greenwood0301 wrote:

Hi M4M Hey!

EASY

SPOILER

00:15:660 to 00:17:601 Put Some Note In This Space If You Don't Want To You Must Bring Those Note Closer i don't know what i can put in this

NORMAL

SPOILER

Keep The Distance Between Your Note Constant For More Help Use Distance Snap i don't see any mistakes with distance spacing: %image%
00:15:660 to 00:17:601 You Must Do Something There same as in Easy

ADVANCED

SPOILER

AR8 Is Not Good For An Advanced Difficulty Use 5 Or 6 i think ar7 is good
00:02:940 to 00:03:675 Make The Distance Between Those Nots Constant Because They Have The Same Tempo it's jumps as in Hyper, because Advanced here is Hard (2.5* is hard too, yep)
00:05:880 to 00:06:983 Not A Good Jump For Advanced same

Gl Hf With Your Map Thanks!

Greenwood0301

6th wrote:

BPM: 122,75
offset: 11

Good luck

SherryCherry wrote:

Привет o/ о/

Second Chance
00:01:966 (1) - чет не в ритм переход инструментов на 00:02:271 и 00:02:393 - так что там слайдеру самое место
00:06:243 (2) - почему на синем тике там пианино-клавиши на 1/8 дальше, заремаплю под слайдеры или ещё как-нибудь
00:06:976 (4) - ^ я там ничего не слышу ^
00:21:029 (5) - а тут есть звук
00:21:273 (1) - и тут
00:23:473 (5) - к чему такое ускорение, да еще и такое быстрое ускорение нужно в связи со звуками (походит на электрогитару, хотя могу и ошибаться, музыкант из меня не очень), но пофиксил до 1.5x
00:20:173 (3) - убери или пределай 00:19:807 (2,3,4) - там звуки, так что эти слайдеры верно стоят
что-то с ритмом не то всё в порядке, вроде
киаи поставь куда-нибудь так имо, там ему самое место

normal
00:11:742 (1) - ну ты понял пофиксил на драмы
00:13:697 (1) - ^ пофиксил, но, боюсь, меня за это убьют мания-плееры

в изи такие проблемы чем изи не нравится?:D там всего ~50 объектов
+я бы округлил бпм это ж дикость, там всё в порядке

Hobbes2 wrote:

Mod from queue hey!

Easy - No comments. Looks great to me. thanks:D

[Normal]

00:13:697 (1,2) - Why don't these end on the white and red tick respectively? I feel like 1/8 note is wrong here i have piano sounds in 1/8, it's right

00:35:204 (4,1) - Try to shape so these don't overlap fixed

neat map, has some weird timing but I think it's all right other than the sliders I mentioned above.

[Second Chance]

00:03:676 (5,3) - move 5 so it stacks with the slider 3 nice idea

00:14:186 (2) - I'd nudge this circle up just a bit fix flow

00:19:196 (4) - Either move this circle to 00:19:318, or add another circle there because there's a distinct sound there i'll get overmapped if i add circle in 19:318

Otherwise looks good.

Sorry for the short mod, but its a short map and it's already pretty solid as it is.

Chalwa wrote:

Hello from M4M! Hey!

Easy

No comment. Very good map Thanks:D

Normal

00:13:697 (1,3) - Overlap ohlol, i forget, thanks, fixed
00:26:406 (3,1) - You can make here better blanket i have good flow here and don't want ruin this
00:39:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... in my opinion it's too hard :/. I think it's better if you will make two sliders 00:39:114 (1,2) and 00:39:603 (3,4) hm, maybe i remap this pattern

Second Chance

00:05:876 (1) - Stack too hard to read... fixed
00:12:719 (3,4,5,6) - It does not fit here :/. In my opinion two sliders looks better. i have same singletap-pattern in 00:02:943 (2,3,4,5)

Sorry for short mod, but it's short map and very good map.
GL in further mapping

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ Mod from my queue (M4M)

General

1. БГ мне не нравится, предлагаю такое
   I agree!
2. 00:00:011 (1) - К примеру на таких моментах (использую Изи для примера) можно ставить друм хитсаунды как семплсэт (т.е. каждый второй ударный тик)
3. Title: Main Theme метадата взята из Google Play Music и называется именно так, у Halfbrick много тем разных
4. В тэгах можешь указать Android и iPhone тоже вариант

Easy

1. 00:05:387 (2) - x:264 y:280 (ровный бланкет) фиксед
2. 00:13:208 (2) - x:116 y:172 ^ фиксед вместе с последующим
3. 00:40:581 (4) - x:336 y:220 ^ там не бланкет, там флоу, но фиксед
4. 00:11:742 (1) - повыше поставь, чтобы было красиво с 00:09:786 (3) импассибл, ибо 3 повторяется, а 1 нет, оставлю так
5. 00:21:518 (1,2,3) - бланкет кривой по отношению к 00:19:562 (3) и так все нормально, но немного поправил
6. 00:31:294 (2,3,4) - ^ по отношению к 00:29:338 (1) фиксед поворотом слайдера
7. 00:22:495 (3) - поверни на 65 градусов ни
8. 00:33:249 (1) - укороти до 00:35:204 оу, точно, спасибо
9. 00:37:159 (1) - уродливый слайдер самое то для изи, имхо

Normal

1. 00:05:387 (3,4) - не нравится стак и некрасиво, новички могут слиться тут не могу. ну никак.
2. 00:10:764 (2,3) - ^ без оверлапов имсассибл замапить, пусть таким остаётся
3. 00:39:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ этот паттерн обязательно будет пофикшен
4. 00:05:876 (1,2) - сложный паттерн, смести или поставь ноты (к тому же в нормале нельзя использовать голубые тики (неранкабельно)) там вообще-то звуки на 00:06:304 и 00:07:037 , они вообще находятся на 1/8, и куда сместить тут - я не знаю пока что
5. 00:18:829 (4,5) - ^ фиксед
6. 00:19:807 (2) - ^ там повтор идёт
7. 00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ звууки
8. 00:20:907 (3,1) - ^ переставил на драмы
9. 00:24:450 (2) - ^ повтор
10. 00:26:406 (3) - ^ сейм
11. 00:27:628 (1,2) - ^ и снова звуки
12. 00:08:564 (2) - x:208 y:260 это куда?
13. 00:33:249 (3,4) - уродливые слайдеры разнообразие

Second Chance

1. Может назовешь диффу по-другому? Ибо как-то не смотрится Second Chance из самой игры, может быть как-нибудь да поменяю, правда, пока не знаю, на что
2. Спейсинг разный, поставь для всех 1.2x выставил 1.3х и пофиксил, некоторые пофиксить невозможно
3. Там слишком много уродливых слайдеров да нормально там всё

Удачи!!~

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M from queue. Hey! Sorry, i didn't notice your mod xd

[Easy]
00:09:786 - i think this should be a whistle. nope, sorry
the clap hitsound is not suitable for this music imo. try to find one?
http://puu.sh/p1K3w/d7fb888e87.wav Accepted!

[Normal]
00:06:609 (2) - 1/8 should not appear in Normal diff. try this, map another drum.
http://puu.sh/p1KaT/4eca8d16f7.jpg
(the cursor is at - 00:06:609 - ) fixed!

00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ fixed!

00:20:907 (3) - a circle at 1/4 is not good in Normal diff. try this. already fixed
http://puu.sh/p1Kjr/6101d4146e.jpg
(the cursor is at - 00:20:540 -)

00:31:782 - here is a drum, so i suggest you map it. try to make - 00:31:538 (5) - into a 1/2 slider to map it. okay, fixed!

[Second Chance]
00:03:188 (3,5) - they touched. try to move them away a little. this is jump pattern

00:04:898 (3,1) - ^ hm, they don't make overlap

00:12:719 (3,4,5,6) - and they pattern too

they are all 1/2, you can avoid their thouch. i won't point out all of them.

00:39:114 (2,3,4) - 5 circles jump is better. you used 5 circles in Normal diff. already fixed

good luck on this!

Remilia_CO wrote:

Hard

1. 00:03:188 (3,4) - 23 and 45 is too close, seperate them away.
2. 00:05:876 (1) - overlapped with 00:04:898 (3) - seperate them away.
3. 00:09:786 (1,2) - blanket
4. 00:12:964 (4) - too close with 00:11:742 (1) -and 00:13:208 (5)
5. 00:12:475 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks not good, I would like to move the 5 and 6 farther
6. 00:22:495 (3,4) - 00:24:817 (3,4) - 00:25:917 (1,2) - If you wanna make a blanket, please make it good, or just make it not a blanket..or at least you need show some balance between objects.
7. 00:23:473 (5) - 00:31:538 (6) - NC for changing speed

Normal

1. 00:03:921 (1) - Blanket problem
2. 00:06:609 (2) - DS and Blanket problem
3. 00:05:876 (1,2,3) - Why is all other places has DS 1.3 while these has 1.4?
4. 00:37:159 (1) - 00:39:114 (1) - Clap to the head

EASY

1. 00:03:921 (1,2) - Blanket might like this:
2. 00:25:917 (1,2,3) - Add a red point can make it looking better:
3. 00:31:782 (3,4) - Blanket
4. 00:01:477 (2,3,4) - the overlap of 2 and 4 looks awkward
5. 00:26:406 (2) - The music is relatively fast but you just use an long smoothy slider?

Good luck XD

Remilia_CO wrote:

Remilia_CO wrote:

Hard

1. 00:03:188 (3,4) - 23 and 45 is too close, seperate them away. okaay, okaay, i'll remao this patterns
2. 00:05:876 (1) - overlapped with 00:04:898 (3) - seperate them away. 1 wasn't overlapped with 3 but fixed xd
3. 00:09:786 (1,2) - blanket k
4. 00:12:964 (4) - too close with 00:11:742 (1) -and 00:13:208 (5) i say
5. 00:12:475 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks not good, I would like to move the 5 and 6 farther same
6. 00:22:495 (3,4) - 00:24:817 (3,4) - 00:25:917 (1,2) - If you wanna make a blanket, please make it good, or just make it not a blanket..or at least you need show some balance between objects. 1st - flow, i can't change it, 2nd fixed, 3rd is good blanket, i think
7. 00:23:473 (5) - 00:31:538 (6) - NC for changing speed okay, i didn't know about it (because im bad mapper xd)

Normal

1. 00:03:921 (1) - Blanket problem fixed, i think
2. 00:06:609 (2) - DS and Blanket problem i don't see ds problem here, blanket fixed
3. 00:05:876 (1,2,3) - Why is all other places has DS 1.3 while these has 1.4? because i was remap this, thanks for noticing
4. 00:37:159 (1) - 00:39:114 (1) - Clap to the head added

EASY

1. 00:03:921 (1,2) - Blanket might like this: Fixed!
2. 00:25:917 (1,2,3) - Add a red point can make it looking better: i think it's good
3. 00:31:782 (3,4) - Blanket Fixed!
4. 00:01:477 (2,3,4) - the overlap of 2 and 4 looks awkward how did you find it?:D
5. 00:26:406 (2) - The music is relatively fast but you just use an long smoothy slider? because it's easy and my mapping style

Good luck XD

O-Moei wrote:

Hello !, from #modreqs. Wooo !, what is this song ???. I hope I can be helpful here ! XD

General :
Excellent !

Easy :
Excellent !

Normal :
00:19:807 (2) - Smoother this blanket

Second Chance :
00:26:894 (3) - Smoother this blanket

Nah, I guess just that X'D . I hope I'm correct and not changing the style. Good luck !

Tatsuyu wrote:

mod

Easy:

00:11:742 (1,2,3) - Could definitely blanket better: http://puu.sh/p4Kft/a6dce5fcad.jpg fixed
00:18:096 (2,3) - Same ^: http://puu.sh/p4Knz/3ea3a7ef2f.jpg i think i fix it xd
00:31:294 (2) - Same ^ Move to: x:136, y:220 fixed

Normal:

00:03:921 (1,2) - Blanket fixed
00:06:609 (2,3) - ^ can't fix it
00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ can't fix it because ds and flow
00:24:450 (2) - ^ it's hard to fix because ds

GL

-Bumblebee- wrote:

a quick IRC

2016-05-25 19:41 -Bumblebee-: hey dude :))
2016-05-25 19:42 100bit: Hey!
2016-05-25 19:42 -Bumblebee-: do u need a mod for your map, don't u?
2016-05-25 19:42 100bit: yep, i need some mods for my "Jetpack Joyride Main Theme" mapset xd
2016-05-25 19:42 -Bumblebee-: sure :))
2016-05-25 19:43 -Bumblebee-: do u prefere IRC or the tips on the thread? :)
2016-05-25 19:43 100bit: doesn't matter
2016-05-25 19:43 100bit: p.s. sorry for my bad english pls
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-:  nah don't worry ;)
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: so let's take a look on ur first diff
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972860 Halfbrick - Jetpack Joyride Main Theme [Easy]]
2016-05-25 19:45 -Bumblebee-: 00:09:786 (3) - fix this blanket
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: oh, and this one too 00:07:831 (1) - 
2016-05-25 19:46 100bit: i think 00:07:831 (1,2) - is goo
2016-05-25 19:46 100bit: good*
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: whatch out on the shape
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: that must be perfect lol
2016-05-25 19:47 -Bumblebee-: just a slighty change, nothing anymore
2016-05-25 19:47 -Bumblebee-: 00:11:742 (1) - for example, this one seems perfect
2016-05-25 19:48 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 19:48 100bit: i move 00:09:298 (2) for blanket with 00:07:831 (1,3)
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: mmm, nice :)
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: 00:24:450 (5) - 
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: here too
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: that's weird :/
2016-05-25 19:49 100bit: fixed
2016-05-25 19:50 -Bumblebee-: all right so :)
2016-05-25 19:50 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972862 Halfbrick - Jetpack Joyride Main Theme [Normal]]
2016-05-25 19:50 100bit: l
2016-05-25 19:50 100bit: k*
2016-05-25 19:51 -Bumblebee-: 00:19:807 (2) - 
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: look at this
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: not as shape
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: but as lenght
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: let me take a photo, wait a sec
2016-05-25 19:57 -Bumblebee-: here, look at this
2016-05-25 19:57 -Bumblebee-: http://puu.sh/p4QUM/f1aeff1524.jpg
2016-05-25 19:58 -Bumblebee-: this is from 00:19:562 - to 00:21:273 - 
2016-05-25 19:59 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 19:59 100bit: fixed
2016-05-25 19:59 -Bumblebee-: nice :))
2016-05-25 20:00 -Bumblebee-: 00:29:583 (1,2,5) - fix this overlap D:
2016-05-25 20:01 -Bumblebee-: and that is all for the 2nd one
2016-05-25 20:02 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 20:02 100bit: thanks for mod, i have to go
2016-05-25 20:03 -Bumblebee-: np man ;)
2016-05-25 20:03 -Bumblebee-: I'll post this on ur thread ;)
2016-05-25 20:03 100bit: okay

Good luck with that, man

Softy wrote:

00:06:120 (2) - should be on RED
those 3 long sliders, make them different in form, or at least the 3rd one, its not wrong, it just doesnt feel right

Prismetical wrote:

Heyo! c: ♥ M4M ♥

Easy

00:03:432 (4) - put the (4) there so you have a triangle formation, looks better
it's flow so i can't fix this, also i think its fine because i haven't overlap with 00:01:477 (2)
00:03:921 (1) - something missing there in terms of sound, shorten the slider one white tick and put a circle, sounds better sounds better, but looks weird imo
00:11:253 (4) - put the (4) at the same height as (2), take the y: 212 coordinate it's fine
00:11:742 (1) - same as earlier with the missing sound, try to do the same same, also i have blanket here and don't want to ruin it
00:17:607 (1,2,3) - put this part a liiiittle further down, DS allows that, it looks weird when it's that much pushed in the corner fixed
00:29:338 (1) - put this at the coordinate x: 12 so it is the same line with the end of the slider (4) fixed
00:31:294 (2) - if you do the earlier step don't forget to fix the blanket afterwards yep, i know xd

Normal

00:02:943 (2,1) - these two don't look good together, I think you should straighten slider (1) ohlol this overlap:D fixed
00:09:786 (1,2) - blanket doesn't look right it's right blanket because i have stack here
00:11:742 (1) - sounds weird and out of place because it's one blue tick longer than the other sliders it's good because drums
00:13:697 (1,2) - wrong distance snap i don't got any info from AIMod and can't fix it because have stack with 2
00:18:829 (4,4) - stack fixed
00:19:807 (2,3) - sounds not good to the music/isn't well synched, here my suggestion:
no
shorten both sliders one tick
00:27:628 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:22:251 (3) - shorten one blue tick i have saxophone sounds here
00:23:228 - if followed the last step, add circle
00:24:206 (1,2,3) - too cluttered, spread it fixed
00:39:603 (2,3) - bring them in one line it's flow

Second Chance

00:03:432 (4,5,3) - ugly overlap, you have a whole playfield, use it! 4 and 5 stacked, can't fix 3
00:04:898 (3,1) - ^ k
00:07:342 (5) - theres a point in that slider you dont need, delete that point forgot, thanks
00:11:742 (1,2) - remove the stack, just misleading in timing looks strange, but fixed
00:17:852 (1) - bad place to start that fast in a corner after a spinner, because most people spin in the middle of the screen i'll stacked 1 and 2 and move it closer to the middle
00:19:807 (2,3) - that can look better can't change
00:23:473 (1) - random part for SV change, remove the SV change i have... sounds here, i don't know what is it instrument, i think it's guitar or any wind instrument
00:31:538 (1) - ^ same
00:40:581 (7) - if you're funny you can put a new combo right here it's fine

Good job for your second mapset!
Waiting for you mod! ^.^
Good luck! ♥

Legacy47 wrote:

Nomral

"Nomral".

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

From the worst modding queue. Hey!

Bold is unrankable.
Red should really be fixed.
Orange should be changed.
Blue is just a suggestion.

Easy

00:19:562 (3,1) - Improve blanket. fixed
Yea, that's all I could find. ...it's good?

Normal

00:11:742 (1,2) - Improve blanket. it's hard to fix because i have really hard (for me) pattern after this blanket.
00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ same
00:18:829 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:21:518 (1,2,3) - Blanket spacing is odd. fixed
00:27:628 (1,2) - The sliders may look better with more of a curve. i think is good because flow

Second Chance

00:00:011 (1,2) - Improve blanket. fixed
00:01:966 (1,2) - ^ i think fixed xd
00:04:654 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:05:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is asymmetrical (because of the slider) and isn't very visually appealing. i fix this later
00:08:564 (2,3) - Improve blanket. fixed
00:12:475 (2,3,4,5,6) - Transition from curved a bit to perfectly straight seems strange here. Also, straight patterns don't look as good as other patterns. it's fixed by square-pattern
00:19:807 (2,3) - Overlap and strange flow. fixed
00:27:628 (4,5,6) - ^ looks strange, but fixed
00:33:249 (3) - The final curve on this slider should be improved. (and first curve at 00:35:204 (4) -) fixed

A lot of blanket errors.

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

Good luck getting this map ranked!

Legacy47 wrote:

ehh not very good at modding YET
don't judge ay
these are my mainly my opinion. Okaaay...

Easy

• 
  VERY VERY VERY GOOD Thanks!

Nomral

00:39:970 (3) - Move this down a bit. good for flow

VERY VERY GOOD

Second Chance

• 
  
  00:01:355 (3,4) - Blanket better fixed
  00:06:487 (1,2,3,4) - Very odd to me. I don't know if others have commented on this. But feels weird. i fix this later
  00:14:186 (2) - Move it a bit to the left and higher. ds
  00:14:948 (5) - Move it higher a bit so it's aligned with the 4. fixed
  00:37:496 (1) - I dislike the shape. think it's good
  
  VERY GOOD.

SORRY FOR THE LATE MOD!
I HAVE BEEN VERY BUSY LATELY!!

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

Legacy47 wrote:

Nomral

"Nomral".

Note the spelling of "Normal". Sorry, I'm an extreme grammar nazi. ;-;

DylanSan wrote:

Hello m4m,

Easy

00:31:782 (3,4) - imperfect blanket : http://puu.sh/p6Vm0.jpg fixed
00:37:159 (1) - How about giving this slider a slide curve after the corner to make it prettier and slightly more intresting to look at, like this maybe : http://puu.sh/p6VqR.jpg good idea

nice.

Normal

00:06:609 (2,3) - Fix blanket http://puu.sh/p6VDA.jpg i correct this blanket so many times... fixed again xd
00:09:786 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/p6VGq.jpg it's correct blanket and looks imperfect in editor because stack
00:11:742 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/p6VHa.jpg hard to fix
00:20:540 (3,4) - ^ You get the drill ds

Yeah, go through the blankets once more, alot of them seem off, you can use the approach circle as a guide. i try to fix all blankets

Second Chance

00:05:876 (1,2,3,4) - Why did you change it up here: 00:13:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - , consistency is key because i hate this pattern
00:15:285 - I'd start a 1/2th slider here bad hitsound
00:22:495 (3,4) - Fix blanket it's flow, not blanket
00:23:473 (1) - This is weird, it starts on piano end and ends at guitar thingy start... I'd move it over 1/2th a beat, you do that correctly over here 00:31:538 (1) - fixed
00:29:338 (1,2) - Fix blanket same

Good luck!