i.o - Hanikamu Kimi ni Koi Suru Watashi · forum

Syph

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Syph 2016-03-09T05:58:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on maandag 10 oktober 2016 at 22:34:55

Artist: i.o
Title: Hanikamu Kimi ni Koi Suru Watashi
Source: はにかみCLOVER
Tags: すたじお緑茶 eroge visual novel opening op Meg iMage-- Lazer -Tochi HikaruR Sekaii Sekai-nyan Anxient Hikaru_Rose Slayed
BPM: 189
Filesize: 3294kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

Anxient's Normal (1,96 stars, 152 notes)
Extra (6,05 stars, 471 notes)
Hikaru's Insane (4,67 stars, 418 notes)
Meg's Extra (5,27 stars, 391 notes)
Sekai's Easy (1,71 stars, 120 notes)
Slayed's Advanced (2,76 stars, 247 notes)
-Tochi's Hard (3,39 stars, 298 notes)

Download: i.o - Hanikamu Kimi ni Koi Suru Watashi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

Easy - Sekaii
Normal - Anxient
Advanced - Slayed
Hard - -Tochi
Insane - Hikaru Rose
Extra - Meg, Me

Removed difficulties:
Lazer's Advanced

Last edited by Syph 2016-10-10T20:35:03+00:00, edited 81 times in total.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-03-15T22:17:44+00:00

SPOILER

2016-03-15 15:35 VINXIS: bchi
2016-03-15 15:35 Syph: im gay
2016-03-15 15:35 VINXIS: Your beatmaps are being processed...
2016-03-15 15:35 Syph: IT'S DOI NG RTHE DO ING THING
2016-03-15 15:36 VINXIS: 00:25:292 (1,2,1) - y
2016-03-15 15:36 Syph: i lov big jump xz d d D
2016-03-15 15:36 Syph: whats wrong with that tho
2016-03-15 15:36 VINXIS: it can b fukd 2 rea
2016-03-15 15:36 VINXIS: d
2016-03-15 15:37 Syph: ye we; l l thwy ccan leaR n to read or sme tTIOn
2016-03-15 15:37 VINXIS: hlyo
2016-03-15 15:37 VINXIS: -_
2016-03-15 15:37 Syph: - _ _ -
2016-03-15 15:37 VINXIS: holy
2016-03-15 15:37 VINXIS: this maps rththhym
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: i mean
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: this songs rhythm
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: is so fukd
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: lo
2016-03-15 15:38 Syph: ya it's veRy  gya
2016-03-15 15:38 Syph: likm e
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: u sud
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: chang
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: tha
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: t
2016-03-15 15:38 VINXIS: th o
2016-03-15 15:39 VINXIS: acxtualy the only problem i see with the map
2016-03-15 15:39 VINXIS: r the things that r like that
2016-03-15 15:39 VINXIS: pattrn
2016-03-15 15:39 VINXIS: that u do lik 5 timez 
2016-03-15 15:39 Syph: whOA
2016-03-15 15:39 Syph: onlyt hat
2016-03-15 15:39 Syph: im proiud of myself
2016-03-15 15:40 VINXIS: 00:54:340 (11,1,2) - and ths sht
2016-03-15 15:40 VINXIS: uglyass overlap
2016-03-15 15:40 VINXIS: -_   -
2016-03-15 15:40 VINXIS: 01:10:054 (1,3) - also ugyl as overla
2016-03-15 15:40 Syph: fUCK HE foud nd T it
2016-03-15 15:40 Syph: fIXED
2016-03-15 15:40 Syph: that dosnt even overla but ok chang
2016-03-15 15:41 VINXIS: WOT
2016-03-15 15:41 VINXIS:  01:11:323 - 
2016-03-15 15:41 VINXIS: FUCK
2016-03-15 15:41 VINXIS: http://puu.sh/nHRWZ/4a9991be76.jpg
2016-03-15 15:41 VINXIS: there we go
2016-03-15 15:41 Syph: LO
2016-03-15 15:41 Syph: ok maYb it voerlaps oa lit tl bit
2016-03-15 15:41 Syph: buti  change
2016-03-15 15:41 Syph: d
2016-03-15 15:41 VINXIS: THANK
2016-03-15 15:42 Syph: no prob vinx is ^_^
2016-03-15 15:44 VINXIS: 00:25:292 (1,2,1) - 01:23:228 (3,4) - 01:23:863 (1,1,1,2,3) - 
2016-03-15 15:44 VINXIS: kilursefl
2016-03-15 15:44 Syph: DUD HOYL that  S MEAN
2016-03-15 15:45 VINXIS:  sRY
2016-03-15 15:45 VINXIS: gota b strict on the newbs so they dnot becom lik shiroh -_
2016-03-15 15:45 Syph: i'm ar hURT..
2016-03-15 15:47 Syph: ok i changd. . .
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: 00:03:863 (1,4) - oya notice how thes sldiers rnt eh same siz
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: thats mostyl cuz all the lines r +1 ms
2016-03-15 15:47 Syph: hOYL I KNOW
2016-03-15 15:47 Syph: IDK WHATS WORN G
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: u move
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: the lines
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: all
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: bak 1 ms
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: and then fix all the sldiers
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: lo
2016-03-15 15:47 Syph: holy
2016-03-15 15:47 VINXIS: actualy its just
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS: the red line adn green line
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS: at the beginning
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS: just move them 1 ms bak
2016-03-15 15:48 Syph: oK!
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS:  WAIT
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS: select all the lines
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS: and move them 1 ms back
2016-03-15 15:48 VINXIS: not jstu the 1st red and green line
2016-03-15 15:48 Syph: oMG
2016-03-15 15:48 Syph: but it alrdy fix with 1st red and green . .
2016-03-15 15:49 VINXIS: ctrl z is p nice
2016-03-15 15:50 Syph: wat the fUCK vixn S IS
2016-03-15 15:50 Syph: iSIs ha ha ha A HA
2016-03-15 15:50 VINXIS: X
2016-03-15 15:51 Syph: im rly funn y personb ..
2016-03-15 15:51 VINXIS: eme2 XD
2016-03-15 15:51 Syph: ok thank vinxI s i fixed et. .
2016-03-15 15:52 Syph: thank rm vinx is X D
2016-03-15 15:52 VINXIS: 00:37:038 - 
2016-03-15 15:52 Syph: wAT
2016-03-15 15:52 VINXIS: gues how u fix these green lines
2016-03-15 15:52 VINXIS: : )
2016-03-15 15:52 Syph: idki i kiL MYSElf
2016-03-15 15:53 Syph: LO
2016-03-15 15:53 VINXIS: u move the red line at 00:37:037 - back 1 ms -_
2016-03-15 15:53 Syph: i movd the slider ..
2016-03-15 15:53 VINXIS: hOLY
2016-03-15 15:53 Syph: o
2016-03-15 15:53 Syph: ok -    _-
2016-03-15 15:53 Syph: omg vinIX S ITS OWRKS
2016-03-15 15:54 VINXIS: G
2016-03-15 15:54 VINXIS: now u go to
2016-03-15 15:54 VINXIS: 00:54:813 - 
2016-03-15 15:54 VINXIS: and move evrythign starting here back 1 ms
2016-03-15 15:54 Syph: hooooooooooooooooooooooyl
2016-03-15 15:55 Syph: how d o I d o this ok im doINMG it
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: klo
2016-03-15 15:55 Syph: i did t IT ..
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: k g
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: i thikn thats 
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: all
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: updat
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: pl
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: z
2016-03-15 15:55 Syph: http://lo.lf.ag/s/1/2846e9da9b.png look at what u didvin x id XD
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: o yjhea
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: u gota mvoe the circels
2016-03-15 15:55 VINXIS: to the bea
2016-03-15 15:56 VINXIS: gues how u do that
2016-03-15 15:56 VINXIS: : )
2016-03-15 15:56 Syph: Object isn';t sna EP ED 11
2016-03-15 15:56 VINXIS: ctrl a
2016-03-15 15:56 VINXIS: go to timelein
2016-03-15 15:56 Syph: ghoiw aBOut u go kil lyour self osU
2016-03-15 15:56 VINXIS: move them a bit and they sud mov sjtu a bit
2016-03-15 15:56 Syph: omgt hat fixed lik ..
2016-03-15 15:56 Syph: 30 of the m
2016-03-15 15:56 VINXIS: wtf
2016-03-15 15:57 VINXIS: that sud fix all of them
2016-03-15 15:57 VINXIS: update
2016-03-15 15:57 VINXIS: the
2016-03-15 15:57 VINXIS: mpa plz
2016-03-15 15:57 Syph: oK
2016-03-15 15:58 Syph: don't etE me tis'teh stuCK at 11%
2016-03-15 15:58 Syph: gonna kill myself
2016-03-15 15:58 Syph: now i need 2 retsart ..
2016-03-15 15:59 Syph: guess what
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: bak
2016-03-15 16:11 Syph: waw
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: OK
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: go 2
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: the ebginnnig
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: and then
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: seelct all
2016-03-15 16:11 VINXIS: adhetn mopv
2016-03-15 16:12 Syph: hooooy ly yo[e5poye
2016-03-15 16:12 Syph: 3 erors le ft thank !
2016-03-15 16:12 Syph: hoyl 1 is smaller again Xd
2016-03-15 16:13 VINXIS: d
2016-03-15 16:13 Syph: itsl ik ..
2016-03-15 16:13 Syph: we ar eb ack to how it staretd .
2016-03-15 16:13 VINXIS: WAIT
2016-03-15 16:13 VINXIS: ok
2016-03-15 16:14 VINXIS: 00:04:656 (3) - copypaste it to wher 1 is
2016-03-15 16:14 VINXIS: and then place it wher 1 waz
2016-03-15 16:14 VINXIS: and then sav
2016-03-15 16:14 VINXIS: copypaste as in the alsider shap if thats wot u wer gogin for
2016-03-15 16:15 Syph: http://lo.lf.ag/s/1/38d3efb481.png : (((99
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: yjhea
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: did u 
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: save
2016-03-15 16:15 Syph: ya xd
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: klo
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: now go to the
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: .osu
2016-03-15 16:15 VINXIS: and go to the first object's line
2016-03-15 16:16 VINXIS: and change the 8362 to 8363
2016-03-15 16:16 VINXIS: save the .osu and then ctrl shift l on the osugam
2016-03-15 16:16 Syph: whew
2016-03-15 16:16 Syph: it's don !!
2016-03-15 16:16 VINXIS: G
2016-03-15 16:16 VINXIS: ok kd plz
2016-03-15 16:16 Syph: thank vinx IS ur an hero
2016-03-15 16:16 VINXIS: packet
2016-03-15 16:16 VINXIS: hero
2016-03-15 16:16 Syph: ya tbh xd

Lazer

417 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2016-04-19T22:44:45+00:00

try tongue but hole

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54676
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Hanikamu Kimi ni Koi Suru Watashi
TitleUnicode:はにかむキミに恋するワタシ
Artist:i.o
ArtistUnicode:i.o
Creator:Syph
Version:Lazer's Normal
Source:はにかみCLOVER
Tags:すたじお緑茶 visual novel opening op Meg Lazer -Tochi HikaruR
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383,172,89752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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33,181,91340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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AmigoDoChroome

228 posts

Joined September 2014

AmigoDoChroome 2016-04-22T18:37:06+00:00

insane
00:05:784 (3) - weird stack
00:25:467 (1) - wrong nc
00:52:609 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - more distance
01:03:562 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,1) - so confused
01:19:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^^

extra 1
00:05:943 (4) - white tick
00:21:022 (1,1,1) - wrong nc
00:26:102 (1) - ^^
00:29:276 (1) -
00:31:816 (1) -
00:55:784 (4) - blanket
01:37:848 (1,1) - nc....

Hikaru Rose

236 posts

Joined August 2014

Hikaru Rose 2016-04-30T14:42:21+00:00

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
insane
00:05:784 (3) - weird stack - Not really
00:25:467 (1) - wrong nc - Why?
00:52:609 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - more distance - Done
01:03:562 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,1) - so confused - If you could tell me why that'd be great
01:19:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^^ - ^^

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-05-03T18:34:48+00:00

queue

isn't modding like complaining but then done in another way? xd

Extra

Because of the star rating, maybe have AR 9,5 instead
It seems odd that the map starts at a red tick, idk maybe recheck offset? xd
PLEASE REMOVE ALL WHISTLES ON SLIDER BODY AAAAAAAAAAA
00:24:355 (1,2,1,2) - Why is this different than 00:24:990 (1,2,1,2) - ?? I don't get it why not try to make a 'square' something out of this instead since it looks p random
00:26:736 (1) - Not sure whether this NC is truly needed, personally I'd remove it
00:32:927 (4,1) - Blanket please??
00:37:054 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have such different spacing for the same odd timing here, try making it consistent
00:49:752 (1) - In this section, I'd try to make the triangles even more triangular, so more like that every corner is around 60 degrees
00:51:816 (2,3,4) - Maybe point this towards 00:52:133 (1) - because it'll feel less awkward then :3
01:10:070 (1,2) - Why not blanket these two?
01:23:879 (3) - Because you're doing it on the notes that come afterwards, maybe NC this too
01:39:752 (4) - Shouldn't this be a slider?

okdad, spam me ingame if you need me to mod more diffs

Syph

848 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Syph 2016-05-03T20:27:58+00:00

HighTec wrote:
queue

isn't modding like complaining but then done in another way? xd

Extra
Because of the star rating, maybe have AR 9,5 instead i'll have u know it was 9,2 at first and even then it played fine so this ar should be perfect !!
It seems odd that the map starts at a red tick, idk maybe recheck offset? xd i'll ask someone about it
PLEASE REMOVE ALL WHISTLES ON SLIDER BODY AAAAAAAAAAA i'm very good at accidentally putting whistles on sliderbody but ill try to look for them Xd
00:24:355 (1,2,1,2) - Why is this different than 00:24:990 (1,2,1,2) - ?? I don't get it why not try to make a 'square' something out of this instead since it looks p random bcuz song intensity
00:26:736 (1) - Not sure whether this NC is truly needed, personally I'd remove it kept nc but removed the nc after slider
00:32:927 (4,1) - Blanket please?? im p sure this is alrdy a really cute blanket unless im blind
00:37:054 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have such different spacing for the same odd timing here, try making it consistent the sound kinda changes tho idk how to explain this but if anyone else mentions it i'll change them to have the same spacing
00:49:752 (1) - In this section, I'd try to make the triangles even more triangular, so more like that every corner is around 60 degrees these were never intended to be triangles

theyre just . .. jumps Xd
00:51:816 (2,3,4) - Maybe point this towards 00:52:133 (1) - because it'll feel less awkward then :3 that makes 00:51:657 (1) - into the triple play awkward though ;_; life problems
01:10:070 (1,2) - Why not blanket these two? because i don't like very curved sliders ;_;
01:23:879 (3) - Because you're doing it on the notes that come afterwards, maybe NC this too i nc'd the notes after for readability because of the 1/2 gaps
01:39:752 (4) - Shouldn't this be a slider? ehhHHHHHHH both work but i prefer my fancy circle

okdad, spam me ingame if you need me to mod more diffs

Thanks for modding <3 ~~sry for denying so much~~

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-05-04T17:06:53+00:00

as promised
no kd

Meg's Extra

00:07:213 (3,1) - Awkward connection when playing, maybe Ctrl+G 3 instead?
00:13:245 (2,3,4) - Would personally make a better triangle out of this
00:18:800 (6) - Maybe curve this a little towards 00:19:118 (1) - , looks kinda odd now and doesn't connect well imo
00:24:991 (1,2,3,4) - You could have an increase in spacing for this part, suits the situation well
00:39:118 (4,5,6) - Not sure about this stacking, maybe make a little triangle out of this? Stacking here seems kinda dull, especially in an extra diff
01:06:261 (1,2) - mmmmm this looks weird, maybe put (2) in the direction (1) is heading
01:12:610 (1,2) - Undo the overlap a bit, so that you maybe can get something like this, makes it easier to read and finer to play
01:17:054 (1) - Remove the NC here and put it on 01:17:372 (2) - instead, would fit the singing better
01:24:197 (1,2) - uuh same as before

hope this is helpful, map is p solid anyways

happy now syph? ;w;

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-05-14T13:18:31+00:00

From my queue

[Extra]

test play (2pc
00:36:419 (3) - suggest to NC here, since the spacing 2>3 and 3>4 is a little similar, ~~and i break the combo at my first pc ;w;~~
00:50:705 (1,2,3) - the flow is bad here, would be nicer if you ctrl + G on 00:50:705 (1,2) - and move 3 to 444 242 and move 00:51:181 (1,2) - to 80 201
01:11:657 (2) - this would be nicer
01:13:086 (2,3) - this would be nicer, i really dont like the original flow since the flow 1>2 is really bad imo
01:14:038 (2) - would look niocer if you put 2 in the middle
01:16:736 (3,5) - why dont ctrl + j to consist the flow with 01:15:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -

[Meg's Extra]

Meg o/ >w<
00:18:483 (5,6) - the rhythm here should be like this
00:20:546 (1) - i dont think it's necessary to NC here
00:39:118 (4,5,6,1) - im not sure if you are stacking here lol
01:17:689 (1,2,3) - this is kinda hard to play for me ;w;
01:24:673 (7) - NC maybe?

sorry for the super late mod ;w;
busy mapping tho
anywayyyyy GL

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,913 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-05-16T18:51:36+00:00

your goddamn hitnormal, I'm trying to play osu and not the timing panel

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-05-20T11:17:28+00:00

placeholder, will mod tomorrow o/

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-05-21T08:42:35+00:00

General

Disable widescreen support in Normal , Insane And Extra
Tags conflict
is it not necessary for all the diffs to have same colors?

Extra

OD 9 Might be a bit high , reduce to somewhere between 8.5 to 8.8
01:10:863 (2) - move down to y:146 to make better blanket with 01:11:340 (1) -

Meg's Extra

00:28:800 (5,3) - move both down to y:152 to make better blanket with 00:29:276 (1) -
00:46:261 (2,1) - their ends arent stacked properly
01:25:943 (3,1) - looks a bit weird , Try Moving 01:26:419 (1) - down a bit
01:38:959 (1) - move right to x:225

Hikaru's Insane

Decrease OD , since the OD of Meg's Extra is 8 also , and OD 8 For this difficulty is high anyway , Reduce to 7.5 maybe

Welp ~ Rest is up to u ~ GL!

Syph

848 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Syph 2016-05-21T11:05:56+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
From my queue

[Extra]
test play (2pc
00:36:419 (3) - suggest to NC here, since the spacing 2>3 and 3>4 is a little similar, ~~and i break the combo at my first pc ;w;~~ done
00:50:705 (1,2,3) - the flow is bad here, would be nicer if you ctrl + G on 00:50:705 (1,2) - and move 3 to 444 242 and move 00:51:181 (1,2) - to 80 201 changed it a bit
01:11:657 (2) - this would be nicer did something similar
01:13:086 (2,3) - this would be nicer, i really dont like the original flow since the flow 1>2 is really bad imo this plays pretty good imo D:
01:14:038 (2) - would look niocer if you put 2 in the middle moved it up a bit more
01:16:736 (3,5) - why dont ctrl + j to consist the flow with 01:15:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - idk i like this ;;

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

General
Disable widescreen support in Normal , Insane And Extra done
Tags conflict fixed!
is it not necessary for all the diffs to have same colors? also fixed
Extra
OD 9 Might be a bit high , reduce to somewhere between 8.5 to 8.8 od9 fits pretty good imo
01:10:863 (2) - move down to y:146 to make better blanket with 01:11:340 (1) - done
Welp ~ Rest is up to u ~ GL!

thanks for modding guys <3

Okorin wrote:
your goddamn hitnormal, I'm trying to play osu and not the timing panel

need 2 find better hitnormal help

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2016-05-21T15:14:03+00:00

HighTec wrote:
as promised
no kd

Meg's Extra
00:07:213 (3,1) - Awkward connection when playing, maybe Ctrl+G 3 instead? no. it is already good flow
00:13:245 (2,3,4) - Would personally make a better triangle out of this ok
00:18:800 (6) - Maybe curve this a little towards 00:19:118 (1) - , looks kinda odd now and doesn't connect well imo ok
00:24:991 (1,2,3,4) - You could have an increase in spacing for this part, suits the situation well keep
00:39:118 (4,5,6) - Not sure about this stacking, maybe make a little triangle out of this? Stacking here seems kinda dull, especially in an extra diff keep now. but if BN say about it, i will change
01:06:261 (1,2) - mmmmm this looks weird, maybe put (2) in the direction (1) is heading i don't think not weird
01:12:610 (1,2) - Undo the overlap a bit, so that you maybe can get something like this, makes it easier to read and finer to playwhy overlap lol, no need to make big spacing
01:17:054 (1) - Remove the NC here and put it on 01:17:372 (2) - instead, would fit the singing better i put NC with certain rhythm. keep
01:24:197 (1,2) - uuh same as before keep

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[Meg's Extra]
Meg o/ >w< o/////
00:18:483 (5,6) - the rhythm here should be like this i pick vocal. keep
00:20:546 (1) - i dont think it's necessary to NC here ok
00:39:118 (4,5,6,1) - im not sure if you are stacking here lol keep now. but if BN say about it, i will change
01:17:689 (1,2,3) - this is kinda hard to play for me ;w; i don't think so. keep
01:24:673 (7) - NC maybe? ?_? i already put NC

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Meg's Extra
00:28:800 (5,3) - move both down to y:152 to make better blanket with 00:29:276 (1) - ok
00:46:261 (2,1) - their ends arent stacked properly ok
01:25:943 (3,1) - looks a bit weird , Try Moving 01:26:419 (1) - down a bit keep
01:38:959 (1) - move right to x:225 ok

thank you for modding all
http://puu.sh/oZVpG.zip

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-05-26T11:11:19+00:00

Sup you hot pieces of ass <3 Here's a lil' mod for you (Finally, I'm so lazy lel)
I was told to mod the easier diffs of the set, so I'm starting with those, and will most likely return later for the harder ones. :3
Omg 100 posts, that calls for celebration ;O

Reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

Color coding

Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Positive comment or a question

GENERAL:

General

I think there's nothing major here.

Sekai's Easy

00:09:752 (2,3,4) - There's some beats on the notes (Like the sliderstart on 3 and 4), that don't follow the rhythm, and it gets really confusing. It's consider reworking it in a way that makes the red ticks 00:10:228 - and 00:11:498 - the emphasized beats.
00:24:197 (1,2) - I'd consider curving those less, so you're actually able to make them blanket each other correctly, 'cause the attempt here seems to be a little halfhearted if ya get me.
00:27:213 (4,1) - Switch NC, since the slider 4 is a new section start.
00:30:705 (1,2) - Switch NC for the same reason.
00:38:324 (3,4,1) - Some blanket and triangle pattern issues here. (Picture of the issue: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5240528)
00:55:467 (2,3) - Here's another blanket.

01:06:260 (1,2) - Switch NC, slider 2 is a new main beat, not 1.
01:34:832 (4,1) - Another one.

Thought on Easy:
Work on getting the patterns and blankets just right. If it's a result of the DS being too low, I'd advice amping it up for the whole diff to make them easier to place. (There are more blankets than what I mentioned, so I'd recheck them :3)

Lazer's Normal

00:08:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm very confused about why you have such a large combo here, but then choose to use three NC's on 00:13:562 (1,1,1) - here. Make the NC's consistent here. Idea: 00:08:959 (1) - , 00:10:228 (4) - , 00:11:498 (7) -, 00:12:768 (1) -, 00:15:308 (1) -, 00:14:038 (1) - should be NC'ed in this section.
00:21:657 (4,8) - Both should be NC'ed due to consistency.
00:25:467 (4) - You could NC this to spice 'em up even more, but that's up to you :3
00:25:943 (1) - I'm concerned about this spinner being too short (It's 3000 with auto, but a normal player doesn't spin much more than a 100 or 300). I'd consider just making it a break.
00:39:594 (1,3) - These two sliders overlap in a very unhealthy way, considering this is a normal.
00:41:657 (1) - Not sure if you're allowed to make 1/4 beats on normals.
00:50:705 (1,1) - Unrankable overlap, you have to change this.
00:53:403 (1) - The spinner starts too early for a normal. Almost 100% certain it's supposed to start a bit later.
01:02:292 (3,3) - Unhealthy overlap.
01:03:562 (1,1) - Another one.
^ You really need to be careful about those.
01:04:990 (1,1) - This one's really good, just pointing that out there. This is how they should be looking :3
01:08:165 (2,3,1) - Some blanket issues on 2 and 3.
01:26:419 (5) - NC for consistency reasons.
01:28:959 (5) - Another one.
01:36:578 (5) - NC for consistency.
^ I mentioned these three 'cause you're NC'ing at stuff like 01:34:038 (1) - , but not on those three.

Thought on Normal:
Some NC stuff in the beginning and ending, that I'd advice you to take a look at, as well as some tricky (and sometimes unrankable) overlaps.

Those are the ones I have time for right now, I'll return to the other four diffs later!
I wish you guys luck on your difficulties ^^
Remember to leave feedback so I can improve for future mods

Lazer

417 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2016-05-27T12:13:14+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
Lazer's Normal
00:08:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm very confused about why you have such a large combo here, but then choose to use three NC's on 00:13:562 (1,1,1) - here. Make the NC's consistent here. Idea: 00:08:959 (1) - , 00:10:228 (4) - , 00:11:498 (7) -, 00:12:768 (1) -, 00:15:308 (1) -, 00:14:038 (1) - should be NC'ed in this section.[/color] redone entire combo wth i forgot combos l0l
00:21:657 (4,8) - Both should be NC'ed due to consistency.
00:25:467 (4) - You could NC this to spice 'em up even more, but that's up to you :3
00:25:943 (1) - I'm concerned about this spinner being too short (It's 3000 with auto, but a normal player doesn't spin much more than a 100 or 300). I'd consider just making it a break. made slightly longer
00:39:594 (1,3) - These two sliders overlap in a very unhealthy way, considering this is a normal. changgged
00:41:657 (1) - Not sure if you're allowed to make 1/4 beats on normals. should b oki
00:50:705 (1,1) - Unrankable overlap, you have to change this. changedesu
00:53:403 (1) - The spinner starts too early for a normal. Almost 100% certain it's supposed to start a bit later.
01:02:292 (3,3) - Unhealthy overlap. should be oki
01:03:562 (1,1) - Another one. i like this cause its not unhealthy there shouldnt be a problem with this
^ You really need to be careful about those.
01:04:990 (1,1) - This one's really good, just pointing that out there. This is how they should be looking :3 YAY
01:08:165 (2,3,1) - Some blanket issues on 2 and 3. o shit oops
01:26:419 (5) - NC for consistency reasons.
01:28:959 (5) - Another one.
01:36:578 (5) - NC for consistency.
^ I mentioned these three 'cause you're NC'ing at stuff like 01:34:038 (1) - , but not on those three.

Thought on Normal:
Some NC stuff in the beginning and ending, that I'd advice you to take a look at, as well as some tricky (and sometimes unrankable) overlaps.

Those are the ones I have time for right now, I'll return to the other four diffs later!
I wish you guys luck on your difficulties ^^
Remember to leave feedback so I can improve for future mods

thank u friend u done good

big boobi bonanza

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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-05-28T14:00:13+00:00

hey! m4m sorry for the delay ):

[General]

Add soundtrack to the tags, maybe?
Also add Sekaii's old name to the tag
thats all

[Sekai's Easy]
@Sekai : hey i was posted a placeholder on your mod queue like weeks ago but i forgot to mod your map. i pm'ed you but no reply, so want me to mod one of your pending maps? sorry for the lateness back then

was reaalllly busy with school

00:03:879 (1,2) - minor spacing inconsistency here
00:12:927 (1,2,3) - why dont make this a triangle pattern instead?
00:20:546 (3) - reverse, finish maybe? there's a cymbal sound lol
00:24:197 (1,2) - nazi, blanket please
00:27:213 (4) - making this backside would make newbies confused imo, tried asked some low rank players to testplay they said its a bit confusing lol because the proximity of 00:27:213 (4) - tail and 00:26:260 (3) - which could cause a misread. i'd suggest you to make it like
this instead^^'
00:30:705 (1,2) - i believe the wave here could be better^^
00:38:006 (2,1) - no overlap please but eh i think this is fine since the gap is a bit long lol but just consider to change this
00:40:863 (3) - yeah this could be better too^^
00:44:673 (1) - ehhh... why dont stack this under 00:42:768 (2) - instead? rather making it overlapped with it, i'd stack it with the (2)'s tail
00:55:467 (2,3) - blanket lol
01:16:419 (3,4) - blanket xP oh and btw, why dont place them like this
SPOILER
so it could make a neat square pattern
01:34:832 (4,1) - blanket lol
01:36:578 (2) - wave, hmm you use the edgy one but this one is simple without any red node. which is kinda inconsistent, why dont you make it looks same instead? .

ok thats all, hope it helps^^ tell me if you dont understand what i mean

[Hikaru's Insane]

Testplayed lo

00:16:260 (5,6,7) - why the spacing here suddenly decreased?
00:31:816 (8) - any reason why there's an extra slider node in the middle? xD i believe its not needeed to make a blanket for 00:32:609 (2) - lol
00:36:419 (3,4,5,6) - i misread here. you suddenly put 1/4 kicksliders with a little big spacing. especially 00:36:736 (5,6) - idk why you put it downward. i'd ctrl+g 00:36:895 (6) - so players wont misread the sliders around here.
00:59:911 (1) - hmm, how about ctrl+j this? flows better imo as the tail is going upward and the next object is up too. not on the down lo
01:04:197 (1,1) - this feels weird... space them a bit larger please i was clicking 01:04:514 (1) - too early cuz i read it as 1/2 xd idk whats your thought on this and uh, any reason why 01:04:197 (1,1) - these are nc'ed? kinda unnecessary to add a nc lol also, 01:04:514 (1) - add soft finish maybe? Cx
01:22:292 - NC here? it went to 10 tho
01:24:673 (3,4) - please... most player would misread here because the stack. its unnecessary to do a stack here imo. i'd unstack 01:24:990 (4) - and stack it with 01:25:149 (1) - instead
01:29:752 (4) - somehow i misread the object here cuz the combined effect with 01:28:959 (1) - ? aaah idk xD

ok i think thats all hope it helps. fun diff, flowy. just some minor spacing issue and stuff but #yolo xD.

[Meg's Extra]

00:06:895 (2,3) - intentional stack? seems off here
00:39:355 - 00:39:514 - the beats here should be mapped imo. as this is an extra diff, you dont have any restriction to map the beat. i mean. it feels blank when you didnt map the drum breats
00:49:753 (1,1,1,1,1) - i feel like this is what makes the triangles here seems hard to read because. players mostly still focuses on the stacked part. well you are a high ranker player. this is just my opinion as a low rank player xD so why dont making them looks like 00:49:911 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - ? so it could have more variation than before(i think^^'')
01:01:816 (4,1) - blanket, feels off

pretty nice diff. cant mod it deeply, im really tired lol. and you handled the flows nicely btw :3

[]
2 More diffs aaaa im so tired now rip me. will continue it tomorrow xd

Last edited by Haruto 2016-06-02T15:22:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hikaru Rose

236 posts

Joined August 2014

Hikaru Rose 2016-05-29T11:15:40+00:00

Haruto wrote:
hey! m4m sorry for the delay ):

[General]
Add soundtrack to the tags, maybe?
Also add Sekaii's old name to the tag
thats all
[Hikaru's Insane]
Testplayed lo
00:16:260 (5,6,7) - why the spacing here suddenly decreased? - No reason, fixed
00:31:816 (8) - any reason why there's an extra slider node in the middle? xD i believe its not needeed to make a blanket for 00:32:609 (2) - lol -I also have no clue how that happened, fixed!
00:36:419 (3,4,5,6) - i misread here. you suddenly put 1/4 kicksliders with a little big spacing. especially 00:36:736 (5,6) - idk why you put it downward. i'd ctrl+g 00:36:895 (6) - so players wont misread the sliders around here. - That's what i did originally but i wasn't sure if that played awkward.. I guess i'll change it back
00:59:911 (1) - hmm, how about ctrl+j this? flows better imo as the tail is going upward and the next object is up too. not on the down lo - Done
01:04:197 (1,1) - this feels weird... space them a bit larger please i was clicking 01:04:514 (1) - too early cuz i read it as 1/2 xd idk whats your thought on this and uh, any reason why 01:04:197 (1,1) - these are nc'ed? kinda unnecessary to add a nc lol also, 01:04:514 (1) - add soft finish maybe? Cx - I NC'ed because i thought it would be easier to read that it is 1/1 because no follow point. Added the hitsound but keeping this as it is until more people complain about it~
01:22:292 - NC here? it went to 10 tho - I know it went to 10 qq But since there is no real reason other than the combo going to ten because there is a stream, i won't add a NC until more people complain about it
01:24:673 (3,4) - please... most player would misread here because the stack. its unnecessary to do a stack here imo. i'd unstack 01:24:990 (4) - and stack it with 01:25:149 (1) - instead -I'm keeping as it is right now but, again, if more people think this is weird, I will consider changing it !!
01:29:752 (4) - somehow i misread the object here cuz the combined effect with 01:28:959 (1) - ? aaah idk xD - Even I break hear idk what it is but i changed it haha

ok i think thats all hope it helps. fun diff, flowy. just some minor spacing issue and stuff but #yolo xD.
[]
i think thats all, will continue to mod tomorrow(?) i guess... i wanna do something lol just poke me tomorrow
Good luck!

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-06-09T12:38:10+00:00

m4m

[General]
make sure all diffs have video enabled

[Extra]
rhythms seem fine here so i'll do a nazi aesthetic mod
00:10:705 (2,3,4) - u could make this look nicer by moving 00:10:863 (3) - in line to make a triangle
00:11:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i mean yeah the pattern looks cool and all except you are reducing ds and the lowest ds is used for the downbeat 00:12:768 (1) - when it should be accented with more ds
00:15:943 (4) - looks rubbish imo. i would move the red slider point so u can see a bigger bend
00:17:054 (3) - this blanket looks bad because 00:16:578 (1) curves towards it for a bit and makes it look cramped. why not copy 00:17:371 (4) - this slider and form a blanket. you also achieve a better flow.
00:18:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - equilateral triangles please
00:19:911 (4,5) - flow is way too sharp. u could just ctrl h 00:19:911 (4) - or something
00:26:736 (1) - these sliders are mostly used for structure and theres no forms of blanketing around it so i'd choose a different slider. also it kinda looks messy since the bend isn't in the middle
00:26:736 (1,3) - and o god what an overlap
00:28:959 (6) - earlier you made triangle patterns 00:28:165 (1,2,3) - but then the reverse flow here kinda kills the flow so u should move this to like the x: 320 y: 280 region.
00:33:244 (1) - ctrl g this or something. the downbeat should be accented
00:43:879 (6,1) - fix blanket
00:54:355 (1,2) - these two are completely different sv so should be on the same combo i'd remove 00:54:355 (1) - this combo
01:01:181 (1) - i'd ctrl g this for flow. currently its too sharp
01:11:340 (1,4) - i would stack
01:13:403 (4) - feels like its awkwardly thrown towards the bottom of the playfield imo. stack on 01:12:292 (5) - end
01:23:244 (3,1) - take a second to look at the ds you've chosen | 01:23:244 (3,1) - is 1.35x ds | 01:23:562 (1,2) - is 2.5x ds. n i c e. definitely going to be some reading issues here for people thinking 01:23:244 (3,1) - is 1/2
01:34:514 (2) - i would make this slider look more like http://puu.sh/pmqAZ/2fc9844663.jpg so that it works with the follow point

also another thing i'd like to mention is that you tend to over use finishes. based on the mod you gave me to l o l. i'll give u a couple of examples. if you turn off hitsounds completely and just listen to the music you'll notice that 00:54:832 (1) - has a cymbal crash but 00:56:102 (1) - doesn't. and it seems u've spammed them every so often when theres a new combo eg. 00:58:641 (1) - 01:01:181 (1) - 01:02:451 (1) - but it doesn't remain consistent which is another issue like how 01:06:260 (1) - doesn't have one yet i can't hear the difference. for me i'd use finishes for new sections or cymbal crashes eg. 00:59:911 (1) - but you don't even have one here xd. so yeeahh you probably should use another hitsound if u want to emphasise every new combo and keep finishes for new sections. pce

Syph

848 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Syph 2016-06-09T19:35:13+00:00

Pentori wrote:
m4m

[General]
make sure all diffs have video enabled

[Extra]
rhythms seem fine here so i'll do a nazi aesthetic mod
00:10:705 (2,3,4) - u could make this look nicer by moving 00:10:863 (3) - in line to make a triangle sure
00:11:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i mean yeah the pattern looks cool and all except you are reducing ds and the lowest ds is used for the downbeat 00:12:768 (1) - when it should be accented with more ds i think spacing is fine actually
00:15:943 (4) - looks rubbish imo. i would move the red slider point so u can see a bigger bend changed it a little bit
00:17:054 (3) - this blanket looks bad because 00:16:578 (1) curves towards it for a bit and makes it look cramped. why not copy 00:17:371 (4) - this slider and form a blanket. you also achieve a better flow. fixd
00:18:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - equilateral triangles please xd
00:19:911 (4,5) - flow is way too sharp. u could just ctrl h 00:19:911 (4) - or something yup done
00:26:736 (1) - these sliders are mostly used for structure and theres no forms of blanketing around it so i'd choose a different slider. also it kinda looks messy since the bend isn't in the middle ok now its a rly cute curved slider
00:26:736 (1,3) - and o god what an overlap
00:28:959 (6) - earlier you made triangle patterns 00:28:165 (1,2,3) - but then the reverse flow here kinda kills the flow so u should move this to like the x: 320 y: 280 region. idk i like how this plays lol
00:33:244 (1) - ctrl g this or something. the downbeat should be accented did something
00:43:879 (6,1) - fix blanket fixd
00:54:355 (1,2) - these two are completely different sv so should be on the same combo i'd remove 00:54:355 (1) - this combo oh whoops, fixed
01:01:181 (1) - i'd ctrl g this for flow. currently its too sharp did something else
01:11:340 (1,4) - i would stack ok
01:13:403 (4) - feels like its awkwardly thrown towards the bottom of the playfield imo. stack on 01:12:292 (5) - end sure
01:23:244 (3,1) - take a second to look at the ds you've chosen | 01:23:244 (3,1) - is 1.35x ds | 01:23:562 (1,2) - is 2.5x ds. n i c e. definitely going to be some reading issues here for people thinking 01:23:244 (3,1) - is 1/2 haven't seen anyone fuck this part up yet lol, changed it a bit anyway
01:34:514 (2) - i would make this slider look more like http://puu.sh/pmqAZ/2fc9844663.jpg so that it works with the follow point looks fine

also another thing i'd like to mention is that you tend to over use finishes. based on the mod you gave me to l o l. i'll give u a couple of examples. if you turn off hitsounds completely and just listen to the music you'll notice that 00:54:832 (1) - has a cymbal crash but 00:56:102 (1) - doesn't. and it seems u've spammed them every so often when theres a new combo eg. 00:58:641 (1) - 01:01:181 (1) - 01:02:451 (1) - but it doesn't remain consistent which is another issue like how 01:06:260 (1) - doesn't have one yet i can't hear the difference. for me i'd use finishes for new sections or cymbal crashes eg. 00:59:911 (1) - but you don't even have one here xd. so yeeahh you probably should use another hitsound if u want to emphasise every new combo and keep finishes for new sections. i'll rework hitsounds sometime lo, theyre kinda old pce

thanks~

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-06-11T02:37:50+00:00

[General]
missing video on normal and hikaru's
your soft-hitnormal sounds ugly, theres a reason why it is a slidertick sound

[Sekai's Easy]

00:37:054 (1,2,3) - tiny spacing error
01:23:879 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/ponEg/745bce5ae7.jpg this plays better imo

[Lazer's Normal]

Looks more like an advanced you have a lot heavy 1/2 sections, try to use more 1/1 gaps for a better spread
00:15:943 (2,1) - avoid covering objects with sliderbodies. (1) is almost entirely covered
00:41:657 (1) - you never use 1/4 on normals

[-Tochi's Hard]

hitsounding isnt really good, i know u copied them from syph's diff and tahts why lol so i reccomend to take a look over them or use meg/hikaru's
01:04:990 - the kiai must be here lol
besides that cool diff

[Hikaru's Insane]

00:36:419 (3,4,5,6) - this is too much for this diff, even extra has circles so pls use them instead
00:39:276 (4,5,6,7) - youre the only one that noticed the 1/4s here xd
01:19:276 (7) - sliderbody is offscreen
00:49:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - the pattern is nice but there is so low movement, this really deserves more emphasis
01:24:514 (2,3) - circles pls
nice aesthetics rly liked that

[Meg's Extra]

00:26:737 (8,1) - a 1/2 slider works better than this. finish must be here 00:26:737 - like the other diffs
00:39:276 (5) - look at hikaru's
00:40:149 (3) - thats overmapped

[Extra]

idk how to extra but what i know is 00:08:959 - 00:42:133 - you have a lot wrongly placed claps during this secions and the hitsounding is kinda poor too. try follow higher hikaru/meg hitsounds. not only that section but thats which needs more improvement

gl

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-06-11T09:58:10+00:00

pkhg wrote:
[-Tochi's Hard]
hitsounding isnt really good, i know u copied them from syph's diff and tahts why lol so i reccomend to take a look over them or use meg/hikaru's Fixed!
01:04:990 - the kiai must be here lol wait, i don't it fits there tbh
besides that cool diff
gl

Thanks for the mod!

update

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402,372,45149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,353,45308,2,0,P|284:351|254:357,1,59.5000011348725,0|2,3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
169,380,45625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,327,45784,6,0,P|106:273|104:206,1,119.000002269745,6|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,122,46260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,122,46419,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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258,107,46816,1,0,3:0:0:0:
258,107,46895,1,0,3:0:0:0:
341,75,47054,6,0,B|395:60|395:60|456:83,1,119.000002269745,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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435,334,48006,1,2,3:2:0:0:
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124,124,49435,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,170,49594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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107,221,51657,2,0,P|110:188|107:162,1,59.5000011348725,8|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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298,102,53403,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53562,12,8,54514,0:0:0:0:
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182,319,55308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,301,55467,2,0,P|69:260|112:191,1,140,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,70,56578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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297,99,61816,2,0,P|237:119|155:103,1,140,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,157,64832,6,0,P|272:143|201:149,1,140,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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27,154,67689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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82,295,74832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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439,197,76102,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,113,76260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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143,233,78800,6,0,P|148:177|143:89,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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59,143,79435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,138,81181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,50,81340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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387,212,82133,2,0,P|355:218|313:214,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,207,82371,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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425,179,83879,5,0,3:0:0:0:
332,323,84197,1,0,3:0:0:0:
254,174,84514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,240,84990,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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149,87,86102,1,2,3:2:0:0:
229,142,86260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,88,86419,6,0,P|379:87|454:107,1,140,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,220,87530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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255,175,88641,1,2,3:2:0:0:
185,105,88800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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324,288,89752,1,4,3:2:0:0:
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497,358,92451,1,2,3:2:0:0:
504,260,92609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,214,92768,6,0,P|350:212|273:220,1,140,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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29,193,93721,1,2,3:2:0:0:
61,101,93879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,136,94038,6,0,L|296:131,1,140,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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495,151,94832,1,2,3:2:0:0:
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461,312,95308,6,0,P|405:300|348:313,1,112,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
280,354,95784,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,354,95943,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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25,212,97054,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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241,192,97848,6,0,P|174:266|273:279,1,245,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,207,99276,5,2,0:0:0:0:
338,207,99435,1,0,3:0:0:0:
411,272,99594,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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-Nya-

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Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2016-06-13T13:34:27+00:00

Heya~ M4M here.

General:

The resolution of the BG is not right. It has to be either 1366X768 or 1024X768.

Extra:

00:09:435 (3) –Curving this slider a bit will give you better flow:
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00:10:705 (2,5) –Rather stack this or place the notes like you did here: 00:09:911 (5,1) –
00:14:038 (1) –This slider isn’t placed correctly. Rather this:
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00:18:324 (3) –Rather place this circle like this:
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It’ll look neater.
00:19:117 (1,4) –This overlap doesn’t look that good. Perhaps try something like this instead:
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00:21:340 (1) –This new combo feels unnecessary. Rather remove it because I don’t really hear anything in the music that suggest a new combo here.
00:23:086 (1) –I think you should rather place this slider where the long vocal is. And the long vocal is here: 00:22:927 – so maybe try something like this:
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00:23:086 (1,3) –This can look neater. Without the overlap. Maybe try something like this:
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00:24:197 (5) –Rather add new combo here (since the strong vocal is on that circle) and remove new combo here: 00:24:355 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:24:514 (2) – and remove new combo here: 00:24:673 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:24:832 (2) – and remove new combo here: 00:24:990 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:25:149 (2) – and remove new combo here: 00:25:308 (1) –
00:25:467 (2) –Also add new combo here because of the strong finish sound and remove new combo here: 00:25:784 (1) –
00:44:514 (1,5) –Stack here.
01:17:054 (5) –To be consistent with the previous new combos, you should add new combo here and remove new combo here: 01:17:371 (1) –

Meg’s Extra:

The HP is higher than Syph’s Extra (which is the hardest diff) so I suggest lowering the HP to 5.3 or something.
00:06:895 (2,3) –Perfect this stack by moving (3) one pixel downwards and then one pixel to the right.
00:16:578 (1,2) –Creating a blanket here will look neater imo:
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00:41:181 (3) –Rather Ctrl+G this slider so it doesn’t go in the same direction as 00:40:705 (1) –
00:48:959 (3,2) –Try to perfect this stack for neatness reasons.
00:52:292 (5) –Rather add new combo here because there’s a strong beat/finish here and then remove new combo here: 00:52:451 (1) –
00:52:610 (2) –Move this slider a bit to the right so it’s in-line with 00:52:451 (1) – for a better flow.
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Hikaru’s Insane:

Your HP is higher than the hardest diff’s HP so rather lower the HP to 5.5
00:07:689 (1,4) –Please perfect this stack. It’ll look neater.
00:17:054 (2) –Since the vocals start on the head of this slider, rather add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:16:895 (1) –
00:33:721 (2,4) –Perfect this stack for neatness reasons.
00:36:736 (5,6) –Increase the spacing between these two sliders a bit because it looks a bit weird that this spacing looks so different from 00:36:419 (3,4,5) – but they have the same rhythm.
01:24:990 (4) –I don’t really like this placement. It looks a bit untidy. Rather place this circle on the tail of 01:24:673 (3) –

-Tochi’s Hard:

Wow, your HP is definitely too high. Please lower it to 5.
Your OD can actually be lowered as well. Try 6.
00:35:784 (5) –I think you missed a new combo here. For consistency.
00:36:419 (7,1) –This stack can be improved. Move 00:37:054 (1) – 1 pixel to the right.
00:51:498 (5,6,1) –These overlaps don’t look that great. To avoid it, maybe try this instead:
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Lazer’s Normal:

Rather lower the approach rate to 5. Six seems rather high.
Your slider velocity is also very high. The Easy is 0.80 which makes it a gap of 0.4 which is pretty high, so I suggest a slider velocity of 1.00
00:15:943 (2,1) –I don’t really advise any stacks like this in a Normal since it can cause confusion. There may be more similar cases like this.
00:25:625 (1) –Rather start this spinner here: 00:25:625 – It fits better imo and the current gap there feels empty.
00:37:054 (1,1) –Rather avoid making sliders like this in a Normal and Easy since it can be confusing for beginners because the tails of the sliders overlap the bodies of the sliders, making it hard to distinguish the flow.
00:41:657 (1) –This repeat slider looks rather difficult for a Normal. Usually these fit better in harder diffs. Rather follow the vocals so try using a pattern like this:
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00:53:403 (1,1) –The reaction time between the spinner and the next note is rather short. There has to be at least 2 beats between the spinner and the next note.

Sekai’s Easy:

00:17:689 (2) –Try this for better flow:
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00:42:768 (2,1) –Rather stack here to avoid the overlap.
01:16:419 (3) –Move the tail of this slider to the right a bit to form a blanket with 01:17:371 (4) –
01:38:006 (1) –It’ll be better to end the spinner here: 01:40:228 –

Good Luck~!

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-06-13T13:57:39+00:00

hi

personally i do think using soft whistle as hitnormal was kinda weird, since you can maximize the instrument emphasize if you used the whistle rhythmically instead of spamming.

[Extra]
ai stuffs, Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:54:750 - snap to 00:54:752
00:55:068 - snap to 00:55:070
01:01:417 - snap to 01:01:419
01:06:576 - snap to 01:06:578

00:15:149 (6) - 00:27:213 (2) - 00:28:482 (3) - 00:29:752 (2) - 00:31:022 (3) - 00:32:292 (1) -
00:33:562 (2) - 00:34:197 (6) - 00:34:832 (2) - 00:35:467 (5) - 00:36:419 (1) - 01:15:784 (1) - missing clap
idk if this was did on purpose, but there're supposed to be a clap there for the 2/4 clap rhythm

00:04:673 (4,5,5) - i dont think the claps fit well there, you can't hear any kind of snare drum and would decrease the emphasizement of the one which provided by the bgm 00:05:149 (1,2) -
00:24:990 (1,1) - same, you can clearly hear it on the song
00:32:133 - 3/4 spacing is kinda uncomfortable to play on extra diff, how about adding note here ? it would make the gap 1/1 which more common. also you can hear a sound here
00:41:498 (4) - adding finish here would sounds smoothly along with the slightly cymbal crash on the music
00:52:609 (3,4,5,6,7) - might aswell adding some Nc's here for forgiving hp drain, like you did at 00:49:752 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
01:20:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:56:419 (2,5) - this could look neater with same shaped slider
01:00:863 (7) - i wonder why you didn't silent this slidertail just like you did at 01:01:419 - , you know this one isn't really prominent
01:19:594 (4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't look so good, space them a bit or just remake the bend ?

[Meg Extra]
00:05:943 (4,1) - spacing can be confusing since players may expect more movement here because of the big jump at the section before, try changing rhythm ? like note here then the 1/2 slider started at 00:06:102 - might be a better play
00:21:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - isn't this section supposed to be 1 nc per 2 beat ? it's different with 00:16:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:26:737 (8,1) - weird rhythm, the phase is changing at the red tick 00:26:736 - hinted by the cymbal hit, so you should end the stream there instead
00:39:276 (5,6) - you may want to add stream here ?
00:45:308 (4) - the clap doesn't fit good here
01:14:197 (3) - add nc to help the readibility of anti jump ?
01:39:276 (1) - finish

[Hikaru Insane]
00:08:006 (2) - there're need to be a clap here too, change additions to soft then add it
00:49:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - personally im confused with the stacks lul xD
00:52:609 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some nc's for prettier jump pattern ?
01:19:276 (7) - slightly offscreen, move this a bit up
01:23:244 (2) - finish ? , it fit 01:22:768 (1) - which have similiar sound
01:24:990 (4) - hard to read, add nc or something as they're on the different rhyhtm yet spaced just like 1/4 stream

[Tochi Hard]
00:15:943 (3,4) - doesn't flow good, maybe you can place (4) somehow downside to create a jump or smth 00:15:943 (3,4) -
00:24:990 (3,4) - claps.. am i the one sensing hs copier ? if yes check the missing clap on extra diff's mod.
00:15:784 (2) - 00:16:419 (4) - 00:28:800 (3) - 00:34:514 (1) - here and there.
00:11:181 (4) - the clap was supposed to be on the slidertail '-'
00:36:736 - tbh ignoring those beats is a kind of waste, i'd consider some notes there
00:50:705 (3,4) - add nc on one of them to keep the nc rhythm per 1 downbeat
00:56:102 (1) - finish doesn't sounds good here
01:04:038 - add note
01:04:832 (1) - err.. better to start the slider on the downbeat for asdfghjkl obvious reason, change to note and 1/2 slider ?

[Lazer Normal]
ouch a very dense rhythm yet huge 1/2 spacing, this more like an advanced diff imo. which make the spread into easy diff pretty bad. skipping this diff

[Sekai Easy]
00:06:419 (3) - isn't there supposed to be a nc here ?
00:08:959 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is bad, pls recheck it. i think you know what's better
01:38:006 (1) - i'd consider starting the spinner 1/2 earlier because the instrument starts there

fyi the spread from normal can be a problem imo, try ask some qat / bn 's for spread opinion ?

gl

-Tochi

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Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-06-13T15:33:27+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Heya~ M4M here.
-Tochi’s Hard:
Wow, your HP is definitely too high. Please lower it to 5. Ok
Your OD can actually be lowered as well. Try 6. 6.5
00:35:784 (5) –I think you missed a new combo here. For consistency. Fixed!
00:36:419 (7,1) –This stack can be improved. Move 00:37:054 (1) – 1 pixel to the right. nazi but ok =.=
00:51:498 (5,6,1) –These overlaps don’t look that great. To avoid it, maybe try this instead: I like more as it flow better.
Picture

Good Luck~!

Thanks for the mod!

update

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-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-06-13T15:55:38+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hi
[Tochi Hard]
00:15:943 (3,4) - doesn't flow good, maybe you can place (4) somehow downside to create a jump or smth 00:15:943 (3,4) - I stacked it, so it feels like a jump.
00:24:990 (3,4) - claps.. am i the one sensing hs copier ? if yes check the missing clap on extra diff's mod. Syph didn't update my diff yet, so yeah it still got the old hitsoundings.
00:15:784 (2) - 00:16:419 (4) - 00:28:800 (3) - 00:34:514 (1) - here and there.
00:11:181 (4) - the clap was supposed to be on the slidertail '-'
00:36:736 - tbh ignoring those beats is a kind of waste, i'd consider some notes there Yeah, but i followed the vocals here so i don't mind.
00:50:705 (3,4) - add nc on one of them to keep the nc rhythm per 1 downbeat Fixed!
00:56:102 (1) - finish doesn't sounds good here
01:04:038 - add note Fixed!
01:04:832 (1) - err.. better to start the slider on the downbeat for asdfghjkl obvious reason, change to note and 1/2 slider ? The beat before dominates as the vocal starts there too D:
gl

Thanks for the mod!

update

osu file format v14

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Title:Hanikamu Kimi ni Koi Suru Watashi
TitleUnicode:はにかむキミに恋するワタシ
Artist:i.o
ArtistUnicode:i.o
Creator:Syph
Version:-Tochi's Hard
Source:はにかみCLOVER
Tags:すたじお緑茶 visual novel opening op Meg Lazer -Tochi HikaruR Sekaii
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88,50,81340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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254,174,84514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,240,84990,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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149,87,86102,1,2,3:2:0:0:
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255,175,88641,1,2,3:2:0:0:
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324,288,89752,1,4,3:2:0:0:
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Syph

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Syph 2016-06-14T22:38:24+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Heya~ M4M here.

General:
The resolution of the BG is not right. It has to be either 1366X768 or 1024X768. ya i'll try looking for a higher res version soon

Extra:

I increased hp in my diff to 6,2 so others dont have to lower it as much, just putting it here so others hopefully see it
oh and I removed the soft hitnormal xd

00:09:435 (3) –Curving this slider a bit will give you better flow: sure
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00:10:705 (2,5) –Rather stack this or place the notes like you did here: 00:09:911 (5,1) – changed it a little bit i guess
00:14:038 (1) –This slider isn’t placed correctly. Rather this: whoops ;w;
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00:18:324 (3) –Rather place this circle like this: oki
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It’ll look neater.
00:19:117 (1,4) –This overlap doesn’t look that good. Perhaps try something like this instead: ohh good idea
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00:21:340 (1) –This new combo feels unnecessary. Rather remove it because I don’t really hear anything in the music that suggest a new combo here. i nc'd cuz of the 1/2 break, i think it should be fine
00:23:086 (1) –I think you should rather place this slider where the long vocal is. And the long vocal is here: 00:22:927 – so maybe try something like this: i'd rather keep this on the sound thats in the background idk what its called lol
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00:23:086 (1,3) –This can look neater. Without the overlap. Maybe try something like this: o sure
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00:24:197 (5) –Rather add new combo here (since the strong vocal is on that circle) and remove new combo here: 00:24:355 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:24:514 (2) – and remove new combo here: 00:24:673 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:24:832 (2) – and remove new combo here: 00:24:990 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:25:149 (2) – and remove new combo here: 00:25:308 (1) – done!
00:25:467 (2) –Also add new combo here because of the strong finish sound and remove new combo here: 00:25:784 (1) – ok
00:44:514 (1,5) –Stack here. ok
01:17:054 (5) –To be consistent with the previous new combos, you should add new combo here and remove new combo here: 01:17:371 (1) – done

Good Luck~!

Momochikun wrote:
hi

personally i do think using soft whistle as hitnormal was kinda weird, since you can maximize the instrument emphasize if you used the whistle rhythmically instead of spamming.

[Extra]
ai stuffs, Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:54:750 - snap to 00:54:752
00:55:068 - snap to 00:55:070
01:01:417 - snap to 01:01:419
01:06:576 - snap to 01:06:578

fixed ^

00:15:149 (6) - 00:27:213 (2) - 00:28:482 (3) - 00:29:752 (2) - 00:31:022 (3) - 00:32:292 (1) -
00:33:562 (2) - 00:34:197 (6) - 00:34:832 (2) - 00:35:467 (5) - 00:36:419 (1) - 01:15:784 (1) - missing clap
idk if this was did on purpose, but there're supposed to be a clap there for the 2/4 clap rhythm fixed all, shitty old hitsounding lol. i'll check it properly tomorrow or something

00:04:673 (4,5,5) - i dont think the claps fit well there, you can't hear any kind of snare drum and would decrease the emphasizement of the one which provided by the bgm 00:05:149 (1,2) - yup fixed
00:24:990 (1,1) - same, you can clearly hear it on the song there's a drum on those D:
00:32:133 - 3/4 spacing is kinda uncomfortable to play on extra diff, how about adding note here ? it would make the gap 1/1 which more common. also you can hear a sound here sure
00:41:498 (4) - adding finish here would sounds smoothly along with the slightly cymbal crash on the music done
00:52:609 (3,4,5,6,7) - might aswell adding some Nc's here for forgiving hp drain, like you did at 00:49:752 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - done
01:20:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ mmm i think this is fine
00:56:419 (2,5) - this could look neater with same shaped slider didn't use same slider but changed it to something else
01:00:863 (7) - i wonder why you didn't silent this slidertail just like you did at 01:01:419 - , you know this one isn't really prominent whoops
01:19:594 (4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't look so good, space them a bit or just remake the bend ? i tried

fyi the spread from normal can be a problem imo, try ask some qat / bn 's for spread opinion ? will do~

gl

thanks for modding <3

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