GeneralEh I give up on the timing. It's weird in the beginning. Please have it rechecked.
BPM 191.6 71523 Move offset to 70428. The timing should start earlier. Note this will not set the stanzas in the right place. Find someone else if you want the metronome to look right.
Remove naruto from tags. It's already a source.
I would suggest that you go through the difficulties and see if all the green lines are where they should be.
Easy00:01:496 (2) - The end of this sounds too loud.
00:07:812 (3) - Move here? 00:08:127 - (It will go with the sound you placed for this note 00:13:180 (3) - )
00:08:759 (1,2,3) - This beat sounds more on red ticks than white ticks. I really suggest you remove the repeat and move 00:09:391 (2,3) - back to the red ticks. That note in the middle doesn't play right at all where it is.
00:16:665 (3,4) - I think it would sound better if you deleted 3 and moved 4 to where 3 is on the timeline and respaced them. Then added two repeats.
00:34:991 (3,1) - Too close. Hard to read, especially for an easy.
01:04:326 (8,1) - Bad overlap and note 8 sounds weird.
Hard00:05:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't sound right. Timing seems wrong.
00:44:452 (1,2) - Perhaps don't stack? It plays weird as a stack.
00:45:714 (1,2,3,4) - Diamond isn't spaced the same?
00:55:020 (3) - Delete? I think it sounds a lot better without.
fartonik00:08:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Feels overmapped to me. I think the hard clap sounds and the dings are separate rhythms and shouldn't be mapped as they were part of the main guitar.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88801I think that's the true beat for the main guitar.i'm not sure how well your patterns could work though, but I think a note needs to be here 00:09:864 - and 00:10:575 (11) - that doesn't make any sense to me why its there. Also consider deleting the last note and starting the spinner there.
00:21:840 (6,1,2,3) - Spacing? The stack is overlapping with the previous slider and it doesn't look good.
00:36:251 - Timing and kiai time aren't on the same line?
00:40:667 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:803 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing is just random here.
01:09:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - Awkward to me. Maybe not for others.
01:17:050 - I would prefer this gap mapped.
Star in hopes this beatmap turns out well.