tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Pastah! <333
Good grief, Kiai time is a whole mistake >.< There's some tips.
00:08:306 - Remove Kiai Time.
00:15:688 - Let Kiai Time starts here.
00:26:235 - Let it finish here.
00:26:587 - Remove Kiai Time.
Done ~

[Italy]
Rename this difficulty as "Italia", like the character as been called in the anime. Done~
Up the Distance spacing to 1,1x. Done~
00:00:806 (1) - Remove the repeat, reduce the slider by 2/4. Done~
00:01:743 - Add a slider which ends at 00:02:212. Done~
00:29:868 - Silence this spinner ends. Done~

[Japan]
Rename this difficulty as "Nihon", like the character as been called in the anime. Done~
Up the Distance spacing to 1,0x. Done~

[England]
Why England? Isn't better to use Doitsu, who is in the Eaxis force with Japan and Italy? XD xD I don't know I like England I suppose but done ~
Up the Distance spacing to 1,3x. Done~

[Hero]
Reduce Distance Spacing to 0,6x. Done~

sexy-commando wrote:

Staaaaar :3

Thanks ~~

Sakura301 wrote:

Sorry but maps below 1 minute cannot be ranked nor approved

Blazevoir wrote:

Sakura301 wrote:

Sorry but maps below 1 minute cannot be ranked nor approved

What is that, a new rule or something? I've seen less than one minute maps get ranked before.

Sakura301 wrote:

Sorry but maps below 1 minute cannot be ranked nor approved

lovhin456 wrote:

Sakura301 wrote:

Sorry but maps below 1 minute cannot be ranked nor approved

Are you sure ?? So...that means I have been working for nothing ?? I really wanted this map to be ranked... Damn...this svcks

Blazevoir wrote:

Ignore what Sakura said.

lovhin456 wrote:

Blazevoir wrote:

Ignore what Sakura said.

Okk...I guess...thanks (:

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Italia:
Nothing wrong that I saw. Yayy ~

Nihon:
00:04:321 (4,1) - Stack those. Done ~

Doitsu:
Feels like a Normal for me. I changed it a little so is more hard

HERO:
Too easy, I SS'd it first try o_o Same as doitsu and added a little jump I think ~

Well, the map is technically fine. You got a star :p Yayy ~ Thanks !!

Blazevoir wrote:

No problem (Hopefully this won't cause further confusion/a future argument...)

Yeah, thanks again

DiamondCrash wrote:

This is too short to be rankable, sorry.

DiamondCrash wrote:

This is too short to be rankable, sorry.

DiamondCrash wrote:

This is too short to be rankable, sorry.

Gens wrote:

Regarding short maps, it's all on a per-case basis. If it's considered good and fun enough to be enjoyed, then why not? If the map is plain though, it has less chances of becoming ranked. I don't have problems with short maps.

If you'd like a solid value, let's say don't go below 20 seconds and it should be fine. It's always preferred to have something longer though.

Thanks for making this clear, I was about to give up on these map, I'll try my best to get it ranked now by making it more fun to play.

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) the map fades out too fast at the end ? Ummm...I think is okk
2) Kiai time should start and end with a hitobject, so please move the timing sectino at 00:15:688 to 00:15:806 and move 00:26:235 to 00:26:118 . Done~
3) there is a "scorebar-ki" pic, so you also need a "scorebar-kidanger" and "scorebar-kidanger2" pic. Done~
4) instead of silence the spinner at 00:26:587 suddenly, make it fade out slowly is better? I think is okk like how it is now~

[Italia]
This is [Easy] ?
00:06:431 (1) - this spinner is a bit short for [Easy], use a slider instead? Done~
00:06:431 (1,1) the slider is too near the spinner for [Easy] Done~

[Nihon]
fine

[Doitsu]
00:19:556 (3,4) - the end of these slider is not snapped. Done~
00:21:431 (4) end this slider at 00:22:368 ? Done~

[Hero!]
00:00:806 (1) - the end of this slider is unsnapped, and end this at 00:01:274 ? Done~
00:15:806 (2) - the end of this slider is unsnapped Done~

Thanks for the advice~

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Wow, 10 megabytes for 30 seconds?
Remove the sound from the video, please~ I'm-I'm pretty sure I did, but is still 10 megabytes do you know any method to make it less ??

[Italia]
Heh Italia slider velocity is okk I guess~

[Nihon]
Feels really samey to Italia since it's a really low slider velocity... it's actually ..slower than Italia.. I'd like it to at least have a more distinctive feel compared to the previous diff, though. Done~

[Doitsu]
Agh, still feels really slow. Done~

[HERO!]
Ah, finally, a decent slider velocity.
00:12:056 (1) - This is kind of short for a spinner. I'd map through it. Done~

Nice maps, though I really think you should up the velocity at larger interver als than what you've done already. The maps aren't that long, so redoing the sliders won't be too tedious. Hehehe, thanks ~

Garven wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/?2pkftzvb14bg6nh

I got it to about half the size, got the aspect ratio to 4:3 and removed audio for ya and kept pretty much the same quality.

ignorethis wrote:

Length may be shorter than ranking criteria About that, yes people told me that it was too short but in page 6 Gens cleared things up.

<Nihon>
00:15:806 (1,2,3) - move left a bit to align with other objects Done~ though I don't really understand so I don't know if I did it okk.

Thanks for the advice ~

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*You have scorebar-ki images for this map, but no scorebar. (At least include the default scorebar background/color files if you want to do this) Done~
*I really suggest trying to find a longer version of this song (or attempting to make it longer yourself with some magic :v). 25-30 seconds for a beatmap is a bit pitiful... I would personally aim for nothing shorter than ~45 seconds, but you might get lucky and find some BATs that think this is fine (like Gens). I know...but, I guess I'll try my luck

[Italia]
00:23:306 (2) - Expected this to be a slider :c Done~
00:26:587 (1) - Expected another note here, with the spinner starting on the next white tick Done~

[Nihon]
00:14:868 (3) - expected a finish here Done~
00:26:587 (1) - same suggestion as last diff Done~

[Doitsu]
00:15:337 - perhaps add a note here?
00:22:837 (1) - repeat is hidden by the last slider's hitburst (100/300/etc), which is unrankable.
00:28:462 - same suggestion as the other diffs (even though this is a few beats later)
Done~
[HERO!]
00:13:227 (2) - make this a slider and extend to the white tick? =x
00:15:806 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:16:977 - add a note here?
00:17:681 (4) - repeat is partially hidden
00:17:446 - add a note here?
00:27:758 (6,7) - this is the only jump in the map, which is inconsistent/unexpected.
00:28:462 - same as last diff
Done~
EDIT: Doitsu: 00:17:446 (3) - repeats are a bit hidden from spinner/kiai as well when testing Done~

Thanks for the advice !!

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey!

[Nihon]
00:21:899 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid left, just for allignment


...Thats all I gotz XD

I like this map Its short and funny!

~STAR + Kudosu STAR!!

Done~ and thanks ~ !!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Nothing technically wrong with the map that will prevent this map from being ranked, but the linear mapping style of the map is not very entertaining. I mostly pointed out a few minor nitpicks that can be used to improve your map, but if you really want to improve it, you will probably have to remap a lot of the maps. Star.

All done and yes I know I almost only used linear sliders I guess because I don't know how to make good slider with bezier, I'll work on making this more entertaining, anyways thanks for the advice ~

bmin11 wrote:

Wut, this is really short and it sounds like you cutted the mp3 file

[Hero]
00:03:149 (1) - remove new combo. The more new combo you have, the faster the life-gage drains
00:17:446 (5) - Meh, give it a new combo or somehow try to identify it is's a jump ir something

One tip for you. Hitsounds doesn't sound great if they are placed white to red tick most of the time. You should give some space between hitsounds ._.;;

Done, no I didn't cut the mp3 and er...okk, thanks for the advice.

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi lovhin456
This is one of my next to watch anime, looks good Hahaha, yeah it's great ~

I've seen a very short map that recently got bubble you might want to check it out
It's too bad that you map the short ver instead of the full ver >.< Yay~ There's hope for my map, yeah...I was thinking about making the full ver, maybe I will, someday ~

[General]
- Just like Derekku said you should include a scorebar-bg and a scorebar-color, if you can't come up with one, take the one from default skin instead I'm pretty sure I did
- There are no different between scorbar-ki, kidanger, and kidanger2. Try making the ki become little or darker for kidanger and kidanger2 Changed that ~
- You don't need ending in the tag, maybe put the character or the studio that produce this anime Changed that ~

[Italia]
00:29:751 - put this timing section exactly on the spinner's end Done ~

[Nihon]
00:29:751 - same issue as above Done ~

[Doitsu]
00:17:446 (3) - instead of slider with so many repeat like this, try breaking it, here's my suggestion

SPOILER

[attachment=0:28104]screenshot199.png[/attachment:28104]

Done ~
00:20:962 (5,6) - make these circles into slider, flow much better that way imo Done ~
00:25:181 (5,6) - ^ Done ~
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above Done ~

[HERO]
00:12:524 (3,4) - make this into slider instead Done ~
00:17:212 (4,1) - the only jump on the diff (or the map) maybe add some more? I don't know...I'm not very good at placing jumps but I'll try
00:17:681 (2) - to many repeats could be very monotone especially for the hardest diff Done ~
00:17:681 (2) - finish at the end sounds good imo Done ~
00:19:790 (4,5) - change into slider Done ~
00:20:259 (6,7) - ^ Done ~
00:27:055 (3,4) - ^ Done ~
00:27:758 (6,7) - ^ Done ~
00:29:751 - same timing section issue as above Done ~

All of the above (except for the timing section) are a suggestion, if you don't like it feel free to ignore it
If you need more help catch me in-game and I'll gladly help you
~star

Thanks for the support and well, everything ~

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Italia]
Isn't the OD a bit high for easy?
Reduce by one tick?

[Doitsu]
00:15:806 (1) - I'd like you to remove this spinner.
00:21:431 (6) - Allign better.
00:28:462 (3) - Remove this circle and start spinner from here? Such a short spinners are way too annoying.

Others seems fine.

Well,nice short map,star~

All done ~ Thanks ~ !!

Mashley wrote:

Blimey, this is pretty short... oh well! I haven't seen the anime but these difficulty names are kinda weird, what's wrong with the default ones? Yeah about that, it has to do with the anime...characters...so yeah ~

Italia
Fine yayy ~

Nihon
Fine yayy ~

Doitsu
00:19:321 (2) - It's really ugly how this overlaps the slider Fixed ~

HERO!
This difficulty feels lackluster to me. I just think you should map more to the flow of the song and the vocals than just the lame 1/2 streams you have here at the moment. To be honest, I don't think I'm good at doing insane but I'll probably change some things there and here and stuff ~

backstep wrote:

Starred ~

Omegavoids wrote:

Your map isjust too tough for me to FC it double time. That's too easyXD
The maps are all fine, though. Take a star.

Darcsol wrote:

[General]
Should the Source be Hetalia: Axis Powers?
Add (TV Size) in Title?

[Italia]
Looks fine, but the Hitsounds sound random.

[Nihon]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.

[Doitsu]
Looks fine. Again, Hitsounds sound random.

[HERO!]
Looks fine, but has an overkill of Clapping Hitsounds. The map is not much challenging either.


Try to be creative and create patterns with the Hitsounds. The best way is just go with the song and add Hitsounds where appropriate.
The maps seems straightforward; it's nice and short, nothing special or anything.
Other than that, Star~

Thanks for the star and everything...but I can't upload the map after I change the title and the source it says I'm uploading a new beatmap and I can't because I already have 2 // I will try to work on the hitsounds

Blazevoir wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 - Follow this

Yay ~ Thanks for the help

Blazevoir wrote:

No problem By the way, you might wanna change this thread's title while you're at it.

1. For timing, I got offset: 796. the BPM is fine though
2. Your combobursts are too wide. the max size for combobursts are the size of the default one, which is 388x787, which yours are 500x500. Perhaps shrink them down so it fits right?
3. I see what you were trying to do with the difficulty names, but for most people, especially those who don't get the reference, like me, they don't work well as diff names. Maybe you could put an Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane next to each name? (e.g. "Italia (Easy)", or "Nihon (Normal)"?

Doomsday93 wrote:

Such a short map

1. For timing, I got offset: 796. the BPM is fine though Thanks for the offset, fixed ~
2. Your combobursts are too wide. the max size for combobursts are the size of the default one, which is 388x787, which yours are 500x500. Perhaps shrink them down so it fits right? I'm very confused now, I thought the allowed size was 500x500, then someone told me it was 400x400... Anyways fixed ~
3. I see what you were trying to do with the difficulty names, but for most people, especially those who don't get the reference, like me, they don't work well as diff names. Maybe you could put an Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane next to each name? (e.g. "Italia (Easy)", or "Nihon (Normal)"?

Fixed ~

[ITALIA]

Layout is rather bland, lots of straight lines, but I couldn't see anything technically wrong. I know...I'm just too lazy to ehh...remap ?? But anyways I finally did it ~

[NIHON]

Same as Italia, nothing technically wrong, but it laid out in a boring way. too many straight lines and right angles. ^

[DOITSU]

More interesting than Italia/Nihon, but could've use a bit more spice and interesting patterns to liven it up ^ (:

[HERO!]

00:24:477 (1,2) - It's a tiny gripe, but it looks ugly compared to the rest of the map here. Mind closing this gap? Fixed + ^

Overall, There isn't much wrong. Everything is solid and works fine, but it's kinda bland. It is your first map, so I won't bother you about it, but maybe in your next map, you could experiment more with slider shapes and patterns you could put your beats in. An interesting layour can make a map so much more fun without adding any extra beats. It helps making mapping more fun too That said, for your first map, it's nice, so good job Thanks for the advice and everything ~ I'll try to improve my map but not just with the layout but with other stuff ~

Starred

Lesjuh wrote:

I think you overused the soft claps on Hard and Insane. Consider using less of them. Haha, I will check it out xD

[Insane]
00:24:467 (1) - Snap the ending of this slider to the next white tick Done ~

That's all! Thanks !!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

wow, so much starrers

General
remove some hitsounds on all of the diffs (PLEASE!!)

Italia
00:06:421 (1,2) remove combo, new combo after that
00:22:827 (1,2) ^

Nihon
00:13:452 (1) remove combo

Doitsu
00:28:921 start spinner here

kudosu star!!

lovhin456 wrote:

vivere wrote:

Starr~ ^^

Gracias ~ :3

Dusty wrote:

This is hilarious I know :3 ~

[Nihon]
00:22:827 (1,2,3) - (3) needs to go left 1 grid

[Doitsu]
too much clap

[HERO!]
too much clap, usually if there are 5 or more claps in a row, that's bad

TheVileOne wrote:

First queue attempt FTW!!

Italia(Easy)

00:06:421 (2) - Off placed very slightly. Move it down 1 unit (aligns it with the previous slider) and then turn both grid and distance snap off for the next change and move it slightly closer to the previous note so that it is roughly 1 and 2/3rds unit from the previous note. That may be hard to visualize. Another method is to use the vertical axis as a guide. In my alteration the start of this note has 4 and 2/3rds units on the left side and 3 and 1/3rd units on the right side.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21729

Lot of effort put into something you most likely wont even change, but I don't care. I couldn't clarify myself in an easily interpreted way.

I actually did it, looks better, but I will like you to check if I did it okk :3

Nihon(Normal)

Eh it's fine as far as I see.

I have a couple mini suggestions that you may want to look into.

00:14:858 (4,1) - Did you not align these on purpose? If you did, it is perfectly okay. I can't make a determination whether aligning these notes and the notes included in the shift looks better than the altered version or if it makes a difference. I'll just include a fix to realign these notes.

00:15:796 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these left 1 unit to fix the alignment. This wont fix it entirely. My next suggestion rquires a deviation of your patterns a tad that might spice up your patterns better regardless if you chose to shift the notes to realign or keep the misalignment. So consider this next suggestion separate but related to the above one.

00:20:014 (5,1,2,1) - I think that the straight implementation of 1,2 is a little bland. I think it would play and look better if this notes were placed in a fancy curving pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21731

I did this by moving 00:21:889 (1) - 2 units to the right of 5 with distance snap on. 00:22:358 (2) - was placed diagonally from it. Exact specs is hard to explain. There is probably multiple positions that would work for note 2. The center right edge of note 2 in the screenshot is 3 units up and 5 units left from the top center edge of note 1. 00:22:827 (1) - in the screenshot is positioned roughly 2 units higher than 00:21:889 (1) - or 5 units lower and 2 units to the left of note 2. After you have those positioned in the pattern, realign 00:23:061 (2,3) - these back with 00:22:827 (1) - .

To complete the look, I suggest that you make 00:23:296 (3,4,1) - more curved to look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21736
See how note 1 is placed in an adjacent position to note 3 and 4 is right in the middle? Design it to look something like that.

Tell me if your interested in this change and if my instructions have confused you in any way. I'll gladly help you out.

Everything done ~ Check it, so I know if I did it right please ??

Doitsu(Hard)

00:02:436 (4) - I really think this belongs on a 1/8th tick. Try placing it on 00:02:378 -.

00:10:171 (1) - Move down 1 unit

00:28:452 - Add a note here? It doesn't have to be a slider. Just a regular note. I just feel that there is an awkward gap here and it throws off the pace when I go into the spinner.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21738
All done ~

HERO! (Insane)

00:01:733 (3,1) - Stack this better? It's stacking weird.

00:07:358 (1) - Move this back to 00:07:124 -
All done~

Very fun beatmaps. Short but fun to play. Only gets better the harder the difficulty due to the relaxing nature of the maps. I'm looking forward to this getting ranked. Stared.

Krisom wrote:

-General
Si vas a poner los diff names como Italia, Nihon, Dohitsu y HERO!, remueve los (Easy), (Normal), (Hard), (Insane). Se ven raros. Además, Italia en inglés = Italy. Tal vez lo quieras arreglar.
Removi (Easy), etc pero el nombre de las diff tiene que ver con el anime, no es que lo haya escrito mal en ingles :3

-Easy
00:06:421 (2) - Agrega un finish al inicio. Hasta podrías agregar un finish normal.
00:10:171 (1) - ^
00:11:108 (2) - Estos finish están de más imo.
00:12:046 (1) - Agrega un finish al inicio.
00:23:296 (1) - ^
Todo hecho ~

-Normal
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:108 (2) - Remueve el finish del final
00:12:046 (1) - Finish al inicio
Todo hecho ~

-Hard
00:08:296 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:577 (4) - Remueve este finish
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:12:046 (1) - ^
00:19:546 (3) - ^
Todo hecho ~

-Insane
Esto, ehhh, no es para nada un insane, te aviso de inmediato, es bastante fácil. Para aumentar la dificultad, usa notas en 1/4 y agranda la distancia entre las notas en 1/2. Ehh...he pensado en re-mappear esta diff, porque dicen que es muy facil :/
Ah, lindos sliders~! Gracias :3
00:04:546 (1) - Para aumentar la dificultad, podrías agregar notas en 1/4 (lineas azules) en lugar de este slider. Podrían ser repeat sliders o una stream.
00:05:600 (x) - Agrega una nota
00:05:835 (x) - ^
00:07:124 (1) - Extiende esto hasta 00:08:296 -
00:10:171 (1) - finish
00:12:046 (1) - finish
No hice nada de lo que sugeriste, pero no fue porque no estuviera de acuerdo sino que como que quise re-mappear esta diff :3

Al poner los finish, ponle un poco más de atención a la música de fondo.
Suerte!

Star!

kuyukiP wrote:

I haven't starred this yet? Wtf?

TheVileOne wrote:

Might as well kudosu star this for your awesome hitsound mod.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Doitsu]
00:02:378 (4) - Snap to the red tick using the 1/4 divisor. (Or just snap to red tick) Done
00:05:952 (7) - Maybe add a finish at the end? Umm, why not :3

[HERO!]
00:07:124 (1) - Ending sounds pretty bad. How about extending it to the white tick? Done
00:15:796 (5) - Add a finish at the start? Done
00:28:452 (1) - Add finish here (like the others) instead of on 00:28:686 (3). Done

Also make the lead-in time 2 seconds on all difficulties. Done

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubbled

Sakura Hana wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=473436#p473436
*runs*

Blazevoir wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

Ignore what Sakura said.

Okk...I guess...thanks (:

whymeman wrote:

Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.

Extra Note: Also taking out the bubble.

NatsumeRin wrote:

map submitted: Jun 22.
Eph said: Jul 17.

maybe ask Ephemeral to solve this...?

Sakura Hana wrote:

I did tell you sooner

whymeman wrote:

Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.]

Blazevoir wrote:

Anyway, good luck trying to sort things out, lovhin456... I'd hate to see all of this go to complete waste.

Derekku wrote:

If you could somehow find or create a longer mp3, then that would probably be your best option. Some BATs seem to think that the current length is fine, but obviously that won't fare well since other BATs are popping any bubble that your map receives (and could always lead to an unranking even if it DID get ranked).

Please don't get discouraged or give up. ):

PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).

Derekku wrote:

PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).

Sallad4ever wrote:

Derekku wrote:

PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).

Let me re-mod this too, I've just finish watching Hetalia Axis Power and I starting to like this song (especially English version)

Jarby wrote:

SPOILER

Seriously, guys...

Blazevoir wrote:

Oh yay~ I'll definitely have a mod post ASAP (although I'm not exactly sure when that'll be )