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Doyak

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Doyak 2016-04-23T05:39:46+00:00

13:41 Dino99: Hello~
13:46 Doyak: Yo~ sup?
13:46 Dino99: Could you testplay my new map?? :3
13:46 Doyak: Oh but my tablet is not working lol
13:46 Doyak: I'd rather mod it lol
13:46 Dino99: q.q
13:47 Dino99: lol
13:47 *Dino99 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/958514 Diana Garnet - Spinning World]
13:47 Dino99: IRC Mod?? owo
13:47 *Dino99 runs
13:47 Doyak: I remember seeing you on very old maps wow
13:47 Dino99: lol
13:47 Dino99: haha
13:47 Dino99: I'm an old mapper >.>
13:47 Dino99: Long time no map..
13:48 Doyak: I ranked 2 maps with the same song you ranked xD
13:48 Dino99: !!
13:48 Dino99: OMG
13:48 Dino99:

13:49 Doyak: Ok here goes a quick mod
13:49 Doyak: (want a ticket though xD)
13:50 Dino99: haha sure you can ask me for a mod next time!! ^^
13:50 Dino99: But not now, I got too many requests now QQ
13:50 Dino99: thanks!
13:50 Doyak: on Easy
13:51 Doyak: 00:26:755 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Some people consider as polarity issue
13:51 Doyak: as 3/2 terms aren't very easy
13:51 Doyak: You can consider using a slider after every 3/2 terms
13:51 Doyak: or making them into 3/2 reverses instead
13:52 Doyak: a circle after 3/2 term is very hard to get 300s on
13:53 Dino99: Hmm
13:53 Dino99: Yea I know :/
13:53 Dino99: This song is a bit hard to make
13:53 Dino99: haha
13:53 Dino99: I'll consider it for a while >.>
13:53 Doyak: 00:40:167 (1,2) - You can consider http://puu.sh/ossMN/9e1efdfdde.jpg
13:54 Doyak: 00:44:226 (2,3) - make into a slider too
13:54 Doyak: 00:52:520 - hmm feels too empty for me, add a circle?
13:55 Doyak: 01:02:579 (1,2) - Oh you don't need to stick to the red ones here, as the white ticks are quite strong here too
13:55 Doyak: it's just rather a complicated rhythm for easy
13:56 Doyak: http://puu.sh/ossUx/80a577994b.jpg
13:56 Doyak: This would work pretty well
13:57 Dino99: lol
13:57 Dino99: you keep suggesting, I check slowly ^^
13:58 Doyak: 01:15:461 (2) - I think this should start at 01:15:285 - , but you're not gonna use 1/2 term, so you can reduce 01:13:873 (1) - to 01:14:579 - as well
13:58 Doyak: Sure, you can keep your pace

13:58 Doyak: 01:11:049 (1,2,3) - is a quite hard rhythm too, you can bind 2 and 3 into a slider too
13:59 Doyak: 01:22:520 - insert a break?
13:59 Doyak: oh I'd just rather suggest mapping all
13:59 Doyak: including the spinner part
14:00 Doyak: 01:25:343 (1,2) - these two 'leftover' notes feel kinda weird for me
14:01 Doyak: Oh the title is Spinning World so you may keep the spinner haha
14:02 Dino99: lol
14:02 Dino99: So many suggestions on Easy
14:02 Doyak: Most are about similar issues though
14:02 Dino99: I don't really know I should follow vocal or basic beats
14:02 Dino99: =w=
14:02 Dino99: yea
14:03 Doyak: btw, turn off Widescreen Support on Easy and Insane
14:04 Dino99: I see
14:04 Doyak: Normal:
14:04 Doyak: 00:04:696 (3,4) - fix the blanket
14:04 Doyak: 00:06:285 (1,2) - make it more straight?
14:04 Doyak: also I would suggest not using grid snap as they are useless on this kind of mapping and only hurts the distance snap
14:05 Dino99: lol
14:05 Dino99: I always open it
14:05 Dino99: @_@
14:05 Doyak: 00:18:990 (3,4) - oh please make it balanced xD
14:06 Dino99: Consider
14:06 Dino99: :3
14:06 Dino99: It's fine too now IMO
14:06 Doyak: 00:28:167 (1,2) - I think the NC should go to 2 instead
14:06 Doyak: 00:30:990 (1) - and not in here
14:07 Dino99: Hmm
14:07 Dino99: I follow the Guitar sound
14:07 Dino99: The NC is fine to me!
14:07 Doyak: Alright then
14:08 Dino99: Sorry I'm insist xD
14:08 Doyak: I don't care if you decline, if you tell me your own reasons xD
14:08 Dino99: yea
14:08 Dino99:

14:09 Doyak: looks fine for me
14:10 Dino99: glad to hear that!
14:10 Doyak: You could have used some more circles, but it's up to you
14:10 Dino99: hahaha
14:10 Doyak: (instead of sliders)
14:10 Dino99: 1:3
14:10 Dino99: circle:slider
14:10 Doyak: It actually worries me a bit, but would be fine I guess
14:10 Dino99: lol
14:11 Doyak: as the Hard has so many circles
14:11 Dino99: >.<
14:11 Dino99: Lomg time no map
14:11 Dino99: xD
14:11 Dino99: Never think it's a good map :3
14:11 Dino99: just wanna try
14:11 Dino99: make it raned
14:11 Dino99: ranked
14:11 Dino99: :>
14:12 Doyak: Your map isn't bad, just a biiiiiiiiiiit out of the trend
14:12 Dino99: =w=
14:12 Doyak: especially about the spread
14:12 Dino99: haha
14:12 Dino99: noooooo
14:12 Dino99: Others said that too
14:13 Dino99: Spread bad??
14:13 Dino99: q.q
14:13 Dino99: Unrankable??
14:13 Doyak: Ok now I'm actually concerned LOL
14:13 Dino99: orz
14:14 Doyak: This Hard is pretty much Insane-styled
14:14 Dino99: xD
14:14 Dino99: Hmm
14:14 Doyak: so many overlaps, a lot of wide jumps and things
14:14 *Dino99 is crying
14:14 Dino99:

14:14 Dino99: But the flow nice!
14:15 Doyak: You can easily fix this if you wanna be safe though
14:15 Dino99: I see
14:15 Doyak: You can make an Advanced diff between Normal and Hard
14:15 Dino99: wow
14:15 Dino99:

14:15 Dino99: nice idea!
14:15 Doyak: Oh it's not a nice idea lol
14:15 Doyak: Many mappers do this nowadays
14:16 Dino99: haha
14:16 Dino99: I can't follow the trend
14:16 Dino99: =w=
14:16 Doyak: Also use AR7.5 on Hard, or maybe even 8 works fine
14:18 Dino99: ok lol
14:18 Doyak: 00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - this can be a bit confusing, as not only the overlap makes it hard to read, but 00:14:049 (1,2) - is actually kind of a jump
14:18 Doyak: but there were no jumps before, so it's kinda sudden
14:19 Dino99: hmm
14:19 Dino99: slider -> slider
14:19 Dino99: is easier
14:19 Dino99: I think it's fine.....
14:19 Dino99: orz
14:20 Doyak: 00:14:402 (2) - rather Ctrl+G this then?
14:21 Dino99: Hmm I think it flows better now, and I wanna a jump at 00:14:402 (2,1) -
14:21 Doyak: 00:29:579 (3,4) - reduce the DS like 00:28:696 (1,2) - and only leave a jump on 00:29:932 (4,1) - this?
14:22 Dino99: Hmm I think it's better now
14:22 Dino99: The DS isn't big
14:22 Dino99: :3
14:22 Doyak: 00:42:990 (1,2) - this jump is too big and sudden imo, you can reduce it a bit
14:23 Dino99: ok
14:23 Dino99:

14:23 Doyak: 01:06:637 (3,4,5,6) - This flow is really hard for a Hard diff to be honest, try something else?
14:24 Dino99: xD
14:24 Dino99: yea...
14:24 Dino99: Why I do that
14:24 Dino99: =w=
14:24 Dino99: It looks like a Insane
14:24 Dino99: I'll change it late
14:24 Doyak: 01:13:167 (3) - I hope the end of the slider is clickable, and there's nothing strong on the head
14:24 Dino99: later
14:25 Dino99: I understand
14:25 Dino99: Hmm
14:25 Dino99: I may fix it later
14:25 Dino99: now I don't know how to change
14:25 Dino99: = =
14:25 Doyak: http://puu.sh/osuaU/6c00d52066.jpg
14:25 Doyak: Just this rhythm I guess?
14:26 Dino99: nice
14:26 Dino99: :3
14:27 Doyak: 01:26:402 (5,6,7) - rather than this, http://puu.sh/osueJ/a95f66d09b.jpg this feels better for me
14:27 Doyak: There's a good drum on 01:26:755 - too
14:28 Doyak: 01:28:167 (3) - move this to around 385, 163? going to the center is better imo, also that's where the 2 ends
14:29 Doyak: now on Insane
14:30 Doyak: 00:17:402 - Somehow make this clickable? or special? as there's a strong drum here
14:30 Dino99: hmm
14:30 Dino99: I think this one is fine
14:30 Doyak: 00:22:167 (2,3) - bind into a slider? This can emphasize the 00:22:520 (1,2,3,4) - guitar sounds too
14:31 Dino99: not bad
14:31 Dino99: o.o
14:32 Doyak: I feel a lot of 1/4s you used are overmapped, is it just me?
14:32 Doyak: I bought a cheap new earphone yesterday, so I'm not sure lol
14:33 Dino99: lol
14:33 Dino99: only you
14:33 Dino99:

14:33 Dino99: It's fine
14:33 Dino99: I guess
14:35 Doyak: 00:35:137 (3) - 00:36:549 (4) - 00:37:873 (2) - 00:39:374 (4) - 01:01:608 (2) - 01:03:020 (2) - 01:04:432 (2) - 01:13:167 (3) - Yeah I mean things like these
14:35 Dino99: it's fine!
14:36 Dino99: I can make some triplets as a Insane
14:36 Dino99: :3
14:38 Doyak: Ok others looks fine
14:38 Dino99:

14:38 Dino99: yea
14:38 Dino99: Post it!
14:39 Dino99: Will check again later

Dino99

1,809 posts

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Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-23T06:15:46+00:00

Doyak wrote:
IRC mod
13:41 Dino99: Hello~
13:46 Doyak: Yo~ sup?
13:46 Dino99: Could you testplay my new map?? :3
13:46 Doyak: Oh but my tablet is not working lol
13:46 Doyak: I'd rather mod it lol
13:46 Dino99: q.q
13:47 Dino99: lol
13:47 *Dino99 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/958514 Diana Garnet - Spinning World]
13:47 Dino99: IRC Mod?? owo
13:47 *Dino99 runs
13:47 Doyak: I remember seeing you on very old maps wow
13:47 Dino99: lol
13:47 Dino99: haha
13:47 Dino99: I'm an old mapper >.>
13:47 Dino99: Long time no map..
13:48 Doyak: I ranked 2 maps with the same song you ranked xD
13:48 Dino99: !!
13:48 Dino99: OMG
13:48 Dino99:
13:49 Doyak: Ok here goes a quick mod
13:49 Doyak: (want a ticket though xD)
13:50 Dino99: haha sure you can ask me for a mod next time!! ^^
13:50 Dino99: But not now, I got too many requests now QQ
13:50 Dino99: thanks!
13:50 Doyak: on Easy
13:51 Doyak: 00:26:755 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Some people consider as polarity issue
13:51 Doyak: as 3/2 terms aren't very easy
13:51 Doyak: You can consider using a slider after every 3/2 terms
13:51 Doyak: or making them into 3/2 reverses instead
13:52 Doyak: a circle after 3/2 term is very hard to get 300s on
13:53 Dino99: Hmm
13:53 Dino99: Yea I know :/
13:53 Dino99: This song is a bit hard to make
13:53 Dino99: haha
13:53 Dino99: I'll consider it for a while >.>
13:53 Doyak: 00:40:167 (1,2) - You can consider http://puu.sh/ossMN/9e1efdfdde.jpg
13:54 Doyak: 00:44:226 (2,3) - make into a slider too
13:54 Doyak: 00:52:520 - hmm feels too empty for me, add a circle?
13:55 Doyak: 01:02:579 (1,2) - Oh you don't need to stick to the red ones here, as the white ticks are quite strong here too
13:55 Doyak: it's just rather a complicated rhythm for easy
13:56 Doyak: http://puu.sh/ossUx/80a577994b.jpg
13:56 Doyak: This would work pretty well
13:57 Dino99: lol
13:57 Dino99: you keep suggesting, I check slowly ^^
13:58 Doyak: 01:15:461 (2) - I think this should start at 01:15:285 - , but you're not gonna use 1/2 term, so you can reduce 01:13:873 (1) - to 01:14:579 - as well
13:58 Doyak: Sure, you can keep your pace
13:58 Doyak: 01:11:049 (1,2,3) - is a quite hard rhythm too, you can bind 2 and 3 into a slider too
13:59 Doyak: 01:22:520 - insert a break?
13:59 Doyak: oh I'd just rather suggest mapping all
13:59 Doyak: including the spinner part
14:00 Doyak: 01:25:343 (1,2) - these two 'leftover' notes feel kinda weird for me
14:01 Doyak: Oh the title is Spinning World so you may keep the spinner haha
14:02 Dino99: lol
14:02 Dino99: So many suggestions on Easy
14:02 Doyak: Most are about similar issues though
14:02 Dino99: I don't really know I should follow vocal or basic beats
14:02 Dino99: =w=
14:02 Dino99: yea
14:03 Doyak: btw, turn off Widescreen Support on Easy and Insane
14:04 Dino99: I see
14:04 Doyak: Normal:
14:04 Doyak: 00:04:696 (3,4) - fix the blanket
14:04 Doyak: 00:06:285 (1,2) - make it more straight?
14:04 Doyak: also I would suggest not using grid snap as they are useless on this kind of mapping and only hurts the distance snap
14:05 Dino99: lol
14:05 Dino99: I always open it
14:05 Dino99: @_@
14:05 Doyak: 00:18:990 (3,4) - oh please make it balanced xD
14:06 Dino99: Consider
14:06 Dino99: :3
14:06 Dino99: It's fine too now IMO
14:06 Doyak: 00:28:167 (1,2) - I think the NC should go to 2 instead
14:06 Doyak: 00:30:990 (1) - and not in here
14:07 Dino99: Hmm
14:07 Dino99: I follow the Guitar sound
14:07 Dino99: The NC is fine to me!
14:07 Doyak: Alright then
14:08 Dino99: Sorry I'm insist xD
14:08 Doyak: I don't care if you decline, if you tell me your own reasons xD
14:08 Dino99: yea
14:08 Dino99:
14:09 Doyak: looks fine for me
14:10 Dino99: glad to hear that!
14:10 Doyak: You could have used some more circles, but it's up to you
14:10 Dino99: hahaha
14:10 Doyak: (instead of sliders)
14:10 Dino99: 1:3
14:10 Dino99: circle:slider
14:10 Doyak: It actually worries me a bit, but would be fine I guess
14:10 Dino99: lol
14:11 Doyak: as the Hard has so many circles
14:11 Dino99: >.<
14:11 Dino99: Lomg time no map
14:11 Dino99: xD
14:11 Dino99: Never think it's a good map :3
14:11 Dino99: just wanna try
14:11 Dino99: make it raned
14:11 Dino99: ranked
14:11 Dino99: :>
14:12 Doyak: Your map isn't bad, just a biiiiiiiiiiit out of the trend
14:12 Dino99: =w=
14:12 Doyak: especially about the spread
14:12 Dino99: haha
14:12 Dino99: noooooo
14:12 Dino99: Others said that too
14:13 Dino99: Spread bad??
14:13 Dino99: q.q
14:13 Dino99: Unrankable??
14:13 Doyak: Ok now I'm actually concerned LOL
14:13 Dino99: orz
14:14 Doyak: This Hard is pretty much Insane-styled
14:14 Dino99: xD
14:14 Dino99: Hmm
14:14 Doyak: so many overlaps, a lot of wide jumps and things
14:14 *Dino99 is crying
14:14 Dino99:
14:14 Dino99: But the flow nice!
14:15 Doyak: You can easily fix this if you wanna be safe though
14:15 Dino99: I see
14:15 Doyak: You can make an Advanced diff between Normal and Hard
14:15 Dino99: wow
14:15 Dino99:
14:15 Dino99: nice idea!
14:15 Doyak: Oh it's not a nice idea lol
14:15 Doyak: Many mappers do this nowadays
14:16 Dino99: haha
14:16 Dino99: I can't follow the trend
14:16 Dino99: =w=
14:16 Doyak: Also use AR7.5 on Hard, or maybe even 8 works fine
14:18 Dino99: ok lol
14:18 Doyak: 00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - this can be a bit confusing, as not only the overlap makes it hard to read, but 00:14:049 (1,2) - is actually kind of a jump
14:18 Doyak: but there were no jumps before, so it's kinda sudden
14:19 Dino99: hmm
14:19 Dino99: slider -> slider
14:19 Dino99: is easier
14:19 Dino99: I think it's fine.....
14:19 Dino99: orz
14:20 Doyak: 00:14:402 (2) - rather Ctrl+G this then?
14:21 Dino99: Hmm I think it flows better now, and I wanna a jump at 00:14:402 (2,1) -
14:21 Doyak: 00:29:579 (3,4) - reduce the DS like 00:28:696 (1,2) - and only leave a jump on 00:29:932 (4,1) - this?
14:22 Dino99: Hmm I think it's better now
14:22 Dino99: The DS isn't big
14:22 Dino99: :3
14:22 Doyak: 00:42:990 (1,2) - this jump is too big and sudden imo, you can reduce it a bit
14:23 Dino99: ok
14:23 Dino99:
14:23 Doyak: 01:06:637 (3,4,5,6) - This flow is really hard for a Hard diff to be honest, try something else?
14:24 Dino99: xD
14:24 Dino99: yea...
14:24 Dino99: Why I do that
14:24 Dino99: =w=
14:24 Dino99: It looks like a Insane
14:24 Dino99: I'll change it late
14:24 Doyak: 01:13:167 (3) - I hope the end of the slider is clickable, and there's nothing strong on the head
14:24 Dino99: later
14:25 Dino99: I understand
14:25 Dino99: Hmm
14:25 Dino99: I may fix it later
14:25 Dino99: now I don't know how to change
14:25 Dino99: = =
14:25 Doyak: http://puu.sh/osuaU/6c00d52066.jpg
14:25 Doyak: Just this rhythm I guess?
14:26 Dino99: nice
14:26 Dino99: :3
14:27 Doyak: 01:26:402 (5,6,7) - rather than this, http://puu.sh/osueJ/a95f66d09b.jpg this feels better for me
14:27 Doyak: There's a good drum on 01:26:755 - too
14:28 Doyak: 01:28:167 (3) - move this to around 385, 163? going to the center is better imo, also that's where the 2 ends
14:29 Doyak: now on Insane
14:30 Doyak: 00:17:402 - Somehow make this clickable? or special? as there's a strong drum here
14:30 Dino99: hmm
14:30 Dino99: I think this one is fine
14:30 Doyak: 00:22:167 (2,3) - bind into a slider? This can emphasize the 00:22:520 (1,2,3,4) - guitar sounds too
14:31 Dino99: not bad
14:31 Dino99: o.o
14:32 Doyak: I feel a lot of 1/4s you used are overmapped, is it just me?
14:32 Doyak: I bought a cheap new earphone yesterday, so I'm not sure lol
14:33 Dino99: lol
14:33 Dino99: only you
14:33 Dino99:
14:33 Dino99: It's fine
14:33 Dino99: I guess
14:35 Doyak: 00:35:137 (3) - 00:36:549 (4) - 00:37:873 (2) - 00:39:374 (4) - 01:01:608 (2) - 01:03:020 (2) - 01:04:432 (2) - 01:13:167 (3) - Yeah I mean things like these
14:35 Dino99: it's fine!
14:36 Dino99: I can make some triplets as a Insane
14:36 Dino99: :3
14:38 Doyak: Ok others looks fine
14:38 Dino99:
14:38 Dino99: yea
14:38 Dino99: Post it!
14:39 Dino99: Will check again later

Thanks!!~

fixed some

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-04-23T06:55:32+00:00

我耳機壞了非常抱歉……發現聽其他歌都沒有人聲，大概是個別頻率沒辦法識別所以我完全聽不到你一部分的音效和一部分的歌，我甚至以為是純伴奏……剛剛聽別的歌才發現

Edit：四色是因為偶數循環，你做了很多圖了應該發現了基本上副歌都是八或者十六節一段。二色太少八色太多，當然這並不是什麼重要的東西lol

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-23T12:22:07+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
我耳機壞了非常抱歉……發現聽其他歌都沒有人聲，大概是個別頻率沒辦法識別所以我完全聽不到你一部分的音效和一部分的歌，我甚至以為是純伴奏……剛剛聽別的歌才發現

Edit：四色是因為偶數循環，你做了很多圖了應該發現了基本上副歌都是八或者十六節一段。二色太少八色太多，當然這並不是什麼重要的東西lol

都是远古神麻婆跪水仙

[Easy]

00:06:285 (1,3) - too much overlap for easy
00:17:579 (1,2) - the flow is weird,try to flip (1) horizontally
i suggest u put notes in places such as 00:18:637 - 00:20:049 - 00:24:285 -
00:26:049 (3) - make a slider can be better flow
01:11:049 (1) - also flip,bad flow

[Normal]

cs3.5
00:15:814 - miss a note
00:19:696 (4,1) - this overlap is not good in normal
00:37:343 (1,2) - imo unrankable since overlap on reverse arrow
00:56:402 (1,2) - reduce overlap
01:09:285 (3,4) - ^^
01:13:343 (1,2) - ^^
水仙说的远古风格不是很懂，但是现在大概流行这样 http://puu.sh/osIZN/9ced330010.jpg

[Hard]

00:43:520 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:04:520 (2,4) - stack
01:09:461 (4,1) - blanket

Insane is fine,something i wanna say:

现在不是很流行对称，四方跳和大弧度slider...所以mapping style和两三年前大概差了很多
比如00:13:167 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 现在貌似没有这种摆法rank图了（sad

GL

可以多看看现在的图

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-23T13:45:41+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Narcissu wrote:
我耳機壞了非常抱歉……發現聽其他歌都沒有人聲，大概是個別頻率沒辦法識別所以我完全聽不到你一部分的音效和一部分的歌，我甚至以為是純伴奏……剛剛聽別的歌才發現

Edit：四色是因為偶數循環，你做了很多圖了應該發現了基本上副歌都是八或者十六節一段。二色太少八色太多，當然這並不是什麼重要的東西lol
都是远古神麻婆跪水仙 lol

[Easy]
00:06:285 (1,3) - too much overlap for easy I'll ask BN about this~ keep it now!
00:17:579 (1,2) - the flow is weird,try to flip (1) horizontally hmm I think it's fine, not a bad flow :3
i suggest u put notes in places such as 00:18:637 - 00:20:049 - 00:24:285 - no I wanna some rest as a Easiest diff
00:26:049 (3) - make a slider can be better flow I like what I desigh here lol
01:11:049 (1) - also flip,bad flow It's ok IMO! sorry...

[Normal]
cs3.5 3.5是現在的趨勢嗎?? 我以前(2014年)都用4阿
00:15:814 - miss a note no~ I'm intentional
00:19:696 (4,1) - this overlap is not good in normal I don't know how to design here... I'll ask BN.
00:37:343 (1,2) - imo unrankable since overlap on reverse arrow lol but it's clear to read 0.0
00:56:402 (1,2) - reduce overlap I think it flows good and looks good, the overlap is fine IMO >.>
01:09:285 (3,4) - ^^
01:13:343 (1,2) - ^^
水仙说的远古风格不是很懂，但是现在大概流行这样 http://puu.sh/osIZN/9ced330010.jpg 我不是也差不多這樣...

[Hard]
00:43:520 (2,3) - fix blanket ok!!
01:04:520 (2,4) - stack ya I've already stacked o.o
01:09:461 (4,1) - blanket no, I'm not aim for a blanket here..

Insane is fine,something i wanna say:

现在不是很流行对称，四方跳和大弧度slider...所以mapping style和两三年前大概差了很多
比如00:13:167 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 现在貌似没有这种摆法rank图了（sad 真的假的那我請人試打都說好玩好圖=w=

GL 可以多看看现在的图 恩我會再看看....

感謝感謝原來你會說中文~~

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-04-24T15:59:58+00:00

Hello.
Easy

00:28:167 (1,3,5) - mhm, I can hear that vocal is til big white tick.
00:47:226 (2) - this is out of the vocal, I suggest this rhythm
this
01:26:755 (2) - maybe whistle for emphasizing this beat.

Normal

00:07:520 (4,5) - for better flow I suggest this
ye
00:15:814 - weird beat skipping.
00:19:696 (4,1) - I don't like this overlap, it may be unreadable for newbie imo. Try to avoid this.
00:30:108 (4,1) - this dropped flow looks bad here, I suggest blanket
like this
00:40:167 (1,2) - bad looking overlap.
01:28:167 (1) - same suggestion with whistle.

Hard

00:11:402 (6) - 1/4 hold slider is boring, make triple and one-reverse slider
01:27:637 (2) - and here.
00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - this doesn't look like Hard diff's pattern, too complex, I think you can make it without such overlap.
00:38:755 (3,4,1,2) - here as well.
01:06:637 (3,4) - big jump, too hard for Hard and because of this overlapped pattern 01:07:696 (1,2,3) - , players can get confused and misread this.

Insane

00:14:755 (1,2) - this may be played as 1/4 pattern => misread => 50's and misses. I don't like it, but who am I.
01:27:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too insane at the end of the map, suggest to decrease spacing between the circle and the stream.
Else is good for me.

good luck~

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-24T16:46:52+00:00

Namki wrote:
Hello.
Easy
00:28:167 (1,3,5) - mhm, I can hear that vocal is til big white tick. Here I follow the Guitar sound, I think it's fine~
00:47:226 (2) - this is out of the vocal, I suggest this rhythm Here I prefer follow basic beats, I think it fits the music!
this
01:26:755 (2) - maybe whistle for emphasizing this beat. Hmm no~
Normal
00:07:520 (4,5) - for better flow I suggest this nice idea!!
ye
00:15:814 - weird beat skipping. hmm I wanna a little break here :3
00:19:696 (4,1) - I don't like this overlap, it may be unreadable for newbie imo. Try to avoid this.
I think it won't be too hard to read lol well I will ask more ppl about it!
00:30:108 (4,1) - this dropped flow looks bad here, I suggest blanket hmm it's fine here IMO, the flow is fine to me o.o
like this
00:40:167 (1,2) - bad looking overlap. Hmm I don't think it looks bad >.<
01:28:167 (1) - same suggestion with whistle. no sorry~
Hard
00:11:402 (6) - 1/4 hold slider is boring, make triple and one-reverse slider hmm consider for a while~
01:27:637 (2) - and here. ^
00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - this doesn't look like Hard diff's pattern, too complex, I think you can make it without such overlap. lol But it flows good and looks cool to me, I'll keep it now, if others say that too, I'll try to change >.>
00:38:755 (3,4,1,2) - here as well. ^
01:06:637 (3,4) - big jump, too hard for Hard and because of this overlapped pattern 01:07:696 (1,2,3) - , players can get confused and misread this.
Because I'll have a Advanced Diff soon, I see it's a harder Hard Diff..... so it may be fine?? :3
Insane
00:14:755 (1,2) - this may be played as 1/4 pattern => misread => 50's and misses. I don't like it, but who am I. Don't worry, I have ask many ppl to testplay my map and no one misread here! ^^
01:27:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too insane at the end of the map, suggest to decrease spacing between the circle and the stream. This need to be considered, I'll get more opinion from others!
Else is good for me.
good luck~

Thank you very much!!~

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-04-24T18:04:03+00:00

Surprisingly, your replies to mods are quite similar to mine lol
Like, you deny about 70% of the suggestions and write the replies as bolded red for deny, blue for accept, green for considering.

Example: p/4984277 xD

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-25T03:21:00+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Surprisingly, your replies to mods are quite similar to mine lol
Like, you deny about 70% of the suggestions and write the replies as bolded red for deny, blue for accept, green for considering.

Example: p/4984277 xD

Yes! I always use these three colors to symbolize different opinions!

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-04-25T03:29:50+00:00

hye

old style but its a pretty gud map so lo

General

widescreen support is on
if alacat and kanto r still making GDs then u sud put ther name in tags

ez

idk howmuch leeway u give but there are som 1.15x 1.06x DS in the map lo if u dont care then w/e

nrml

01:16:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - y didnt u just use repets for all 3 instead for only the last 1?/ it wud play bettr for the normal players so idk Xd

hard

00:17:932 (1,2) - can u put 1 lower so they dnot overlap PLZ
00:14:402 (2) - this slider seems a bit spOOKy i wud have put it on the right somewhere like 210/139 cuz it wud be easier for hard players 2 read but yea
01:07:696 (1,2,3) - possibly ctrlg? / ? because 01:07:343 (3,1) - has no energy so the player stopping there wud work rlly well Xd

dino

00:08:226 (4) - symmetry looks a bit forced cuz theres nothing that emphasizes this note so far
00:16:167 (1,2,1,2) - just a sugestion but i thikn thes slider anglez wud work much bettr
00:41:226 (3,4,5) - flow here lookz a bit scary lo. if i were u i wud just put the circles to like here or something but yea w/e its just flow anyway
00:56:579 (3,4) - ctrlg for more emphasis on next slider? / /
01:10:167 (2,3,4) - slider dropoff looks a bit weird but w/e
01:13:696 (5) - u sud put this somewhere higher like this cuz itd be easier to read compared to the stack u have rn and it will create more emphasiz on the next slider :d
01:27:108 (4,1,2) - the streams look a bit lik ther forced symmetry : /

G

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-25T14:19:23+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
hye

old style but its a pretty gud map so lo

General
widescreen support is on fixed
if alacat and kanto r still making GDs then u sud put ther name in tags I will add after they finished.

ez
idk howmuch leeway u give but there are som 1.15x 1.06x DS in the map lo if u dont care then w/e All 1.1 DS, nothing wrong??
nrml
01:16:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - y didnt u just use repets for all 3 instead for only the last 1?/ it wud play bettr for the normal players so idk Xd lol It's not bad now to me!!
hard
00:17:932 (1,2) - can u put 1 lower so they dnot overlap PLZ okok
00:14:402 (2) - this slider seems a bit spOOKy i wud have put it on the right somewhere like 210/139 cuz it wud be easier for hard players 2 read but yea
Hmm but it flows good and looks fine now to me, I consider it as a Harder Hard, so it is fine IMO, won't be too hard to read ^^
01:07:696 (1,2,3) - possibly ctrlg? / ? because 01:07:343 (3,1) - has no energy so the player stopping there wud work rlly well Xd
No I prefer now! sorry
dino
00:08:226 (4) - symmetry looks a bit forced cuz theres nothing that emphasizes this note so far It's fine IMO :3 flows good.
00:16:167 (1,2,1,2) - just a sugestion but i thikn thes slider anglez wud work much bettr
Hmm I think it flows better now lol
00:41:226 (3,4,5) - flow here lookz a bit scary lo. if i were u i wud just put the circles to like here or something but yea w/e its just flow anyway I prefer now! Sorry but I think the flow is ok?? lol
00:56:579 (3,4) - ctrlg for more emphasis on next slider? / / ~~Hmm I maybe change to another pattern here :3~~ edit: Changed!
01:10:167 (2,3,4) - slider dropoff looks a bit weird but w/e Yea I think here may need to be rearranged lol, let me think for a while!
01:13:696 (5) - u sud put this somewhere higher like this cuz itd be easier to read compared to the stack u have rn and it will create more emphasiz on the next slider :d No, it flows a bit weird to me lol
01:27:108 (4,1,2) - the streams look a bit lik ther forced symmetry : / haha yes, but I don't think it's a bad idea~~ :3

G

Thanks you!!~

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-04-26T07:02:30+00:00

As requested :3

General

Seems fine :3

Easy

00:15:814 - Add a note here, being undermapped on this part seems not good enough
00:24:285 - ^, Vocals are audible here
00:34:520 (2) - Since your following vocals, make this 3/4 and add a circle, much better than a 2/1 slider
00:37:343 (1) - Same above
00:59:755 (1,2,3) - Idk but this pattern plays weird and hard to read when I play it with mods & nomod, it looks like unpredictable
01:02:579 (1) - Make this 3/4 and a circle

Normal

00:09:637 (2,3) - Kinda breaks the flow make 00:10:167 (3) - linear with the slidertail of 00:09:637 (2) - ?
00:14:755 to 00:15:814 - I don't like the way you map these part, seems undermap, make this 00:14:755 (1) - 2 1/2 sliders for the guitar then add a 1/1 slider after that picture: http://puu.sh/ow7fG/48a6b46943.jpg
00:37:343 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/ow7lj/50c31ce554.jpg
00:56:402 (1) - Ctrl+H?

Hard

00:02:049 (1) - Put anchor at the middle?
00:09:637 (2,3) - Overlap doesn't look good on this sliders
00:10:696 (1,2) - Decrease spacing imo 2.00x is so much for just 1 tick gap o.o
00:14:755 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Undermapped. This is hard you should be more detailed on rhythms here even though this is a calm part
00:17:579 - Should be clickable imo
00:18:990 (3) - ^
00:23:049 (4,1) - Swap these two, slider must be the first for the guitar and the circle for the drums
00:27:108 - Add note
00:35:932 (4) - NC here 00:36:637 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:579 - should be clickable
00:51:461 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can make them 1/2s :/

Insane

00:12:461 - add note
00:20:226 (1) - Why did you use extended slider? tail should be clickable

I guess thats all, I just don't like the parts that are undermapped :3 I can't be help on structure cuz I can't really understand what's your style anyway it's nice to play goodluck!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-04-26T11:39:07+00:00

finally found some time to mod this :3

quick mod from me

[General]
if you want ur web BG to be a specific one, just make all the BG's the same, upload the map and then change it again accordingly

[Easy]
i reckon u'll have to nerf this difficulty for spread reasons, right now there isn't much of a difference between easy and normal
beats like these aren't needed in easy 00:21:461 (4,6)
00:12:637 - i dont think you can miss this beat. if you delete the spinner and start mapping at 00:11:932 - you can get in all the important beats
00:24:637 (2,3) - blanket?
01:13:873 (1) - make a perfectly symmetrical s slider here and rotate as desired, if you don't know how to do this i can go into more depth just let me know
01:26:755 (2) - i feel like this slider should actually start here 01:27:108

[Normal]
00:04:696 (3,4) - do this blanket again
00:07:520 (4,5) - make these sliders symmetrically identical?
00:21:814 - this beat should be mapped
00:22:520 (5,6) - i don't thing this is a very good pattern, hence why you often never see it in normals
00:33:814 (1) - whats nc for?
00:35:579 (3) - the slider start isn't really a mappable beat, 00:35:755 - this beat is (like you did here 00:37:343 (1,2,3) - this is good)
00:41:226 (3) - this one's ok because theres a lyric here
00:47:226 (2) - this slider belongs 00:47:049 - here. and fix up
00:56:402 (1) - doesnt this start 00:56:226 - here?
01:09:285 (3,4) - use grid size tiny to fix this ds
01:15:637 (5) - make this a 1/2 slider and put it 01:15:814 - here

[Hard]
00:14:755 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - being a hard diff, you should play around with the red ticks here, use circles on every 1/2 beat and 1/2 sliders for some spice
00:15:814 (2,1) - if you don't do what i stated above, this distance should be consistent with others
00:18:637 (3) - here you have a 1/1 slider using a slider end as the downbeat, but then you burst into a fast 1/2 rhythm here 00:19:167 (4,5,6,7). if you want to do this you should at least have the downbeat clickable (big white tick)
00:21:990 (5) - make this a 1/1 slider
00:45:814 (1,2) - should be 1/1 slider because its a held vocal note
00:56:402 (1,2,3) - start this 00:56:226 - here

[Insane]
00:12:461 - you should include this beat
00:21:285 - should be clickable as it is a vocal
00:21:814 - idk why you have a space here, after the space you followed the bass so i think you should just include this beat to follow the bass
00:23:226 (1) - the slider suits the rhythm here 00:23:579 so move notes around accordingly
00:56:402 (2,3,4) - again, this starts 00:56:226 - here
00:40:696 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/owi7I/8d35a01485.jpg rhythm
01:06:814 (5,1) - 01:06:990 (1) - is a downbeat yet the jump here 01:06:990 (1,2) - is much bigger than 01:06:814 (5,1) -. make this 01:06:814 (5,1) - your biggest jump

gl with rank

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-26T14:03:31+00:00

Janpai wrote:
As requested :3
General
Seems fine :3

Easy
00:15:814 - Add a note here, being undermapped on this part seems not good enough No I want a break here, it's fine to me~
00:24:285 - ^, Vocals are audible here Not follow vocal here, it sounds well to me now!
00:34:520 (2) - Since your following vocals, make this 3/4 and add a circle, much better than a 2/1 slider
00:37:343 (1) - Same above Both are fine to me, sorry o.o
00:59:755 (1,2,3) - Idk but this pattern plays weird and hard to read when I play it with mods & nomod, it looks like unpredictable I may change to a slider here, let me consider for a while!
01:02:579 (1) - Make this 3/4 and a circle Hmm no, I think it's fine here~

Normal
00:09:637 (2,3) - Kinda breaks the flow make 00:10:167 (3) - linear with the slidertail of 00:09:637 (2) - ? lol I think the flow is fine
00:14:755 to 00:15:814 - I don't like the way you map these part, seems undermap, make this 00:14:755 (1) - 2 1/2 sliders for the guitar then add a 1/1 slider after that picture: http://puu.sh/ow7fG/48a6b46943.jpg o.o I don't feel wrong here...
00:37:343 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/ow7lj/50c31ce554.jpg no that'll miss a drum sound
00:56:402 (1) - Ctrl+H? No, I prefer now, looks better and flows better.

Hard
00:02:049 (1) - Put anchor at the middle? It's nice now
00:09:637 (2,3) - Overlap doesn't look good on this sliders But I like it lol
00:10:696 (1,2) - Decrease spacing imo 2.00x is so much for just 1 tick gap o.o I think it's fine, as a Hard Diff (and have Advanced Diff) it's acceptable
00:14:755 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Undermapped. This is hard you should be more detailed on rhythms here even though this is a calm part
No it plays well IMO....... :3
00:17:579 - Should be clickable imo hmm ya... I'll consider it for a while, don't know how to rearrange now lol
00:18:990 (3) - ^ ^
00:23:049 (4,1) - Swap these two, slider must be the first for the guitar and the circle for the drums I think it's fine here o.o.... and the Guitar sound is at 00:24:637 (1) - so I use a slider to follow it.
00:27:108 - Add note Hmm I wanna only follow the vocal here lol
00:35:932 (4) - NC here 00:36:637 (1) - Remove NC I prefer now, becasue 00:36:285 (5,1) - They are far so have a NC.
00:38:579 - should be clickable no... I can't always make it clickable ;w; It's ok now!
00:51:461 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can make them 1/2s :/ It's better now, to emphasize 00:53:226 (2) - the drum.

Insane
00:12:461 - add note no~ sorry
00:20:226 (1) - Why did you use extended slider? tail should be clickable I try to follow the vocal lol
I guess thats all, I just don't like the parts that are undermapped :3 I can't be help on structure cuz I can't really understand what's your style anyway it's nice to play goodluck!

lol Thank you!! Sorry for my insist!

Pentori wrote:
finally found some time to mod this :3

quick mod from me <3

[General]
if you want ur web BG to be a specific one, just make all the BG's the same, upload the map and then change it again accordingly ok I'll try it!

[Easy]
i reckon u'll have to nerf this difficulty for spread reasons, right now there isn't much of a difference between easy and normal
beats like these aren't needed in easy 00:21:461 (4,6) lol I think it's ok, not too hard~
00:12:637 - i dont think you can miss this beat. if you delete the spinner and start mapping at 00:11:932 - you can get in all the important beats
I only can add a note after a spinner end for 4 white, it's the rule, so I can add it here.
00:24:637 (2,3) - blanket? ok~~
01:13:873 (1) - make a perfectly symmetrical s slider here and rotate as desired, if you don't know how to do this i can go into more depth just let me know
Hmm I think it's fine now o.o, but I may try to make it better here!
01:26:755 (2) - i feel like this slider should actually start here 01:27:108 I prefer now, follow the little drum sound and blanket well!

[Normal]
00:04:696 (3,4) - do this blanket again no I don't wanna blanket here, and it actually blanketed lol
00:07:520 (4,5) - make these sliders symmetrically identical? no~
00:21:814 - this beat should be mapped I don't think so lol
00:22:520 (5,6) - i don't thing this is a very good pattern, hence why you often never see it in normals It's fine IMO
00:33:814 (1) - whats nc for? Hmm after spinner we must add NC, and new beginning at 00:34:520 (1) -
00:35:579 (3) - the slider start isn't really a mappable beat, 00:35:755 - this beat is (like you did here 00:37:343 (1,2,3) - this is good)
I think the beats sound good to me, sorry!
00:41:226 (3) - this one's ok because theres a lyric here I don't always follow vocal.
00:47:226 (2) - this slider belongs 00:47:049 - here. and fix up no I follow the basic drum sound here
00:56:402 (1) - doesnt this start 00:56:226 - here? Hmm ok
01:09:285 (3,4) - use grid size tiny to fix this ds The DS is fine
01:15:637 (5) - make this a 1/2 slider and put it 01:15:814 - here This beat is fine now.

[Hard]
00:14:755 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - being a hard diff, you should play around with the red ticks here, use circles on every 1/2 beat and 1/2 sliders for some spice
I've asked many ppl to testplay, and no one miss here :3 I think it's fine
00:15:814 (2,1) - if you don't do what i stated above, this distance should be consistent with others Hmm will consider about it.
00:18:637 (3) - here you have a 1/1 slider using a slider end as the downbeat, but then you burst into a fast 1/2 rhythm here 00:19:167 (4,5,6,7). if you want to do this you should at least have the downbeat clickable (big white tick) Plays well here IMO lol
00:21:990 (5) - make this a 1/1 slider no, why?? I need to rearrange everything if I do that, and nothing wrong here IMO.
00:45:814 (1,2) - should be 1/1 slider because its a held vocal note I follow the basic beats instead of vocal.
00:56:402 (1,2,3) - start this 00:56:226 - here no it's better now

[Insane]
00:12:461 - you should include this beat Why?? I don't think so, there is no drum sound or vocal here
00:21:285 - should be clickable as it is a vocal I can't make everything clickable... It fits music now IMO
00:21:814 - idk why you have a space here, after the space you followed the bass so i think you should just include this beat to follow the bass
No, here I follow the vocal, the space is nice!
00:23:226 (1) - the slider suits the rhythm here 00:23:579 so move notes around accordingly It's nice now...
00:56:402 (2,3,4) - again, this starts 00:56:226 - here no
00:40:696 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/owi7I/8d35a01485.jpg rhythm I'll consider here for a while.
01:06:814 (5,1) - 01:06:990 (1) - is a downbeat yet the jump here 01:06:990 (1,2) - is much bigger than 01:06:814 (5,1) -. make this 01:06:814 (5,1) - your biggest jump No, it flows good, and as an Insane, the jump is acceptable!

gl with rank

Thanks a lot!

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-04-27T04:34:06+00:00

M4M

General

Setting AudioLeadIn: 1200 around
GD mapper name add in tag (Kanto or KantoKun)
00:33:814 - greenline 100%vol too loud

Easy

00:06:285 (1) - how do you think make curve slide? like this
SPOILER
00:31:696 - breaktime too short ,just mapping here that's looks better
00:44:226 (2,3,4) - flow suggest;2 circle and 3slide make straight flow
SPOILER
01:11:049 (1,2,3) - flow suggest
SPOILER

Normal

00:15:814 - add note or make slide 00:15:461 (2) - this circle
00:56:932 (1) - NC ;because another diff NCed here
01:02:049 (1) - remove NC and 01:02:579 (2) - add NC
01:05:402 (1) - slide a little looks ugly,just like this?
SPOILER
01:13:343 (1) - remove NC 01:13:873 (2) - and add NC
01:18:990 (6,7) - DS 0.92 fix to 1.00

Hard

00:04:167 (4,1) - too far
00:17:932 (1,2) - just make straight slide?because slidetail and head overlaped
00:19:167 (4) - NC?
00:29:226 (2,3) - too near
SPOILER
00:42:285 (3) - too far
01:04:520 (2,4) - stack?01:03:108 (2,4) - nor make half stack for consistency
01:07:696 (1,2,3) - half stack?
SPOILER
01:24:637 (3,4,1) - DS too far
SPOILER

Kanto's Light Insane

00:15:285 - add note?
00:13:343 (1,2,3,4,5) - how do you think this flow?
SPOILER
00:18:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
SPOILER
00:57:990 (4,1) - blanket you can do better
SPOILER
01:07:343 (2) - remove NC there is not reason
01:25:873 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g flow looks better
SPOILER

Insane

00:07:873 (3,4) - too far ; make half stack with this circle 00:07:343 (1) -
SPOILER
00:14:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aim too high and difficult
(00:14:932 (2,3) - 00:15:637 (2,3) - 00:16:343 (2,3) - how do you think ctrl+g?)
SPOILER
00:20:226 (1,2,3) - flow suggest
SPOILER
00:49:167 (3,4) - 00:49:873 (6,1) - too far
00:51:461 (1) - 00:52:873 (1) - ctrl+g
00:54:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too easy then kanto's light insane
01:02:226 (5) - ctrl+g
01:28:166 (8) - add NC? like another diff(Kanto's Light Insane too added)

Deppyforce

1,969 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-04-27T04:38:44+00:00

good morning

[Easy]
00:26:049 (3,4,5) - 3/2 gap after 2/1 like this is too hard for ez diff imo, since beginner probably cant tell that its different length gaps due to 3 crossing 2's tail and they looks similar
00:45:814 (1,2,3) - alot of things got ignored rn consider split them up a bit
01:19:343 - should map imo so spinner would have better impact

[Normal]
00:15:461 (2) - consider change to 1/1 slider cuz this pause feels weird while playing
00:47:226 (3) - move to 00:47:049 - to follow vocals
00:50:049 (3) - ^
01:27:990 - add note?

[Hard]
00:25:167 (3) - http://puu.sh/oxg3d/8ae136692b.jpg plays nicer with 4 imo
01:07:696 (1,2,3) - maybe flip it so its differ from previous one, for variation http://puu.sh/oxgdo/5dbfdfa6b2.jpg

[Kanto]
00:10:785 (2,3) - 3 is strong shouldnt stack imo
00:39:814 (4) - this pause feels weird cuz its only one in the verse, consider change to 1/2 slider
01:16:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol rly just spam circle like this? merge some to 1/2 slider pls

good luck

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-04-27T10:10:33+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
M4M
General
Setting AudioLeadIn: 1200 around ok
GD mapper name add in tag (Kanto or KantoKun) Will add after alacat done!
00:33:814 - greenline 100%vol too loud Changed to 90%

Easy
00:06:285 (1) - how do you think make curve slide? like this nice!
SPOILER
00:31:696 - breaktime too short ,just mapping here that's looks better no I think it fits the music now lol
00:44:226 (2,3,4) - flow suggest;2 circle and 3slide make straight flow nice!!
SPOILER
01:11:049 (1,2,3) - flow suggest hmm I prefer now~
SPOILER

Normal
00:15:814 - add note or make slide 00:15:461 (2) - this circle hmm I want a break here :3
00:56:932 (1) - NC ;because another diff NCed here Accepted!
01:02:049 (1) - remove NC and 01:02:579 (2) - add NC yeaaa
01:05:402 (1) - slide a little looks ugly,just like this? Hmm I actually like this slider o..o, let me consider for a while.
SPOILER
01:13:343 (1) - remove NC 01:13:873 (2) - and add NC fixed~
01:18:990 (6,7) - DS 0.92 fix to 1.00 ok! Nice catch~

Hard
00:04:167 (4,1) - too far I consider it as a Harder Hard, maybe it's ok?? :3
00:17:932 (1,2) - just make straight slide?because slidetail and head overlaped I think the slider looks fine to me!
00:19:167 (4) - NC? not necessary~
00:29:226 (2,3) - too near ok fixed!
SPOILER
00:42:285 (3) - too far As I said :3
01:04:520 (2,4) - stack?01:03:108 (2,4) - nor make half stack for consistency it has stacked lol
01:07:696 (1,2,3) - half stack? Let me consider it! o.o
SPOILER
01:24:637 (3,4,1) - DS too far It's ok IMO~
SPOILER

Insane
00:07:873 (3,4) - too far ; make half stack with this circle 00:07:343 (1) - fixed
SPOILER
00:14:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aim too high and difficult lol Changed to another pattern
(00:14:932 (2,3) - 00:15:637 (2,3) - 00:16:343 (2,3) - how do you think ctrl+g?) I prefer now~ sorry :3
SPOILER
00:20:226 (1,2,3) - flow suggest Nice, but it's not bad now too IMO :3
SPOILER
00:49:167 (3,4) - 00:49:873 (6,1) - too far It's fine... it's the hardest diff of the map ^^
00:51:461 (1) - 00:52:873 (1) - ctrl+g no~ I put it intentionally
00:54:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too easy then kanto's light insane Not really, anyway changed to another pattern too!
01:02:226 (5) - ctrl+g No it flows better now
01:28:166 (8) - add NC? like another diff(Kanto's Light Insane too added) alright o.o

Thanks a lot!!~

Deppyforce wrote:
good morning

[Easy]
00:26:049 (3,4,5) - 3/2 gap after 2/1 like this is too hard for ez diff imo, since beginner probably cant tell that its different length gaps due to 3 crossing 2's tail and they looks similar I know, but I just mapped what the song provide, and it sounds not bad, so I think it would be fine~
00:45:814 (1,2,3) - alot of things got ignored rn consider split them up a bit
It's an Easiest Diff, I think nothing wrong it, but maybe it's too empty as you said, I'll consider it!
01:19:343 - should map imo so spinner would have better impact hmm no it's good too now to me~

[Normal]
00:15:461 (2) - consider change to 1/1 slider cuz this pause feels weird while playing Why everyone complaint it?? q.q I just wanna a break here... If one more modder mention this, I will change here~ orz
00:47:226 (3) - move to 00:47:049 - to follow vocals Here I follow basic beats instead of vocal :3
00:50:049 (3) - ^
01:27:990 - add note? no, it's better now IMO.

[Hard]
00:25:167 (3) - http://puu.sh/oxg3d/8ae136692b.jpg plays nicer with 4 imo I don't think so.. I prefer now.... sorry! >.<
01:07:696 (1,2,3) - maybe flip it so its differ from previous one, for variation http://puu.sh/oxgdo/5dbfdfa6b2.jpg
No, it will break the flow orz

good luck

Thank you!

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-04-27T12:13:22+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
M4M

Kanto's Light Insane
00:15:285 - add note? want to take a break here
00:13:343 (1,2,3,4,5) - how do you think this flow? my diff is light insane , don't need many jump
SPOILER
00:18:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
SPOILER
00:57:990 (4,1) - blanket you can do better okay
SPOILER
01:07:343 (2) - remove NC there is not reason sure
01:25:873 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g flow looks better ah.. that isn't flow...
SPOILER

Deppyforce wrote:
good morning

[Kanto]
00:10:785 (2,3) - 3 is strong shouldnt stack imo it's okay , i think
00:39:814 (4) - this pause feels weird cuz its only one in the verse, consider change to 1/2 slider okay change
01:16:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol rly just spam circle like this? merge some to 1/2 slider pls nope

good luck

thanks for modding XD

SPOILER

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56226
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2

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Title:Spinning World
TitleUnicode:Spinning World
Artist:Diana Garnet
ArtistUnicode:Diana Garnet
Creator:Dino99
Version:Kanto's Light Insane
Source:NARUTO -ナルト- 疾風伝
Tags:Shippuden Ending Uzumaki Uchiha Sasuke Sakura Kakashi
BeatmapID:962526
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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399,142,39814,2,0,P|360:146|321:149,1,77.5,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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121,213,40873,2,0,P|127:271|127:306,1,77.5
60,359,41226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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194,260,42285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,161,42461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,134,44226,6,0,P|357:111|247:163,1,155,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2016-05-02T02:22:37+00:00

Lets go !

http://puu.sh/oDakb/3285c33008.zip

edit : can you add this BG for my diff ? and tags :

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-05-02T11:14:48+00:00

Aerous wrote:
Lets go !

http://puu.sh/oDakb/3285c33008.zip

edit : can you add this BG for my diff ? and tags :

OK! All Diffs are done now!

@Kanto & alacat -> ReDL it plz~ :3

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-05-03T03:20:07+00:00

colin aerous chung's extro

Electoz

1,888 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-05-03T18:31:12+00:00

HB pls teach me how to get high quality video.

[General]

00:56:932 - Feels like another red line is needed here to reset a downbeat. If you decided to add one there you have to reset a downbeat with another one on 01:16:873 again.
Not really matters but it kinda stands out when Hard and Insane have the same BG while the rest all have different BGs for each diff.

[Easy]

00:10:520 (1) - A single sliderart is better here cuz putting a spinner here forces you to leave 00:12:637 empty.
00:14:755 (3) - 00:20:402 (3) - 00:48:637 (3) - Any reason for not putting NCs on these?
Tbh I don't get the rhythm on 00:13:343 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) at all cuz I don't know what you're following and later on you seem to be focusing on vocal which you didn't do the same thing on this part, following different stuff in the song is pretty confusing for Easy imo.
00:24:285 - 00:26:402 - These beats can be mapped if you're following vocal, you barely have any 2/1 beat spacings later in the diff so idk why you decided to have these 2/1 spacings here.
00:33:814 (1) - Idk maybe NC here cuz you did this in other diffs.
00:41:932 (3) - A 1/1 slider+circle here? Just my preference and this the only rhythm I can come up with cuz I noticed that you're trying to make this part differently on each stanza.
00:50:755 - Hmm I guess it's intentional for leaving this beat out but adding a circle here would give a consistent 1/1 rhythm which I think it's more friendly to players and also a new stanza starts here so yeah.
00:52:873 - I heard the cymbal sound here though, Add either finish or whistle?
00:55:696 - Probably a missing clap on this spinner cuz I saw Normal has it.
00:59:755 (1) - 01:11:049 (1) - 01:13:873 (1,2) - Can you use a denser rhythm than this? It's kiai and it's kinda waste to just ignore those beats and this feels even less intense than earlier parts in the song.
01:17:932 - I think adding a circle here gives a better impact.

[Normal]

00:15:814 - Idk if you're trying to follow something else here but keeping constant 1/1 rhythm here is better imo.
00:16:167 (3,4) - Can you make a better flow than this? 00:16:167 (3) pointed towards the tail of 00:17:226 (4) and it requires to make an extra movement to go back for the head of 00:17:226 (4) which is kinda uncomfortable.
00:19:696 (4,1) - Looks too complicated for Normal, also it's pretty cramped when overlapped with 00:19:696 (4,2) .
00:37:343 (1,2) - Doesn't look good, better not overlap this, also some BNs might mention this cuz you're overlapping that reverse arrow.
00:58:696 (4,5,6) - Kinda curious why you decided not to follow vocal here while you're following it on 01:09:637 (4,5,6) .
01:04:873 (6,1,2) - Can you come up with another rhythm? 3 consecutive reverses can be confusing imo.

[alacat's Advanced]

00:33:990 (6) - Just sth minor but would be nice if you can point this slider towards 00:33:814 (5) so it'll become a bit easier to hit on.
01:04:873 - Not sure if this beat is worth sth clickable here cuz you seem to have clickable objects on vocal.
01:24:461 - I can still hear a guitar sound here so maybe map it?

[Hard]

HP 5.5? HP 6 Seems a little high for 3.4* imo, also seems a bit odd to have same HP as light insane.
00:10:696 (1,2) - The spacing is too big imo, actually you can move this to around 32|112 for a blanket with 00:09:637 (2) as well.
00:31:696 (1) - Remove the spinner and map sth normally? Since advanced already mapped this so I prefer not to leave a less density on this part.
00:35:755 - This should be clickable cuz vocal is pretty strong here.
00:45:814 (1) - aaa there's a finish on it which could have sounded a lot better if this was a slider.
01:27:637 (2,1) - This is so difficult to read, firstly you overlapped this thing too much, second is the circle should have been placed on the left of 01:27:637 (2) cuz the sliderball ends on that side.

I guess I'll stop here, got tired out lol, good luck~

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-05-04T00:41:23+00:00

Electoz wrote:
HB pls teach me how to get high quality video.

[General]

00:56:932 - Feels like another red line is needed here to reset a downbeat. If you decided to add one there you have to reset a downbeat with another one on 01:16:873 again. I don't think it's necessary~
Not really matters but it kinda stands out when Hard and Insane have the same BG while the rest all have different BGs for each diff.
Long story lol.... I may change the Insane Diff's BG later or not orz
[Easy]

00:10:520 (1) - A single sliderart is better here cuz putting a spinner here forces you to leave 00:12:637 empty.
I feel the empty fits the music~ It's not really necessary to make notes here~ :3
00:14:755 (3) - 00:20:402 (3) - 00:48:637 (3) - Any reason for not putting NCs on these? Well added~
Tbh I don't get the rhythm on 00:13:343 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) at all cuz I don't know what you're following and later on you seem to be focusing on vocal which you didn't do the same thing on this part, following different stuff in the song is pretty confusing for Easy imo. o.o I follow the basic rhythm...
00:24:285 - 00:26:402 - These beats can be mapped if you're following vocal, you barely have any 2/1 beat spacings later in the diff so idk why you decided to have these 2/1 spacings here. Not necessary, it sounds better now IMO~
00:33:814 (1) - Idk maybe NC here cuz you did this in other diffs. ok
00:41:932 (3) - A 1/1 slider+circle here? Just my preference and this the only rhythm I can come up with cuz I noticed that you're trying to make this part differently on each stanza. No here sounds nicely now to me o.o
00:50:755 - Hmm I guess it's intentional for leaving this beat out but adding a circle here would give a consistent 1/1 rhythm which I think it's more friendly to players and also a new stanza starts here so yeah. Not necessary IMO orz
00:52:873 - I heard the cymbal sound here though, Add either finish or whistle? Here I follow the basic drum sound, and I didn't add that on other Diffs. :3
00:55:696 - Probably a missing clap on this spinner cuz I saw Normal has it. Nice catch!
00:59:755 (1) - 01:11:049 (1) - 01:13:873 (1,2) - Can you use a denser rhythm than this? It's kiai and it's kinda waste to just ignore those beats and this feels even less intense than earlier parts in the song. It's easiest Diff, I don't think it's really necessary to add more notes here, it sound just fine to me owo ... Also... the Kiai is hard to map orz
01:17:932 - I think adding a circle here gives a better impact. I prefer now.. sorry! lol
[Normal]

00:15:814 - Idk if you're trying to follow something else here but keeping constant 1/1 rhythm here is better imo. Since everyone said this too, fixed~
00:16:167 (3,4) - Can you make a better flow than this? 00:16:167 (3) pointed towards the tail of 00:17:226 (4) and it requires to make an extra movement to go back for the head of 00:17:226 (4) which is kinda uncomfortable. The flow isn't that bad... I think it's fine now...
00:19:696 (4,1) - Looks too complicated for Normal, also it's pretty cramped when overlapped with 00:19:696 (4,2) .
Hmm yes maybe... I'll consider about this, I need to think for a while how can I change orz
00:37:343 (1,2) - Doesn't look good, better not overlap this, also some BNs might mention this cuz you're overlapping that reverse arrow.
ok fixed :3
00:58:696 (4,5,6) - Kinda curious why you decided not to follow vocal here while you're following it on 01:09:637 (4,5,6) .
I don't follow the vocal, I always follow basic beats!
01:04:873 (6,1,2) - Can you come up with another rhythm? 3 consecutive reverses can be confusing imo.
Well... I think it's fine... but maybe I'll change it~ Let's keep it for now
[Hard]

HP 5.5? HP 6 Seems a little high for 3.4* imo, also seems a bit odd to have same HP as light insane. alright~
00:10:696 (1,2) - The spacing is too big imo, actually you can move this to around 32|112 for a blanket with 00:09:637 (2) as well.
Hmm I don't think it's too hard as a Hard Diff, and I have Advanced Diff lol
00:31:696 (1) - Remove the spinner and map sth normally? Since advanced already mapped this so I prefer not to leave a less density on this part.
I think the spinner fits the music here, not really necessary to map IMO lol
00:35:755 - This should be clickable cuz vocal is pretty strong here. Hmm.. Not really necessary to me >.<
00:45:814 (1) - aaa there's a finish on it which could have sounded a lot better if this was a slider. ok fixed
01:27:637 (2,1) - This is so difficult to read, firstly you overlapped this thing too much, second is the circle should have been placed on the left of 01:27:637 (2) cuz the sliderball ends on that side. No I don't think so =w=a
I guess I'll stop here, got tired out lol, good luck~

Thank You!! ^^/

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2016-05-04T04:07:11+00:00

Yo~
From my modding queue~

SPOILER

Google OP

General

Nothing here~

Easy

00:17:579 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle? There is clearly a crash from the drums here.
00:41:402 (2,2) - Not recommended to put notes on 1/2 beats in easy diff. Use a 1/1 slider instead like http://puu.sh/oFwM1/b8179d9e8c.jpg .
01:26:755 (2) - Remove finish, there is no finish sound in the music but only a floor tom at the end.

Normal

01:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 4 can be deleted cuz there is nothing after spinner and it feels kinda weird coming back in like that. 01:25:343 (1) - I believe this lead in is much better and makes more sense because of the guitar sounds. Also keep consistent with Easy diff as you started making patterns at 01:25:343 .
Not much here, nice work~

Hard

00:05:049 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:637 (2,3) - This overlap looks kinda ugly xd
00:10:696 (1) - I think the flow would be better like this http://puu.sh/oFxOg/a2f7fae7fb.jpg
00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern doesnt flow well imo. Consider changing it pls
00:14:755 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing pls fix, feels weird x.x
00:17:932 (1,2) - I dun think these sliders works with red points here and looks bad, just use straight sliders?
00:36:637 (1,2) - Same as above
00:39:461 (1,2) - I think a 1/1 slider works better here to follow vocals
01:06:990 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Is this pattern ok in Hard diff? Idk
01:08:226 (1,2) - This overlap looks ugly here
01:09:637 (1,2) - Blanket?

Kanto's Light Insane

01:13:343 (3,4,5) - The jumps flow feels weird here. Try http://puu.sh/oFyvw/87802a4647.jpg ?
01:20:049 (2) - I dun think a note here is necessary cuz the vocal isn't strong enough. Furthermore, 01:19:696 (1) - ending at 01:19:873 feels weird after all of 01:16:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) . I think a 1/1 slider is better but idk, cuz there are still vocals there

Nice diff~

Aerous' Jutsu

00:15:637 (2,4) - Remove whistle and add whistle to 00:15:461 (1,3)
00:17:402 (6) - I couldnt hear your hitsound here while playing. Make it 45% like the next one. The music is not that soft here that you have to use 30% xd
00:54:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Dun randomly place jumps

00:55:696 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - These are good though. Maybe like this --> http://puu.sh/oFzKe/908df26436.jpg , http://puu.sh/oFzL4/11b8780898.jpg . I just think jumps should have patterns and distance should not be random for each jump combo

01:16:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is pp mapping x.x The jumps are so randomly placed imo. Pls fix patterns and spacing

I hope this mod is useful xd
Good luck!~

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-05-04T07:55:28+00:00

Aerous' Jutsu

00:08:402 (4,5,6) - Weird rhythm choice here, The spacing doesn't reflect the song's emphasis either. You've been mapping the high note on 00:08:932 - to jumps thus far, why stop now ;o.
00:10:872 (4,5) - Sounds overmapped to me. 1/2 slider?
00:16:873 (3) - NC since the other two NC's were every half measure
00:56:755 (1,1) - Idk man, starting the kiai with an anti jump seems like a bad decision to me ;c especially after those jumps earlier.
01:18:285 (1,2,3,4) - The drums don't really support this jump pattern. You don't hear drums on the red ticks here 01:18:461 (2,4) - ...
01:18:990 (1,2,3,4) - On the other hand, drums are supported here, and vocals as well. i think the jump pattern should be larger here instead.
01:27:108 (4,5) - Same as earlier.

Insane

00:20:226 (1,2) - The flow here is just really poor for me xP.
00:24:108 (2,3) - Cltr+G rhythm? Snare on 00:24:285 - sounds more important
00:29:402 (4,5) - It's weird to have these sliders off-beat when you're following the vocals. Make the sliders begin on white ticks instead?
00:30:814 (4,5,6) - ^Same. Maybe Ctrl+G this rhyth,
00:49:167 (3) - Do a slider here instead since the vocal sounds held here instead of simply fading out like other parts.
01:12:990 (2,3) - Not really getting this rhythm. 3 doesn't land on anything that audible imo... can you make this like a 1/2slider instead? and a circle on 01:13:343 - .

Kanto-kun's Insane

00:21:461 (4,1) - Do a jump or something here to emphasize the vocals?
00:57:990 (4,1) - ^
00:59:049 (3,4,1) - Yea not getting the spacing here too. It doesn't reflect the emphasis of the song imo.
01:06:814 (6,1) - ^
01:14:579 (3,4) - Same. Here you could do a 1/1 slider and a circle instead. 4 doesn't begin on anything that audible imo...

Hmm, spacing concept on this diff felt a bit off for me xP. Parts that were strong in the song (vocals/instruments) weren't emphasized in the map, and other times the map emphasizes sounds that aren't really that emphasized in the music.

Hard

00:18:637 (3,4,5) - These go offbeat... Make the downbeat clickable. Compare with your rhythm at 00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) -

alacat's Advanced

Perfect

Normal

00:58:167 (3,4) - Weird rhythm here. I would just do something like this

~

01:03:108 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm to make 01:03:461 - clickable instead.
01:10:873 (6,1) - Weird rhythm choice here too, try and avoid that 3/2 gap...

~

Easy

00:30:990 (1) - How about extending it to the downbeat?
00:41:402 (2,3) - Do what you did earlier.. this rhythm isn't as good because you make 00:41:932 - clickable while it's not actually an important beat.

[]
Nice song choice! I just couldn't agree with some of your rhythm choices though :c

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-05-04T09:01:12+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
Yo~
From my modding queue~

SPOILER
Google OP 哈哈哈...

General
Nothing here~

Easy
00:17:579 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle? There is clearly a crash from the drums here. Yes changed
00:41:402 (2,2) - Not recommended to put notes on 1/2 beats in easy diff. Use a 1/1 slider instead like http://puu.sh/oFwM1/b8179d9e8c.jpg .
ok fixed!
01:26:755 (2) - Remove finish, there is no finish sound in the music but only a floor tom at the end. It's Drum-finish here, I think it fits the music!

Normal
01:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 4 can be deleted cuz there is nothing after spinner and it feels kinda weird coming back in like that. 01:25:343 (1) - I believe this lead in is much better and makes more sense because of the guitar sounds. Also keep consistent with Easy diff as you started making patterns at 01:25:343 . Hmm I think it sounds good to me here, nothing is weird, so I'll keep it for now~
Not much here, nice work~ thanks!

Hard
00:05:049 (1) - Remove NC I think it's necessary :3
00:09:637 (2,3) - This overlap looks kinda ugly xd No I don't think so >.<a
00:10:696 (1) - I think the flow would be better like this http://puu.sh/oFxOg/a2f7fae7fb.jpg I prefer now, sorry!
00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - This pattern doesnt flow well imo. Consider changing it pls I don't think so, it flows good actually~
00:14:755 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing pls fix, feels weird x.x Hmm I'll consider it for a while orz
00:17:932 (1,2) - I dun think these sliders works with red points here and looks bad, just use straight sliders? I like it q.q
00:36:637 (1,2) - Same as above ^
00:39:461 (1,2) - I think a 1/1 slider works better here to follow vocals I follow basic rhythm here, it's good to me now~
01:06:990 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Is this pattern ok in Hard diff? Idk Hmm I'll ask BN about it lol
01:08:226 (1,2) - This overlap looks ugly here ehh... It looks fine....
01:09:637 (1,2) - Blanket? No I'm not tend to blanket here~

I hope this mod is useful xd
Good luck!~

Thank you!! ^^

Monstrata wrote:
Insane

00:20:226 (1,2) - The flow here is just really poor for me xP. I don't think so, it actually flows well to me lol
00:24:108 (2,3) - Cltr+G rhythm? Snare on 00:24:285 - sounds more important I think it plays fine too now, if I change it the flow will be bad orz
00:29:402 (4,5) - It's weird to have these sliders off-beat when you're following the vocals. Make the sliders begin on white ticks instead?
I don't follow vocal here, I follow basic rhythm, so I don't think it sounds weird here lol
00:30:814 (4,5,6) - ^Same. Maybe Ctrl+G this rhyth, ^
00:49:167 (3) - Do a slider here instead since the vocal sounds held here instead of simply fading out like other parts.
I think it's not necessary, I use 3 triangles here and plays fine IMO, I don't know how to change also... So I'll keep it for now
01:12:990 (2,3) - Not really getting this rhythm. 3 doesn't land on anything that audible imo... can you make this like a 1/2slider instead? and a circle on 01:13:343 - . The rhythm fits the music IMO, follow the vocal well o.o

Hard

00:18:637 (3,4,5) - These go offbeat... Make the downbeat clickable. Compare with your rhythm at 00:13:343 (5,6,1,2) - ok fixed~

Normal

00:58:167 (3,4) - Weird rhythm here. I would just do something like this Fixed by my own way here :3
~
01:03:108 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm to make 01:03:461 - clickable instead. Not really necessary.
01:10:873 (6,1) - Weird rhythm choice here too, try and avoid that 3/2 gap... I don't think so, I follow basic beats and it just sounds not bad to me. Besides, if I do what you suggest I would miss a Drum sound... orz
~

Easy

00:30:990 (1) - How about extending it to the downbeat? No, I prefer now sorry~
00:41:402 (2,3) - Do what you did earlier.. this rhythm isn't as good because you make 00:41:932 - clickable while it's not actually an important beat.
Hey it's a Drum sound, why it isn't important?? I think it plays well here, sorry~

[]
Nice song choice! I just couldn't agree with some of your rhythm choices though :c

Thanks a lot!!

Last edited by Dino99 2016-05-08T01:17:09+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-05-04T11:25:36+00:00

no fix for - G I D Z -'s mod ;-;

Monstrata wrote:
Kanto-kun's Insane

00:21:461 (4,1) - Do a jump or something here to emphasize the vocals? pattern with 00:20:932 (2,3,4,1) -
00:57:990 (4,1) - ^ okay , move a little bit. but i'm don't agree with it, cause my diff is Light insane. it could be stable distance
00:59:049 (3,4,1) - Yea not getting the spacing here too. It doesn't reflect the emphasis of the song imo.
01:06:814 (6,1) - ^
01:14:579 (3,4) - Same. Here you could do a 1/1 slider and a circle instead. 4 doesn't begin on anything that audible imo... but it has drum bass between 1/1 if i change ;-; , emphasis on hitsond too

Hmm, spacing concept on this diff felt a bit off for me xP. Parts that were strong in the song (vocals/instruments) weren't emphasized in the map, and other times the map emphasizes sounds that aren't really that emphasized in the music. sorry orz we have different style

thanks for modding and thanks Fumika for many suggestions XD

SPOILER

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6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-05-04T20:16:07+00:00

[Easy]
00:59:755 (1,2,3,1) - This might be confusing. I suggest replacing 2 and 3 by a slider.
01:07:696 (5) - NC ?
01:18:285 (2) - CTRL+H ? Looks completely better

[Normal]
00:17:226 (4) - Convert it to 2 circles to emphasize 00:17:402 -
00:21:637 - Slider would fit more here.
00:22:520 (5,6) - I highly recommand moving (6) up to flow better for beginners.
01:01:167 - Please make it clickable, heavy beat here
01:05:402 (1,2) - Since you mapped all the vocals here that hole at 01:06:814 - was a bit unexpected.
01:11:049 - Slider please
01:16:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - That pattern is way too hard...

[advanced]
01:00:285 (2,3) - I don't like how flow gets linear compared to (1)'s curve here.

[Hard]
00:05:579 (3) - This feels really untidy, consider changing it
00:17:932 (1,2) - What is the point of those shapes ??
00:19:873 (2,3) - CTRL+G is much more intuitive
00:36:637 (1,2) - same as earlier
00:38:755 (3,4,1,2) - just to say that this is cool.
00:50:755 (4,5) - I don't get what you're mapping this but not 00:52:343 - and 00:52:696 -
00:53:402 - Consider making it clickable for vocals
00:57:637 (3,4) - I don't like how (4) is following 2 vocals but (3) is following only 1. Consider changing that pattern.
01:01:696 (2) - Please reduce spacing here it is totally unjustified
01:13:167 (3,4) - ^
01:19:520 - Make it clickable ? Sounds better (just repeat previous slider)

[Light Insane]
01:18:991 (1,2,1,2) - I don't see any reason to NC 3rd circle and make them follow previous pattern.

[Insane]
I honestly don't like some slidershapes but it looks fine.

[Jutsu]
Looks fine but I'm not experienced enough at X mapping

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-05-05T02:10:46+00:00

6th wrote:
[Easy]
00:59:755 (1,2,3,1) - This might be confusing. I suggest replacing 2 and 3 by a slider. I thnik the rhythm sounds good to me~
01:07:696 (5) - NC ? ok~
01:18:285 (2) - CTRL+H ? Looks completely better I don't think so lol

[Normal]
00:17:226 (4) - Convert it to 2 circles to emphasize 00:17:402 - Not necessary, That would be a bit hard IMO, It plays well now~
00:21:637 - Slider would fit more here. I may change the pattern here... let me consider for a while...
00:22:520 (5,6) - I highly recommand moving (6) up to flow better for beginners. I think the flow is fine now o.o... hmm
01:01:167 - Please make it clickable, heavy beat here not necessary...
01:05:402 (1,2) - Since you mapped all the vocals here that hole at 01:06:814 - was a bit unexpected. I never follow vocal here, I follow basic beats!
01:11:049 - Slider please I'll consider about it orz
01:16:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - That pattern is way too hard... No I don't think so.

[Hard]
00:05:579 (3) - This feels really untidy, consider changing it It looks and plays good to me
00:17:932 (1,2) - What is the point of those shapes ?? I like the shape, Hmm but many ppl complaint about this.. I may change it later orz
00:19:873 (2,3) - CTRL+G is much more intuitive It flows better now >.> I prefer now sorry...
00:36:637 (1,2) - same as earlier hmmmmm
00:38:755 (3,4,1,2) - just to say that this is cool. thanks o.o
00:50:755 (4,5) - I don't get what you're mapping this but not 00:52:343 - and 00:52:696 - I follow beats here, not vocal lol
00:53:402 - Consider making it clickable for vocals I don't follow vocal >.>
00:57:637 (3,4) - I don't like how (4) is following 2 vocals but (3) is following only 1. Consider changing that pattern. No, it sounds good to me, I said I follow beats instead of vocal here lol
01:01:696 (2) - Please reduce spacing here it is totally unjustified No it plays well.... :3
01:13:167 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:19:520 - Make it clickable ? Sounds better (just repeat previous slider) Hmm I prefer now... 8 notes & 4 slider looks well to me o"o

[Insane]
I honestly don't like some slidershapes but it looks fine. ehh why?? ;w; ...Anyway thanks~

Thank you for the mod!! owo/

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2016-05-05T04:00:42+00:00

G I D Z

- G I D Z - wrote:
Yo~
From my modding queue~

[box=Aerous' Jutsu]00:15:637 (2,4) - Remove whistle and add whistle to 00:15:461 (1,3)
00:17:402 (6) - I couldnt hear your hitsound here while playing. Make it 45% like the next one. The music is not that soft here that you have to use 30% xd
00:54:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Dun randomly place jumps 00:55:696 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - These are good though. Maybe like this --> http://puu.sh/oFzKe/908df26436.jpg , http://puu.sh/oFzL4/11b8780898.jpg . I just think jumps should have patterns and distance should not be random for each jump combo i think its fine for now , if any other mods mention this ill change
01:16:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is pp mapping x.x The jumps are so randomly placed imo. Pls fix patterns and spacing

I hope this mod is useful xd
Good luck!~

thanks !

momstrata

Monstrata wrote:
Aerous' Jutsu

00:08:402 (4,5,6) - Weird rhythm choice here, The spacing doesn't reflect the song's emphasis either. You've been mapping the high note on 00:08:932 - to jumps thus far, why stop now ;o.
00:10:872 (4,5) - Sounds overmapped to me. 1/2 slider? i can hear the guitar on those notes that i have on right now , if someone mentions this again ill change it.
00:16:873 (3) - NC since the other two NC's were every half measure
00:56:755 (1,1) - Idk man, starting the kiai with an anti jump seems like a bad decision to me ;c especially after those jumps earlier.
01:18:285 (1,2,3,4) - The drums don't really support this jump pattern. You don't hear drums on the red ticks here 01:18:461 (2,4) - ...
01:18:990 (1,2,3,4) - On the other hand, drums are supported here, and vocals as well. i think the jump pattern should be larger here instead.
01:27:108 (4,5) - Same as earlier. same xd

No reply = Fixed

http://puu.sh/oGLdw/6b6189010e.zip

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2016-05-05T12:39:16+00:00

6th wrote:
[advanced]
01:00:285 (2,3) - I don't like how flow gets linear compared to (1)'s curve here. I like it

Thanks modding~~

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-05-05T19:50:16+00:00

SPOILER

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FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-05-06T13:12:20+00:00

hi

[extra]

00:02:049 (1) - I would add two circles instead of slider, cuz 00:02:226 has pretty strong melody sound. same for similar sliders
00:09:108 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you should change the nc's cuz they aren't right. The song has much strong beat only at 00:09:638 (2) - than on other beats http://puu.sh/oIg1x/124cf40a56.jpg
00:55:696 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - What do you think about change the structure of these jumps a bit? 00:56:402 (1,2) - should have much more spacing then previous jumps, because both notes have claps. Just a suggestion, you can make it differently
01:06:461 (5) - just two stacked notes instead could feeling better in my opinion
01:07:343 (3) - nc? cuz use used nc at similar patterns
01:18:637 (3) - ^
01:17:402 (4,4) - these notes doesn't have something strong to have so large spacing, so reducing of spacing would a good idea imo

[insane]

00:00:990 (2,3) - why so large spacing, you didn't use similar spacing in further?
00:12:461 - it's really bad idea how you missing strong ticks like here, guitar feels cliclable for me imo, try something like this http://puu.sh/oIhiv/9421979ae8.jpg (I ruined your symmetry, but I don't know how to add note without that)
00:21:637 (4) - similar issue as before, what about add 1/2 slider instead, he's good fits with vocal
00:25:167 (3) - elbow maybe? just for aesthetics http://puu.sh/oIhAS/db5496ad26.jpg
00:26:931 (2) - 1/2 slider instead as before
01:07:520 - pls no, this tick feels strong and should be clickable

[light insane]

00:25:167 (3,2) - try to stack they (stack with end of slider i mean) it isn't looks neat imo
00:38:226 (3,1) - pretty low spacing for nc, maybe increase it a bit?
00:39:814 (4,1) - ^

[hard]

00:49:696 (4,1) - 2.75x spacing looks lagre for hard, maybe reduce a bit?

[advanced]

looks good

[normal]
oh lol http://puu.sh/oIj2t/a06f4d6c6c.png check aiMod for all diffs

01:09:285 (3,4) - 1.05x spacing, should be fixed i guess

Dino99

1,809 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Dino99 2016-05-06T17:45:25+00:00

FCL wrote:
hi

[insane]
00:00:990 (2,3) - why so large spacing, you didn't use similar spacing in further? lol It's Insane Diff, I always don't use same DS, and it's fine becasue everyone do this :3
00:12:461 - it's really bad idea how you missing strong ticks like here, guitar feels cliclable for me imo, try something like this http://puu.sh/oIhiv/9421979ae8.jpg (I ruined your symmetry, but I don't know how to add note without that)
I don't think so, I follow basic small drum sound here and these 1/1 sliders just sound fine IMO~
00:21:637 (4) - similar issue as before, what about add 1/2 slider instead, he's good fits with vocal Hmm I try to follow vocal here becasue she sing so strong, also it sounds good to me now, so I'll keep it for now sorry!
00:25:167 (3) - elbow maybe? just for aesthetics http://puu.sh/oIhAS/db5496ad26.jpg No o.o" It looks good too now
00:26:931 (2) - 1/2 slider instead as before Same~ becasue she sing strongly here so I try to follow the vocal... I think it's fine... hmm If BNs complaint about it too I'll fix it orz
01:07:520 - pls no, this tick feels strong and should be clickable ehh I don't think it's necessary to add this note lol

[hard]
00:49:696 (4,1) - 2.75x spacing looks lagre for hard, maybe reduce a bit? Yes, Reduced the DS a bit~

[normal]
oh lol http://puu.sh/oIj2t/a06f4d6c6c.png check aiMod for all diffs omg ok....
01:09:285 (3,4) - 1.05x spacing, should be fixed i guess no it's the same DS lol

Thank you so much~~

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2016-05-07T02:48:12+00:00

Fixed only distance and NC

http://puu.sh/oJ13R/3b580a55fa.zip

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-05-08T01:52:03+00:00

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Ozato Fumika

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-05-10T02:41:35+00:00

Sorry for being so late ><;; I'm a bit demotivated at the moment...

Aerous' Jutsu

00:56:755 (1) - don't nc here and combine 00:56:402 (1,2,1) - the snares
you actually did it here 01:07:696 (1,2,3) -
01:13:167 - awkward pause since this is out of place and doesn't even fit. also inconsistent with your overall rhythm
01:28:167 (7) - why are you using drum clap... use drum finish

alacat's Advanced
01:16:343 (7) - I think this should be more further away since there's a 1/2 gap... it confused me at first

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2016-05-18T02:07:23+00:00

Fixed :

http://puu.sh/oVSMw/6e534e49ef.zip

alacat

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Joined May 2011

alacat 2016-05-19T11:57:58+00:00

Momoka wrote:
alacat's Advanced
01:16:343 (7) - I think this should be more further away since there's a 1/2 gap... it confused me at first yeah i think so ...! but i prefer to keep same distance on this difficluty

Thanks NoDap

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-05-22T13:51:34+00:00

[Normal]
00:19:696 (4,1) - this overlap is not tolerable in Normal diff.
00:30:108 (4,1) - Flow not nice
01:05:402 (1) - Sliders with sharp curves are not tolerable in Normal
01:07:696 (5,1) - Same as 00:19:696 (4,1)

[Kanto]
01:03:990 (1,2) - Too large spacing

[Insane]
00:00:990 (2,3) - 跳太大了，也很突然
01:06:990 (1,2) - ^

Sorry, still too pp farming.
Good luck anyway!

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