hi just leaving some suggestion here
[ JuDa's Kantan]
[ Nofool's Muzukashii]
[ JuDa's Kantan]
- 00:18:235 - ~00:28:132 - because this part follows vocal and brass instrument, so i suggest you remove 00:30:297 (5) - and 00:28:751 (2,3) - to make these part more balance each other
- 00:34:318 (12) - move to 00:35:245 - ,the reason is same as above
- 01:18:854 - ~01:23:493 - i prefer to use spinner here, but it is up to you
- 00:06:946 (14) - try to remove the finisher to enhance the power of 00:07:410 (15) -
- 00:06:483 (13) - change to k to make difference with 00:06:946 (14) -
- 00:20:400 (46,47) - reverse and change 00:21:019 (48,49) - to k (or follow 00:30:606 (76,77,78) - ) to follow the vocal properly
- try to add notes on 00:54:421 - ,00:54:730 - and 00:55:039 -
- 01:19:163 (59) - ,01:21:637 (67) - try to remove them and add d on 01:21:019 -
[ Nofool's Muzukashii]
- 00:06:946 (19) - try to remove the finisher, i feel the vocal here is not very powerful , and if remove the finish, the incoming K would be more powerful to play,and if you accept, 00:06:483 (16,17,18) - change to kkk would be better
- 01:26:895 (125,126,127,128) - ^
- 00:54:111 - how about adding some notes on this part?
- 00:06:946 (27) - 建議改成小d感覺這裡沒有非常強烈的音
- 01:27:359 - ^
- 00:07:720 (29) - 不知為何感覺這個d跟前面的K打起來有點不合,建議可以刪掉,不過不強迫
- 01:12:513 (411,412) - 建議顏色調換,打起來會比較舒服,然後01:11:740 (406) - 改成k
- 00:06:946 (28) - as i said on futsuu
- 01:27:358 (568) - ^
- 01:23:802 (551) - try to change this note to D
- 01:25:967 (559) - change to k , the vocal's pitch is higher
- 00:05:555 (19) - ^