00:37:367 - The rhythm has started here why not add a reverse 1/8 slider?
http://puu.sh/oCcxX/eb824d229a.jpg00:39:614 (5) - Slider end use soft hitsound cuz nothing is there
i can't hear any drum sounds..00:51:376 (6,1) - Can blanket better -->
http://puu.sh/oCcEr/ef01904c19.jpg01:08:424 (2,3) - Replace this with 1/2 slider? and then delete 01:08:689 (4) - cuz no sound there.
01:14:900 (2) - Delete note? Idk but while playing it feels more consistent to your previous patterns.
i want catch the bass drum sounds01:15:693 (1) - This should be 1/1 slider to be consistent with 01:17:808 (1)
01:22:433 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:23:755 (1) - Remove NC
01:29:173 (5) - Move this note to X:512 Y:212? Flows better imo.
no change01:30:627 (1) - Move this to X:32 Y:260 to keep consistent with the flow like wat you did previously and after at 01:29:966 (2,3,4) and 01:31:156 (4,5,6)
01:40:539 (5) - Move to X:456 Y:304 to make the jump straight?
02:00:230 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend not to stack these and make jumps instead. Maybe like
http://puu.sh/oCdGu/b527b31b31.jpg ?
02:02:477 (1) - This overlap looks ugly. Move to X:188 Y:160? and then Move 02:02:874 (3) up abit to avoid overlap and then move 02:03:270 (4) up abit so its not off grid?
02:05:385 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Nice jump here good job
02:15:297 (2) - Stack to end of 02:15:561 (4) ?
02:20:715 (3) - Move to X:272 Y:136? I dun think a blanket here is necessary because the flow will be quite weird. Then move 02:21:112 (4) to X:56 Y:236 and curve the slider end to the right more for better flow.
hmm sorry no change. i like current flow.02:51:508 (1,3) - Swap positions? Make them like 02:50:979 (1,2,3) to keep consistency and then move 02:51:772 (3) to X380 Y:160 looks better imo and more like the previous pattern
no change.02:58:909 (1,1) - Since you followed the vocal transition into the 1st note of a rhythm I think you can map that break. For example 03:01:023 - 2/1 Slider fits here and 03:03:138 here too, 03:04:724 - Notes fit here 03:05:120 , and 03:05:517 , 03:06:045 - 2/1 slider , 03:06:706 - Note for drum snare, 03:07:235 - The next 5 1/2 beats can be notes to match drum fill-in.
02:58:380 - If you took my above suggestion, then I think 0.50 SV suits this part more
i think need some break for players.03:15:825 - What is this green point for? o.0
03:07:896 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Fix the sliders after changing to 0.50 SV
03:33:270 (1) - Move to X:340 Y:324 to align with 03:32:741 (1,1) ?
i made the triangle shape with 03:33:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - so no change. but your suggestion is really good ><03:33:667 (5) - Move this to X136 Y:232 for less overmap? xd
i want stack this note with 03:32:610 (2) - xd03:45:297 (1) - Remove NC
03:45:693 (1) - Remove NC
03:46:089 (1) - Remove NC
03:45:957 (2) - Add NC
03:46:089 (1) - Remove NC
03:46:486 (1) - Remove NC