari - Nico Nico Douga Chorus.flv"
//Break Periods
2,12765,15368
2,24401,28459
2,97673,101186
2,128401,133186
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/Beatmap.png",320,240
_F,0,25292,25656,0,1
_M,0,25656,,164,159
_F,0,25656,29292,1
_S,0,27110,27474,0.98976,1.13312
_S,0,27474,27837,1.13312,1.02048
_F,0,29292,29656,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/FPRC16.png",320,240
_M,0,25656,,161,83
_S,0,25656,,0.85664
_F,0,25656,26019,0,1
_F,0,26019,29292,1
_F,0,29292,29656,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

add the code into [Normal]

//Background and Video events
0,0,"srcl-7081-2.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,29946,35087
2,113855,119451
2,275309,295451
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/Beatmap.png",320,240
_M,0,30019,,454,141
_S,0,30019,,0.90784
_F,0,30019,30383,0,1
_F,0,30383,35474,1,0.4263113
_F,0,35474,35837,0.4263113,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/Mion-Nya.png",320,240
_M,0,30383,,432,80
_S,0,30383,,0.744
_F,0,30383,30746,0,1
_F,0,30746,35474,1,0.5545601
_F,0,35474,35837,0.5545601,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

add into [Mion Night~]

//Background and Video events
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Video,0,"Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari - Nico Nico Douga Chorus.flv"
//Break Periods
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2,102946,113483
2,129128,133846
2,175674,177301
2,178765,180392
2,202583,211665
2,214219,218937
2,228583,238937
2,246037,250210
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/Beatmap.png",320,240
_S,0,56474,,0.8975999
_F,0,56474,56656,0,1
_M,0,56565,,176,160
_F,0,56656,61292,1
_F,0,61292,61656,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/mapper/Kotomi-chan.png",320,240
_M,0,56837,,160,88
_S,0,56837,,0.7849597
_F,0,56837,57019,0,1
_F,0,57019,61292,1
_F,0,61292,61656,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/Speed.png",320,240
_F,0,260019,260656,0,1
_M,0,260110,,167,274
_F,0,260201,,1
_F,0,260201,260656,1
_S,0,260292,260474,1,1.26624
_S,0,260474,260656,1.26624,1.07168
_F,0,260656,260837,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

add into [Kotomin-sane]

Kotomin-sane

00:16:928 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - what the....(hard to read :<
02:00:201 (1) - move farther
02:06:019 (9) - ^?
04:42:019 (3) - lol (too ugly...
04:51:837 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - space._.
05:10:019 (1,2,3) - ^

Collab

no bad ._.

Mion Night~

00:17:565 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ?!?!
00:26:474 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:53:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
................what happen :<

Normal

01:26:746 (3) - end at 01:27:474
01:28:019 (4) - move to 01:27:837 and end at 01:28:928
01:36:746 (3) - move to 01:36:928
02:16:201 (1) - end at 02:16:928 ?
02:17:656 (2) - ^
02:20:383 (1) - ^

Easy

OD-1 ?

i think ...you need to more mod ;_;

actualisación de la diff y mi collab :<

Download: Supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari.osz

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

T_T revisare lo que pueda ahora es muy larga como para revisar todo.

[General]
-Ajusta el tamaño del fondo a 800x600 o 1024x768

[SB]
-01:45:292 veo algo raro en los lyrics de esta parte, es intencional?
-Corta la transparencia innecesaria please.
-Opino que deberian sacar el video, se ve demaciado mal xD.

[Keneazzy!]
-Quiza usar normal-hit sound para complementar el soft-whistle, o podrian ser claps.

[Normal]
-01:17:292 (2,3,4) arregla este fail de sliders xD
-01:36:928 (3) empezar en 01:36:746
-02:05:656 (1) empezar en 02:06:019?
-Sugiero mejorar la forma de gran parte de los sliders se ven mal terminados =(
-Tambien un poco mas de spacing se ven demaciado juntos los circles.

[Kotomin-sane]
-05:16:565 mover el timing point a 05:15:928

Ya otro dia vuelvo a revisar <.<
Pregunta por mods porque falta aun.

background~

late....

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SBbg-effect3.png",320,240
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 F,0,-1253,0,1
 M,0,0,,320,240
 F,0,0,8571,1
 F,0,8571,9662,1,0

add this code into [Collab] replace the old one

Download: SB.rar
replace bg-effect2.png,bg-effect3,bg-effect6 and bg-effect

That's all~

supercell ~ <3

Orz... Mega mod. Mod en persona xD (osea... Estaba al lado mio y le corregía... y le ayude con el SB y a borrar filaas ;w;)
I want mai kodosu nao xD
Ah, si. Arregle mi diff de paso, y ya puse el speed asi que no te preocupes :3

Easy
Good.

Normal
01:17:292 (2,3,4) - head and tail of the slider overlap...
02:00:201 (8) - How for New combo?
02:20:383 (1) - Adjustment at circle intervals

Mion Night~
Good.XD

Collab
Great!

Kotomin-sane
Good.XD

poor English...I'm sorry

I think that SB was also good.

I like this song!XD

star~

Hi!

Going for approved

If I knowed about it earler..

[Keneazzy!]
Good. Maybe add some whistles somewhere.

[Normal]
00:30:019 (1) - Normal whistle sounds wrong - move start of inherit section at 30 025 to 29 837
00:32:019 (6) - add whistle at the start?
00:33:292 (2) - add whistle?
00:33:656 (3) - add whistle at the end?
00:35:292 (5) - add whistle?
01:17:292 (2,3) - lol, not rankable approvable - end sliders at red lines (and move they in stack or using distance snap - looks better)
01:18:019 (3) - add finish at the start?
01:18:746 (4) - maybe end slider at 01:19:474
01:36:928 (3) - add finish at the start?
01:47:110 (4,1) - not in stack, if possible
01:50:019 (3,4) - reduce spacing
01:51:292 (5,1) - increase spacing
02:19:656 (3,1) - reduce spacing or end 02:19:656 (3) at 02:20:019
02:40:746 (5) - add clap at the start?
03:10:383 (4) - end slider at 03:10:746 + add whistle at the end, maybe

[Mion Night~]
nice, but too hard for me

00:53:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why all these blue lines here?
01:28:201 (3) - end slider at 01:28:928?
01:37:837 (1) - this slider don't fits a song at all + very insane - can you delete it and maybe extend spinner to 01:38:019
02:43:655 (6,1) - increase spacing (so that equal to spacing at 02:44:201 (2,3))
03:30:383 (7) - BAH-BAH (what's wrong with song here?)
03:41:656 (4) - end slider at 03:41:837?
03:42:110 (5) - delete?
03:52:746 (6) - replace to normal slider? (repeat sounds strange)

[Collab]
Cool. I think it's (much) easier then [Mion Night~], but has more score!
03:30:383 (1,2,3,4) - BAH-BAH lol not fit at all
04:35:474 (1,3) - place in stack?
04:57:383 (3) - delete + 04:57:474 (4) - new combo + increase spacing at 04:56:928 (3,1)

[Kotomin-sane]
I don't moded it (too insane for me and I'm lazy)

Supercell FTW

By request, below are my suggestions:

[Keneazzy!]
Straightforward mapping, nothing I can pick except for being monotonous...

[Normal]
General: try making repeat sliders repeat only once, sometimes once sometimes twice... it can get unpredictable, ex. 00:33:656 (3)

00:22:928 (3) - i don't especially like this overlapping with (1)
00:49:656 (4) - one grid right
01:07:656 (1) - the finish at the start of slider is very weird; it sounds better at 01:07:837. And this slider should end at 01:08:565, sounds better. Do something to fix this...
01:10:565 (6) - try end this slider at 01:11:474, sounds better
01:21:837 (4) - spacing
01:22:201 (5) - try end this slider at 01:23:110, sounds better
01:36:928 (3) - spacing, too close
01:51:292 (5) - try moving this slider to start at next white tick, and place a note here (01:51:292)
02:00:201 (8) - new combo?
02:20:383 (1) - hmmm, it may sound okay, but...

This diff's rhythm needs some polish. Good use of hitsounds.

[Mion Night~]
00:53:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Snapped to the wrong ticks!!! Re-snap these!
01:29:292 (1) - spacing not technically wrong but should be further. I suggest overlapping this with the start of (2).
01:31:292 (1) - oooh I like this part
01:38:201 (1) - try remove this and place a single note 01:38:383
02:43:474 (5) - suggest return to x1.0BPM here, the slider at 02:43:655 (6) doesn't feel right
02:44:019 (1) - this doesn't feel good, I strongly suggest stacking (2) with (3), (4) with (5), vice versa...
02:58:746 (1) ~ 03:01:110 (14) - I don't know if this is due to wrong timing, but this stream sounds really off from the vocals. If you are sure the timing is correct, replace these with sliders. I personally can't hit the circles right with the vocals.
03:15:837 (1) - how about end this spinner at 03:18:019
03:18:928 (1) - oh no, same problem with 02:44:019. Start new stacks on white ticks please...
04:04:746 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - sudden slow down and speed up in spacing... not good. At least move (5) further away.
04:35:474 (x) - this break is so long...

Rhythm is not bad, but needs some work on spacing issues. Hitsound is good.

[Collab]
00:30:746 (5) - one grid right
01:41:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please start new stack on white ticks, like what Vicho-kun does on 02:45:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8). The flow will be much better.
03:35:292 (2) - hmm, this jump really necessary?
(Mion's section) - this is almost the same as your own diff...
(animask's section) - why such slider speed? IMO feels out of place...

This diff gets suddenly quite difficult near the end lol

[Kotomin-sane]
General:
1. hiding notes... okay for an Insane but... not too fun
2. some sections' hitsound is too quiet, volume up

03:13:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - start new stack on white ticks please...
04:42:019 (3) - unrankable, player will have no idea where this slider will go



Overall:
No real technical issues but I am not content with some rhythm and flow of patterns.
I will recheck at a later date, but for now, I hold back my star.
Do your best.

Aproved! Aproved! Aproved!

da

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night~].osu

Hi

[Keneazzy!]
Nothing to state other than it's monotonous.


[Normal]
00:24:201 (7) - I suggest to not overlap it to (6), it can confuses.
01:54:383 (1) - Please spacing this. I suggest to move it 3 grid left and 2 down (grid size level 3).


[Mion Night~]
01:24:746 (5,6,7) - Shorten this jump, please.
If you don't want to change it: Move (7) 1 grid right.
If you change it: I suggest to do something like this.


01:32:656 (2) - Remove this?


[Collab]
(Vicho-kun) 03:01:292 (1) - Unrankable spinner. It must give a minimum of 3000 bonus point on Auto.
(Animask) 04:00:565 - The "speed up" warning is not visible and it should start a little before (I suggest at 03:59:474 (1) - )
(Lissette) 04:36:928 (3) - I think that this slider it's a bit forced But you can leave it.
(H-boy) 05:18:746 (1) - I don't like the shape that the sliders took from this point


[Kotomin-sane]
I'm not so skilled to mod this

Star~

LOL

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Collab].osu

While I did modded as you requested FPRC16, I did not find any problems in most of the Maps. (As I told you I only modded one of the full mapped Maps.) Most of the other Modders addressed the problems. Great map; star~

-General
Estoy seguro que el artísta debiera ser "supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus", en vista de que niconico usualmente va todo junto

-Keneazzy!
00:12:565 (4) - New combo, además agregale un Finish al inicio
01:07:837 (3,4,1) - Haz que (3) sea al new combo, y remueve el new combo de (1) (Dale enfasis al inicio del kiai time)
03:02:746 (1) - Esta forma es bastante extraña. Buscaban hacer simetría? debiera verse algo así entonces....
03:18:746 (1) - Me preocupa que en la dificultad más fácil haya una nota tan cerca del final de un spinner, pero bueh, va a approved, así que solo tnganlo en mente para futuros mapas.

-Kotomin-sane
00:16:928 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Que es este spacing y estos new combo?! El spacing entre (1)/(2) y (2)/(3) es distinto, aaaargH! Trata de hacerlo algo así porfavor x: (notese que todas las notas son un flip horizontal + vertical, y que las notas anteriores a este combo quedarían más arriba)
00:26:019 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
00:41:201 - Mueve esta timing section 1/4 mas adelante porfavor ~
01:12:565 (4) - New combo (terminan los saltos)
ARGHHHHH!!!! 03:30:746 - !!!!! HAY HITSOUNDS EN EL SB!!!! REMUEVELOS AHORAAAAAA!!!!!

Hmmm, Kotomin-sane y Keneazzy son de Kotomin y KenezzEdward, verdad? Por que está el SB con los nombres de los del collab en sus dificultades? Arregla eso.

EDIT:

Ok, voy a terminar el modpost, (pssst,me saltaré "Collab")

Normal-
00:21:292 (1,2,3,4) - Este patrón no calza con la música. Hazlo verse así
01:47:656 (1,2) - Por que el combo tan corto? remueve el new combo de (1) porfavor
Muy bien hecho, sin embargo tendremos que hablar respecto a los hitsounds tarde o temprano :/

Mion-
00:35:837 (1,1,1,1) - El spam de New Combos es innesecario, no hay spacing acelerado, cambios en el spacing ni saltos :v
00:47:474 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:24:383 (3,4,5,6,7) - Saltos inesteprados, agrega un new combo en (3), aunque en lo personal quitaría esos saltos totalmente fuera de lugar en relación a la música. Ah si, remueve el finish de 01:24:746 (5) - por favor.
01:26:746 (1,2,3) - Ojo con este stack, jugándolo se vé [urlhttp://i52.tinypic.com/30cyjk4.jpg]así[/url], por favor arreglalo haciendo un stack manual.
01:30:746 (3,4) - Acá cambia la velocidad, porfavor agrega un new combo.
01:54:019 - Rarísimo el lugar que escojiste para un Break :v
02:00:201 (1,1,1,1) - El spam de New Combos es innesecario, no hay spacing acelerado, cambios en el spacing ni saltos :v
02:17:837 (1) - remueve el new combo
02:25:837 (3) - remueve ambos finish porfavor
02:28:565 (1,1,1) - El spam de new combos es innecesario. Este es el lugar perfecto para un salto, así que si quieres mantenerlo, te recomiendo agregar un salto en estas tres notas.
03:02:746 (1,2) - Borra (2) y extiende el slider hasta la linea roja donde estaba (2)
03:07:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - Por favor no abuses del hitsound de finish, suena muy fuerte, en especial en una sección tán suave como esta en la música.
03:12:928 (4,1) - Cambia el new combo de (1) a (4) porfavor, de esta manera marcas el inicio del patrón de EtnaSliders.
04:23:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Que pasó con el spacing en estos patrones?
04:58:383 - El kiai time debiera empezar acá, no en 04:56:928 -
05:04:383 - Blegh un break en medio de un kiai time remuevelo aaaaaaargh (soy alergico a esos :<)


Aún te queda mucho por mejorar en el mapset en general, pero por favor pídele a quien haya hecho el SB que remueva los hitsounds del SB!!!

04:23:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) <-fue agregado aproposito de esta manera

resubida la diff

yo ya quite el sonido del SB y lo arregle, ahora solo falta uqe alguien lo saque del osb

yo dejare como :X

antes que nada ay que tener mi diff actualisada ya que si es mi diff que tiene los sonidos cuando la vuelvan a editar los sonidos quedaran pegados a el osb y no a mi diff ._. (problema del demonio -.-)

abrir supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

en donde dice

//Storyboard Sound Samples
Sample,17694,0,"normal-hitnormal.wav",70 <--contenido

quitar el contenido X:

y tada, asunto arreglado :V

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night].osu

nice map

PD: cuando tenga tiempito le hago mod besos <3

vivere wrote:

:D nice map

PD: cuando tenga tiempito le hago mod besos <3

Okeey, Besos para ti tambien <3

Back~

Overall:
00:16:201 - something's wrong with SB lol

[Keneazzy!]
(yawn)

[Normal]
Looks okay.
Not too normal for people first hearing this song though lol.

[Mion Night]
Overall: Change combo colors please... It's almost invisible against the background. For example, 02:44:565 (4) and onward.

03:18:746 (1) - start new stack on white ticks if you can

[Collab]
04:00:565 - Speed up should appear earlier. (Though I'd still say such slider speed feels kinda out of place...)

[Kotomin-sane]
Plenty jumps and anti-jumps, but have some interesting patterns.


Significant improvement!

I wish you good luck on getting this approved.

Here's a star~

Nice ヾ(*´Q｀*)ﾉ

MMmmm...
bg-effect2.png, bg-effect3.png, bg-effect6.png y bg-effect.png deberian ser .jpg y ademas estar en 800x600, pero viendo que el SB casi no se mueve mmmm.... en realidad como que no importa mucho, solo haria que pierdan calidad aunque obviamente reducirian el peso total de la cancion. Supongo que habra que dejarlo a la decision de los MAT o BAT que moderen.

Y eso... quedo bastante bien el sb, algo de codigo extra en el .osb pero mejor no moverlo mucho para que no se dañe nada.

All Fixed @_@

mod because requested...... and im bored...

Normal
00:30:019 (1) - is this note supposed to be normal or soft? if normal, move timing section up. if soft, move timing section back
00:38:746 (1) - make slider more symmetrical
00:46:201 (5,6) - one grid to the left
00:50:383 (1,2,3,4) - make more symmetrical and the same
01:00:201 (5) - ^
02:16:201 (1,1) - did they really allow these sliders?
02:31:474 (5) - make symmetrical

also, add more hitsounds but not too much....

Collab
personally, the only problem i see so far is the double speed part with animask........ eh, your call

Kotomin-sane
heh, i dont like this diff at all........ your call again..... i wont mod it though



star.....

[Kotomiu]
0:11:474 (3,6,9) suggestion: (3,9) left 2 grids, (6) right 2 grids?
0:17:656 (5,1,1) uneven spacing, no need to use 2 new combo?
0:21:292 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
0:30:383 (3,4) (3) down 1 grid, (4) left 2+up 3 grids?
0:32:201 (4,5) down 1 grid
0:47:474 (1,2,3) uneven spacing
-break- SB: A bit strage for that XD either "Beatmap by Kotomi-chan" or "Kotomi-chan's beatmap", anyway it's only the suggestion XDDD
1:14:565 (2) left 1 +up 2 grids?
1:29:292 (10) left 1 grid
1:39:292 (4,5) place them in the reflection of (2,3)
1:42:565 (1,2) up+left 1 grid?
2:24:565 (1,2,1,2,3) strange.
2:38:019 (1) left 1 grid
2:47:656 (3) right 1 grid
3:01:292 (1,2,3) uneven spacing
3:11:110 (3,4,5) ^
3:33:110 (3) delete
5:00:928 (4) up 1 grid

[Collab]
0:45:837 (7) right 1 grid
0:52:565 (4) left 1 grid
1:59:656 (3) left 1 grid
3:30:383 (1,2,3) not so appropiate? white tick beat only lol
3:47:837 (5,6,1) uneven spacing, (1) remove finish

SB add thanks for playing? lol

star for nice song and map

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Same Background as this, did you know?
  The BGs you used for the SB are 1024*768 but you shouldn't go over 800*600 ç_ç (also, use jpgs if possible)
  Also, you should edit the scale value manually: 0.625 (for 1024*768 Backgrounds) or 0.8 (for 800*600 backgrounds). Open the .osb file and search for lines like " S,0,35837,,0.6211199" for the BG sprites and fix the last value like i said before.

- Normal:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:47:110 (4,5,6) - really hard to read, because of the approach circles getting crowded.
  02:22:928 (6,7) - move both a bit to the right.
  03:12:383 - add a beat here?
  03:15:110 (1) - move to the centre of the playfield?

- Collab:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  05:28:207 (1) - inb4 someone says to remake the whole timing to inherit this. I'd just use a 0.25 section manually (tuning down the volume a lot because of slideticks), but i dunno how will people react to this:
  

  328207,-400,4,1,1,40,0,0

  instead of
  

  328207,1454.54545454545,4,1,1,40,1,0

  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:42:746 (2,3) - easily mistaken for a 1/2 spacing.

- Kotomin-sane:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:17:655 (5,1,1) - make these 1,2,3 instead; 00:18:383 (2) - new combo.
  01:29:292 (10) - move one square to the left
  04:05:837 (4) - ^

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

Super change ftw

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Kotomin-sane].osu

Nyan

All Fixed ~(=w=~)

Kotomin-sane
02:43:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are you want to make the volume of these timing section increase gradually? looks like you miss one timing section and make the volume increased better.
04:54:928 (4,5) - hmm...

collab:
00:42:565 (1,2) - should it placed horizontally?
00:43:474 (4,5) - Spacing?
00:53:292 (1) - silence the spinner end sounds better.
01:34:565 (1) - add a note?
05:28:207 (1) - I guess APP maps should follow the ranking criteria too.

abalee wrote:

collab:
00:42:565 (1,2) - should it placed horizontally? Fixed
00:43:474 (4,5) - Spacing? Fixed
00:53:292 (1) - silence the spinner end sounds better. Fixed
01:34:565 (1) - add a note? Fixed
05:28:207 (1) - I guess APP maps should follow the ranking criteria too. Fixed @_@

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Sorry more.

Collab:
03:31:110 (4) - (yes it is just me think)decrease the volume or use increasing volume sounds better.

feel free not to give KD to this post BTW.

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I can't pick up all the problems at one time!!!!

00:45:837 (7,8) - Spacing?
05:28:201 (1) - silence the end?
05:32:660 (1) - isn't snapped.

abalee wrote:

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I can't pick up all the problems at one time!!!! <--- Sorry D:!

00:45:837 (7,8) - Spacing?
05:28:201 (1) - silence the end?
05:32:660 (1) - isn't snapped.

Fixed (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Hahaha, I'm back..... With some kudosu stars and a free mod!!

Fun fact: I finished watching the anime just now.....

[Collab]

1. I was disappointed at the of hitsound action.... Try adding some.
2. 00:46:201 (You) (8,9) - place the (9) farther away
3. 03:01:837 (Vicho-kun) (4,5) - father away from the end of the other slider
4. 04:00:565 (animask)- hahaha, i still hate the double time, just a comment, doesn't matter
5. 05:11:656 (H-boy) - I don't favor the clutter of notes here

Haha, great job collecting all of the mappers!! Good luck with getting this ranked errr, approved!

Two kd stars!!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

[Collab]

1. I was disappointed at the of hitsound action.... Try adding some.
2. 00:46:201 (You) (8,9) - place the (9) farther away Fixed
3. 03:01:837 (Vicho-kun) (4,5) - father away from the end of the other slider Eh...The minute 03:01:837 beuchi-chan that this mapping ... But, it is understood
4. 04:00:565 (animask)- hahaha, i still hate the double time, just a comment, doesn't matter :/
5. 05:11:656 (H-boy) - I don't favor the clutter of notes here

Thanks (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

El taiko.

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Trying to make a good taiko diff].osu

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Collab].osu

cambios cambios algunos cambios

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

Alguien elimine este post...

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [KuriWPFAVIEOJGASOF].osu

The taikoh
btw yo te dije al lado de verdi y como que me dijiste que si, lo hice pero me di cuenta que touche esta en ese lugar, no hay problema cierto?

Dios, Rankeen esto.

iMercurial wrote:

Dios, Rankeen esto.

Esto va para Approved, es imposible que lo rankeen.
Aun esta WIP por que el Taiko collab aun no esta terminado.

This is all of my stuff.
Add the timing points and hit objects, blah blah.
I hope I didnt fuck something up.

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

Sorry for double posting. -_-
Here's the .osu or whatever.
Just plug this one in.

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

Aqui ta! :3
Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

PD: Creo que tienes 2 .osb.. Em.. No se si es porque el Taiko tendra su SB o algo por el estilo pero de todas formas te aviso xD

Hola hice un taiko BG DFHGJSDFHGSDFJKGS



Espero que le guste a la señorita Fen :3 Dame pancito por 2 semanas <3 45j432j52

pick up from #modreqs

[Collab]

• 
  So many notes that isn't snap o.o resnap all notes please
  APP rate +1
  00:47:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do something else? I'm so boring
  03:08:746 (x) - add note here?
  03:21:474 (1,2,3,4) - 2 grid up & let it symmetric
  03:51:474 (7) - new combo
  03:57:292 (7) - ^
  05:28:201 (5) - ^

hi~ Banana here, from my queue

collab

00:18:383 - try half beat?
00:30:746 (5) - use half beat slider, there are too much small breaks
00:32:746 (1) - emm, confusing spacing
01:10:565 - add note
01:14:565 - add note?
02:00:201 (1) - repeat too much, seems not very good
02:41:110 - add note
02:54:565 - add note?
02:58:201 - add a half beat slider
03:59:292 - i didn't see the "speed up" waring at the frist time, make it just above the notes?
05:28:201 - i just wonder why not use a spin

Fen, cambie la fuente del BG y hice unos detallitos con la posición, espero que este te guste más :3

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

pick up from #modreqs

[Collab]

• 
  So many notes that isn't snap o.o resnap all notes please
  APP rate +1
  00:47:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do something else? I'm so boring ~
  03:08:746 (x) - add note here? Nou :T
  03:21:474 (1,2,3,4) - 2 grid up & let it symmetric Nop
  03:51:474 (7) - new combo Fixed
  03:57:292 (7) - ^ Fixed
  05:28:201 (5) - ^ Fixed

Banana wrote:

hi~ Banana here, from my queue

collab

00:18:383 - try half beat?
00:30:746 (5) - use half beat slider, there are too much small breaks Nop
00:32:746 (1) - emm, confusing spacing Fixed
01:10:565 - add note Fixed
01:14:565 - add note? Fixed
02:00:201 (1) - repeat too much, seems not very good T:
02:41:110 - add note
02:54:565 - add note?
02:58:201 - add a half beat slider Nop
03:59:292 - i didn't see the "speed up" waring at the frist time, make it just above the notes? Sorry, but... I see it good. D:
05:28:201 - i just wonder why not use a spin

Fixed, Thanks (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ