From queue~
General
-Nice skin, nice storyboard!
-are you going to leave the hitcircle background transparent?
Pro
00:02:452 (4) - 00:04:306 (2) - stack maybe?
00:10:205 (2,3) - dont really like this overlap
00:11:301 (7) - you sure there is something here? I don't really hear anything distinguishable.
00:12:396 (3) - clap on slider tail
00:13:744 (6,7) - blanket
00:17:789 (3,5) - ^
00:22:509 (1,2,3) - ^
when you fix blanket of 00:22:509 (1,2,3), you can stack 00:24:700 (6) on tail of 00:23:183 (3)
00:30:598 (1,2) - clap on tail of 1 and 2
00:52:171 (1,3) - dont really like this overlap
00:56:048 (2,7) - could stack
00:59:587 (3,4) - blanket
01:04:980 (6,7) - ^
01:05:318 (7) - clap on start
01:06:666 (2) - clap
01:13:913 (5,6) - blanket
01:18:295 (2,3) - i think this is just kinda weird because 3 starts on a 1/6 beat. messed me up here. If possible, make the start of 3 on a downbeat or offbeat
01:25:879 (1,2) - blanket
01:47:115 (4,1) - ^
01:52:846 (1,3,4) - ^
01:53:857 (4) - clap on start
02:00:430 - clap
02:00:598 - ^
02:01:947 (4) - ^
02:03:632 (5) - ^ slider tail
02:04:138 (6) - ^
02:05:318 - ^
gonna stop pointing out the hitsounds, hopefully you should be able to find the right spots just by listening to what doesnt sound right.
02:16:273 (2,3) - blanket
02:18:970 (2,3) - ^
Master
-some of the stacks threw me off because I couldnt see them coming. Heres the stacks: 01:45:430 (3,4,5) 00:51:497 (3,4,5) 00:54:194 (3,4,5) 00:57:565 (5,6,7) 01:08:688 (2,3,4) not saying all of them messed me up, but these ones all follow the same pattern.
00:10:121 - nothing here, but something here 00:10:289
00:11:301 - nothing here
00:13:997 - ^
00:19:812 (1,3) - improve blanket
00:22:340 - no clap here, clap here 00:22:424
00:23:520 (4,5) - i think this should just be stacked normally
00:24:278 (2) - nothing here
00:25:458 - ^
-Just make sure to check for overmapping. You should know the song better than I do.
00:28:407 (2,3) - make overlap bigger or no overlap
00:29:587 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:587 (6,7,9) - ^
00:45:935 (2,3,5) - ^
00:51:497 (3,5) - refer to first comment on this difficulty. perhaps you could stack 5 onto 00:51:329 (2) instead? I think my problem with these stacks was because they were straight back and forth.
00:52:677 (7,9) - stack
00:57:565 (5,7) - ^
01:00:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - dont quite understand why the DS is so huge here
02:07:340 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:14:756 (7,8,1) - dont like how these overlaps look, esp overlap between 8 and 1, should separate tail of 8 from head of 1
01:52:171 (7,1) - stack
Good luck!
General
-Nice skin, nice storyboard!
-are you going to leave the hitcircle background transparent?
Pro
00:02:452 (4) - 00:04:306 (2) - stack maybe?
00:10:205 (2,3) - dont really like this overlap
00:11:301 (7) - you sure there is something here? I don't really hear anything distinguishable.
00:12:396 (3) - clap on slider tail
00:13:744 (6,7) - blanket
00:17:789 (3,5) - ^
00:22:509 (1,2,3) - ^
when you fix blanket of 00:22:509 (1,2,3), you can stack 00:24:700 (6) on tail of 00:23:183 (3)
00:30:598 (1,2) - clap on tail of 1 and 2
00:52:171 (1,3) - dont really like this overlap
00:56:048 (2,7) - could stack
00:59:587 (3,4) - blanket
01:04:980 (6,7) - ^
01:05:318 (7) - clap on start
01:06:666 (2) - clap
01:13:913 (5,6) - blanket
01:18:295 (2,3) - i think this is just kinda weird because 3 starts on a 1/6 beat. messed me up here. If possible, make the start of 3 on a downbeat or offbeat
01:25:879 (1,2) - blanket
01:47:115 (4,1) - ^
01:52:846 (1,3,4) - ^
01:53:857 (4) - clap on start
02:00:430 - clap
02:00:598 - ^
02:01:947 (4) - ^
02:03:632 (5) - ^ slider tail
02:04:138 (6) - ^
02:05:318 - ^
gonna stop pointing out the hitsounds, hopefully you should be able to find the right spots just by listening to what doesnt sound right.
02:16:273 (2,3) - blanket
02:18:970 (2,3) - ^
Master
-some of the stacks threw me off because I couldnt see them coming. Heres the stacks: 01:45:430 (3,4,5) 00:51:497 (3,4,5) 00:54:194 (3,4,5) 00:57:565 (5,6,7) 01:08:688 (2,3,4) not saying all of them messed me up, but these ones all follow the same pattern.
00:10:121 - nothing here, but something here 00:10:289
00:11:301 - nothing here
00:13:997 - ^
00:19:812 (1,3) - improve blanket
00:22:340 - no clap here, clap here 00:22:424
00:23:520 (4,5) - i think this should just be stacked normally
00:24:278 (2) - nothing here
00:25:458 - ^
-Just make sure to check for overmapping. You should know the song better than I do.
00:28:407 (2,3) - make overlap bigger or no overlap
00:29:587 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:587 (6,7,9) - ^
00:45:935 (2,3,5) - ^
00:51:497 (3,5) - refer to first comment on this difficulty. perhaps you could stack 5 onto 00:51:329 (2) instead? I think my problem with these stacks was because they were straight back and forth.
00:52:677 (7,9) - stack
00:57:565 (5,7) - ^
01:00:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - dont quite understand why the DS is so huge here
02:07:340 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:14:756 (7,8,1) - dont like how these overlaps look, esp overlap between 8 and 1, should separate tail of 8 from head of 1
01:52:171 (7,1) - stack
Good luck!