Hey, sorry for the delay, had an exhausting day yesterday.
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- 00:29:554 (6,3) - Super minor, but those should probably be stacked correctly.
- 00:27:279 (4,5) - This doesn't really feel appropriate, movement and spacing wise, also it seems that it is the only slider that is stacked with this rhythm pattern (00:30:589 (4) - 00:33:899 (4) - ) and those feels kinda better, so any reason for that difference?
- 00:38:244 (3,1,2,3) - You could improve the rhythm and pattern here, first of all there's no reason for the big jump between the 3 and 1, they sound pretty much the same, and at the same time there's no emphasization what so ever on 00:38:658 (3) - which is clearly the strongest, so having a simple 4 note + slider stream into the strong beat would be nice for example.
- 00:39:072 (3,1,2,3) - This one is weird as well, first of all, the NC on the first note will make more sense, the shift starts at that time. 00:39:485 (2,3) - why did the spacing decrease so much when the music is still the same? 00:39:279 (1,2) - This was fine and played well, but in the other two sliders you had a different movement which is not as strong as those.
- 00:47:761 (5) - A triplet would be much more appropriate, the note inside the slider is not weak at all and the current pattern is kinda awkward, if you still wish to keep it, at least mute the sliderend. Or you could use one slider like at 00:48:589 (3) -
- 00:46:520 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Actually, the difference here is mildly infuriating, sometimes you use a full slider and sometimes a 3/4 one, while the vocals and music is the same, you should probably go all over the places you did something and make it follow something certain.
- 00:59:761 (1,2,3) - I feel that the spacing between 2 and 3 should be bigger compared to 1 and 2, also, the movement into the slider is not that good, try making something that flows into the slider shape.
- 01:21:072 (6,1) - Yeah the whistle on the second slider doesn't fit that well, it's too strong compared to the note itself. Also generally, that certain whistle is kinda strong, should probably have something softer.
- 01:26:244 (1,2,3,4) - This is waaaaaay tooo drastic, this sounds just as the previous sections, no need to increase the spacing like that. 01:27:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - But I agree that this one is more signicant, so why wouldn't you make it one pattern that increases spacing slightly and not just like that?
- 01:29:554 (1,1,1,1,1) - Seems a bit random and overdone as well, try makin something more interesting and less confusing.
- 01:45:899 - I am not really sure why was this ignored, this is a pretty significant build up to the next note.
- 01:52:934 (2,5) - Tidy up the blanket a bit.
- 01:57:072 (1,2) - This is supposed to be a triplet just like 01:32:658 (1,2,1) -
- 01:58:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Seems a bit absurd that you completely ignoed the significant notes and just made a big spaced pattern for the vocals, 5 is the buildup for 6 yet it has bigger spacing, I think you should increase the spacing gradually until the significant change with the strong notes.
- 02:01:623 (5,6) - I'd prefer just circles for this pattern in the music, you could make something much more interesting rather than 2 copy pasted sliders.
- 02:08:244 (5,6) - ^
- 02:12:175 (2) - Supposed to be a single circle, there's nothing on the sliderend.
- 02:36:796 (4,5,1,2,3) - All of this looks kinda ugly lol, could you tidy this up a bit?
- 02:38:658 (1) - Isn't following the strong 1/2 notes is better?
- 02:41:348 (2,3,4,5,6) - A normal star would be cool.
- 02:58:934 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Like previously, this is too drastic.
- 03:02:244 (1,1,1,1) - This is nicer from the previous pattern, and I'd like to suggest something, have the SV on the first and third sliders lower than the second and fourth, it'd be cool.
- 03:03:485 (1,1) - If you want to follow the strong note with the slider end you need to follow the one at the red tick before then, otherwise mute the sliderend.
- 03:11:658 (6,1,2) - This just feels wrong lol, this is the first time you have the 1/4 sliders without the super strong beats.
- 03:33:692 (1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - This section really feels overdone >.> It's too hard compared to the rest of the map, there's nothing really the 1/8 land on, perhaps it is on the long indistinct repeats of something that seems to be 1/16 or idk, but the long sliders are just awful, they are really boring and add nothing to the map.
- 04:01:003 (1) - I'd prefer a lower hitsound on the head here, it feels out of place.
- 04:29:348 (1,2) - Like before, it's supposed to be a triplet.
- 04:48:175 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't really find this right, seems like it is done just for the sake of difficulty, there's no significant music shift and it was done drastically.