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Nothing changed (except AR). But thanks for mod.greenwood0301 wrote:
Hi M4M Hey!EASY SPOILER00:15:660 to 00:17:601 Put Some Note In This Space If You Don't Want To You Must Bring Those Note Closer i don't know what i can put in thisNORMAL SPOILERKeep The Distance Between Your Note Constant For More Help Use Distance Snap i don't see any mistakes with distance spacing: %image%
00:15:660 to 00:17:601 You Must Do Something There same as in EasyADVANCED SPOILERAR8 Is Not Good For An Advanced Difficulty Use 5 Or 6 i think ar7 is good
00:02:940 to 00:03:675 Make The Distance Between Those Nots Constant Because They Have The Same Tempo it's jumps as in Hyper, because Advanced here is Hard (2.5* is hard too, yep)
00:05:880 to 00:06:983 Not A Good Jump For Advanced same
Gl Hf With Your Map Thanks!
Greenwood0301
Спасибо за мод!SherryCherry wrote:
Привет o/ о/
Second Chance
00:01:966 (1) - чет не в ритм переход инструментов на 00:02:271 и 00:02:393 - так что там слайдеру самое место
00:06:243 (2) - почему на синем тике там пианино-клавиши на 1/8 дальше, заремаплю под слайдеры или ещё как-нибудь
00:06:976 (4) - ^ я там ничего не слышу ^
00:21:029 (5) - а тут есть звук
00:21:273 (1) - и тут
00:23:473 (5) - к чему такое ускорение, да еще и такое быстрое ускорение нужно в связи со звуками (походит на электрогитару, хотя могу и ошибаться, музыкант из меня не очень), но пофиксил до 1.5x
00:20:173 (3) - убери или пределай 00:19:807 (2,3,4) - там звуки, так что эти слайдеры верно стоят
что-то с ритмом не то всё в порядке, вроде
киаи поставь куда-нибудь так имо, там ему самое место
normal
00:11:742 (1) - ну ты понял пофиксил на драмы
00:13:697 (1) - ^ пофиксил, но, боюсь, меня за это убьют мания-плееры
в изи такие проблемы чем изи не нравится?:D там всего ~50 объектов
+я бы округлил бпм это ж дикость, там всё в порядке
Thanks for mod!Hobbes2 wrote:
Mod from queue hey!
Easy - No comments. Looks great to me. thanks:D
[Normal]
00:13:697 (1,2) - Why don't these end on the white and red tick respectively? I feel like 1/8 note is wrong here i have piano sounds in 1/8, it's right
00:35:204 (4,1) - Try to shape so these don't overlap fixed
neat map, has some weird timing but I think it's all right other than the sliders I mentioned above.
[Second Chance]
00:03:676 (5,3) - move 5 so it stacks with the slider 3 nice idea
00:14:186 (2) - I'd nudge this circle up just a bit fix flow
00:19:196 (4) - Either move this circle to 00:19:318, or add another circle there because there's a distinct sound there i'll get overmapped if i add circle in 19:318
Otherwise looks good.
Sorry for the short mod, but its a short map and it's already pretty solid as it is.
Thanks for mod and kudosustar!Chalwa wrote:
Hello from M4M! Hey!EasyNo comment. Very good map Thanks:DNormal00:13:697 (1,3) - Overlap ohlol, i forget, thanks, fixed
00:26:406 (3,1) - You can make here better blanket i have good flow here and don't want ruin this
00:39:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... in my opinion it's too hard :/. I think it's better if you will make two sliders 00:39:114 (1,2) and 00:39:603 (3,4) hm, maybe i remap this patternSecond Chance00:05:876 (1) - Stack too hard to read... fixed
00:12:719 (3,4,5,6) - It does not fit here :/. In my opinion two sliders looks better. i have same singletap-pattern in 00:02:943 (2,3,4,5)
Sorry for short mod, but it's short map and very good map.
GL in further mapping
Спасибо за мод!Revialink wrote:
Hi!~ Mod from my queue (M4M)General
- БГ мне не нравится, предлагаю такое
I agree!- 00:00:011 (1) - К примеру на таких моментах (использую Изи для примера) можно ставить друм хитсаунды как семплсэт (т.е. каждый второй ударный тик)
- Title: Main Theme метадата взята из Google Play Music и называется именно так, у Halfbrick много тем разных
- В тэгах можешь указать Android и iPhone тоже вариант
Easy
- 00:05:387 (2) - x:264 y:280 (ровный бланкет) фиксед
- 00:13:208 (2) - x:116 y:172 ^ фиксед вместе с последующим
- 00:40:581 (4) - x:336 y:220 ^ там не бланкет, там флоу, но фиксед
- 00:11:742 (1) - повыше поставь, чтобы было красиво с 00:09:786 (3) импассибл, ибо 3 повторяется, а 1 нет, оставлю так
- 00:21:518 (1,2,3) - бланкет кривой по отношению к 00:19:562 (3) и так все нормально, но немного поправил
- 00:31:294 (2,3,4) - ^ по отношению к 00:29:338 (1) фиксед поворотом слайдера
- 00:22:495 (3) - поверни на 65 градусов ни
- 00:33:249 (1) - укороти до 00:35:204 оу, точно, спасибо
- 00:37:159 (1) - уродливый слайдер самое то для изи, имхо
Normal
- 00:05:387 (3,4) - не нравится стак и некрасиво, новички могут слиться тут не могу. ну никак.
- 00:10:764 (2,3) - ^ без оверлапов имсассибл замапить, пусть таким остаётся
- 00:39:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ этот паттерн обязательно будет пофикшен
- 00:05:876 (1,2) - сложный паттерн, смести или поставь ноты (к тому же в нормале нельзя использовать голубые тики (неранкабельно)) там вообще-то звуки на 00:06:304 и 00:07:037 , они вообще находятся на 1/8, и куда сместить тут - я не знаю пока что
- 00:18:829 (4,5) - ^ фиксед
- 00:19:807 (2) - ^ там повтор идёт
- 00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ звууки
- 00:20:907 (3,1) - ^ переставил на драмы
- 00:24:450 (2) - ^ повтор
- 00:26:406 (3) - ^ сейм
- 00:27:628 (1,2) - ^ и снова звуки
- 00:08:564 (2) - x:208 y:260 это куда?
- 00:33:249 (3,4) - уродливые слайдеры разнообразие
Second Chance
- Может назовешь диффу по-другому? Ибо как-то не смотрится Second Chance из самой игры, может быть как-нибудь да поменяю, правда, пока не знаю, на что
- Спейсинг разный, поставь для всех 1.2x выставил 1.3х и пофиксил, некоторые пофиксить невозможно
- Там слишком много уродливых слайдеров да нормально там всё
Удачи!!~
Thanks for mod too!Lily Bread wrote:
M4M from queue. Hey! Sorry, i didn't notice your mod xd
[Easy]
00:09:786 - i think this should be a whistle. nope, sorry
the clap hitsound is not suitable for this music imo. try to find one?
http://puu.sh/p1K3w/d7fb888e87.wav Accepted!
[Normal]
00:06:609 (2) - 1/8 should not appear in Normal diff. try this, map another drum.
http://puu.sh/p1KaT/4eca8d16f7.jpg
(the cursor is at - 00:06:609 - ) fixed!
00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ fixed!
00:20:907 (3) - a circle at 1/4 is not good in Normal diff. try this. already fixed
http://puu.sh/p1Kjr/6101d4146e.jpg
(the cursor is at - 00:20:540 -)
00:31:782 - here is a drum, so i suggest you map it. try to make - 00:31:538 (5) - into a 1/2 slider to map it. okay, fixed!
[Second Chance]
00:03:188 (3,5) - they touched. try to move them away a little. this is jump pattern
00:04:898 (3,1) - ^ hm, they don't make overlap
00:12:719 (3,4,5,6) - and they pattern too
they are all 1/2, you can avoid their thouch. i won't point out all of them.
00:39:114 (2,3,4) - 5 circles jump is better. you used 5 circles in Normal diff. already fixed
good luck on this!
Remilia_CO wrote:
Hard
- 00:03:188 (3,4) - 23 and 45 is too close, seperate them away.
- 00:05:876 (1) - overlapped with 00:04:898 (3) - seperate them away.
- 00:09:786 (1,2) - blanket
- 00:12:964 (4) - too close with 00:11:742 (1) -and 00:13:208 (5)
- 00:12:475 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks not good, I would like to move the 5 and 6 farther
- 00:22:495 (3,4) - 00:24:817 (3,4) - 00:25:917 (1,2) - If you wanna make a blanket, please make it good, or just make it not a blanket..or at least you need show some balance between objects.
- 00:23:473 (5) - 00:31:538 (6) - NC for changing speed
Normal
- 00:03:921 (1) - Blanket problem
- 00:06:609 (2) - DS and Blanket problem
- 00:05:876 (1,2,3) - Why is all other places has DS 1.3 while these has 1.4?
- 00:37:159 (1) - 00:39:114 (1) - Clap to the head
EASY
- 00:03:921 (1,2) - Blanket might like this:
- 00:25:917 (1,2,3) - Add a red point can make it looking better:
- 00:31:782 (3,4) - Blanket
- 00:01:477 (2,3,4) - the overlap of 2 and 4 looks awkward
- 00:26:406 (2) - The music is relatively fast but you just use an long smoothy slider?
Good luck XD
Thanks for mod! It's very helpfully!Remilia_CO wrote:
Remilia_CO wrote:
Hard
- 00:03:188 (3,4) - 23 and 45 is too close, seperate them away. okaay, okaay, i'll remao this patterns
- 00:05:876 (1) - overlapped with 00:04:898 (3) - seperate them away. 1 wasn't overlapped with 3 but fixed xd
- 00:09:786 (1,2) - blanket k
- 00:12:964 (4) - too close with 00:11:742 (1) -and 00:13:208 (5) i say
- 00:12:475 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern looks not good, I would like to move the 5 and 6 farther same
- 00:22:495 (3,4) - 00:24:817 (3,4) - 00:25:917 (1,2) - If you wanna make a blanket, please make it good, or just make it not a blanket..or at least you need show some balance between objects. 1st - flow, i can't change it, 2nd fixed, 3rd is good blanket, i think
- 00:23:473 (5) - 00:31:538 (6) - NC for changing speed okay, i didn't know about it (because im bad mapper xd)
Normal
- 00:03:921 (1) - Blanket problem fixed, i think
- 00:06:609 (2) - DS and Blanket problem i don't see ds problem here, blanket fixed
- 00:05:876 (1,2,3) - Why is all other places has DS 1.3 while these has 1.4? because i was remap this, thanks for noticing
- 00:37:159 (1) - 00:39:114 (1) - Clap to the head added
EASY
- 00:03:921 (1,2) - Blanket might like this: Fixed!
- 00:25:917 (1,2,3) - Add a red point can make it looking better: i think it's good
- 00:31:782 (3,4) - Blanket Fixed!
- 00:01:477 (2,3,4) - the overlap of 2 and 4 looks awkward how did you find it?:D
- 00:26:406 (2) - The music is relatively fast but you just use an long smoothy slider? because it's easy and
my mapping style
Good luck XD
Thanks for mod, all fixed! It's helpfully too!O-Moei wrote:
Hello !, from #modreqs. Wooo !, what is this song ???. I hope I can be helpful here ! XD
General :
Excellent !
Easy :
Excellent !
Normal :
00:19:807 (2) - Smoother this blanket
Second Chance :
00:26:894 (3) - Smoother this blanket
Nah, I guess just that X'D . I hope I'm correct and not changing the style. Good luck !
Thanks for checking blankets!Tatsuyu wrote:
mod
Easy:
00:11:742 (1,2,3) - Could definitely blanket better: http://puu.sh/p4Kft/a6dce5fcad.jpg fixed
00:18:096 (2,3) - Same ^: http://puu.sh/p4Knz/3ea3a7ef2f.jpg i think i fix it xd
00:31:294 (2) - Same ^ Move to: x:136, y:220 fixed
Normal:
00:03:921 (1,2) - Blanket fixed
00:06:609 (2,3) - ^ can't fix it
00:13:697 (1,2) - ^ can't fix it because ds and flow
00:24:450 (2) - ^ it's hard to fix because ds
GL
2016-05-25 19:41 -Bumblebee-: hey dude :))
2016-05-25 19:42 100bit: Hey!
2016-05-25 19:42 -Bumblebee-: do u need a mod for your map, don't u?
2016-05-25 19:42 100bit: yep, i need some mods for my "Jetpack Joyride Main Theme" mapset xd
2016-05-25 19:42 -Bumblebee-: sure :))
2016-05-25 19:43 -Bumblebee-: do u prefere IRC or the tips on the thread? :)
2016-05-25 19:43 100bit: doesn't matter
2016-05-25 19:43 100bit: p.s. sorry for my bad english pls
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: nah don't worry ;)
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: so let's take a look on ur first diff
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972860 Halfbrick - Jetpack Joyride Main Theme [Easy]]
2016-05-25 19:45 -Bumblebee-: 00:09:786 (3) - fix this blanket
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: oh, and this one too 00:07:831 (1) -
2016-05-25 19:46 100bit: i think 00:07:831 (1,2) - is goo
2016-05-25 19:46 100bit: good*
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: whatch out on the shape
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: that must be perfect lol
2016-05-25 19:47 -Bumblebee-: just a slighty change, nothing anymore
2016-05-25 19:47 -Bumblebee-: 00:11:742 (1) - for example, this one seems perfect
2016-05-25 19:48 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 19:48 100bit: i move 00:09:298 (2) for blanket with 00:07:831 (1,3)
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: mmm, nice :)
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: 00:24:450 (5) -
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: here too
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: that's weird :/
2016-05-25 19:49 100bit: fixed
2016-05-25 19:50 -Bumblebee-: all right so :)
2016-05-25 19:50 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972862 Halfbrick - Jetpack Joyride Main Theme [Normal]]
2016-05-25 19:50 100bit: l
2016-05-25 19:50 100bit: k*
2016-05-25 19:51 -Bumblebee-: 00:19:807 (2) -
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: look at this
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: not as shape
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: but as lenght
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: let me take a photo, wait a sec
2016-05-25 19:57 -Bumblebee-: here, look at this
2016-05-25 19:57 -Bumblebee-: http://puu.sh/p4QUM/f1aeff1524.jpg
2016-05-25 19:58 -Bumblebee-: this is from 00:19:562 - to 00:21:273 -
2016-05-25 19:59 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 19:59 100bit: fixed
2016-05-25 19:59 -Bumblebee-: nice :))
2016-05-25 20:00 -Bumblebee-: 00:29:583 (1,2,5) - fix this overlap D:
2016-05-25 20:01 -Bumblebee-: and that is all for the 2nd one
2016-05-25 20:02 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 20:02 100bit: thanks for mod, i have to go
2016-05-25 20:03 -Bumblebee-: np man ;)
2016-05-25 20:03 -Bumblebee-: I'll post this on ur thread ;)
2016-05-25 20:03 100bit: okay
Thanks for this mod!-Bumblebee- wrote:
a quick IRC2016-05-25 19:41 -Bumblebee-: hey dude :))Good luck with that, man
2016-05-25 19:42 100bit: Hey!
2016-05-25 19:42 -Bumblebee-: do u need a mod for your map, don't u?
2016-05-25 19:42 100bit: yep, i need some mods for my "Jetpack Joyride Main Theme" mapset xd
2016-05-25 19:42 -Bumblebee-: sure :))
2016-05-25 19:43 -Bumblebee-: do u prefere IRC or the tips on the thread? :)
2016-05-25 19:43 100bit: doesn't matter
2016-05-25 19:43 100bit: p.s. sorry for my bad english pls
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: nah don't worry ;)
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: so let's take a look on ur first diff
2016-05-25 19:44 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972860 Halfbrick - Jetpack Joyride Main Theme [Easy]]
2016-05-25 19:45 -Bumblebee-: 00:09:786 (3) - fix this blanket
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: oh, and this one too 00:07:831 (1) -
2016-05-25 19:46 100bit: i think 00:07:831 (1,2) - is goo
2016-05-25 19:46 100bit: good*
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: whatch out on the shape
2016-05-25 19:46 -Bumblebee-: that must be perfect lol
2016-05-25 19:47 -Bumblebee-: just a slighty change, nothing anymore
2016-05-25 19:47 -Bumblebee-: 00:11:742 (1) - for example, this one seems perfect
2016-05-25 19:48 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 19:48 100bit: i move 00:09:298 (2) for blanket with 00:07:831 (1,3)
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: mmm, nice :)
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: 00:24:450 (5) -
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: here too
2016-05-25 19:49 -Bumblebee-: that's weird :/
2016-05-25 19:49 100bit: fixed
2016-05-25 19:50 -Bumblebee-: all right so :)
2016-05-25 19:50 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972862 Halfbrick - Jetpack Joyride Main Theme [Normal]]
2016-05-25 19:50 100bit: l
2016-05-25 19:50 100bit: k*
2016-05-25 19:51 -Bumblebee-: 00:19:807 (2) -
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: look at this
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: not as shape
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: but as lenght
2016-05-25 19:52 -Bumblebee-: let me take a photo, wait a sec
2016-05-25 19:57 -Bumblebee-: here, look at this
2016-05-25 19:57 -Bumblebee-: http://puu.sh/p4QUM/f1aeff1524.jpg
2016-05-25 19:58 -Bumblebee-: this is from 00:19:562 - to 00:21:273 -
2016-05-25 19:59 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 19:59 100bit: fixed
2016-05-25 19:59 -Bumblebee-: nice :))
2016-05-25 20:00 -Bumblebee-: 00:29:583 (1,2,5) - fix this overlap D:
2016-05-25 20:01 -Bumblebee-: and that is all for the 2nd one
2016-05-25 20:02 100bit: okay
2016-05-25 20:02 100bit: thanks for mod, i have to go
2016-05-25 20:03 -Bumblebee-: np man ;)
2016-05-25 20:03 -Bumblebee-: I'll post this on ur thread ;)
2016-05-25 20:03 100bit: okay
About which diff you speak? If about Second Chance, i have piano sounds in 00:06:243 (2) and don't hear any in 6:120.Softy wrote:
00:06:120 (2) - should be on RED
those 3 long sliders, make them different in form, or at least the 3rd one, its not wrong, it just doesnt feel right
Thanks for mod!Prismetical wrote:
Heyo! c: ♥ M4M ♥Easy00:03:432 (4) - put the (4) there so you have a triangle formation, looks better
it's flow so i can't fix this, also i think its fine because i haven't overlap with 00:01:477 (2)
00:03:921 (1) - something missing there in terms of sound, shorten the slider one white tick and put a circle, sounds better sounds better, but looks weird imo
00:11:253 (4) - put the (4) at the same height as (2), take the y: 212 coordinate it's fine
00:11:742 (1) - same as earlier with the missing sound, try to do the same same, also i have blanket here and don't want to ruin it
00:17:607 (1,2,3) - put this part a liiiittle further down, DS allows that, it looks weird when it's that much pushed in the corner fixed
00:29:338 (1) - put this at the coordinate x: 12 so it is the same line with the end of the slider (4) fixed
00:31:294 (2) - if you do the earlier step don't forget to fix the blanket afterwards yep, i know xdNormal00:02:943 (2,1) - these two don't look good together, I think you should straighten slider (1) ohlol this overlap:D fixed
00:09:786 (1,2) - blanket doesn't look right it's right blanket because i have stack here
00:11:742 (1) - sounds weird and out of place because it's one blue tick longer than the other sliders it's good because drums
00:13:697 (1,2) - wrong distance snap i don't got any info from AIMod and can't fix it because have stack with 2
00:18:829 (4,4) - stack fixed
00:19:807 (2,3) - sounds not good to the music/isn't well synched, here my suggestion:
no
shorten both sliders one tick
00:27:628 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:22:251 (3) - shorten one blue tick i have saxophone sounds here
00:23:228 - if followed the last step, add circle
00:24:206 (1,2,3) - too cluttered, spread it fixed
00:39:603 (2,3) - bring them in one line it's flowSecond Chance00:03:432 (4,5,3) - ugly overlap, you have a whole playfield, use it! 4 and 5 stacked, can't fix 3
00:04:898 (3,1) - ^ k
00:07:342 (5) - theres a point in that slider you dont need, delete that point forgot, thanks
00:11:742 (1,2) - remove the stack, just misleading in timing looks strange, but fixed
00:17:852 (1) - bad place to start that fast in a corner after a spinner, because most people spin in the middle of the screen i'll stacked 1 and 2 and move it closer to the middle
00:19:807 (2,3) - that can look better can't change
00:23:473 (1) - random part for SV change, remove the SV change i have... sounds here, i don't know what is it instrument, i think it's guitar or any wind instrument
00:31:538 (1) - ^ same
00:40:581 (7) - if you're funny you can put a new combo right here it's fine
Good job for your second mapset!
Waiting for you mod! ^.^
Good luck! ♥