Déjà vualso offset is slightly off to me idk, try 50
Not a BN check because I think there are a more things to point out before pushing it forward - especially in higher diffs.
[Inner Oni]
01:00:054 (9) - 01:02:812 (14) - Kat, you seem to put kats on the bangs (and you do, before the second kiai time)
03:18:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - Pattern's boring compared to the others where you added some kats in the ministreams. Add kats as you did later on.
And now for the kiais (trust me, as I mapped one Feint song, I start to wonder how shit's structured because it's literally the same structure, save for the post kiai 2.)
01:06:260 (1) -
01:11:605 (21) - Move that 1 beat forward. Leaving a pause where you have it for now leaves a slight discrepancy with the 1st loop, and plays in a very odd way as well.
01:14:364 (21) - 01:17:122 (21) - 01:22:640 (18) - 01:25:398 (21) - same as above, won't point out the rest because I think you get the idea
Aight actually there's something that struck me: 1st part of kiai 1 has a lot of kats around the 1/1 mark; being almost or actually always there. It feels more forced than anything, I think you're better off trying to do roughly the same as the second half.
01:28:847 (3,4,5) - kdk sounds more forced, while dkd would go along with the song better.
01:30:226 (11,12,13,14,15) - I would say kdkkd at least not to make it seem forced.
01:34:536 (5,6) - dkkdd doesn't work at lot, so invert them (and flow would increase a bit as well)
01:32:295 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I'm lost as for the point of these quintuplets, I think you're better off only with triplets and 1/2.
01:40:743 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Them's some d d k dkdkd material here, your current pattern flows against the song
01:45:398 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same goes as somewhere I forgot I think I said it, but you should change as dkdkd
For the second kiai time, I would simply suggest doing a harder version of the first, trust me, it worked. For instance, adding notes, complexifying patterns or doing both at the same time will show consistency
as well as a desire just not to simply copypaste but shhh that's my secret[Oni]
00:57:295 - 00:58:674 - You should add notes there, because by experience, you may get sniped if you don't.
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01:13:674 - Add a note here to fill in the blank space, you will also add some flow
01:24:709 - SAME TBH
01:28:933 (4) - Is this on purpose
01:39:967 (5) - I start to wonder if this is actually on purpose
]-- Repeat for Kiai 2
02:25:571 - sniped comment
03:23:329 - Add note flow blah blah same as kiais
03:34:364 - ^
[Muzukashii]
01:11:260 - I think you should add a note here because you have a strong kick.
01:30:571 - smae
02:39:532 - yeah you get it, there's one at the end i think you know
03:28:325 (6,7,8) - dkd instead, kdk is just not following the song
03:39:360 (6,7) - Invert them as well
03:06:946 (9,10,11,12) - I think d kkk would work a bit better since the triple ends up on the beat
Other stuff: 02:43:670 (3,4) - you could put triplets here and 02:44:532 (7) - here, (has more occurences in the song, pointed out here as an example)
[Futsuu]
1.40 SV, please. Song speed is not too low so players will not have problems reading the chart
HP8 is pretty high for 375 notes. 7 ~ 7.5 seems to be okay
00:48:674 (3,4) - kats to have consistency with them before
00:54:191 (3,4) - ^
02:16:950 (3,4) - ^
02:22:467 (3,4) - ^
[Kantan]
1.40 SV, please. Same comment as in Futsuu.
HP8.5 for 267 notes is way too high for a Kantan. I recommend 7, instead.
00:48:329 (2) - 00:53:847 (2) - Change them as dons, as kats right now don't carry much sense because of how you constructed your part
02:16:605 (2) - 02:22:122 (2) - ^
03:02:122 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - and its kiai 1 counterpart : The pattern construction might be very complicated for a newcomer - and does not have many breaks to help them.
Also I haven't seen for the BG but there's a lot of artifacting, I'll see if I can get yo ua better quality version of it