Length may be shorter than ranking criteria
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00:15:806 (1,2,3) - move left a bit to align with other objects
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Namikawa Daisuke - Marukaite Chikyuu
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Topic Starter
Thank you so much ~ !! <3 I'm going to upload this right now~Garven wrote:
http://www.mediafire.com/?2pkftzvb14bg6nh
I got it to about half the size, got the aspect ratio to 4:3 and removed audio for ya and kept pretty much the same quality.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the advice ~ignorethis wrote:
Length may be shorter than ranking criteria About that, yes people told me that it was too short but in page 6 Gens cleared things up.
<Nihon>
00:15:806 (1,2,3) - move left a bit to align with other objects Done~ though I don't really understand so I don't know if I did it okk.
[General]
*You have scorebar-ki images for this map, but no scorebar. (At least include the default scorebar background/color files if you want to do this)
*I really suggest trying to find a longer version of this song (or attempting to make it longer yourself with some magic :v). 25-30 seconds for a beatmap is a bit pitiful... I would personally aim for nothing shorter than ~45 seconds, but you might get lucky and find some BATs that think this is fine (like Gens).
[Italia]
00:23:306 (2) - Expected this to be a slider :c
00:26:587 (1) - Expected another note here, with the spinner starting on the next white tick
[Nihon]
00:14:868 (3) - expected a finish here
00:26:587 (1) - same suggestion as last diff
[Doitsu]
00:15:337 - perhaps add a note here?
00:22:837 (1) - repeat is hidden by the last slider's hitburst (100/300/etc), which is unrankable.
00:28:462 - same suggestion as the other diffs (even though this is a few beats later)
[HERO!]
00:13:227 (2) - make this a slider and extend to the white tick? =x
00:15:806 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:16:977 - add a note here?
00:17:681 (4) - repeat is partially hidden
00:17:446 - add a note here?
00:27:758 (6,7) - this is the only jump in the map, which is inconsistent/unexpected.
00:28:462 - same as last diff
EDIT: Doitsu: 00:17:446 (3) - repeats are a bit hidden from spinner/kiai as well when testing
*You have scorebar-ki images for this map, but no scorebar. (At least include the default scorebar background/color files if you want to do this)
*I really suggest trying to find a longer version of this song (or attempting to make it longer yourself with some magic :v). 25-30 seconds for a beatmap is a bit pitiful... I would personally aim for nothing shorter than ~45 seconds, but you might get lucky and find some BATs that think this is fine (like Gens).
[Italia]
00:23:306 (2) - Expected this to be a slider :c
00:26:587 (1) - Expected another note here, with the spinner starting on the next white tick
[Nihon]
00:14:868 (3) - expected a finish here
00:26:587 (1) - same suggestion as last diff
[Doitsu]
00:15:337 - perhaps add a note here?
00:22:837 (1) - repeat is hidden by the last slider's hitburst (100/300/etc), which is unrankable.
00:28:462 - same suggestion as the other diffs (even though this is a few beats later)
[HERO!]
00:13:227 (2) - make this a slider and extend to the white tick? =x
00:15:806 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:16:977 - add a note here?
00:17:681 (4) - repeat is partially hidden
00:17:446 - add a note here?
00:27:758 (6,7) - this is the only jump in the map, which is inconsistent/unexpected.
00:28:462 - same as last diff
EDIT: Doitsu: 00:17:446 (3) - repeats are a bit hidden from spinner/kiai as well when testing
Topic Starter
Thanks for the advice !!Derekku Chan wrote:
[General]
*You have scorebar-ki images for this map, but no scorebar. (At least include the default scorebar background/color files if you want to do this) Done~
*I really suggest trying to find a longer version of this song (or attempting to make it longer yourself with some magic :v). 25-30 seconds for a beatmap is a bit pitiful... I would personally aim for nothing shorter than ~45 seconds, but you might get lucky and find some BATs that think this is fine (like Gens). I know...but, I guess I'll try my luck
[Italia]
00:23:306 (2) - Expected this to be a slider :c Done~
00:26:587 (1) - Expected another note here, with the spinner starting on the next white tick Done~
[Nihon]
00:14:868 (3) - expected a finish here Done~
00:26:587 (1) - same suggestion as last diff Done~
[Doitsu]
00:15:337 - perhaps add a note here?
00:22:837 (1) - repeat is hidden by the last slider's hitburst (100/300/etc), which is unrankable.
00:28:462 - same suggestion as the other diffs (even though this is a few beats later)
Done~
[HERO!]
00:13:227 (2) - make this a slider and extend to the white tick? =x
00:15:806 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:16:977 - add a note here?
00:17:681 (4) - repeat is partially hidden
00:17:446 - add a note here?
00:27:758 (6,7) - this is the only jump in the map, which is inconsistent/unexpected.
00:28:462 - same as last diff
Done~
EDIT: Doitsu: 00:17:446 (3) - repeats are a bit hidden from spinner/kiai as well when testing Done~
Hey!
[Nihon]
00:21:899 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid left, just for allignment
...Thats all I gotz XD
I like this map
Its short and funny!
~STAR + Kudosu STAR!!
[Nihon]
00:21:899 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid left, just for allignment
...Thats all I gotz XD
I like this map
Its short and funny!~STAR + Kudosu STAR!!
Topic Starter
Done~ and thanks ~ !!Zetsubou Sensei wrote:
Hey!
[Nihon]
00:21:899 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid left, just for allignment
...Thats all I gotz XD
I like this map
~STAR + Kudosu STAR!!
Hi!
I didn't see something wrong, nice map
*star*
I didn't see something wrong, nice map
*star*
Italia:
Normal mod:
00:15:806 (1) - to prevent the unappealing partial overlap by 2 and 3, flip the rest of the song from this point on horizontally
Combo mod:
00:06:431 (2) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every 4 whole notes?
00:12:993 (1,2) - to be conisistent with 00:11:118 (2) and follow your early pattern of a new combo after every 4 whole notes, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
Timing section mod:
00:29:985 - unneeded timing section, please remove
Nihon:
Normal mod;
00:12:993 (1) - align with 00:12:056 (3)? (you can see that they are not aligned when playing)
Combo mod:
00:12:056 (3,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with 00:11:118 (2) (if you do this, you might want to add a new combo to 00:13:462 (2))
00:24:712 (1) - it feels sort of strange that this is not consistent with 00:17:212 (3)
Timing section mod: (Why do the inherited timing sections say cutsom hitsounds when there are no custom hitsounds in your folder?)
same as Italia
Doitsu:
Combo mod:
00:20:727 (1) - what does this new combo follow, I would suggest removing it since it does not follow the lyrical pattern you set
Timing section mod:
same as Italia
HERO!:
Normal mod:
00:14:399 (6,7) - Everything else is this stream is spread out, yet these 2 notes are stacked. Please spread out these 2 notes because the stack was random to me
00:27:524 (5,6) - ^
Combo mod:
00:02:681 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - I am not exactly understanding what your new combo is supposed to follow here. If you want to follow a lyrical pattern I advise adding a new combo to 00:02:681 (4) and 00:03:618 (2)
00:12:993 (1,3,4) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to either 3 or 4 to be consistent with 00:08:774 (2,3,1)
Timing section mod:
00:08:540 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:29:985 - ^
Nothing technically wrong with the map that will prevent this map from being ranked, but the linear mapping style of the map is not very entertaining. I mostly pointed out a few minor nitpicks that can be used to improve your map, but if you really want to improve it, you will probably have to remap a lot of the maps. Star.
Normal mod:
00:15:806 (1) - to prevent the unappealing partial overlap by 2 and 3, flip the rest of the song from this point on horizontally
Combo mod:
00:06:431 (2) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every 4 whole notes?
00:12:993 (1,2) - to be conisistent with 00:11:118 (2) and follow your early pattern of a new combo after every 4 whole notes, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
Timing section mod:
00:29:985 - unneeded timing section, please remove
Nihon:
Normal mod;
00:12:993 (1) - align with 00:12:056 (3)? (you can see that they are not aligned when playing)
Combo mod:
00:12:056 (3,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with 00:11:118 (2) (if you do this, you might want to add a new combo to 00:13:462 (2))
00:24:712 (1) - it feels sort of strange that this is not consistent with 00:17:212 (3)
Timing section mod: (Why do the inherited timing sections say cutsom hitsounds when there are no custom hitsounds in your folder?)
same as Italia
Doitsu:
Combo mod:
00:20:727 (1) - what does this new combo follow, I would suggest removing it since it does not follow the lyrical pattern you set
Timing section mod:
same as Italia
HERO!:
Normal mod:
00:14:399 (6,7) - Everything else is this stream is spread out, yet these 2 notes are stacked. Please spread out these 2 notes because the stack was random to me
00:27:524 (5,6) - ^
Combo mod:
00:02:681 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - I am not exactly understanding what your new combo is supposed to follow here. If you want to follow a lyrical pattern I advise adding a new combo to 00:02:681 (4) and 00:03:618 (2)
00:12:993 (1,3,4) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to either 3 or 4 to be consistent with 00:08:774 (2,3,1)
Timing section mod:
00:08:540 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:29:985 - ^
Nothing technically wrong with the map that will prevent this map from being ranked, but the linear mapping style of the map is not very entertaining. I mostly pointed out a few minor nitpicks that can be used to improve your map, but if you really want to improve it, you will probably have to remap a lot of the maps. Star.
Topic Starter
All done and yes I know I almost only used linear sliders I guess because I don't know how to make good slider with bezier, I'll work on making this more entertaining, anyways thanks for the advice ~blissfulyoshi wrote:
Nothing technically wrong with the map that will prevent this map from being ranked, but the linear mapping style of the map is not very entertaining. I mostly pointed out a few minor nitpicks that can be used to improve your map, but if you really want to improve it, you will probably have to remap a lot of the maps. Star.
Wut, this is really short and it sounds like you cutted the mp3 file
[Hero]
00:03:149 (1) - remove new combo. The more new combo you have, the faster the life-gage drains
00:17:446 (5) - Meh, give it a new combo or somehow try to identify it is's a jump ir something
One tip for you. Hitsounds doesn't sound great if they are placed white to red tick most of the time. You should give some space between hitsounds ._.;;
[Hero]
00:03:149 (1) - remove new combo. The more new combo you have, the faster the life-gage drains
00:17:446 (5) - Meh, give it a new combo or somehow try to identify it is's a jump ir something
One tip for you. Hitsounds doesn't sound great if they are placed white to red tick most of the time. You should give some space between hitsounds ._.;;
Topic Starter
Done, no I didn't cut the mp3 and er...okk, thanks for the advice.bmin11 wrote:
Wut, this is really short and it sounds like you cutted the mp3 file
[Hero]
00:03:149 (1) - remove new combo. The more new combo you have, the faster the life-gage drains
00:17:446 (5) - Meh, give it a new combo or somehow try to identify it is's a jump ir something
One tip for you. Hitsounds doesn't sound great if they are placed white to red tick most of the time. You should give some space between hitsounds ._.;;
Hi lovhin456
This is one of my next to watch anime, looks good
I've seen a very short map that recently got bubble you might want to check it out
It's too bad that you map the short ver instead of the full ver >.<
[General]
- Just like Derekku said you should include a scorebar-bg and a scorebar-color, if you can't come up with one, take the one from default skin instead
- There are no different between scorbar-ki, kidanger, and kidanger2. Try making the ki become little or darker for kidanger and kidanger2
- You don't need ending in the tag, maybe put the character or the studio that produce this anime
[Italia]
00:29:751 - put this timing section exactly on the spinner's end
[Nihon]
00:29:751 - same issue as above
[Doitsu]
00:17:446 (3) - instead of slider with so many repeat like this, try breaking it, here's my suggestion
00:20:962 (5,6) - make these circles into slider, flow much better that way imo
00:25:181 (5,6) - ^
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above
[HERO]
00:12:524 (3,4) - make this into slider instead
00:17:212 (4,1) - the only jump on the diff (or the map) maybe add some more?
00:17:681 (2) - to many repeats could be very monotone especially for the hardest diff
00:17:681 (2) - finish at the end sounds good imo
00:19:790 (4,5) - change into slider
00:20:259 (6,7) - ^
00:27:055 (3,4) - ^
00:27:758 (6,7) - ^
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above
All of the above (except for the timing section) are a suggestion, if you don't like it feel free to ignore it
If you need more help catch me in-game and I'll gladly help you
~star
This is one of my next to watch anime, looks good
I've seen a very short map that recently got bubble you might want to check it out
It's too bad that you map the short ver instead of the full ver >.<
[General]
- Just like Derekku said you should include a scorebar-bg and a scorebar-color, if you can't come up with one, take the one from default skin instead
- There are no different between scorbar-ki, kidanger, and kidanger2. Try making the ki become little or darker for kidanger and kidanger2
- You don't need ending in the tag, maybe put the character or the studio that produce this anime
[Italia]
00:29:751 - put this timing section exactly on the spinner's end
[Nihon]
00:29:751 - same issue as above
[Doitsu]
00:17:446 (3) - instead of slider with so many repeat like this, try breaking it, here's my suggestion
00:20:962 (5,6) - make these circles into slider, flow much better that way imo
00:25:181 (5,6) - ^
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above
[HERO]
00:12:524 (3,4) - make this into slider instead
00:17:212 (4,1) - the only jump on the diff (or the map) maybe add some more?
00:17:681 (2) - to many repeats could be very monotone especially for the hardest diff
00:17:681 (2) - finish at the end sounds good imo
00:19:790 (4,5) - change into slider
00:20:259 (6,7) - ^
00:27:055 (3,4) - ^
00:27:758 (6,7) - ^
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above
All of the above (except for the timing section) are a suggestion, if you don't like it feel free to ignore it
If you need more help catch me in-game and I'll gladly help you
~star
Topic Starter
Thanks for the support and well, everything ~Sallad4ever wrote:
Hi lovhin456
This is one of my next to watch anime, looks good
I've seen a very short map that recently got bubble you might want to check it out
It's too bad that you map the short ver instead of the full ver >.< Yay~ There's hope for my map, yeah...I was thinking about making the full ver, maybe I will, someday ~
[General]
- Just like Derekku said you should include a scorebar-bg and a scorebar-color, if you can't come up with one, take the one from default skin instead I'm pretty sure I did
- There are no different between scorbar-ki, kidanger, and kidanger2. Try making the ki become little or darker for kidanger and kidanger2 Changed that ~
- You don't need ending in the tag, maybe put the character or the studio that produce this anime Changed that ~
[Italia]
00:29:751 - put this timing section exactly on the spinner's end Done ~
[Nihon]
00:29:751 - same issue as above Done ~
[Doitsu]
00:17:446 (3) - instead of slider with so many repeat like this, try breaking it, here's my suggestionSPOILERDone ~[attachment=0:28104]screenshot199.png[/attachment:28104]
00:20:962 (5,6) - make these circles into slider, flow much better that way imo Done ~
00:25:181 (5,6) - ^ Done ~
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above Done ~
[HERO]
00:12:524 (3,4) - make this into slider instead Done ~
00:17:212 (4,1) - the only jump on the diff (or the map) maybe add some more? I don't know...I'm not very good at placing jumps but I'll try
00:17:681 (2) - to many repeats could be very monotone especially for the hardest diff Done ~
00:17:681 (2) - finish at the end sounds good imo Done ~
00:19:790 (4,5) - change into slider Done ~
00:20:259 (6,7) - ^ Done ~
00:27:055 (3,4) - ^ Done ~
00:27:758 (6,7) - ^ Done ~
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above Done ~
All of the above (except for the timing section) are a suggestion, if you don't like it feel free to ignore it
If you need more help catch me in-game and I'll gladly help you
~star
[Italia]
Isn't the OD a bit high for easy?
Reduce by one tick?
[Doitsu]
00:15:806 (1) - I'd like you to remove this spinner.
00:21:431 (6) - Allign better.
00:28:462 (3) - Remove this circle and start spinner from here? Such a short spinners are way too annoying.
Others seems fine.
Well,nice short map,star~
Isn't the OD a bit high for easy?
Reduce by one tick?
[Doitsu]
00:15:806 (1) - I'd like you to remove this spinner.
00:21:431 (6) - Allign better.
00:28:462 (3) - Remove this circle and start spinner from here? Such a short spinners are way too annoying.
Others seems fine.
Well,nice short map,star~
Topic Starter
All done ~ Thanks ~ !!SadKangaroo wrote:
[Italia]
Isn't the OD a bit high for easy?
Reduce by one tick?
[Doitsu]
00:15:806 (1) - I'd like you to remove this spinner.
00:21:431 (6) - Allign better.
00:28:462 (3) - Remove this circle and start spinner from here? Such a short spinners are way too annoying.
Others seems fine.
Well,nice short map,star~
Blimey, this is pretty short... oh well! I haven't seen the anime but these difficulty names are kinda weird, what's wrong with the default ones?
Italia
Fine
Nihon
Fine
Doitsu
00:19:321 (2) - It's really ugly how this overlaps the slider :
HERO!
This difficulty feels lackluster to me. I just think you should map more to the flow of the song and the vocals than just the lame 1/2 streams you have here at the moment.
Italia
Fine
Nihon
Fine
Doitsu
00:19:321 (2) - It's really ugly how this overlaps the slider :
HERO!
This difficulty feels lackluster to me. I just think you should map more to the flow of the song and the vocals than just the lame 1/2 streams you have here at the moment.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the advice ~ :3Mashley wrote:
Blimey, this is pretty short... oh well! I haven't seen the anime but these difficulty names are kinda weird, what's wrong with the default ones? Yeah about that, it has to do with the anime...characters...so yeah ~
Italia
Fine yayy ~
Nihon
Fine yayy ~
Doitsu
00:19:321 (2) - It's really ugly how this overlaps the slider Fixed ~
HERO!
This difficulty feels lackluster to me. I just think you should map more to the flow of the song and the vocals than just the lame 1/2 streams you have here at the moment. To be honest, I don't think I'm good at doing insane but I'll probably change some things there and here and stuff ~
Starred ~
Topic Starter
Thanks ~backstep wrote:
Starred ~
Your map isjust too tough for me to FC it double time. That's too easyXD
The maps are all fine, though. Take a star.
Topic Starter
LOL, thanks for the star and I totally svck at doing insane...blah ~Omegavoids wrote:
Your map isjust too tough for me to FC it double time. That's too easyXD
The maps are all fine, though. Take a star.
[General]
Should the Source be Hetalia: Axis Powers?
Add (TV Size) in Title?
[Italia]
Looks fine, but the Hitsounds sound random.
[Nihon]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.
[Doitsu]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.
[HERO!]
Looks fine, but has an overkill of Clapping Hitsounds. The map is not much challenging either.
Try to be creative and create patterns with the Hitsounds. The best way is just go with the song and add Hitsounds where appropriate.
The maps seems straightforward; it's nice and short, nothing special or anything.
Other than that, Star~
Should the Source be Hetalia: Axis Powers?
Add (TV Size) in Title?
[Italia]
Looks fine, but the Hitsounds sound random.
[Nihon]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.
[Doitsu]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.
[HERO!]
Looks fine, but has an overkill of Clapping Hitsounds. The map is not much challenging either.
Try to be creative and create patterns with the Hitsounds. The best way is just go with the song and add Hitsounds where appropriate.
The maps seems straightforward; it's nice and short, nothing special or anything.
Other than that, Star~
Topic Starter
Thanks for the star and everything...but I can't upload the map after I change the title and the source it says I'm uploading a new beatmap and I can't because I already have 2Darcsol wrote:
[General]
Should the Source be Hetalia: Axis Powers?
Add (TV Size) in Title?
[Italia]
Looks fine, but the Hitsounds sound random.
[Nihon]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.
[Doitsu]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.
[HERO!]
Looks fine, but has an overkill of Clapping Hitsounds. The map is not much challenging either.
Try to be creative and create patterns with the Hitsounds. The best way is just go with the song and add Hitsounds where appropriate.
The maps seems straightforward; it's nice and short, nothing special or anything.
Other than that, Star~
// I will try to work on the hitsounds
Topic Starter
Yay ~ Thanks for the helpBlazevoir wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 - Follow this
No problem By the way, you might wanna change this thread's title while you're at it.
By the way, you might wanna change this thread's title while you're at it.
Topic Starter
LOL totally forgot about that ~ Thanks for the remind xDBlazevoir wrote:
No problem
Lol, you're welcome
Such a short map
Layout is rather bland, lots of straight lines, but I couldn't see anything technically wrong.
[NIHON]
Same as Italia, nothing technically wrong, but it laid out in a boring way. too many straight lines and right angles.
[DOITSU]
More interesting than Italia/Nihon, but could've use a bit more spice and interesting patterns to liven it up
[HERO!]
00:24:477 (1,2) - It's a tiny gripe, but it looks ugly compared to the rest of the map here. Mind closing this gap?
Overall, There isn't much wrong. Everything is solid and works fine, but it's kinda bland. It is your first map, so I won't bother you about it, but maybe in your next map, you could experiment more with slider shapes and patterns you could put your beats in. An interesting layour can make a map so much more fun without adding any extra beats. It helps making mapping more fun too That said, for your first map, it's nice, so good job
Starred
- For timing, I got offset: 796. the BPM is fine though
- Your combobursts are too wide. the max size for combobursts are the size of the default one, which is 388x787, which yours are 500x500. Perhaps shrink them down so it fits right?
- I see what you were trying to do with the difficulty names, but for most people, especially those who don't get the reference, like me, they don't work well as diff names. Maybe you could put an Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane next to each name? (e.g. "Italia (Easy)", or "Nihon (Normal)"?
Layout is rather bland, lots of straight lines, but I couldn't see anything technically wrong.
[NIHON]
Same as Italia, nothing technically wrong, but it laid out in a boring way. too many straight lines and right angles.
[DOITSU]
More interesting than Italia/Nihon, but could've use a bit more spice and interesting patterns to liven it up
[HERO!]
00:24:477 (1,2) - It's a tiny gripe, but it looks ugly compared to the rest of the map here. Mind closing this gap?
Overall, There isn't much wrong. Everything is solid and works fine, but it's kinda bland. It is your first map, so I won't bother you about it, but maybe in your next map, you could experiment more with slider shapes and patterns you could put your beats in. An interesting layour can make a map so much more fun without adding any extra beats. It helps making mapping more fun too
That said, for your first map, it's nice, so good job Starred
Topic Starter
Doomsday93 wrote:
Such a short mapFixed ~
- For timing, I got offset: 796. the BPM is fine though Thanks for the offset, fixed ~
- Your combobursts are too wide. the max size for combobursts are the size of the default one, which is 388x787, which yours are 500x500. Perhaps shrink them down so it fits right? I'm very confused now, I thought the allowed size was 500x500, then someone told me it was 400x400...
- I see what you were trying to do with the difficulty names, but for most people, especially those who don't get the reference, like me, they don't work well as diff names. Maybe you could put an Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane next to each name? (e.g. "Italia (Easy)", or "Nihon (Normal)"?
[ITALIA]
Layout is rather bland, lots of straight lines, but I couldn't see anything technically wrong. I know...I'm just too lazy to ehh...remap ?? But anyways I finally did it ~
[NIHON]
Same as Italia, nothing technically wrong, but it laid out in a boring way. too many straight lines and right angles. ^
[DOITSU]
More interesting than Italia/Nihon, but could've use a bit more spice and interesting patterns to liven it up ^ (:
[HERO!]
00:24:477 (1,2) - It's a tiny gripe, but it looks ugly compared to the rest of the map here. Mind closing this gap? Fixed + ^
Overall, There isn't much wrong. Everything is solid and works fine, but it's kinda bland. It is your first map, so I won't bother you about it, but maybe in your next map, you could experiment more with slider shapes and patterns you could put your beats in. An interesting layour can make a map so much more fun without adding any extra beats. It helps making mapping more fun too
Starred
I think you overused the soft claps on Hard and Insane. Consider using less of them.
[Insane]
00:24:467 (1) - Snap the ending of this slider to the next white tick
That's all!
[Insane]
00:24:467 (1) - Snap the ending of this slider to the next white tick
That's all!
Topic Starter
Lesjuh wrote:
I think you overused the soft claps on Hard and Insane. Consider using less of them. Haha, I will check it out xD
[Insane]
00:24:467 (1) - Snap the ending of this slider to the next white tick Done ~
That's all! Thanks !!
wow, so much starrers
General
remove some hitsounds on all of the diffs (PLEASE!!)
Italia
00:06:421 (1,2) remove combo, new combo after that
00:22:827 (1,2) ^
Nihon
00:13:452 (1) remove combo
Doitsu
00:28:921 start spinner here
kudosu star!!
General
remove some hitsounds on all of the diffs (PLEASE!!)
Italia
00:06:421 (1,2) remove combo, new combo after that
00:22:827 (1,2) ^
Nihon
00:13:452 (1) remove combo
Doitsu
00:28:921 start spinner here
kudosu star!!
Topic Starter
Thanks ~ fixed all and I'm working on taking out some hitsounds ~chamelepeace710 wrote:
wow, so much starrers
General
remove some hitsounds on all of the diffs (PLEASE!!)
Italia
00:06:421 (1,2) remove combo, new combo after that
00:22:827 (1,2) ^
Nihon
00:13:452 (1) remove combo
Doitsu
00:28:921 start spinner here
kudosu star!!
Topic Starter
EHHH... deleted this post because for some reason is...ehhh...it doesn't matter...
Topic Starter
lovhin456 wrote:
Gracias ~ :3vivere wrote:
Starr~ ^^
This is hilarious
[Nihon]
00:22:827 (1,2,3) - (3) needs to go left 1 grid
[Doitsu]
too much clap
[HERO!]
too much clap, usually if there are 5 or more claps in a row, that's bad
[Nihon]
00:22:827 (1,2,3) - (3) needs to go left 1 grid
[Doitsu]
too much clap
[HERO!]
too much clap, usually if there are 5 or more claps in a row, that's bad
Topic Starter
All done, thanks ~ :3Dusty wrote:
This is hilarious
[Nihon]
00:22:827 (1,2,3) - (3) needs to go left 1 grid
[Doitsu]
too much clap
[HERO!]
too much clap, usually if there are 5 or more claps in a row, that's bad
First queue attempt FTW!!
Italia(Easy)
00:06:421 (2) - Off placed very slightly. Move it down 1 unit (aligns it with the previous slider) and then turn both grid and distance snap off for the next change and move it slightly closer to the previous note so that it is roughly 1 and 2/3rds unit from the previous note. That may be hard to visualize. Another method is to use the vertical axis as a guide. In my alteration the start of this note has 4 and 2/3rds units on the left side and 3 and 1/3rd units on the right side.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21729
Lot of effort put into something you most likely wont even change, but I don't care. I couldn't clarify myself in an easily interpreted way.
Nihon(Normal)
Eh it's fine as far as I see.
I have a couple mini suggestions that you may want to look into.
00:14:858 (4,1) - Did you not align these on purpose? If you did, it is perfectly okay. I can't make a determination whether aligning these notes and the notes included in the shift looks better than the altered version or if it makes a difference. I'll just include a fix to realign these notes.
00:15:796 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these left 1 unit to fix the alignment. This wont fix it entirely. My next suggestion rquires a deviation of your patterns a tad that might spice up your patterns better regardless if you chose to shift the notes to realign or keep the misalignment. So consider this next suggestion separate but related to the above one.
00:20:014 (5,1,2,1) - I think that the straight implementation of 1,2 is a little bland. I think it would play and look better if this notes were placed in a fancy curving pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21731
I did this by moving 00:21:889 (1) - 2 units to the right of 5 with distance snap on. 00:22:358 (2) - was placed diagonally from it. Exact specs is hard to explain. There is probably multiple positions that would work for note 2. The center right edge of note 2 in the screenshot is 3 units up and 5 units left from the top center edge of note 1. 00:22:827 (1) - in the screenshot is positioned roughly 2 units higher than 00:21:889 (1) - or 5 units lower and 2 units to the left of note 2. After you have those positioned in the pattern, realign 00:23:061 (2,3) - these back with 00:22:827 (1) - .
To complete the look, I suggest that you make 00:23:296 (3,4,1) - more curved to look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21736
See how note 1 is placed in an adjacent position to note 3 and 4 is right in the middle? Design it to look something like that.
Tell me if your interested in this change and if my instructions have confused you in any way. I'll gladly help you out.
Doitsu(Hard)
00:02:436 (4) - I really think this belongs on a 1/8th tick. Try placing it on 00:02:378 -.
00:10:171 (1) - Move down 1 unit
00:28:452 - Add a note here? It doesn't have to be a slider. Just a regular note. I just feel that there is an awkward gap here and it throws off the pace when I go into the spinner.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21738
HERO! (Insane)
00:01:733 (3,1) - Stack this better? It's stacking weird.
00:07:358 (1) - Move this back to 00:07:124 -
Very fun beatmaps. Short but fun to play. Only gets better the harder the difficulty due to the relaxing nature of the maps. I'm looking forward to this getting ranked. Stared.
Italia(Easy)
00:06:421 (2) - Off placed very slightly. Move it down 1 unit (aligns it with the previous slider) and then turn both grid and distance snap off for the next change and move it slightly closer to the previous note so that it is roughly 1 and 2/3rds unit from the previous note. That may be hard to visualize. Another method is to use the vertical axis as a guide. In my alteration the start of this note has 4 and 2/3rds units on the left side and 3 and 1/3rd units on the right side.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21729
Lot of effort put into something you most likely wont even change, but I don't care. I couldn't clarify myself in an easily interpreted way.
Nihon(Normal)
Eh it's fine as far as I see.
I have a couple mini suggestions that you may want to look into.
00:14:858 (4,1) - Did you not align these on purpose? If you did, it is perfectly okay. I can't make a determination whether aligning these notes and the notes included in the shift looks better than the altered version or if it makes a difference. I'll just include a fix to realign these notes.
00:15:796 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these left 1 unit to fix the alignment. This wont fix it entirely. My next suggestion rquires a deviation of your patterns a tad that might spice up your patterns better regardless if you chose to shift the notes to realign or keep the misalignment. So consider this next suggestion separate but related to the above one.
00:20:014 (5,1,2,1) - I think that the straight implementation of 1,2 is a little bland. I think it would play and look better if this notes were placed in a fancy curving pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21731
I did this by moving 00:21:889 (1) - 2 units to the right of 5 with distance snap on. 00:22:358 (2) - was placed diagonally from it. Exact specs is hard to explain. There is probably multiple positions that would work for note 2. The center right edge of note 2 in the screenshot is 3 units up and 5 units left from the top center edge of note 1. 00:22:827 (1) - in the screenshot is positioned roughly 2 units higher than 00:21:889 (1) - or 5 units lower and 2 units to the left of note 2. After you have those positioned in the pattern, realign 00:23:061 (2,3) - these back with 00:22:827 (1) - .
To complete the look, I suggest that you make 00:23:296 (3,4,1) - more curved to look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21736
See how note 1 is placed in an adjacent position to note 3 and 4 is right in the middle? Design it to look something like that.
Tell me if your interested in this change and if my instructions have confused you in any way. I'll gladly help you out.
Doitsu(Hard)
00:02:436 (4) - I really think this belongs on a 1/8th tick. Try placing it on 00:02:378 -.
00:10:171 (1) - Move down 1 unit
00:28:452 - Add a note here? It doesn't have to be a slider. Just a regular note. I just feel that there is an awkward gap here and it throws off the pace when I go into the spinner.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21738
HERO! (Insane)
00:01:733 (3,1) - Stack this better? It's stacking weird.
00:07:358 (1) - Move this back to 00:07:124 -
Very fun beatmaps. Short but fun to play. Only gets better the harder the difficulty due to the relaxing nature of the maps. I'm looking forward to this getting ranked. Stared.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod ~ :3TheVileOne wrote:
First queue attempt FTW!!
Italia(Easy)
00:06:421 (2) - Off placed very slightly. Move it down 1 unit (aligns it with the previous slider) and then turn both grid and distance snap off for the next change and move it slightly closer to the previous note so that it is roughly 1 and 2/3rds unit from the previous note. That may be hard to visualize. Another method is to use the vertical axis as a guide. In my alteration the start of this note has 4 and 2/3rds units on the left side and 3 and 1/3rd units on the right side.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21729
Lot of effort put into something you most likely wont even change, but I don't care. I couldn't clarify myself in an easily interpreted way.
I actually did it, looks better, but I will like you to check if I did it okk :3
Nihon(Normal)
Eh it's fine as far as I see.
I have a couple mini suggestions that you may want to look into.
00:14:858 (4,1) - Did you not align these on purpose? If you did, it is perfectly okay. I can't make a determination whether aligning these notes and the notes included in the shift looks better than the altered version or if it makes a difference. I'll just include a fix to realign these notes.
00:15:796 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these left 1 unit to fix the alignment. This wont fix it entirely. My next suggestion rquires a deviation of your patterns a tad that might spice up your patterns better regardless if you chose to shift the notes to realign or keep the misalignment. So consider this next suggestion separate but related to the above one.
00:20:014 (5,1,2,1) - I think that the straight implementation of 1,2 is a little bland. I think it would play and look better if this notes were placed in a fancy curving pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21731
I did this by moving 00:21:889 (1) - 2 units to the right of 5 with distance snap on. 00:22:358 (2) - was placed diagonally from it. Exact specs is hard to explain. There is probably multiple positions that would work for note 2. The center right edge of note 2 in the screenshot is 3 units up and 5 units left from the top center edge of note 1. 00:22:827 (1) - in the screenshot is positioned roughly 2 units higher than 00:21:889 (1) - or 5 units lower and 2 units to the left of note 2. After you have those positioned in the pattern, realign 00:23:061 (2,3) - these back with 00:22:827 (1) - .
To complete the look, I suggest that you make 00:23:296 (3,4,1) - more curved to look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21736
See how note 1 is placed in an adjacent position to note 3 and 4 is right in the middle? Design it to look something like that.
Tell me if your interested in this change and if my instructions have confused you in any way. I'll gladly help you out.
Everything done ~ Check it, so I know if I did it right please ??
Doitsu(Hard)
00:02:436 (4) - I really think this belongs on a 1/8th tick. Try placing it on 00:02:378 -.
00:10:171 (1) - Move down 1 unit
00:28:452 - Add a note here? It doesn't have to be a slider. Just a regular note. I just feel that there is an awkward gap here and it throws off the pace when I go into the spinner.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21738
All done ~
HERO! (Insane)
00:01:733 (3,1) - Stack this better? It's stacking weird.
00:07:358 (1) - Move this back to 00:07:124 -
All done~
Very fun beatmaps. Short but fun to play. Only gets better the harder the difficulty due to the relaxing nature of the maps. I'm looking forward to this getting ranked. Stared.
-General
Si vas a poner los diff names como Italia, Nihon, Dohitsu y HERO!, remueve los (Easy), (Normal), (Hard), (Insane). Se ven raros. Además, Italia en inglés = Italy. Tal vez lo quieras arreglar.
-Easy
00:06:421 (2) - Agrega un finish al inicio. Hasta podrías agregar un finish normal.
00:10:171 (1) - ^
00:11:108 (2) - Estos finish están de más imo.
00:12:046 (1) - Agrega un finish al inicio.
00:23:296 (1) - ^
-Normal
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:108 (2) - Remueve el finish del final
00:12:046 (1) - Finish al inicio
-Hard
00:08:296 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:577 (4) - Remueve este finish
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:12:046 (1) - ^
00:19:546 (3) - ^
-Insane
Esto, ehhh, no es para nada un insane, te aviso de inmediato, es bastante fácil. Para aumentar la dificultad, usa notas en 1/4 y agranda la distancia entre las notas en 1/2.
Ah, lindos sliders~!
00:04:546 (1) - Para aumentar la dificultad, podrías agregar notas en 1/4 (lineas azules) en lugar de este slider. Podrían ser repeat sliders o una stream.
00:05:600 (x) - Agrega una nota
00:05:835 (x) - ^
00:07:124 (1) - Extiende esto hasta 00:08:296 -
00:10:171 (1) - finish
00:12:046 (1) - finish
Al poner los finish, ponle un poco más de atención a la música de fondo.
Suerte!
Star!
Si vas a poner los diff names como Italia, Nihon, Dohitsu y HERO!, remueve los (Easy), (Normal), (Hard), (Insane). Se ven raros. Además, Italia en inglés = Italy. Tal vez lo quieras arreglar.
-Easy
00:06:421 (2) - Agrega un finish al inicio. Hasta podrías agregar un finish normal.
00:10:171 (1) - ^
00:11:108 (2) - Estos finish están de más imo.
00:12:046 (1) - Agrega un finish al inicio.
00:23:296 (1) - ^
-Normal
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:108 (2) - Remueve el finish del final
00:12:046 (1) - Finish al inicio
-Hard
00:08:296 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:577 (4) - Remueve este finish
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:12:046 (1) - ^
00:19:546 (3) - ^
-Insane
Esto, ehhh, no es para nada un insane, te aviso de inmediato, es bastante fácil. Para aumentar la dificultad, usa notas en 1/4 y agranda la distancia entre las notas en 1/2.
Ah, lindos sliders~!
00:04:546 (1) - Para aumentar la dificultad, podrías agregar notas en 1/4 (lineas azules) en lugar de este slider. Podrían ser repeat sliders o una stream.
00:05:600 (x) - Agrega una nota
00:05:835 (x) - ^
00:07:124 (1) - Extiende esto hasta 00:08:296 -
00:10:171 (1) - finish
00:12:046 (1) - finish
Al poner los finish, ponle un poco más de atención a la música de fondo.
Suerte!
Star!
Topic Starter
Gracias por todo ~ :3Krisom wrote:
-General
Si vas a poner los diff names como Italia, Nihon, Dohitsu y HERO!, remueve los (Easy), (Normal), (Hard), (Insane). Se ven raros. Además, Italia en inglés = Italy. Tal vez lo quieras arreglar.
Removi (Easy), etc pero el nombre de las diff tiene que ver con el anime, no es que lo haya escrito mal en ingles :3
-Easy
00:06:421 (2) - Agrega un finish al inicio. Hasta podrías agregar un finish normal.
00:10:171 (1) - ^
00:11:108 (2) - Estos finish están de más imo.
00:12:046 (1) - Agrega un finish al inicio.
00:23:296 (1) - ^
Todo hecho ~
-Normal
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:108 (2) - Remueve el finish del final
00:12:046 (1) - Finish al inicio
Todo hecho ~
-Hard
00:08:296 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:577 (4) - Remueve este finish
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:12:046 (1) - ^
00:19:546 (3) - ^
Todo hecho ~
-Insane
Esto, ehhh, no es para nada un insane, te aviso de inmediato, es bastante fácil. Para aumentar la dificultad, usa notas en 1/4 y agranda la distancia entre las notas en 1/2. Ehh...he pensado en re-mappear esta diff, porque dicen que es muy facil :/
Ah, lindos sliders~! Gracias :3
00:04:546 (1) - Para aumentar la dificultad, podrías agregar notas en 1/4 (lineas azules) en lugar de este slider. Podrían ser repeat sliders o una stream.
00:05:600 (x) - Agrega una nota
00:05:835 (x) - ^
00:07:124 (1) - Extiende esto hasta 00:08:296 -
00:10:171 (1) - finish
00:12:046 (1) - finish
No hice nada de lo que sugeriste, pero no fue porque no estuviera de acuerdo sino que como que quise re-mappear esta diff :3
Al poner los finish, ponle un poco más de atención a la música de fondo.
Suerte!
Star!
Topic Starter
LOL ! Thanks for the star :3 <3kuyukiP wrote:
I haven't starred this yet? Wtf?
Might as well kudosu star this for your awesome hitsound mod.
Topic Starter
xD Thanks ~ I will try to mod your other diff when you finish with the other normal mod you have there :3TheVileOne wrote:
Might as well kudosu star this for your awesome hitsound mod.
[Doitsu]
00:02:378 (4) - Snap to the red tick using the 1/4 divisor. (Or just snap to red tick)
00:05:952 (7) - Maybe add a finish at the end?
[HERO!]
00:07:124 (1) - Ending sounds pretty bad. How about extending it to the white tick?
00:15:796 (5) - Add a finish at the start?
00:28:452 (1) - Add finish here (like the others) instead of on 00:28:686 (3).
Also make the lead-in time 2 seconds on all difficulties.
00:02:378 (4) - Snap to the red tick using the 1/4 divisor. (Or just snap to red tick)
00:05:952 (7) - Maybe add a finish at the end?
[HERO!]
00:07:124 (1) - Ending sounds pretty bad. How about extending it to the white tick?
00:15:796 (5) - Add a finish at the start?
00:28:452 (1) - Add finish here (like the others) instead of on 00:28:686 (3).
Also make the lead-in time 2 seconds on all difficulties.
Topic Starter
Thanks :3Mafiamaster wrote:
[Doitsu]
00:02:378 (4) - Snap to the red tick using the 1/4 divisor. (Or just snap to red tick) Done
00:05:952 (7) - Maybe add a finish at the end? Umm, why not :3
[HERO!]
00:07:124 (1) - Ending sounds pretty bad. How about extending it to the white tick? Done
00:15:796 (5) - Add a finish at the start? Done
00:28:452 (1) - Add finish here (like the others) instead of on 00:28:686 (3). Done
Also make the lead-in time 2 seconds on all difficulties. Done
*Star* Played Italia, Nihon, and Doitzu version. I liked Nihon version, it wasn't so hard, neither so easy.
Bubbled
Topic Starter
Thank you ~ :3Mafiamaster wrote:
Bubbled
Italy FTW!!
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Man, not this again...Sakura Hana wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=473436#p473436
*runs*
Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.Blazevoir wrote:
Okk...I guess...thanks (:lovhin456 wrote:
Ignore what Sakura said.
Extra Note: Also taking out the bubble.
Topic Starter
Ok, so to resume everything: I worked hard, got a bubble, now my map can't be ranked, and I don't have a bubble anymore, but the BAT that gave me the bubble didn't said anything about the lenght of the song. Neither any MAT said anything about it...I understand, I shouldn't complain but is impossible...I just want to ask if there's any way to make this rankable...maybe replacing the song mp3 and mapping more? I just...really want this to be ranked. If not I guess I should just give up, I guess...thank you...fot telling...at this point.whymeman wrote:
Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.
Extra Note: Also taking out the bubble.
map submitted: Jun 22.
Eph said: Jul 17.
maybe ask Ephemeral to solve this...?
Eph said: Jul 17.
maybe ask Ephemeral to solve this...?
Topic Starter
I should...but I'm almost positive Ephemeral will say the same thing. I will think about it. Thanks for the suggestion (:NatsumeRin wrote:
map submitted: Jun 22.
Eph said: Jul 17.
maybe ask Ephemeral to solve this...?
I did tell you sooner
@_@
Topic Starter
I know...you don't have to remind me, sorry if I sound rude or anything not really trying to start a fight here or an argument, I should have listened to you...I'm the one who should apologize, sorry.Sakura Hana wrote:
I did tell you sooner
I wasn't trying to be a jerk. I was only going according to what I knew at the time.whymeman wrote:
Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.]
Anyway, good luck trying to sort things out, lovhin456... I'd hate to see all of this go to complete waste.
Topic Starter
Thanks Blaze but...I think I can't do more, but I'll try to fix this.Blazevoir wrote:
Anyway, good luck trying to sort things out, lovhin456... I'd hate to see all of this go to complete waste.
If you could somehow find or create a longer mp3, then that would probably be your best option. Some BATs seem to think that the current length is fine, but obviously that won't fare well since other BATs are popping any bubble that your map receives (and could always lead to an unranking even if it DID get ranked).
Please don't get discouraged or give up. ):
PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).
Please don't get discouraged or give up. ):
PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).
Topic Starter
Thanks, I guess I will ask James now that he has a cutting mp3 thread to cut the mp3 of this song (full ver.) to one that fits the req. for the lenght then I will start mapping some more, that's the best option I can think of. Thanks for your support :3Derekku wrote:
If you could somehow find or create a longer mp3, then that would probably be your best option. Some BATs seem to think that the current length is fine, but obviously that won't fare well since other BATs are popping any bubble that your map receives (and could always lead to an unranking even if it DID get ranked).
Please don't get discouraged or give up. ):
PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).
Let me re-mod this too, I've just finish watching Hetalia Axis Power and I starting to like this song (especially English version)Derekku wrote:
PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).
Topic Starter
Thanks for the support :3 I'll make sure I call you, thanks again :3Sallad4ever wrote:
Let me re-mod this too, I've just finish watching Hetalia Axis Power and I starting to like this song (especially English version)Derekku wrote:
PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).
~Italia~
Fine
~Nihon~
Fine.
~Doitsu~
00:16:967 (1) - remove new combo
~HERO!~
Streams are too intense imo (high spacings).
+Star
Fine
~Nihon~
Fine.
~Doitsu~
00:16:967 (1) - remove new combo
~HERO!~
Streams are too intense imo (high spacings).
+Star
Seriously, guys...
Topic Starter
Finally !
Things I made so far:
* Changed mp3 for the full ver.
* Changed BG + added some skin elements
* Remapped all diffs with the new mp3
* Finished adding hitsounds
Need help with:
* Timing, not sure about it...
* Opinions on the skin maybe ~
:3 !!
Things I made so far:
* Changed mp3 for the full ver.
* Changed BG + added some skin elements
* Remapped all diffs with the new mp3
* Finished adding hitsounds
Need help with:
* Timing, not sure about it...
* Opinions on the skin maybe ~
:3 !!
Oh yay~ I'll definitely have a mod post ASAP (although I'm not exactly sure when that'll be )
)
Topic Starter
It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3Blazevoir wrote:
Oh yay~ I'll definitely have a mod post ASAP (although I'm not exactly sure when that'll be
I said that because (as of this post) I'm home internetlesslovhin456 wrote:
It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3
Anyway,[General]
* Offset: 1,405 (make sure to resnap all notes and fix your timing sections afterwards~)
* Ahh, I love the custom skin elements
Note: The following is according to your previous offset.
[Italia]
* 01:01:210 (1) - Shouldn't this (and the 2nd Kiai Time) start on a white tick?
* 01:06:835 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 01:10:351 (3) - Delete this then make the slider at 01:10:780 (4) start on an earlier red tick?
* 01:31:210 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 02:04:023 (1) - ^
[Nihon]
* 00:34:726 (1) - Make this longer? If not, add a note at 00:35:663?
* 00:54:648 (2) - Shouldn't this be on a white tick?
* 00:56:523 (2) - ^
* 00:58:398 (2) - ^
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as Italia
* 01:03:320 (3) - Delete this note then make 01:03:554 (4) start where (3) was?
* 01:38:007 (2) - Spacing
[Doitsu]
* 00:15:741 (8) - Sounds weird where it ends in my opinion.
* 00:57:695 (1) - Lol, this threw me off. I don't mind it, but I'm not sure what others will say.
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as the previous two diffs.
[HERO!]
* 01:01:210 (1) - You guessed it: same as the last diffs.
* 01:12:226 (1,2,3,1) - Kinda empty between these notes. Also, shouldn't the spinner at 01:15:038 start at 01:14:570?
* 01:22:187 (7) - Shouldn't this be on a red tick? (If you do move it, fix the spacing afterwards.)
* 02:14:570 (9) - Add a repeat?
All just opinions (except for the offset), so... yeah
And glad to help again
Topic Starter
All done Thanks Blaze :3Blazevoir wrote:
I said that because (as of this post) I'm home internetlesslovhin456 wrote:
It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3
[General]
* Offset: 1,405 (make sure to resnap all notes and fix your timing sections afterwards~)
* Ahh, I love the custom skin elements
Note: The following is according to your previous offset.
[Italia]
* 01:01:210 (1) - Shouldn't this (and the 2nd Kiai Time) start on a white tick?
* 01:06:835 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 01:10:351 (3) - Delete this then make the slider at 01:10:780 (4) start on an earlier red tick?
* 01:31:210 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 02:04:023 (1) - ^
[Nihon]
* 00:34:726 (1) - Make this longer? If not, add a note at 00:35:663?
* 00:54:648 (2) - Shouldn't this be on a white tick?
* 00:56:523 (2) - ^
* 00:58:398 (2) - ^
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as Italia
* 01:03:320 (3) - Delete this note then make 01:03:554 (4) start where (3) was?
* 01:38:007 (2) - Spacing
[Doitsu]
* 00:15:741 (8) - Sounds weird where it ends in my opinion.
* 00:57:695 (1) - Lol, this threw me off. I don't mind it, but I'm not sure what others will say.
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as the previous two diffs.
[HERO!]
* 01:01:210 (1) - You guessed it: same as the last diffs.
* 01:12:226 (1,2,3,1) - Kinda empty between these notes. Also, shouldn't the spinner at 01:15:038 start at 01:14:570?
* 01:22:187 (7) - Shouldn't this be on a red tick? (If you do move it, fix the spacing afterwards.)
* 02:14:570 (9) - Add a repeat?
All just opinions (except for the offset), so... yeah
Hi lovhin
Here's my suggestion fell free to rejected it of course, cause this is your map
[General]
Italia : decrease HP by 1 or 2 and OD by 1
Nihon : increase AR by 1
Doitsu : increase AR by 1 and OD by 1 or 2
HERO : increase AR by 3
This is the diff setting that imo will make the map more enjoyable
- could you please use more whistle or clap? your clap pattern is clap on every 2/1, there's nothing wrong but it's too monotone. maybe make it like 00:44:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) on HERO, the whistle usage is great, I like it
[Skin]
- the spinner bg is strange, I guess it originally have an aspect ratio above 4:3, can you fix it? or if you can give me the image I can try fix it for you
- how about change the color of scorebar-bg to a light green or light yellow or pick a color from the background, so it will fit the BG
- comboburst are to small, any bigger size?
- love the scorebar-ki xD
[Italia]
01:10:545 (3) - the only note that start at 1/2 beat, a bit confusing. Since it's a slider it's not a big deal but I suggest to delete this and make 01:08:905 (2) - into a single repeat
01:31:405 (1) - too short spinner for easy not good especially when there's a note right after it, my suggestion is remove 01:32:811 (1) then lengthen the spinner too 01:33:280. delete 01:36:561 (1,2), move 01:34:217 (1) to 01:35:155 then add note on 01:34:217 & 01:34:686
[Nihon]
02:09:373 (8) - shorten the slider to the previous white tick and maybe add finish on it
[Doitsu]
00:02:342 (5) - this slider repeat sounds better if it ends on 00:03:280 (6), beside if you follow the lyric, the repeat should land on white tick not blue tick
00:26:248 (5) - move this too 00:25:780 (4) so it would follow the lyric?
00:26:717 (x) - if you do the thing above, add a note here or lengthen the slider to this place
00:28:358 (6) - move this slider to 00:28:592 then shorten it by 1/2 beat? if you follow this add a circle here
00:55:311 (1) - move this to the next white tick and add circle here, you have to delete 00:56:483 (2,3) if you follow this
01:12:186 (1) - shorten this slider repeats by 1 beat, then move it forward to 01:12:655 and add note here
01:25:780 (1) - lengthen this slider by 1/2 beat
[HERO]
01:35:506 (1) - start this spinner on 01:35:272 and end at the same place as before
once again feel free to reject my mod post if you don't agree with it, if you need recheck or something I'll glady do it :3
Pastaaaaaa~~
Here's my suggestion fell free to rejected it of course, cause this is your map
[General]
Italia : decrease HP by 1 or 2 and OD by 1
Nihon : increase AR by 1
Doitsu : increase AR by 1 and OD by 1 or 2
HERO : increase AR by 3
This is the diff setting that imo will make the map more enjoyable
- could you please use more whistle or clap? your clap pattern is clap on every 2/1, there's nothing wrong but it's too monotone. maybe make it like 00:44:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) on HERO, the whistle usage is great, I like it
[Skin]
- the spinner bg is strange, I guess it originally have an aspect ratio above 4:3, can you fix it? or if you can give me the image I can try fix it for you
- how about change the color of scorebar-bg to a light green or light yellow or pick a color from the background, so it will fit the BG
- comboburst are to small, any bigger size?
- love the scorebar-ki xD
[Italia]
01:10:545 (3) - the only note that start at 1/2 beat, a bit confusing. Since it's a slider it's not a big deal but I suggest to delete this and make 01:08:905 (2) - into a single repeat
01:31:405 (1) - too short spinner for easy not good especially when there's a note right after it, my suggestion is remove 01:32:811 (1) then lengthen the spinner too 01:33:280. delete 01:36:561 (1,2), move 01:34:217 (1) to 01:35:155 then add note on 01:34:217 & 01:34:686
[Nihon]
02:09:373 (8) - shorten the slider to the previous white tick and maybe add finish on it
[Doitsu]
00:02:342 (5) - this slider repeat sounds better if it ends on 00:03:280 (6), beside if you follow the lyric, the repeat should land on white tick not blue tick
00:26:248 (5) - move this too 00:25:780 (4) so it would follow the lyric?
00:26:717 (x) - if you do the thing above, add a note here or lengthen the slider to this place
00:28:358 (6) - move this slider to 00:28:592 then shorten it by 1/2 beat? if you follow this add a circle here
00:55:311 (1) - move this to the next white tick and add circle here, you have to delete 00:56:483 (2,3) if you follow this
01:12:186 (1) - shorten this slider repeats by 1 beat, then move it forward to 01:12:655 and add note here
01:25:780 (1) - lengthen this slider by 1/2 beat
[HERO]
01:35:506 (1) - start this spinner on 01:35:272 and end at the same place as before
once again feel free to reject my mod post if you don't agree with it, if you need recheck or something I'll glady do it :3
Pastaaaaaa~~
Topic Starter
Done everything ~ Oh and can you help me with the image please ?? Here it isSallad4ever wrote:
Hi lovhin
[Skin]
- the spinner bg is strange, I guess it originally have an aspect ratio above 4:3, can you fix it? or if you can give me the image I can try fix it for you
Pastaaaaaa~~
Thanks ! :3
Topic Starter
This is awesome !! <3 Thanks !!Sallad4ever wrote:
Finally done~
I try making a Spinner for you, feel free to use it or not
[attachment=0:1d129]Spinner.rar[/attachment:1d129]
Estrella por la cancion :3 ~
Topic Starter
Gracias por la estrella :3 ~Verdisphena wrote:
Estrella por la cancion :3 ~
Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).
Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).
Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^
Topic Starter
Gracias por el consejo, si voy a pasar algunas a jpg (: y es solo que queria la opinion de alguien para el skin xDAstom wrote:
Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).
Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^
Hubieras sido un poco mas especifica xDlovhin456 wrote:
Gracias por el consejo, si voy a pasar algunas a jpg (: y es solo que queria la opinion de alguien para el skin xDAstom wrote:
Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).
Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^
En ese caso creo q deberias algregar algunos elementos faltantes al skin como.
-star2.png
-section-pass.png
-section-fail.png
Y eso... esto es complementario al mod de arriba asi q no kudo please xD
Sldos.
Topic Starter
xD Gracias Astom :3Astom wrote:
Hubieras sido un poco mas especifica xD
En ese caso creo q deberias algregar algunos elementos faltantes al skin como.
-star2.png
-section-pass.png
-section-fail.png
Y eso... esto es complementario al mod de arriba asi q no kudo please xD
Sldos.
92 stars? What.
Doitsu
Increase approach rate by a notch or two. I'd suggest more normally but having a slower rate does indeed fit the song.
02:10:194 (1) - this spinner appears at about the same time as the notes after it with the current approach rate. If you don't change the AR, probably best to remove this spinner.
HERO!
00:15:936 (9) - align with 8 unless the misalignment is intentional. this just stood out a lot.
That's all. Good maps you have here. Hopefully they get some BAT attention soon with all these stars you've got...
Doitsu
Increase approach rate by a notch or two. I'd suggest more normally but having a slower rate does indeed fit the song.
02:10:194 (1) - this spinner appears at about the same time as the notes after it with the current approach rate. If you don't change the AR, probably best to remove this spinner.
HERO!
00:15:936 (9) - align with 8 unless the misalignment is intentional. this just stood out a lot.
That's all. Good maps you have here. Hopefully they get some BAT attention soon with all these stars you've got...
Topic Starter
Yeah about that...I got a problem with my map it was originally a 28 seconds song, considered not rankable that's why I mapped the rest by changing the mp3 to its full ver. Thanks for the mod :'3Soaprman wrote:
92 stars? What.
Doitsu
Increase approach rate by a notch or two. I'd suggest more normally but having a slower rate does indeed fit the song.
02:10:194 (1) - this spinner appears at about the same time as the notes after it with the current approach rate. If you don't change the AR, probably best to remove this spinner.
HERO!
00:15:936 (9) - align with 8 unless the misalignment is intentional. this just stood out a lot.
That's all. Good maps you have here. Hopefully they get some BAT attention soon with all these stars you've got...
[Nihon]
- 01:53:905 (1) - Suggestion: Silence the end of this spinner or even the whole spinner?
- 00:55:780 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning?
- 01:12:655 (1) - Maybe add claps to the other end of the slider?
- 01:53:905 (1) - Same suggestion as Nihon.
- 02:04:217 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner?
- 00:11:951 (x) - Add a note here?
- 00:51:795 (8) - New combo.
- 00:55:780 (6) - ^
- 01:01:405 (1) - Add a finish
- 02:13:826 (x) - Imo, it would sound and look better if there was a note here.
- 02:14:530 (10) - Add a clap only to the beginning of this slider.
- 02:28:123 (x) - Maybe another note here as well?
- comboburst-0: The width is 650px. The max is 500. Resize!
- star: Rename "star" to "star2". "star" is only for the difficulty stars on the song select screen.
Topic Starter
orz Done ~Mafiamaster wrote:
[Nihon]All done :3
- 01:53:905 (1) - Suggestion: Silence the end of this spinner or even the whole spinner?
[Doitsu]All done (:
- 00:55:780 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning?
- 01:12:655 (1) - Maybe add claps to the other end of the slider?
- 01:53:905 (1) - Same suggestion as Nihon.
- 02:04:217 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner?
[HERO!]Done ~
- 00:11:951 (x) - Add a note here?
- 00:51:795 (8) - New combo.
- 00:55:780 (6) - ^
- 01:01:405 (1) - Add a finish
- 02:13:826 (x) - Imo, it would sound and look better if there was a note here.
- 02:14:530 (10) - Add a clap only to the beginning of this slider.
- 02:28:123 (x) - Maybe another note here as well?
[Other things to point out]
- comboburst-0: The width is 650px. The max is 500. Resize!
- star: Rename "star" to "star2". "star" is only for the difficulty stars on the song select screen.
Thanks for the mod again :'D
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Thanks Mafia ~ <3Mafiamaster wrote:
Bubbled!
Excuse me, but your combobursts are all the wrong size and a few of them are just simply bad quality. Preview point should be at 00:23:905 (?). Around +10ms on the offset also, I believe. 01:56:717 - Kiai placement here is inconsistent with the rest of the song. It should start at 02:04:217.
Topic Starter
OH Sh- Jarby you're right about everything, thanks :3Jarby wrote:
Excuse me, but your combobursts are all the wrong size and a few of them are just simply bad quality. Preview point should be at 00:23:905 (?). Around +10ms on the offset also, I believe. 01:56:717 - Kiai placement here is inconsistent with the rest of the song. It should start at 02:04:217.
By the way I resized the combobursts, they probably looked bad because they were too big.
Awww, bubble ~
Oh, I just noticed this. Add a new offset at 116,727 to fix the metronome. Don't kudosu this post, by the way.
Topic Starter
I <3 you Jarby, thanks again :3Jarby wrote:
Oh, I just noticed this. Add a new offset at 116,727 to fix the metronome. Don't kudosu this post, by the way.
Italia's notes aren't snapped. Guess you owe me kudosu
Topic Starter
>.> OH ~ Fixed, I do owe you kudosu xDMafiamaster wrote:
Italia's notes aren't snapped.Guess you owe me kudosu
Rebubbled