h-hi, my quick m4m part o:
kanto's・00:11:339 (4) - um, the slider ends on a downbeat what is not really good for easy since it might .. like mess out players from the actual rhythm. so i'd really suggest you to replace this slider to 2 sliders, like you had rhythm before 00:05:590 (2,1,2) -
・00:13:315 (2,4) -
superextranazithingbutyoucanblanketit101%perfectly・also i do agree with mao that easy is pretty hard with its' rhythm cause lots of sliders starts from red ticks and then from white, white and and reds.. i understand that you tried to follow all the vocals and cymbals, drums, but if you ask me i'd suggest you to stick to something one: vocals or instruments. mixing 1st and 2nd in easiest diff usualy makes its' readability harder which is the case of this difficulty. well, ask more people, yeah
・00:41:519 (2,3) - 1/2 transitions are really not recommended in an easiest difficulty. if it was like 100 bpm, less or a bit more, i'd say okay but since its 167 would be nice to change these to 1 3/2 slider
・00:40:081 (4) - , 00:47:087 (1) - would be nicer to follow the vocals there imo, kick sliders, again, with such bpm is not a really good thing. i think extending these to 1/1 sliders would help players to get into next rhythm better
・01:14:213 (3,1) - make them spaced properly please. imo even marked with NC slider wont prevent any misunderstandings from the beginner players' side. also please consider my next suggestion:
・01:13:135 (1,2,3) - about the whole rhythm there and its readability. 01:12:417 (4,1) - you already started this part with 1/1 with mainly emphasized vocal, so why not to follow it till the end of this vocal part? it should be really easier to get and would be more comfortable to click:
・01:16:009 (1,2,1,2) - again about the rhythm thing. so as i got, you are following the vocals and i guess thats a pretty nice place to make repeat sliders. it will also be a good transition to 01:18:884 (1,2) - these sliders. so the part would be easier to get and more comfortable to click
normal・00:35:770 (2) - ,00:21:219 (2) - there is a complete silence in vocals and instruments, so why did you put a slider here? wouldnt it be more logical to start an object from the next white tick where an vocal and instrument are here? like simple 1/2 slider, technically the same musical part as this 00:30:022 (2) -
・00:33:075 (3) - not really a must but its really near the border of the gameplay screen, would be nice if you could move it a bit upper
・00:54:453 (1) - a really good place for spinner but it feel short and i am not sure if the recovery time after it is enough for incoming slider. you need to have at least 3 measures for ~160bpm and as yours is 167 it might be considered as not enough. i might be wrong anyway, maybe you could ask more people about it. anyway starting
gu's・00:09:004 (6,7,1) - after this 00:08:375 (3,4,5) - constant 1/4 rhythm it could be hard to transit to this triplet. i'd recommend to stick to the average spacing you had, 1.5x one
・00:55:171 (4,5) - same thing as mao mentioned about the 1/1 gap. i wouldnt really recommend to go with 1/4 though, since you have no triplets and stuff during the kiai but imo would be nice to go with 1/2 there. like, replacing (4) with a slider
insane・00:32:177 - are you sure you dont want to go with 1/4 like you did on parts without vocals here 00:23:555 (1) - and 00:29:303 (1) - ? would be a good place for stream like there 00:35:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - , m?
・00:37:117 (3,4) - could you make there guys be a bit closer to the previous slider? due to the quiet big spacing this (2,3,4) pattern doesnt like as a triplet but something with 1/2 gap
・00:52:477 (1,2) - 2.0x was a real sudden thing for me ;_; is it possible to make the sv a bit less fast? like 1.85 or so
and thats it, pretty good mapset though song is kind of hard to map, sigh. good luck! uwu